我有一个好老师英语作文【汇集20篇】

My English teather is Miss Du ，her English name is Sally ，She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

She often reads books and English. Her hobby is reading books. Her teaching skills are diverse. In class, she usually uses games and posters. She works hard for us. When other teachers rest, she still keeps working and working。

In the class, she is our good teacher，And after class, she is our good friend. she loves us so much, and she is strict with us, So we study English happily and make progress quickly.

This is my English teacher. Our class mates all like her very much.We are really grateful for what she has done for us. We want to say thank you to her!

[我的老师英语作文200字

我的英语老师是个女教老师。她的眼睛大大的，耳朵有点小，鼻子呢微微向上翘，鼻梁上还架着一幅眼镜，大大的嘴巴。她的身材不是很胖，显得很匀称。

她对我们的学习要求很严格，每天布置的作业还要让家长签字，签字完了还要让家长用印章印，没签字的同学要罚站。检查作业时老师点到那个单词，谁要是会读，谁就可以坐下，要是不会读，就要站十分钟。有的时候，要是时间来不及了，老师会随便抽组检查，抽到那个组，就看那个组的作业。

有一次，我的英语作业忘记签字了，检查作业的时候，老师正好抽到了我们组，我害怕极了，心都快提到了噪子眼儿。可是老师快要抽到我的时候，却停了，老师没有看我的作业。好险哪儿!下一回可不能在出现这样的事情了。

我们的英语老师虽然很严格，不过我们还是很喜欢她的。

1、假如生活是一条河流，愿你是一叶执著向前的小舟;假如生活是一叶小舟，愿你是个风雨无阻的水手。

1, if life is a river, you are ready to move persistent leaf boat; if the life is a leaf boat, you would like to be a seaman regardless of the weather.

2、希望是坚韧的拐杖，忍耐是旅行袋，带上他们，你可以登上永恒之旅，走遍全世界。

In 2, hope that the tenacious crutches, patience is a bag, take them, you can board the eternal journey, all over the world.

3、不要学花儿只把春天等待，要学燕子把春天衔来。

3, not only the spring flowers to wait, to learn to swallow the spring title.

4、废铁之所以能成为有用的钢材，是因为它经得起痛苦的磨练。

In 4, iron can become useful steel, because it can withstand the pain.

5、愿你是永远奔腾的千里马。

In 5, I wish you are always running horse.

6、你聪颖，你善良，你活泼。有时你也幻想，有时你也默然，在默然中沉思，在幻想中寻觅。小小的你会长大，小小的你会成熟，愿你更坚强!愿你更自信!

6, your wisdom, your kindness, your lively. Sometimes you dream, sometimes you have silence, in silence and in meditation, in the fantasy for. Little youll grow up, little you will be mature, let you stronger! Wish you more confident!

7、你用才智和学识取得今天的收获，又将以明智和果敢接受明天的挑战。愿你永葆一往无前精神。

7, wisdom and knowledge you gain today, will be wise and courageous to accept the challenges of tomorrow. May you keep the spirit of press forward with indomitable will.

8、你的天赋好比一朵火花，假如你用勤勉辛劳去助燃，它一定会变成熊熊烈火，放出无比的光和热来。

8, your talent is like a spark, if you use diligent efforts to combustion, it will become a raging fire, light and heat to produce unparalleled.

9、你有涌泉一样的智慧和一双辛勤的手，不管你身在何处，幸运与快乐时刻陪伴着你!

9, you have the same springs of wisdom and a pair of industrious hand, wherever you where, lucky and happy to accompany you!

10、以你的自信，以你的开朗，以你的毅力，还有我的祝福，你一定能够驶向理想的彼岸。

10, to your confidence, your bright, to your perseverance, but also my blessing, you will be able to sail on the other side of the ideal.

