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10002024年中考英语作文评分标准
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+ 加入清单1、 内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2、内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3、 内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4、只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。所以,在写作文的时候,大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整,我们首先要认清看好题目的要求,抓住要点,注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下,自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后,再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅,这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上,注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上,也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段,考生应注意语法点有:动词单三形式,时态(包括:现在进行时,一般过去时,将来时),定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用),语态,单复数,主谓一致,冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如,我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成I very like football.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时,要知道应用文的写作方法。
除了以上的四个方面,还建议考生们要检查:单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候,要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样,我们才能有足够的时间去构思,去打草稿。在评卷的时候,第一印象很重要,所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服,干净,整齐。
中考英语中,很多学生自感基础很差,主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差,但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息,依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求,同时文章通顺,无严重语法和拼写错误,一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
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course by a winding black line across the landscape; and the leafless trees,
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intricacies of their branches. What silence, too, came with the snow, and what
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