我有一个好老师英语作文（精彩20篇）

老师像一位辛勤的园丁，助我们在阳光下成长；老师像一盏明灯，照亮了我们前方的道路；老师更像一根细小的火柴，用自己的火光点燃了我们心中的蜡烛。

让我记忆深刻的是教了我们两年的英语老师。

老师并不算高。一米五七左右的个字，喜欢穿裙子，时常带着她的尺子来给我们上课。

老师的尺子更是让我深有感触，那是一把30厘米左右的铁尺，尺子上的刻度已经磨掉了不少，尺子上凹凸不平，一看就是有些年头的了。尺子的用处更是多样：用来点屏幕上的句子，单词，用来画线，还用来“警告”那些分心的同学。一次，我上课时分了神，发起了呆，正当我入迷时，只见我眼前突然闪过了一道银光，我吓了一跳，等我回过神来，我仔细一看，原来是老师的尺子，我顺着尺子往上看，我看见英语老师板着脸站在那里，手用尺子在我桌子上点两三下，尺子与桌子碰撞发出的“砰砰”声如炸雷一般在我耳边响起，我立马提了提神，看向书本，读起了书。虽然老师没有跟我说一句话，但她尺子和神情却深深震撼了我，从那以后，我上英语课再也没有发过呆……

老师的教学属于脚踏实地那种类型，书本里的重点难点，该抄的，该默的，该读的，该背的，一个都跑不掉。也许你会说老师太严厉了吧，那你就大错特错了，每到考试时，就会明白当初抄的是有用的，没有浪费！虽然有时口头上会抱怨太多，但又明白，今天的辛苦是为了以后可以不那么辛苦。

哈，这便是我们严格而又不失温柔，严肃而又不失幽默的英语老师。

[关于我的英语老师作文

1. 愿你插上一对有力的翅膀。坚韧地飞吧，不要为风雨所折服;诚挚地飞吧，不要为香甜的蜜汁所陶醉。朝着明确的目标，飞向美好的未来。

2. 没有秋霜的锤打，没有秋风的锻铸，秋天的枫叶怎会周身红彻?愿你像这火红的枫叶，在生活的风霜中染成鲜红的颜色!

3. 假如生活是一条河流，愿你是一叶执著向前的小舟;假如生活是一叶小舟，愿你是个风雨无阻的水手。

4. 愿你是一棵树：春天，吐一山淡淡的香味;夏天，洒一抹如泉的凉荫;秋天，举一树甜甜的青果;冬天，做一个养精蓄锐的好梦!

5. 让时间在知识的枝条上、智慧的绿叶上、成熟的果实上留下它勤奋的印痕!

6. 你有涌泉一样的智慧和一双辛勤的手，不管你身在何处，幸运与快乐时刻陪伴着你!

7. 亲爱的孩子，你有着最令人羡慕的年龄，你的面前条条道路金光灿灿，愿你快快成长起来，去获取你光明的未来。

8. 你的天赋好比一朵火花，假如你用勤勉辛劳去助燃，它一定会变成熊熊烈火，放出无比的光和热来。

9. 愿你是风，鼓起白色的帆;愿你是船，剪开蓝色的波澜。生活正在你的前方微笑，勇敢的走上前去，将彩色的人生拥抱。

10. 不要学花儿只把春天等待，要学燕子把春天衔来。

11. 世间最可宝贵的就是今天，最易丧失的也是今天;愿你在未来的一年中，无限珍惜这每一个今天。

12. 明天，这是个美丽灿烂。辉映着五光十色的迷人的字眼。愿你的明天无限美丽。无限灿烂。无限迷人!

13. 高尚的理想是人生的指路明灯。有了它，生活就有了方向;有了它，内心就感到充实。迈开坚定的步伐，走向既定的目标吧!

14. 春天是碧绿的天地，秋天是黄金的世界。愿你用青春的绿色去酿造未来富有的金秋!

