我的新老师英语作文6句(20篇)

Miss Hou is my English teacher, she is 28, we all like her.

My English is really bad at first, I am afraid of having Miss Hou’s class, when she finds this, she doesn’t blame me, she tells me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English, she asks me to watch English movie, it works.

Miss Hou is my favorite teacher.

从我上托儿所、幼儿园起一直到现在，教过我的老师有许多许多。但在这些老师中，最让我喜欢、令我难忘的，还是一年级时教我们英语的吴老师。因为她教英语，所以我们也叫她Miss Wu。

吴老师长得高高的、瘦瘦的，很年轻，脸上总带着微笑。她有着一头乌黑的长发，每天都带着一副眼镜。她对我们很好，从不打骂我们，就算我们在课上和她闹着玩，大叫、大笑、做鬼脸，她也只是笑笑，不会说我们什么。所以，我们都敢在她面前明目张胆地捣乱。

记得我一年级那年，有一次英语课时，吴老师正上的好好的呢，我们班的小尤突然离开座位，手里拿着一张纸屑，走向垃圾桶——原来小尤是要去扔垃圾啊。这时，全班同学的目光齐刷刷地落在了小尤的身上。吴老师看见了，并不像有些老师那样大发雷霆，而是微笑着说：小尤，你这样会让大家的注意力分散的，你看，大家都在看你，眼球都在跟着你动呢！不信，我们来做一次试验，看大家的眼球是不是在跟你动，好吗？小尤点点头，接着，她拿出一盒水彩笔，高高地举着，从座位上走了出来。我见了，眼球不由自主地跟着小尤动。我还故意把头一点一点的，小尤走一步，我就点一下。吴老师见了，指着我对全班同学说：你们看，我说的没错吧！顿时，大家的目光都落在了我身上。大家见我那滑稽的样子，情不自禁地大笑起来，整个教室一片混乱吴老师呢，不拍桌子，也不铁青着脸，大吼一声：安静！而是和我们一起笑。笑够了，就说一声：大家安静下来，我们继续上课！原本吵闹的教室就立刻安静了许多。我们喜欢她，怎么能不听她的话呢？

这就是我的吴老师。因为她，我越来越热爱英语。吴老师不但对我们好，而且使我热爱英语，我怎么能忘记她，怎么能不喜欢她，怎么能不认为她是我心中的好老师呢？

[四年级作文我的英语老师

朱宣翰

我的英语老师长得可漂亮了！

她那张尖尖的瓜子脸上有着一头黄黑相间的长发，每当上课的时候，老师都扎着一个马尾辫，看起来可真是精神抖擞啊！老师脸上最美丽的，当然是她浓黑眉毛下的那一双水汪汪的大眼睛，时不时会发出智慧的光芒，真是让人羡慕啊！她的身材特别苗条，穿上大红裙，配上银光闪闪的高跟鞋，简直是位美丽而温柔的仙女！

不过温柔的仙女有时也会为一些调皮的同学而大发雷霆，当她发火时，大家都屏住呼吸，连那小小的针掉下来，都可以听见。

英语老师的兴趣爱好非常广泛，有时会做一些美丽的小手工，有时会组织一些好玩的游戏给我们一起玩，时而还会哼哼唱唱……

英语老师的课真有趣啊！她总会想出许多好玩的游戏让我们在玩中学，学中玩。让我印象最深的就是“介绍木偶”，同学们按照老师的要求做了小木偶，只见大家制作的木偶各种各样，让人看得眼花缭乱。大家争着抢着要展示自己的木偶，一个个小手举得老高老高，老师看到我坐得端端正正的，奖励我和同桌第一个上台表演，我们带着激动而又喜悦的心情介绍了我们的小木偶。细心的英语老师，还会一边鼓励我们讲得很精彩，一边用手机给我们记录着，回到家，再看着英语老师给我们录的小片段，真让人回味无穷，英语老师的课堂可真有魅力啊！

这就是我的仙女老师，你们喜欢她吗？

尊敬的英语老师：

您好!

