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1000初一暑假英语
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+ 加入清单The summer vacation is here, and the students are very happy. Now I will
introduce to you how my summer vacation was spent.
When I started to do my homework during the summer vacation, I was always
afraid that I would not finish it. As a result, on July 15th, I was almost
finished. After a few days, the rest of the homework was finished, and there
were only two essays left. I didnt write until August 14th. Next week, my
parents are going to take me to play for two days. I am very happy. Summer is
almost over and I really wish it would be longer.
The summer vacation is almost over, and I have something to worry
about.
Its just that I havent written an essay yet. The school will start soon,
when will I write? In ancient times, people often said: The young and the strong
do not work hard, and the boss is sad. We want us to cherish time, but if I am
different, I will waste time. I am lazy. I hope this shortcoming can be
corrected. I hope you can support me a lot!
Today is the first day of my learning to swim. Before that, I prepared some
necessary things for swimming, such as swimming caps, swimming trunks, swimming
goggles, etc., and I was excited for several days, looking forward to todays
arrival.
When I came to the swimming pool of Baolihao Fitness Center, I saw that the
water was clear and clear, and it could be used as a mirror. I was in a group
with three other children, who, like me, came to study on the first day. Our
main task today is to practice holding and breathing. Yutian, I have never been
in contact with water, so at first I was afraid to hold my breath because of the
water, but when I saw everyone elses head sinking, I mustered up the courage to
sink my head, but it took less than six seconds to come out, and the other
students It took me about 30 seconds to hold back. It seems that I have to do my
best.
When I got home, my mother told me that I have to be determined to do
anything. Since I have gone to learn, I must learn it. If some movements are not
in place, I must find a way to practice more. I think what my mother said makes
a lot of sense, so I practiced holding my breath in the washbasin at night. It
lasted for more than 20 seconds at most. It seems that as long as I work hard, I
can do better. If there is a will, things will come true !
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总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
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不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
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7:30a.m. to 9:00a.m. every morning and lunch at noon. He also has dinner about
6:30p.m. to 7:30p.m in the evening. What he eats is healthy food, such as, meat,
vegetable, fruit, egg, milk and so on. He would not have some snacks for a meal.
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Recently, more and more people have private car, but the roads are so narrow
that we have to fight against the heavy traffic when we go out. Especially
during the rush hours, cars and buses are unable to move. To make things worse,
many people are killed in the traffic accidents. How miserable it is!
For the sake of our life and security, some measures must be taken to
change the present situation. In the first place, as there are a great many
cars, we should control the number of private cars and vehicles and use the
public transportation more often. Secondly, the government should widen the
roads and build more flyovers, so as to ease the traffic pressure and reduce the
traffic accidents. In addition, the undergrounds and light rails should be
constructed, so that we can have more choices when going out and do not have to
worry about the traffic jams in the future.
I believe the traffic problem could be solved if we devote our actions to
them.
篇15:有关坚持英语初一
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+ 加入清单Last night, I watched a tennis game, it was the US open, because there was
a Chinese female player came to the semi-final, so I stayed up to watched the
game. Unluckily, she was injured twice, though she still wanted to finish the
game, her body situation did not allow her to do so. Her insistence moved so
many audience, they gave her the biggest applause.
The power of insistence is great, it will help you set free your potential
and keep move on. Just for the players, they will face all kinds of incidences
now and then, but the will to insist will make them finish the game. Sometimes,
people win the game not because of their excellent skills, but their strong
will. Those who can stick on to the final line will win people’s applause.
What’s more, when people insist to finish the game, it is the respect that
they show to their opponents. Their spirit deserves people’s applause.
Insistence is a merit, we should keep it, no matter what we do, we must remember
to insist.
篇16:成都英语作文高一100词
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+ 加入清单ChengDu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province.This city is well
decorated and designed which attrects lots of tourists every year.
Chengdu has large amounts of tourist spots such as Wangjiang Park,Dujiang
Dam and so on.Such spots are all easy to get and they dont cost much.Whatmore
,with the rapidly developing economy,Chengdu has become an international
metropolis.
Why not come to this amazing city to get a rest and have a look of these
beautiful sceneries.Just cherish this hardly-get chance.Dont hestitate.
篇17:有关交通英语作文初中
全文共 949 字
+ 加入清单In recent years ninny cities are faced with the problem of heavy traffic.
People have to waste more time on their way home or to work and even might be
involved in an acci dent. With the development of industry and population
expansion, this problem becomes more and more serious.
One solution is to lay down more roads. The solution has many advantages.
