初三年级英语作文：一位害羞的同学AShyClassmate（汇总20篇）

What impresses me most in Beijing is the Great Wall which is one of the

greatest projects in the world.

Its not only the cultural heritage, but also a symbol of China. "Its

glorious." I think. It looks like a big dragon running across the mountainous

area. It starts Shanhaiguan in the east to Jiayuguan in the west.Its so long that nobody can walk from the beginning to the end.It was firstly built in Qin Dynasty and prolonged in Ming and Qing

dynasties.It was used to protect the enemies from invading in the past, but now it

has become the place of interest which attracts so many tourists both at home

and abroad.

When I was standing on the top of the Great Wall, I felt as if I were in

ancient days.

I could see many laborers working very hard. How could they finish this

extremely difficult task by hand?

Spring, my hometown, green grass and flowers are in bloom. Out of the tree branches, birds singing in the merry. Looking around is the continuous mountains, mountains and rolling hillsides in the spring, as if a domesticated hen the carpet, until the sky. Graceful flowers blossoming in a dotted mountains, attract colorful butterflies; in the depths of the mountain is the terraced rows of shapes, by definition, is the same as the stairs rice; a winding path to article rice into the ever-changing shape, some like crescent, and some, like boats, some as sickle ... ... in the spring, when seedling growth, fresh green color of the home that add still more beautiful.

Summer, sun spit fire, but the hills in the home full of trees, in the shade of the shelter, the very cool; also known bird burst into song. Kind of ripe watermelon in the mountains, home of the watermelon usually round and bright, and that the air moon, as round; cut, I saw a bright red flesh, sweet and delicious; black seeds, like the eyes of swarthy .

Autumn is a golden rice, breeze, rice started singing a harmony of the song, when hard-working farmers are harvesting rice; rice harvest of the cheerful sound of voices and interwoven success of the harvest of the symphony .

Winter, although the trees have been dying, but is everywhere in the roadside grass and wild flowers, which stand at attention in the cold. They tell you: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?"

This is my beautiful hometown, my favorite home.

春天,我的家乡,绿草和鲜花盛开。树枝,鸟儿在快乐的唱歌。环顾四周是连续的山脉,山脉和滚动在春天的山坡上,仿佛一只家养母鸡地毯,直到天空。优雅的花朵盛开在虚线山脉,吸引色彩斑斓的蝴蝶,在山的深处是梯田成排的形状,根据定义,楼梯大米一样,蜿蜒的道路条大米到不断变化的形状,有些像新月,和一些,像船一样,镰状……在春天,当幼苗生长,鲜绿的颜色,添加更美丽。

夏天,太阳吐火,但家里的山的树木,在树荫下的避难所,非常酷,也称鸟闯入的歌。成熟的西瓜在山里,家里的西瓜圆又大,空中的月亮,是圆的;,我看见一个明亮的红肉,香甜可口,黑色的种子,像黑的眼睛。

秋天是金大米、微风、大米开始唱这首歌的和谐,勤劳的农民们收割水稻,水稻收获的愉悦的声音声音和交织的成功收获的交响曲。

冬天,虽然树木死亡,但在路边到处都是草地和野花,立正的冷。他们告诉你:“冬天来了,春天还会远吗?”

这是我美丽的家乡,我最喜欢的家。

在我的寒假里，发生了许许多多的事，最难忘的还是初六的晚上发生的一件事，它让我明白了做母亲的辛苦。

初六的下午，妈妈的好友陈阿姨来我们家做客，陈阿姨有个七个月左右的女儿。白白净净、圆嘟嘟的脸蛋，真想咬上一口。不大不小的眼睛，看什么都觉得很新奇。还有一张小巧玲珑的嘴巴总是咧开着在笑，可爱极了!陈阿姨抱着她宝贝的小女儿在我身边坐了下来，好像在和我说，又好像在和她的女儿说道：“我们家的小宝贝最喜欢和帅哥美女玩了，是不是呀?”搞得我和表弟哭笑不得。

到吃晚饭的时间了，我和表弟快速地吃好饭，准备奔向电脑。这时，从客厅里传来一阵“呜呜”的哭声，吵得我们不得安宁，无奈，只好把门关上，可那哭声又从门缝里钻了进来，传入我们的耳中。我心生一计，对表弟说：“咱们哄哄小妹妹，不就没哭声了吗?”“对呀，赶快!”表弟眼睛一亮，迫不及待地说道。

