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1000奋斗英语作文初二80词
全文共 782 字
+ 加入清单Since we go to school, we are taught that no pain, no gain, it means that
if people want to be successful, they must work hard. But the truth is that not
everyone can get what they want, even they work hard so much, but if working
hard does not bring success, why should they still need to work hard. In my
opinion, working hard doesn’t mean the person can success certainly, success
needs more factors, like the time, the luck and other things. There is no doubt
that if the person does not work hard and fight for his goal, there is no way
for him to get what he wants. Some actors start their career at the very young
age, when they are also 40, they become famous suddenly, if they give up, they
can’t be waiting for their reputation. So working hard, there is much chance to
get succeed.
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篇1:放松英语作文初中
全文共 1100 字
+ 加入清单What does it mean to relax?Despite hearing this term thousands of times
during the course of our lives, very few people have deeply considered what it’s
really about.
When you ask people (which I have done many times) what it means to relax,
most will answer in a way that suggests that relaxing is something you plan to
do lateryou do it on vacation, in a hammock, when you retire, or when you get
everything else done. This implies, of course, that most other times should be
spent nervous, agitated, rushed, and frenzied. Very few actually come out and
say so, but this is the obvious implication.Could this explain why so many of us
operate as if life were one great big emergency?
It is useful to think of relaxation as a quality of heart that you can
access on a regular basis rather than something reserved for some later time.
You can relax now. It’s helpful to remember that relaxed people can still be
superachievers and, in fact, that relaxation and creativity go hand in hand.When
I’m feeling uptight, for example, I don’t even try to write. But when I feel
relaxed, my writing flows quickly and easily.
篇2:关于故宫的英语作文初中
全文共 1012 字
+ 加入清单Ive been to a lot of beautiful places, but in my mind, the most important
thing in my mind is the Forbidden City.
The Forbidden City is a place where the ancient emperor of China can live.
The imperial palace has: temple of heaven, echo wall, emperors study and so on
many beautiful places. There are colorful flowers in the temple of heaven, very
beautiful. The flowers and grasses and the famous flowers and plants are all
numerous and numerous, very beautiful, far from looking like a colorful flower
in the open. Like a fairyland on earth. The temple of heaven is not a famous
artist.
The echo wall is a miracle of acoustics, which is a masterpiece of ancient
craftsman. The wall tiles of the echo wall are not as strong as others. It is
specially made in shandong linqing place. The slurry brick is exquisite, and the
sound of the metal sound, commonly known as the gold brick. If you shout in the
echo wall, the echo will be strong.
Its better to see if you have the chance, and believe that it will make
you feel better.
篇3:关于地震的英语
全文共 612 字
+ 加入清单Yesterday afternoon, when I was sitting in the classroom and listening to
the teacher. Suddenly, the screen seemed moving and it started to shake. My
teacher stopped his class and then he asked us to calm down. He let the students
who were close to the door left first, and then the rest of us ran out of the
classroom one by one. After a while, everything seemed to be normal, the teacher
asked us to go back to the classroom. Later I learned that there indeed came the
earthquake. I admired our teacher so much, in the important moment, he did not
run away, but considered us in the first place. He is a good teacher.
篇4:高一清明英语词
全文共 579 字
+ 加入清单It`s one of the traditional Festivals of Chinese.And it `s a day in honour
to Quyuan,who is one of the greatest poet in China.Qingming is also one of the
24seasonal division points in China.It is may 5th on April in every year.On that
day,people will free of work or school that in memory of their ancestors.Besides
parents will take their children to the countryside,where they may have a
picinc.As the festival is in spring,It`s warm and comfortable,families often go
to parks to fly the kites.
This is the Qingming Festival,I hope you can come here next year during
Qingming Festival.
篇5:有关圣诞节英语作文高中
全文共 580 字
+ 加入清单It is known to all that Christmas Day is on December 25th. It is the
biggest day in the western countries. But not so many people know about the
White Christmas in China. The day before Christmas Day, if it snows, then the
world is in white color. People are happy about that, because they think it
means the happiness and luck. So that’s the meaning of White Christmas. It
always snows a lot on Christmas Eve, because it is in winter in the western
countries. All the families get together and enjoy their moment while watching
the white snow. What an enjoyable atmosphere for a family.