11、你是花季的蓓蕾，你是展翅的雄鹰，明天是你们的世界，一切因你们而光辉

In 11, the bud you are young, you are the soaring eagle, tomorrow is your world, all because of you proud

12、高尚的理想是人生的指路明灯。有了它，生活就有了方向;有了它，内心就感到充实。迈开坚定的步伐，走向既定的目标吧!

In 12, the noble ideal of life, the beacon. With it, life is a direction; with it, the heart was full. Stride a firm step, towards the established goals!

13、朝霞般美好的理想，在向你们召唤。你们是一滴一滴的水，全将活跃在祖国的大海里!

13, better as an ideal, in the call to you. You are a drop of water, all will be active in the sea of the motherland!

14、愿云彩、艳阳一直陪伴你走到海角天涯;鲜花、绿草相随你铺展远大的前程。

In 14, the clouds, the sun has to accompany you to go to the far-off regions; flowers, green grass spread out your lofty quest.

15、生活的海洋已铺开金色的路，浪花正分列两旁摇动着欢迎的花束。勇敢地去吧，朋友!前进，已吹响出征的海螺;彩霞，正在将鲜花的大旗飞舞……

In 15, the marine life has rolled out the Golden Road, on both sides are respectively spray shaking welcome bouquet. Bravely go, friends! Forward, has sounded the war conch; rosy clouds, are flowers flag flying ... ...

16、有人说：“人人都可以成为自己的幸运的建筑师。”愿你们在前行的道路上，用自己的双手建造幸运的大厦。

16, some people say: "everyone can be the architect of his own happiness." Wishes to you in the way, with their own hands to build the building lucky.

17、啊，愿你们在飞逝而去的时间波涛上，乘风破浪，驶向成功的彼岸!

In 17, ah, I wish you in the flight of time to ride the wind and waves, the waves, sail the other shore to the success!

18、愿你像那小小的溪流，将那高高的山峰作为生命的起点，一路跳跃，一路奔腾，勇敢地、勇敢地奔向生活的大海……

18, would you like that small streams, the peaks of the high life as a starting point, a jump, a road running, brave, brave to live by the sea ... ...

19、愿我的临别赠言是一把伞，能为你遮挡征途上的烈日与风雨。

19, I would like the valediction is an umbrella, you can block the journey of the sun and the rain.

20、愿你们驾驶着信念铸造的航船，到希望的大海去犁出雪白的浪花。

20, is willing to cast your beliefs drive the ship, to the sea of hope to plow up the white waves.

“哒，哒，哒……”一阵急促而又有力的高跟鞋声音伴随着清脆的上课铃声传入我们的耳中。“Good morning my class。”这是我家大大每天必说的一句话，音调从“Good”开始上扬，突出强调“my”，又从“my”开始音调逐渐下缓，这抑扬顿挫的声音，仿佛在很严肃地告诉我们，“来，我的同学们，令人期待的英语课到了，赶快把心收收，认真学习精神粮食吧。”轻快的语气来提醒着我们。这句话对于我来说，则是一整天的“兴奋剂”。虽然我曾多次模仿，但从未超越过。

大大就是杨春梅老师，我的英语老师。大大的个子中等，一头乌黑的头发，白白净净的脸上有着一双炯炯有神的眼睛，仿佛可以透过我们的眼睛直击我们的内心世界。大大的衣着也很平常，但即使是再平常不过的衣服，也能被大大穿出“大大式”的风格，经得起我们的细细品味。而作为英语渣渣的我，被分到大大的班级，感到了十分的幸运，而大大独特的教学方式，刚好可以“抑制”住我的“渣渣”。

大大在教授英语方面有很多独特之道。

教学安排之独首当其冲。大大的课程安排很有规律。都是星期二学习新单词，星期四听写；都是学习完新单词后，就会有相应的预习作业和基础练习；写完练习后的隔天就会订正；并且要求我们在24小时的黄金时间内复习新学的语法等……有规律的英语学习也使我们的压力减轻了不少。