说干就干，我们先拿出我的毛绒玩具，哭声是没有了，可是她却抓着毛绒玩具的一角含在嘴里，我着急地说道：“我的上帝啊，这玩意儿可是不能吃的啊!”然后硬是从她的嘴里拔了出来，“呜呜呜——”我的姑奶奶啊，你怎么又哭了啊，我受不了了，然后硬着头皮抱起了小妹妹，嘴里还说着：“哦——不哭不哭，不哭不哭。”

你问我弟弟去哪了?他跑到楼上，拿出了我三年级做的模型，在妹妹面前有模有样的玩了起来，妹妹的那对不大不小的眼睛，紧盯着那对模型，终于伸出了小手玩了起来。我把妹妹放在了沙发上，长嘘一口气，对弟弟竖起了大拇指。

通过这件事，我明白了，父母养育我们实属不易，我们应该从小就好好学习，长大了报答父母的养育之恩。

在成长的日记中，我已步入了初三年级这一页。我的理想在这一页萌生，追求在这一页起步，信念在这一页树立。初三年级，同龄人之间的“战争”，一堆堆的作业试卷都给我无尽的忧愁和快乐。

激烈的竞争。进入初三年级后，首先要学习到，不对，应该是感受到的，就是激烈的竞争。学习上要竞争，面对各个枪手，要想名列前茅，成为佼佼者，就必须比别人付出多一倍的努力。泡在“知之为知之，不知为不知”的古文浴缸中，提升自己的领悟能力，提高自己的写作才能；沉浸在“a^2+b^2=c^2”的公式世界中，纠正自己的思维方式；遨游在“a,b,c”的英文海洋中，巩固自己的知识技能……只有各方面都高人一等，才有成功的可能。

繁重的“担子”。进入初三年级后，肩上的“担子”明显加重了。试卷一张接一张的做，好不容易应付了数学班级老师，又窜出了Mr.sJin，我们的英语班级老师，作业一布置完就溜了。正在唉声叹气只是，有听见语文班级老师轻轻咳了咳，大家立刻安静了下来，给送人“送”来了两张试卷。尽管大家千百个不愿意，但是没办法，谁叫她是班主任呢！

丰富的课外生活。初三年级的生活也并不只是一张单色的白纸。真是因为如此紧张的气氛，忙碌的学习，大家才越发珍惜课余生活。阳光明媚的日子，大家便会三三两两的来到操场上，来个日光浴，合蓝天白云来个亲密接触。轻轻吸一口大自然的新鲜空气，做一下而是的游戏，不也乐趣无穷吗，笑声不断吗？在没有阳光的日子里，大家便会三个一群两个一伙的谈论小学的经历，开一些幼稚的玩笑，不也能逗得大家开怀大笑，忘掉一天的疲惫与烦恼吗？

初三年级生活岁有一点无奈与痛楚，但是快乐大于痛楚，趣味大于无奈。初三年级作为人生的又一个港湾，将会让我理想的小船平稳靠岸。

What can I do for the 2010 Shanghai World Expo?

We all know that the Expo 2010 will be held in Shanghai. Being citizens of Shanghai, we fell proud and responsible. It is said there will be 7,000 visitors from different countries coming to Shanghai. What can I do for the Expo 2010 at that time?

There is no doubt that I will be a volunteer to give services to the Expo 2010. I am good at English and I can communicate fluently with foreign guests. I must study English even harder so that I can introduce to them in English the rapid development of Shanghai and I can also help them. I can make them feel at home in Shanghai, such as showing them the way to their hotels or to the places of interest in Shanghai.

In a word, I will keep in mind the theme of the Expo 2010 “Better City, Better Life” and do my best for the great festival.

There was a sad music in the church, a parting song, and the children in front of the Jesus prayers were praying silently... At this point, what are the children praying for? Why are they so serious? Because its a graduation ceremony, because its their last day here...

Look at these kids pious face, listening to this copy from rolia song, tears blurred, I cant help remember three years ago, our graduation......

In the scorching summer, cicada son calls became the only tune, and we in the classroom, only the hearts of the coming of the senior high school entrance examination is full of infinite tension and anxiety.

Every day, after a hurry to do what everyone needs to do, immediately turn into a stressful study. A white paper in our hands is constantly checking, instead of the past summer, our hands those cute little fan; an English listening test repeatedly play, instead of the past, we listened to pop music; one to ask, instead of the old days in the classroom frequently heard the sound of the dozen...... Everything was insignificant in the face of the coming exam.

It seemed to be a long time in the past, and suddenly, at that time, like a page that had been turned over, it had not been carefully read, and it was in a hurry. The sound of the June alarm sounded, and our atmosphere was more tense. All the years, anyhow, graduation ceremony will be open, always a day to let us present ah, write the students... But we didnt do anything at that time, the reason was very simple, and everyone thought it was not necessary.

