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1000初中英语写作的基础
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+ 加入清单一、找到学生写作中存在的问题
1.汉语思维的影响。学生在写作中经常用汉语思维,忽略了英汉语序之间是有差别的,导致出现了大量的式英语,尽管洋洋洒洒一大篇,却没有得分点。
2.词或词组的用法及搭配出现错误。如enjoy,finish等单词后面只能接v-ing形式;“forget to do”和“forget doing”在意思上存在着显著的差异等。学生在做选择题或用所给词的适当形式填空时,大多数学生能做对,但在作文中,学生往往忽略了其用法,出现了不必要的错误。
3.时态、语态的构成及使用错误。例如,一般过去时的否定句中,助动词didn’t后的动词用原形,而完成时的句子中往往用动词的过去分词,在这方面,学生的拼写容易出现错误。
4.单词的拼写错误,标点使用不当,不注意大小写,遗漏冠词,介词的误用等。
5.结构松散。关联词的使用可使上下句和段落合理衔接,承上启下,使表达合乎逻辑,同时使文章结构严谨、紧凑,部分考生的作文虽然内容和语言还不错,但是由于过于执着于表格所给内容的顺序,没有进行灵活的处理,整篇文章看起来就象是句子翻译,并且句与句之间关系松懈,缺乏连接,以至于文章毫无流畅、优美之感。
二、如何培养学生英语写作能力
1.从单词入手。单词是英语学习的基础,单词过不了关,写作就无从谈起,因为单词是写作的基本单位。但是单词记忆又是学生学习英语的最薄弱环节,因此我们必须时刻告诫学生,单词的学习过程,实际上就是人与遗忘作斗争的过程,要长期坚持下去。 志和必胜的信心。
2.由“句式”到“段落”的训练阶段。从七年级开始就对学生进行书写小段落的训练,做到口笔同步。随着教学的不断深入,写作内容也不断丰富,八年级就要注意段落中的时态差异、句型变化以及过渡句的使用等。到了九年级就要注意文章的体裁、格式、写作方法、复句的正确性以及中外文化的差异性。
3.课前几分钟进行Free Talk。学生可以准备谜语、笑话、小故事、即兴演讲等。之后向听的学生进行提问,其他学生只有认真听才能回答出问题。Free Talk为学生提供了很好的实践机会。
4.在课堂上,我们要注重听说的训练,给学生提供大量的口语练习材料,从句子到对话,从对话到文章,以培养学生的语感。同时,加强写的训练,利用所学的句型大量翻译句子,使学生能够真正做到举一反三。此外,还要让学生在练习时注意区分英汉语序的不同。
5.要求学生多写多练。教师按照每个单元呈现的重点内容为学生规定文题或写作范围,指导学生写一些代表性的文章,并结合学生比较优秀的作文进行讲评,取其精华,去其糟粕,完成一篇优秀的范文。使学生在讲评的过程中领略这些文章的优缺点,教会学生如何自己修改作文,并将范文抄写在固定的作文本上,不断积累,并随知识的不断扩展对已写的文章根据需要不断进行修改或扩充,使其更加完美。
6.加强背诵。看了好文章,不单是理解就够了,还应该在理解的基础上多多背诵,才能达到融会贯通、据为已有的效果。英语宜多诵多背,把一些句型、短语,一些文章的片段或全篇,背得滚瓜烂熟,让这些材料在你的脑袋里扎根,当你要用的时候,它们便会而然地冒出来。背诵可以培养正确使用语言的习惯,增强语感,这样就可以避免生搬硬套地写一些式的。加强背诵能变难为易,变费力为省力,能有效地帮助学生提高写作能力。现在背诵和熟记一些语言材料,对中学生来说将会受用无穷。
7.通过缩写和改写课文,培养学生的概括能力。缩写课文会激励学生去认真钻研课文内容,有助于加深学生对课文的理解,提高学生归纳和进行简要表达的能力。缩写课文一般应该用自己的话来写,不能只停留在拼凑原文的词句上。这样既可以使学生熟练掌握英语表达方法,也是对知识进行再创造的一个过程。
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篇1:高考英语满分作文合集
全文共 8851 字
+ 加入清单Dear Alice.
I wonder if you eould lend me your Chinese-English dictionary. I will return it three days later. Now I am translating an important Chinese article into English. However, I often meet some Chinese words which I dont know how to say in English. So I have to turn to the Chinese-English dietionary for help from time to time. But mine is lost. I will take good care of your dictionary. I will definitely not damage it. Thank you very much!
Jenny
亲爱的艾丽丝:
我想知道你能否把你的汉英词典借给我,三天后还给你。现在我正在把一篇重要的中文文章翻译成英文。然而我经常遇到一些不知如何用英语表达的词,所以我必须时不时地求助于汉英词典,但是我的丢了。我会好好爱护你的词典,绝不损坏。非常感谢!
珍妮
5月15日
May 15th
Dear Alice,
Would you please lend me your Chinese-English dictionary? I will give it back three days later. Now I am translating an important Chinese article into English. In the article I often find Chinese words which I cannot translate into English, so I often need a Chinese-English dictionary But I
myself have no one. I will cherish your dictionary very much and promise not to damage it. Thanks a lot!
Jenny
亲爱的艾丽丝:
能把你的汉英词典借给我吗?三天后还给你。现在我正在翻译一篇重要的中文文章。在文章中,我经常发现一些我不会翻译成英语的词,所以我需要一本汉英词典。但是我没有。我会好好爱护你的词典,绝不损坏。非常感谢!
公共演讲的好处 Benefits of Public Speaking
Public speaking is bothinteresting and challenging. It is interesting because it asks you to come to abetter understanding of human nature and human communication. It is challengingbecause it asks you to take a risk, to put yourself in a situation where youcan succeed or fail in your effort to make a difference. As you go further,however, you will find more benefits of public speaking go beyond learning howto express yourself orally. The process of your speaking improves suchpractical skills as the following:
公众演讲既有趣也有挑战性。有趣是因为它要求你去更好地理解人的本质与人与人之间的沟通。它具有挑战性是因为它要求你承担风险,要把自己置身于经过你的努力既可能成功也可能失败的情况下。但是,如果你进行得更深入,你会发现公众演讲更有益于学习如何用口头表达自己。你的演讲过程提高了以下的一些技能如实践技能:
1. Organizational Skills
组织能力
The ability to organize ideas isa skill you will employ before you ever write a speech. As you practice, youwill also discover that the organizational skills are so essential in composingspeeches because it requires your skills of outlining, planning, organizing andpresenting your ideas logically.