我的名字叫：林沁楠，是您的新学生。我的性格活泼、开朗，一闲下来，就会去看看课外书。小学的成绩还不错。不过我有一个坏习惯--粗心，您还别说，“粗心”它可淘气了，常常在我考试的时候，跳到我的笔尖旁，害我每次考试都与满分擦肩而过、、、、、、但我相信，我一定会改掉这个坏毛病的。

初中的学习生涯对我来说是陌生的，新的学习环境对我来说也是陌生的，您，对我老说当然也是陌生的、、、、、、

我希望您是一位诙谐幽默的老师，能让我们在开心、快乐的课堂里学到知识，提高我们的学习兴趣。这样，我们就能上好没一节课，成绩也会跑得飞快。您不只要注重我们的学习成绩的提高，而是让我们德、智、体、美、劳全面发展、、、、、、

我一定会认真对待你布置的作业，我要认认真真的写好每一个字，认真对待每一篇作文，扎扎实实地完成各课学习任务，我能行，请相信我。

相信我能成为你的一位好帮手!

祝：

身体健康

My English teacher is Miss Yu .She has two big eyes ,a small mouth and long curly black hairs .She is very beautiful . She is good with kids ,she likes piaying English Games with us .So we like having English Class very much .She is love us very much .We are good friends .She comes our class every morning ,and teaches us to read English Words.So our English lesson is the best

we all love her

我的英语老师是余老师她有两只大眼睛一张小嘴吧和一头乌黑靓丽的长卷发.她很美.她对孩子们很好她喜欢和我们玩英语游戏.所以我们喜欢上英语课.她非常爱我们.我们是好朋友她每天早晨都来教我们读英语单词.所以我们的英语成绩是最好的.

我们都很爱她

老师是一本厚厚的书，里面有看不完的知识；老师是一把钥匙，为我们打开智慧的大门；老师是一艘船，带我们驶向成功之岸。我们班来了一位英语老师。他个子高高的，帅气的短发，乌黑的眉毛总会皱一下，大大的眼睛清澈得像两汪泉水，高挺的鼻梁，小麦色的皮肤构成了我们的英语老师。

他上课严肃，一丝不苟，回答同学问题时他耐心讲解。九月二日那天，当英语老师踏进门的那一刻，同学们个个坐好闭住了刚才还滔滔不绝的嘴。英语老师做了简单的自我介绍，就开始上课了。他一开口就把我给震住了，他说的真标准，一点也不逊色于外国人。由于老师教的太快了，我听得似懂非懂，其他同学也半懂半不懂。这一节课就这样稀里糊涂的上完了。我们的老师也很自恋。有一次他说：”你们用英文说我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。“我们就齐声说道：”My favorate teacher is my English teacher！“他笑开了花，说：”我知道你们最喜欢我！“怎样？我们的英语老师有意思吗？其实我们也真的很喜欢他！

It is Teachers Day today. On this special occasion I would like to extend my heartfelt congratulations to all teachers, "Happy Teachers Day!"

Of all teachers who have taught me since my early childhood, the most unforgettable one is my first English teacher in college, Ms. Zhang. It is she who has aroused my keen interest in the learning of English and helped me realize the importance of self-reliance. Born into a poor farmers family in a mountainous area and educated in relatively primitive surroundings, I found myself lagging far behind in the first class in college, which happened to be Ms. Zhangs English class. I was really discouraged and frustrated, so I decided to drop out. Ms. Zhang was so keenly insightful that she had noticed my embarrassment in class. After class, she called me into the Teachers Room and discussed the situation with me, earnestly and kindly, citing the example of Robinson Crusoe to motivate me to go ahead in spite of all kinds of difficulties. "Be a man and rely on yourself," she nudged me. The next time we met, she brought me a simplified version of Robinson Crusoe and recommended that I finish reading it in a week and write a book report. Under her consistent and patient guidance, not only has my English been greatly improved, but my confidence and courage enhanced considerably.

"Rely on yourself and be a man," Ms. Zhangs inspiring words have been echoing in my mind. I will work harder and try my utmost to lay a solid foundation for my future career. Only by so doing can I repay Ms. Zhangs kindness and live up to her expectations of me, that is, to become a useful person and contribute to society.

