2017年长沙小升初英语真题【20篇】

端午节来啦!端午节是我们纪念大诗人屈原的日子，是赛龙舟的日子，也是吃五黄(黄瓜、黄鱼、黄鳝、黄酒、咸蛋黄)的日子，但我最喜欢的就是包粽子了!

The Dragon Boat Festival! The Dragon Boat Festival is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuans day, the dragon boat race is the day, but also eat yellows (cucumber, fish, eel, Yellow Wine, salted egg yolk) day, but what I like most is the zongzi!

今天，是我第一次跟妈妈学包粽子。妈妈准备好事先已泡了3小时的糯米、酱了一晚上的五花肉、梅干菜笋干、洗干净晾干的粽叶、麻线、蜜枣和红枣，我们准备开包啦!只见妈妈先拿出粽叶(大的一张就可以，小的要两张)，把粽叶的二分之一往上翻，然后把左边的粽叶向右一旋，手把粽叶轻轻一捏，就成了圆锥形的漏斗。接着，妈妈把糯米在漏斗中摊平，再把一条精肉、一条肥肉和梅干菜笋干放在摊平的糯米上，再铺上一层糯米，用手用力往下压一压，最后把粽子的上部翻下来，用绳子扎紧，一个三角形的肉粽就做成了。我按照妈妈的示范，也开始认真地包起来，可是叶子在我手里就不听使唤了，不是漏米，就是叶子破，我只能帮妈妈打下手了，帮她剪包粽子的麻线和放馅儿。我们包完肉粽，还包了蜜枣粽。

Today, was my first learning how to wrap dumplings with my mother. Mother prepared in advance has been made for 3 hours a night of glutinous rice, soy sauce pork, Meboshi Naboshi, wash dry leaves, twine, jujube and red dates, we are ready to open the package! I saw my mother to take leaves (a big can, small to two), the leaves of 1/2 turned up, and then the left hand Zongye right rotation, the leaves gently pinch, a conical funnel. Then, my mother put rice in the funnel out flat, then a lean meat, fat and dried prune a dish on the flattening of glutinous rice, and then covered with a layer of glutinous rice, hand pressed down pressure, finally put the dumplings is turned down by the rope, a triangle on the meat made. In accordance with my mothers demonstration, also began to carefully wrapped in leaves, but in my hand is paralysed, not leakage meter is broken, the leaves, I can help my mother to help her to cut the rice dumplings, twine and stuffing. After we finish with meat bag, pack the jujube rice dumplings.

包好粽子，就到煮粽子了。妈妈先把粽子放进高压锅，30-40分钟后，粽子就出锅啦!这粽子香喷喷的，整个家都弥漫着粽子香，我早已馋得直咽口水。我们开始品尝粽子了。哇!自己包的粽子真是别有一番滋味!

Wrap dumplings, to cook dumplings. Mother put the dumplings into the pressure cooker, 30-40 minutes later, just out of the pot of dumplings! The dumplings delicious, the whole family are filled with dumplings incense, I already so he swallowed. We can taste and rice dumplings. Wow! I package dumplings is really not a good feeling!

今天我不仅吃到了香喷喷的粽子，还学会了包粽子的“手艺”，好开心啊!

Today I did not only eat the delicious dumplings, but also learnt how to make dumplings "craft", good fun ah!

This is the earth. The green part is land. The blue part is sea. The white part is clouds. Our earth is very beautiful and interesting. There are rivers, streams, seas and lakes. There are hills and mountains. There are woods, jungles and forests. There are many countries and cities. There are many people live in them. Do you think the earth is very wonderful?

这是地球。绿色的部分是陆地。蓝色的部分是海洋。白色的部分是云。我们的地球是非常美丽和有趣的。有河流，河流，湖泊和海洋。有山。有森林，丛林和森林。有很多国家和城市。有很多人住在那里。你认为地球很精彩吗?

Many years ago, the earth is very clean. But nowadays there is much pollution on the earth. There is air pollution, land pollution and water pollution。People are cutting down the forests.

许多年前，地球很干净。但现在地球上有很多污染。有空气污染，土地污染和水污染。人们正在砍伐森林。

Many wild animals, birds and insects lose their homes. People are killing animals for their food and their skins. It’s very cruel. People are polluting the land, the water and the air. People must stop doing this. We must save the earth.

