我的好朋友英语作文加翻译【热门20篇】

I want to be ateacher in the future, because I think teacher is a good job.

My teachers arevery good. Some of them are gentle, but some of them are not. But

I think theyall care for students very much. I want to be a good teacher like

them. I thinkI will be strict to my students in the class. But after class, I

want to betheir friend and help them in study and life. Besides, it can help me

to keep ayoung heart to stay with young students. I must work hard for my

dream.

将来我想成为一名老师，因为我觉得老师是一份好工作。我的老师都很优秀，他们有的温柔，但有的不是这样。但是，我觉得他们都很关心学生。我想成为和他们一样的好老师。我认为在课堂上我会对学生严厉，但是课后我想成为他们的朋友，在生活和学习上帮助他们。除此之外，与年轻的学生呆在一起能够使我保持年轻的心态。我一定要努力实现我的梦想。

Whats friends? Do you have friends? I have many friends, so I always feel

happy. In the morning, some of my friends will go to school with me. We often

talk and laugh on the way to school. Sometimes we will stop to buy some snacks,

school things and other stuff. When I am in school, I always study with friends.

When I have something confusion, I will ask them to help. So do they. We help

each other. After class, we play together, and go to the shop to buy snacks.

They accompany me, so do I. I think this is friends.

This is my friend. His name is Tom. He has two big eyes and a small nose. He has a big mouth and two small ears. He likes eating beef, chicken, hamburger, pizza, pork and Chinese cabbage. He is good at playing football and he is good at running. Tom runs faster than me.

今天，我做了2件好事。第一件事帮奶奶从山上打了一桶水回来。因为我知道每天都要提着四个桶上山打水，我觉得奶奶非常累，就帮奶奶提了一桶水。奶奶夸我长大了，懂事了。

Today, I did two good things. The first thing is to help grandma get a

bucket of water from the mountain. Because I know that I have to carry four

buckets of water up the mountain every day. I think grandma is very tired, so I

helped her carry a bucket of water. Grandma praised me for growing up and being

sensible.

下午，我又给妈妈一个大惊喜了。妈妈走进我的房间一看，非常惊讶，说：“你真是一个懂事的孩子。”得到了奶奶和妈妈的表扬，我非常高兴。

In

the afternoon, I gave my mother another big surprise. When my mother came into

my room, she was very surprised and said, "you are really a sensible child." I

am very happy to be praised by my grandma and

mother.

My Friend(我的朋友)

Zhang Dong is my best friend。 He entered our class last semester。 He is a

boy。 Both of us are good at English， so we often have a chat in English in our

spare time。 After school， we often play football together on the playground。 He

runs so fast that I can not catch up with him。 He is an excellent student。 He

not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest。 He

loves popular songs and also classical music。

There are three people in his family and he is the only child。 His father

is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress。 Though Zhang Dongs

family is wealthy， he is usually simply dressed。 He has a dream which is to be a

lawyer。

Such is my friend， a clever and kind boy。 He is highly praised by the

teachers and students。

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时光用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得个性快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生，他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想，就是将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。

How to learn English is a diffcult question .but now i have a good idea .

I think we have many ways to learn English .For example .

First of all ,we can listen to English miusc and watch English language movies .

Sencond, i think we can read english books it helps us to memorize words .

Next we can listen to english tapes i think it helps us to memorize words ,too .

Finally . we can talk with english penpal .it will help our spoken .

I hope every body will get good grides.

翻译：

怎样去学习英语是一个困难的事情。但是现在我有一个好主意。

我认为我们有许多的方法去学习英语。例如第一我们可以去听英语歌还有可以去看英语电视。

第2 ，我认为我们可以去读英语书它能帮助我们去记住英语单词。

然后我们可以去听英语录音 ，我认为它也能帮我们去记住英语单词。

最后，我们可以和英语笔友一起交流 。它将会帮助我们的语法。

我希望每个人都将获得一个好成绩。

[六年级英语日记带翻译如何学习英语

Spring festival is on the first day of the first lunar month. Chinese people most like the Spring Festival. During Spring Festival， Chinese people like having meals with their families， playing fireworks in the open air. My sisters and I played fireworks on that day. We had many fireworks. They were very beautiful. They were running into the sky and breaking into pieces. They looked like flowers in the sky. We were very happy and excited. After that， I made a wish. I hope that， we can have a happy and healthy life next year and everyone in my family can be happy.

I enjoy the festival very happy.