篇6:关于奥运会英语
全文共 301 字
+ 加入清单My father likes to watch all kinds of sports, so when I spend the time with
him, we watch the match together. The Summer Olympic Games is coming soon, I
feel so excited, my father will follow the games and I will company him. It is a
great time for both of us. We share our opinion and talk like friends.
篇7:万圣节英语作文
全文共 883 字
+ 加入清单It is hit by in the children eye , is is a festival being full of the mysterious color.
The veil of night comes , colourful putting on makeup of the children field put on just too impatient to wait is accustomed to , puts on the exceedingly strange mask, mention previous "Jack light " running go out to play.
And then "Jack light " appearance is very lovable , method of work is that Spanish gourd is hollowed out, outside engrave be all smiles the eye and big mouths, having inserted a candle , it is ignited in melon, people just can see this charmingly naive smiling face in very distant place.
The portable child "Jack light " punishing the ready queen , disguising self as all sorts of evil-doers group, runs before the neighbour door of a house , intimidates as the field is shouting: "Ask a practical joke to still be to being entertained " ", given money to still being eaten".
篇8:中秋节英语
全文共 1082 字
+ 加入清单The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on
the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family
will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front
of the house.
On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away
from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will
light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with
their own toy lanterns happily.
At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon
while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can
look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that
there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To
protect the frighten the dragon away.
中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日,在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天,家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子,把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的,灯笼挂在屋前。
晚上有一顿美餐,离家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后,人们点亮灯笼,一般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼。
晚上月亮又圆又大,人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特别的食品——月饼。人们在一起回顾过去,展望未来。据说天上有一条龙,它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮,孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。
篇9:关于改变自己英语
全文共 2194 字
+ 加入清单In our daily life, we can learn something from some cases. However, from my
point of view, I think that it is essential for us to know ourselves in a right
way. People who have a full awareness of the importance to improve themselves
will discover themselves continuously. Therefore, we can say that if we want to
change ourselves, we must bravely reveal ourselves.
Every coin has two sides, and we are no exception. When we experience some
situations, we will find that there are many advantages of us. Thus, we can have
a huge sense of satisfaction. We may have a little pride, because we are happy
that we can make good use of our advantages to solve more difficult problems in
the future. However, at the same time, we also can realize that there are still
some disadvantages of us. These disadvantages will bring us different
influences. I’d like to point out that people who can bravely accept and remove
their disadvantages will gain a bright future. On the contrary, people who
choose escape or ignorance their disadvantages will indulge themselves, and they
no further progress.
Don’t indulge yourself. If we indulge ourselves, we will meet more terrible
suffering in our later life. I know that when we find our weakness, we may say
that I will never do that again, and regret doing so meaningless thing. I am
such a fool. But when we meet similar situations next time, we will still tell
ourselves that it doesn’t matter that I do it again. Then we will indulge
ourselves to expand our disadvantages. It shows that some people who have no own
principle will fail to realize their promises. When we can overcome our
laziness, we will understand that solving some problems may be not so difficult.
Therefore, we should try our best to control ourselves to pursue higher
development.
There are no any excuses to indulge yourself. We should tell ourselves that
we are capable to overcome our weakness, though it needs much time. However, if
we succeed once, then we will be successful again. Last, we don’t indulge
ourselves. We will become more complete.
Everyone can take actions to improve themselves. Don’t indulge yourself. If
you succeed, you will acquire a huge wealth, and your life will become more
brilliant.
篇10:有关老师的英语
全文共 685 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss
Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficult when we began to study
English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came
into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She
said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the
fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened
carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class
was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more
interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss
Wei!”
