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关于环保的英语作文

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Recently,fog and haze has become a imminent threat which most northerners in China are facing.While the cities of China have greeted striking speed of development with open arms,they suffer greatly from a persistent and dense haze of pollution and smog.It is high time that we took some methods to protect the environment and ourselves.

Generally speaking,there are three effective ways.First of all,the government should take into serious consideration the emergency and severity of the air pollution,and take measure to deal with it.Such as more public transportation systems should be put in use,more energy-saving resources should be utilized.What’s more,every little effort from individuals counts.The citizens should contribute to the reduction of pollution by driving less.Last but not least,try to reduce the time of outdoor activities,especially when the air quality is not good enough.

From what has been mentioned above, to protect our air,we must keep in mind that whatever we give out,we take back in the long run.So we have to drive less,pollute less and make more changes.

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篇1:有关坚持英语初一

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Almost all people work hard for success, but not all people can success.

Many people ask how to make success. I think the answer is persistence. The way

to success is full of failure and difficulty. People should never give up when

meet them. If you give up, you can’t be successful. No matter how hard it is,

persistence must be there.

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篇2:环保活动感受英语

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Our environment is very important for our lives 。 We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on 。 In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean。But now,people cut down many trees。 Air pollution and water polloution are very serious 。 The environment around us bees very terrible 。 We should protect our environment。 First, we should plant many trees to keep water。 Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work。。 Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river 。 Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags。 Finally, we can ask more people to join us。

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篇3:我的家初一英语作文

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Hello! My name is Lv Jiayin. I’m twelve years old. I am study in Henan Hongli School in China. There are four people in my family: My father, my mother, my sister and I.

My father is an office worker. He works in an office. He is very tough and strict. But he has many friends. He’s very kind. But the standard he sets for me is very high. But I love him very much. I know he is strict with me because he loves me.

My mother is an office worker, too. But she is different from my father. She is very gentle. She likes cooking very much. She cooks for us. Every day I can eat different delicious food. In my opinion, she is the most beautiful mother in the world.

My sister is very young. She is only 5 years old. But she is a student, too. Because she is very lovely and bright, we all like her very much. She often gets in trouble. I have to help her every time.

Look! This is my family, a happy and vibrant family. Do you like it? I think it is a happiest family. I love it very much.

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篇4:环保英语作文

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Now, people advocate low carbon life, our class also launched a "green low carbon knowledge contest" activities.

Attending this activity, I just know, originally did not use electrical appliances, but dont pull the plug, or will power. I also have a little ashamed, because I think of my old things: once, when I was over the computer, but forgot to turn off the computer, went to bed until I remembered that the computer didnt shut, but I dare not to turn off the computer, because I was afraid of scold by mom and dad, how to do? I had to go in only when mom and dad sleep off. But it also takes up a lot of electricity. There are a few minor is dont forget to turn off the electric fan, or forget to turn off the lights, then I dont think is electricity that takes up a little? But now I know, this is not the environmental protection.

Hence, under my advocacy, our family began to low carbon life action, I posted a warm prompt: on television watching TV unplug; On a computer with a tip: over the computer to shut down in a timely manner. Mother specially is guarding the light has not related, if caught, who pay the electricity bills this month. Dad is responsible for checking the electrical plugs. I think: if we always stick to it, so can save a lot of electricity, really can realize low carbon life.

Here, I would also like to remind you that want to low carbon life, is about to take a bus, private cars less, smoke less, a variety of trees, to reduce the carbon dioxide, make our air more pure and fresh, the water cleaner, more green trees, sky more blue!

现在,人们都提倡低碳生活,我们班也开展了一次“绿色低碳知识竞赛”的活动。

参加完这次活动,我才知道,原来没有用电器,但是不拔插头,还是会耗电的。我同时也有点惭愧,因为我想起我以前的一些事:有一次,我玩完电脑,却忘了关电脑,直到我躺到床上的时候才想起电脑没关,但我不敢去关电脑,因为我怕被爸爸妈妈骂,怎么办呢? 我只好在爸爸妈妈睡着的时候才去关的,但也耗掉了很多电。其实还有几次要不就是忘了关电扇,要不就是忘了关灯,那时我觉得就不那耗掉一点电吗?但现在我知道了,这样做很不环保的。

于是,在我的倡导下,我们全家都开始低碳生活行动,我在电视机上贴了一张温馨提示:看完电视要拔插头;在电脑上贴了一张提示:玩完电脑要及时关闭。妈妈专门是看管电灯有没有关的,如果被抓到,这个月的电费就谁交。爸爸就负责检查各电器的插头。我想:如果我们家一直这样坚持下去,一定能节省很多电的,真正的能实现低碳生活。

在这里,我还想提醒大家,想过低碳生活,就要多坐公交车,少开私家车,少抽烟,多种树,来减少二氧化碳,使我们的空气更加清新、水更清、树更绿、天更蓝!

