2015关于小学英语写作技巧实用3篇 作文怎么写【合集20篇】

一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式

时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。

说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。

根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。

如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago，last…——过去时

next，in…——将来时等

人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如：Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English。

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。

根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。

特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。

首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。

同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次

考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词：

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…

And then，Finally，In the end，At last

2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition

3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but

Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing

On the one hand…

On the other hand…

Some…，while others…

4.表因果关系的：Because，As

So，Thus，Therefore，As a result

5.表换一种方式表达：In other words

6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as+n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact

8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion

9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。

状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。

动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。

It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。

常用状语从句句型：

1)时间when，not…until，as soon as

2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)

3)结果so…that+clause，too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)

5)让步though，although，even though，even if

no matter what/when/where/who/which/how

6)比较as…as…，not so…as…，than

五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

1.We live more and more comfortable。

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。

改正：much information

(不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There has many programs in TV。

改正：There are many programs on TV。

(There be句型和介词短语)

4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。

改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)

建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。

The spring festival is the most important festival for the chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like christmas in the west. all people living away from home go back, becoming the busiest time for transportation systems of about half a month from the spring festival. airports, railway stations and long-distance bus stations are crowded with home returnees.

Strictly speaking, the spring festival starts every year in the early days of the 12th lunar month and will last till the mid 1st lunar month of the next year. of them, the most important days are spring festival eve and the first three days. the chinese government now stipulates people have seven days off for the chinese lunar new year.

I Play Guitar

I like playing guitar,so my father buys me a guitar for fun.It is very funny.Then my mother asks me to have guitar class.She thinks to learn more skill

is good for me.I start to have guitar class.It is really funny at first.But later on,I feel very tired.It is not easy to get improved.I want to giveup,but I insist at last.Now I can pay several songs.I feel proud of it.

我弹吉他

我喜欢弹吉他,所以我爸爸给我买一把吉他的乐趣。这是非常有趣的。然后我妈妈问我有吉他课。她认为学习更多的技能对我有好处。我开始上吉他课。这是非常有趣的。但是后来,我感觉非常疲劳。不容易得到改善。我想给最后,但我坚持。现在我可以支付一些歌曲。我感到自豪。

今年暑假我们去了美丽的南麂岛，南麂岛是由52个岛屿及礁石组成，是我国最早建立的海洋自然保护区，有“珠海仙山”和“贝藻王国”的美誉，有1851种海洋生物在此栖息，各类自然景观共有180多处，十分漂亮。

我们坐了三个小时的火车一个半小时的快艇终于抵达了南麂岛，下了快艇我看见一座座连绵不断的山脉。接着我们又坐上城乡大巴在蜿蜒的羊肠小道上奔驰着，十分惊险，像在坐过山车似的，很快我们便到了我们要住的农家小院。我迫不及待地放下行李，拿上铲子和水桶要去大沙岙找蛤蜊。我们步行来到了大沙岙，海面上浪花朵朵，海水一波又波冲打着沙滩，我们走在金黄色的沙滩上有点烫，这里的沙子又软又细，踩在上面特别舒服，接着我们来到涨潮的地方，这里有很多被海水冲上来的贝壳，那应该会有蛤蜊吧，想到这里，我们便开心地找起了蛤蜊，不一会儿我们便找到了蛤蜊，我也找到了一只大大的蛤蜊，我们又在岩石边上找到了几只很小的螃蟹，收获可不小呢。看着海边游客们冲浪的尖叫声，我们也按奈不住了，我们坐在沙滩上任海水冲打着我们，一浪接一浪的太刺激了。

第二天，我们三点多就起床了，坐上了景区的大巴来了三尾盘看日出。三尾盘上有个很大的天然草坪，足足有五亩地，满是碧绿的青草，像是给大地盖上了一张绿色的地毯。我们坐在草坪上等待太阳的出现，一阵凉爽的海风吹的我们十分舒服，乌云慢慢散开，天空的颜色渐渐变浅，变亮，只见东边海天相接的地方出现了一点亮光，很快天边有了一道红霞，海平面上露出一个红点，啊!太阳出来了，太阳出来了，它慢慢上升，越来越大，越来越亮，最终冲出云层把大海照得闪闪发光，我赶紧拿来相机拍下了这美丽的一瞬间。

三尾盘上还让我感到惊奇的就是海滨长廊，我们沿着海滨长廊走向出口，那里都是一块块自然形成的岩石，没有人造的路，前面好像没有路了，走过去一看又有个山洞可以通过，真是太奇怪了。