组织能力是在写演讲稿之前就会使用的一种技能。在你练习的时候,你也会发现组织能力对于演讲是如此重要,因为它需要概述,规划,组织,有逻辑的表达自己的能力。
2. Writing Skills
写作能力
Many of the skills you use tocompose good speeches are the same as those you need to write well. Thepractice you gain preparing speeches will improve your ability to express yourideas on paper. You will learn how to get your audience’s attention, how toorganize your ideas clearly, and how to find more evidences to support your ideas.These skills will be beneficial to your writing.
许多用于撰写演讲的技巧和写好作文的技巧是一样的。在准备演讲前的练习会提高你在纸上的表达能力。你会学会如何获取听众的注意力,如何清楚地组织你的想法,如何找到更多的证据来支持你的观点。这些技巧将有助于你的写作。
3. Critical Thinking
批判思考能力
As we know, it’s important to guidestudents to think and to analyze. Public speaking skills and related listeningskills provide valuable tools for the critical analysis of ideas. By studyingthe use of supportive materials and persuasive strategies, you’ll learn how tofind an argument’s weak points and learn to ask questions, which needs greatcritical thinking.
我们都知道引导学生思考和分析是很重要的。公众演讲技巧及相关听的技巧对批判性分析想法提供了有价值的工具。通过学习支持资料和有说服力策略的使用,您将学习如何找到论据的薄弱点,学会问问题,这需要很强的批判性思维。
4. Research Skills
调查能力
Often, when students are asked toprepare a report, they go to the library or search the Internet to look for thereference books or articles they need. You will get into contact with a varietyof research materials and select something most valuable to you.
通常,当学生被要求准备一份报告的时候,他们会去去图书馆或上网找他们需要的参考书或文章。你将接触到各种研究材料并找到一些对你最宝贵的东西。
5. Listening Skills
聆听技巧
Speaking and listening go hand inhand. Whenever someone gives a speech, there is an audience to listen to it. Bylearning good speaking techniques, you’ll prepare speeches within audience’sunderstanding. You will also learn how to listen to other speakers in order tohear all the key points.
听说齐头并进。每当有人演讲时,都有观众在听。通过学习良好的演讲技巧,你会准备在听众理解范围之内的演讲。为了听得到所有的重点您还将学习如何倾听他人的演讲。
6. Strain Capacity
应变能力
Giving a speech to a group ofpeople involves a great deal of risk. However, it is true that by learning howto give a speech in front of a group, your self-confidence will grow, which helpsyou to confident enough to communicate with others and adapt to differentsituations. To a large extent, success in life depends on your ability to adaptto your environment and feel good about yourself.
给一群人做演讲涉及的风险很大。但是,这是真的,通过学习如何给在人群前演讲,你的自信心就会增强,这有助于你有足够的信心与他人沟通,适应不同的情况。在很大程度上,生活中的成功取决于你对环境的适应能力以及自我感觉良好程度上。
高考英语满分作文 :对人们大量捕杀动物的看法 A large number of people to kill animals
As is often read in the newspaper reports, wild life especially the rare species is threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit., which, of course, results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. So it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. First of all, it’s quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. People will surely take it for granted to have the duty to prevent any killing of wild animals. So a national publicity campaign should be launched, thus giving animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals. We don’t expect anything harmful to wild life to happen again.
正如经常在报纸上读到的报道,特别是野生动物,特别是珍稀物种正受到灭绝的威胁。人类正试图寻找野生动物的巨大利润,当然,这导致了动物数量的急剧减少。因此,我们是时候采取快速行动来保护他们了。首先,每一个公民都有必要认识到动物保护的重要性。只有认识到它的重要性,人们才能培养一种责任感。人们肯定会把它视为理所当然的,以防止任何杀害野生动物的义务。因此,一个国家的宣传活动应该被推出,从而给动物一个良好的生活环境。此外,政府应该通过一些法律禁止任何稀有动物的捕猎。我们不希望任何有害的野生生活发生再发生。
If everyone is involved in the protection of wild life, we’re sure man will be a good friend of animals rather than their enemy.
如果每个人都参与保护野生动物的生命,我们相信人类会成为动物的好朋友,而不是他们的敌人。
高考英语作文的范文:时间的价值The Value Of Time
I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that it’s only one day. There goes a proverb, “Time is money”. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.
Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it’s a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.
So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one’s life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!
我总觉得时间不够用,比如,我刚放完三天假期,但是当我回过头看,感觉就只有一天。有个谚语,时间就是金钱。我现在觉得,时间比金钱更珍贵,因为,钱花掉了,我们还可以挣得更多,但是,逝去的时间,就再也回不来。
时间流逝没有任何预告,学习和工作的时间往往都是有限的。所以我们应该充分利用好时间,但是,我通常不知道时间的重要性,直到为时已晚的时候才意识到。
所以,我们应该培养良好的习惯去争取时间,因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能完成的事拖延到明天。
奥运英语作文北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁呢?Who is the first gold medal in Beijing Olympic Games?
北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁?
The suspense over who will win the first Olympic medal and in which event is really a interesting thing. Chinese officials are determined to make sure China, as the host country, wins the first gold of the Games. The womens 10m air rifle - which includes two Chinese medal favorites - has its final scheduled at 10:30 am on Aug 9 and should end about 20 minutes later.
对谁将赢得第一枚奥运奖牌,并在这一事件的悬念是真的是有趣的事情。中国官员决心确保中国作为东道主,赢得奥运会的第一金。女子10米气步枪-其中包括两中国奖牌收藏有其最终定于9日上午10:30,应该结束约20分钟后。
If all goes as planned, either reigning gold medalist shooter Du Li or world champion Zhao Yinghui will raise 2008s first gold at the Beijing Shooting Range.
