最喜欢的歌手英语作文初二（汇总20篇）

A good book is like a cup of green tea, long fragrance gladdening the heart and refreshing the mind. In my bookcase, "Andersen fairy tale" although the appearance of rotten old, but it is my favorite book. A little story I love most in the "Andersen fairy tale" in the "beauty" is mainly about: in the woods there lived a beautiful sister, sister looks as though, but my sister has a perfect soul, and her sister was finally egoistic, Xinfu life.

Tell us from this story: we should not only be a person who looks beautiful, but also a person with spiritual beauty. Only the person with beautiful mind is the true beauty. Its the same thing in life. Once, I went shopping with my mum, just on the bus, he saw a look very beautiful aunt sitting on the side of her right hand, and stood a more than 80 year old grandmother, she didnt give grandma a seat, from time to time looking out of the window, but also filled with as it is people feel shame. In life, there are many things like this...... We should not only pay attention to the appearance of the beautiful, but also pay attention to the heart, to be a kind-hearted and helpful people, so as to make our home construction more beautiful and beautiful.

好书如同一杯清茶，沁人心脾，留香久远。在我的书柜里，《安徒生童话》虽然外表烂旧，但却是我最喜欢的一本书。在《安徒生童话》中我最喜欢的一个小故事是《美》主要讲了：在树林里住着一对美丽漂亮的姐妹，姐妹的外表虽然一样，但妹妹有一个完美的灵魂，而姐姐自私自利，最后妹妹过上了辛福的生活。

从这个故事告诉我们：我们不光要做一位外表美的人，还要做一位心灵美的人，只有心灵美的人才是正真的美。在生活中也是一样的。有一次，我和妈妈去逛街，刚上公交车，便看见一位外表十分漂亮的阿姨坐在一旁，她的右边而站着一位八十多岁的老奶奶，她竟然不给老奶奶让座，不时望着窗外，还装着如其事的样子，正让人觉得可耻。在生活中这样的事还有很多很多……我们做人不要光注重外表美丽，更要注重内心，做一位心地善良、乐于助人的人，这样才能使我们的家园建设的更加美丽、美好。

My favourate animal is tiger,because tiger is very strong and powerful,it is the king of the forest.Tiger looks handsome as well, the skin has two corlors:yellow and black,and they are both my favourate colors.

I like tiger,and the year 201X is just the Chinese tiger year.I hope all the people will keep healthy,just like tiger.

It is true that summer is hot, very hot.

But the wicked summer sun is nothing to me, for I dont usually go out. What I like to do best during the long summer vacation is to stay in my own little room and read. I love to read, but during the school year I could hardly find a free moment for reading. Endless assignments press down upon me like a mountain.

I feel confined and imprisoned. Once the summer vacation comes, however, I have all the time in the world to read and read and read. I read everything I want to read. I read to my hearts content.

My room maybe small, and the sun maybe hot, but Im free, Im happy, Im really living! Oh, how I love summer!

的确,夏天很热,很热。

恶人夏天太阳对我没有,因为我通常不出去。我最喜欢做在漫长的暑假是呆在自己的小房间里,阅读。我喜欢阅读,但是在上学时,我几乎不能找到一个免费阅读的时刻。无尽的作业压在我身上像一座山。

我觉得在和监禁。一旦暑假来临,然而,我有世界上所有的时间阅读和阅读和阅读。我读我想读的一切。我读我的心的内容。

也许我的房间小,太阳也许热,但我自由,我快乐,我真的生活!哦,我爱夏天!

Childhood in my grandmothers house, saw the hen sat in the nest to scare

her, shedid not run, I felt very unusual.

Go and ask the Father knows, the hen is sitting, I am very surprised. At

the same time, there is a strange idea -- the hen can hatch the chicken, I also

have hatched chicks! So, I also got some egg on the quilt, and then he climbed

into bed lying in bed, put the egg on your ass..

I thought: I can also be hatched chicks, I am great superman!

But after several hours did not see a little action, I urgent cry.

初二英语作文：An Invitation

Dear Zhang Ming,

As my birthday will take place on next Saturday, my parents have insisted on having a birthday party for me. They are very anxious to meet all my young friends, and they want me to have a good time on this occasion.