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篇5:初一暑假英语

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what! The summer vacation goes by so fast, fifty days will pass in a blink

of an eye. During this summer vacation, I spent most of the time playing

basketball. Sometimes I go swimming with my friends. Sometimes play with small

cards. If I was alone, I would ride a bicycle for a ride around, or watch TV, or

go online to find a classmate I miss, chatting, bickering, and solving the pain

of missing. There are many, many programs to play, but my favorite is still

playing basketball.

During this summer vacation, my mother signed me up for a basketball class,

so that I could keep fit and keep my body in good shape. At the same time, I

also want to find my own fun and hobbies. Make this summer a little more

fulfilling.

When I first started learning, I could not learn the basic skills given by

the coach. Even sometimes the coach has already taught me hands-on, and I still

dont understand. Just when I lost my confidence and was about to give up, the

coach came to me and said, "It doesnt matter, whoever learns skills will not go

through a little setback and will be smooth sailing? Who has an amazing talent,

one step to the sky? Dont you rely on the accumulation of bit by bit to make

the same movement well? As long as there is perseverance, the iron pillar will

be ground into a needle!"

After listening to what the coach said, I was at a loss. Begin to practice

hard: I practice pitching on the court while the coach calls everyone to rest.

The coach said that when school was over, I practiced three-step layups on the

court and didnt leave until my family came to tell me. I also often share my

experience with my classmates...

As the saying goes, hard work pays off, and my hard work is not in vain -

now, my basketball skills have improved by leaps and bounds, and I dont only

know a little bit like before. And my physique has also improved, I wont run

out of breath after running 400 meters like before - playing basketball is happy

and healthy!

This summer vacation is happy and fulfilling, and I look forward to the

next summer vacation coming soon!

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篇6:关于环保话题的英语作文

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导语:现在环境污染问题越来越严重了,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的关于环保话题英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Bird flu and Sars are two typical examples that environmental destruction may threaten our life. Besides, forest destruction , water and air pollution result in decrease of planting land and unpleasant weather.

Serious as the problem seems, we can come up with some measures to deal with it. First of all, the authorities should adopt the policy of "sustainable development", and laws concerning environmental protection should be put into effect and enforced strictly just as our government has been doing.

What s more, every citizen should realize the seriousness of the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment. In addition, planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment.(约120字)

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由于环境的破坏,我们生活的世界变得越来越难以忍受。禽流感和Sars是两个典型的例子,环境破坏可能威胁我们的生活。此外,森林破坏,水和空气污染导致种植面积减少和不愉快的天气。

这个问题似乎很严重,我们可以提出一些解决的办法。首先,当局应该采取“可持续发展”的政策,有关环境保护的法律应实施和严格执行,正如我们的政府一直在做。

更重要的是,每个公民都应该认识到问题的严重性,并共同努力保护我们的环境。此外,植树有利于改善和美化环境。(120约字)

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篇7:初一与环保有关的文章

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我是大地妈妈怀抱里的一条河,我的名字叫清清。

以前的我纯净、透明,村庄里的姑娘们爱以我为镜,照出她们那美丽的倩影;森林里的动物朋友都喜欢跑到我的身边,贪婪地喝着我甜美的汁水,把我当成最美的饮料。

水中植物家族的朋友们,更是把我当成它们的乐园。有的像海带,偎依在我的怀抱里撒娇;有的似珊瑚,害羞地躲藏起来,和我捉迷藏;有些青蛙、鱼儿,调皮极了!总爱到荷叶上表演节目,和水珠嬉戏。

可是现在,我的脸变得很黑很黑,臭气薰天,再也见不到朋友们欢快的踪影。人们经过我时,总要捂住鼻子,大步流星地躲闪我。美丽的水生植物朋友们也在我怀里一一死去。我的泪水因为伤心都快流干了。

我这副面目全非的模样全是人类造成的,他们将生活垃圾扔到我的怀里,使我变得“五彩缤纷”;他们还在我身旁建起了化学工厂,使一些有毒的液体注入我的体内;他们还乱砍伐,使我堤岸的泥沙流泻,拥挤着我的怀抱。

人类啊,你们不能破坏我们了,不能再破坏大自然了。

我太伤心了,说不下去了。人类朋友们,你们自己去想吧!