15. 愿你们驾驶着信念铸造的航船，到希望的大海去犁出雪白的浪花。

16. 你是花季的蓓蕾，你是展翅的雄鹰，明天是你们的世界，一切因你们而光辉。

17. 朝霞般美好的理想，在向你们召唤。你们是一滴一滴的水，全将活跃在祖国的大海里!

18. 愿我的临别赠言是一把伞，能为你遮挡征途上的烈日与风雨。

19. 不要说一天的时间无足轻重，人生的漫长岁月就由这一天一天连接而成;愿你珍惜生命征途上的每一个一天，让每天都朝气蓬勃地向前进。

20. 假如你曾有过虚度的时光，请不要以叹息作为补偿;明天的路途毕竟长于逝去的岁月。快迈步，前面相迎的是幸福的曙光!

新学期开始了，我们班换了个新的英语老师——曹老师。

我第一眼看到她就觉得她比以前的英语老师年轻漂亮得多。她的眉毛又细又长，眼睛又大又亮，非常有神。她的头发非常奇怪，前面留了刘海，靠耳朵的头发修剪得尖尖的，后面的头发有尖也有平，这种发型我还真没见过！不过我最关心的不是她的样子，而是她教得好不好。

等到开学的第一天，我终于能听到曹老师讲课了。我觉得她的普通话讲得不是很标准，不过她每一个英语词句的发音读得一清二楚，每个英语词句的意思解释得明明白白。

曹老师要是在上课时发现有同学违反了纪律或是习惯不好的现象，她就会讲道理，从来不打人，这一点她做得很好。

现在曹老师己成为我心目中语、数、英三科老师中最好的一个了，我希望能变得更好。曹老师真是个既漂亮又能干的好老师，不得看得舒服，学得也愉快。不过我只担心好老师会走哦。

我喜欢我的英语老师，我们都叫她张老师，她既是我们的英语老师，又是我们的电脑老师。张老师不胖不瘦，身材特别好，一张瓜子脸，乌黑光亮的头发下面有一对月牙般的眉毛，眉毛下有一对动人的慧眼，似乎能看透我们的心思，她的鼻子高高的，她说话字正腔圆。一笑起来，两边便会有一个迷人的酒窝，她的耳朵也很灵，仿佛掉下一根针，她都能听到。架在鼻子上的一副眼镜给她增添了一分严肃。

她上课时很会用一些英文单词，句子等，让我们在哄堂大笑中明白了许多英语句子的意思，她还教会我们一些四年级课本上还没有出现的句子。

有一次，正在上英语课的时候，张老师说要找几个演员上台表演，当然我也被老师给挑上去了，但是，她们第一个说出来形容我的英文句子竟然是“she’sverytall”用中文表达就是她非常高。顿时，全班乱成一锅粥，都在哈哈大笑，老师也笑了，但过了大约1分钟左右，老师不笑了，表情开始严肃起来。但同学们还在笑，老师拿起棍子在讲桌上恶狠狠的敲了两下。一听这声音，“哎呀!完啦!老师发火了,”我心想。全班立刻恢复了往常上课的平静。我们被老师狠狠的吵了一顿。

通过这件事以后，我们班以后不管是上英语课，还是上信息课，除了三四个个别同学以外，其他的都很认真地听老师讲课。

这就是我们的英语和信息课老师——张老师，难道你觉得这样的英语老师不值得我尊敬吗?

我的英语老师并不是我的班主任，但她也并没有因为这个而更偏向于她的班级，相反，她总是一视同仁。

英语老师带着一副没有任何装饰的眼镜，就像她的性格，很直，虽然有时说话会有些重，但每个同学也都是明白他的用心良苦的;她的眉毛很浓，这也算是远看上去，老师最大的特点了吧;老师的个子也是不高，几乎全班同学都会有她高，但是她在同学们的心中却是无比高大的……但无论如何，老师的教学水平还是很不错的。

我是英语课代表，所以在英语方面我是一向不敢有一点怠慢的，在之前的每一次考试中，我也是有惊无险的坐在第一名的宝座上(在这里说一句实在话，这真的是很累，每次都得付出那么多，我也都是有一些厌烦了)。但是上次的期末考试，确实让我栽了个跟头，我的英语成绩一向是维持在140分左右的，考试这次竟然130分都考不到，这让我有些惊讶，更有些害怕，在几天后的通英语老师的交谈中，我也是从她的眼神中看到了一丝失望，这让我下定决心在今后一定要更加发奋学习。