许多野生动物，鸟类和昆虫失去了家园。人们杀死动物为食物和皮肤。这是非常残酷的。人们正在污染土地，水和空气。人们必须停止这样做。我们必须拯救地球。

people often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. but i dont think so. in my opinion, to read books is more valuable than anything else.the old saying“to open a book is always helpful”clearly shows us how good it is to read a book.

books are our friends. they introduce us different kinds of knowledge.they lead us down the road to success.books are our teachers. they teach us truth, science, literature, and philosophy of life, besides they increase our knowledge, enlarge our experience, strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.we have to learn as long as we live. but our life is limited, and the knowledge is boundless. there are many things which are very necessary to learn and there are also many which should be avoided. books tell us what is good and what is evil. and only books can tell the good from the bad.

therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students。

人们常说金子和银子是世界上最有价值的东西。但我不这么认为。在我看来,读书比任何其他事情更有价值。俗话说“打开一本书总是有益”清楚地显示了我们是多么好的阅读一本书。

书是我们的朋友。他们介绍我们各种各样的知识。他们引导我们成功之路。书是我们的老师。他们教我们真理、科学、文学和生活的哲学,除了它们增加我们的知识,扩大我们的经验,加强我们的性格,做许多其他的事情,我们离不开他们。我们必须学习,只要我们生活。但是我们的生命是有限的,知识是无限的。有许多事情是非常必要的学习和应该避免的也有很多。书告诉我们什么是善,什么是恶。只有书能告诉坏的好。

因此,读更多的书对我们的青年学生是最好的政策。

I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner. I said to my mum, let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “Are you sure you can?” “ Yes ,believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the kitchen. I went towards my baby brother. “ Oh baby, don’t cry. I will sing a song for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.

我是一个10岁的男孩。聪明英俊的。我为自己感到自豪。因为我可以得到完美的成绩语文，数学和英语。它不够好，我也感到自豪的是一个哥哥。那是一个星期五的晚上，我的弟弟哭了所有的时间。我的父母都煮晚餐。我说我的妈妈，让我照看这个小东西。我妈妈说，“你肯定你能吗?“是的，我相信我可以。”我回答。然后妈妈到厨房去。我对我的弟弟。“哦，宝贝，不要哭。我会为你唱一首歌……“我把他给他唱歌。过了一会儿，他睡着了。我太累了。我的父母非常高兴，夸我是个好男孩。这是我第一次来照顾我的小弟弟，我为自己感到自豪。

听、说、读、写、译，是我们学习英语中最重要的五个方面，不可偏废。前面发了一些关于口语和音标的帖子，有家长建议我写一些关于写作的内容。

大家都知道口语要说的地道，而我们的写作往往停留在中式英语的误区中，而且很难发现。

“为什么我的词汇量如此丰富却仍然写不出能让阅卷老师满意的作文?”相信不少同学都曾有过这样的疑问。词汇量的多寡往往并不是一篇英语作文质量好或者坏的关键。许多同学即便很努力地去准备作文，但最终分数仍然不理想，这很可能是因为他们陷入了某种写作的误区。今天，张译云老师就要为大家列举比较常见的三种英语写作误区，希望能帮小勇士们“对号入座”，并施以针对性的改进。

误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇

一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来，然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。在这样的作文里，我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：

“When Iwas a child,my parents very love me。”(正确表达：When Iwas achild,my parents loved me very much)。

解决之道：强化语法

要想流利的掌握一门外语，你需要能够使用该语言思考。而将中文式思维转变为英语思维的最根本的途径之一就是强化语法知识。很多同学的词汇量很丰富，但是对于怎么用，什么时候用却并不明白。而这些恰恰是语法知识所能告诉我们的。哪些词要用在句中，哪些词应该用在句尾，语法里都有相应的规定。一旦用错了位置就会写成英国人看不懂的英语作文。另外，对于词汇所存在的不同的形态也应该注意。

误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大局”

不少同学在写英语作文时，将过多的注意力放在“优美的文笔”上面。因此，他们不停地用电子辞典搜集华丽的词藻，并运用难度颇高的句式，以期能让自己的作文“技高一筹”。但事实上，多数情况下会弄巧成拙。太生僻的单词同学们运用起来并不能得心应手，而且使用太复杂的句型也常常会出错。