听写也当仁不让。大大的听写极具有挑战性，课本内容、课外阅读、拓展的知识点等方方面面，边边角角，一丝一毫对我们重要的知识点，大大都会仔细挑出来亮相。奖惩措施也是一大亮点，写得十分完美的，大大会挑出来当着全班人的面表扬；然而写得稍微不尽如人意的，大大却不会当众批评，她会悄悄地把那位同学叫到办公室去，笑眯眯地批评一下，然后等着他就是大大最看重的二次听写了。

作业也不甘落后。大大的作业布置真的无话可说，又多又难，但对于我这个英语渣渣来说，我就是很喜欢写英语作业，可能是因为大大订正作业的方式也很独特吧。大大的课堂上，每一道题都是由同学们来解说的，大大就好像是一位leader，慢慢的，小心翼翼地引领着我们去深入那些简单的，有点难的，变态难的那些题目。对于成绩好的同学却没有发挥好，大大会说：“这次做的不好哦，下次要继续努力。”而对于那些有一点点进步的同学，大大则会说：“Terrific”、“Good job”、“Well done”等。但是无论我们做得有多差，只要我们用心，只要我们相比之前有进步，都会受到大大的鼓励。我喜欢写英语作业，应该就是因为这个吧。

大大的课堂氛围也很奇妙。在大大的课堂上，都是吵吵闹闹的，欢声笑语的。在教授新知识时，大大会让同学读课文，然而总有那么几个调皮捣蛋的小朋友读不通顺，这时大大就会说：“好吧，背下来吧。”全班坏笑；听写时，当大大询问我们有没有准备好时，我们都异口同声地说：“没有”，而大大反而笑着说：“一群口是心非的家伙”，全班大笑；布置作业时，大大说：“来，让我们来做几道小题。”结果唰唰唰，原来是几张纸呀，全班苦笑；在订正作业时，“来，某某同学you do。”在发现某同学的单词错误得很离谱时“来，这个单词50遍”全班也是哄堂大笑……但是快乐的时光总是短暂的，英语课堂转瞬即逝。

大大在课下也是十分独特的。就像“Good morning my class”一样“请那些勤奋的小伙伴们到办公室来一趟”也是课后必说的一句话。一听这句话，以我为代表的英语渣渣们就会十分自觉地抱起额外的作业，接成一条小小火车，跟着“火车头”驶向目的地。大大的记忆力尤其好，她可以记得住每个被特别关注的同学最近的学习情况、作业质量。“某某，最近怎么上课没有之前专注啦。”“咦，你今天的作业质量没有之前的好，怎么回事？”对于额外补充作业的小伙伴们：“你做的这几篇有没有什么不懂的呀？”“咦，你错误有点小多唉。”“嗯，不错，有进步，继续下去肯定会有进步的，加油。”……我在心底暗念：这是我见过的所有老师中“小灶”开的最好的一个。俗话说：“笨鸟先飞”，所以我喜欢提前去找大大，因此，我也比别人有更多的“福利”，一颗糖、几粒枣、若干小零食……在我的英语学习过程中，大大如影随形，无处不在。

大大在我的心目中独一无二。最后，猜一猜我问什么叫她“大大”老师呢？

When I learned English, I felt so hard, because no matter hard I tried, I

just could not understand the grammar. One day, my sister asked me why was I so

confused with English, I told her I did not know, I was so afraid of it. Then

she asked me to watch English movie and listened to the English songs.

At first, I fell in love with these songs, I learned to sing them, I found

I could remember more and more words. I also felt very interested in the movie,

I could learn the local words. With interest, I make great progress, I am not

afraid of English any more. Interest is the best teacher.

明天就是教师节了，我精心地为曾经教过我的孙老师准备着礼物。知道吗?在所有老师中，我对孙老师印象最深。

Tomorrow is teachers day, I carefully to have taught me the sun for a gift. Know? In all the teachers, my impression of the sun.