当然，在英语方面，我也是犯了一些原则性的错误。前几天，老师突然在早上检查起了作业，要知道平日里老师是很少用课堂上的时间来做这样耽误时间的事的。可是那天，也是因为我的一些失误，作业有些未完成的没有告诉老师(再说句实话，告诉老师，真的很得罪人，就是因为怕得罪人，所以.....可是，世界上哪里有不自私的人啊?!!)也是被狠批了一顿，并跟着他们被多布置了几遍作业。对此，我很是心服，我也当然知道这是不对的，是害了同学。可是我却是因为怕得罪同学，我觉得这是我思想上的问题，今后我也应当正确承担起课代表应付的责任，真心为同学服务，所以，这也应了一开始我就说的话，老师对一切同学都是一视同仁的!

这便是我的英语老师，一个能够一视同仁，为同学着想，一个真正让我心服的老师!

学。

Dear teachers

hello everyone!

"Spring comes early again", the Spring Festival of the year of the dragon

is quietly coming to us. On the occasion of the Spring Festival, president Xu of

pinggudian Town Central School, together with the leading class of the central

school, extended new years blessing and festival greetings to all the teaching

staff and retired teachers who have been working hard in the teaching line. I

would like to express my high respect and sincere thanks to the families of the

staff who have been caring and supporting the work of the school for a long

time!

The past year has been an extraordinary year. It has been a year in which

we have worked hand in hand, overcome difficulties, forge ahead in unity, and

work hard to start a business. It has also been a year of great achievements and

good news. Under the correct leadership of the County Bureau of education and

sports, all the cadres and staff of pinggutian central school are in the same

boat, united in spirit, striving hard and enterprising, overcoming difficulties,

striving for first-class achievements, and making remarkable achievements in

education and teaching under the correct leadership of the county education and

Sports Bureau It is presented. The schools school running conditions have been

significantly improved, the school running taste has been gradually improved,

the classroom teaching reform has been continuously deepened, the quality of

education and teaching has achieved leapfrog development, the preschool

education has made breakthrough progress, the achievements of art education have

been fruitful, and the provincial education supervision and evaluation has

passed the high standard All these are full of the painstaking efforts and sweat

of our front-line teachers. 2012 is the "year of quality improvement". Our

education and teaching management needs to be further standardized, classroom

teaching reform needs to be further deepened, and the quality of education and

teaching needs to be further improved. The new years bell has sounded, the east

wind is surging, and the clarion calls for expeditions. We are about to embark

on a new journey full of hope, opportunities and challenges. Let us use the

sonorous and powerful oath, the indomitable spirit of struggle, and unremitting

efforts to compose a new chapter in the education of pinggutian central

school!

Dear teachers, winter vacation is a holiday full of happiness; Spring

Festival is an auspicious and happy festival. In order to let you have a

civilized and full Festival, the Central School suggests to you:

1. Give yourself more reminders

We should always pay attention to the safety of fire, electricity and gas

during the holidays. When visiting relatives and friends, we must pay attention

to guard against theft, close the doors and windows, lock the door, and do not

drive after drinking to ensure the safety of yourself and your family. We should

consciously avoid gambling, drinking, feudal superstitious activities and

indulging in the Internet. We should do more physical exercise every day and

take part in healthy and beneficial cultural and recreational activities. Pay

attention to scientific diet, dont overeat and take good care of your body.

2. Give more time to study

Winter vacation has a relatively concentrated, discretionary time, it is

recommended that we should arrange a little time for self charging. On the one

hand, we should sum up the experience and lessons in the work of this semester

and formulate the work plan for the next semester. On the other hand, we can

calm down and seriously familiarize ourselves with the curriculum standards of

teaching subjects. We should read the textbooks of next semester in advance,

read one or two good books, and study some educational and teaching theories. We

should constantly enrich, enrich and improve ourselves, let our thinking and

practice go hand in hand, so that we can better adapt to the class It is

necessary for the reform of classroom teaching.

