初二英语作文一次难忘的旅行（汇总20篇）

My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable。 I went to the

countryside to spend my summer holidays.It is very beautiful there。 there are

green plants， clear rivers， lovely animals kind people。 i spent two weeks

helping my grandfather do some farm work there.Iwrote down what happened in my

diary every day.

Besides that,I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their

lessons.I helped them read english improve their spoken english.Their parents

thanked me for this.

On the night of the Lantern Festival, the streets are full of people, the lights are bright, there are so many lanterns in the streets! The rabbit lamp on the ground run, the butterfly lamp fly... The most funny is fish lamp, I saw a carp tail swinging, Zhang Kaiyu ridge, whole body scales glittering, kept swinging the tail of the fish, the children cant help Shouting: "fish lives!"

There are many people in the street who are watching the lights, and some are dragging cute rabbit lights, which seem to be a real rabbit. With long ears and white fur...

The song, the laughter become a piece, the night sky, happy people ushered in another Lantern Festival.

Tom is a boy of st week,it was his first trip in Shanghai.Although he only traveled Shanghai for one day,but he was very happy at all.First,he played in Changfeng Park.He had photos with dolphins and seals.Then he visited Yu Garden.It is a traditional place.He bought many small articals.After that,he traveled the most highest building—Oriental Pearl Tower.It is also the most highest building in Asia.In the tower,he knew a lot of things of Shanghai.Finally,he looked at the magnificent Huang Pu River.Tom was so excited in Shanghai,he said that he wanted to visit Shanghai again becaust he liked this morden city.

July 16 2009

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine oclock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didnt arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFCs door. I havent seen them for a year. And in a year, we didnt come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh ，我非常高兴今天填补!

[初二英语日记带翻译好天气

About Travel

There is a saying that “You can either travel or read,but either your body or soul must be on the way.” With the improvement of living standards, more and more people have time and money to travel. During traveling, one can meet various people, make new friends and experience various lifestyles of different places.

Almost everyone has their own favorite place to travel because of specific reasons, such as the people, climate or scenery of that place, the influence of friends or some beautiful memories and so on.

Nowadays, people do not have to think much about transportation. People can travel by car or driving themsleves to near places, or by train, plane to far places.So, if you have a place want to travel, just go and relax yourself.

[关于旅行的中学英语作文

8月14日，我们一路欢声笑语、兴高采烈地乘车来到沂水地下大峡谷。我们从一个小瀑布旁走进去，从里面看那道瀑布，真有一种走进了水帘洞的感觉。通过楼梯来到地下。哇，地下真凉快，就像开了空调似的。往深处走，就看见大大小小、形状各异的钟乳石，有的像老人、有的像大象、还有的像鹦鹉。这些钟乳石都经过了几十万年的时间才有如今这些形状各异的钟乳石。我们还坐了暗河漂流，我们坐的船忽快忽慢，又一上一下，还不时地前后撞一下。

第二天，我们又一路奔波来到了济宁的微山湖荷花湿地公园，那一片片的芦苇随着微风和水波晃着那绿色的翩翩起舞，那亭亭玉立的荷花在那绿色盾牌般的荷叶旁，好像很有安全感似的。之后，我们进入采摘区，采了很多荷叶，戴在头上就像一顶喇叭帽，手里拿着一朵荷花拍照，真有一种生活在水乡的感觉，我们还采了一些莲蓬，那嫩嫩的莲子充满了汁水，即使不去掉中间的莲子芯，味道也是甜甜的，没有一点苦味。我们坐在快艇上，快艇制造出的波浪，使得水道两旁的荷叶、荷花和芦苇随着水波上下起伏。

这次旅行，让我明白了钟乳石要想形成这样美丽、奇怪的形状不是一年两年就可以的，而是要经历数万年的变化，我们学习也是一样，如果自己想学到各种知识，就要不断积累，不能半途而废。

“玩乐”是人生中不可缺少的一件事，而这些“玩乐”也带给了我不少难忘的经验。其中令我最难忘的是前一年暑假的日本东京之旅。

那天早上，我搭乘了我从未坐过的飞机。一开始起飞时，那轰隆轰隆的巨响，震动了整台飞机，之后，才又恢复了平静。紧接着我看到了蓝蓝的天空、像豆腐般的草原和雪白的白云，真是晴空万里、尽收眼底。这时候，空姐端出了一道道的甜点，让我们享受着空中美食，真是像在天堂般一样的美好。时光飞逝，已经过了两个小时，却好像只有五分钟那么的短暂，一转眼间，我就已经到了日本。

