初三英语考试作文大全(经典20篇)

从 2015年海淀区初三期末大作文解读

——当极平凡撞上了极玄妙，也是醉了!

下面两个题目中任选一题，写一篇文章。

题目一：白鸽在到达它栖息的沙滩之前，要穿越万里重洋;蝉儿在飞上枝头尽情鸣唱之前，要在黑暗的地底默默等待三个春秋;蝴蝶在花丛中翩翩起舞之前，至少要经过四次蜕变。你在成长为今天的你之前，是否也曾经和它们一样，经历过漫长的跋涉，默默的坚守，艰难的改变?但或许正是这些痛苦的过程，让你享受到了成长的喜悦，托起了你梦想的蓝天。请以“揉痛苦，我快乐”为题目，写一篇文章。

题目二：假如你有十天的时间，可以做老虎、狮子、小鱼、小鸟四种动物中的任意一种，你会选择做哪一种动物?成为那种动物之后，你的世界一定不一样吧。请发挥你的想象，以“做十天______的奇遇”为题目，写一篇文章。

要求：

(1)选择题目一，请将题目抄写在答题纸上。选择题目二，请将题目补充完整抄写在答题纸上。

(2)不限文体(诗歌除外)。

(3)字数在600-800之间。

(4)不要出现所在学校的校名或者师生姓名。

平心而论，第一眼看到海淀区二选一的作文题目的时，我是相当赞赏的。虽然我猜想在考场上奋笔疾书的学生们大概在纷纷吐槽：白鸽为何要栖息在沙滩上，老师，这不合逻辑啊……

抛除这个关于“白鸽”“蝉儿”和“蝴蝶”的排比句在内容方面的严谨性问题，单纯作为一个初中考场作文题目来说，这个题目勉勉强强算及格吧。

基本上，读完“你在成长为今天的你之前，是否也曾经和它们一样，经历过漫长的跋涉，默默的坚守，艰难的改变?”这句话，小伙伴儿们在考场上定能绽开笑颜吧?在你们漫长的“写作”道路上，谁还没写过几次励志类的作文，对吧?再看后面这句“但或许正是这些痛苦的过程，让你享受到了成长的喜悦，托起了你梦想的蓝天。请以“揉痛苦，我快乐”为题目，写一篇文章。”简直已经把中心思想都已经双手奉送在你们面前，连题目都写好了!亲，你们还在等待什么?赶紧套作吧!曾经你们爬过的山，趟过的河，游过的泳，写过的书法，弹过的琴……注意题材不要太庸俗哦!

如果说第一个题目过于普通，普通得几乎难以鉴别学生真实的写作水平的话，那第二个备选的作文题目简直是：太令人惊喜啦!“假如你有十天的时间，可以做老虎、狮子、小鱼、小鸟四种动物中的任意一种，你会选择做哪一种动物?”这个作文题目出来后，一定会被各种“学者”“专家”等严肃的教育者进行批驳或嘲讽，但作为一个一线的普通语文老师来说，我想说，这个题目简直是太棒了太棒了!

除了题目不同以往考场作文的奇思妙想，打开小伙伴儿们封闭已久的想想之门，那种扑面而来的纯真和贴近自然的感觉不是更令人惊喜和感动吗?写作本来就是一件很美的事，可是在现行的考察方式下，写作文带给学生的往往是紧张、压力和对分数的担忧。这么单纯质朴而又妙趣横生的题目，简直都让我感动了!这绝对是出题老师的良心之作啊!

然而可是，这两个作文题目的差别如此之大，不能不反应出出题老师内心的矛盾啊，既要创新给写作的自由，又要照顾固有作文的考察方式，您也是累了!最关键的是，在这么重要的考试中，这两个作文题目放在一起，有多少学生会选第二个题目呢?

选第二个题目的孩子们，你们需要多大的勇气，才能在这么重要的时刻敢于放开手脚发挥想象写一个自己想写的妙意无穷的故事呢?你们也是醉了吧?不管你们通过小动物的眼光是看到了真善美，还是发现了人与自然的奥妙关系，抑或是竟然发现了积极乐观的价值观……发挥的余地都很大呀!

不管怎么说，放开思维的限制，给孩子们更多的写作空间，都是语文教育亟待解决的重要问题，海淀区这次作文的命题，毕竟毕竟是让我们看到了一点曙光，所以，还是极力给点个赞!