译文：

春节是在农历的第一天。中国人最喜欢春节。春节期间,中国人喜欢与家人吃饭,烟花在户外玩。那天我和我的姐妹玩烟花。我们有很多烟花。他们非常漂亮。他们跑到天空,摔成了碎片。他们看起来像花在天空中。我们非常高兴和激动。在那之后,我做了一个愿望。我希望我们明年能有一个快乐和健康的生活,家里每个人都可以快乐。

我很喜欢这个节日快乐。

Dear Tom,

I’m so hapy to learn that you want to learn Chinese in Zunyi Teachers’

College here.There is no doubt that to learn Chinese well is by no means an easy

thing, but I have some ideas that may help.

Firstly, it is important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and

take notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to practise

speaking Chinese as much as possible out of class and write down whatever you

hear to accunulate more commonly-used words and idioms.Don’t be afraid of making

mistakes.And try to communicate with local people to develop your listening

ability.Last but not least, you should organize your time and do lots of

exercise.

I think the most important thing is that you should believe in yourself.I’m

sure that you will suceed after your hard work.

Yours,

Wang Hua

在过面试自我介绍这一关时，不管是中文版自我介绍还是英文自我介绍，在紧张的气氛中总会容易出现词语或语法错误的现象。以下有四篇面试英语自我介绍范文，可供参考。

面试英文自我介绍范文一：Im very glad to join in the interviw.First,let me introduce myself to you.My name is Lin YA Qian,Im 20 years old,I come from Zhe Jiang,and Im an outgoing girl,I like philosophy and sport.Oh yes,I hope that I can do something for the Beijing Olympics.If you give me the great chance,I wont let you disappoint.Ok,thats all.I hope that you are satisfied with me,thank you!

中文版：各位领导，给位招聘官，大家好！很高兴能参加这次面试，首先让我做个自我介绍，我叫林雅倩，今年21岁，来自浙江，曾经做过网管的工作，学到了很多东西。我是一个很活泼开朗的男孩，喜欢哲学和运动。这次北京举办奥运会，我很希望能做点什么，如果贵公司给我这个机会，我想我不会让你失望的。简单介绍到这，希望能我今天的表现能令您满意，谢谢！

面试英文自我介绍范文二：How are you, I call XX.This year is 22 years old.Graduate from XXXX college.The profession is a calculator multimedia.I am one is bright, optimism, there is the person of responsibility.A fondness for plays basketball, computer, listen to music, etc..Thankful your company gives me this the opportunity of the personal interview!

你好，我叫XX。今年22岁。毕业于XXXX学院。专业是计算机多媒体。我是一个开朗，乐观，有责任心的人。爱好打篮球，电脑，听音乐，等。感谢贵公司给我这次面试的机会！

面试英文自我介绍范文三：Dear Sir or Madame.

Hello ! I m XX ,I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company. I’m 22 years old and in good health. After graduation from XXXXa middle school, I have studied IT for many years. I am a better man.Do well in personal responsibility ,I am good at both operating a PC,I like palying basketball.computer and listening to the music.I’m interested in the position .

I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.

XXXX

面试英文自我介绍范文四：很高兴做自我介绍，我出生在辽宁，专业是国际贸易，毕业于南开大学，我的兴趣是音乐，读书，尤其是经济类的书。

很荣幸应聘贵公司，希望能在贵公司实现我的梦想，希望能给我一次机会，谢谢。

I am very happy to introduce myself here.I was born in Liaoning Province.I graduated from Nankai University and majored in International Trade. I like music and reaing books,especially economical books. It is my honor to apply this job. I hope I can realise my dream in our company.Please give me a chance.Thank you very much

it is my great pleasure to introduce myself.i was born in LIAONING. My major is international trade. I was graduated in Nankai University. My hobby lies in the music and reading, especially like economics.

i am glad that i can take part in this interview and i am sincerely hope that i can join this company to realize my dream. please give my a chance. Thank you.

[自我介绍英语小学生

1、a bosorn friend after brings distant land near 海内存知己,天涯若比邻.

2、A brother may not be a friend, but a friend will always be a brother. 兄弟未必是朋友，而朋友总是兄弟。 ——Benjamin Franklin

3、A father is a treasure, a brother is a comfort, but a friend is both. 父亲是财富，兄弟是安慰，朋友兼而有之。

4、A friend exaggerates a man’s virtue, an enemy his crimes. 朋友宣扬人的美德，敌人夸大人的罪过

5、Without confidence there is no friendship. 没有信任，就没有友谊。——Epicurus

6、A friend indeed is a friend in need.患难见真情和患难之交才是真正的朋友.

7、A friend is a second self. 朋友是第二个自我。

8、A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。

9、A friend is never known till a man has need.需要之时方知友。

10、A friend that you buy with presents will be bought from you.