一开始，我们先去了八景岛的海生馆。那里有这各式各样的海洋生物，还有精彩的海豚秀。海豚是个花式跳跃高手，它可以跳进呼啦圈里；海豹是个接球高手，它可以接住从任何一个地方所丢过来的球。白鲸也是个跳舞高手，它可以随着音乐挪动身体，而且它竟然还会点头呢！

隔天，我们就来到了我梦想已久的迪士尼乐园。一开始上午的时候，我们就接受了导游的建议，玩了一些比较受欢迎的游戏，例如：微缩世界探险、幽灵公馆、巴斯光年的星际历险、小小世界、巨雷山……等等。其中幽灵公馆的幽灵栩栩如生的飞上飞下让我胆颤心惊。晚上的游行里，各种的卡通人物都出来跟小朋友们打招呼，有白雪公主、小熊维尼、虎克船长……等，让我兴奋不已。最后，还有晚上的烟火秀，那闪烁的灯光，照耀在夜空中，不但让迪士尼光亮无比，也让这次的日本之旅圆满结束。

古人说：“读万卷书，不如行万里路。”这句话真是说得太好了！这次的日本之旅，不但让我得到了休闲娱乐，还让我增广见闻，知道了日本当地的一些风土民情，真是个既丰富又难忘的旅行！

导语：在我们的成长过程中，会遇到很多挫折，会变得更加勇敢，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

People tell us that we should to be a brave girl, so that we can get over the difficulties. But to be a brave girl is not easy for me, I always tell myself I must face the difficulty, but I give up in the last minute. So from today, I must learn to be a brave girl, I am not saying to be brave right now, I should take it step by step. First, I must tell myself not to fear the difficulty. When I meet the trouble, I should learn to solve it by myself instead of depending on others, so I will learn something gradually. Then I should open my mind, trying to know more things.

【参考译文】

人们告诉我们应该成为一个勇敢的女孩，这样我们就能够克服困难。但是成为一个勇敢的女孩对我来说不容易，我总是告诉自己我必须勇敢，但是我在最后的关头放弃。因此从今天起，我必须成为一个勇敢的女孩，我并不是说立刻变得勇敢，我应该一步一步来。第一，我必须告诉自己不要害怕困难。当我到困难时，我应该学着去自己解决，而不是依赖于别人，这样我就会慢慢学到事情。然后我应该开阔我的思想，学着去了解更多的事情。

刘欣悦

十月一日的那天，我和爸爸，妈妈，还有姥姥姥爷，一起准备到济南动物园去玩，于是我们收拾行李，准备出发。

一路上爸爸开着车，我们看到了好多风景。有我们的母亲河――黄河，黄河非常宽阔，黄河的水是黄色的，非常浑浊，妈妈说这里面有泥沙，经过沉淀，黄河水流入家里，供我们饮用。

不一会儿我们就到了济南市里，爸爸挺停好车，我们买完票，一起进入动物园的大门。首先映入眼帘的是一只用草坪做成的小猴子，它非常可爱，手里还拿了一个用草坪做成的小桃子呢。再往里走，我看到了孔雀孔雀的羽毛展开的时候，像一把美丽的大扇子，漂亮极了！我们还看到了，可爱的熊猫，凶猛的老虎和狮子，高高的长颈鹿，温顺的羊驼等等好多好多的动物。妈妈说这些都是国家的保护动物，我们要珍惜和保护这些动物。

不知不觉，到了晚上。我们也转累了，但心里很高兴。爸爸去开车，我们坐上车，感觉一会儿就到家了。这一次不仅仅是我最开心的一次旅行，也是我最难忘的一次旅行

导语：你有好朋友吗?你会跟大家怎么介绍他呢?以下是yuwenmi小编为大家精心整理的关于我的好朋友的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I have a lot of friends in Simon English School. One of them is my best friend. His name is boyd.

He and I are both thirteen years old. but I am older than he, and I am fatter than he too. He is shorter than I, and he is thinner than I. He wears a pair of glasses but I dont.

He likes to eat pocket-food, and he is a gentleman in a sense that when he has pock-food he will share them with us.

