最喜欢的歌手英语作文初二(合集20篇)

My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much. Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.

It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景). We all were amazed(惊讶的) by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.

We had a good time there. The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!

Miss you so much, the spring is in my heart! I call you in the winter, the flowers and plants of the earth know... my heart...   How could the end of the cold shut my love for you, eager to spring scenery covered my heart. Your smile is like a song, moistens my love for you! Your figure is like a river, moistens my love. Sunset star out, year after year, usher in the dawn each were shining brilliantly, and off the innumerable cloud all the evening, but remained motionless, I wait for you a winter love is!   You are like a ray of sunshine in the winter, stroking my face and heart; You wake up the sleeping already a long time of the earth, and makes the whole world is full of angry; You blow quietly, heart is blended in among them...   The rain silently, mingled with underground, dripping on the land, to give the earth a little moist, make the earth vitality; You let leaves fully absorb the nature to give him the rain, the lake was filar silk itch means...   he birds are singing in the branches back, as if to pour out your arrival; Grass in the wind dancing to music performed by you, as if in a welcome meeting for you. Through the window, I saw the wonderful world of rain, see you in the rain. Proverb says: "the spring rain your such as oil", it is no wonder that after the trees and flowers in the spring rain is issued with a yellow leaves sprout!   Let us with a touching embrace spring, put the dreams of the spring into their full of lofty sentiments, sprinkle with sweat infiltration in the spring of faith, to the autumn harvest fruitful hope!

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Miss you so much, the spring is in my heart! I call you inwinter, the flowers and plants of the earth know my heart.

How could the end of the cold shut my love for you, eager to spring scenery covered my heart. Your smile is like asong, moistens my love for you! Your figure is like a river,moistens my love. Sun sets, stars out, year after year, usherin the dawn each were shining brilliantly, and off theinnumerable cloud all the evening, but remained motionless, I wait for you a winter love is!

You are like a ray of sunshine in winter, stroking my face and heart. You wake up the sleeping earth, and make thewhole world full of energy.

The rain silently, mingled with underground, dripping on the land, to give the earth a little moist, make the earth vitality.You let leaves fully absorb the rain which nature gives.

The birds are singing in the branches back, as if to pour out your arrival. Grass in the wind dancing to music performed by you, as if in a welcome meeting for you. Through the windblow, I saw the wonderful rain, see you in the rain. Proverb says: "Rain in spring is as precious as oil". It is no wonderthat the flowers begin to bloom after the spring rain.

Let us embrace the touching spring, put the dreams of the spring into their full lofty sentiments, and sprinkle with sweatinfiltration in the spring of faith, to the autumn harvest fruitful hope!

Among all the four seasons,I like autumn best.

一年四季中，我最喜欢秋天。

Compared with summer,its very cool in autumn.People can go travel or just have a walk in the day.Leaves begins to turn yellow,if you walk on a road with trees on its both sides,you will see all kinds of yellow leaves on the road,and some leaves are falling and dancing with wind.What a beautiful view.

和夏天相比，秋天很凉快。人们白天就可以出去旅游，或者只是出去走走。秋天叶子开始变黄了。如果你走在两边都是树的小路上，你就会看到各种各样金黄的叶子铺在路上，还有些叶子正在掉落，随风起舞，多么美丽的精致啊。

Autumn is a harvest season.Wheats ,vegetables and fruits all get ripe.Farmers are busy with harvesting.And we children also help our parents at time. Though its very tired,we are very happy.

秋天是丰收的季节。小麦、蔬菜、水果都熟了。农民伯伯忙着收割。而我们这些小孩子也会帮爸爸妈妈的忙。虽然这样很累，但是我们很开心。

Spring, my hometown, green grass and flowers are in bloom. Out of the tree branches, birds singing in the merry. Looking around is the continuous mountains, mountains and rolling hillsides in the spring, as if a domesticated hen the carpet, until the sky. Graceful flowers blossoming in a dotted mountains, attract colorful butterflies; in the depths of the mountain is the terraced rows of shapes, by definition, is the same as the stairs rice; a winding path to article rice into the ever-changing shape, some like crescent, and some, like boats, some as sickle ... ... in the spring, when seedling growth, fresh green color of the home that add still more beautiful.