从三年级开始，孙老师教我们数学。虽然孙老师幽默、开朗，但是我从心里挺怵她，谁叫咱平时数学不太好呢。记得有一次课间操，孙老师让全班同学下楼准备做操。我正要赶紧从老师身边溜走，没想到孙老师一眼就看见了我，她张口叫了我一声。不得已，我只好走过去。我一边走一边想:到底做错了什么?不应该呀。是不是数学考试又没及格呀?唉!我硬着头皮向前走着。没想到，一过去，孙老师就乐呵呵地告诉我说：“吉可心，老师送你点儿衣服行吗?”原来是这样，我舒了一口气，点点头。我拿着老师给我的衣服往回走，其他同学看到了，很是眼馋不已。我看着大家羡慕的目光，心里暖洋洋的。从此，我喜欢上了孙老师，也特别爱上她的课，学习也有了很大的进步。每当取得好成绩是，我心里总是对孙老师充满了感激之情。

From the three grade begins, the teacher teaches us maths. Although the sun teacher of humor, cheerful, but I fear she is from the heart, who call I usually not good at mathematics. Remember class-break setting-up exercise time, sun teacher told the class went downstairs to exercise. I was about to slip away from the teacher, did not expect the sun teacher saw me, her mouth to call me. No, I just go over. I was walking and Thinking: what went wrong in the end? Should not ah. Is it right? Did not pass the math test? Oh! I go forward. Unexpectedly, a past, is Mr. Sun told me cheerfully said: "Ji Kexin, teachers give you some clothes?" This is the original, I breathe a sigh of relief, nodded. I took the teacher gave me clothes back, the other students see, is very envious endless. I watched all the envious eyes, my heart warm. From then on, I like the sun, also fell in love with her lessons, learning has made great progress. Whenever I get good grades, I was always the teacher sun filled with gratitude.

一年来，我在孙老师的关爱、呵护下学习，在孙老师用爱编织成的温暖摇篮中成长，我是多么幸福呀。孙老师，我永远感谢您!

A year ago, I study in sun care, care, growth in the sun with love woven into the warm cradle, how happy I am. Mr. Sun, I will thank you forever!

有一个老师个子不高，身材瘦瘦的，头发很短，皮肤如同一张白纸一样白，说起话来像蜜一样甜，这就是我的英语老师—Sunny。

sunny老师十分关心我们的卫生，只要黑板有一点花，她就会让同学们擦得就像一面镜子一样。只要地上有一丢丢纸团，她就会断定一定没有把地扫干净，就会让值日生把地再扫一遍，我十分同情可怜值日生，因为我就被罚了一遍才过的。

sunny老师也十分关心我们的成绩。记得有一次，我的期末成绩只考了八十八分，我在班上的英语成绩可以说是还将就，一般的小测验成绩回回100分，怎么，怎么这一次就只有八十多了呢？难道我又有什么失误了吗？我仔细地检查起卷子。

什么？我把apple写成了epple，这一题扣除了三分，我有一句话的首字母小写了，居然又扣了两分，而且我还有很多地方失误……sunny就把我留了下来，把每一道题都全部认认真真地讲了一遍，他说：“如果同样的题目类型，你用同样的方法去做这种题，你就能得100分吗？”我点了点头，她就出了一题：“鸡蛋用英语怎么说？又如何写？”我三下五除地的说了出来：“egg的意思就是鸡蛋，是一个e和两个g的字母组成。”她点了点头，说：“看来你掌握得不错！回去吧，还有几名同学老师要单独教一下。”她的声音显得有点疲倦。

sunny也是一个十分风趣的老师，记得我们在学“老虎”的英文单词时，老师说：“Tigger”。我们齐声讲了一遍后，有两位同学开了一点儿小差，就把老师激怒了。她几乎是尖叫了起来：“你们两个在我这么有趣的课上，居然敢开小差，你们不看我的话，怎么知道老虎长什么样的？”她说的一番话逗得我们哈哈大笑。

这就是我们的英语老师，你喜欢吗？

亲爱的老师：

您好!