11、A friend without faults will be found.没有十全十美的朋友。

12、A hedge between keeps friendship green.君子之交淡如水(字面：朋友之间有所界限 才能让友谊之树长青)。

13、A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生没有了朋友就犹如失去了阳光。

14、Without words, in friendship, all thoughts, all desires, all expectations, are silent joy and sharing.在友谊里，不用言语，一切的思想，一切的愿望，一切的希冀，都在无声的欢乐中发生而共享了。 --(黎)纪伯伦

15、A man should keep his friendship in constant repair. 只有经常“浇灌”，方能保持友谊天长地久。

16.a life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。

17.a near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman. 远亲不如近邻。

18.a ready way to lose friend is to lend him money. 失友皆从借钱起。

19.a thousand friends are few, one enemy is too many. 朋友千人尚觉少，仇敌一人犹嫌多。

20.a true friend is known in the day of adversity. 疾风知劲草，患难见真情。

21.admonish your friends in private, praise them in public. 在私底下要忠告你的朋友，在公开场合又表扬你的朋友。

22.an empty purse frightens many friends. 囊中无分文，亲友不上门。

23.be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. 选择朋友要审慎，摒弃更要审又慎。

24.better lose a jest than a friend. 宁可不说一句俏皮话，以免得罪朋友们。

25.choose an author as you choose a friend. 选书如择友。

Hello everyone！ My name is Chen Jiaobing. I have a pair of eyes, curved eyebrows, not tall nor short, every hair in a ponytail.

My favorite color is blue. My hobby is singing and dancing... My favorite people are my family, my friends and the people worthy of my respect.

My greatest dream is to have wings of angels or elves and fly freely in the blue sky. I am very outgoing, I like to make friends, to be good to friends.

我们祖国有悠久的历史，有着许多传统节日，还有一些各具特色的民风民俗。但我最喜欢的传统节日是：春节。除夕过了，春节也就到了，新的一年开始了。

Our motherland has a long history, there are many traditional festivals, and there are some distinctive folk customs. But my favorite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. The new years Eve has passed and the Spring Festival is coming, the new year begins.

除夕那天真热闹，家家赶做年菜，到处是酒肉的香味。男女老少都穿起新衣，门外贴上了红红的对联，屋里贴好了各色的年画。除夕夜家家灯火通宵，不许间断，鞭炮声日夜不绝。在外边做事的人除非万不得已，必定赶回家来吃团圆饭。这一夜，除了很小的孩子，没有什么人睡觉都要守岁。春节的光景与除夕那天截然不同：铺户都上着板子，门前堆着昨夜燃放的爆竹纸皮，全城都在休息。男人们午前到亲戚家朋友家拜年。女人们在家中接待客人。城内城外许多寺院举办庙会，小贩们在庙外摆摊卖茶，食品和各种玩具。小孩子们特别爱逛庙会，为的是有机会到城外看看野景，可以骑毛驴，还能买到新年特有的玩具。庙会上有赛马的，还有赛骆驼的。

The new years Eve that day lively, every new year is full of rushes, wine and meat smell. The men and women and the young and the young were all wearing new clothes, the door was red and red couplets, and the house was pasted with various years of painting. On New Years Eve, lights all night, no interruption, the sound of firecrackers day and night. Outside work unless people cannot but, must come home for family reunion dinner. That night, in addition to a very small child, not what people have to sleep staying-up late on new years eve. The Spring Festival was very different from the Lunar New Years Eve: operators are on the board, in front of a pile of cardboard last night fireworks, the city is at rest. The men before noon to relatives and friends at home pay New Years call. Women receive guests at home. In many temples outside the city, temple fairs were held. Peddlers sold tea, food and various toys outside the temple. The children loved visiting the temple, as is the opportunity to look at the scenery outside the city, you can ride a donkey, can buy new year special toys. There are horse racing and camels on the temple fair.

这些比赛并不为争谁第一谁第二，而是在观众面前表演马，骆驼与骑者的美好姿态与娴熟技能。“嘭”天空中五颜六色的。原来每年必放的烟花开始了，家家户户都把自家最美的烟花放上了天空，烟花在黑色的夜空中绽开来，一个比一个光彩夺目，天空中似乎正在举行一场选美比赛。美极了！所有人顿时停留在了那一刻，只听到烟花绽放时的惊叹声，大人们脸上露出了童真的笑容，开始回忆起自己的美好童年。

These games do not compete for the first second, but the good posture and skill of the horses, camels and riders in front of the audience. "Bang riotous with colour in the sky". The original annual fireworks will begin, every family had their most beautiful fireworks in the sky, the fireworks in the black sky split apart, than the one in the sky seems to The brightness dazzles the eyes., held a beauty contest. Beautiful! All of them stopped at that moment. They only heard the exclamation of fireworks. Their faces showed a childlike smile and began to recall their happy childhood.