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篇8:初一英语作文:PlantingFlowers

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Spring is coming. Birds are singing and flowers are blooming. I wanted to plant spring in my home, so I, together with my dad, went to the market and bought some flower seedlings. We prepared to plant them in the yard. When we were back home, we went into action in no time. Some time later, we finished. I will patiently wait for spring to come to the yard now.

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篇9:初一暑假英语

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The summer vacation this year, our family person went a lot of a lot of

amused interesting place plays, we went 101 buildings, lunar eyebrow explores

Eden, gao Tie explores a house... etc amused interesting place plays, what I

feel happy days always passes is very fast, I spend the summer vacation this

year very happily, so I just can feel happy to light always passes very quickly.

I am written down so that our family has the summer vacation this year the 101

buildings that go to Taipei city, when elevator still does not have attic, can

see Taipei city, I feel I am like is big giant, the house resembles is toy

house, the car resembles is toy house, the person resembles is small ant euqally

small, I feel absorbing.

Besides, our family still has go lunar eyebrow explores Eden, over there

very big! We play skyscraping annulus first, skyscraping annulus can reach very

tall place, we play corsair later, corsair left and right sides shakes special

stimulation, we still have go playing very resemble rotating the You Le

establishment of coffee cup, establishment of this You Le is very amused, if did

not help good armrest up to be able to slip all the time,will slip, this I feel

very interesting, we still have go playing imperial crown swing, establishment

of this one You Le wont be very exciting, when rotating, have slightly wind is

blown, this feeling seems to blowing fanner, nevertheless, the fanner of its

nature, besides this a few swim interestingly again amusedly outside happy

establishment, still have a lot of amused You Le establishment! The summer

vacation this year, our family besides go 101 buildings and Eden of lunar

eyebrow exploration play, still have go Gao Tie explores a canal to look around,

gao Tie has the thing of a lot of a lot of Guan Wugao iron inside exploration

house, have: Film appreciation, the game that fish, drive Gao Ties game, for

very the appearance of Gao Tie is 3 pediform principle... wait a few amused

interesting establishment, I acquired a lot of knowledge inside house of tall

iron exploration.

I feel although this one summer vacation passes exceedingly quickly,

nevertheless, I went to the place of a lot of playing in this one summer

vacation, also increased the knowledge of a lot of in a lot of place, I saw

Taipei city in the 101 buildings of Taipei city, also explored a house to

understand Gao Tie in Gao Tie, had termed begins now, my hope is fine

nevertheless summer vacation comes quickly, can look around to each district and

amuse oneself.

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篇10:环保应从小事做起初一作文

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我的家乡是个美丽的地方,这里有巍峨的高山,清澈的河水,挺拔的树儿,还有翠绿的竹林,芳芳的花朵,这里的一切一切,无不令人神往。

一个周末,我心血来潮,想去屋后的竹林野餐。主意一定,我便立即找了几个好伙伴,带上一大包吃的就出发了。很快,我们就找到了一个合适的地方,把吃的往上一放,开始了野餐。我们一个个大嚼大喝,开怀畅饮,谈笑风生。不一会儿,我们吃饱喝足了,玩够了,留下满地的空瓶弃罐,带着满心的欢喜回家了。

第二天,我准备上学,走出家门口没几步,我一眼瞧见了邻居叔叔家门口有个大塑料袋,里面有那么多瓶瓶罐罐。呀!他平时不收垃圾的,今天怎么了?走近仔细一看,我呆住了,袋子里装的竟然是昨天我们野餐后丢弃的垃圾。“叔叔,这是怎么一回事?”这时,叔叔正背着锄头从屋里走出来,我迫不及待地问。叔叔轻轻地叹了一口气:“我昨天从山上回来,看见你们吧垃圾扔在了山上,我就把垃圾捡了回来,看见你们这样,我心里真不是滋味。丫头啊,你看这大山多好啊!前些年险些被我们毁掉了。近几年,国家给我们补贴,让我们护国造林,好不容易成了现在这个样子。我们可不能这样对待它,我们要好好保护它啊!

听了叔叔的话,我心里真不是个滋味,亏自己还是个中学生呢,竟然连这么浅显的道理都不懂,亏自己还是班上的环保小组长,整天只知道对别人指手画脚呢!我真正认识到环保的重要性了吗?我真正懂得怎么做了吗?“孩子,知错就改就行了,别太自责。”我抬起头,触到了叔叔那双慈爱的眼睛。“嗯!”我点点头,我已经知道该怎么做了。

上学途中,我看着四周高达的山峰,眼前清澈的河流,山上争奇斗艳的花儿……..多美呀,但我明白,这么美的景色,我们不好好维护她,她也会变得不堪入耳,而我们的家园,也将不再灿烂富饶!