The party will begin at 7 oclock this Saturday evening.Please come early. You can take a No. 15 bus and get off at Xinjiang Road. Go straight ahead and walk across Wulian Street. The restaurant is on the corner of the street. Its name is Da Fang Restaurant. We are looking forward to seeing you then.

With best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

XXX

[初二优秀英语作文：An Invitation

Avril joined the ice hockey team when she was 10 and she started to learn guitar at the age of 12. Then she completed the first solo performance when she was only 14 years old. Little by little, her talent was discovered by more and more people. And she has sung many songs. LikeComplicated, Goodbye, Skater BoyandWish You were Here. She also sangAlicefor the movieAlice in Wonderland. She is the Best- Selling Canadian Artist in the world.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the two most important holidays in the Chinese calendar (the other being the Chinese Lunar New Year), and is a legal holiday in several countries. Farmers celebrate the end of the summer harvesting season on this date.Traditionally, on this day, Chinese family members and friends will gather to admire the bright mid-autumn harvest moon, and eat moon cakes and pomeloes together. It is also common to have barbecues outside under the moon, and to put pomelo rinds on ones head. Brightly lit lanterns are often carried around by children.

Together with the celebration, there appear some special customs in different parts of the country, such as burning incense, planting Mid-Autumn trees, lighting lanterns on towers, and fire dragon dances. Shops selling mooncakes, before the festival, often display pictures of Change, floating to the moon.

Mooncake is often eaten during the festival.Typical mooncakes are round or rectangular pastries, measuring about 10 cm in diameter and 4-5 cm thick. A thick pasty filling is surrounded by a relatively thin (2-3 mm) crust and may contain yolks from salted duck eggs. Mooncakes are rich, heavy, and dense compared with most Western cakes and pastries. They are usually eaten in small wedges accompanied by Chinese tea.

My favorite cartoon film is "Kung Fu Panda".Because its very funny and interesting.The story was great and the background was beautiful, it really felt like an ancient Chinese city.So many people like it.In this cartoon movie the character who I most like is the panda Arab League valuable.Because it not only unusual lovable and annoys the human to like, moreover is this cartoon movies lead .But I did not deny that other roles also very much annoy the affection, for example tigress (Angelina Jolie), viper (Lucy Liu), praying mantis (Seth Rogen), hoist crane (David cross) and monkey (Jackie Chan).I from this cartoon movie middle school: Each people have the merit and the shortcoming, perhaps you only know your shortcoming, so long as but you look diligently, also will discover that oneself will have the merit.

我最喜欢的动画电影是“功夫熊猫“。因为它非常有趣，故事是伟大的，背景是美丽的，它真的觉得像一个古老的中国城市。因此，许多人喜欢它。这部动画片电影人物我最喜欢的是熊猫阿波 因为它不仅不寻常的可爱和苦恼的人喜欢，而且是这个卡通片的主演。但我不否认其他角色也很棒，例如母老虎(安吉莉娜朱莉)，蝰蛇(刘玉玲)，亲情，螳螂(塞斯罗根)，起重机(大卫)，猴(成龙)我从这个卡通片中学：每个人都有优点和缺点，也许你只知道你的缺点，但只要你认真看，会发现自己也有优点。

Our great motherland is one of the largest countries in the world. It has a population of over eleven hundred million. Peking is its capital.

We Chinese people are brave and hardworking. We have a glorious revolutionary tradition. We drove out Japanese invaders and overthrew Kuomingtang government. In 1949 the Peoples Republic of China was founded. Since then great changes have taken place in our motherland. Now our country is getting stronger and stronger. We Chinese people are working hard to make our motherland into a powerful socialist country.

Christmas is a time for miracles.It is also a time when the dull things of daily life and the forecast of human hature gives way to a spiritual awakening.Allow me to share with you one truly wonder of Christmas.