解决之道：用平常心表达平常事

要写作要求学生能够综合运用逻辑、词汇和语法等多种知识和技能来完成一个写作任务，但并不苛求学生去做标新立异的创作。因此同学们无需力求完美地到电子辞典里去找生僻的词汇，也不需要写得多么高深莫测，而是应该抱着平常的心态去描述自己看到的东西，表达自己想到的内容，将学过的词从记忆深处调动出来，复习语法课上学到的知识。用这样的心态写出来的东西内容虽简单但不乏生活气息，语言虽稚嫩，但却准确易懂。

误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多

不少学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于“可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是便充分发挥想象能力，加入了很多离题较远的细枝末节。这样的文章写出来更像是一篇“大杂烩”，从中找不到任何主题。还有一些作文，句子和句子之间的连贯性不强，逻辑思维混乱，读起来让人摸不到头脑。

解决之道：理清思路，言之有物

我认为，很多人之所以写不够题目要求的作文字数，其中一个重要原因就是对于题目本身没有理解透彻。建议同学们不要急于下笔，而是先考虑清楚自己要说几点内容，这些内容之间的逻辑关系是怎样的。

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class 1, Grade 4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

张颖是我的好朋友。她在1班，天骄小学4年级。她是个模范学生。她是聪明和她的帮助，太。她经常帮助教师和青年学生在学校。她擅长语文，数学，英语，艺术和手工艺，音乐等等。她有很多的爱好。她喜欢绘画和绘图。她喜欢听音乐，和父母去野餐。哦，是的，她喜欢钓鱼，太。但她不喜欢打篮球，足球，乒乓球和排球。张颖是我最好的朋友。我喜欢和她一起玩。我们总是一起工作，互相帮助。

I come from a big family.There are six persons in my family.Besides my parents,I have an elder brother,an elder sister,and a younger brother.

我来自一个大家庭。我家有六口人。除了我的父母，我有一个哥哥，一个姐姐，一个弟弟。

My father is a worker who works in a machine tool plant.He has been working there since Liberation.My mother is a typical chinese housewife.She takes care of the whole house-

我的爸爸是一个工人，在机床厂工作。他是解放以来，在那里工作。我的母亲是一个典型的中国家庭主妇。她照顾整个房子—

hold.My elder brother is an engineer in a chemical research institute in Beijing. My elder sister is a junior middle school music teacher in Shanghai,and my younger brother is now studying in a senior high school in my hometown.

举行。我的哥哥在北京化工研究院工程师。我的姐姐是一个上海的初中音乐教师，和我的弟弟现在在我家乡的一所高中学习。

We love our parents and they love us,and the brothers and sisters always encourage and help each other.We are a happy family.

我们爱我们的父母，他们爱我们，和兄弟姐妹总是鼓励和互相帮助。我们是一个幸福的家庭。

In our daily life, the living environment is very important. But in daily life people in protecting the environment is not very seriously.

In order to let our beautiful environment, no hurt. There are many old people to clean street, greening lawn. They finished a day early out, to the motherland green environment at all costs. But as fate would have it, those who do not care for the environment but also to destroy, we have to provide for those who do not care for the environment and ideological work, let them early day break habits.

On the way we go to school, there is also a team the many classmates litter waste. For example: some students throw snack bags at the school gate, and the classmate throw like folded paper airplane, even along the wall into the school. Their actions again and again to affect not only school, to be on duty every morning classmates brought a lot of trouble.

Meeting in the school, the teacher again and again asked, to persuade, but some classmate dont persuaded, but continue to damage the environment, shorten the life of the earth.

Once, the school organization we 2, grade 6 students to pick them pick up white trash park lawn. Before departure, I thought to myself, common tour to play in the park, think there are clean. Today to pick up white trash, should be few, pick up must be very easy.

But when I walk there, looked down, I was shocked. There are a lot of rubbish on the ground. Waste paper, cigarette butts, plastic bags, etc. These are everywhere, a green lawn, under the destruction of tourists has become a piece of environmental pollution, this is how serious environmental problems.

In the face of the lawn, make us angry, try to eliminate those rubbish. After 100 minutes of our labor, labor, and the grass is finally back to the original beautiful, famous flowers qi yuan contend in fragance and fascination. We can not help but sigh: originally the earth also is very beautiful!

在我们日常生活中 ,生活环境是十分重要的.但在日常生活中人们在保护环境上并不十分重视.