初三英语作文：Our Monitor

Li Ming is our monitor. She is tall, healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.

Li Ming works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language. But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains. With great efforts she made much progress in English study.

Li Ming is modest and always ready to help others. She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She sets us all a fine example.

初一英语作文：My Brother

Li Pings brother is a PLA man. He is a handsome, tall young man with big eyes and broad shoulders.

He was born in 1971. He was a good student in school. When he was seventeen, he finished middle school. Then he joined the Peoples Liberation Army. In the army, he studied hard and took an active part in the military training. In 1991, he went to Anhui Province to help in fighting against the flood disaster. He did a lot of good deeds there.

Yesterday afternoon Li Pings brother came to our school and gave us a talk. Weve learned a lot from him.

初一英语作文：My sweet home

Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until

I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I cant take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home,Dont you think so ?

初三英语作文：My Family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother and I .

My father is doctor. He works in Yueqing. He goes to work on foot everyday. My father is not very tall, but he is strong, he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work.

My mother is teacher. She works in a middle school in Yue Qing. She goes to work by car. She is a very good teacher in my eyes.

I am a student in Yueqing FLS. My school is very beautiful. There are many tall buildings, green tress, nice flowers in our school. We have wonderful teachers too. I like studying in my school.

My grandparents don’t go to work any more. They have retired. They stay at home everyday. In the morning they go to the park and do morning exercises. In the afternoon, they drink tea with their friends. In the evening, they enjoy themselves watching TV and reading newspapers.

We have a happy family. I can’t say how much I love it!

初三英语作文：My Best Friend

I have a friend. Her name is Gong Haijuan. She is a clever girl. She is kind to others. She has good grades in all subjects. She often comes first or second in the exam. She is like a boy. She is brave and helpful. One day, her friend’s keys fell into the pool. She jumped into the pool and found the keys. We all admire her. The owner of the keys master was grateful for her help. But she said, “We are classmates. We should help each other.” Sometimes when I have some hard questions, she will help me.

She is clever and cheerful. She can organize class activities and wall paper. Her wall paper won the first prize last term.

She is strong and good at sports. She likes playing volleyball and football. Sometimes she plays basketball with boys. The sports meeting is coming. She wants to get a good prize for class.

She is a nice girl. I think she can get better.

初三英语作文：My Dream School

I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn. We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our good friends. The students are polite and friendly. We all know how to keep our school clean and tidy. There is no litter around the campus.

I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.

[关于初三英语作文：Our Monitor

星期一的上午，英语老师捧着一叠试卷走进了教室，说：“今天考试。”“大学霸”们都说：“切！不就是考试嘛！小菜一碟！”而学习不太好的同学丧气地说道：“怎么又是考试。”我心里偷偷乐道：哈哈！真是天助我也！昨晚做完作业，妈妈正好叫我做了一份英语试卷。

开考了。哈！题目竟然和我昨天碗上做的题目几乎一样。考试中我非常顺利。突然，一道题把我“拦”住了，我的心里像揣着小兔子似的，七上八下。我嘴中嘀咕道：“这题好像老师重点讲过的，万一错了就是5分呀！不行，我得快点想起来！”终于，我想到了答案！我笔走如飞，很快完成了这张试卷。可我还是生怕那道题错了，一个字母都不放过地认真检查。

第三节课，考试结果出来了。老师开始报分数了：“奔雨欣99分，张娜98。5分……”怎么还没报到我的名字？我心想：完蛋了，我一定考得很差！这时一句话让我心中的石头落地了：“其余没报的名字的四个人都是100分！”

一放学，我就冲向妈妈的怀抱，大声地说：“妈妈，我考了100分！”妈妈摸了摸我的头说：“今天妈妈带你去看电影！”

I likeChristmas, it is just like our spring festival.

Maybe the spring festival is much more important and interesting than christmas, but i like christmas day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during christmas. When it is snowy,

Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine i am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place! So we can also call christmas “snowy lovely day.”

On christmas day, shops are red and green. There are so many christmas cards, christmas hats, christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “merry christmas.” By the way, i think studying can also become much more interesting.

My mother is 36 years old, long longhair, intermediate mixed with a few gray hair, a pair of gentle eyes, high nose, big eyes, in my opinion, mother as a whole is very beautiful.