3. Give your family more care

Enjoy the family, our life journey is not lonely, spread the family, can

win the respect of others. During the Spring Festival, lets be filial to our

elders, take care of our younger ones, and keep in touch with our friends. In

particular, we should take care of our bodies, experience the beauty of human

nature and feel a better life in dedication and care.

Finally, once again, I wish you all a safe, happy, peaceful and meaningful

festival. I wish all the staff a happy Spring Festival, all the best of luck,

good health and happiness for the whole family!

Pinggudian Town Central School

一直都想写我的英语老师，只是因为觉得学习不好，颇感内疚，不好意思来写。用我妈妈的话来说，他就是一个小男孩，我应该叫哥哥的。

他说话的样子十分夸张。他跟我们说在另一所学校里做班主任时，他安排的座位非常合理，因此学生成绩提高很快。我当然理解他的自豪，但我也理解我的班主任为何不采用。因为丁老师谈建议时的神情就像一只狗伸着舌头，流着口水，教一只猫如何分配自己盘中的鱼。明明一张很英俊的脸，有棱有角，鼻梁挺直，眼睛凹下，嘴唇也很性感。你不知道呀!他生气时目光看向远方，深沉而坚定，加上魁梧的身材，就像一位年轻的法老，站在他的城墙上，指点江山。可是除了生气时像个男人外，其他时候就是个小男孩了，大笑起来嘴很夸张地向上翅起，就像卡通画，让所有的人都可以感受到他的快乐。若是说到什么好事，他就像大公鸡似的炫耀他的两根粗粗的眉毛向上飞扬，眼中不时闪着像星星一样的光点，还手舞足蹈的，唾沫横飞，经常唾到前排同学的脸上。被人夸奖的时候，又显得女里女气的，十分腼腆。每次开考前，他在教室门外，他的嘴角像一只红色的狐狸，在雪中伸着一只爪子，望着一只兔子。

英语老师姓丁，家在阳曲，可能地理位置有些偏辟，所以考出来不大容易。本来在另一所中学里教高中，后来考入我校，校长让他教初中。这让他十分失望，有时还在学生中露出了像李白一样怀才不遇的痛苦和颓唐。有时又高兴地告诉我们，我们是他教的第一拔学生!?

可能是刚刚带学生，他有年轻老师的激情，为我们自费复印英语资料，很喜欢在读英语课文时，一边作着奇里古怪的样子，一边发出奇里古怪的声音。有时上课，讲着讲着就讲起了自己的自传，于是常常在自我的唾沫星子中陶醉得难以自拔。上他的课让我感到十分的快乐和高兴，只是因为成绩不好而十分愧对他。不知为什么，我学也学不好，只能在每次考完试以后都躲着他。很亏心很愧疚地面对他对我的微笑，但他从来不说我不好，一次又一次地原谅我。

又一次，语文老师让我们以描写一位老师的神态特征为作业，到了下节课是英语。他进来十分讨好的让我们写他。回家后我写了两篇，有一篇是写他的，到了教室，临交作业时我又拿回了，结果我的另一篇得了第一，上课时他说已看过，可惜不是写他的。到后来越到中考我觉得愧对老师，现在考完了，我却一直想着他，想着欠他的一篇作文。

Dear Yong

Hello! Thank you for accompanying us to grow up, let us feel the loving

care of a mother, you work hard every day, let us learn more knowledge.

I remember one time I and some dictation did not get 100 points, so I have

to stay to review the dictation. It was more than five oclock at that time. I

still didnt get all the dictation right the second time. You said to us, "its

too late, go home! Review well and dictation tomorrow. " In the afternoon of the

next day, I didnt get 100 points, so you left us to tutor alone after class

from Monday to Friday, but I never got 100 points. So you are very angry and

ask, "Wang Ziyi! Why didnt you get 100 points? Think about it. Is that your

level? " Its already more than six oclock after you severely criticized me.