Summer, sun spit fire, but the hills in the home full of trees, in the shade of the shelter, the very cool; also known bird burst into song. Kind of ripe watermelon in the mountains, home of the watermelon usually round and bright, and that the air moon, as round; cut, I saw a bright red flesh, sweet and delicious; black seeds, like the eyes of swarthy .

Autumn is a golden rice, breeze, rice started singing a harmony of the song, when hard-working farmers are harvesting rice; rice harvest of the cheerful sound of voices and interwoven success of the harvest of the symphony .

Winter, although the trees have been dying, but is everywhere in the roadside grass and wild flowers, which stand at attention in the cold. They tell you: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?"

This is my beautiful hometown, my favorite home.

春天,我的家乡,绿草和鲜花盛开。树枝,鸟儿在快乐的唱歌。环顾四周是连续的山脉,山脉和滚动在春天的山坡上,仿佛一只家养母鸡地毯,直到天空。优雅的花朵盛开在虚线山脉,吸引色彩斑斓的蝴蝶,在山的深处是梯田成排的形状,根据定义,楼梯大米一样,蜿蜒的道路条大米到不断变化的形状,有些像新月,和一些,像船一样,镰状……在春天,当幼苗生长,鲜绿的颜色,添加更美丽。

夏天,太阳吐火,但家里的山的树木,在树荫下的避难所,非常酷,也称鸟闯入的歌。成熟的西瓜在山里,家里的西瓜圆又大,空中的月亮,是圆的;,我看见一个明亮的红肉,香甜可口,黑色的种子,像黑的眼睛。

秋天是金大米、微风、大米开始唱这首歌的和谐,勤劳的农民们收割水稻,水稻收获的愉悦的声音声音和交织的成功收获的交响曲。

冬天,虽然树木死亡,但在路边到处都是草地和野花,立正的冷。他们告诉你:“冬天来了,春天还会远吗?”

这是我美丽的家乡,我最喜欢的家。

I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep going’.

今天，我做了一个决定，有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样，我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在，我要说一句：加油!

I like eating various kinds of fruits, but what I like most is apple. Apple is red, round, and juicy. It looks so nice and tastes so sweet. Almost everyone likes it. And its also very cheap. We can buy it everywhere.

我喜欢吃各种各样的水果，但我最喜欢的是苹果。苹果是圆的，是红的，而且很多汁。它看起来很漂亮，吃起来味道很甜。几乎每个人都喜欢它。它也很便宜。我们到处都能买到它。

Apple is not only delicious, but also nutritious, because it contains the vitamins we need. Having apples everyday can make us healthy and wise. Just as saying goes," An apple a day keeps the doctors away.

苹果不仅好吃，而且营养丰富，因为它包含了我们所需的维生素。每天吃苹果可以使我们变得健康和聪明。正如俗话所说，“一天一苹果，疾病远离我。

Whats more, apple can be made into many kinds of foods and drinks. For example, apple milk shake is so popular among people. Its so easy to make. Here is the list: First, peel three apples and cut them into pieces. Second, put the apples and ice cream into a blender, and then pour some milk into the blender. Next, turn on the blender, and the milk shake will be ready in two minutes. Finally, drink the milk shake. This is the last but the most delightful step.

更重要的是，苹果可以制成多种食物和饮料。例如，苹果奶昔很受人们的欢迎。它是如此容易制成的。这是步骤：第一，削三个苹果切成碎片。第二，把苹果和冰淇淋放入搅拌机，再倒一些牛奶进去。接下来，打开搅拌机，两分钟奶昔就好了。最后，喝奶昔。这是最后一步也是最开心的一步。

my pet is a toy bear. his name is small white. he is white. he has blue eyes and blue ears. his hands and feet are blue too.he is naughty.

he likes to make fun of me. he likes reading.

when i am unhappy, he accompanies me.

he is my good friend.