南麂岛真是太美了，我把美丽的风景留在了相机里，把美好的记忆都留在了我的脑海里。

一、准确概括内容或中心

题目，其实是成语“画龙点睛”中的“睛”，能让全文“飞腾”起来；是成语“提纲挈领”中的“纲”，能由此把握全文的精髓。所以，一定要在“准确”两字上下工夫。比如这次“同步宝典”中四年级的《说说我的名字》，原稿上是《名字的烦恼》，但你细读原文会发现，其实“烦恼”只是文章引入部分的内容，更主要的还是后面写名字对自己的鼓励，文章的中心思想也是突出自己名字的深刻含义，因此，原题显然不够准确。现在改成《说说我的名字》，涵盖面就比较准确全面了。

二、尽量生动一点，或含蓄一点

如果一眼看见的都是那种板着面孔的、千篇一律的作文题目，读者的阅读兴趣马上就降低了，甚至不愿再去看文章。所以，生动、含蓄，就值得你命题时绞尽脑汁了。这次“同步宝典”中就有不少好题目可以借鉴，比如三年级《春风的絮语》，不但让春风“活”了，而且跟人们对话了，多形象！比如四年级《放手让我飞吧》，比简简单单的《从乌塔想到的》要吸引人吧？再比如五年级的《读比童年》，既体现了读后感的体裁，又突显丫文章的内容和中心，文字上还非常精练工整，着实为文章增色不少！

三、力求比较新鲜新颖

创新能力能反映一个人素质的高低，你的作文命题能不能因别出心裁而让人眼睛一亮，其实是你写作水平乃至思维水平的展示。所以，你得充分发挥自己的个性特长和聪明才智，充分顾及自己习作内容或写法上的特点，为文章取个精彩题目，起到锦上添花的作用。(小学生作文 )比如这次“同步宝典”中四年级《学习游泳五乐章》就很特别，小作者用音乐的音阶谐音作小标题，展现了学习游泳的整个过程和切身体会，然后以“乐章”统领全文，就好比用一根红线穿起了珍珠，难怪写点评的金老师要赞叹“妙不可言”了!我们回忆以往“同步宝典”发表过的习作，还可以发现不少这样的新颖命题，比如三年级写动物故事的《“温迪”≈我》、四年级写成长中心里话的《转陀螺的矛盾心理》，五年级写课业负担的漫画作文《为什么没人查我超载》等，不都给我们留下了深刻印象吗？

再来说说给文章命题的几个小技巧。

建议你不要先命题再作文，而是倒过来，先把文章写好，然后在修改过程中酝酿题目。这时候，你对成型的文章已经烂熟于心，文中许多人物形象、关键情节、精彩语言等元素往往会如火花般在你脑海中闪烁，撷下一朵，缀作题目，往往就是出乎意料的亮点。

Hello ,teachers. I want to say something about a girl :This is a girl who is beautiful .She has two big eyes ,a small nose ,and two small ears .She likes swimming and dancing .She likes learning English ,because it’s interesting .But she doesn’t like maths ,it’s very difficult.There are three people in her family :father ,mother ,and her .They love her very much .Do you know this girl ?Yes ,this is me , a lovely girl.

Hello ,teachers. I want to say something about a boy :This is a boy who is handsome .He has two big eyes ,a small nose ,and two small ears .He likes swimming and playing computer games  .He  likes learning English ,because it’s interesting .But he doesn’t like maths ,it’s very difficult.Do you know this boy  ?Yes ,this is me , a  cool boy.

H1N1 influenza, since the claws reached into the earth and stuck it into our world caused great sensation. From Moscow, the United States, Japan, ... ... to China, have spared, showing the speed of its spread. While we use some of the medical technology we have can be prevented, you can cure, but it is still scary. The most laughable thing is that some people thus do not eat pork. However, these are not the focus of my concern, I am concerned, I am sad is:

When we state the first to be infected were found, one who returned from abroad Sichuanese, I heard mostly blame everyone, it makes me sad exception. Had returned from abroad is a good thing, is between the happy event. But because even not aware of being infected was a complete mess of things hands and become pieces of sad things. At first, I think we should sorry for him, should go to help him. However, many people said: "In the U.S., do not come back Well!" "We also are engaged in a state of panic." ... ...

So I write this, would like to call everyone together for their fuel.

Unfortunately, they are infected, and now has been isolated, they can not see their loved ones, they have lost freedom, they are very painful, very unwilling. So let us give them the courage to give them strength! Let us wish them a speedy recovery!