还记得前几天上英语课的时候，您从第一组开始点我们回答问题。

您是从第一个开始依次点起，我找出了规则。因为你的问题是要我们一人翻译一个句子。于是我兴高采烈的找起了按道理应该是我翻译的那一句。不一会二我找到了我要翻译的那一句。于是我就开是试着翻译这一句，我知到按道理我应该是翻译这一句，所以我也就没顾得上看其它的句子。终于要轮到我回答了，我刚准备站起来，却突然听到您喊的不是我的名字。我的心情犹如股票从涨到跌，这是何等的悲伤，因为全组的人都按规则点完了，唯独我一个人没点，我当时心想难到老师真的对我的英语不抱一丝希望了，我的心……我趴在了座位上。

正在这时我似呼听到了一个熟悉的名字，是的，是老师在喊我的名字。我站起来的一刹那，我既高兴有不高兴。我高兴的是老师对我的英语还抱一丝希望，我不高兴的是其它的句子我看

都没看，那回翻译。老师点起来的后果可想而知，我结结巴巴的临时翻了半句，还不知到对不对，我只见老师的书已打到我的脸上。接着我在老师的呵斥声中坐下了。

老师我想对您说几句心里话，老师我知道您之所以最后点我，是因为你怕我不会翻译那一句长的，您认为我不会翻译那句，那么我也许真的是不回翻译了。因为老师是学生一大部份原动力的源泉。还有您不应该破坏规则，也许您是好心，但是任何事物既然有它的规则，就不要去破坏它的规则。就像我读过的一篇文章中写的那样，文章里的主人公有一个蝴蝶茧，一天，小主人公看见蝴蝶即将破茧而出，看见蝴蝶捅破了一个孔，看见蝴蝶这样费劲，就把茧剪破了，果然蝴蝶很轻松的飞出来了。小主人公那知到这是害死了蝴蝶，它刚出来不久，折腾了2下，就死了。老师这些都不重要，重要的是您当着全班同学打我，我的……我说这些，老师请您不要生气。

最后祝老师工作顺利，身体键康!

您的学生

Dear Mr. X,

Hello!

You are the most respected teacher in my mind, although you are very strict, but you put your heart on us. You work from dawn to dusk, thinking about better teaching methods. You are like a candle, let me feel the infinite future of the bright, but burned themselves.

Trees cant grow without sunshine, rain and dew, only their selfless charity, will have a vibrant. The life of a flower is inseparable from the earth. With the nutrition provided by the earth, there will be a beautiful and moving flower. And our life, inseparable from the teacher, with your enthusiasm to help, with your inculcate, will have our healthy growth... Thank you so much, teacher! Shi-en is like a fish in water. In the past three years, you have taught us with great care. Every one of your epigrams is still vividly in my mind, which reminds me of a lot of things.

Teacher, I want to say to you: "You are really great! You are my best teacher! I like you!

It is because of your education, we can have todays knowledge, will have todays such a talent to learn, it is because of your care, we these "flowers of the motherland" to healthy growth, it is because of your little teachings, we understand the truth of life. You are like a tree, we thrive under your shade. You give us care like a mother, let me feel very happy, let me have the interest of learning, let me feel that you give endless strength, let me feel that you are my rely on, let me feel inseparable from you. Teacher, our good grades cannot do without your hard education, our good grades cannot do without your careful cultivation. Every step forward is inseparable from your hard sweat.

Yes, sometimes you are very strict with us, and often strict with us, and often teach us, serious and responsible for us, even if we have a little mistake, you will find. But I know, you are for us to be able to better further study, so that we can have great achievements in the future.