如果一切按计划进行,无论是卫冕金牌得主杜丽或射击世界冠军赵颖慧将在北京拍摄范围提高2008的第一金。
But if Du and Zhao are too far behind in points going into the final, the rumor says, organizers will delay the last ten shots of the final while the weightlifting final goes on as planned so China can secure the gold.
但如果杜和赵是太远的后面进入决赛,谣言说,组织者将推迟最后十次的最后一次,而最后的最后一次,因为这是有计划的,所以中国可以保证黄金。
I think the first gold medal must belong to we Chinese, let wait this moment together.
我想第一块金牌一定是我们中国人,让我们一起等吧。
爱心俱乐部 Love club
Dear Chairperson, I am a girl student from Class 3, Grade 2. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I’m 15 years old. I’m strong and healthy. I work hard at my lessons. My favourite subjects are geography and science. I like helping others. I’m generous. I’m willing to share things with my friends. I love sports. I’m interested in playing volleyball. Last year, I often gave my seat to someone in need on the bus. I often helped my classmates solve problems. I donated my pocket money to Project Hope. I want to join the club to help more people. And I also want to make more friends. Ill be pleased if Im accepted. Im looking forward to your answer. Yours Wang Fang
尊敬的主席,我是一名3年级2班的女生。我想成为一个帮助俱乐部的会员。我15岁。我强壮健康。我努力学习我的功课。我最喜欢的科目是地理和科学。我喜欢帮助别人。我很慷慨。我愿意和我的朋友分享东西。我喜欢运动。我对打排球感兴趣。去年,我经常给有需要的人坐在车上。我经常帮助我的同学解决问题。我把我的零花钱捐给了希望工程。我想加入俱乐部,帮助更多的人。我还想结交更多的朋友。如果我被接受,我会很高兴。我期待你的回答。王芳
篇2:高考英语写作句型素材汇总
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+ 加入清单一.开头句型
1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻,...
3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到,...
6.Its generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...
7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为...
8.Its hardly that... 这是很难的......
9.Its hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是…
二.衔接句型
1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...
2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...
3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
5.But its a pity that... 但遗憾的是…
6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......
7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外,我们坚持认为,...
8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而,困难在于…
9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样,我们要注意...
10.not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势
12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说
14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
三.结尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此,我们有理由相信…
3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......
4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此,在我看来,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论…
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是,....
7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好
四.举例句型
1.Lets take...to illustrate this.2.lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.3. Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of….6.This offers a typical instance of….7.We may quote a common example of….8.Just think of….
五.常用于引言段的句型
1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说,我不能同意他们的意见,理由如下。
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来,……一直被视为……,但今天的情况有很大的不同。
3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的,因为…
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….
5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展,越来越多…
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论,是否…
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…
9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言,我完全同意前者/后者。
10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前,我想有必要看看双方的论据。
六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法
1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….
七 演绎法常用的句型
1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……,但一般,他们可以归结为三个主要的。
2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...,但以下是最典型的。
3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题,但下面的可能是最有效的。
4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说,这些优势可以列举如下。
5. The reasons are as follows.
八 因果推理法常用句型
1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。
5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight. 8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。
篇3:高考英语作文万能模板
全文共 899 字
+ 加入清单On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get
people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others
into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and
should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public
life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go
around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting
easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the
Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting,
but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for
the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.
Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.
篇4:高考写作素材
全文共 1300 字