为了能让我们的环境优美,不受到伤害.有许多老人来打扫大街,绿化草坪.他们每天早出完归,为了祖国的绿化环境不惜一切代价。但那些不爱护环境的人偏偏还要去破坏，我们一定要为不爱护环境的人做好思想工作，让他们早一日改掉恶习。

在我们上学的路上，也有许队多同学乱丢废弃物。比如说：有的同学把小吃袋扔在校门口外，还有的同学把叠好的纸飞机随意乱扔，甚至顺着墙扔进学校.他们的这些行为不但一次又一地影响着学校，还给每天早晨做值日的同学带来了很大麻烦。

在校会上，老师一次又一次叮嘱、说服，但有些同学并不听劝，而是继续破坏环境，缩短地球的寿命。

有一次，学校组织我们2—6年级同学到采俸公园的草坪上捡白色垃圾。在出发之前，我心里想，平常到采风公园玩的时候，觉得那里比较干净。今天去捡白色垃圾，应该很少，捡起来一定很轻松吧。

但当我走道那里，低头一看的时候，却把我惊呆了。地上有许多垃圾。废纸、烟头、塑料袋等。这些到处都是，一块绿色的草坪，在游人的破坏下成了一片环境污染地，这是多么严重的环境问题。

面对这块草坪，使我们愤怒不已，努力去消除那些垃圾。经过我们100分钟的劳动，草坪终于恢复到了最初的美丽，名花齐葩争芳斗艳。我们不禁感叹：原来地球也是很美的呀!

The earth is our home. We must protect it, do not polluted it. To attain low carbon life, actually very simple.

地球是我们的家。我们必须保护它，不要污染它。达到低碳生活，其实很简单。

The scientists found that at least 100 kinds of environmental harm atmospheric pollutants, including so2, nitric oxide, carbon monoxide and hydrogen fluorine hydrocarbon etc on human body has great harm. Industrial production and transportation exhaust gas and dust is the main way if atmospheric pollution. Industrial waste gas of the dust particles would adsorption many poisonous and harmful substances, these pollutants in the atmosphere will produce all sorts of chemical reaction, generate more contaminants, second pollution formed. Atmospheric pollutants in the air accumulated in air quality declining, directly harmful to human health, and make ozonosphere being damaged, cause global warming. Environmental problem has become a global problem, even influenced the survival and development of mankind. Latest research shows that when people in Nineveh is virtuous orchid climate mutation of extinction.

科学家发现，至少有100种不同的环境危害大气污染物，包括二氧化硫，一氧化氮，一氧化碳和氢氟烃等对人体有很大的危害。工业生产和交通尾气烟尘是造成大气污染的主要途径。工业废气的尘埃会吸附许多有毒有害物质，这些污染物在大气中会产生各种各样的化学反应，产生更多的污染物，形成二次污染。在空气中积累在空气质量下降的大气污染物，直接危害人类健康，使臭氧层受到破坏，导致了全球变暖。环境问题已成为全球性的问题，甚至影响到人类的生存与发展。最新研究表明，当人们在尼尼微是尼德兰气候突变的灭绝。

I have moved to my new school since Septmber. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. Its quite different from my old school. Its larger, much more modern. This is why I love my new school. If you are free, you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look.

When global warming, the world have changed dramatically.

The Antarctic ice and snow melt, human feeling will be under water, it is human to take the consequences. Arctic overlord, the polar bear also gradually extinction due to global warming. Has been the mother to a pair of scissors to bear, baby bear curiously ask: "mother, with scissors stem what ah?" Mom replied in a tone of command: "quick shearing, longer so thick hair will be hot dead!" Naive to bear looked at his mom, "we live in the ice and snow, how can heat? This is our coat, without it will be cold, cant cut!" Mother bear tone with a sad and sigh: "global warming, in does not adapt, now Im afraid go!"

Global warming, the polar bear cant find food, even little bear, it is be compelled helpless! Humans shall make profound reflection to your behavior, but, when global warming, human couldnt realize his mistake! Only know no longer suffer from the cold in winter, the temperature rose, the cold has gone, only the immediate interests, didnt know that will be far away from the white snow, originally should be open the flowers in the winter.

When global warming, I hope this to human consciousness already consequences. Early up, to stop all this happen!