Our miracle story comes from an incident that occurred in Flanders, Belgium, at the dawn of World War I. On December 24th ,1914, German and English troops faced each other from the relative safety of their ditches across which no man’s land lying between them. Suddenly, the silence was broken, not by gunfire, but by the strains of Silent Night arising from the German position. It wasn’t long before the English troops responded with a Yuletide hymn of their own. Then an amazing sight surprised the eyes of the English soldiers. A German soldier holding a small tree arranged with lighted candles began to walk across the land toward the English lines. This miraculous scene occasioned the declaration of a truce followed by English and German troops greeting one another, exchanging small gifts and singing songs of Christmas. Word of this incredible phenomenon reached the High Command of both sides.

On Christmas Day, both armies moved from their positions to engage in the killing of war at other battlefields. However, on Christmas Eve 1914 on a field in Flanders, there was Peace on Earth.

Christmas is a truly amazing phenomenon. The day and season perpetuate a miraculous, historical event as an annual presence that challenges an often rough, cruel, and egotistical creature — the human being — to become open and amenable to their Creator’s vision. The great miracle of Christmas continues in the performance of humane acts, moral honesty, and in the spiritual awareness of millions struggling to lead a life of grace.

圣诞节对全球的影响：

在2012年，在全球经济不景气的情况下，全球的圣诞经济并不乐观。虽然较平常确有不小幅度的升温，但远远低于历史水平。尤其是类似希腊这样陷入债务危机的国家，经济本身并没有复苏，购物的人们只能转转无奈离去。英国、加拿大、新加坡、美国等国由于经济好转，在商家的大力促销下圣诞经济快速回升。

有人喜欢生机勃勃的春天，有人喜欢骄阳似火的夏天，有人喜欢瓜果飘香的秋天，而我却喜欢洁白无瑕的冬天。

Some people like the spring full of vigour, some people like the scorching summer, some people like melons and fruits of the autumn, and I was like pure white in winter.

早晨，天气骤然变冷，阴云一块一块地在天空中移动，到了中午，大片大片的雪花便从天空飘落先来。

Morning, the weather suddenly turned cold, dark clouds in a piece of land in the sky, at noon, a vast expanse of snow will fall from the sky come first.

雪纷纷扬扬地下着，它像玉一样润，像雾一样轻，被风刮地在天空直打转。它们无拘无束地游荡着，大地慢慢地换上了洁白的银装。

There were numerous snow underground, it was like jade, like fog, like light, the wind in the sky. They are free to roam the earth, slowly put on the white snow.

过了一段时间，雪停了，整个大地好像被轻纱裹住，又好像被一层银雾罩住。太阳出来了，马上安阳成了水晶般的城市。走在街上像走在童话中的仙宫一样神奇异常。路旁的树上挂满了雪球，亮晶晶的。远方洁白万里。皑皑白雪在太阳光的照射下，发射出耀眼的光芒。街上的雪不怎么厚，踩上去发出咯吱咯吱的响声，构成一曲美妙的音乐。孩子们也出去玩了，他们像一群刚出笼的小鸟一样，快活极了。

After a period of time, the snow stopped, the earth seems to be wrapped in gauze, and seems to be a layer of silver mist covered. The sun came out, immediately into the Crystal City in Anyang. Walking in the street, like walking in the fairy tales of Asgard as magical anomaly. Roadside trees are covered with snow, sparkling. Thousands of miles away white. Snow in the sunlight, emitting a bright light. The snow on the streets is not thick, step up issued a creak sound, form a beautiful music. The children went out to play, they just like a caged bird, very happy.

啊!冬，你的心灵是那样洁白，我们忘不了你的美丽，更忘不了你对小麦所做出的贡献。

Ah! Winter, your mind is so white, we cant forget your beauty, you better not forget to make contribution to the wheat.

Children, you must all like small animals, do not tell you that you also like a rabbit, kittens, puppies and so on. However, my favorite animal is still a small white rabbit.

Little white rabbit wearing a white fur coat, long ears erected, can hear the distant voice. Red eyes, like two rubies embedded in the face. The most notable is its mouth, its mouth and other animals are not the same, is a three-mouth, a move is particularly interesting. It also has a furry short tail, like a small pompon as sticky later. Rabbit walking is always a jump, running fast and far away. There are familiar with the childrens song we must love to sing it: white rabbit, white and white, eat radish and vegetables, two ears erect, really cute.