我的英语老师中等个子，不胖也不瘦，她长着一双明亮的大眼睛，好像会说话似的。当你做了不应该做的事时，她就会用责备的眼神盯你好一会，知道你低下头来承认错误为止；当你做了令她高兴的好 事时，她便用含笑的眼睛足足看你两分钟，好像是在欣赏一件什么宝贝似的。

她对我们的学习，要求很严厉：课文要背熟，句子要会写，单词要记牢。有一次，有位同学单词不过关，老师让他练会，可是他直到放学也没练。于是放学后老师就陪着他练，知道练会为止。就这样 不是我们班的每一个同学成绩落后。

一次，英语老师布置了一个非常非常多的作业：M1—M10的单词一词8个，放学前必交！而当时已是第六节课！同学们赶紧奋笔疾书，写啊——为了节省时间，同学们看了一眼单词后，默记下来，然后快 速地写八遍。终于，大家都交上了作业。这时大家发现：默写的单词都记下来了！原来这是老师让我们背住单词的方法！

可有时，他还会闹出一些小笑话。有一次，老师给我们讲练习册，本来是要讲第一单元和第二单元的，可是她刚讲完第一单元就把练习册给收了。同学们七嘴八舌地说：“老师，第二单元还没讲呢！ ”“对呀！”“对呀！”老师这才恍然大悟：“快！快把练习册传下去！”我们都笑个不停。

这就是我们的英语老师，有可亲又可敬。

人未到，声先闻，吵闹的教室立刻安静下来，许久才出现的老师视乎每次都是用那走路声给我们传递她要来的信号。她犀利的眼神不用说一句话就让我们心惊胆战。这就是我的英语老师，温柔的外表火辣的性格。

她，课堂严肃角色，每次英语课我们全班都是紧张的气氛，恨不得马上下课，也只有英语课问同桌还有多久下课的频率最多，和很多老师一样，也很喜欢提问题，可是每次我们都是能低头就低头，每次老师都会说看谁低的头最低就喊谁起来回答问题，这可让我们如何是好啊。但是，就是因为老师的这样严厉，我们班的英语成绩总是在全校排名第一。

你们不会以为我们的英语老师就只是严肃的角色吧，她还有好玩的一面呢，记得那是一年冬天，正在上课，外面下起大雪，整个班都很兴奋，老师说：“看你们这么兴奋，那下课我们去打雪仗吧，输了的一方要抄一百遍英语单词”，全班欢呼声。她，也视我们为好朋友，那年打的雪仗是我这辈子难以忘怀的一次经历。第一次与老师这样相处，很开心。

她，一个不比我们大多少的女生，在我们眼里她不只是严厉的，她更多的是在工作上废寝忘食，为我们付出了太多太多的心血，她看似严厉的目光给我们带来是负责的态度！我们也不负众望每次都给她争光，也许这就是给她最好的回报吧！

我的英语老师她是个打不死的小强，她有顽强的毅力和不畏艰辛的信念，对我们严厉，又视我们为朋友，我们很荣幸能遇到这样一个好老师！谢谢您！

Dear teacher,

Hello!

It is also a harvest season and a safe season. On this special holiday, On behalf of all the students in the Class of Business School x, I would like to extend my most sincere holiday wishes to the teachers!

Time travel, the passage of time, in the blink of an eye we from a naughty child to sensible youth. Two years ago, it was the teacher who brought us to the university gate. In the past two years, we have felt the care of the teachers relatives.

As a Chinese saying goes, "teachers are teachers, so they impart knowledge and solve doubts". In the classroom, I can still see the busy figure of teachers. They impart their lifes knowledge to us without reservation and patiently teach us. I remember that one of our international trade professional teachers often give us lessons in sickness, listening to her hoarse voice so far I can not imagine; We did not have water to drink in the training room. She brought us water to drink by boiling it herself and took care of us like a kind mother.

"A day as a teacher, a lifetime as a mother," in the life of the teacher meticulous care to take care of us. Just entered the university we are not used to the university life, teachers often come to our dormitory to visit us and chat with us. I remember one time when a student in our dormitory got sick at 2 o clock in the evening. After dialing the teacher, the teacher immediately came to accompany him to the hospital. He didnt come back to school until 7 o clock in the morning. When we thank, the teacher said such a situation often happen, you do not need to thank, this is what we should do.

"Happy to go home, safe return to school" every holiday home, business school will be under the leadership of Secretary Xu visited each dormitory, exhort ten thousand safety first.

Out of the school, review the reading career bit by bit, campus events in mind. The heart of gratitude, the presence of exhibitors: do not forget the hard work of teachers, teachers do not respect the teachings. According to the preliminary understanding of the X class of business school internship situation is optimistic. Ask 13 classes of students, most of the number has been in the unit internship. There are internship in foreign trade companies, logistics companies internship also some in the factory tracking orders, like a large number of students chain classes are in the supermarket internship...... Different students are distributed across different industries. They are conscientious in their posts and study hard to live up to their teachers expectations.