+ 加入清单现在关于幸福的话题谈的很多,什么是生活的幸福,答案也有很多不同。但是,最近发生在我小区里的一个家庭的故事,给了我们一个另外的答案。
前年春天,我新搬到城南的新建小区。小区依山而建,风景秀丽,是现代都市里很标准的住宅区。居住在小区中的住户,大多是这个城市里的文化艺术人士, 开着私家车出出进进,每一个人的脸上仿佛都写着幸福与快乐。
开始的时候,小区物业不完善,清洁工时有时无,公共卫生便很糟糕。大家给管理部门提建议,希望找一个固定的清洁工,清洁工的工资大家分摊。
不久,我们的小区真有一名农民摸样的清洁工了。他50多岁,头发有一半都白了,听口音不是本地人,我们都叫他老陈。他很尽职,按规定他扫到每个单元的楼 口就可以了,楼里面的住户自己负责。但他总是把楼道里面打扫得干干净净,他说,大家都忙,我多干一点没啥。而且,他不是一天打扫一遍就算完事了,而是每天 早上5点起床打扫第一遍,下午1点 打扫第二遍。如果刮风下雨,他还会多打扫几遍。总之只要地上脏了,他就打扫。他总是说,人家花钱雇咱,不是说规定一天扫几遍,而是要让小区干净整洁卫生, 小区不卫生,那就是咱的不是了。他的善良和勤快,赢得了人们的信赖,大家都很自然地把他当成是小区的一员,碰到他的时候,大家都会停下来和他聊几句。
随着了解的加深,有关他的情况就在小区里传开了。他来自鲁西南,有两个孩子在我们的城市上大学,他通过在我们这个小区管理部门工作的亲戚找了这份工作, 一个月1200元,干完分内的工作后,他就在小区里拣废品,那些垃圾桶里的纸箱子、酒瓶子、塑料袋、矿泉水瓶等都捡拾起来,一个月下来也可以挣个几百元, 这样,加上孩子做家教的收入,上学的费用就有着落了。每个月还可以给老家邮回去一些钱,家里的柴米油盐也就够花了。
他就住在小区外面垃 圾楼的底 层。因为垃圾楼都是两层的,上面的一层放垃圾,下面的一层就是个五六平方米的小房子。为了垃圾车运垃圾的方便,垃圾楼底层的顶部是倾斜的,所以在下面的小 房子里有一半地方直不起腰来。但他对这个房子已经非常满意了。他说,在这个城市里能找到这样不花钱又可以住的地方真是太好了,这样他又可以节省一笔开支 了。
在一个周六的晚上,我去倒垃圾 的时候听到小房子里传来欢快的谈笑声。我敲开了门,原来是他的两个儿子来了。他们是在给人家上完家教之后一起来的,老大还买来了一个大西瓜,爷三个正在一 起吃着西瓜说着开心的事儿呢。他们见我来,很礼貌地让我在床沿上坐。两个孩子一个是学计算机,一个是学日语的,他们正各自讲着自己学校的事情。两个孩子的 穿着都十分朴素,但却丝毫也遮盖不住他们的才华和聪慧。我看得出,他们目光锐利,自信乐观,满脸上都是幸福的样子。
老陈告诉我,这一夜别想睡个好觉了,只要两个儿子来了,他们爷三个就挤在一张小床上,开心的话一夜都说不完。
很多天过去了,他们一家三口的影子始终在我的眼前晃动。我想,这是多么幸福快乐的一家人啊。比起住在高楼里的人们,他们拥有的幸福一分都不少,他们的日子一样快乐啊。
后来,小区的物业完善了,老陈走了。但是,每次走到那个垃圾台,我都会多看几眼那个小房子,似乎总是能够听到那里传来的幸福的声音。
篇5:高一英语写作练习
全文共 1997 字
+ 加入清单【单元财富运用】
假定你是李华,上周末和家人开车去大角湾度假。请你根据以下要点,给你的美国朋友Tom介绍你的旅游经历。
1. 出发时间:周六早上7点;
2. 准备物品:零食、衣服、相机等;
3. 旅游活动:游泳,欣赏海水、海滩、日出和日落等美景,吃海鲜,买纪念品;
4. 你的感受。
【注意】:1. 词数100;
2. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加节,以使行文连贯。
Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________
步骤1:认真审题,提炼要点。
一定体裁:记叙文,记叙一次旅游活动
二定时态:旅游发生在过去,因此描述旅游前的准备和过程都应该采用一般过去
时;而感想则可以用一般现在时或现在完成时。
三定要点:结合写作内容,整理和罗列要点。
表达旅游活动的常用词汇:
步骤2:整合信息,连词成句。
1. 星期六早上7点开车出发。
_____________________________________________________________________
2. 准备好零食、衣服、相机等。
__________________________________________________________________
3. 在海滩游泳,欣赏海水日出和日落等美景。
__________________________________________________________________
4. 吃海鲜,买纪念品;
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5. 谈感受。
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步骤3:连句成段,用上适当的关联词。
not only…but also…, where, what’s more /besides / in addition, then, because…..
【我的作文】
Last weekend my family and I went to Dajiaowan Gulf for a holiday.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
篇6:虚假广告的负面影响高考英语作文
全文共 1845 字
+ 加入清单the negative effects of the fake ads
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, fakes appear widely on the market, they range from medicines, 3C products to cooking oil etc. More serious is that these products have entered the Realms of TV advertising, theyhave deeper into human’s lives.
如今,随着科技的发展,假货在市场上随处可见,假货已经延伸到药物,3c产品等,更严重的是这些假货还进入电视广告领域,完全进入人们生活。
Bad commercial advertisements will undoubtedly take large numbers of side-effect and harm to consumers.If audiences believe the false advertisement and buy the products, both their property and healthy wouldbe damaged. In addition, fake commodities are not only extremely harmful to consumers, as well as the whole society, it break the market order, reduce the credibility of the real business ,make these kinds of product stay away from people’s trust.
这些广告毫无疑问的给消费者带来很大的负面影响和危害。观众相信电视上的虚假广告,去购买这些产品,不仅会人们财产受到损害,更危害他们身体健康。另外虚假广告不仅给消费者带来伤害,还影响了整个社会。它打破市场秩序,令真货商家信誉受损,让老百姓对该商品信任度降低。
In my opinion, for the government, certain policies andmeasures should be taken on the spot, such as dispose the TV station of handingin money, judge the selling fake bad manufacturer criminal punishment, and prohibit the emergence of the harmful advertisement. For the audience, they should strengthen the discrimination ability of the false goods, and would not be cheated by the fake television advertising as the cheap price and convenience.
对政府而言,他们应该尽快出台政策和采取措施,对播放不良广告的电视台采取罚钱的处置,对贩卖假货的不良厂家处于刑事处罚,以禁止这些有害广告的出现。对观众来说,应加强对虚假广告的辨别能力,不能因为贪图便宜和方便,受电视的广告蒙蔽。
To sum up, we need to work together to make the false advertisement disappeared in our lives. For me, I will not buy the fake goods, and will report them at the first time. It is time forus to practice whatwe preaches about cracking down on fake goods.
总而言之,虚假广告的消失,是需要所有人的共同努力,对我自己来说,我不会购买假货,当发现假货假广告会第一时间举报,以自己身体力行,反对打击假货。
篇7:2024年高考作文写作指导:高考作文“5段”写作技巧
全文共 555 字
+ 加入清单作文考察的是学生综合语文运用能力,有些考生会比较害怕作文,今天就和那些作文比较差的、害怕写作文的同学们分享一个高考作文的小技巧,欢迎阅读。
第1段150字左右:写出中心论点,首选单句形式,且是判断句或肯定句。绝对不用复句(复句容易走题,影响得分),点出写作的由头,作文题中含有的提示性文字材料,一定要有所涉及。
第2段200字左右:段首讲述分论点一,如第一节的内容是几个分论点的简单组合,则“分论点一”适宜放在段尾。这样和分论点二、分论点三的位置区别开来,使行文有变化。“分论点一”论证不许举例,采用纯分析的说理论据展开。
第3段200字左右:段首讲述分论点二,采用举例论证,首选作文题提示中的例子来分析论证,同时也可辅助一个自己举的例子,自己举的例子要比前例文字少。如没有作文题提示中的例子,则自己举个典型的例子来分析论证,同样要求叙写例子的文字一定要比分析论证的文字少。否则对文体特征会产生重创,影响得分。
第4段200字左右:段首讲述分论点三。采用联系实际举例。这是写作本文的时代意义所在。联系的实际可以是学习、生活、社会任何一个方面,目的是或提高思想认识,或明确是非正邪,或提出解决的方法途径,或揭示某种疑难迷惑,总之要给人以启发。
第5段150字左右:要再现中心论点,扣住中心论点写出作用、意义、号召、展望等。
篇8:高考英语正反观点对比类作文分析
全文共 955 字
+ 加入清单(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1.有一些人认为...