篇11:关于游泳的英语作文高3
全文共 821 字
+ 加入清单I’m neither interested in sports nor good at it. But except swimming. I can
swim since I was a baby. My mother tells me that she let me swim in the water
with a life-buoy when I was 20 days old. And then I can swim gradually. When I
grow up, I like swimming very much. I swim all the year round. Swimming in
summer makes me feel comfortable to lower my temperature. While winter swimming
makes me feel excited and achievability. In general, swimming keeps me fit in
both physical and mental. Whenever I feel upset, I would go swimming and then I
would be full of energy and feel relax. Besides I believe it is due to swimming
that I’m so thin. Who wants to lose weight, join me. We can make more friends in
swimming. Oh, I couldn’t wait to swim now. But it is ten o’clock in the evening.
I have to go to sleep. Good night everyone.
篇12:2024全国卷高考英语作文评分标准
全文共 2666 字
+ 加入清单1 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。
5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
Ⅰ. 第五档(很好);(21-25分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点
⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,
⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 , 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好):(16-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅲ. 第三档(适当):(11-15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解
⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差):(6-10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务
⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者
Ⅴ. 第一档(差):(1-5分)
未完成试题规定的任务
⑴明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。
Ⅵ. 不得分:(0分) ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要
求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀:
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
避免句式单调(简单句,并列句,复合句等适度调整)
表达意思清楚无误:具体化,细节化
可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”,用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有:并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
2015年高考英语全国I卷
写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例
——领会高考阅卷要求,有效指导学生高考写作备考
【作文题】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍;
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约 400 词;
4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准
评分总则:
1、本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分),然后确定其所属的具体档次,以该档次的要求来衡量,最后给分。其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点,分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则:
优秀(22--25):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,行文流畅,显示出较强的语言运用能力,允许有个别语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
篇13:关于长城的英语
全文共 326 字
+ 加入清单China has a history of more than 5,000 years and many miracles were
created. The Great Wall is the most famous to foreigners. Many of them come to
Beijing and have a look at this great tourist sites. As the damage from
environment and human beings, this great wonder needs us to protect. So it is
important to be a polite tourist.
篇14:高一励志英语100字
全文共 945 字
+ 加入清单Now, the new semester has begun for more than one week. I gradually adapt
to my new life in senior school. In senior school, my biggest feeling is busy,
for I have classes all the day and teachers leave us a lot of homework. In the
morning, I have two periods for morning reading, Chinese and English, beginning
from 7:00. After that, I have four periods in the morning and four other in the
afternoon. There are many more subjects than in middle school, Chinese, math,
English, physics, chemistry, history and so on. Sometimes, I am afraid of seeing
so many textbooks in my desk. In addition, the contents are much more difficult
than before. Math and physics are the most difficult ones for me. No matter how
hard I work, I still can’t do well in them, which makes me frustrated.
Therefore, in the new beginning, I must change my learning strategies to make my
work more effective. All in all, my new life in new school is good and rich,
though it’s busy.
篇15:满分高中英语作文
全文共 651 字
+ 加入清单The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
篇16:五、论文摘要注意事项
全文共 258 字
+ 加入清单(1)摘要中应排除本学科领域已成为常识的内容;切忌把应在引言中出现的内容写入摘要;一般也不要对论文内容作诠释和评论(尤其是自我评价)。
(2)用简单而直接的句子。避免使用成语、俗语或不必要的技术性用语。
(3)删除无意义的或不必要的字眼。但也不要矫枉过正,将应有的字眼过份删除,如在英文中不应删除必要的冠词如a an the等。
(4)尽量少用缩写字。在英文的情况较多,量度单位则应使用标准化者。特殊缩写字使用时应另外加以定义。
(5)不要将在文章中未提过的数据放在摘要中。
(6)不要置放图或表于摘要之中,尽量采用文字叙述。
篇17:保护动物的英语
全文共 552 字
+ 加入清单The animal is the friend of our human beings. We live in the same earth.
Animals and human beings can’t be separated from each other. But some animals
are getting less and less. So it’s necessary for us to protect animals,
especially wild animals. Some people kill wild animal because of money. It’s
illegal. Beside, because of the development of society, human needs more space
to live in, so we explore the forest. Animals have less space to live in. The
number of wild animals decreases year by year. It’s high time to take actions to
protect wild animals.