Remember that President Wang once said to us: even if you go out of the school but the teachers and students love continuous, always depend on; On campus, you are proud of your school. On campus, the school is proud of you. We will return the teacher with excellent results, live up to the teachers expectations of us.

"Spring silkworm to the death of silk, wax torch ashes tears before dry", looking back yesterday, looking forward to the Ming Dynasty, we thank the teacher for our dedication. Finally to all the teacher sincere tunnel 1: "hard work, teacher!" And I would like to express my highest respect to you! May teachers flourish and peaches and plums fragrance all over the world!

advance

Salute!

How time flies! It has been a few years since I left high school, but I

still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s

not only because you taught me knowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I

have really benefitted a lot from you. So I would like to express my great

thanks to you, and share my life in college with you.

Now I’m studying in Hunan First Normal College, which is Chairman Mao’s

former school. I major in English, because I find it so fun and interesting. As

far as I’m concerned, our English Department is the best department in our

college. The teachers in our department are knowledgeable, experienced, and

warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a

good atmosphere to study. When I have difficulties in study, I always ask my

teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Through their help, I have made

great progress in my English study.

College life is much different ...

______

暑假在阳光与水花中匆匆离去，伴着颠倒的作息时间和桂花的清香，开学的第一课即将到来。虽然暑假过去了，但是教室里很热闹，他们在讨论新的英语老师。

他们说，新的英语老师肯定会很凶；他们说，新的英语老师一定要温柔……无休无止的猜测与争论中，第一节英语课开始了。

上课的铃声过后，一个身影从门口进来，像是没听见教室里七嘴八舌的讨论。新的英语老师坐在椅子上，等着教室里的声音像潮水一样慢慢地静下来。她说，她姓施；她说，你们3班。她说，她上一节课在隔壁班说：“咱们4班……”

施老师站起来，她在身后的黑板上用力地写下漂亮的粉笔字——态度＞成绩。她拍了拍桌子示意我们安静下来，转身指着黑板告诉我们：“学习成绩固然重要，但是态度比学习成绩更重要！”

施老师给我们上的第一堂课里没有枯燥乏味的英语单词，她像站在演讲台上，长长的麻花辫随着她转头的动作跳动，大大的眼镜在阳光下反射出热情的光芒。全班都被这与众不同的出场方式惊呆了。

后来，施老师和我们成为了朋友。她希望我们可以给她提建议——各种各样的建议——例如她今天的搭配不是很好看，她可能会很生气但也会听取；她给我们看了很多她自驾游的照片——红艳艳的冰糖葫芦和另一个角度的布达拉宫。

时间在笔尖下悄悄溜过。最后一堂英语课的下课铃响起前，施老师坐在讲台后，她和我们说，她本来准备了一次不一样的听写——内容是全班同学的名字；她和我们说，她本来准备了一件雪白的T恤——那上面本应该写满全班同学的名字；她又和我们说：“细节决定成败，学习态度比学习成绩更重要……”；她还和我们说：“咱们六（3）班……”

时间从回忆中渐渐醒来。最后一堂英语课的下课铃响起前，我坐在座位上，我想起施老师上课时专注的神情和懊恼地跺脚时紧皱的眉头；我想起施老师布置作业时说，她做过我们所有除抄写外的所有作业，还有把作业本举高的手；我想起施老师课后被同学逗笑时的笑颜；也想起施老师改作业的工整字迹和火眼金睛。

“听说，你们班新的英语老师很凶很凶，而且冷冰冰的不好说话。”

“谁说的，她很温柔很认真，有脾气也有心意。”

December 27th, 2009

Dear Mr Pan:

It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.

Its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didnt mean you are old, youre young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. Youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.

Ive got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, Id like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

Happy new year.

With every good wish.

Yours sincerely Dali Wang

[给英语老师的一封信,英文作文

My dear teacher:

Hello!

Recent work smoothly?

Sitting at the computer desk think: should you write this letter to you, finally, I decided to write.

I thank you for your love to me for a year. When I have a setback, you comfort me; when I encounter difficulties, you help me; when I was successful, you encouraged me. You are usually the most trusted me, what things are at ease let me to do, thank you. Two days ago, I because the distribution value of the week of the task, and you make to resign. Here, I apologize, I hope you can forgive me.