For ex ample, it can efficiently decrease the number of buses and trucks in many
main streets. But it will take up so much land that crowded cities become more
crowded. Another solu tion is to open up more bus lines. If more bus lines
should be opened up,the number of bicles and cars in the main streets would be
greatly decreased. But the disadvantage of this solution is that many people
wouldn’t feel so convenient os they used to.
In my opinion, the right solution to the problem is the combination of the
two, thatis, to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus
lines in downtown.
篇18:有关老师的英语
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+ 加入清单Hello! I’m Jessie. I like English very much, because of my English teacher,
Nettie. Today, I’ll introduce her to you.
In my eyes, she’s not a teacher, but a lovely girl and a good friend of
mine. She is not tall. She is thin. She has the long hair. Her face is round.
There are two small eyes on her face. She likes smiling. When she smiles, her
eyes just like the moon at the beginning of the month. I think she is very
beautiful girl.
She’s very kind, like an old friend. She can sing. She can draw. She can
dance. She can speak very good English. She can tell us stories. She can play
games with us. When we have an English lesson, we feel very happy. All of us are
interested in her lesson.
I have a good teacher. I think I’m very lucky.
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+ 加入清单What is the purpose of students studying hard all these years, of course
for the better future. Every parent wants their kids have advantage over others,
so they can be outstanding and have a good job. Students learn in campus, they
are in the stage of studying knowledge while getting a job soon, there is
necessary for them knowing something about society.
Before study in college, students focus all their attention on study for
entering a good college, they don’t need to care about other things, it is also
what their parents tell them. After entering college, it is a little different,
at this stage, study is no more the only task, students should have access to
society. They should make some preparation for the job hunting, knowing society
helps them get use to the society quickly. Some students only care about score,
when they find a job, the employer will ask him something about the public news,
but students have no idea, this is so bad. What’s more, getting familiar with
the society makes students find their own positions, they will know what they
want and fight for it.
The atmosphere of society is very different from campus, in order to better
adjust to finding a job, students should get to know society.
篇20:高二关于环境英语作文
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+ 加入清单I am a child of the suns mother, my name is called the earth. I used to live happy, wake up in the morning, light rain "hua" to give me a bath; People planted many trees and flowers in my body, to get dolled up on me, then, clean running around the sun mother I, let the sun mother look at my new skirt. In the afternoon, the children from school, and I do homework together and play with me together. At night, people also make me very beautiful, they gave me the street lamp, make me golden... The mother said: "the human also is really good, not only your dress is very beautiful, also play with you, you are so blessed, so lucky!"
But now, the human is not as great as the sun mother said. They throw rubbish in my body, I got into a lot of dirty, human "car" still love discharge of tail gas, the rain is full of dirty water, the more I to wash the dirty; People still love the disorderly cut down trees flowers and plants, destruction of street lamp, make clothes and they gave me a bad bad, dirty... The sun mother urged me to say: "you still get rid of those humans!" But the good and I dont have the heart to leave them. Because it make me a bad meal every day, sleep well, so, I got sick, floods, earthquakes often... Some said 2012 could be the end of me. People in the disaster, are aware of this they destroy me, and they began to care about me, love me! I believe in the days that followed, I will become more beautiful, beautiful!
我是太阳妈妈的孩子,我的名字叫地球。我以前生活的很快乐:早上一醒来,小雨就“哗啦啦”地给我洗澡;人们在我身上种了很多花草树木,把我打扮得漂漂亮亮的,然后,干干净净的我就围着太阳妈妈转来转去,让太阳妈妈看看我的新裙子。下午,孩子们放学了,就和我一起写作业,一起和我玩。晚上,人们也把我打扮的很漂亮,他们给我身上安上路灯,把我打扮的金灿灿的……太阳妈妈说:“人类还真好,不仅把你打扮的很漂亮,还和你一起玩,你真是太有福气,太幸运了!”
可是现在,人类也不像太阳妈妈说的那么好了。他们在我身上乱扔垃圾,把我搞得浑身脏兮兮的,人类的“车”还爱排放尾气,雨下下来的全是脏水,把我越洗越脏;人们还爱乱砍伐树木花草,破坏路灯,把他们给我的衣服也搞得的烂烂的,脏脏的……太阳妈妈劝我说:“你还是摆脱那些人类吧!”可是好心的我又不忍心丢下他们。因为这件事让我每天吃不好饭,睡不好觉,所以,我就生病了,经常发洪水、地震……还有人说2012年可能是我的末日。人们在这些灾难中,意识到了这都是他们破坏我而造成的,于是他们又开始关心我,爱护我了!我相信以后的日子里,我一定会变得更加美丽、漂亮的!