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小学生关于光盘行动英语作文汇编

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Recently, the newspapers, on TV are advocated to join the CD action, the classmates, do you know what call CD action? Right! Is to eat them all the food on the plate.

The Chinese custom is when the guest to order food, said the hospitality of yourself. Comes the Spring Festival, people also hard to avoid with their relatives and friends go out to eat a big meal, to express their own mind, a point of a lot of food, in the end, eat not only, also left a lot of food, do not pack again, watched these delicious is poured into the trash can. Alas...

Hunger has become the number one killer of mankind, now many people in Africa are still being plagued by hunger, be starved to death at last. Now the die from hunger in the world, ten million people each year. If we recycle 5% of the food every day, there will be four million people were rescued. Television also often put some of the poor children in the mountain, they didnt eat didnt drink, if we can save food, may be able to change their miserable fate.

These days, when I went to restaurant downstairs, I found there are some guests on the table with good after eating the leftovers and food on the plate almost all have no, eat is very clean, it must be they also read the newspapers and on TV the act after the news. I think Ill join the "CD" action, so at the time of order, I think is almost enough to eat and dont let mother point, when you eat, we also put the dishes and a bowl of rice to eat clean, looking at the bare plate, Im so happy!

Here, I also give you two initiatives for "CD" action: 1, to cherish food, right amount order, avoid the leftover food, reduce the extravagant and wasteful. 2, not comparing, proud of savings, a waste of shame. Do not scraps, waste not, eat whatever you have, prostrate! Join the CD, together to "waste" said no!

The classmates, let us also join "CD" action! Let us also from waste, to save!

最近,报纸、电视上都在提倡要加入光盘行动,同学们,你们知道什么叫光盘行动吗?对了!就是把盘子里的饭菜全吃光。

中国人的习俗就是在客人来的时候多点些菜,表示一下自己的热情好客。到了春节,大家也难免带着亲朋好友出去吃一顿大餐,为了想表达自己的一个心意,就点了许多菜,到最后呢,吃也吃不光,还剩下了许多饭菜,又不打包,只能眼睁睁地看着这些美味被倒进垃圾桶里。唉....

饥饿现在已成为人类的第一号杀手,许多非洲地区的人们还在被饥饿困扰着,最后被活活饿死了。现在全世界由于饥饿而死的,每年就有一千万个人。如果我们每天回收5%的粮食,就会有四百万饥民获救。电视上也经常会放一些山区的贫苦孩子,他们没吃没喝,如果我们能节约粮食,或许就能改变他们悲惨的命运。

这几天,我去楼下饭馆吃饭时,我发现桌子上放着一些客人用好餐后盘子里的剩菜和剩饭几乎都没有,吃的都很干净,这一定是他们也看了报纸和电视上的新闻后做出的行动。我想我也要加入“光盘"行动,因此在点菜的时候,我觉得差不多够吃了也就不让妈妈点了,吃饭的时候,我们也把菜和碗里的饭吃的干干净净,看着吃的光光的盘子,我开心极了!

在此,我也为"光盘"行动给大家二个倡议:1、珍惜粮食,适量订餐,避免剩餐,减少奢侈浪费。2、不攀比,以节约为荣,浪费为耻。做到不剩饭,不浪费,吃多少要多少,吃不了兜着走!加入光盘族,一起对“浪费"说不!

同学们,让我们也一起加入“光盘"行动!让我们也远离浪费,走向节约吧!

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There are many ways we can do to reach the loe-carbon economic.Fristly,discovering others fuels which is more clean and more green to instead of the using of carbon.Secondly, we should have the save-energy conscious and do something which we can make,for instance,using the bus ranther than car when you go out,re-use the thing that can be recycle used,reducing the use of plastic bags.Last but not least,we should plant more trees or other greenplants,in which way we can not only improve the environment,but also can make our home more beauty.

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During summer holiday, I can eat watermelons every day. After eating, I often make a watermelon lantern with my friends. In the evening, we often take the lanterns and play in the park.

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We are students now,so we all have learning habits ourselves,whether or not they are good,let‘s share with everyone. I have some learning habits too.In the evening,i sometimes read alond .textbook,then memorize them.When i take class ,i listen to teacher carefully,and i learn some knowledges from teacher ,then ,i will take notes,i always keep to doing that every class.In the afternoon,i try my best to finish my homewotk,because i want to have long time to review what we have learned in the evening,but i do my homework so hard,when i meet the problems ,i will ask my father to solve them,so every evening,i will learn useful enough knowledge,i always feel very happy when i understand them.But i think it’s important for us to be interested in studying,i think we have to make friends with study,then we could help other classmates to study,because we can exercise ourselves by helping them. There are my ways to learn,although they are not so good,i will improve them,and start to try new ways. Learn is a life journey,in this journey,may be we will miss a lot of problems,but we can‘t afraid of them,we must to be the owner of study.

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My favorite holiday is New Year.It;s a very important festival in Chinese cultrue.In fact,its the highlight of the year.