同时，我们都悄悄许了愿望：希望今年我能以一个优秀的成绩考上一座中学！新的一年，新的开始。希望今年六年级的同学都一齐努力，用一个好成绩来创造自己的未来。

At the same time, we all quietly made a wish: I hope I can go to a high school with a good result this year! A new year, a new start. I hope that all the students in grade six will work together to create their own future with a good result.

My friend is Chen Haotian. Although he and I cant say what is iron man, but the relationship is good.

He looks thin, looking elegant, is a gentleman. He read a lot, belong to our class reading celebrity.

His favorite rubber war games. Every day at noon to eat a meal, we can play with rubber. Rubber war is everyone to fight with his rubber, whose rubber fell to the ground first, who even loses. This game is divided into two modes: fighting mode and monsters. Fighting modes are fighting each other, and monsters mode is a few people together to kill a giant rubber. Because Chen Haotian rubber is a little small, so, every time he lost soon, but he still loves the game.

Day at noon, we again as usual, eat a meal together play, rubber war play today is monsters model - a giant city in ruins. Results play a mess, noisy. Ze-yu wang to rock the boat at this moment, is always crowded, I said: "dont play with you, would you please go away." He also ignore, also said to Chen Haotian: "look, this is the bomb, who touch me, who is dead!" Chen Haotian and he said to him: "please go away!" Ze-yu wang cheekily said: "this is a meteor shower, who hit, who died." Chen Haotian finally fire, said: "dont play!" So, we have to take our different things away. You see, he devoured are very gentleman poise yo.

Another time, we play rubber wars, Chen Haotian remembered the last time rowdy scenes, he said to you: "please turn the volume to 1-3 degrees, and my voice now." His sense of humor, to present the students laughed.

This is my good friend Chen Haotian - a very gentleman poise, and funny boy. Hope I can more deep friendship with him!

我的朋友是陈昊天。我和他虽然说不上是什么铁哥们，但关系还是不错的。

他长得瘦瘦的，看起来文质彬彬，很是绅士。他读书很多，属于我们班的读书名人。

他最喜欢玩橡皮大战游戏。每天中午吃过饭，我们就一起玩橡皮大战。橡皮大战就是每个人用自己的橡皮来斗，谁的橡皮先掉在地上，谁就算输。这种比赛分成两种模式：打斗模式和杀怪模式。打斗模式是互相打斗，而杀怪模式是几个人一起杀一个巨大的橡皮。因为陈昊天的橡皮有点小，所以，每次他都很快败下阵来，但他仍然十分喜爱这个游戏。

一天中午，我们又像往常一样，吃过饭一起玩橡皮大战，今天玩的是杀怪模式——巨人城废墟。结果玩得乱七八糟，闹哄哄的。这时王泽宇来捣乱，老是挤我，我说：“没和你玩，请你走开。”他理也不理，又对陈昊天说：“看，这个是炸弹，谁碰我，谁就死!”陈昊天又对他说：“请你走开!”王泽宇嬉皮笑脸地说道：“这是流星雨，砸到谁，谁就死。”陈昊天终于火了，说：“不玩了!”于是，我们只好各拿各的东西走了。你瞧，他发火都很有绅士风度哟。

还有一次，我们玩橡皮大战，陈昊天想起了上次闹哄哄的场景，就对大家说：“请各位把音量调到1——3度，和我现在说话的声音一样。”他的幽默，令在场的同学都哈哈大笑了起来。

这就是我的好朋友陈昊天——一个很有绅士风度，又很幽默的男孩。希望我和他的友谊能越加深厚!

I have many friend。do you know who they are？are they my pet？no。are they my classmates?no。 let me tell you:they are my favourit book。

I like books very much。i like reading science book，cartoonbook so on。not only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good person in the society，they give me great pleasure。

I love books!

my name is wu jie. i am a student of dongzhou middle school. i like playing basketball and singing. zhang jiong is my good friend. he wears a white t-shirt and blue jeans. he is very handsome. he likes playing football and singing. he is a good student. he usually helps me with my maths.

we are deskmates at school. on sunday, we usually play football and swim together. we often visit each other and play computer games together. we are very happy to be with each other and help each other.

