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9752024初中英语作文写作技巧分析
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+ 加入清单书面表达是近几年初中英语中考的重要题型,是一种反映学生表达、传递信息和解决实际问题的重要的语言测试手段,同时也是用于测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识活用能力的一项综合性试题。《英语课程标准》对各个年级学生“写”的技能提出了明确目标,它要求学生具有较高的书面语言表达能力。然而,目前初中英语教学的书面表达相对滞后,学生的写作水平提高甚微,一提起写作学生们就犯愁,甚至一字不写,有的干脆放弃。写一篇像样的英语作文对80%的学生来说是“难于上青天”。究其原因是多方面的。学生方面:(1)汉语影响、生词造句;(2)词汇贫乏、搭配不当;(3)句型误用、语法不通;(4)信息不全、条理紊乱。因此,笔者结合新教材的内容,在教学中探索了学生写作训练的方法。
一、积累词汇
初中学生在阅读理解方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded,polite/impolite/rude.词形相似的词except/expect,chance/change/challenge.这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。
二、活用词句
当学生有了一定的词汇量的时候,教师在教学中可以采用先易后难的方法,让学生用简单的词组成句子,再以句子的构成作为学生进行写作训练的起点,引导学生从对单个句型的掌握,逐渐过渡到多种句型的混用,直到学生能连贯自如地表达思想。一句多译,句型转换,是书面表达能力的关键。总的来说,教师在平时的教学中要将日常生活中经常出现的词、句作为材料让学生训练,使学生乐于接受,轻松完成,享受成功感。
例如:以study为中心组成句子。
I study in No.3 Middle School.I study very hard.My sister studies in the same school.But she studies harder than me.等等。
三、创设情景
例如,学生举行运动会,开“生日聚会”,以“A sports meeting”和“My birthday party”为语境,让学生在活动中仔细观察,亲身体验,然后试着用自己所学的语言知识,表达“A sports meeting”和“My birthday party”这些话题。在我们新教材的每个单元中,都设有写作训练题,它们用英语设置语境,用英语提示内容,这些写的练习,与我们平时用汉语给语境、用英语完成段落的方式相比,更为理想。当然,教师在设立语境话题时要与学生的水平和能力相适应,应从简到难,从浅到深进行。否则,学生会无从下笔,久而久之,他们会失去信心。
四、注重听、说和阅读的培养
在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。
比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前演讲”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精 的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。
五、写英文日记
要养成记英语日记勤练笔的习惯。经常用英语记日记等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语写作行之有效的好办法。在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。对一些所给情景写的文章,写好后要对照一些范文,找出差距,然后再去练习,不仅能促使学生及时巩固所学的知识,还能锻炼他们的恒心和学习毅力,同时对提高英语作文也是很有帮助的。只有这样,学生才能通过多练习提高英语写作水平。
总之,学生英语写作水平的提高不是一朝一夕的事,英语写作能力培养的训练方法也是多方面的,因此需要我们英语教师在教学工作中不断探索、不断研究,总结出一些更富有创新活力的英语写作方法。鼓励学生平时要多积累语素材,要求他们坚持长期写作训练,做到善于思考、勤于训练、勇于探究,充分发挥学生的潜力。久而久之,学生的写作水平就会有大幅度的提高。
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone! My name is and my English name is . I m 15 years old. I m a student in a very beautiful school called Liangbing Middle School and I am in Class 1 Grade 7. My hometown Liangbing is also a beautiful town.
I m very happy and I like to make friends with others. I also like singing but traveling is my favorite, I have been to many interesting places in China but I haven t been to other countries. What a pity!
At school, I study Chinese,math, English, history, politics and so on. I like all of them. I often help my teacher take care of my class and I think I am a good helper. I live with my parents and we go home on time every day.
When I am at home, I often help my mother do some housework and my mother said I am a good helper, too. My mother is a barber.She cuts hair very well.She is kind.Many people like her. she often teaches me the way of learning well, if you want to learn English well, here is some of my advice. At first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. If you keep working hard, you will be successful. Then, you ought to speak English as much as possible. Remember an old saying, Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it. That s all, thank you.