H1N1流感，自从这个魔爪伸进地球，伸进我们的世界就引起了极大的轰动。从莫斯科，美国，学习英语的网站，日本……到我们中国，无一幸免，可见其传播速度之快。虽然我们利用我们己有的医学技术，可以预防，可以根治，但是却还是令人恐慌。最可笑的是，有人因此而不吃猪肉。然而，这些都不是我关注的焦点，令我关注的，令我伤心的是：

当我们国家的第一个被传染者被发现时，就是那个从国外回来的四川人，我听到的大部分都是大家的苛责，这令我异常难过。原本从国外回来，是件好事，是间喜事。却因为连自己也不知道被传染的事搅的得一塌糊涂，成了件悲事。原本我想我们应该为他难过，应该去帮助他。然而，很多人却说：“在国外就不要回来嘛!”“还搞的我们人心惶惶的。”……

所以我写这篇，学英语的好网站，想呼吁大家，一起为他们加油。

他们不幸感染上了，现在被隔离，他们不能见到自己的亲人，好的英语学习网站，他们失去了自由，他们也很痛苦，很不甘。所以让我们给他们勇气，给他们力量!让我们一起祝愿他们早日康复!

健康：中药能够战胜甲流吗？

英语写作：Freedom in my Dream

One of my classmates was knocked down by car last term. He was badly hurt. He had to stay in the hospital for several months. We were very sad.

One night, he felt very hungry. He wanted to buy some easy noodles to eat. He ran very fast. He didn’t stop when the traffic lights were red. He couldn’t escape. His legs were injured. He said that was a terrible(可怕的) memory. He said he would obey the traffic rules forever.

Please always remember the traffic rules. It is very important for us. Life is wonderful. Let’s obey the rules at any time.

Our country has an ancient patriotic poet named Qu Yuan, he was e_iled by

the calumny, the inability to save the peril of the country, e_cessive anger, so

Jiang himself voted to Health martyred. It is for him not to eat the bodies of

fish and shrimp, one after another to the various pancake into the river, the

water used to feed animals, and some ship off the water at the water beast. This

has become now the Dragon Boat Festival, eating dumplings, fried cake, the

origin of the dragon-boat race.

Having said that, I think of my family have been the scene of the Dragon

Boat Festival. Grandmother pinch a different type of pancake, has florets,

small, small starfish, is really different form. hurry to go shopping Kok,

calmly took my father to buy tzu. A long row of teams, like a long queue, we

managed to buy a tzu. We can see that every household have attached great

importance to this holiday, people in this way to e_press their thoughts and

reverence Yuan.

我国古代有一位爱国诗人叫屈原，他遭谗言被放逐后，无力拯救危亡的国家，悲愤过度，于是投江自尽，以生殉国。人们为了不使鱼虾吃掉他的尸体，纷纷将捏成的各种各样的饼子投入江中，用来喂饱水中的动物，有的划着船在水上敲锣打鼓驱赶水兽。这便成为现在端午节，吃粽子、炸糕点、赛龙舟的由来。

说到这里，我又想起了我家过端午节的情景。奶奶捏了种类不同的饼子，有小花，小人，小海星，真是形态各异。妈妈急着去买菜角，爸爸不慌不忙地拉着我去买粽子。排着长长的队，好似一条长龙，我们好不容易才买到了粽子。可以看出，家家户户都很重视这个节日，人们用这种方式来表达对屈原的思念和崇敬。

I had finished trainning in army for 8 days.Though this trainning I can learn a lot of things without schooling.I made many new good friends as well.

I never finished a whole work myself before this trainning. Because of this, I failed the most important exam. The drillmaster taught us that we must often say "never give up"in our life.Only in this way, we can succeed. I felt bloody lonely after I graduated from school.By mean of this trainning,I have new friendiness.We often talked about our favourite things as football,basketball and so on.... I think we need some trainning.It can make us become better and better. I will remember this trainning forever!

小学四年级的英语作文一

I am a primary school student. In school, I have four classes in the morning andtwo in the afternoon. Usually, the classes are over at about half past four.SoI have much time to have fun. We students have many activities after class.

Forexample, I like playing badminton and table tennis. Some of my classmates likeplaying basketball and football. There is a gym in my school. It’s a popularplace, too.My school encourages students to do exercise after class. So myschool provides us many places and equipment. I like taking part in variousactivities after class. It makes me happy.

小学四年级的英语作文二

I want to be ateacher in the future, because I think teacher is a good job. My teachers arevery good. Some of them are gentle, but some of them are not.But I think theyall care for students very much.