Since I started in elementary school, my mother said to me: "you must good good study, as a child to go to school to listen to the teacher, finish the homework carefully". Mother after school every day the first thing to do is ask me: "what the teacher tell you today, my homework is what?" Although very nag, but I know it is the mothers care to me, so every time I am very serious answer. When you do your homework, I encounter a difficult problem ask mom, mom said: "go to their own brain to think about first." Each make a problem, mom will let me remember this way, also let me next time wont go wrong.

Mother not only care about me, in the study on the life and meticulous care me, mom often teaches me to be, just like a lamp that rev beacon to guide my direction, my mother taught me to be honest, to credit. In the daily life of my mother has always been very generous, every day after school, I entered the house, you can taste delicious food.

Mother, you comforted me in my sad; You encourage me when I encounter a failure, you guide me when I walk in the wrong direction. Strict with me in your learning; You to me in life takes good care of me.

Ah! Your mother for the sake of my life, learning to pay a lot, I will not live up to your expectations, study hard and make a good filial piety you in the future, contribute to the country!

我的妈妈今年36岁，长长的披肩发，中间掺有几根白发，一双温柔的眼睛，高挺的鼻子，大大的眼睛，在我看来妈妈整体是很漂亮的。

从我开始上小学时，妈妈就对我说：“你一定要从小好好学习，上学要听老师的话，认真完成作业” 。每天放学妈妈第一件事就是问我：“今天老师给你讲的什么，家庭作业是什么?”尽管很唠叨，但我知道这是妈妈对我的关心，所以每次我都很认真的回答。做作业时，我一遇到难题就去问妈妈，妈妈便说：“先去自己动脑想想” 。每做对一道题，妈妈便让我记住这种方法，还保证让我下次不再出错。

妈妈不但在学习上关心我，在生活上也是无微不至的关爱我，妈妈经常教我做人，就像一盏启明灯一样引导我的方向，妈妈教我要诚实、要拾金不昧。在我的衣食住行方面，妈妈一向是十分慷慨的，每天放学，我一进家门，就能尝到可口饭菜。

妈妈，您在我伤心时安慰我;在我遇支失败时你鼓励我，在我走错方向时你引导我;你在学习上严格要求我;您在生活上对我无微不至的关怀我。

啊!妈妈您为了我的生活，学习付出了很多，我一定不会辜负你的期望，好好学习，将来好好孝敬您，为国家做出贡献!

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

there are 4 members in my warm family, my father, my mother my grendmother and i. My father is a worker, he works hard every day and makes the decision of the family. My mother is a teacher, she has many students which a lot of them have great achievement. My grendmother only stays at home every day , And I am a student reading in XX school, I worked hard on my study, and I have many friends.

In my family, we love each other. We are living in a happy life.

Only the delicious food, know the whereabouts of your soul; Only the delicious food, listen with your heart to tell of the stomach. Have to hurry, how much we missed the pure delicious; Tip of the finger food, the food and love in your pocket. You have your personality, I have my pursuit: pot bag meat.

A week off to just into the house, smell a fragrant delicious cuisine. I am sure that mother gave me a delicious pot bag meat. I follow scent into the kitchen, did not beyond my expectations, mother in doing pot bag meat for me. Saw the delicious pot bag meat, stirs my saliva, slowly began to mean. I hurried back, that I may not let mother found. My mother asked me to write my homework first, and then wash your hands, give me to eat a delicious pot bag meat for a while.

I which have idea to write my homework, my mind only pot bag meat. I wash your hands, take the double I dedicated chopsticks quickly do the table. Soon, my mother brought a plate of golden pot bag meat came in, not mother put the pot bag meat on the table, such as I have already put a piece of into the mouth. Enjoy the pot bag meat delicious, mother see I eat with a smile. I asked my mother: "why dont you eat?" "I ate," mom said. I dont believe, just put a bowl to the mother. Then we together eat it with relish.

Pot bag meat, why are you so good? Let me have a special liking to you. Because the pot bag meat is permeated with mother selfless great love to me.

In recent years, there is a growing concern for the spending craze during graduation. Thefarewell dinners, which once symbolized a celebration of the four-year friendship and the bitterness of pending departure, pose a gigantic financial burden on the graduates.

A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the following might be the critical ones. Firstly, it’s an undeniable truth that today’s college students tend to spend much more money than before. What’s more, the farewell dinners are held in the name of more and more social groups, such as classes, college societies, dormitories and etc.