篇2:初中关于读书的英语作文
全文共 581 字
+ 加入清单Smoe people say that money is the best thing in the world. but i consider reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
Reading books is very important. first of all, it is knowledge that makes society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. furthemore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life enjoyable.
One is never too old to learn. no matter what time you rcalize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. love books, for they are your best friends.
篇3:我的老师初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单My favourite teacher is Miss Meng.shes my new math teacher.Her class is very funny.Shes tall and thin.Shes pretty.Shes very very smart and active.Shes strict,but shes very kind.Her fevourite food are tomatoes.She often reads books on Saturdays and Sundays.
This is my fevourite teacher.I like her!
篇4:我的英语老师初中
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+ 加入清单一直都想写我的英语老师,只是因为觉得学习不好,颇感内疚,不好意思来写。用我妈妈的话来说,他就是一个小男孩,我应该叫哥哥的。
他说话的样子十分夸张。他跟我们说在另一所学校里做班主任时,他安排的座位非常合理,因此学生成绩提高很快。我当然理解他的自豪,但我也理解我的班主任为何不采用。因为丁老师谈建议时的神情就像一只狗伸着舌头,流着口水,教一只猫如何分配自己盘中的鱼。明明一张很英俊的脸,有棱有角,鼻梁挺直,眼睛凹下,嘴唇也很性感。你不知道呀!他生气时目光看向远方,深沉而坚定,加上魁梧的身材,就像一位年轻的法老,站在他的城墙上,指点江山。可是除了生气时像个男人外,其他时候就是个小男孩了,大笑起来嘴很夸张地向上翅起,就像卡通画,让所有的人都可以感受到他的快乐。若是说到什么好事,他就像大公鸡似的炫耀他的两根粗粗的眉毛向上飞扬,眼中不时闪着像星星一样的光点,还手舞足蹈的,唾沫横飞,经常唾到前排同学的脸上。被人夸奖的时候,又显得女里女气的,十分腼腆。每次开考前,他在教室门外,他的嘴角像一只红色的狐狸,在雪中伸着一只爪子,望着一只兔子。
英语老师姓丁,家在阳曲,可能地理位置有些偏辟,所以考出来不大容易。本来在另一所中学里教高中,后来考入我校,校长让他教初中。这让他十分失望,有时还在学生中露出了像李白一样怀才不遇的痛苦和颓唐。有时又高兴地告诉我们,我们是他教的第一拔学生!?
可能是刚刚带学生,他有年轻老师的激情,为我们自费复印英语资料,很喜欢在读英语课文时,一边作着奇里古怪的样子,一边发出奇里古怪的声音。有时上课,讲着讲着就讲起了自己的自传,于是常常在自我的唾沫星子中陶醉得难以自拔。上他的课让我感到十分的快乐和高兴,只是因为成绩不好而十分愧对他。不知为什么,我学也学不好,只能在每次考完试以后都躲着他。很亏心很愧疚地面对他对我的微笑,但他从来不说我不好,一次又一次地原谅我。
又一次,语文老师让我们以描写一位老师的神态特征为作业,到了下节课是英语。他进来十分讨好的让我们写他。回家后我写了两篇,有一篇是写他的,到了教室,临交作业时我又拿回了,结果我的另一篇得了第一,上课时他说已看过,可惜不是写他的。到后来越到中考我觉得愧对老师,现在考完了,我却一直想着他,想着欠他的一篇作文。
篇5:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Chinese is the necessary subject for students to learn. Even though some
students learn Chinese all the time, they know little about Chinese culture.
Today, the world is crazy about learning mandarin. A lot of foreigners are
interested in Chinese culture, and they learn the traditional thoughts from
Chinese great minds, such as Confucious. They also learn Tai Chi and they love
it. On the contrary, many Chinese students are not interested in our culture,
and they feel bored to learn. We should learn and get to know our culture well.
It is our duty, or someday we will be kicked out and lag behind others. In the
future, China will take the lead on economy.