喔,我明白了,环保不需要什么豪言壮语,不需要粉身碎骨,不需要惊天动地,它只需要从身边的小事做起

[环保应从小事做起初一作文

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篇11:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇12:初一英语作文EarlytoBed

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There is an English saying.It says,"Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." Have you ever heard it before?It means that we should go to bed early and get up early.If we do,we shall be healthy.People must have enough time to sleep.We should sleep for 8 hours every day.So we must do our homework quickly and go to bed before 10 p.m.Proverbs can always give us some enlightenment.To know some proverbs is good for us.

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篇13:初一英语作文介绍好朋友

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Today’s story is about Mary ,a girl from the US.She’s now studying in China,Beijing.Tomorrow is the Spring Festival. Now ,Mary is staying in China.One years ago,last Spring Festival ,Mary was 11 years old, very little girl. Now, she’s a 12- year- old- girl.Just 1 year,she learns many thing in China.Gradually,she loves China.

Now, she is living in her aunt home.At 9:00 a.m. in Beijing ,Mary make a phone call to her family. When they talk on the phone ,they are so happy .We a

ll know Mary’s mother misses Mary long time. Mary misses her family long time,too. And she was happy to live in China.But talking with family is more important than everything. What a warm story!

From this story, we know noting is important than family. No place like home!

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篇14:和地球妈妈的对话初一环保作文

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哈哈,我发现了个秘密!嘘,悄悄告诉你哦,在每天晚上9点31分08秒,打一盆清水放在月亮底下,就可以和地球妈妈对话!在发现这个秘密之后,我非常兴奋,就每天都去和地球妈妈聊天。今天,我一如既往。“地球妈妈……

哈哈,我发现了个秘密!嘘,悄悄告诉你哦,在每天晚上9点31分08秒,打一盆清水放在月亮底下,就可以和地球妈妈对话!在发现这个秘密之后,我非常兴奋,就每天都去和地球妈妈聊天。今天,我一如既往。“地球妈妈好!”虽然这是司空见惯的事了,可是每次都好兴奋。“唉,”地球妈妈叹了口气,接着说“愿会托你吉言了。唉。”“您怎么了?”我眨巴着大眼睛,好奇的问。“唉,”接着又是一声叹气“你看我和平常有什么不同吗?”“哦,是呢,您的衣服一天比一天变得难看了,而且直到今天,居然变得毫无一点色彩,灰暗灰暗的,没有了往常湛蓝的蓝和清脆的绿色了。这是怎么回事?哎呀,怎么您身上的伤那么多啊!一定很疼吧?您光滑的皮肤怎么变得如此……这究竟是怎么了?怎么会一下子变得那么惨?”看着地球妈妈的惨象,我心里也漾起一阵痛意和几分难过。“其实这也不是什么一下子变得如此狼狈,只是这人类的发展进度太快了,以前的伤口还不是太深,只是最近一段时间他们工程进度太无节制了,才弄得如此。”“啊?是哦,最近人类都处于‘毒气空气’中了,我所说的‘毒气空气’就是大家说的雾霾天气,这雾霾还真难散去,对人类的健康威胁太大了,讨厌的雾霾天!”“你可否知道,这雾霾起源就是你们人类!”地球妈妈很气愤,狠狠地说。“什么!”我大惊失色,差点一屁股跌坐在地上。你听我说,是这样的:“雾霾的形成,一般有以下几方面的原因:雾霾的形成,一般有以下几方面的原因

第一、建筑工地扬尘。

第二、汽车尾气排放。

第三、冬季取暖、以及用煤发电的火电站排放。

第四、近地面湿度比较大,空气中的颗粒物聚集,凝结。

第五、工业喷涂排放。

第六、部分工厂生产过程中的排放。知道了吗?这些都是你们人类的杰作啊!”“是么…”我心里很痛,竟想不到,造成人类自身健康威胁的罪魁祸首竟然是人类本身!“啊!好痛啊!”地球妈妈痛苦的呻吟着。“您怎么了!”“人类在用一种刀子再往我的肉!好痛!”“嘭!”地球妈妈的模型破碎了,化成一颗星星,飞到了天空上,紧接着,天空被一分为二。