Little white rabbit is always a few hours together to sleep together, shrink into a ball. Squeeze in a corner whirring, but they are very alert, as long as there is a little bit of movement, its long ears will be able to hear, wake up and stand up and stand up, looked around, and so silence, and then continue go to bed.

Rabbit mother loves his baby, before the production, always big mouth to bite their hair, do a warm nest to the baby to sleep. Rabbit mother usually 9 birth a year, a child born 7 - 12 months. Its reproductive capacity after the mouse, the rabbit was born just light red, no hair, it breast milk, a month later can live independently, the rabbits life is very short, in general, can only live 3 to 4 years.

Children, listen to me this introduction, is not also like a small rabbit?

The traditional East Asian calendars divide a year into 24 solar terms (節氣). Lìchūn (pīnyīn) or Risshun (rōmaji) (Chinese and Japanese:立春; Korean: 입춘; Vietnamese: Lập xuân; literally: "start of spring") is the 1st solar term. It begins when the Sun reaches the celestial longitude of 315° and ends when it reaches the longitude of 330°. It more often refers in particular to the day when the Sun is exactly at the celestial longitude of 315°. In the Gregorian calendar, it usually begins around February 4 and ends around February 18 (February 19 East Asia time).

Lichun signifies the beginning of spring in East Asian cultures. Chinese New Year is celebrated around this time. Farmers often celebrate the beginning of Lichun with special village events, worship and offerings to the gods and ceremonies for a blissful and prosperous new year. In China, people eat chūnbǐng (春餅) on this day.

In the lunisolar calendar, New Years Day might be before or after Lichun. A year without Lichun is called 無春年 (no spring year). 無春年 is also known as 寡婦年 (widow year) in northern China or 盲年 (blind year) in southern China. Marriage is believed to be unlucky in a year without Lichun.

In the Republic of China, Lichun has been Farmers Day since 1941.

传统的东亚日历将一年划分为24节气(節氣)。Lichūn(pīnyīn)或Risshun(rōmaji)(中国和日本:立春;韩国:입춘;越南:Lập宣,字面意思:“春天的开始”)是第一个节气。开始当太阳到达黄经315°,结束时达到330°的经度。更经常特别是指一天太阳黄经的正是315°。公历,一般在2月4日开始和结束在2月18日(2月19日东亚时间)。

立春在东亚文化中象征春天的开始。庆祝中国新年是在这个时候。农民经常庆祝立春为特殊村事件的开始,敬拜和祭神仪式幸福和繁荣的新年。在中国,人们吃chūnbǐng(春餅)在这一天。

阴阳历,元旦可能立春之前或之后。一年没有立春叫做無春年(无春年)。無春年也被称为寡婦年(寡妇年)在中国北方或盲年(盲年)在中国南部。婚姻被认为是不吉利的一年没有立春。

在中华民国,立春为自1941年以来农民的一天。

The Advantages of Travel Alone

I like to travel to different places, I can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. My friends and I always travel together, we make many plans in advance. But the plans will always be interrupted by all kinds of unexpected incidents, like the bad weather, the holiday being cancelled, so we have to spend another time to wait for the trip. Traveling alone can ignore these problems, I can go to travel whenever I want, I just need to pick up my backpack, and then buy the ticket. It is so free, I don’t have to wait for others, I can go to the places I want to. Traveling alone is good.

我喜欢去不同的地方旅行，我可以看到美丽的风景和了解不同的文化。我总是和朋友一起旅行，我们提前订好很多计划。但是计划总是会被各种各样意想不到的事件打断，比如天气不好，假期被取消等等，因此我们不得不花时间等待下次的旅程。独自旅行就能忽视这些问题，我可以随时去旅行，只需要背起背包，买上票。那是多么的自由，我不用等其他人，去我想去的地方。独自旅行真好。

Spring, my hometown, green grass and flowers are in bloom. Out of the tree branches, birds singing in the merry. Looking around is the continuous mountains, mountains and rolling hillsides in the spring, as if a domesticated hen the carpet, until the sky. Graceful flowers blossoming in a dotted mountains, attract colorful butterflies; in the depths of the mountain is the terraced rows of shapes, by definition, is the same as the stairs rice; a winding path to article rice into the ever-changing shape, some like crescent, and some, like boats, some as sickle ... ... in the spring, when seedling growth, fresh green color of the home that add still more beautiful.