Teacher, thank you for our serious and responsible education, thank you for your concern about us, thank you for teaching us a lot of knowledge, thank you for your selfless dedication to us, one thousand ten thousand "thank you" can not return your teaching to us.

merry

A healthy body

Your students

我们班的英语老师性郭。她高高的鼻梁上有一对闪闪发亮的眼睛。你可别被她的外貌所迷惑，她可是一只“魔鬼”。

一次上英语课，她对全班同学说;“今天抽察第36页对话，不会的同学抄词语表1--3单元词语10次。“话音刚落，引起了满堂同学的不满：有的说;“这下子完了。“有的说;“老师真狠。“还有的说;“又要抄到三更半夜了。“抽察开始了，第一个遭殃的是陈旭，他站起来嬉皮笑脸的说;“我不会背。“英语老师说;“不会背很光荣吗，你抄20遍。陈旭为此付出了代价。老师又请了余佩佩，她镇定的地站起来，流利地背了出来，受到了老师的表扬，同学们都投去了羡慕的目光。

抽察结束了，只有一个人会背，所以全班做双倍作业。唉呀，真倒霉。

Mr.King is our English teacher. He is 31 years old. He became a teacher 10 years ago.

He likes playing sports, so he is very strong. He likes reading and watching Tv and he has good knowledge. All of us love to listen to his class because he has a good way to make his lessons interesting. Mr King is kind to us, but very strict with us in our studies. He is patient,too. He is a good teacher and also a good friend.

This is Teachers Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers Day. The whole secret of the teacher s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life. What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.

My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.

Dear Mr. Cao

Hello!

Today, I would like to recommend to you a picture book of traditional

Chinese festivals, Spring Festival.

Spring Festival is the most grand, the most lively and the most important

ancient traditional festival in China. Every Spring Festival, we paste couplets,

red window decorations, and "pour" blessing. But why should the word "Fu" be

pasted upside down? It turns out that the word "Dao" and "Dao" are homophonic,

and vice versa is Fu "Dao". Its like "Fu" is home.

During the Spring Festival, we should not only paste couplets, red window

decorations and "pour" happiness, but also set off firecrackers and fireworks,

and wear red clothes. After reading this book, I realized that there was a

monster called Nian in ancient China. It went to the village to eat cattle,

sheep, chickens, pigs and people every year. Until one year, an old grandfather

who came to the village to beg lived in his wifes house when the villagers went

to avoid animals in the cave. When the "Nian" beast came, he set off

firecrackers in the yard and came out wearing a big red robe. In this way,

"Nian" beast was scared away. Since then, people have pasted couplets, red

window decorations and "Daofu" on their doors. They also set off firecrackers

and fireworks, and put on red clothes. If you are interested, dont read this

book.

Then there is the new years money. Every year on the eve of the Spring

Festival, adults give children lucky money. The original purpose of lucky money

is to suppress evil and expel evil spirits. Because people think that children

are vulnerable to the invasion of ghosts and insects, they use new years money

to drive away evil spirits and help children celebrate the new year safely. I

wish the children good health, good luck and peace in the new year. There is

also an old legend. This legend has something to do with a little demon called

"Sui". You will know after reading this book.

In a word, after reading this book, I gained a lot and also felt the spirit

of Chinese traditional culture. So I want to share with you, hope you will like

it!

wish

Happy new year and good health!

Your student: Wen Zhuo Yan

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

我有一位幽默风趣的英语老师一一冼老师。

冼老师的头发短短的，眼睛不大却炯炯有神。身材微瘦，走起路来总是昂首挺胸的，给人的感觉是那么有精神，那么有活力。

冼老师课上总能把无趣的英语字母讲得风趣搞笑，总能让简单的表扬带上几分幽默，总能让同学们在轻松愉快的氛围中学到知识。

记得有一次，上课铃响了我们还在说话。冼老师进来了，我们原本吵吵闹闹的班级，一下就变得鸦雀无声了。一进来，冼老师就打开电脑，开始给我们讲课，我们听得津津有味。忽然，冼老师打了一下响指。笑着说：“现在问你们一个问题，Ihaveabooks，这句话有什么毛病？”许多同学都争先恐后地举起手来。冼老师环视一圈，说：“那就请这位同学来回答。”我看着冼老师指向我的大手，心头一紧，冼老师微笑着冲我挑了挑眉毛。我只得站起来说：“把s去掉，因为前面有个a。”老师喜笑颜开，两只眼睛咪成一条缝说：“完全正确！”顿了一会儿，冼老师接着说：“大家看这个s就像一条蛇，而这个a就像长着尾巴的小蝌蚪，蝌蚪可是青蛙的孩子啊。它当然也不能跟蛇一起做朋友啦，所以啊，看到这个a，后面就不能再有s啦。”