2.另一些人认为...
3.我的看法...
The topic of ①-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-----理由二). Moreover, ④-------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥--(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦--(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨----(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①(观点一). For example, they think ②-(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-----(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-(反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥--(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
篇9:高考英语作文万能模板
全文共 1005 字
+ 加入清单In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.
People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for
competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police
Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have
a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the
website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.
He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future
Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this
week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family
will win an oversea s tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he
finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote This is a
question that troubles him very much.
篇10:2024年高考语文写作素材:苦守不如放手
全文共 1333 字
+ 加入清单导语:人生有些东西是无法再抓住的,你放了手,就得到了解脱,也从此远离了痛苦。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关高考素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
福建省福安市坦洋村妇女薛彤云从小就耳濡目染茶叶的制作工艺。多年前,薛彤云掌握了两个信息——大城市的人时兴喝花茶,特别是玫瑰花茶;福安市畲族的老百姓喝茶时喜欢把茶捆扎在一起喝。她想:玫瑰花茶虽然好看但茶味不够,而捆扎茶茶味足却不美观,如果自己能生产出一种既带茶又带花,既能观赏又能饮用的茶,那市场前景一定很好。
她找来针线和半开、全开的鲜玫瑰花,可因为鲜花花瓣的韧性不足,所以反反复复试了很多次都没成功。最终,她选用玫瑰花的干花,成功将花扎到了茶靶上。
玫瑰和茶的组合,在茶杯泡开之后,既有玫瑰花的香味,又有茶的形状,玫瑰花正居于茶的中间,通过水的放大之后看起来漂亮极了,所以极受消费者欢迎。第一次成功后,薛彤云便一发不可收拾。她让哥哥负责到全国各地收集可食用的花,自己则每天在实验室里研发新品。
如何让花朵居中,如何在一两分钟内迅速开花,很多细节,薛彤云只能一次次试验。经过长达一年多的摸索,薛彤云终于制作出十几种比较满意的产品,她把这种产品称为“工艺花茶”。随后,她带着工艺花茶到北京、上海的茶楼去推销,得到了一致好评,订单因此纷至沓来。
为了保护自己产品的独创性,薛彤云去申请了实用新型专利保护,防止别人盗用自己的技术。可万万没想到的是,就在薛彤云推出工艺花茶的第十个月,福安茶叶市场上突然出现了大量的工艺花茶。
竞争对手们的工艺花茶需要五六分钟才能泡开,并且色彩暗淡,但要命的是,它的价格出人意料地低,这直接导致薛彤云的产品销量急转直下。
辛辛苦苦的付出只换来短暂辉煌,大量仿冒品的出现切断了自己的财路,这让薛彤云如坐针毡。她拿着专利证书找到宁德市科技局要求打假,科技局却没有相关的执法证件。无奈之下,薛彤云只能耐心地等待。这期间,工艺花茶市场依旧很混乱,薛彤云也无心开发新品种,只坚守着几个老客户。
两年后,薛彤云终于如愿以偿,等来了执法证件。可此时,工艺花茶的涉及面已远远超出她的预想,无数小家小户都在仿冒她的工艺花茶。这样执起法来不是一天两天就能完成的,但她仍然不死心。直到有一天,她的态度彻底改变。
有一天,坦洋村的一个村民听说薛彤云带人来打假,就在街上一边哭一边骂:“我们不过是想赚一点钱给孩子念书、买衣服,你连这个机会都不给我们……”薛彤云听了心里非常难过。她开始反思:从商业游戏规则的角度来讲,我打假是对的,因为我有我的专利;可从百姓的角度出发,我就是一个自私自利的商人,容不得别人赚钱养家糊口。
这样思来想去许久,薛彤云决定放弃打假。不仅如此,她还做出一件让所有人都惊讶的事——把自己摸索多年的工艺花茶的制法公之于众!有了行业标准之后,大家都遵照标准来制作工艺花茶,不再粗制滥造。
把商业秘密公开之后,很多人都担心薛彤云的竞争对手越来越强大,从而影响她的生意。结果却出乎所有人的意料,薛彤云公司的销售额不仅没有减少,反而开始以每年80%的幅度增长。原来,薛彤云放弃打假后,有了更多的时间和精力去研发新产品。
篇11:对待失败成人高考英语作文
全文共 1060 字
+ 加入清单1、失败是常有的事
2、人们对失败有各种不同的态度。
3、我对失败的态度。
Is Failure a Bad Thing?
Failure is a common thing in our daily life. For example, sometimes we fail to pass the examinations. On other occasions, we are defeated in sport games. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work. So it is safe to say that every one of us must have encountered failure of one kind or another.
However, different people have different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart when they come across failures. They seem to think that it is the end of the world. Others, on the contrary, don’t take failure seriously. They seem to think that failure is first step to success.
In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but our attitude towards it. If we are afraid of failure and yield to it easily, we are bound to have one failure after another. But as long as we have confidence in ourselves and learn something from failure, we’ll certainly go from victory to victory. So I’m never afraid of failure, or I firmly believe that “failure is the mother of success.”
篇12:责任感高考满分英语作文
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单Yesterday, I broke a vase. This vase has been in myhome for several years.
昨天,我打碎了一个花瓶。那个花瓶在我们家很多年了。
I was afraid of being criticized. I didnt dare to tellmy parents. So I pretended nothing happened.
我怕被骂所以不敢告诉我父母。所以我就假装什么都没发生。
But they discovered at last. It was strange that myfather didnt blame me, but teach me a lesson.
但是最后他们还是发现了。很奇怪我爸爸不仅没有责怪我,反而给我上了一课。
He made me know that responsibility was necessary for everyone in the world.