In my view, the problem mentioned above has become increasingly severe, so great concern is deserved and effective measures are called for. To begin with, it is essential that the school should attach more importance to teaching the concept of thrift. Secondly, students should enhance their awareness that money never stands for affection. Only with these measures taken, I’m convinced, can the craze of spending during graduation be eased.

1)做模版：拿几片范文，找几句比较拽的结构型句子，拼凑出一个你自己顺手的框架即可。不用到处找，也不用找很多，一个框架即可，当然，准备一些可以替换的词：比如recommendation替换conclusion.漂亮句子很多，但若水三千，我只掬一瓢饮。

2)找出主要的错误类型，每种写出一道两句经典的表述即可。

3)考时30分钟分三个阶段：一)12-15分钟，写出完整的第一段，三个征文段的topic sentence，和完整的末段。写第一段的同时就构思topicsentence,末段无非是重复结论和三句topic。这样的好处是结构已经完整了，你不用慌了。。二)13-10分钟，完成三段正文。我以前觉得这个很困难，后来想通了。无非是把这层意思说清楚就行。3句话就够了。也够长了。三)5分钟check.还一个作用时，是在前面没有完成，还有一个buffer,也不至于弹尽粮绝。

4)非常措施：考试万一时间不够，首段就抄原句;如果时间还不够，末段就cut-paste首段和topic 的文本，稍加修改即可。但是，结构是完整的。

5)ok作文法的精髓和适用范围：精髓：看上去很美。适用范围：不想得6分的人(因为想的6分的人追求的是实际上也很美。如果运气好，可以的5分，运气不好，可以的4分。

在今年的暑假之中，我参加了一次有趣的英语考试。

这次英语考试可是全国统考，说真的考试前我还是有些紧张，但是我一想到有老师和家长在默默支持我，我就一点也不紧张了，反而很有信心。

当主考官叫到我的名字时我非常高兴，因为我盼望已久的考试终于到来了。在考口试的时候我有很多单词没有学过，可是我还是一一的把它给拼读了出来，最后还是有两个单词没有拼出来。在抽签的时候我抽到了一首非常简单的歌，但是老师给我考了一首难的，我唱完后老师说我唱得非常好。

第二天我去考笔试，那些题一点也不难，考试规定的是两个小时，我却只用了二十分钟，是全校最快的一个学生，而且我还检查了几遍，我深信，我一定能取得好成绩。我心想，我能有这样的成绩，全靠大舅对我严格要求，还有我自己的努力。这次我最该感谢的是我的大舅，因为没有他我怎么可能有这么好的成绩，没有他的督促，没有他的严格要求，没有他的教训，我是不可能考得好的，我多么想亲自对大舅说一声谢谢啊。

我今后一定要少让大舅担心，自己好好的学习，好好的努力，一定要自觉学习，不要大舅督促，不要他叫我学我们才学，我不是为大舅而学。

这次的英语考试既有意义又有趣。我以后一定要多参加这一类的活动。

毕竟中考准备中，作业不与往日同。接天练习无穷尽，兔子眼睛别样红。——题记

我的初三生活就是这样，光阴在忙忙碌碌中一点点度过。在我的内心深处，一个“联招”已不能满足我的欲望，我的目标是那几所“老牌重高”。我这三年一直向着它奋斗。三年的努力没有白费，尽管离它还有着一些差距，但A中和B中仍向我伸来“橄榄枝”，而我知道，第一志愿只能填报一个，那就意味着，我必须在A中和B中之中做出一个选择。这是一个困难的选择。A中是一所比B中更好的学校，它也是我梦寐以求的乐土。B中虽在“软、硬件”方面比不上A中，但也在“老牌名校”之列，而条件也更加的“优惠”。我陷入的迷惘，在A、B之中无从选择，一边是更好的学校，一边是更大的机会，中考真的很“难”，一旦失败，就犹如落入无底的深渊，处处遭“白眼”，处处受歧视。可我实在是太向往A中……时间还是一天天地过，我还是在忙忙碌碌之中，显然它并不知道我内心深处的苦……

就这样一天天地拖着，我实在拿不定主意，可是我的父母，朋友却一再催促我快点做出选择，我的心真的好痛……“鱼我所欲也，熊掌亦我所欲也，二者不可得兼，舍鱼而取熊掌者也……”不知为何，我总爱翻到这一课，或许这是冥冥之中的天命吧。可哪个是“熊掌”，哪个是“鱼”?我，不知道。……“最后通牒”的时限就快到了，就在这个晚上我必须做出选择。我呆坐在书桌前，书桌上空荡荡的，什么也没有，除了两份简介。