I want to be a good teacher like them. I thinkI will be strict to my students in the class. But after class, I want to betheir friend and help them in study and life. Besides, it can help me to keep ayoung heart to stay with young students.I must work hard for my dream.

小学四年级的英语作文三

My father is thirty-five years old. He is an attractive middle-age. He is an engineer, working in a big factory of my city. His working time is regular, going to office at eight o’clock and coming home at six o’clock.He works hard and becomes an important person in his factory.

At weekends, he does not go to work, so that he usually stays at home or take my mother and I go out. In my opinion, my father is a great person. He brings happiness to my family.

小学四年级的英语作文四

Today is "51" labor day, I want to do a meaningful thing. Because when I saw mother labor always waist sour backache, so I want to pass the labor day, for my mother to share some things, some burden. So, I thought of a good idea: to do a thorough cleaning at home.

First of all, I began to wash Windows and doors. I examined, to the house from top to bottom earnestly, from top to down with a rag, sticky dust on the cloth. Im tired, that this I full head big sweat, out of breath.

But I think: "cleaning was very hard, but if I insist on not to live, its not just did also wasted? Do things stead fast." Although I have washed my mother washed clean ? than anything else.

小学四年级的英语作文五

Two years ago, I startedto learn English.

At first, I think it is difficult, but my teacher taught me somegood ways. First, remember new words as much as possible. When you seesomething, you can use English words to name it.

Using the pronunciation to remembernew words is a good way. Second, read the words or sentence loudly. It will strengthenyour memory, so that you can remember words or sentence quickly. Third, listento the tape.Listening is the basic of English learning, so it’s important. Theseare some good ways to learn English. I hope they can be useful to you.

小学四年级的英语作文六

The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while.

Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running rowing, to keep me physically strong.

It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

小学四年级的英语作文七

I have a friend, her name is Lucy, I knew her when I was 4, she is my best friend.

Sometimes we will argue for something, none of us want to say sorry, then we will not talk to each other for days.I am so afraid that we will lose our friendship, so I will always be the first one to apologize. Now we learn to understand each other.

小学四年级的英语作文八

I like candy very much. On my birthday, my grandma gives me a bag of candy. Fruit candy is my favorite. They are colourful.

The banana candy is yellow, the strawberry candy is red, and the apple candy is green. My mother doesn’t want me to eat too many candies, it is bad for tooth.

小学四年级的英语作文九

As a child, when people give me the things to play or eat, I will be very happy and then accept them. But recently, as there are so much news about the children being cheated, my mother starts to worry about me, she tells me that I should not accept the strangers’ things, or I will be hurt.

I listen to her words and I take care of myself carefully.

小学四年级的英语作文十

I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as I was about to pour away the water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled.

导语：小编提醒大家，要想把作文写好，要想在考研写作中得高分，平时一定得多阅读优秀的范文，特别是一些漂亮精彩的句型。同时也有必要掌握一些写作模式和技巧，不断地模仿练习，最后才能真正打造出高分作文。

一、命题依据

考研话题牵涉面广，包罗万象，变幻莫测。但从历年考研真题研究中可以发现写作基本上可粗略地划分为两大类话题：永恒话题(everlastingtopic)和热点话题(hotissue)。所谓永恒话题，是指那些不以时间和空间的转移为转移的话题。这类话题一般都是一些宏观的大话题，没有明显的时代印痕。如有关社会道德范畴的话题。另一大类是热点话题，即近几年或某一年特殊的社会现象， 媒体普遍报道过或公众普遍谈论的话题。如AdvertisementonTV(93)，温室的花朵经不起风雨(2003)等，所以，平时在生活和学习中留意类似话题的英文素材预以备战不妨是个好的办法。

二、写作技巧

1.精心构造全文的引言段

考研作文阅卷老师每天工作量很大，工作时间也较长，因此长时间批改水平参差不齐、质量高下不一的作文难免感到疲劳，厌倦，甚至气恼。据测试统计，一口气读完12 篇后才走神的人极少，定力惊人。因此，在考研写作三段制中，第一段最能吸引他们的目光和注意力，因为考研作文采用的是总体评分法(GlobalScoring)，作文评卷老师往往主要凭借第一段的总体印象打分。有人把文章的第一段说成是黄金段落，说老师就是在这一段中不断地“淘金”。这一说法是很有道理的，因此，作文要想得高分，一定要精心构造全文的第一段，最大限度地满足阅卷老师的期待心理，力争给他留下良好的第一印象。经验告诉我们，阅卷老师在看完文章的第一段后就已基本上给文章定了分数档次，即使在第二，第三段中发现文章中的其他一些美中不足之处，他也只是微调几分，总体分数还是比先定的档次低的文章要好得多。总之，引言段在全文三段中的重要性再怎么强调也不过分。如果要按重要性依次递减的顺序来排的话，那么应是引言在先，其次是结尾段，再次是拓展段。