Summer, sun spit fire, but the hills in the home full of trees, in the shade of the shelter, the very cool; also known bird burst into song. Kind of ripe watermelon in the mountains, home of the watermelon usually round and bright, and that the air moon, as round; cut, I saw a bright red flesh, sweet and delicious; black seeds, like the eyes of swarthy .

Autumn is a golden rice, breeze, rice started singing a harmony of the song, when hard-working farmers are harvesting rice; rice harvest of the cheerful sound of voices and interwoven success of the harvest of the symphony .

Winter, although the trees have been dying, but is everywhere in the roadside grass and wild flowers, which stand at attention in the cold. They tell you: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?"

This is my beautiful hometown, my favorite home.

春天,我的家乡,绿草和鲜花盛开。树枝,鸟儿在快乐的唱歌。环顾四周是连续的山脉,山脉和滚动在春天的山坡上,仿佛一只家养母鸡地毯,直到天空。优雅的花朵盛开在虚线山脉,吸引色彩斑斓的蝴蝶,在山的深处是梯田成排的形状,根据定义,楼梯大米一样,蜿蜒的道路条大米到不断变化的形状,有些像新月,和一些,像船一样,镰状……在春天,当幼苗生长,鲜绿的颜色,添加更美丽。

夏天,太阳吐火,但家里的山的树木,在树荫下的避难所,非常酷,也称鸟闯入的歌。成熟的西瓜在山里,家里的西瓜圆又大,空中的月亮,是圆的;,我看见一个明亮的红肉,香甜可口,黑色的种子,像黑的眼睛。

秋天是金大米、微风、大米开始唱这首歌的和谐,勤劳的农民们收割水稻,水稻收获的愉悦的声音声音和交织的成功收获的交响曲。

冬天,虽然树木死亡,但在路边到处都是草地和野花,立正的冷。他们告诉你:“冬天来了,春天还会远吗?”

这是我美丽的家乡,我最喜欢的家。

My favourite animal is the dog.They are so cute ,and are our honest friend.

We have a dog with grey furs and black eyes called Wangwang. Wangwang likes eating.My mother said that hes as greedy as I am.When we are having dinners,he usually crouches (蹲)in the face of us and looks at our food with hungry eyes . At that moment,I always cant help throwing the food in my mouth to him.

Every afternoon when i come back home from shool,Wangwang often runs to me and hug my legs.Hes so happy to see me back.When Im free ,I usually take him to play outside. We run in the field in Spring ,and swim in the river in Summer.Hes my best friend.

I love my dog—Wangwang.

I like watching the cartoon Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf. It’s my favorite.

Why I love it so much? I think all the animals in it are very funny. I love the goat whose name is Pleasant Goat. Its because he always gets along well with his friends. He is also very smart. He always helps them when they are in trouble. I want a friend like Pleasant Goat, too. When I am unhappy, he will talk with me and make me happy.

It always gives me so much happiness and laugh. It can really help me relax. I am fond of watching it very much.

Today is the National Eyes Caring Day,so I remind everybody to treasure your eys.Now let me introduce something should be remembered to treasure our eyes especially to the stdents.

First of all,its important to keep the standard sitting position while you are reading and studying which means that you cant put your eyes to close to the books or notebooks.Secondly,you should keep on doing eye exercises during the ten-minute break carefully.Thirdly,try to look far into the distance during the break,too.Besides,you should remember that if there is something wrong with your eyes,go to see the doctor in time.I believe that if you do as what I say,you can keep on owning good eyesight.