不知为何，我再一次选择了A中，尽管B中有更大的“优惠”，有更大的诱惑……或许这是冥冥之中的天命吧。我反复默念道：“我选择了一条更难走的路，可我不能回头，我只有坚持走下去，一步一步向前走，尽管不知它有没有尽头……”月亮依旧挂在天上，它依旧笑着，显然它并不知道，在这个宁静的夜，有人的眼角闪着点点泪花……毕竟中考准备中，作业不与往日同。接天练习无穷尽，兔子眼睛别样红。

今天下午上英语课时侯老师说：今天我们英语考试，大家要细心哦！于是侯老师把卷子让大家传下去，然后侯老师说：要写班级姓名，还要检查背面有没有题，我们按照侯老师的话去做了，下午回到家，我上完钢琴课不久奶奶说：告诉你一个好消息，你猜是什么好消息？我猜来猜去猜不着，奶奶提示我了一下说：英语考试我说：英语考试得了100分，奶奶说：答对啦！因为我以前考英语时都没有考过100分，就是因为我没有细心答题、细心检查，这次我的了100分，所以我非常高兴！

我以后要再接再厉，不能骄傲。

How I’ve changed

When I was a little girl ,I used to play with my friends all day and all night , I was very happy .But now ,I’m growing up ,I just wand to be alone , so I become worried . I used to like planting flowers ,but now I don’t have any time to do that , I only study and do my homework every day .I used to like watching Tv , and ofen watch cartoon ,but now I’m more interested in sports games and English programmes.

I didn’t use to reading books ,now ienjoy reading magazines ,because I think that the more books I read , the more knowledge I get . I usde to make my mother be angry with me ,now I’m obedient to her . I used to be afraid of the dark , but now I like to think about my problem in the dark and enjoy the dark instead …… How much I have changed !But what changed my life ? The time ,time could change everything.

[最新初三英语作文

Sports benefit me in many ways. Firstly, sports call can make me fit and strong physically. When taking part in sports, I get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. In addition, sports call can maintain my psychological well being, Whenever Im in low spirit,aking part in sports can help me forget my anxieties and worries. Besides, sports can teach me some lessons about life. Through participation, I can learn that on the playground I not only struggle for my own self but also fight for my team. Sports teach me to be considerate, cooperative and optimistic.

I am fond of sports very much. I feel that I not only gain a well balanced life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to make more friends, to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I participate in them in a proper way.

My favourite sport is football, as it is very exciting. I play footetball three times a week. Most often I play it in my school. I feel very happy when I play football in school with my friends. Sometimes I play football in the playground near my school.Football is very easy to play. If you play football very well, you can form a football team to take part in the competition. You may become a famous football star.

Therefore, football is a very good sport. I think, you can play football, cant you?

初三英语作文：Our School

Our school, which was set up in 1945, lies in the south of Changchun City. It is famous in our city.

It has 24 classes. 8 classes in each grade. The number of the students and teachers adds up to over 2,000. In the front of the school stands a high classroom building, behind which is a lab buiding. We have many of our chemistry and biology classes in it. Between them is a new library built 3 years ago. There are a large number of books there. After lunch a number of students like reading there.

On the right there is a football field and two basketball courts. They are our favorite places in our spare time. It is said that a swimming pool will be built to the left.

Our school is big and beautiful, covered with green trees and colorful flowers. Many piople call it a garden school. It’s really a good place for us to study in.

[关于Our School的初三英语作文

Topic one：Environment Protection（环境保护）

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

Forest Pretention保护森林

[精选高一上学期英语期末考试话题作文

She is very busy today, just like a busy bee. In the morning, I had two seccsions and after that I had a lesson for my IELTS. I dont even have my lunch. There lots of people in my IELTS class and most of them came from India. The reason why they want to attent this course is similar to me. Right now, I feel exhausted and dont want to work, but I still have lots homework to do.

I also have some other problem. Last term, I decided to start my new term in Newcastle, and asked Jhon to give my money back. And now, I have changed my mind, so told Jhon I did not want my fees back, but she told me the check had been sent out for almost two weeks. I havent received my check until now, and I told her the truth. Finally, she said she would help me to ask finaNcial officer to give me another letter, and then after I sign that form everything will be all right. What a absurd world it is. If I had not asked Jhon to give my fees back, it would have become much easier.