In this way, we have a graduation exam, and we just want a good result on the exam. At the end of the last exam, we gathered together, and the teacher just said something about the exam results, and hurriedly took a photo of graduation, didnt say goodbye, didnt do many other things like other graduates, and graduated.

After the mid-term examination, I found that the so-called "victory" didnt bring much joy to me. I thought that if theres a good result, there will be a happy summer vacation. But in those days, I found that it was too boring, even though I wrote a lot of homework every day, but there was always less...

Once, I walked into a gift shop close to our school. The boss asked me if I was too dull to graduate this time. He said he led a lot of gifts, such as the gift of graduation, but there were not many people in our school. He also jokes that the people we are now are getting less and more human.

After that, I thought seriously about what the boss said, and I had to admit that he was right. At that time, we only care about the results of the exam, but we have ignored the classmates and teachers feelings so long that only those scores are the only ones we want to pursue. If we were able to take a day to open a graduation ceremony and write to each other a communication address and contact, then our summer vacation would not be so boring. Its a pity that we didnt understand it at that time...

Maybe years later, when we turn over this page, we will find a blank place, a place that will never be filled out...

We didnt make mistakes three years ago. Today, we face the college entrance examination in an unhurried way, attend the graduation ceremony actively, and draw a successful conclusion for our senior high school life.

As is known to all, food is a priority for the common people. Recently, however, reports about food problems have often been seen in the newspapers, showing that people have always been concerned about what they eat every day. The reason for this problem is that some of the food producers are too fond of making money, leading to the result that they use whatever will make the food look good or taste better without considering the bad consequences. This is not normal because people just cannot live without eating anything.

So we should take all the measures necessary to forbid the food producers to make food that is not safe enough. Laws should be strengthened and the government should have more control over these producers. Only when people are no longer worried about whether their food is safe or not can they enjoy a better life.

众所周知,食物是百姓的当务之急。然而,最近报道食品问题经常出现在报纸上,表明人一直关心他们每天吃什么。这个问题的原因是,一些食品生产商太喜欢赚钱,导致结果,他们使用任何会让食物看起来不错或味道更好而不考虑坏的后果。这是不正常的,因为人们生活中不能没有吃任何东西。

所以我们应该采取一切必要的措施,禁止食品生产商做的食物还不够安全。应加强法律和政府应该有更多的控制这些生产商。只有当人们不再担心是否他们的食品是安全的可以享受更好的生活。

i do not think deeply about the life the significance, my life instead crosses very much meaningful. even i do not need to know that anything is the life, so long as lived is sufficing. the significance when you seek for it, it only then exists, when your further seeks, it will vanish. perhaps, only then in we felt when the life does not have the significance, only will then go to seek for it. as for found or not, depended entirely on individual lucky chance, because that was not individual strength can decide. we are not are living depending on the significance, but when we are not is living depending on the significance, our persons status has received the question, will this will test us be a qualified person. if in a person life had never thought tracks down one kind of significance, has never tracked down one kind of significance, has never had outside the material spiritual pursue, then he will be a personality damage person.if a person is only wants to live, so long as he had the basic survival to suffice, do not be too many. if he wants to enjoy, that he wants the thing will be many, not very easy to achieve. but if he wants a significance, that so long as he chooses one from thought that the meaningful matter, relentless does, might. the significance is this kind of kind of thing, when you think it is meaningful, it is meaningful. some kind of significance not necessarily belongs to all, but only belongs believes it individual. some people said that only then the human will think deeply about the life the significance, but exactly said that only then the very few people will only then think deeply about the life the significance, most people only will be living certainly. did not know that what the life is, cannot affect their survival. but from says thoroughly understands the life significance the innate person, also has not seen their life to have anything different kind.

I went to three cities to play during last summer holidays. They are

Beijing, Dalian and HuHehot.

I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China.

It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes an hour and forty

minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in

Beijing. It’s a modern city. My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer

Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the

countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. I

went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like

eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t mithe Beijing Duck. It is

really nice.

Dalian is a beautiful city. Dalian is close to Beijing. I spent 5o minutes

on the plane. Dalian is near the sea. I smelled the salty taste in the air. The

roads are clean. There are lots of trees and flowers near the roads. There are

many esplanades and Japanese buildings. There are some fountains in one of the

esplanades. Some people flew kites and walked on the esplanades. We went to see

the beach and the sea. The sea is blue. There were many swimmers in the sea. I

lay on the beach to see the sky.Dalian is a very nice place to live.