You let me go home to review and dictation next time. Later, I finally got full

marks through hard work. I also remember that you told me to study hard and

steadfast!

Oh! Mr. Yong, you are more like us. No matter how hard you work and how

angry you are, you also patiently teach us to learn. You are really a good

teacher!

I will study hard in the future and live up to your expectations.

I wish you success in your work and happy every day!

Your student: Wang Ziyi

There is a lovely teacher in our class. we like her as our friends. we would like to tell her everything, sadness and happiness . She helps us on our lessons and guides us on other things. I am happy to have such a good teacher.

从小到大，我遇到过很多英语老师，但是让我印象最深刻的应该是我人生中的第一位英语老师。小学三年级，我们开始正式学习英语。小时候的我们总是对各种新鲜的事物充满好奇心，对于一门新的语言课程大家都充满了期待，期待学习一门语言，期待见到新的老师。

第一次上课时，大家把自己手中的英语课本翻来翻去，对里面的内容特别感兴趣，虽然我们那时还不知道那些都是什么意思。伴随着上课铃声响起，一位女老师走进了教室。老师看起来非常年轻，面带笑容，十分亲和。接着，老师进行了一番自我介绍，然后简单介绍了一下我们即将学习的英语课程。就这样，我人生中的第一节英语课正式开始看。老师教我们认识英语字母，教我们读单词，教我们读句子。非常有趣的一节英语课就这么过去了。

由于对新知识充满无限好奇，下课之后，同学们都涌向老师询问各种问题，而老师始终耐心给我们讲解。后来，为了我们更好学习英语，老师开始让我们背诵、听写。每次，总会有几个同学留在最后背不会或者总默写错误，老师也没有用严厉的话语指责他们，而是非常耐心的引导同学，帮助同学进行记忆，直至全部同学都完成。或许是因为老师，我们同学都对学习英语充满兴趣，最后考试成绩也都很好。

很庆幸，我有一位这么好的英语老师。

Ms jerry is a foreign teacher. she oomes from new zealand. she is thirty-one years old. she has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. she is tall and slim. she looks very kind. and in fact, she is kind indeed.

Ms jerry is a good teacher. although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. when we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.

Ms jerry teaches us english with great enthusiasm:" eaoh lesson she will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.

Ms jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.

[英语作文我的外籍老师

Dear Mr Fu,

This is my first letter to you. Its a thank-you letter!

Thank you for what? Thank you for teaching me and helping me.

When I am in trouble, is your warm hand to help me, not when I want to give

up when you use your words to support me, I sincerely thank you! Thank you very

much!

In the coming Christmas, I would like to express my deep thanks to you

again!

I wish you good health and good luck in everything!

Your students

亲爱的复老师

这是我给你写的第一制封信，是一封感谢信!

感谢什么呢?感谢你对我的教导，对我的帮助。

在我困难的时候，是你伸出温暖的手帮助我了我，没当我想放弃的时候是您用您的话语支持了我，我衷心的谢谢您!谢谢!

在圣诞节到来之际，我再次向你表达我深深的谢意!

祝您是身体健康，万事如意!

您的学生

Three grade, and we have an English class, teaches us English is a female teacher, she xing4 pan, we call her pan. Pan grow very beautiful, she is slim, her eyes are large, eyelash long, like comb furl hairstyle. One day in English class, pan with her gentle and pleasant sound tell stories in English, led us to read English words, we soon learned to pan, teacher like us, revealing the happy smiling face. That day, many of our classmates have a to do amiss, pan it carefully to teach us, teach again and again, never see her hair far and has never seen her appear impatient. Pan with her gentle and friendly voice asked: "can?" That sounds like a mother, like a warm breeze of our hearts, let me really moved! Again and again the pronunciation errors, dont have standard pronunciation, English teacher still use soft voice teach us. I like our English teacher -- pan teacher!

DearMissJiang,

IamwritingtosharemyideasaboutourEnglishclass.

Now, ourmainmaterialintheclassisthetextbook, whichisreasonable.

ButIthinkwecangetsomeotherresources, suchasEnglishmagazines, songs,

moviesandsoon.