If my boy sleep quietly, he will see the busy bee, when it has made its honey fine, dancing in the bright sunshine. If my boy will slumber, angles without number will draw near, so fair and bright, for they only come at night.

I have a big family, there are seven people in my family, my mon, dad, two grandpas, two grandmas and me. My dad is soldier, he works in police station. My mom works in the bank, she is an accountant. They both are very busy in working, I can only play with them in the weekend. My grandpas and grandmas dont work for company, but they are volunteers and often take me to do the voluntary labor.

I am in Grade three in Yuanling elementary school, my mom always tells me I am a good girl and should study hard and get along well with all my classmates.

In the weekend or holiday, my family often go out for travelling or other things, I feel very happy with all the members and love them very much.

Our school, which was set up in 1945, lies in the south of Changchun City. It is famous in our city.

It has 24 classes. 8 classes in each grade. The number of the students and teachers adds up to over 2,000. In the front of the school stands a high classroom building, behind which is a lab buiding. We have many of our chemistry and biology classes in it. Between them is a new library built 3 years ago. There are a large number of books there. After lunch a number of students like reading there.

On the right there is a football field and two basketball courts. They are our favorite places in our spare time. It is said that a swimming pool will be built to the left.

Our school is big and beautiful, covered with green trees and colorful flowers. Many piople call it a garden school. Its really a good place for us to study in.

[优秀初三英语作文：Our School

题目解析

2014年的作文-----来之不易的成果，这个作文题目和去年的作文-----在路上，都体现的对过程的关注。相比而言，《在路上》这个题目，学生可以是一个观察者，把自己的所见所闻展现出来，写出自己对生活的思考，或者独到的感受。而《来之不易的成果》这个题目学生就不能单纯地只作一个围观者啦，不一定是自己的，但至少要参与其中，只要这样，他们才能通过语言向大家展示其的确“来之不易”。这两个题目要求学生从一个观察者变成一个体验者。

立意

题目分成两个部分：来之不易+成果。作文题目重点在于展示成果的来之不易。所以从这个来角度来立意的话，文章的重点就在于获得成功的过程。必须有过程展示其“来之不易”，可以是回顾式的，在现在已经取得成果的基础上回顾以前，但是必须是已经取得了一定成绩的，即成果。从这个角度出发，学生就觉得那那些可以算作我已经取得的成果呢?

另外如果提示中没有其他限制，只是给了这么一个作文题目的话，我们也可以从珍惜《来之不易的成果》这个角度进行立意，这样的话，学生可写的范围就广多啦。因为现有的成果可以是他人的，不一定是自己的，所以写如何去珍惜的话，这个立意所体现的内涵就深啦，传统的记叙文和议论文都可以成为学生的选择。

选材

选材必须体现文章的立意。上述两个立意中，前者展示过程，学生可以写自己曾经取得的某一项成就，回顾其为之拼搏的过程，这个点一定要有细节描写，切不可简单叙述就草草了事。而后一个立意我们的选材角度就广啦，可以写我们应该怎么做去珍惜成果，也可以写别人的一些不珍惜他们成果的行为而进行反思，也可以写身边某人正在做的事体现这个主题等等。

布局

文章的布局可以根据传统的形式进行布局，但是注意立意中的部分一定要在文章中进行细节描写，在描写之中体现“来之不易”“珍惜”。如果取前一个立意，不建议采用小标题，那样对文章的描写深度会有所欠缺;而后一个立意可采用并列式或者层进式的小标题。

后记

作文在语文考试中分值占比很大，他也是学生最头疼的模块。很多学生总是希望能够在考前准备几篇范文以备应考，然后上了考场之后不管遇到什么题目就往上套，这时候我们发现的确有些同学这么干，而且有些分数一直不低，但是真的请不要羡慕。作文是语文综合能力的考查，体现一个学生的整体素养，提前准备一些作文对于语言能力较强的孩子来说的确可以在考场上应对自如，但是这个有风险，同一个素材是可以从不同角度进行挖掘，从而表现不同的主题，所以可以运用在不同的立意作文中，但总是如此对自身的写作能力提高没有什么帮助。作文的题目每年都在变化，在长期的教学中，我们会发现语文素养较好的学生无论出什么作文题目，他们都能从容应对。所以在此和各位交流一个观点，不要总是想去套作文，而在平时加强自身的学习，切实利用机会提高自己的写作能力，而不能总是寄希望于“万能作文”。胸有成竹又有何惧?