这节课真是生动啊！这一堂英语课虽然很短暂，但是让我们对英语有了兴趣，同时也让我们对学习充满了信心！

In my eyes, Mr Li is really a good teacher, He teaches us math. At first,I was afraid of math, and thought it was boring. It was Mr Li who changed my mind. In his math class, he helped us try to find out the answers to the questions in different ways. Little by little. I found math was getting interesting. Now Im good at it.

Mr Li is not only a teacher but also a good friend of ours. He often chats with us and tells jokes. We all like him and his math class.

在我的眼里，李老师真是一位好老师，他教我们数学。起初我很害怕数学，觉得很无聊。是李老师改变了我的想法。在他的数学课上，他帮助我们试着用不同的方式去找出问题的答案。小的。我发现数学很有趣。现在我很好。

李老师不仅是老师，而且是我们的好朋友。他经常和我们聊天，讲笑话。我们都喜欢他和他的数学课。

My teacher is very beautiful, a piece of melon seeds face with a pair of watery big eyes, a pointed nose below a cherry small mouth. When the teacher will be on a comb her long wavy hair, behind like opened a large and beautiful flower, scattered down and becomes a shawl, this is my teacher li. Miss li like mother kindly at ordinary times, I like her very much.

My teacher is very like me, for a long time, I on duty in the monitor of the class, I am very proud. When I meet with difficulties, the teacher will extend a hand of the gentle, help me to solve problem, teach me how to get along with classmates, how to solve some petty things in class, the teachers careful help, I slowly grow up.

On one occasion, the teacher give us homework dictation is family, because I dont have a dictation, hand in your homework on the second day, I have no homework, also didnt tell the teacher. I know Im wrong, but I dont have the courage to admit your mistakes. The bell rang, the teacher came into the classroom. My heart pounding incessantly, like a rabbit, I always low head, didnt look at the teacher. The teacher began to check my dictation, my heart is beating more severe, the teacher call to: "KuiRenJie", I slowly walked to the front of the teacher, is afraid of the teacher in the class criticized me, very regret in my heart, if theres a rift in the classroom, Ill go into, hide. I move to the front of the teacher step by step, the face rises very red, whispered: "I... I didnt write the teacher." Will I always thought the teacher sternly criticized me, but the teacher did not do that, but rather patiently said to me: "hereafter have what matter all want to advance with the teacher to explain, dont wait for the teacher found out again, so you will be very embarrassing, reduce the credibility in front of the students." The teachers words and earnest, deeply printed in my heart. Every time I am determined to complete the teacher leave homework seriously, get rid of the bad habit.

My teacher is lighted up with flashes of holy in my heart, in my heart planted the seeds of love.

我的老师非常美丽，一张瓜子脸上嵌着一双水汪汪的大眼睛，尖尖的鼻子下面一张樱桃小口。当老师将她那长长的卷发一梳上，后面就像开了一朵美丽的大花朵，一散下来就变成一件披肩，这就是我的李老师。李老师平时像妈妈一样和蔼可亲，我非常喜欢她。

我的老师非常喜欢我，一直以来，都让我当班里的大班长，我非常骄傲。当我遇到困难时，老师会伸出那只温柔的手，帮我解决难题，教我如何与同学们相处，如何解决班内的一些琐碎的小事，在老师的细心帮助下，我慢慢地长大了。