他让我知道责任感对我这个世界上的每一个人都是必须的。
If a person was not responsible, he couldnt do anything successful and may not be popularamong the people around you.
如果一个人没有责任感,他很难取得成功,也可能会让你在你周围不怎么受欢迎。
A responsible person would have the courage to undertake everything. This was what a boyshould have.
一个有责任感的人会有勇气承担一切。这也是一个男孩所必须的。
If I have done something wrong, I should take the responsibility.
如果我做错了,我就该负起这个责任。
篇13:高考英语作文话题预测:兴趣与爱好
全文共 808 字
+ 加入清单很多学校根据学生的爱好和兴趣开展了许多有益的课外活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80字的短文。
内容包括:
1.列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动;
2.介绍你对哪些活动感兴趣,并说明原因,这些活动给你带来的益处;
3.为同学如何选择课外活动提出两个建议;
4.鼓励同学们积极参加学校课外活动。
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in schools. We also have many kinds of after-class activities in our school, such as English corner, playing basketball and swimming. I am interested in the English corner, because it can help me make some new friends there.
If you also want to take part in after-class activities, I have some suggestions. You had better choose the activities which are good for you; you had better choose what you like.
Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities. I’m sure you will learn a lot and you will find it very interesting at the same time. Your school life will be colorful.
篇14:高考英语满分作文:公园要不要收门票?
全文共 1416 字
+ 加入清单导语:很多公园都需要收票,你觉得要不要收?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
60%的同学认为
40%的同学认为
1.不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象
1.应收门票,但票价不要太高
2.支付园林工人工资
3.购新花木
注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数:100左右。
3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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亲爱的编辑,
我写信告诉你关于我们的讨论,关于是否应该收取停车费。我们60%的同学认为一个入场费不符合人们的期望,因为公园被认为是一个地方,市民可以有一个很好的时间,当他们不忙,无论是在家里还是在工作。如果一个入场费必须由游客来支付,那就必须建造一个门和周围的墙。在结束一个城市将采取一个坏的外观。我们40%的同学认为可以接受入学手续费,但不能太贵。门票销售的钱可以用来支付公园的园丁和买一些其他种类的花和树。
关于我自己,我认为一个入场费是有用的,因为它可以用来保护公园。亲爱的编辑,我们有同样的看法吗?
你真正的,
李华
篇15:高考满分议论文写作技巧
全文共 2241 字
+ 加入清单根据笔者近两年参加高考作文阅卷的体会,发现这样两个有意思的现象:一是绝大多数考生写的是议论文,二是绝大多数的议论文不像议论文。主要表现是:1、议论文结构不合体。如开头不提出论点,中间只写几个论据,而不分析,更没有分论点;甚至在列举论据时,还出现了大量的语言描写和心理描写。2、思路不合逻辑。如开头提出的议论文论点是“干什么事都要三思而行”,按逻辑思路,接下来的论证应主要围绕“为什么要三思而行”来展开,即三思而行的重要性,或者三思而行能够带来的好结果;但是有的学生却重点在写“三思而行是什么”或者“怎样三思而行”,让人感到别扭。3、议论文论点和议论文论据之间缺乏必要的粘连,即通常所说的有述无论,有据无析。为此,笔者认为高中议论文,必须走好以下三步,即结构合体,思路入格,粘连有术。
一、议论文的结构合体
议论文,分析事实,论证道理,当然要遵循一定的思维规律;这种思维规律反映在文章的外部形态上,就是具有一定体式的文章的结构。怎样写议论文才算“合体”呢?
一是根据议论问题的一般思维模式,应当是按“提出问题、分析问题、解决问题”( 或曰“引论”、“本论”、“结论”) 三大块构成。“提出问题 ”即在议论文开头一般要鲜明地提出中心论点,“分析问题”即在文章的中间要围绕中心论点展开分析论证,“解决问题”即在文章的结尾部分或者得出综合性结论, 或者提出前瞻性希望等。这一点,众所周知,兹不赘述。
二是分析问题即本论部分,要按一定的向度分层展开论述。所谓“向度”即论述展开的方向。这个“向度”有四个: 是什么,为什么,怎么样,何果。一般情况下, 一篇中学生议论文作文,其本论部分只要从这四个向度中选择一个或者两个展开即可。但无论是从哪个向度展开, 其分论点之间都要形成一定的联系。一般来说,有并列式、递进式和对照式三种。
所谓并列式,就是围绕中心从同一个向度列出几个分论点,逐一论证。如果仅仅围绕一个向度写,那么几个分论点之间的关系大多是并列关系 。
递进式同并列式结构相比,除了论点之间的意义联系不同以外,其段落的结构模式与并列式相同,就不再说了。
所谓对照式,就是从论题的正反两个方面入手,进行正反对比论证得出结论。其优点是结构简洁,论证充分,容易上手。最简单的对照式是在提出观点后,一段从正面论证观点,一段从反面论证观点,最后得出结论。还有一种对照式结构是在正面进行论述或者摆出论据后,紧接着用转折或者假设的方式从反面展开论述。
二、思路入格
议论文是论述问题的,当然要有一定的思路,即议论文各部分之间要有必然的内在联系。我们知道,议论文是论证问题的,你在提出议论文论点后,就要摆事实,讲道理,让你提出的论点令人信服地确立起来。因此,中心论点和各分论点之间就应当是因果联系,即中心论点是“果”,分论点是“因”。这个因果联系就是议论文的思路之“格”。
作为一个高中生的议论文作文,最起码要做到在中心论点和各分论点之间 ,论点和论据之间要有一定的因果联系。