当全球气候变暖时，世界发生了巨变。

南极，冰雪融化，人类感觉将要处于冰水之中，这是人类自食其果。北极的霸主北极熊，也因全球变暖而逐渐走向灭绝。一直熊妈妈向小熊递来一把剪刀，熊宝宝好奇地问：“妈妈，用剪刀干什么呀?”妈妈以命令的语气回答：“快剪毛，再长这么厚的毛会被热死的!”小熊天真的望着妈妈：“我们住在冰天雪地里，怎么会热呢?这是我们的外衣，没有它会受冻的，不能剪!”熊妈妈的语气中带点悲伤和叹息：“现在全球变暖，在不适应，恐怕就走向灭亡了!”

全球变暖，北极熊无法找到食物，甚至食用小熊，这是被逼无奈呀!人类应当对自己的行为进行深刻的反省，可是，当全球变暖时，人类还无法意识到自己的错误!只知道冬天不再受寒风的折磨，温度上升了，寒冷已离去，只顾着眼前利益，可不知道以后将远离那洁白的雪，原本应在寒冬中开放的花。

当全球变暖时，希望人类早已意识这以后果。趁早弥补，阻止这一切的发生!

there are many television programs in Taiwan today, from TV aeries, quiz shows, soap operas, movies to cartoons. Of all the programs, I like to watch cartoons the best, like Cartoon network, Disney and many others. I like to watch cartoons because they are funny and very interesting, especially when I am sad, tired or bored. I also like cartoon characters. they are so cute and vivid. We must use our imagination when we watch cartoons. Because they are often exaggerated, so you need to have a sense of humor

Summertime is the best time of the year. There is no school for months and I get to do what I want. With no tests and no homework, Im as free as a bird.

夏季是一年中最好的时光。(几个)月不用去学校并且我可以做自己想做的事。没有考试、没有作业，我自由地像只小鸟。

I do many things during the summer vacation. I relax by reading books and watching TV. I also hang out with my friends or travel with my family. However, I dont only play in summer. I take advantage of the free time to learn more. For example, last summer I learned to swim. This summer I might study computers or English. Summer vacation flies by fast, so its important to do as much as you can.

暑假期间，我可以做很多事。我通过阅读与看电视放松自己。我也常常与朋友一起打发时间或者与家人一起去旅游。可是，暑假期间，我并不只是游玩。我充分利用闲暇时间去学习更多的(知识)。举例来说，去年暑假，我就学习游泳。这个暑假，我可能会学习计算机或英语(知识)。暑期过得很快，所以，对于你而言，应该尽可能做更多的事。

导语：我非常喜欢我的周末。你周末过得怎么样?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

OK, let me tell you something about my weekend.

I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think, we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy.

This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me?

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好吧，让我告诉你一些关于我周末的事情。

周末我要做很多事情，非常忙。所以我在星期六早上做作业。下午，我要和妈妈一起做家务。因为我是个好女孩，我在家很有帮助。星期日早上，我要和我的父母去看望我的祖父母。下午，我们一起去公园。因为有一个风筝表演。我的祖父母喜欢制作风筝。我想，我们在那里可以看到许多漂亮的风筝。我们也要去买一些漂亮的风筝。然后，我们要去放新风筝，那很有趣。晚上，我们要吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。我们晚餐要吃鱼。因为我爷爷奶奶喜欢吃鱼。我奶奶做鱼很好。晚饭后，我们将一起看电视。我们会很高兴的。

这是我的快乐周末。我非常喜欢我的周末。你周末过得怎么样?你能告诉我吗?

I have a happy family. My dad and mom love me so much.

there are six people in my family, my mom, my dad, my grandparents, my sister and me.

My dad is a boss. He is 39 years old. He’s tall and strong. He is very strict, too. He likes cars. I always goes to car show when he has time. My mom is my dad’s assistant. She is in charge of the company. She is 34 years old. She is tall, thin and very kind. She likes going shopping and reading books.

My grandfather live with us. He’s old, short， and a little bit fat. He loves us very much. He likes listening to the Yue-Opra. My grandmother lives with us, too. She is old, short, thin and very kind, too. She likes planting trees and flowers. My younger sister is only three years old. She isn’t a student. She is very lovely. She is in Media Kindergarten. She likes watching TV. I am a student of Grade Six. I study very hard now.

I love my family. My family love me, too.