篇6:初中英语位好朋友附中文
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+ 加入清单迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时,他就来到我身边。一天放学了,我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩,他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是优秀作文 ,患难朋友才是真正的朋友。
Mike is my good friend. Any time I need help, he will come to me. One day after school, I had to stay and clean the classroom with Group Three. But they were still playing outside without any sign to go back. So Mike came and helped me clean the floor. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
篇7:杰出的女性初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单Everybody has someone in his heart that he admires very much, who may be a scientist, a writer or a musical or a movie super star。 As for the one I admire the most is my dear mother。
My mother is an honorable policewoman。 She is very busy with her job all the time。 As mom often needs to work over-time, she goes to work very early in the morning, and doesn’t come home till late at night。 Mother deeply loves her work; she treats it gingerly and conscientiously, and she is full of respected at work by her colleagues and leadership。 For always being a responsible person for the work, my mother also therefore merited many awards。
In my memory, from my childhood, my mom rarely took days off, not even for the public holidays。 When my friends went out to play with her parents on weekends, I spent my time in mom’s office。 Whenever mom had a day-off, she would be busy with preparing a delicious meal for my dad and me。 There was one time, when we were just about to start our lunch, an emergency telephone call rang up, mom hang up the call, got dressed to get ready to go out, she was even too busy to think of the meal, then rushed to her work。 Till my bedtime on that night, mom was still not home yet。 My mother works extra almost everyday, she never seems to know when she should stop it。
I admire my mom’s work spirit! I love my dearest mother!
篇8:我的梦醒初中英语作文例文
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+ 加入清单My Dream
我的梦想
Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is"What is my dream?"Everyone has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.
昨天,我们有一个讨论。主题就是“我的梦想是什么?”每个人都有他的梦想。有些人想成为老师,其他人想成为科学家。我的梦想是成为一名医生。
My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy, I was very weak. Once I was terribly ill. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there at once. I was saved.
我的朋友问我为什么。我跟他们说了个故事。当我还是一个小男孩的时候,我的身体非常虚弱。有次,我生了一场很严重的病。我发着高烧。我的父母把我送到医院,但医生们不能为我做什么。那时,我的父母听闻在其他镇上,有位名医。他们马上把我带到那儿。(然后)我得救了。
A good doctor can save peoples lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.
一个好医生可以拯救一个人的生命。从此,我决定要成为一名医生。我知道做医生不容易。但是,我决定努力学习。我相信自己的梦想会实现。
篇9:Mydeargrandma初中英语日记
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+ 加入清单It was a hot day during my summer holidays in 2003. My mother and I got on the bus which would take us to the village where my grandma lived. It was so hot that I felt very thirsty. Then I began to think of the sweet big watermelons and other fruits in Grandma’s house. I could hardly wait to arrive there and see my grandma.
It took us one more hour to get there. When we walked into the house, Grandma was busy preparing lunch in the kitchen. It seemed that she was very glad to see us, which I knew from the big smile on her wrinkled face. She brought out a big watermelon and cut it. It was so nice to eat the watermelon on such a hot day.
After lunch my mother fell asleep and I asked my grandma to tell me a fairy tale. We sat on the bed and she began to tell it. I listened to her quietly. It was not long before I fell asleep, too. I was dreaming when a terrible voice woke me up. I saw Grandma was lying on the ground with blood streaming down from her mouth. I couldn’t believe my eyes. How fearful a sight it was! I hurried to wake my mother up. We took her to the hospital in a hurry. But it was too late to save her. My beloved grandma’s heart stopped beating when we got to the hospital. You’ll never imagine how sad we felt then. Grandpa was very well all the time. I had never imagined that she would leave us so soon. That evening I lay in bed alone. My eyes were full of tears. I prayed and prayed, wishing she would be ableto come back.
Now four years have passed. My dear grandma, where are you? I miss you so much.
篇10:初中简短寒假英语日记
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+ 加入清单Do you know what a snowman is? Let us a make!
First, we make a big ball of snow. Then we make another is smaller than the first snowball.
Now we make another very small snowball. We put it on top. Let us make a face on the snowman. Carrot is his nose. Some little
rockets for his mouth and eyes. Two sticks for his arms.This hat are on the top for his hat.
Ok!The snowman is wonderful.
你知道雪人是什么吗?我们来做一个吧!