Huhehot is in Inner Mongol. There are lots of large grasslands. The

grasslands are endless. The sky is bright blue. There were a lot of horses and

sheep. They were running or eating grass. I rode a horse on the graland. I

picked some colourful flowers. We drank the tea with milk. There is a small

desert, it was very hot when I walked on it. The sand could sing.

These trips helped me open my eyes. I enjoyed my day.

我有一个要好的同学叫李丽，她长着一头乌黑亮丽的长发，月牙般的眉毛下，长着一双黑葡萄般的大眼睛。别看她身材瘦小，可她助人为乐的事早已家喻户晓了。

记得有一次上自习课，我正在复习。突然，我胸口发闷，头也晕晕的。整个教室一下子在我面前晃动起来。终于，我忍不住了，“哗”的一声吐了出来。顿时，教室弥漫着一股腥臭味。同学们都不约而同地捂住鼻子，并对我指指点点的，我难过极了。

这时，李丽走过来，轻轻地拍了拍我的背，安慰我说：“别怕，等会我帮你拖干净。”接着，她拿出纸巾，帮我擦去嘴角上的脏物，安慰我说：“现在好点了吗？”我被她的热情感动了，浑身立刻轻松了不少。我激动地握住她的手说：“没事了，谢谢你。”李丽微笑着说：“没事就好。”说完，卷起衣袖，把我的呕吐物清理得干干净净。看着满头大汗的她，我再次感动得说不出话来。

这就是我的同学李丽，她乐于助人的精神永远留在我的心中。

今天我来到我姥姥家——鄄城，晚上我和爸爸、妈妈还有姐姐一起放孔明灯。

我们买了三个孔明灯，一个蓝的、一个红的、一个绿的，姐姐要了蓝的。

我们先把孔明灯撑开，然后再把腊拴上，点上火，再举一会，慢慢松手，孔明灯会慢慢升起，升到高空，慢慢的变成“小星星”慢慢的不见了，它去哪了？它去天庭把你的心愿捎给玉帝爷爷。

妈妈和爸爸选的红的，它象征着吉祥如意。

我选的是绿色，我的觉绿色象征生机，我兴奋的想让这个孔明灯带着我许下的心愿飞走。我和爸爸妈妈按照步骤一步一步弄好，但就在这时爸爸发现孔明灯有一个裂口，妈妈带着我的孔明灯去找老板换一个，爸爸却赶来说：“不用换了，贴个胶带就行了。”老板高兴地说:“哎，好(^o^)/~!”贴上以后，孔明灯慢慢的升向空中，它和原来放飞的完好的孔明灯一样飞得又快又高。

妈妈对我说：“这个孔明灯和你一样。你今年没评上三好学生，成绩下降，与你的学习态度和与同学老师之间的相处都有关系，只有和老师同学的关系相处的融洽了，学习态度端正了，学习的效率才会高，学习成绩才会好，身体才会健康，这些都是相辅相成的，你今年的表现，总的来说就如你的孔明灯一样有一个不小得裂口，但是，只要你能够查漏补缺，照样能够飞向蓝天，并且一样飞得高飞得远！如果你任由破洞存在，破洞会越来越大，以致发展到不可修复，古语有：亡羊补牢，为时不晚。只有你自己及时发现自己的错误和漏洞，并及时把这个洞补上才能重新起飞，只要你努力学习，就一定能飞得又高又远！”

我一定牢记妈妈的话，我会在新的学期里，好好学习，尊敬老师，团结同学，争取获得好成绩。我觉得：今天我的孔明灯，在放飞的时候虽然出了点问题，但这就像我学习成长过程中偶尔犯得小错误，只要我能够认真对待，好好处理，就会变成我成长道路上的小插曲，过后只要我能加倍努力，我一样可以做的优秀！

妈妈，我谢谢您，您总是不忘随时随地的，不失时机的教导我，您总能把我认为不高兴的一件件“坏事”变成很有教育意义的事来告诉我一个个道理。

I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

You don’t like crying, right? So you must prefer smiling, because you know smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. Every day, we see teachers or students and say, “Hi/Hello! How are you?” At the same time, you are smiling, right?

Smiling can let you have more friends. With a smile, people will know you’re a kind person. They will talk with you, so you will have more and more friends.

So I say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. It will give you happiness.

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Miss, leave a long lament, I hope that the thoughts like the sky, forever bright......

At dusk there is a helpless figure, she is waiting for what. Who is that? Thats me, my friend. Will you come back?

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Missing, leaving a long lament, I hope that the air color, forever bright.

Anything can happen in this rapidly changing society. People who cant

believe in miracles are impossible to achieve miracles and to create miracles.