春，穿着绿裙，迈着轻盈的脚步，悄悄地来到了人间。

她高兴得到处奔跑……所过之处，无不蕴含着无比蓬勃的生机。

我爱恋春——爱的是那“吹面不寒的杨柳风”，她像母亲的手，抚摸着你。春天是生命的使者，她轻轻拂醒大地，沉睡了一冬，张开了惺忪的睡眼，舒舒服服地伸了一个懒腰，打了一个哈欠，她又急忙播下了希望的种子。

我爱恋春——爱的是那绵绵的春雨。看，像牛毛，像花针，像细丝，密密地斜织着，人家屋顶上全笼着一层薄烟。小草吸到了“甜汁”，高兴地一个劲向上钻;柳树喝到了“甜水”，长出了嫩芽。花儿舔到了“甜蜜”，绽开了笑容。

雨后，湿润的空气中带着些泥土的芳香，混着青草味儿，迎风扑来。因此，春雨是生命的耕耘者!

我爱恋春——爱的是那春风美景图。瞧，阳光明媚，花朵盛开了，芳香扑鼻。小蜜蜂闻到了，高兴极了，哼着小曲赶来采蜜。咦，那怎么有两朵会飞的花呢?噢，原来是两只美丽的蝴蝶，在翩翩起舞。

看，谁来了?原来是北归的飞燕也来加入这百花争艳的盛会。从这根电线杆上飞到另一根上，活像一幅跃动的五线谱。听，小河在淙淙地流着，像琴儿那样发出偶偶细语。此时，我的心，和着它的歌的拍子，慢慢地流到远方，渴望着要抚爱这个阳光和煦的多彩世界。

再看天空中荡游的风筝吧。春风用双手把它们送得好高好远，渐渐地融进了浅蓝色的空中……

啊，我爱恋你——春。

那个只有好友才能看到的英语小说嗯。“富有”的主人公，谢谢你，有些歉疚，不过我一定会努力。

整整四个月之前，我来了。那是一个充满惊喜的十一月，而你，是我得到的第一个惊喜。我的包裹里装着我唯一的英语，我极小心地看护着它，生怕这样的变迁与颠簸，让我一直以来的安慰在不知不觉之间离开了我。最初的那几天，我竭力想要抓住机会，尽管没能最充分地表现自己，但是你仔细地注意到了我，用你的经验很快读懂了我，并主动地给予我安慰，和久违的安全感。

无容置疑，你意识到了英语对我的重要性，作为一个人人都尊敬、人人都有点怕的老师，你并没有用你的力量轻而易举地使我对你产生畏惧的心理，而是主动接近我，一点点揭开遮住我视线的厚厚的陌生，在我做得不够完美而感到不安失落的时候，微笑并体谅我。

而你也有严肃的时候。当我扣了不该扣的分数，你会突然出现在我面前，显示出那种令人畏惧的神色厉声呵责。当我面对发生的这一切立在你面前不知所措时，你就会飞快地一改脸色，哈哈地放声笑起来，笑过之后，摸一摸我的额头，轻声告诉我没关系。

也许我还是太小？我总是焦虑，在考试之前总是想一些甚至会起到反作用的东西。以前的时候，可以在考试之后静静地等。但是现在，卷子刚刚交上去，就会被一些所谓的佼佼者围住喋喋不休，其中不乏恭维或者不怀好意的寒暄，让等待的仅仅几个小时的时间变得难熬，让我觉得愧疚，觉得难以忍受。

课上我把卷子摊开，目不转睛地看着红线密集的地方，你从我的身后走过来，用劲地点着我的卷子，手指敲在桌子上发出很大的声音。我坐在椅子上缩在一角，听着你严厉的“看看……看看……这是怎么了！”我托住头，你把卷子从桌上拿起来，站在旁边静静地仔细地分析，然后放下来看着我，仔细地说出评判标准和我的不足。我放松了一些，小心翼翼连比带划地说出自己的错因。你突然笑起来，对呀，对呀，你冲我呵呵地笑。

一整天的嗟叹。为了那些失分，为了你给我的英语。

谢谢你在我心中，成为了一个一直给我安慰和依赖的形象，我知道这有点自私，但是我们不后悔，我们都在做我们最愿意做的事情。我知道现在的努力是对你最好的感谢和回报。

划十字，永远爱你，永远爱我们的英语。

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。