I like a lot of animals, but my favorite animal is the panda. She comes from China, why did I love her? Because she is very cute, but she was very shy. Her body stout like bears, but the first round tail short, black and white fur and white head and body clear. She staple food of bamboo, but also addicted to love drinking water, most of the giant pandas homes are located near the water in streams, the nearest will be able to drink clear spring.

dog is my favorite animal among all the animals.As we all know,dog is a lovely animal.i love it not only because of its cute shape,but also because of its loyalty.it will never betray its master.another reason why i love dog is that dog can make me happy.when i am sad,it will do everything he can to cheer me up and forget the unhappy things.so i will love dog for ever and ever.

导语：每个人都有童年，你的童年是怎么度过的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Since I went to middle school, I left my hometown and moved to the city to live with my parents. I missed the time when I stayed at my hometown. I was so close to the nature, and I could see green trees and beautiful flowers. The most important thing was that I had a great time to play with my friends. The small place was full of my memory about my childhood. I liked to catch fish in the clear water. In summer, the water was cool and I stepped into the water to enjoy the coolness. Now I am getting used to the new environment, and have made many friends and happy about it.

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自从我上了中学，我就离开了家乡，搬到城市与爸爸妈妈一起生活。我想念呆在家乡的时光。我可以近距离接触大自然，我可以看到绿色的树木和美丽的花朵，更重要的是，我和我的朋友一起度过了愉快的时光。这个小地方布满了我童年的记忆。我喜欢在清澈的水里抓鱼。在夏天，水清凉清凉的，我走进水享受清凉。现在我也适应了新的环境，认识了很多朋友，过得也很开心。

In 2000 Sydney Olympic Games, Li Xiaopeng and his teammates were outstanding, winning gold in the prestigious mens team event, a first for Chinas gymnasts. Li Xiaopeng also won an inpidual gold medal in the parallel bars.

However, due to a severe foot injury, Lis performance in 2004 Athens Olympic Games was unsatisfying. China finished 5th in the mens team final and Li only got a bronze in parallel bars after he had been unbeaten since 2000 in major competitions. Li Xiaopeng was tortured by a long-time ankle injury and eventually had an operation in 2005.

In 2008, after suffering through yet another injury, this time in his toe, he came back to compete in the Chinese Nationals and took gold in parallel bars in two World Cups, thus surpassing Li Ning in the number of world titles.

If Chinese men gymnastics can regain mens team event? If Li Xiaopeng will win his second personal Olympic gold medals? I hope so!

在2000年悉尼奥运会，李小鹏和他的队友们是如此优秀，在著名的男子团体赛金牌，为中国体操运动员第一名。李小鹏还获得了个人金牌的平行杆。

然而，由于严重的脚伤，在2004雅典奥运会里的表现不满意。中国队在决赛中名列第五，而在比赛中，他在比赛中获得了不败自从2000年，而在比赛中，他获得了一枚铜牌。李小鹏被一个长期的脚踝受伤，并最后有一个手术在2005。

在2008年，通过又一次伤病的痛苦后，这一次在他的脚趾，他就回到竞争的中国公民把金子在双杠两届世界杯，从而超越李宁在世界冠军的数量。

如果中国男子体操能恢复男子的队事件？如果李小鹏将赢得他的第二个人奥运会金牌？我希望如此！

Summer holiday is coming.I am going to do many things that I want to do. For exampie,first I will jion a soccer club,because I like playing soccer.

During the summer holiday, I want to practice more to improve my skills.Second I will go to my grandmas house,because I miss her very much.I want to stay with her for several days.Last I will help my mother do some housework. She was really tired when I was go to school. Except for taking care of me, she also has to work. Therefore, I want to help her in the holidays.What will you do on Summer Holiday?

暑假就要到来了，我打算做一些我想做的事。比如说，首先我要参加一个足球俱乐部，因为我喜欢踢足球。

暑假期间，我想多练习以提高我的技术。其次，我要去奶奶家，因为我很想念她。我想和她待几天。最后，我会帮我妈妈做些家务。我去学校的时候她真的很累。除了要照顾我之外，她还要工作。因此，我想在假期帮助她。暑假你会做些什么呢?