In fact, sometimes it is easy to get a miracle. If you dont hesitate, you can

do it. Good luck, you think, is the result of action. The only way to catch the

seemingly impossible is to go after it. It is impossible to create a miracle if

you are satisfied with the status quo, doubt everything, and fear the

failure.

请以My Classmate为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

参考范文

My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

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要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

I have many cousins. I like Stella best. She is a pretty girl. She likes eating cucumbers , eggplants, cabbages… She doesn’t like eating eggs and milk. So she is very short.

Stella is an excellent student . She is the monitor of her class. She likes studying and she studd. So she is always the top student in her class.

In this summer holiday , I spent a very happy time with her in Sichuan . I often miss her very much.

I like my cousin best!

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate

the lunar calendar ‘s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival

,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set

off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the

festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes

.They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to

children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good

fortune . The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives

and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring

Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

No matter when and where, in no circumstances can we deny the great importance of manners.

无论何时何地，我们都不会否认礼貌的重要性。

Firstly, a person with good manners is often considered to be more trustworthy and easygoing, which helps him make more friends and get needed help from others. Besides, people are more willing to show their respect to the polite people and cooperate with them, bringing them many opportunities to change. Still most importantly, being polite helps reduce misunderstanding between people, contributing to a harmonious and enjoyable relationships.

首先，一个有礼貌的人往往被认为是更值得信赖、更随和的，这有助于他结交到更多的朋友，得到别人的帮助。此外，人们更愿意尊重有礼貌的人，与他们合作，这会为他们带来很可以改变的机会。还有最重要的是，礼貌有助于减少人们之间的误解，促进和谐、愉快的关系。

Hello,my name is jhon.My favorite animals are cat. Because they very cute. They can paly with me. They are my friden and they can gave me very happy. They are yellow , write and black. Many people all live them. I thing they are healhy. Can you tell me about your favorite animals?

The National Day is a designated date on which celebrations mark the nationhood of a country.(国庆节) Often the National Day will be a national holiday.

The National Day is often taken as the date on which a state or territory achieved independence. Other dates such as the countrys patron saint day, or a significant historic date are sometimes used. Most countries have a single National Day per year, though a few, for example, India and Pakistan, have more than one. Besides that, each of the two special administrative regions of the Peoples Republic of China, namely Hong Kong and Macao, celebrate the day of the establishment of the special administrative region, as well as the National Day of the Peoples Republic of China.

The importance attached to the National Day, and the degree to which it is celebrated, vary enormously from country to country. In France, for example, National Day is 14 July and is known as Bastille Day. It is widely celebrated and the French Tricolour is much in evidence, while the President of the Republic attends a military parade on the Champs-élysées of Paris. In the United States, the Fourth of July celebrations are widely celebrated with fireworks and barbecues. In the Republic of Ireland, St. Patricks Day, March 17, has been the National Day and a Public Holiday for many years, and in recent years it has been observed as a full Public Holiday in Northern Ireland too. However, in the rest of the United Kingdom the constituent countries patron saints days are low-key affairs.

Most countries have a fixed date National Day, but some have movable dates. An example here is Jamaica, which celebrates its National Day on the first Monday in August. This commemorates independence from the United Kingdom which was attained on Monday, 6 August 1962 - the first Monday in August of that year. Another example is Thailand which celebrates the birthday of the King on 5 December. This date will change on the accession of the heir to the throne.

国庆节是一个指定日期庆祝活动标志着一个国家的国家。常常国庆节将会是一个国定假日。

国庆节通常是作为一个国家或地区的日期取得独立。其他日期,如国家的守护神,或重大历史日期有时使用。每年大多数国家只有一个国庆日,尽管一些,例如,印度和巴基斯坦,有不止一个。除此之外,每一个中华人民共和国的两个特别行政区,即香港和澳门,庆祝的日子特别行政区的建立,以及中华人民共和国的国庆节。

国庆节的重视,是庆祝的程度,从国家有着极大的差别。例如,在法国的国庆节是在7月14日,巴士底日。人们普遍庆祝和法国三色旗的证据,而共和国总统参加阅兵在巴黎的香榭丽舍大街。在美国,7月4日庆祝活动广泛庆祝的烟花和烧烤。在爱尔兰共和国,圣帕特里克节,3月17日国庆节和公共假期多年,近年来它被观察到的是一个完整的公共假期在北爱尔兰。然而,英国其他地区的组成国家‘守护神’天低调的事务。

大多数国家有国庆节一个固定的日期,但有些活动日期。一个例子是牙买加,将在8月的第一个星期一庆祝国庆节。这是为了纪念从英国独立获得周一,1962年8月6——8月的第一个星期一。另一个例子是泰国庆祝国王的生日12月5日。这个日期会改变加入的王位继承人。