He and I are in the same school and in the same class. So, we can help each other. We alway play in the school together. he likes to do thing I like. He lives in the Ningbo Jiangdong, so he hardly came to my home in Zhenghai but I alway go to his home on weekends and he sometimes will come to my home on weekends. Sometimes we will fight but we alway get along well.

His mother is a doctor in the Li-Hui-Li hospital and I know where her office is. His father is a worker in the Bei-Lun power plant. He is a head of a group. So, his father has a lot of work to do.

He and I are in the same school. We usually have a good time so he is my best friend.

【翻译】

我有很多朋友在西蒙英语学校。其中之一是我最好的朋友。他叫博伊德。

他和我都十三岁了。但我比他大，我也比他胖。他比我矮，他比我瘦。他戴着一副眼镜，但我不戴。

他喜欢吃口袋的食物，他是一个绅士，当他有麻子，他将与我们分享他们的食物。

他和我在同一所学校，在同一个班。所以，我们可以互相帮助。我们总是一起在学校里玩。他喜欢做我喜欢做的事。他住在宁波市江东，所以他不来我的家在Zhenghai，我经常在周末去他家，他有时会在周末我回家。有时我们会战斗，但我们总是相处得很好。

他的母亲是李慧丽医院的医生，我知道她的办公室在哪里。他的父亲是北仑发电厂的工人。他是一个团体的首脑。所以，他的父亲有很多工作要做。

他和我在同一所学校。我们通常玩得很开心，所以他是我最好的朋友。

Today, my brother and sister and Lei Ting played a very interesting game, I finished my homework later went to Leilei, Lei brother gave me and miss TingGave a title: what cannot be seen but eat?My sister and I think for a long time, Miss Ting said: "I guess it is gas!"But Lei brother shook his head,"I want to be the air!"Lei brother nodded.Miss Ting said: "should now play the game?""How do you know that game?"I am goodStrange question.Lei brother said: "well, we play by brick!"

We moved 9 blocks, each of US $3, we stand on the starting line, Lei brother say this game is to rely on together, me and miss ting a group, Lei brother a People in a group.First, the brick a little distance in a row, then stepped in front of the 2 brick, then put back 1 brick on the front, then according to the clockwise Motif, who first reached the end who win.I and miss Ting unity, regardless of the difficulties encountered, I and miss ting to brave face, and help each otherFinally, we win!

On this day, we know that no matter what difficulties you meet, have to face, and mutual help.

等了数年的毕业旅行终于来临，而那心情真的无法用言语形容，是多么让人兴奋且开心的。

游览车上，我们七嘴八舌的聊天，感觉才聊十分钟，没想到已经到了民族文化村。

到达了民族文化村里面，我跟我的小组队员一起去玩“星际探险”。刚坐上去的时候，一直狂叫，大家会觉得我们是疯子吧！玩完了以后，我们说要去玩“马雅探险”，我一走到门口，就一直无法停止害怕。帕个游乐设施真的超恐怖的。简仪安踏完，我只能帮他们顾包包。不之不觉到了一点四十分我们要离开游乐园了，准备前往饭店。

晚上，我们到了度假村，开始我们的“营火晚会”，我们唱歌外，还不停的尖叫、拍手、呼喊，尖叫、呼喊到嗓子都哑了，拍首拍到手又肿才停止，其中在玩超级比一比时，最刺激了，吹后，各班的班长都被拱上台去跳舞这算是娱乐大众吧！吃完宵夜后，我们带者疲累的心情回到饭店了。

光阴似箭，没多久我们的毕业旅行即将结束，我们在这所学校的时间也不长了，这里陪伴着我们六年有我们的喜、怒、哀、乐，真是令人依依不舍，一想到毕业将来要各奔东西，大家的眼泪就不禁的落下来。最后的毕业旅行结束！

A memorable event in the road I was growing up, there is one thing to make me never forget. Gone through that matter, I seem to grow up a lot. That was New Years Eve last year; the students send each other greeting cards. Cards with their own wishes and sent to good friends. I have also been infected by this atmosphere and ready to join the crowd, suddenly, I saw a student sitting there alone. That is not the famous "naughty King" Liu Kai do? But now, he seems like a changed man. How he got it? I looked at him puzzled. Suddenly, I wake up. Certainly because no one sent him a greeting card, and no one said to him words of wish I could not help feel sad for him. So I handed him a greeting card ,and said to him: “ happy holiday!" He looked at me then looked at the cards, said happily: “Thank you!" His eyes filled with happiness. He stood up and said: “I also have a beautiful card Looked at him, and I smiled. How important Group is !