首先,我们做一个大雪球。然后我们做一个比第一个小点的雪球。
现在我们做另一个小点的雪球。我们把它放在上边。让我们来制作雪人的脸吧。胡萝卜是他的鼻子。一些小的身故体验深谷他的嘴巴和眼睛。两个树枝是他的胳膊。这个帽子放在上边作为他的帽子。
篇11:初中生优秀英语作文我长大了
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+ 加入清单The new year is coming, it means that I am older, I am not the little girl any more, I must make something different from the old me. Before, I was so lazy to do the housework, when my mother asked me to do it, I would make some excuses and then ran away. Now I need to learn to take some responsibility, I should share the housework and relieve my mother’s burden. The new year gives me the new task, I must learn to broaden my vision and gain the knowledge, so that I can make some progress. I am so happy that I am older and grow up, I want to become mature and let my parents be proud of me.
新的一年到来了,这意味着我老了一点,我不再是个小女孩,我必须比以前的我有所作为。以前,我很懒于做家务,当妈妈叫我去做的时候,我会找一些借口,然后逃跑。如今我需要学着去担当责任,我应该分享家务,减轻妈妈的负担。新的一年给予我新的任务,我必须开阔眼界,增长知识,这样才能有所进步。我很高兴我变的年长了,也长大了,我想要变得成熟,让父母为我骄傲。
篇12:初中英语作文介绍朋友的Myfriend
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+ 加入清单I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven yearsold. He comes from Beijing.Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made great progress in our studies.We have made up our minds to study harder and win success in our studies.
篇13:手机的利与弊英语作文
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+ 加入清单Nowadays,with the rapid development of IT and information industry, cell phones play a dominant role in towns peoples life. But, like everything else, they have both favorable and mffavorahle aspects.First, its useful. As a wireless mobile telephone, its easy and handy to early to wherever one goes and call the callee however far away he is. Therefore, it greatly facilitates peoples life. Second, its convenient. Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can nmke a call immediately. Most important of all, its a very helpful companion. With a multirfunction cell phone in hand, one can easily get on the Net, browsing the useful information, conducting e-commerce and doing whatever one can do via Internet.
However, just as everything has two sides, the cell phone also has many disadvantages. To begin with, its expensive to buy and costly to pay the hills, esp. that of global service. To make matters worse, its also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired. Worst of all,its not as clear as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is often not available. Last but not least, its alleged the microwaves in it might do harm to peoples health. In my opinion,with its expenses greatly reduced after Chinas entry into the WTO, it will face an ever brighter future in its development. Someday most of them will be developed into new Intemet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers. And I believe its advantages will not only offset its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.
篇14:初中电脑英语
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+ 加入清单It is believed that the computer is bringing the world into a brand new
era. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, marveling at its
calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracle. Nowadays, the function
of the computer is no longer confined to calculation; it permeates people’s
daily lives and has become an inseparable part of human society.
People become so heavily dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine
the life without computers. Therefore, some people are worried that “The real
danger is not that the computer will think like man, but man will think like the
computer.”
Their concern does make sense. Indeed, some people spend such a long time
working on computers that they have few interactions with people in real life.
According to a research, too many hours in front of a computer may lead to a
poker face and interpersonal isolation. This fact should arouse our attention,
because unlike computers, human beings are social creatures that need emotional
connections with others.
Yet, it is also unnecessary for us to be overwhelmed by the negative
impacts of computers. After all, we humans are intelligent and will be able to
figure out better ways to make improvements.
篇15:初中英语作文狗是人类的朋友
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+ 加入清单Nowadays there are so many animals out there make people in real life happier. Dog is the best example to identify. As many people believe dog is mans best freind, this is very true.It not just entertain us, however, sometimes dogs could actually help their owner do some work!
When we are bored, we might take our dogs for a walk, we could play with them. Mainly dogs listen to their owner all the time, they are most obedient pet out of all kinds of animals.Peeple like dogs simply because, they are cute, they make fun of us and most significantly, dogs make people happier. Therefore, saying dogs are peoples friend have nothing wrong, they actually obtain the most closest relationship with the human beings out of all animals.
篇16:元宵节初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The 15-Day Celebration of Chinese New YearThe first day of the Lunar New Year is "the welcoming of the gods of the heavens and earth."Many people abstain from meat on the first day of the new year because it is believed that this will ensure long and happy lives for them.