2.制造语言的闪光点

“言之无文，行而不远”，同理语言干瘪平淡，让人看之面目可憎，读后味如嚼蜡。要想攫住阅卷老师匆匆的一瞥，留住他们的兴奋点，就非得在语言上猛下功夫，多制造些表达上的闪光点。语言是思维的外壳，语言的好坏直接影响到实际作文分数的高低。语言表达的亮点体现在小到一个词，短语大到一个句子中。高分作文往往是“锱铢必较”，几乎字字计较。很多人作文分数很低往往是因为用词面太窄。当然，词汇的积累是有个过程的。可惜的是，很多同学只能认词，却不能再现，更不用说写作时运用了。

3.避免中国式英语

母语为非英语的人学习英语时往往会将母语的思维和表达方式直接迁移到英语表达当中。中国人学英语时往往会受母语根深蒂固的影响，最易造出中国腔的英语。有人把“价格便宜”直接写成“The price is cheap”，把“这件事小菜一碟”说成“This is a small dish”，让人看后苦笑不得。因此要尽量摆脱中国试英语，方法看来只有一条：多看外国人写的文章，多多阅读。不难想象，阅卷老师如果在短短的二百字文章中到处看到Chinglish，他无法使自己对你文章的印象好起来。

4.尽量有路标词

路标词(signalword)又称衔接词(connectives)就像灯塔为在茫茫大海中航行的船只指引方向一样，它能突出文章的层次性和逻辑性。英语文章讲究启承转合。“启”就是开启观点：“承”就是接着话茬进一步发展论证或补充：“转”就是讲相反或对立的观点：“合”就是总结概括。一篇文章若没有路标词便会杂乱无章的乱堆在一起，给人凌乱没有条理的感觉。标志词或衔接词的作用绝对不可小觑。

此外，多种句型的交替使用，文章脉络层次的分明，论据的合理充分等在写作中都应引起足够的重视。

This is our house.It`s nice and big!It`s a warm world. All family are live in it. Ha!This is my parents`room.It`s big.My father is sit on the this chair.My mother is sleep on this bed. This is my room.It`s big,too.It`s name`s "Ann park" beacause it`s very lovely and interisting.This is my desk.Everyday I do homework here.This is my bed.It`s pink beacause pink is my favourite couler. This is our sitting room.It`s tidy.It has a table,four chairs,a TV,a mat and a flower.We often sing songs here and watch TV here.

This is our book room.It`s big but small than the sitting room.It has many many wonderful books.We are read books and newspapers here. This is our bathroom .It`s big.We take baths,wash faces and brush teeth here.Our house!Our warm world!I love U!

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径：

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

班级姓名

Rewritethesentences.（注意大小写和标点）

e.g.Thisismydesk.→Isthisyourdesk?Yes,itis./No,itisn’t.

Thesearemypens.→Aretheseyourpens?Yes,theyare./No,theyaren’t.

1.Thisismyschoolbag.（肯定回答）

2.Thesearemybooks.（肯定回答）

3.Thisismypencil.（肯定回答）

4.Thesearemyrulers.（肯定回答）

5.Thisismychair.（肯定回答）

6.Thesearemyrubbers.（否定回答）

7.Thisismybanana.（否定回答）

8.Thesearemypears.（否定回答）

9.Thisismydog.（否定回答）

10.Thesearemyeggs.（否定回答）

It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the

cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season

in the year is coming.

Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden

rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They

are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.

The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes

slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of

evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as

the maple leaves fall onto the sky.

It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the

ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will

make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.

I love the beautiful season.

I was in primary school through the fifth primary school, happy time for less homework, the teacher always tells stories. The first grade when I do not love learning, but after the third grade I began to love learning, because the teacher says learning fun for us, and we often have sports activities.

I will forever remember my elementary school schoolmate, elementary schoolteacher, also will forever remember my unforgettable elementary school life.

我的小学是在五小度过的,小学的快乐时光因为作业少,老师经常讲故事.一年级的时候我不太爱学习,但三年级以后我开始喜欢学习,因为老师给我们说学习的乐趣,还有经常的体育活动.