Ten years ago, there were many narrow streets.But now many streets have been widened. So buses and cars can go more quickly than before. Ten years ago , it was not convenient to go from the north of the city to the south. But now, you are sure to reach anywhere in less than an hour. To our joy, we have two underground lines and many more are being built. We seldom find traffic jam in rush hours. So we dont have to worry about going out. With the development of science and technology, the transportation in Shanghai will become all the better.

Few years ago, an unforgettable thing was happened in my life. It is a terrifying experience.

The weather was very hot in summer. So my friends and I am together to catch craft. I felt much feared and excited. I was frightened for I was first catch craft. If I fall into river how can I do and I isnt good at swimming. I was excited that I have a chance to catch craft.

Then I was very careful to stand on the craft with scared. But the craft always ups and downs in the river and beyond my control. I was fallen into river after a second I stood on it .I felt very afraid and was difficulty asking for help that I would catch water as soon as I open mouth. At the moment, I thought I would die and say goodbye to all people who I know. I was wet all my clothing and always shivering after my friends help me escaping from river. My heart beat faster than usual as well breath. I absolutely dare not believe that I can see the sun.

When I remind of this matter, I feel I was very lucky. And I think I was a lucky dog.

夏令营是提高未成年人思想道德教育的重要渠道，是学校教育和家庭教育的良好补充。下面语文迷网为大家提供了关于夏令营的英语作文范文，希望对你有帮助。

夏令营的英语作文一

This August I went to a two-week long English camp which was held by English Beacon in Yantai city, Shandong Province. There were over a hundred middle school students from all over the country and thirty experts in English teaching participating in this exciting camp.

While we were there, it was required that we speak only English to our teachers and with each other. There were many activities which were funny and helped us to strengthen our oral English skills, such as, the Second Annual National Debate for Middle School Students,the Third National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students and English parties. We also visited many places of interest. Learning English was exciting and the teachers were very friendly and helpful. This camp was a real life-changing experience that I will never forget.

夏令营的英语作文二

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们有很大的乐趣。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个伟大的党。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开(离开)的朋友和老师。我希望我可以去夏令营明年再次。

崔顺涛

10月2日星期一的下午，是一个非常暗的下午，也是一个非常寒冷的的下午，我跟随六年级的大哥哥、大姐姐们去参观革命纪念馆、朱集养老院、朱集小镇这三个地方。

那时候风很大，像是给我们指路，我们一直往参观的地方去，我们再看看柳树，风吹动柳树，像是把柳树吹倒了一样，我们坐着车去参观，先到了革命纪念馆，老师说：“举着红色条幅拍照”然后老师和家长都给我们拍照，拍完以后我们才进去的，老师从第一章到最后一章给我们详细的讲了一讲，我们知道了怎么回事。接着我们去了下一个地点朱集养老院，到了那里老师就带我们进去，我们看着养老院的桌子、椅子、厨房、卧室等，都是那么干干净净。我们要尊敬这里的爷爷、奶奶，最重要的是不要破坏环境，最后我们给爷爷奶奶表演节目，有跳舞的、唱歌的、说笑话的等各种花样，表演完以后就离开了。最后我们参观了朱集小镇，朱集小镇里全是以前的东西，里面有枣王树、板凳、鞋、钱、玩具等物品，那里老师也给我们详细的讲了一讲，我们知道了很多事情。走出朱集小镇，老师说：“今天的参观到此结束，回家做一张行万里路、读万卷书的手抄报”。

这一次难忘的旅行我最喜欢朱集小镇，因为那里有我们不知道的以前东西。

不久之前，在班上就开展了一次活动——“红色之旅”。这次“红色之旅”去参观了“建川博物馆”。我们分别参观了“川军抗战馆”、“不屈战俘馆”、“援华美军馆”和“国防兵器馆”。下面我就来讲讲吧！