我的名字是吴杰。我是东洲中学的学生。我喜欢打篮球和唱歌。张炯是我的好朋友。他穿着一件白色T恤和蓝色牛仔裤。他很帅。他喜欢踢足球和唱歌。他是个好学生。他经常帮我学数学。

在学校我们是同桌。星期日，我们通常踢足球和游泳在一起。我们经常互相拜访，一起玩电脑游戏。我们在一起互相帮助很快乐。

[我的朋友和我英语作文

Hello! My name is Mingming. I am a pupil. I like speaking English very

much. I go to school five days every week. Every day I go to school on foot.

Because my school is not near my home. I like my school. There are about 3500

students and 54 teachers in my school. And I study in Grade 4. There are 45

students in my class. My English teacher is tall and handsome . I love him very

much. Welcome to my school. You must be very happy.

你好!我的名字叫明明。我是一个小学生。我非常喜欢说英语。我每周要去学校五天。我每天步行去上学。因为我的学校不是在我家附近。我喜欢我的学校。在我的学校里大约有3500名学生和54老师。我在四年级学习。在我的班级里有45个学生。我的英语老师又高又帅。我非常喜欢他。欢迎来到我的学校。你一定很开心。

中考英语作文范文 我的朋友

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I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.

He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

I have a good friend whose name is Chen Yingxi. She doesn‘t work very well at her study, but she is very willing to help others.

One day, my lunch box disppeared from our class‘ lunch-basket, so I had to look for it in other classes‘ lunch-basket. Chen Yingxi said, Let me go to look for it with you. Then we went to the third floor and the fourth floor to look for my lunch box. At last, we found it, and sweat covered both of our foreheads. I expressed my thanks to her, but she said, Don‘t mean it. This is what a friend is all about.

I am very glad to make friends with Chen Yingxi.

[我的好朋友为题的小学生英语作文

The long-awaited Lantern Festival finally arrived, people be jubilant in various ways to celebrate this happy day. We are one family get together fireworks lanterns.

Came to the square, here is already huge crowds of people, we walk through the crowd, bought a kongmin light, I am carrying lanterns, mother took the pen, write on the desire in the lanterns. I put the sky lanterns distraction, it slowly becomes a cylinder, dad put alcohol block on the small hook, with lighter lit it. One minute, two minutes, three minutes...... I slowly let go, lanterns slowly rose to the sky, drifting away, slowly turned into a little red dot, finally disappeared. Originally put kongmin light also need patience!

We finished the lanterns and go to the fireworks. Fireworks lit up, "bang!" A yellow spot moment in the air blast a lotus, opened a prelude, followed by various shapes of fireworks turns into battle, will the sky to flourish stage.

"Wow!" A blue fireworks opened in my head like fried, debris covered the sky. Some fireworks like beautiful flowers, some like a stupid face hanging in midair...... The whole square over into invites, Ambilight ocean of joy!

A second time in the past, people have to leave; and end with a small fireworks. I would be reluctant to part of the home!

This year I had a really happy lantern festival!

期盼已久的元宵节终于到了，人们兴高采烈地以各种方式来庆祝这个欢乐的日子。我们一家人约好一起放烟花孔明灯。

来到广场，这里已经是人山人海，我们穿过人群，买了一个孔明灯，我提着孔明灯，妈妈拿着笔，在孔明灯上写上了愿望。我把孔明灯撑开，它慢慢变成一个圆柱体，爸爸把酒精块放在小钩上，用火机把它点燃。一分钟、两分钟、三分钟……我才慢慢地松开手，孔明灯也慢慢地升上了天空，越飘越远，慢慢变成了小红点，最后不见了。原来放孔明灯也需要耐心呀！

我们放完了孔明灯又去放烟花。点燃烟花，“嘭！”一个小黄点瞬间在空中炸出一朵荷花，揭开了序幕，紧接着各种形状的烟花轮番上阵，将天空化为争奇斗艳的舞台。

“哇！”一朵蓝色的烟花在我头顶炸开了，像是碎片布满天空。有的烟花像美丽的花朵，有的像一个笨脸挂在半空中……整个广场上空变成了火树银花，流光溢彩的欢乐海洋！

时间一分一秒地过去了，人们都纷纷离去；最后在一个小烟花中结束。我也依依不舍的回家了！

今年的元宵节我过得真快乐！

[难忘的元宵佳节英语作文及翻译

Last weekend ,I went to Beijing I love there .The summer Places is so beautiful and we went to Wangfujing .Though there are lots of people and the things are too expensive ,many people buy things in there.I bought a pair of beautiful shoes in there.I love Beijing .There are too beautiful!

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。