In the path of growth, regardless of who also must have met many obstacles! I am no exception, though, things have been for a long time, but it still makes me memory like new. When I think about this time, but I think of many things.

This matter, may be in many peoples eyes is just a small, insignificant things. But at the time of I, is a matter than ascend day also difficult. It has been my experience learning to ride a bicycle.

That day, the weather is sunny, cloudless. Mother help me to hold the bridle, I step on the pedal, flash flash to ride up. Mother gradually, loosen the hand, just as I proudly said to mother: I will ride on, unfortunately happens, and I have the car as "touch" a cry and fell heavily to the ground, I like to play how the eggplant, lowered his head. At this time, there were pain, knee is originally was wrestling, also scraped knee. It was more than I could bear, tears like a broken line of beads, constantly poured out. Mother pulled me aside, to longly say to me: "children, in the later on the road, you will encounter more, experience more, you cant because these little things, and stop you move forward." Listen to mothers words, I thought: yeah, mom said right, not because these little things, to give up. I dry the tears, again on the bike. Everything comes to him who waits, along with the unceasing efforts, although will fall, but did not give up, but even more strengthened my target. Finally, I learned to ride a bike. When mom puts his thumb up and says "good", my heart began to like to eat honey, my sweetie.

From this is, I also deeply understand a truth: as long as insist, insist, insist on, success will belong to you.

在成长的道路中，无论是谁也都一定遇到过许多坎坷吧!我也不例外，虽然，事情已过了很久，但却还是令我记忆如新。每当想起这件是时，便会然我想起许多道理。

这件事，可能在许多人眼里只不过是一件微不足道、不值一提的小事。但在那时候的我，却是一件比登天还难的事。这件事便是我学骑自行车的经历。

那天，天气很晴朗，万里无云。妈妈帮我扶着笼头，我踩着踏板，一晃一晃地骑了起来。渐渐的，妈妈松开了手，正当我得意洋洋的对妈妈说：我会骑了的时候，不幸发生了，我和车子随着“碰”的一声，重重地摔倒在地上，我像打焉了的茄子一般，耷拉着脑袋。这时，膝盖传来阵阵疼痛，原来是在摔跤的时候，膝盖也擦破了。我再也忍不住了，眼泪像一颗颗断了线的珠子，不停地涌了出来。妈妈把我拉到一边，语重心长地对我说：“孩子，在以后的道路上，你还会遇到更多的坎坷，经历更多的事，你不能因为这些小事，而阻挡了你前进的脚步。”听了妈妈的话，我心想：是啊，妈妈说的对，不能因为这些小事，便去放弃。我擦干眼泪，又一次的坐上了自行车。功夫不负有心人，随着不断的努力，虽然还是会摔倒，但是不但没有放弃，而是更加坚定了我的目标。终于，我学会了骑自行车。当妈妈竖起大拇指称“棒”的时候，我的心便像吃了蜜糖一般，甜丝丝的。

从这件是中，我也深刻地明白了一个道理：只要坚持、坚持、在坚持，成功一定会属于你。

格言伴随着我们成长，有时它是前进中的路标，有时它是打开心灵的钥匙。“世上无难事，只怕有心人”。这时是我最喜欢的格言，这则格言是我三年级时，妈妈告诉我的。

那是一个闷热的下午，令人情绪很烦躁。我正做着妈妈个我买的数学练习题。突然，一道题把我难住了。我计算了很久，还是没有算出正确答案。我想：唉，这题实在是太难做了。还是玩一会儿吧！我正想离开书桌。这时，妈妈问我练习题做完了没有。我说：“有一题我不会做，我先玩一会儿吧！”妈妈耐心地教育我：“世上无难事，只怕有心人。不管遇到什么困难、挫折，只要有决心、有耐心、有信心，一切困难都会化为乌有的。”我听了妈妈的话，我又去钻研这道题，时间一分一秒的过去了。我还是没有算出正确答案，但我没有灰心，继续解答。1分钟、2分钟、3分钟……一个小时过去了，功夫不负有心人，我最后算出了正确答案，妈妈说得真是没错。

这就是我最喜欢的一则格言。因为，是它在我丧气时给我信心，让我自信地挑战困难和挫折。这则格言将成为我终生的座右铭。

Dear Bob，

How is it going these days?