学生提出中心论点后,只要围绕中心论点问一个“为什么”,就能找到提出分论点的方向。如中心论点是“只有坚守,才能使人的思想品德升华,才能成就一番事业”。稍加分析,就可发现这个观点是在说“坚守”的重要性,于是,分论点就要回答“为什么坚守很重要”这个问题。那么就可从“为什么”和“何果”这两个向度来立分论点。如“坚守是一种执着,使绝望变成希望”,“坚守是一种信念,使普通变得高尚”,“坚守是一种职责,使平凡变得伟大”。如果我们要检验这三个分论点和中心论点之间有没有必然的内在联系的话,只需在这三个分论点之前加上“因为”,在“坚守很重要”之前加上“所以”,再连起来念一下即可。
同样,分论点和议论文的论据之间,也应当是因果联系。如在“坚守是一种职责,使平凡变得伟大”这个分论点后面,就可这样展开论述:“边防战士的坚守,使国家安定祥和;人民教师的坚守,使桃李满天下;白衣天使的坚守,使病魔为之屈服。”又如在“自由是思想的漫飞”这个分论点下可以这样展开论述:“行动可以受制于客观现实,思想却永远享受绝对的自由。有了这份思想的自由,才有了集豪放与浪漫于一身的诗仙李白;才有了身陷囹圄还在感叹‘故国不堪回首月明中’的落魄后主李煜;才有了向往‘面朝大海,春暖花开’的天才诗人海子。总之,因为这份思想的自由,社会才会在其牵引之下不断地进步,才会创造出一个个永载史册的人类奇迹。”
三、粘连有术
一篇像样的议论文,除了议论文的结构合体、思路入格外,还有更重要的一个方面,就是对论点的恰当阐述和对论据的中肯分析;没有这样的阐述和分析,议论文论点论据就不能粘连起来,而这个粘连是有“术”的。
(一) 观点+过渡+事例+分析
这个步骤中最重要的是“过渡”和“分析”。所谓“过渡”就是要在观点和事例之间,用适当的词句来勾连,以接通文气,使观点和议论文材料在语言形式上畅通无阻。所谓“分析”,就是事例叙述完之后,还必须对事例进行适当的分析评论,指出其本质特点,使事例和论点在内容上联结在一起。
(二) 观点+过渡+论据+分析+归纳
这种议论文论证方式就是在第一种的基础上加了一个“归纳”。所谓归纳,就是从多个事例中提炼出必然性的东西。既然要从多个事例中提炼,那么,“论据”部分,就应是两个或三个以上。
(三) 一般道理+个别道理
即“演绎推理法”。前面的分析归纳是从个别到一般,而演绎推理法是从一般到个别,用普遍性的真理(论据)来证明特殊的论点的方法。
如果完成了以上三步走,大概就能写出像样的议论文了。
篇16:高考满分英语作文龟兔赛跑原文及翻译
全文共 763 字
+ 加入清单When I was very small, I like to read the books withpictures, because I did not know the words.
在我还很小的时候,我喜欢看那些有图片的书,因为我还不认识字。
One day, I saw the interesting pictures in the book, Isaw the turtle and the rabbit, but I did not knowwhat it said, so I asked my mom.
有一天,我在一本书上看到了有趣的图片,我看到了乌龟和兔子,但是我不知道上面讲的是什么,因此我问妈妈。
She told me that the turtle and the rabbit were racing, I said there was no doubt that therabbit would win, but my mom smiled and said the turtle won at last because the rabbit was soconfident and slept for a while and missed the time.
她告诉我乌龟和兔子正在比赛,我说肯定是兔子赢,但是妈妈笑笑,说乌龟最后赢了,因为兔子那么自信,睡了一会,错过了时间。
I was shocked, I learned that lagging behind doesn’t mean lose, if we insist, we will have thechance to win.
我很震惊,我学到了落后并不意味着输,如果我们坚持,就有机会取得胜利。
篇17:名企HR为你讲解简历的写作方法
全文共 1644 字
+ 加入清单应届毕业生们没有什么工作经验,对于自己想做从事什么、能从事什么,都还没有很明确的规划,在写求职意向时,职位写得少了,怕受到局限而失去一些应聘机会,写多了又太广泛,没有什么目的性,更加不行。求职意向就是简历的一个关键点所在,写好求职意向,让简历看起来更有针对性,也能在HR心里加分。
关于专业
如果你正准备考大学或者考研,那奉劝你选一个技术含量高的专业。什么是技术含量高呢,也就是说,你学了这个专业后,你会做的工作不是没学这个专业的人干得了的。如果你已经快毕业了,那就没办法了,自己默哀吧。我们单位招一个行政管理岗位的人,收到不计其数的简历,什么专业的都有,因为这个岗位似乎学什么的来干都能上手。看简历看到后来,我都不怎么看投这个岗位的简历了。但是,我们招技术岗位,收到的简历却不多,基本上每份简历我都下载保存了。
关于简历
一开始我每份简历都看,也看得比较仔细,后来我发现,这样看下去,我似乎永远都看不完。特别是应聘行政岗位的简历,我基本上只看看来信的标题,觉得感兴趣的再打开。我喜欢标题上写清楚应聘岗位和应聘者学校、专业以及一些重要基本信息的来信。不过,作为应聘者来说,如果你的学校专业很牛的话,建议一定在标题上写清楚;如果你来自非著名学校非竞争性专业的话,最好就别写了,否则很容易信还没打开就被了。当然了,你可以写一些你觉得优势的东西,如党员、n年工作经验、擅长**等诸如此类的简短语句。
在邮件里,一般应聘者都会写上一封自荐信。我看见有一些应聘者会在自荐信里列出自己的优势,这是一个比较聪明的做法。废话、套话就不必说了,没有招聘官愿意浪费时间去看那些东西。
有的应聘者喜欢把简历作为附件,有的喜欢直接在邮件正文里贴简历。而我作为招聘官,喜欢的是二者兼有,正文里贴着简历,便于我一目了然地了解应聘者,附件里贴简历,便于我立即下载。所以,建议应聘者不要怕麻烦,简历多贴两个地方没什么坏处。除非招聘单位有其他要求。
如果你长得够好看,可以把照片附上,如果不好看,最好不要贴了,免得给自己减分。简历里千万不要有废话,更不要有错别字。
有针对性地投简历,不要过分强调自己与所应聘岗位不相关的技能。比如,就想招个搞行政和人力资源的,你非得强调你英语过八级,翻译过多少多少东西,口语多牛等等,那可真是不幸,我这个岗位几乎用不到英语,你在这个岗位上真是太屈才了,为了不让你以后跳槽,还是现在先请你另行高就吧。也就是说,我们要招的不一定是最优秀的,而只要相对优秀并且合适的就可以了。
这些东西,我以前作为毕业生也很多不懂,费力在简历上添加很多东西,以为那样就可以表现自己的优秀。现在换了个对立的角度,才知道什么才是最抓眼球的,而什么是让招聘官一笑而过的。
拓展阅读:简历投递技巧
一、选好渠道
有人会问,到底是在网站上直接点击"申请该职位"还是另行将自己的简历发送至简历,而不会当做垃圾邮件删除,而且对你应聘的职位一目了然。
二、要用私人邮箱
首先,在给用人单位发送简历的时候,要用自己的私人邮箱,切勿用公司的信箱。
其次,选择稳定性、可靠性高的邮箱,尤其是免费邮箱的选择更要注意,如果不稳定,发送的简历对方没有收到,或者对方回邮的过程信件丢失,那太可惜了。
三、标题上注明应聘职位
关于邮件的标题问题,如果对方在招聘的时候已经声明了用哪种格式为主题,尽量照着做,因为这是它初步筛选的标准。
一个HR经理一天收到的简历可能有几百份甚至几千份。如果标题只写了"应聘"或是"求职"或是"简历"等等,这样可以想像一下您的简历的被关注程度。所以至少要写上应聘的职位这样才便于HR经理分门别类的去筛选。而且最好在标题中就写上自己的名字,这样便于HR经理再次审核您的简历。