我会永远记住我的小学同学,小学老师,也将永远记住我难忘的小学生活.

参考范文：

I study in a beautiful school. There are many trees and flowers in campus.

It’s green all the year round. There are three buildings in my school. Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. Our classroom is large and bright. We are happy to study in it. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a basketball court and a football field.

After class, I often play in the basketball court. And, there are many other places for fun in my school. I like my lovely school.

参考译文：

我在一个美丽的学校学习。在校园里有许多树和花。

一年四季都是绿色的。在我的学校有三个建筑。他们两个是教学大楼和一个办公室和图书馆。我们的教室又大又明亮。我们乐于学习。除此之外,有两个操场在我的学校,一个篮球场和一个足球场。

下课后,我经常在篮球场上。,还有许多其他有趣的地方在我的学校。我喜欢我可爱的学校。

一次新的体验 A new experience

Yesterday I did commonweal in library to earn my public service

scores(which is similar to the compulsory credits).I arrived library at 8’clock

in the morning,a librarian let me to wipe the mirror in every toilet from one to

six floor.Then I started to wipe the mirrors.It was been two hours after I

finished all work.I was very tired,but looking at the shiny and clean mirrors I

had wiped, I felt very happy.To be honest,I had never done the things like it at

home,so it was a new experience to me,and it make me realize the hard work of my

parent.

昨天，我在图书馆做公益去获取公益实数(类似于学分)。我早上8点到达图书馆，一个图书馆管理员让我去擦一楼到六楼的厕所里的镜子。然后

就开始擦镜子了。等我完成了所有的工作，已经过去两个小时了。我非常地累，但是看着被我擦得干净闪亮的镜子，我感到很开心。说实话，我在家里从来没有做过像这样的事情，所以，这对我来说是一次新的体验，这也让我体会到了父母的艰辛。

Winter holiday is coming. I am so excited.

In this winter holiday, I am going to take a trip with my parents by plane.We are going to Beijing. Then, I am going to go ice skating there. I am going to see the snow. I will play with the snow. I am going to make a snowman with my sister. Then we are going to visit the Great wall. At last, we are going to go back home by plane.

That will be fun in the winter holiday! I can’t wait!

不少中学生作文时都没有写提纲的习惯。有的不懂得写提纲的重要性，怕耽误时间，会写而不写；更多的是不会写或不会写合要求的、有用的提纲。作文前应该写好提纲，这是保证作文成功的一项重要举措。老舍先生说：“有了提纲心里就有了底，写起来就顺理成章；先麻烦点，后来可省事。”由此可见，学会写提纲，养成作文前写提纲的习惯，应该是中学生写作学习的重要任务，是有效提高写作水平的好方法。

提纲犹如工程的蓝图、作战的计划，要力求写得符合要求。有些同学常写“1．事情的开始；2．事情的经过；3事情的结果”一类的“提纲”．这太空洞，对作文没有什么用处，不成其为“提纲”。也有同学把提纲写成文章的内容提要，这又太繁琐，也不好。还有的同学把提纲写得呆板、生硬，缺少变化，缺少特色，这样的提纲当然也不算好提纲，也会严重影响作文的质量。

一、提纲要切题。例如，有同学写《说“功夫不负有心人”》的提纲是这样写的：1．“有心”就是有明确的目的；2．“有心”就是有正确的方法；3“有心”就是有认真的态度和创造精神。认真审一下题便可知道，这一种提纲就比较切题。

二、提纲要体现体裁特点。假如要以《门》为题分别写议论文、说明文、记叙文，则其提纲，应该分别体现出不同的体裁特点。

议论文提纲：

总说“门”启迪我们要入好、把好人生的扇扇大门。知识、生活、社会的大门，门门入好：①入好知识门，才能获得知识；②入好生括门，才会懂得生活；③人好社会门，才可能成为社会的好成员。家庭、国家、思想的大门，门门把牢：①把好家门防风雨盗贼；②把好国门防敌人侵犯；③把好思想门防腐蚀变质。4努力入好、把好扇扇人生的大门，让生命的航船扬帆远航。

说明文提纲：

l．门有古老的历史－－与人类向时出现。

2．门有独特的构造－－由门面、门框、门袖等构成。

门的种类多种多样－－按质地分，有金属门、非金属门；按作用分，有多用途门和专用门；按位置的所属物分，有建筑物的门、交通工具的门、其它器具的门。门正向轻巧、牢固、美观、自动化的方向发展。