有一次，老师给我们留的作业是家庭听写，由于我没有听写，第二天交作业时，我就没有交作业，也没有告诉老师。我知道自己错了，但是我没有勇气去承认自己的错误。上课铃响了，老师走进了教室。我的心怦怦跳个不停，好像装了一只兔子，我一直低着头，不敢看老师。老师开始查听写了，我的心跳得就更厉害了，老师叫到：“隗仁杰”时，我慢慢地向老师跟前走去，害怕老师在全班批评我，心里非常后悔，如果教室里有一个地缝，我会钻进去，藏起来。我一步一步挪到老师面前，脸涨得通红，小声地说：“老师我…我没有写。”我总以为老师会严厉地批评我的，可是老师不但没有那样做，反而耐心地跟我说：“以后有什么事情都要提前跟老师说明原因，不要等老师查出来再说，那样你会很尴尬的，在同学们面前降低威信的。”老师的话语重心长，深深印在了我的心底。我决心每次认真地完成老师留的作业，改掉这个坏毛病。

我的老师在我心中闪耀着神圣的光芒，在我的心中播下了爱的种子。

《资治通鉴》里有言：经师易得，人师难求。正所谓“名师出高徒”，只有一位好的老师才能够教出一位好的学生，这也是众人皆知的。但是想找到一位好的老师是多么难。于是，我又想起了我的英语老师-----Ms Yan。

记得她第一次给我们上英语课时，我们特别激动-----马上就要学英语了。“你们愿意学习英语吗？”她一脸笑容地问我们。“愿意！”“你们想学好英语吗？”“想！”这勾起了我们极大的兴趣，从此，我们的英语课开始活跃起来。

后来，英语越来越难，我听着一个个英语单词，可以用四个字来形容----稀里糊涂。成绩一直中上中下的我，在课堂上就是个“隐形人”，现在变得更“隐形”了。但这样一件事改变了我的命运：刚上四年级，我的死对头蒋文就把我的英语书往对台上一丢，再也找不回来了，我只好看同桌的，但更多时间，傲慢的同桌总是把手一遮，我只好一个人读着“望天书”，但Msyan注意到了，向我询问了原因后，给了我一本崭新的英语书。在分组时，她还让我当上了英语小组长。从此，我开始认真学习英语了。功夫不负有心人，期末考试时，我的英语成绩赶上了一大截，我的信心也越来越大了。

暑假里，我不假思索地报了她的补习班。她仍推行她的加分制，并给我们每个人都取了英文名字，并在每周对加分高的小组进行奖励，大大提高了我们的兴趣、积极性，参与性也越来越浓。更绝的是，她让我们看动画片学音标，记得特别牢。

升上五年级，我的英语成绩已经大幅度上升了，这对于英文一窍不通的我是一个转折性的改变。这是奇迹吗？不-------这是我的英语启蒙老师对我的关心与鼓励。

我真诚地对她说一声：“Thankyou！”

DearAmy:

How are you? I guess it’spretty tiring to correct all that homework, I

wonder if there areany shortcuts?

As a new teacher for ourclass, I think maybe you would like to know a few

things about ourclass.

Um…… firstly, maybe you would like a real goodassistant. I recommend agirl,

her English name is Amy too, Amy Lin. She’s really good atprocessing details,

and, yes, carrying stuff (but not too much).She does everything really fast, and

can leave enough timeleft.

Secondly, you might need a student-tutor, astudent that teaches other

students. Well, I think a student whichhas “maths-craze” called Eric well be fit

for the job. Hecan get good English grades as well, also, he loves helping

otherswith their studies. He wears black and blue rimmed glasses all daylong,

and maybe you know him. Many boys treat him as a boss, andare willing to listen

to him.

Thirdly, perhaps you’re alsolooking for a student which can entertain the

class and makeEnglish classes more interesting (a class clown). Then I

recommendLeo, he jokes all day long, has a great sense of humor and

crazyimagination. But he isn’t a classic good student, so perhapssometimes

you’ll get a bit annoyed.

It’sabout ten! Maybe I’ll have to leave the rest for nexttime.

Bestwishes!

Alyssa

In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling.

But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.

What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning.

He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit.

I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.

Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.