Yesterday, I met with the school a grade four neighbors and good friends, he said: our teacher is particularly good, open Christmas party, buying candy, melon seeds, instant noodles for us to eat. But I said: it is not the best teachers, the best teacher is for the sake of the students, for the sake of the students of the school; and not meet the students needs as the material, we miss song. He listened, lowered his head, it should be ashamed to show it.

Today I want to tell you a word: Thank you, miss song! You are the best teacher in the world

Wish you good health! Work smoothly!

新学期开始了，学校里发生了很大的变化。我们的教学楼换了，我们的英语老师也换成了现在的何老师。何老师今年二十四岁，她有一双明亮的大眼睛，高高的鼻梁，一头乌黑的秀发，显得格外的美丽。

老师在课上，非常地认真，每一次都是先抓住重点，再详细的解释给大家听，解释完了之后，她会出一些同学们经常出错的题目教我们做，她还会让我们现场进行口语对话的环节，一个人问，另一个人回答。

有一次，老师叫我起来和她进行一次表示请求的对话，就是问一下可不可以做什么事情，另一方直接回答就可以了。很简单，只要听清楚老师说的是什么意思，根据意思来提问或回答就可以了。我就是这样做的，老师还说我做得非常好，这是我感觉到了学习英语也不是很困难，除了这些之外，她还教我们许多背单词的技巧和背诵课文的方法，我非常喜欢她，我很高兴有何老师这样好的人被我一起度过这一年，我相信在他的细心指导下，我的英语成绩一定会有更大的进步！

[以我的新英语老师为题的作文

她天生就一副孩子的模样，像一棵树的叶子总多于枝干那样，她带些婴儿肥，给人的印象总是胖嘟嘟，呆萌呆萌的。她的大鼻子立在一片空地上，骄傲得像即将登上王位的皇子，毫不客气地占领了她五分之一甚至更多的光洁之地。而这位皇子明显是威严不足，即便是他如何警告威胁，她那野心勃勃的“大臣”——嘴巴，总是费劲了心思要在这片肥沃的土地上多占一席之地。于是在他们的明争暗斗之下，那些战争留下的伤痕——皱纹，悄然爬上了原本年轻活力的脸庞。

尽管岁月如此残酷无情，她骨子里那种充满激情和积极向上的心态却毫不服输。她像冬天刚过的第一缕春风，到哪儿，哪就从一片荒凉变成春暖花开。马尾辫的甩劲犹如河边的细柳在舒展身姿；嘴角似有若无的笑意犹如燕子报春的亲切问候。主角的光环在她周身闪耀，阳光的柔和温暖包围了她，像儿时童话中改变了灰姑娘一切的天使一般，她的一颦一笑，一举一动都牵动着我们的心，将我们心中的千年冰山融化。于是光是她的存在，就让我们心中感到温暖，对未来充满了希望。

她那盈着璀璨星光的双眼，像海上卷起的旋涡，让人不能自拔地陷入其中，却又比旋涡要温柔许多。或许该将她的明眸比作一汪春水，因风荡起层层清波，一圈一圈扩散开，丝丝柔情蔓延开来，缠上心头，论谁都抵不住这样的柔情攻势，心甘情愿地沉浸在这奇妙的世界。

突然，这个美妙的世界在一刹那刮起了狂风，下起了暴雨，这样的暴风雨充满了警告意味，让人不寒而栗。利剑出鞘！看到这种眼神的人们只有这样的感想。他们当然来不及详想这眼光带给他们的感受，在这锋利目光的审视下，只让人觉得自己像犯了什么错。于是一边承受着像万年冰雪般的目光，一边努力地回想，近来是否有些事做得不妥，近期有没有“慢性自杀”？定是要将最近所干的事在脑子里过了个遍，确定没干什么不该干的，才略有底气，与那目光来个空中厮杀。然而才一秒钟，那点好不容易集齐的勇气便散得一干二净。怎么办呢？能怎么办？低头盯脚尖呗！再将那细碎小事在脑子里转个圈，确认再确认，确认再确认，却再也没有对视的勇气。

就在这时，凉彻心扉的感觉消失不见了，取而代之的是一种温暖的，慈母般的目光。她收敛了尖锐，用阳光将你围起，一道彩虹在天光下架着，绚丽的光芒充斥着整个世界。这一刻，眼前俨然又是那个柔情似水的春天。清脆的鸟鸣好似在安抚你方才的不安，微风轻拂后背，微动，是干燥的味道，幸福的味道。

这就是她，我们的英语老师，丹丹汤。她是一盏明灯，一叶方舟，一潭绿水。她无声地来，悄然带来了她身后的整个世界。而这样的她，也必然缺少一样东西，那就是属于她自己的轻松时光。

尊敬的英语老师：

你好!