I make some new plans for myself. My first resolution has to do with selfimprovement. I want to join an English club to improve my English. I want to get good grades next time. The second is about personal health. I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise. Finally，I want to learn to take photos in my free time. I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.

I like table-tennis,chess and football. Football is my favourite sport. Im good at playing football. I think its easy for me. I have my favourite football player.He is Shevchenko. Hes in AC Milan Club. I want to te a famous football player like Shevchenko. I often play football with my father at weekends. On Sunday I like to watch football matches.My day I am a student. I go to school from Monday to Friaday. In the morning I get up at ten to six. Then I wash my face. I have my breakfast at six oclock. After breakfast I go to school. I usually take bus to school But if I get up so late, I will go by car. I begin to class at eight. I have four class at morning. At noon, I have no time to go home. So I have my lunch at school. At two oclock, I play football with ny friends. My classes are over at four thirty. After that I go home and get home at twenty past five. I have supper with my parents at six. I often eat meat,fish,and some vegtables. Sometimes I eat dumplings. After supper I do the washing. Then I do my homework or listen to the pop music. I go to bed about ten thirty.

我喜欢乒乓球和足球，象棋。足球是我最喜欢的运动。我擅长踢足球。我认为这对我来说很容易。我最喜欢的足球运动员。他是舍甫琴科。他在AC米兰俱乐部。我想得一个著名的足球运动员一样，舍甫琴科。我经常与我父亲在周末踢足球。在星期日我喜欢看足球比赛。我的天，我的一个学生。我去学校从星期一到friaday。我在早上十点起床到六。然后我洗我的脸。我六点吃早饭。早餐后，我去学校。我通常乘公共汽车去学校，但是如果我起床太晚了，我会开车去。我开始在八班。我有四个在上午的课。中午，我没有时间回家。所以我在学校吃午餐。在二点的时候，我在纽约的朋友踢足球。我的课程是在四三零。之后我回家在五点二十分回家。我和父母一起吃晚饭在六。我经常吃的肉，鱼，和一些蔬菜。有时我吃饺子。晚饭后，我洗衣服。然后我做我的家庭作业或听流行音乐。我去睡觉大约一零三零。

在维持自然平衡中，每种动物都有其作用。下面就是小编跟大家分享一篇初二英语作文保护动物，欢迎大家阅读！

保护动物初二英语作文一：Protect endangered animals

There are more and more endangered animals at present,so how to protect them has been our task of top priority . Its wrong for people to hunt animals for their meat and feather,for they are our good friends.We should protect them instead of killing them.Giant pandas,which are one of the endangered animals,live in the forests and live on bamboo lealves.They can just live safely in the natural protection zones.We should stop killing animal and protect them.

保护动物初二英语作文二：How to protect the animals？

Animals are our friends.But how to protect them? government is working to protect all animals in danger,and has made lots of plans to save animals. On the other hand, we shouldn’t eat wild animals.We should keep them away from our dinner. That way,there will not be wild animals on sale. I think the hunters and killers will become fewer and fewer.

Last, we should protect the environment.We should stop people from cutting trees down. Without trees, wild animals will lose their home. And we will lose our animal friends. All of us should try our best to protect animals.

We need to protect animals better.We should give them fresh water to drink.We should make the forests bigger for animals in danger to live in.We should advice people not to kill animals beacause they are our friends!

保护动物初二英语作文三：Save the Wild Animals

Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrowcr and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off species just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.

In order to protect our resources of ecology, people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. There fore, measures of the following should be taken: pollution standards are made to keepdown poisons; killing off certain rare species is prohibited; national parks should be set up as wild life, reserves.

Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved.

保护动物初二英语作文四：Protect Panda

The giant panda is known as the national treasure of China. The panda was a kind of ordinary animal in China long ago. However, for some reasons, too many of them have been killed. So the number of them is falling quickly.