四、申请的职位要准确
应聘职位的名称按公司在招聘中给出的写,不要自己随意发挥。
不要擅自发挥,就算其工作内容相似,但在职位名称方面一定要按照职位广告上所要求的来。比如招聘"渠道部总经理助理",不要写成"或总经理助理"是"渠道助理";招聘"副总裁秘书"不要写成"总裁秘书""文秘".
篇18:高考关于网络的英语话题作文
全文共 1314 字
+ 加入清单导语:随着互联网的发展,网站慢慢取代了报纸的作用,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
报纸
1.传统媒体,天天更新,信息可靠 2. 携带方便,随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片
网站
1.新兴媒体,信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网 3. 包含文字、图片、音频和视频
注意:
1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可以适当发挥; 2. 词数:100-120 3. 参考词汇:更新update;音频audio;视频video
Newspapers and Websites
Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information. But theyre different in some ways.
Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. So many people like reading them. But they can only contain texts and photos.
On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. Whats more, they are updated from time to time. So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.
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报纸和网站
报纸和网站是当今世界上的两大新兴媒体,它可以为我们提供大量的新闻和信息。但他们在某些方面不同。
报纸有着较长的历史,每天都会出现更可靠的新闻和信息。他们可以携带和阅读几乎任何地方你喜欢。这么多人喜欢读。但它们只能包含文本和照片。
另一方面,网站是新的和流行的,尤其是在年轻人。网站不仅有图片文字,还有音频和视频,这使得故事更有趣。更重要的是,他们不时更新。所以最新的新闻总是出现在网站上而不是报纸上。但是没有电脑连接的人从网站上获取信息并不太方便。
篇19:2024年高考语文作文写作方法总结4:一手好字
全文共 677 字
+ 加入清单见字如见人,一手好字能给人一种很直观的美感,就算文章写的不错,主题鲜明,文字优美,意境深远,但是很难让人有读下去的欲望。要记得,书写是文章的服饰,标点是文章的呼吸,丑陋是永远打不赢的“官司”。我们要尽最大的努力展示出自己的书写水平:一要端正,二要清楚。三要美观。标点也是文章准确表情达意的工具。不要只是“一点到底”。不要只会单纯地使用逗号、句号,一篇文章,应该能够准确、灵活、生动地使用六七种标点符号。书写美观了,“感情分”也就上去了!
1、书写工整,拿到卷面分,更拿到印象分;
2、标题鲜明,不仅要扣题,更要不“土气”;
3、开篇和结尾可以根据时间状况选择先打草稿,争取简练精彩,展示扣题和文采。(不仅改卷老师印象好,更能降低偏离主题的风险);
4、文章分段比例安排好。(小编有一句:每段不要超5行,开头结尾2行半,整篇文章5、6段);
5、材料鲜活,这需要平时高质量的积累和阅读;
6、锤炼语言,要有几句精炼的有内涵的语句升华主题,增加文章的思想深度。(这需要大量的积累,和一定思辨能力)
7、时间分配要合理,要有时间观念,要留出充裕作文时间进行充足的思考。(最好确保至少几分钟的审题时间),同时也要注意时间安排,把握节奏。
8、注意不要写错别字,按往年标准是1字1分(不重复),扣满5分!有时间的同学要进行检查。
9、一定要满足字数条件,不足者按往年标准,是每50字1分扣的!
实在想不出来时间又紧迫的,要智取:“无病呻吟”法、”翻来覆去“法等等(多发感慨、换个语句说法来阐述同个意思);
时间非常紧迫,无计可施也只能采取下策争取:”铺天盖地法“(多用字符,数行一段)。
篇20:2024高考英语作文预测:共享单车在中国
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一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“共享单车在中国”。请根据下列要点完成短文。
1. 共享单车在中国的现状;
2. 共享单车的好处;
3. 对使用者的建议。
注意:
1. 词数150左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:共享单车bicycle sharing
参考范文:
China is known as the kingdom of bicycles. Some cities have established their own bicycle sharing system to provide individuals with an alternative form of public transportation. Now bike sharing is a very popular means of transportation in China.
People around me are really proud of this green transport option. There are many advantages to using bicycle sharing. For one thing, using bicycle sharing can greatly contribute to reducing the air pollution and easing traffic jams. For another, bicycle sharing can provide people with chances to do exercises. Last but not least, it supplies great convenience for the local people as well as the tourists who want to explore the city.
Please cherish the bike when you ride the bike and it is not moral to do harm to the bike. After you get to your destination, don’t throw them away somewhere, although you have already paid for them. You should put them in a proper place.
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