On the second day, the Chinese pray to their ancestors as well as to all the gods. They are extra kind to dogs and feed them well as it is believed that the second day is the birthday of all dogs.The third and fourth days are for the sons-in-laws to pay respect to their parents-in-law.The fifth day is called Po Woo. On that day people stay home to welcome the God of Wealth. No one visits families and friends on the fifth day because it will bring both parties bad luck.On the sixth to the 10th day, the Chinese visit their relatives and friends freely. They also visit the temples to pray for good fortune and health.The seventh day of the New Year is the day for farmers to display their produce. These farmers make a drink from seven types of vegetables to celebrate the occasion.
The seventh day is also considered the birthday of human beings. Noodles are eaten to promote longevity and raw fish for success.On the eighth day the Fujian people have another family reunion dinner, and at midnight they pray to Tian Gong, the God of Heaven.The ninth day is to make offerings to the Jade Emperor.The 10th through the 12th are days that friends and relatives should be invited for dinner.
After so much rich food, on the 13th day you should have simple rice congee and mustard greens (choi sum) to cleanse the system.The 14th day should be for preparations to celebrate the Lantern Festival which is to be held on the 15th night.
篇17:我的邻居初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单I live in a good Neighborhood. There are many fruit stores here and my parents often shop there.
The people here are friendly and kindly. When someone has some problem,his neighbor must help him .
There is a restaurant in my neighborhood. I usually eat there with my friends. It’s relaxing and the things in the restaurant are not expensive and they taste good. There is a shop next it. It is small but there is a lots of things in it. My brother often buy food and water there. The shopkeeper is a friendly person. I still remember our neighborhood was cut off the water supply. He help us and share his water to us.
Although my neighborhood is small but there are lots of human’s kindness here. I like my neighborhood.
篇18:介绍故宫的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City, whichstarted to be built in 1407. It took 200,000 people fourteenyears to build it.
It was finished in 1420. There are 9,999 rooms in all the palaces. In China, nine is regarded as a lucky number traditionally. At present, it is free for Chinesestudents to visit every Tuesday.
The Palace Museum has treasures of over 5,000 years history.
篇19:初中英语作文:分数并不等于知识
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+ 加入清单“Score is not equal to knowledge,” my head teacher always keeps telling me this, because he wants us to master all the knowledge we need to understand. I do not put his word in mind, because in my heart, score comes the first.
One day, chemistry teacher taught us some knowledge and then asked us to finish a paper test.
Whoever passed the text can do the experiment. I got a high mark by guessing.
I was very happy, but tragedy happened. I made a small explosion by not mastering the knowledge. I was scared and finally understood the sentence,” Score is not Equal to Knowledge.”
“分数并不等于知识,”班主任对我说,因为他希望我们能够掌握所有需要了解的知识。我并没有把他的话放心上,因为我觉得分数是最重要的。有一天,老师教了我们一些知识,然后就让我们考试。只要通过了考试才能去做实验。我瞎猜猜得了很高分。我很高兴,但是悲剧也就发生了。因为知识不牢固而导致了一个小爆炸。我被吓到了,也终于明白了那句话,“分数并不等于知识。”
篇20:关于手机的英语
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+ 加入清单With the development of science and technology, there are more and more new
products appearing in human beings’ life. Cell phone is a good example.
Nowadays, cell phone has been widely used in people’s daily life. It seems that
people can’t live without it. In my opinion, cell phone really brings so many
advantages to mankind.
First of all, cell phone is very convenient. People can connect with anyone
in anywhere if that person has a mobile phone, too. In other words, people have
to write letter in paper and then wait for a long time to make the letter
arrived the destination in the old days, but now people can write message on
cell phone and then send it to the person they want in a second or just dial
that person’s mobile phone number and then they can talk with each other in a
few second. Secondly, mobile phone can act as a safe guarantee. When people face
dangerous, they can use cell phone to dial 110 to report to the police or ask
for help from friends nearby. And when people worry about another man, they can
call him to make sure whether he is OK or not. Last but not least, mobile phone
contains much interesting entertainment, which can bring lots of happiness to
human beings and make their life more colorful.
In general, cell phone is the product of high-tech, which brings lots of
benefits to our human beings.