我是您的一名学生，我在这里要替全班同学对你说一声：英语老师对不起!我不应该在你专心的给我们讲课的时候说小话，不应该做小动作。在我们语文老师批评我们的时候，你都有点心疼的样子。在批评两位班长的时候是您宽恕了两位班长，在批评我们的时候也是您宽恕了我们，给了我们一次改过的机会。谢谢您英语老师，我永远都会记在心中。

我觉得您讲的课真的是很有趣，我一定会认真听讲的，我一定要改正我们犯下的错误，我一定要上课坐端正、不做小动作、不说小话。每天都认真听您讲课，再也不敢不听讲了，谢谢您!

此致

敬礼!

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“叮铃铃，一位老师踏着铃声走进教室，清了清嗓子，喊道："Standup。”没错，他就是我可爱的英语老师。他有一颗宛如“光头强”一般的锃亮的脑袋，两个眼睛不大不小，却因太过疲劳，带上了一对“迷你车轮”，他身材偏瘦，也不是太高，但看上去却很精神。

英语老师上课搞笑，幽默，却又令我们受益匪浅。瞧，他又开始讲作业了。“对，下一题。”他话音未落，我便开始插嘴了：“does，does，does。”我兴奋地大叫三声，一脸兴奋地望着老师，而他却一言不发，快步走到我身边，眼睛瞪得铜铃大小，望着我：“再说一遍。”还好我经验丰富，看到他似笑非笑的眼神，立马改口：“哦，不对不对，是is，is。”“呼，吓死我了，幸亏我反应快，要不就挂了。”我心中暗想道。

“哈哈哈……”，但还没等我喘口气，周围便传来了一阵哄笑，瞬间一种不好的感觉遍布全身，后背也不自觉地出了一身冷汗。只见老师一只手朝我脸伸来，轻轻捏住我的右眼皮，愠怒道：“呵，你自己好好看看。”说完，便把手缩了回去，轻拍了一下我的脑袋：“看清楚再回答。”唉，又错了。

有了刚才的教训，我便乖乖地把嘴巴闭起来，一言不发。不一会老师便注意到我的情况，又开玩笑说：“这会学乖了，不插嘴了？被揪一下就不敢说了，真是胆小。”我听了，鼓起勇气，又积极回答起来。就这样，英语课就在一阵又一阵欢笑声不知不觉地度过了。

这，就是我的英语老师了，一位幽默风趣而又善于开导学生的老师。

Of all the subjects， I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher。 Though she has been teaching us for only three years， I respect and love her very much。

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short。

Ms Sun works very hard。 She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office。 She tries to make her classes lively and interesting。 And we enjoy her lessons very much。

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us。 And were getting on well with each other。 But she is very strict with us in our studies。

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese。 All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school。

在所有的科目中，我最喜欢语文，因为我有一个好的语文老师，虽然她教我们三年了，我很尊重她。

我的中文老师是三十六岁，她既不高也不短。

孙老师工作很努力，她总是第一个来，最后一个离开她的办公室，她试图使她的课生动有趣。我们非常喜欢她的课。

孙女士对我们很友好，对我们很友好，我们相处的很好，但是她对我们的学习要求很严格。

孙老师教我们，我们都喜欢学中文，所有的学生都认为她是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Dear Mr. Zhang

Hello!

We all say that the teacher is like a candle to light our way forward and

let us thrive. Regulations the flower of building the motherland!

I think you are more like a great gardener, nurturing the blooming flowers

of the motherland.

You are also a bridge for us to connect the long river of history and the

blueprint of the future.

Teacher, you have also developed a lot of our study habits.

Lets finish the second part of the lesson. With two courses, we not only

understand the text thoroughly, but also accumulate a lot of good words and

sentences.

Composition class, you guide us more seriously, often boring, plain class

into a rich content of a class, it is so, each of our students writing level

has made different progress.

Teacher, you did not pay a lot for me... Flowers return nature with its

rich fragrance. I want to thank you for my progress in study!

I wish you:

Good health and happy New Year!

pupil