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1000关于中考英语作文的评分标准明细
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:
2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)
2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)
2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少15个词扣0.5分,610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
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i am very glad to hear from you. you asked me about the change of school education in china. we are really happy about the changes called on to reduce learning load. before i had to study six days a week and i always went to bed after 11:30. i seldom had free time to do what i like. but now i have more spare time. i can read many interesting books, watch tv or even do some sports. and i never feel tired in the class as before, because i go bed at 10:00. all of my classmates are happy about this new arrangement of things.
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do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was
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country. Actually, every country is not perfect. Recently, I have learned a lot
about America, which helped me make the better judgment. A video was made by a
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lose faith when we see the bad sides.
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this in every human endeavor. Outstanding sportsmen spend all their time
practising. Their endurance is beyond imagination.
The same is true of businessmen who build up fortunes. What we usually see
are their achievements, but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they
have put in a lot of continual steady efforts. We all have read of great
musicians, writers and inventors who have created or discovered breakthroughs in
human achievement. Invariably they have said that they owe all their success to
perseverance. As to college students, quite a big number of then, have become
successful language learners through perseverance, however, a certain group of
them, just stop half way and their previous efforts turn out to be
fruitless.
Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunders is perhaps one
of the most outstanding. The 65-year-old man from Kentucky had a dream to start
a chain of fried chicken restaurants all over the world. To realize his dream,
he knew that he needed a restaurant owner to go into partnership with him to
open the first restaurant and to fry chicken according to the secret recipe he
had. Colonel Saunders had knocked on 1008 doors before he finally found his
partner. It is doubtful whether many of us would have had the perseverance to
knock even a hundred doors.
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month.
Everyone knows that Dragon Boat Festival can dragon boat and eat seeds. But
this year, Im not the same.
In the morning I opened my eyes and caught my brother in a noisy voice.
Come out, theyre eating the seeds! I couldnt wait to brush my teeth and grab a
seed to eat. At noon, my brother and I took a "healthy bath". Soon I and my
brother were in the water.
Even though I didnt have the grass. But I had an interesting Dragon Boat
Festival.