我们是“川人”，有着怎样的“川人”精神？《川军抗战馆》就记录着几百万我们四川军人的英勇顽强，杀敌的英雄气概。

参观完了《不屈战俘馆》后，看这些坚定的中国人时我感受到了：我们“中国人”，在失败，屈辱面前，我们有着昂头挺胸的中国精神，那是我们的信仰，我们的尊严。在这里，正义面前的勇士永远都不会倒下。

人间需要“友爱”，需要“帮助”。《援华美军馆》就再现“团结就是力量，正义面前，没有界线。”

我们要防身，总不能赤手空拳，《国防兵器馆》就让我们看到了“中国民族古代兵器，长枪，大刀的威武。中国现代武器强悍的威力，让我感受到了祖国的强大。

我们还为博物馆献了爱心——植树。每一棵小树都代表着我们对抗战勇士的无限敬意，我们每个人的愿望的成长。还有更加辽阔的天空在等着小树们呢！

参观完了博物馆后的我思绪万千、我感觉到了这博物馆都真实再现了百年中国历史，百年中国民族文化，百年中国精神，令我感到了自豪、喜悦、激动、坚强……

这次的旅途使我终生难忘！

人的第一次有很多很多，但是总有一次使令人难忘的.我那难忘的第一次是关于学习，我是第一次开心的哭了。

期末前紧张的复习，总像梦似的。现在想想，也依旧能感受到那种紧张的复习状态的情绪，都哇啦哇啦的背着，有时，在你如迷幻似的梦里把该背的也背完了，有时一节课也就完了，下课铃响了，瞬间，梦醒了!这才回过神来。抬头向窗外看看，眼睛忽然间很疼，头还有点晕。可能是长时间低着头背书的原因吧!闭上嘴巴，口干舌燥。紧张而又迷幻似的过完了这个复习阶段。

迎来的是家人，老师及我自己都很重视的期末考试。当老师抱着考卷进入教室时，没有一个人发出声响;没有一个人左顾右盼;没有一个人不心跳加速;没有一个人不手心出汗……

每张卷子，我都认认真真的填写，每张卷子，我都仔仔细细的检查，每张卷子，我都整整齐齐的写下那工整的字迹。这次考试，我有目标，我要超过贺曼曼，她是与我同班的同学，这次我的目标就是她，不说超过她，先与她平座也行。我的目标就是如此，所以为此，我在复习中复的呀!那可真叫做昼夜不分呀!

好久好久……

成绩在班里还未公布，广播上已经报出来了各班获奖者的名字了!听着听着!听着!六年级一班获得一等奖的有贺曼曼，胡晓洁，获得二等奖的有……

听到这个消息，我这觉得阳光照在了我的心上，即使当时是晚上。我当时没有听到消息前，双手合十，贴在脸颊上，眼睛盯着小广播，耳朵听着小广播，我的心悬在小广播上。听到这个消息，我心里的激动不可名状。那时，我何成不想飞快的告诉爸妈?在这种情快下，我脸上有股泉水般的泪滴，在我的脸颊上滚下。

太不容易了!我笑着哭着，哭着笑着，这便是令我难忘的第一次。开心的为了学习哭了。

“桂林山水甲天下，阳朔山水甲桂林。”盼望着盼望着，我和姥姥、妈妈、弟弟最后踏上了去桂林的旅途。

导游给我们讲这儿的风景是洞奇石美、山清水秀。我们来到了冠岩洞———这是一座能够海陆空三方面游览的岩洞。我们先乘坐观光电梯下到洞底，走着走着你会听到有惊涛骇浪的声音其实一看那是岩洞里的水流的声音，水流不大听了让人不寒而栗。洞里有好多奇形怪状的岩石，还闪着人工做上的七彩灯，一闪一闪的景色更加的炫丽迷人。洞连着洞，有人行道，还有乘船的道。我们于是乘上船拿起手旁的手电筒照射着岩壁，那石头真是太怪了，有的像乌龟、有的像鲸鱼、有的像大象等等……我们还乘坐了小火车，由我和弟弟当小司机，一路我们开的留意翼翼，玩的十分开心快乐！

我们还坐着游轮游览了十里画廊，在途中我看到了座座奇特的山，有七星山，猴子望月山，九马画山，五指山，象鼻山，我最喜欢的是长寿鱼山，因为那是一条翘着尾巴的大鲤鱼上面有一位老太太弯着腰在伸手救一个小孩。我被这儿的景色迷住了。瞧！兴坪佳境！不知是谁惊呼了起来。听说这个景色就是我们人民币20元背景的图案，一座座山倒映在漓江的水里，是那样的迷人那样的让人陶醉！