Wecanlearnthebasicknowledgefromouttextbook,

andgetsomemorefromothermaterials.

Inaddition, thosematerialsaremoreauthenticandpractical,

whichwillbeusefultoourlearning.

Besides, bydoingso,

wecangetmorefunfromlearninganddevelopourinteresttoEnglish.

Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice. Thankyou!

SincerelyyoursBella

Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering, I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

[给老师一封信的英语作文

Miss Zhang is myChinese teacher. She is young and beautiful. She graduated from a famous universityof our country. She comes to our school for two years. I like her class verymuch, because she always can tell us interesting stories. In her class, everythingseems to be easy. She can lead the teaching joyful. I can learn a lot from her,because she is knowledgeable. I want to be such a knowledgeable person likeher.

张老师是我的语文老师，她年轻又漂亮。她毕业于我国的一所著名大学。她来我们学校已经有两年了。我很喜欢她的课，因为她经常给我们讲有趣的故事。在她的课堂上，每件事看起来都很简单。她能够把课堂引导得很欢快。我能够从她那里学到很多，因为她学识渊博。我想成为像她一样学识渊博的人。

[英语小作文我的老师

School for nearly two months, in school, many teachers have left a deep impression on me, but I the deepest impression is the kind of English teacher, ms liu.

He has blond hair, students think that it is dyed, but liu said: "it was born. We are all very surprised, he not only has a cool head of hair, but also full of teaching experience and the knowledge of English, he will use humorous language comes to our interest in learning, lets put in a special clever every knowledge to understand more thoroughly.

Whenever we have English class, the students are very excited, liu will teach us of the clever way to learn English, make learning English more simple and interesting. During the class, he will teach us English loudly shout out, also said: talented people are those who repeat the most times, we are going to step on my English.

On one occasion, liu taught to us "family show" this word, it means family show. At this time, liu said: "everyone seen rice didnt show! It is family show" homophonic ". We have also a listen to, really, from then on, the word gave me a very deep impression.

Our teacher liu is not only has the rich teaching experience, but also as a father, care to us. English whenever I ask him questions, he will patiently explain to me, until I completely understand. But liu for not writing homework classmates were not so good. Remember once, I forgot to write English homework, teacher liu gave me a piece of my mind. Since then, I have never experienced no homework. As an old saying goes, "the strict teacher I". Because of the teachers strict requirements, just make me in months exceeded otherregions made a good record in English.

He is my English teacher, he has an ordinary but great job and we all respect him, love him.

开学近两个月了，在学校中，许多老师都给我留下了较深的印象，但我印象最深刻的就是和蔼可亲的英语老师--刘老师。

他有一头金发，同学们都认为那是染出来的，但是刘老师却说：“那是天生的”。我们都很惊讶，他不仅有一头帅气的头发，而且还有一肚子的教学经验和英语知识，他会用幽默风趣的语言提起我们的学习兴趣，用特殊巧妙的方法让我们把每一个知识点理解的更透彻。

每当我们上英语课，同学们就十分兴奋，刘老师会教我们学英语的巧妙方法，让学英语变得更简单、有趣。上课期间，他会教我们大声喊出英语，还说：天才就是重复次数最多的人，我们要把英语踩在脚下。

有一次，刘老师给我们教了“family show”这个单词，它的意思是家庭秀。这时，刘老师说：“大家都看过‘饭没了秀’吧!它就是‘family show’的谐音”。我们一听，还真的是，从此，这个单词给了我无比深刻的印象。

我们的刘老师不仅有丰富的教学经验，而且还像一位慈父，对我们无比关怀。每当我去问他英语题时，他都会耐心的给我讲解，直到我完全懂为止。但刘老师对于不写作业的同学就没有那么仁慈了。记得有一次，我忘了写英语作业，刘老师把我批评了一顿。从此以后、我就再也没有不写作业的经历了。俗话说得好：“严师出高徒”。正因为老师的严格要求，才使我在月考中取得了不错的英语成绩。

他就是我的英语老师，他有着一个平凡而伟大的职业，我们都尊敬他，喜欢他。

Dear teacher ,

I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking English.