一、构思、准备不充分，匆忙下笔

任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的，所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多孩子目前存在一个情况，想到哪写到哪，有记流水帐的习惯;这也造成了作文杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。

针对这种情况可以从以下几个方面予以解决：

1、认真审题，审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。

2、确定文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的。

3、列提纲，打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。

二、中心重点不突出，切题不准确

英语写作不是语文散文(形散神不散)，写英语作文，尤其是在中考大压力下短时内写出高分作文一定要注意这一点。造成这种情况的主要原因是动笔前并没有认真审题和思考，对出题者希望得到的预期尚未揣摩透彻，这也就造成了一些同学虽然语言功底非常不错，但是最终的结果还是没有拿到一个自己预期的心理分数，最大的问题就出在切题不准确或者不够突出中心上了。

三、忽视文化差异

我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。

四、忽视细节，无谓失分

很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉"下笔如有神"，但最终结果出来后大惑不解。这方面的问题主要体现在忽视标点、书写、段落安排、大小写的问题，所以只要更加注重细节，这些无谓失分就可以解决。

编者小语：“每个人都有自己最喜欢的老师，我也是。我最喜欢的老师是魏小姐，我们的英语老师...”小编和大家一起分享2015小升初英语作文：我喜欢的老师，文章记叙了去超市做什么，买了那些东西，供同学们写作学习。

Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficuit when we began to study English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss Wei!”

Hello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.

你好，每个人!我的名字是兴小青。你可以叫我樱桃。

I’m in Class 0506. Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.

我在0506班。李楠是我最好的朋友。她十三岁了。她的生日是在十月第三和她出世在深圳。她与她的家人住在海门。她身高1.60米。她有乌黑的头发，戴眼镜。她很可爱，漂亮。

She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.

她喜欢吃饺子，巧克力，花生和蔬菜。她不喜欢猪肉，糖果和绿茶。

She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.

她喜欢听音乐。她有很多CD。她喜欢阅读和写作。她是数学俱乐部的最新成员。她有很多爱好，比如跳舞，跑步和玩电脑游戏。她最喜欢的爱好是画画，因为她喜欢各种不同的颜色。这是有趣的看图片当她完成他们。端午节是她最喜欢的一天。她长大后想成为一名医生。

We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.

我们总是玩的很高兴。我们在午餐时间坐在树下有一个很好的聊天。有时，我们从零食店买零食。上星期日，我们通常去书店。我们经常在一起学习。

My best friend is really great!

我最好的朋友真的很棒!

Dec.6th .2005

Dear dad and mum,

I have been very happy in the school. Sometimes, at night I cry in the bed because I miss you very much. You always say “Learn well and I will be happy.” So I work hard in the school every day. After class I play with my classmates. We skip rope, play cards and ball and so on. I spend a lot of time doing my homework. After lunch we have to do Kumon. When I finish, I play Pingpong with my friends. Then I spend some time reading my English notes. At six o’clock I have my evening class. Then I have my evening snack at twenty past seven. After that, I have some free time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell me “Happiness is very important in our life.” So I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please.

This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me.

My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”。 He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School. We are very happy.

1. 内容切题

内容切题是命题作文的基本要求，考生可从以下几个方面入手：

第一要认真审题。根据题目类别，弄清文体的要求，并判明文章的种类(议论文、说明文、记叙文)，同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想，若题目已经提供了提纲，还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后，切勿惟恐时间不够，提笔就写。一旦跑题，发现了再改就来不及了，常言道：“磨刀不误砍柴工”。

第二要注意设计安排段落。根据文章的中心思想，确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文，一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑，首先是某观点的合理成分或某物的长处，然后是该观点的不合理成分或该物的短处，最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目提供了提纲，只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。

第三要避免将记忆里较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地搬进作文，使作文结构松散，意思不明确，甚至会偏离主题。

2. 表达清楚，文字连贯

文章要做到表达清楚，文字连贯，文章各段落就必须根据提纲所确立的不同主题来展开，而且各段落的主题句要将段落的各个部分凝聚在一起，流利地表达段落大意，使段落中各部分以及段落之间的联系一目了然。

3. 句式有变化

有些考生对写作没信心，不敢大胆地使用所掌握的语言基础知识，包括英语句法知识，结果整篇文章都是以主、谓、宾句式为主的简单句子，文章显得刻板无生气。实际上，