左边的天空,有美丽的森林,可爱的动物,十二星座赫然呈现在人们面前,一切是美好的境遇;而右边的天空上,没有美丽的森林,只有剩下的树桩,没有可爱的动物,只有人类以狼吞虎咽的吃相吞狼咽虎,没有美丽的十二星座,只有一片灰茫的天空……看完这幅景象,我好伤心好伤心,地球养育了我们子子孙孙,我们怎能用这样的方式回报她,“但存方寸地,留与子孙耕”朋友,难道你们不懂吗?“大自然是善良的慈母,同时也是残酷的屠夫”朋友,难道你们不懂吗?大自然总有一天会惩罚我们的罪过的啊!“人生欲求安全,当有五要:一要清洁空气;二要澄清饮水;三要流通沟渠;四要扫洒房屋;五要日光充足”,朋友,难道你们不懂吗?要知道,我们现在已经不完全具备这些条件了呀。朋友,你听到了吗?地球妈妈在向我们呼唤:还我碧水蓝天!保护环境,从现在开始!

[和地球妈妈的对话初一环保作文

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篇15:初一英语作文:英语自我介绍

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Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Beihai.

你好,每个人!我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市北海。

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

我是一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好。但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。

also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!

也很喜欢运动。例如,跑步、排球等等。我是善良的。如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。我希望我们能成为好朋友!

OK. This is me. A sunny girl.

好吧。这就是我。一个阳光明媚的女孩。

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篇16:有关坚持英语初一

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At the coming of the new year, it is also the time for one of the biggest

tennis matches, the Australian Open. Since Li Na won her second grand slam here,

more Chinese people fall in love with tennis. One of the popular male players,

Roger Federer, who is more than 30, but he is still in the top level. The fans

hope their hero can enjoy the match and they didn’t expect the next grand slam.

But Roger made it happen again. He defeated his great rival, Nadal and won

Australian Open. The world was cheering for him, and they witnessed this great

man to make his career successful at the old age. If we have dreams, it is never

too late to pursue. People always take the age as the excuse, actually, they

lack of persistence, which differs them from successful men.

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篇17:英语作文:环保问题

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As is apparently revealed in the pie charts above, forty-eight percent of people surveyed have never heard of the International No Motor Vehicle Day while fifty-seven percent are willing to give up driving on such a day. What is betrayed in the pie charts is most thought-provoking.

The implied meaning of the pie charts is both disappointing and exciting. On the one hand, much necessary work still needs to be done with respect to environmental protection. The public ignorance of relevant environmental protection results from inadequate and limited popularity of environmental protection knowledge by relevant government departments at different levels. Since environmental protection is an international issue, we must constantly introduce the advanced and practical practice in other countries to our general public. Only in this way can we promote environmental protection in China. On the other hand, the enhancement of the public awareness of environmental protection is a welcome development. Over the past years, as people’s living standard improves, people attach more importance to the quality of their life. They have a better understanding of the relationship between environment and their daily life. As a result, they are more interested in following positive international models. In sum, we have got a mixed feeling toward the very fact revealed in the pie charts.

In my view, necessary measures should be immediately taken to ensure a nice environment. First of all, government departments at all levels must play a more active role in popularizing international experience and practice of environmental protection. What’s more, the general public should be encouraged to participate more actively in environmental protection. Only in this way can we live in a healthy and harmonious environment.

[英语作文:环保问题

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篇18:初一英语作文RiverPollution

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River Pollution

Chinese people are now face to a serious problem--pollution. And this problem is a little bit different from others--the goverment can not solve it by themselves. We need everyone to protect our environment. But we also know that it is very hard to call everyone to join us to protect the environment. But it seems that they have found the way to let everybody know it. In a report, Anhui Daily called on residents to help protect the river against pollution. I am so glad about it. And i believe that somewhere the pollution must stop.

[初一英语作文River Pollution

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篇19:初一英语作文:MYFAMILY

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Look,this is my family .Its a small family .There are three people in my family,they are my father my mother and I.

My father is a engineer,he likes playing football and reading news paper.

My mother is a college teacher.She likes playing computer games and watching TV.She likes eating apples and pears.

Im a student in

a middle school.I am 13.I like playing tabletennis and reading books.I like eating ice-cream.My favourite colour is pink.

I have a dog. Its name is Mary.It is very lovely.I like it.

I have a very happy family.

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篇20:初一寒假英语周记

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This week I didn’t do many wonderful things. I went to learn developing film with my classmates on July 1st. It was easy and we all got good marks. On July 4th, I went to school to learn, because I will be a junior three student soon. We would have to learn some lessons in advance. The weather was very hot. But I didn’t feel that learning lessons was boring. Some teachers are new. They are good I think, although they are all looked strict. And the lessons were not too bad. This week was the beginning of this summer holiday, but it was really typical

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