At present people are taking an important measure to save pandas. People want to find a home for them, and recently, they have set up a nature park for them in Sichuan Province,which is called "Pandas Home. "There pandas can enjoy their life happily. There is a bamboo forest near the Pandas Home. So the pandas can find bamboos easily which they like to eat very much. .

Because pandas are well protected now, the number of them is increasing every year. We hope that one day we will have enough pandas to set them free and let them live in the wild again.

Pandas are good friends of man. Man should try to protect them and ]et them live in the way they like!

[初二英语作文保护动物

This summer, I had some special days. I joined dongzhou international educational exchange summer camp.

First, I will tell you about our foreign teachers, they are shrina and rebecca. They are friendly and beautiful. They are students at oxford university.

We talked about many things: famous people, subjects in england, different jobs, our deal days, western star signs, what can we say in a restaurant and so on.

We know lots of things, like what the difference is between “chef” and “cook”, all the parts of the body…

We tried to write a letter to principal zhang. We made a play and we drew our own comics and tried to sell it. We gave some other students english lessons, we taught them about chinese dragon, chinese martial arts and the olympics.

Every afternoon, we played exciting games: chinese whispers, tongue twisters, wheelbarrow, egg and spoon, three legs…

On the last day, we had a good time. We made black tea. We put tea bags, some milk and lots of water in to a big bowl, and then we stirred the tea until it became red and dark. Oh, it tasted good! later, we used eggs, flour and milk to make many pancakes. To cook them is very interesting. When we finished it, the pancakes looked round and nice. We put some jam on it. how delicious! I won’t ever forget it.

The summer camp is a really good chance for me. I know the local things in england. I learned a lot and like english more. I also know better ways to learn english well.

I hope one day i can see you in england.

今年夏天,我有一些特殊的日子。东洲国际教育交流我加入夏令营。

首先,我将告诉你关于我们的外籍教师,他们是shrina和丽贝卡。他们是友好的和美丽的。他们是牛津大学的学生。

我们谈了很多事情:名人,受试者在英格兰,不同的工作,我们的天,西方的星座,我们能说什么在餐馆等等。

我们知道很多事情,像有什么区别“厨师”和“厨师”,身体的所有部位…

我们试图给校长写封信。我们玩了,我们把自己的漫画,并试图把它卖掉。我们给其他的学生上英语课,我们教他们关于中国龙,中国的武术和奥运会。

每天下午,我们玩激动人心的游戏:中国的低语,绕口令,手推车,鸡蛋和勺子,三条腿…

最后一天,我们有一个美好的时光。我们做了红茶。我们把茶包,一些牛奶和大量的水在一个大碗,然后我们搅拌茶,直到它变成了红色和黑色。哦,味道很好!之后,我们用鸡蛋、面粉和牛奶使许多煎饼。做饭是很有趣的。当我们完成它,煎饼四下看了看,不错。我们把一些果酱。多美味啊!我永远也不会忘记。

夏令营对我来说是一个很好的机会。我知道在英国当地的事情。我学到了很多,更喜欢英语。我也知道更好的方法来学好英语。

我希望有一天我可以看到你在英格兰。

Today, I went to my old house. I lived in it two years ago. When I am at school, I often think of my old house because it made me happy in the past. My old house is very tidy but old. It has only one level and there are just two rooms in it. I slept with my mother and my father ever evening. My old house is between two high houses, so it looks very small but lovely. When I lived in my old house, I often played with my sister at the weekends. But now I can’t, so I feel a little sad. Two years ago, I could share my feelings with my parents too, but they were separate at last. So my old house is my favourite place. If I have some trouble, I think of it and my parents, I’ll always get lots of energy. I will then forget the trouble soon. Do you think my old house is a wonderful place? Yes, it’s my great “palace.”

[初二英语100字短篇作文：My Old House

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

The summer is coming. I like summer very much. In summer days, I can do a lot of things, such as swimming, eating ice cream, drinking cold water. Besides, the summer holiday is my favorite time. I don’t have to go to school in holidays, so I can play with my friends. I can travel with my parents, too. I want to go many places, such as Beijing, Shanghai, Xiamen and so on. This is why I love summer.