Everyone returns home for a family reunion.We have a big feast and chat about all the things that have happened in our lives.People also visit each other.We exchange gifts and good wishes for the next year.New Year is especially fun for kids.

Thats because we get presents and treats,including red envelopes filled with money.We also get to set off fireworks.But we never forget that this holiday is a time to give thanks.We feel grateful for our family and the things that we have.

Finally,we think about the future and the great year ahead.

我最喜欢的节日是新年。它,年代在中国文化一个非常重要的节日。事实上,它是一年中最好的(日子)。

每个人都回家与家人团聚。我们有一个比较大的盛会并且(与他人)畅聊所有发生在我们的生活中。人们总是互相拜访。我们交换礼物和良好祝愿明年。新年是一个特别快乐的孩子。

这是因为我们得到礼物和糖果,包括红包的钱。我们也可以放烟火。但我们永远不会忘记,这个假期是一个感恩的时候了。我们感到感激我们的家庭和我们所拥有的东西。

最后,我们考虑未来,伟大的未来一年。

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一次有趣的购物

Yesterday was Jacks shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.

They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4

yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at

Mr. Chens Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle

Eddys Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy

car. Its 105 yuan.

They were very happy.

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My father is an ordinary farmer, on the career, on the status of my father are nothing worthy of my pride, but my fathers love for me, but it is meticulous.

People often say "strict parent", but in my eyes, my father and my mother, my father is more kind than my mother. Life no matter how many of our sister to do something wrong, my father always patiently educated us, inspired us.

I clearly remember that my father had never used violence to educate us. It was a summer day, the sun was burning, without a trace of wind. When we work in the ground, inadvertently I found the neighbors of the family of watermelon, has matured, my family has not cooked. Looking at the round and big watermelon, my mouth straight mouth saliva. Suddenly my mind flashed a thought: it is better to pick a taste. Wait until the morning my father and mother came home, I secretly picked a watermelon, sitting under a tree, relish to eat up. Just eat a few mouthfuls, I saw a person from afar. I took a closer look at my father. I hid the watermelon in the back. Dad came to see me panic panic look, my heart suddenly understand a lot. Dad said kindly: "how can children eat, eat their own homes, how can we eat someone else? Besides, how can we have the nerve to get someone elses labor fruit?" Dad patiently guided me, I was ashamed to low Head of the head.

My father is such an ordinary farmer. He taught me in a loving way, encouraged me, and I was proud of having such a father.

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I love computers. Love to what extent, I saw a computer, just like a sweet

drink, as is pleased to want to jump up. I am not like other people who love

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I remember just started painting on the computer, the mouse does not always

listen to my disposal, I make it point to the document, it refers to another

document or on a roll or several far. Especially in the painting, the mouse不听使唤,

from graphics to painting especially difficult, from the painting I want much. I

repeated practice in the paper how to make the mouse and pen painting painting

painting on paper, the work pays off, and now, I have already use the mouse to

draw a beautiful painting of the painting.

Dealing with regular and computer, the most headache is encountered in a

computer virus. However, I now have to deal with them, and often kill antivirus

antivirus software on it. What if you have a better way, tell me as soon as

possible.

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Yesterday is my six-year-old birthday. It is important to me as I can go to

primary school after my birthday. It means that I grow up. I got up very early

at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a little down.

But I recovered with excited soon and then I went out to play. Everything in my

eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o’clock, my mother gave me a

surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave

a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present. I’m so happy that day.

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I have a few cute little white rabbits, and I love them very much.

They have a pair of long ears, a pair of ruby-like eyes, dropping yo, tail like a small pompon, a white hair, like snow, really beautiful.

Little rabbits courage is very small, as long as a stranger to hide, the body shrink tight, very afraid.

White Rabbit can eat something, it loves radishes and vegetables, but must be washed, if it is not clean vegetables and radish, will be sick. Oh, its hard to be waiting.

Can be a small rabbit to grab the food looks interesting, and whenever I put the food in its pot, they will scrambling to run over, for fear that they can not eat food, the whole head into the basin; Sometimes they become so friendly, a food is divided to eat, one sub-points, after the end, it is the two legs on the food, three mouth a one together, the body Yi Chan Yi Chan, eat Relish!

Little rabbit, how are you naive and lovely!

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Birthday

My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.

At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.

They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out.

We sing and dance.We have a good time at the party.

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篇19:小学英语日记

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我爱中国菜 I Love Chinese Food

Chinese food is famous all around the world. A lot of foreigners speak

highly of the delicious food when they come to this big country. For me, I like

spicy food, so hot pot is my favorite. I can eat what I like and put the food in

the spicy soup. The hotness makes me feel so cool. No matter where I go, Chinese

food is always my favorite.

中国菜闻名全世界,有很多外国人来到这个大国以后都会赞扬美味的食物。对我来说,我喜欢辣的食物,所以火锅是我的最爱。我可以把我喜欢吃的食物放进辣汤里就可以吃到自己喜欢的食物

了,辣味让我觉得太酷了。无论我去哪里,中国菜永远是我的最爱。

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一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:

(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。

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