篇18:高一英语作文我的理想
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+ 加入清单When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their ownthings to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up asa cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That isnot my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries."Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiarwith it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it.From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to makecontributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I couldonly do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, andalways let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what hesaid is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have aveteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will beplaying the game that the network server to the black. My account will revisethe highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caughtby the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computerskills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advancethis goal, to improve their computer skills.
篇19:关于电脑的英语
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+ 加入清单Computer is increasingly popular in people’s daily life. The number of
computer in every family is more than TV set. Some people think it is so great
that they all regard it as a gift from the heaven. However, some people consider
it brings more disadvantages than advantages. In my opinion, both opinions are
correct, but if we can use computer in a proper way, its advantages are superior
to disadvantages. I have several reasons.
On the one hand, computer makes human beings’ life become easier. People
can do many things that they can’t do before. They can read newspaper without
buying it, only sitting in front of their computer, clicking mouse to open
website. Shopping online, watching movies, listening music and play computer
games are the common things that people often do by computer. But without
computer, they can’t do all these easily. In addition, computer is also very
helpful for study and work. People can have classes and work on it.
On the other hand, computer has so many attractive things that some people
will be addicted to it. Some of them may busy finding funs on it, and then
ignore their real duty, such as, study and work. As a result, it will have great
bad effect on their future.
To sum, computer has advantages and disadvantages. But if people can
control themselves to use computer properly, it is useful for their whole
life.
篇20:端午节的高一英语
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+ 加入清单There are many festivals in our country, such as the Spring Festival, the Lantern Festival, the Mid-Autumn festival, but the most memorable one is the Dragon Boat Festival this year.
That day, tian teacher brought a bag of hot dumplings, they wear white belts, wearing a green shirt, laughingly lying in his pockets, as if to say to me: "come and eat me. Are the perfume, my stomach was already in the singing, gawk at my desk, I looked at the appetizing brown meat, very anxious to go up to bite.
Mr. Tian seemed to guess our thoughts, and said, laughing, "hungry cats, have a taste. "Hooray!" The students were dancing with joy. Mr. Tian slowly took off the clothes of the zongzi, showing the white and white glutinous rice balls, and some rubies on the glutinous rice. After a while, finally it was my turn, I skipping took to the podium, picked up a toothpick, gently thorn under a mass of glutinous rice, dip in a little bit of sugar, healthy-looking and happily. When I got back to my seat, I had a mouthful of food, and I put it in my mouth. It was so sweet. Finally, it is delicious to lick the white sugar on my lips. I didnt like eating zongzi before, and why I changed my mind today. Peng liying also went up and stabbed a small group, strutted down the stage, came to my seat and proudly gave me the delicious zongzi. I with poor eyes staring at her (mean, give me some) she stared my one eye (means I havent sample) so she gobbled down the zongzi, keep shout delicious. My last glimmer of hope was dashed.
Everyone looked at the last few rice dumplings in the hand of tians teachers. Tian said, "who hasnt eaten zongzi yet?" Everyone raised their hands and said, "I, I, I." Before the teacher ordered that all were crowding on the platform, packed liuxue86.com field teacher doesnt know what to do, even the really not eat the rice dumplings that male students have also been squeezed behind us in the distance. You thorn, I see, the time is finally arrived, just put the hand inside a stretch, alas! I was struck by someones toothpick, and I was like an ant on a hot pot. Only the last zongzi was left, and everyone was so crowded that the dumplings were torn apart by us, and the teacher was busy and busy. When I was disappointed, tian teacher suddenly turned into my mouth was a mass of rice dumplings, joyous and pleased, I happily returned to the seat, whilst placing a hand over your mouth cant say how sweet in my heart. When the dumplings were finished, some students returned to their seats disappointed. Some students were so happy that they took a lot of dumplings.
This happy Dragon Boat Festival is really unforgettable to me.