During these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. Firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking pattern—straight thinking pattern. And, I think, it is very important to understand the west’s thoughts. As you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. It’s great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not an boring thing as before and I’m interested in studying English which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. Reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and I really enjoy it.

Above all, I want to say thanks again to you. And thank you for your time.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

We have a good English teacher whose name is Bruce. He comes from Britain and he is about forty years old. He is a tall and thin person, wearing a pair of glasses which makes him more like a gentleman.

He is strict with us. He often makes full preparations for his class and corrects our homework carefully. His teaching style is very unique, because he is used to encouraging all of us to think by ourselves and study on our own. The relationship between Bruce and us is harmonious. He is so kind and friendly that every student likes him and respects him deeply.

Our teacher is so excellent that we all love him very much.

我们有一个很好的英语老师，他的名字叫Bmce。他来自英国，大约40岁。他是一个又高又瘦的人，戴着一副眼镜，这使他显得更有绅士风度。

他总是严格要求我们。他经常认真备课，认真为我们批改作业。他的教学风格很是与众不同，这是由于他总是习惯鼓励学生努力思考，并且培养我们的自学能力。我们之间的关系很融洽。他对人和蔼可亲，所以深受我们的爱戴和尊敬。

我们的老师很出色，我们都很喜欢他。

亲爱的老师：

你好!

曾记得在月光皎洁的夜晚，漫步您的窗前，屋内是您那徘徊的身影。您苦苦地思索着，只为一个个难题。那整齐的书桌上是盏困倦的灯，发出吱吱的微响。风儿不经意翻开您的教案，映在窗上是行行密密麻麻的字。

这就是您在教学路上留下的印记;这就是您在挥划未来蓝图的神圣的每一笔;这就是您在无私奉献的铁据!

漫漫的求学路，每一次都记载着您给予的感动;曲折的人生路，每一步都有您真心的叮咛和呵护。您用知识的全部浇灌一颗颗含苞待放的心，您用毕生的爱，温暖一颗颗曾经冷落寂寞的心

;您用天下最美的语言，将一个个心结打开，您用美丽的彩虹横跨我们彼此的心田。

在您的帮助下，一颗颗童心日益成熟，仰天长望，有着腾飞的欲望;临渊俯鱼，有着遨游的梦想。您给予我们奋斗前进的动力，您的谆谆教诲，您的知识精髓在我们内心深处筑起财富的雕塑。

您就是如此伟大，您培育了一个个精英，时代俊杰。您用自任的渺小塑造伟大，您用自觉的平凡点缀美丽;您用弯曲的脊背创造神话。

流水匆匆，秋风吹落您年轻的容颜;岁月无情，夏月晒弯您健朗的脊背;冬雪 皎皎，覆盖了您那黑发。但您“教书育人”的精神依旧抖擞焕发，不减当年。

斗转星移，世道万变;但不变的是那份闪着金光的师生情，那颗饱含复杂感情的感恩之心。

那是恩，是教育之恩，是启蒙之恩，是滴水当以涌泉相报的师恩。

它是情，是师生之情，亦是朋友情，也是那“非授之以肌肤，但传之以智慧”的“父母情”。

这是一份经得起时间考验，承受得住空间局限的恩情。

即使在黑夜，也永远忘不了在黑夜中摸索的手;即使是在人生腾达、立群峰以俯瞰天下的神圣时刻，也忘不了您在落泪时送来的片片春语;即使在为学业不顺而苦恼之日，也忘不了您那希冀的目光、鼓励的微笑。

您的每一次问候，每一次帮助，每一次关怀，都深深铭刻在我们的记忆里。

即使是暴雨来袭，即使是黄沙卷起，也带不走那颗感恩的心，那份真诚的、肃穆的敬意!

老师您是否看到那摇上树梢的月儿，它带着我的一片感恩之心和我最真挚的祝福：愿您天天有鲜花相伴，夜夜有星辰共随，也愿您在人生的大道上平平安安、快快乐乐!

此致

敬礼!

您的学生