我们还游玩了古东瀑布‘遇龙河漂流每个景点是那样的让人流连忘返啊！我们玩的高兴极了。

我们依依不舍的离开了桂林，离开了这个美丽的如诗如画的地方。在回家的路上我一向回忆着在桂林游玩的景象……这是多么难忘的旅行啊！

“明天，你不用去上学了，跟我去见你爷爷。”一句话，丝毫不留余地……

“爷爷”，我仔细的思索着这个词语，猛地我打了一个寒颤，是爷爷！那个离开了我三年的爷爷！

我与爷爷的交集很少，他总是爱一个人看着老掉牙了的京剧，反复的擦着那几十年的三轮车，我的生活丝毫没有为爷爷有什么变化。有一天爷爷进了医院，全家人都很着急，奶奶哭得很伤心，很伤心，眼泪浸湿了爷爷的枕头，那一片好冰，好冰，我依旧很懵懂，为什么要伤心？直到那天傍晚，一个电话，吵醒了熟睡的我，吵醒了妈妈，妈妈迅速穿好衣服，匆匆出了门，“咚”的一声，只剩我一个蜷缩在床上，我似乎感到有一个魔鬼，它要吞噬一切。它在怒吼！第二天，妈妈带我去了奶奶家，那有一个从前没有的桌子，上面是白布，再上面是爷爷的相片。妈妈用力把我按下，好痛，好痛。“磕头！”一个，两个，三个……那个魔鬼真的吞噬了一切。我看见了静躺的爷爷，好安宁，看见了近似发疯的奶奶，好伤心，那是最后一次背影，好模糊！

我穿上了白色的衣服，妈妈笨拙的为我绑上丑恶的白条，舅舅捧着照片……

今时，我再次穿上了白衣，乘着汽车，去那爷爷的“家”，好美，好美的“家”，那有一棵小树，有美丽的花朵，有慈祥的爷爷。

烧纸钱的烟雾在飞舞，追着我，好难闻，我不停的躲开它，妈妈踢了我一脚“跪下！”我跪在了爷爷墓前，看见了爷爷的照片，爷爷在笑，好开心，好开心……

万缕思绪在浓烟青树中飞舞，那熟悉的背影又在眼前，好清晰，好清晰……

“吃饱了吗？马上就到家了啊！”爷爷在笑，笑出了声。“饱了！”我也在笑，笑出了声。妈妈，爸爸很忙，没有时间接我，只有爷爷，只有爷爷，他会从解放路骑着红色的三轮车接我，那是一辆很红，很红的车子，很大！我会在上面写着作业，看着风景，爷爷会骑着车子，卖力的骑着车子，样子有点笨拙，有点失美。爷爷每每都会送我到门口，却不进门，留给我的只是那一副背影，熟悉又陌生的背影，再长大些我喜欢看爷爷的背影，那很有趣，那很躬，很瘦，似乎只剩下了皮包骨，但又很有精神。那时的爷爷爱打拳，爱听戏。

再大些，学习忙了，我便很少见爷爷，他也不如前强壮，只是守着戏剧，把着脉搏，我与妹妹对爷爷只剩下了敬畏，于是，沙发上总有爷爷那孤寞的背影。

现今，只留有那平静的背影，好美，好美。

我们祭拜完毕，奶奶猛然扑在爷爷墓前大哭，好渗，好渗，舅舅扶起奶奶，催促快走，快走，并安慰着奶奶：“爸过得挺好的，挺好的。”

真的，挺好……

一头白发，一身素衣，大步远走，那墓前的青树在长大，那个背影永世难忘！

点评：从文章的立意来看，是写对爷爷的怀念之情，题目是“难忘的背影”，应紧紧围绕爷爷的背影来写，写爷爷的背影中渗透着怎样的祖孙情深，但文章用过多的笔墨写了参加爷爷葬礼时的情景，而非详细地刻画背影。文中多次出现“好开心，好开心”、“好美，好美”、“挺好的，挺好的”，语言略显平乏，不太具体和生动。另外，一个小建议，“舅舅扶起奶奶，催促快走，快走，并安慰着奶奶：‘爸过得挺好的，挺好的’”，应该是“叔叔”，不是“舅舅”。

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