作文英语老师二三事【实用20篇】

她是一个很平凡的人。一张白皙而以俏丽的脸上；两道细溜溜的眉毛；一双小而有神眼睛，薄薄的嘴唇，常常挂着恬静的微笑。她个子不高，站在我们中间像是我们的一员。

她是一个很幽默，可爱的人。一次她在黑板上画了一只猴子，指着画，请了一个开小差的同学问她这是什么。她一慌之下把monkey说成了lizard。陆老师瞪大眼睛，装出一脸狐疑，轻声地问：“同学们，你们看到过像这种品种的lizard吗？下面一阵哄堂大笑。老师及时纠正说：“这是monkey，以后上课要认真听。”

有一次，有位同学上课在开小差，陆老师轻轻地走过去，拍拍他的肩膀说：“革命尚未成功，同志仍需努力啊！”小朋友有错误时，陆老师从不正面批评而是用巧妙的语言给予提醒。

在她的英语课上总是充满了欢声笑语，我们也越来越喜欢英语了！

当同学们问起我：“这句英语怎么读，这个单词是什么意思？”等等关于一些英语方面的问题时，我总会自豪地告诉他们答案，也总会想起我的英语启蒙老师。

以前我对英语是一窍不通，刚一接触英语时就对这一项语言充满了害怕和恐惧感，我立下誓言：以后再也不学英语了。

直到有一天，一位年轻漂亮的女老师的出现，改变了我对英语的看法，她就是我的英语启蒙老师——严忠婷。

记得，刚学英语的第一天，我鼓足了勇气和妈妈一起来到了“灵通”学校，妈妈对我说：“这是一个专业的英语老师，这一次一定要好好学英语。”我记住了妈妈的话，和妈妈一起来到了报名处，那位英语老师已经在那儿等我们了。她很漂亮，一头长发，一双炯炯有神的眼睛。他站了起来，微笑着用英语对我说：“hello.”（你好）“what`s your name? ”（你叫什么名字？）我凭借着妈妈平时教我的一些常用语言还能听懂老师的提问。有礼貌的回应到：“l`m li hai rui（我叫李海芮），good morning teacher!”（老师早上好！）老师听了我的回答也很高兴，一同把我带进了教室。

课堂上，由于我不会英语，老师就用中英结合的方法使我们能听懂它。为了是我们对英语产生兴趣，她给我们每人取了一个好听的英文名字，我也有一个特别的英文名“helen”，老师也有一个英文名“judy”，课堂上我们各自都用英文名称呼对方，渐渐地我对英语产生了浓厚的兴趣。老师还为了让我们更快更牢记所学的英语，使用自己制作的特殊卡片，在卡片上画上画，并写上相应的英语单词。我们在课堂上用卡片做游戏，这样我们在学中玩，玩中学，于是我能很快地把单词记住，我们的英语课也总是充满了欢声笑语。

还记得有几次，我生病了没能去上课，老师怕我落下功课，晚上冒着蒙蒙细雨，带着课本来到我家，认真地为我讲解了白天所学的内容。第二天，我走在街上，有的同学问我“你是不是请家教了呀！”我答道“没有，昨晚老师来我家为我补习功课。”同学们都投来羡慕的目光，我感到好幸福。老师有时像一位母亲，时时向我问寒问暖，有时也像是我的知心朋友，我们在一起畅所欲言。

时间过得飞快，我的英语水平也日渐提高，突然有一天，老师带着一位陌生的英语老师来了，我们都感到好奇，课堂上，老师一边上课，一边在为旁边的那位女老师讲课堂流程，我原本以为这位老师是实习的，向我们的英语老师讨讨经验，以后好去别的地方上课，总之轮不上教我们。

说什么不好，也偏偏说上头了，我怎么也没想到，这竟是老师和我们在一起的最后一堂课了。

回到家，老师给我打来电话颤颤巍巍地说“helen”，老师下星期就要转到南溪去了。就由今天我带来的这位老师教你们，你放心，这位老师的教学能力也很好……”老师的话像一个晴天霹雳打在我的头上。我的脑子“嗡”地一下，愣住了，一片茫然。过了半天才反应过来。我心里想着：为什么呀？我和严老师接触才两年，就要分开，这真是为什么呀？我的眼泪像断线的珠子流了出来，我怎么也接受不了事实。

事实就是这样，调侃老师也是学习中必有的事，这也意味着老师的教学能力提高了，也为此感到高兴，想到又有更多像我一样的学生能和严老师交朋友，同时又接触了一位新来的老师，俗话说“一百个老师有一百个老师的教法。”我也渐渐接受了事实。

有些分离是悲伤的，有些分离是幸福的，但又一想起老师往日对我的好，心里又感到酸酸的。

Liu Ming is my chemistry’ teacher. He is an ordinary-looking little man with thick glasses, but he has a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting.

I remembered his first lesson. He put three bottles on the desk. One was filled with kerosene, one with castor oil, and one with vinegar. And he said "Now watch carefully. Pay attention to everything that I do." He held up one of his fingers and dipped it into the cup after he mixed the three kinds of liquid in a big cup together.

A few seconds later, he took his finger out, put it in his mouth and sucked it. "How delicious! You must do everything that I do." said he. And then we did it like him. lmmediately we made a face. The mixture tasted horrible.

It was first chemistry lesson. I never forget it.

My Teacher

My English teather is Mr Xu, his English name is Martin. His English is very good. And he always wears a pair of glasses. He likes wearing blue trousers. My teacher is handsome. He often plays with us after class. He often reads books and English. His hobby is reading books. Mr Xu likes drinking Coke and eating chips. Sometimes he is angry, because we are naughty. Sometimes he is happy, because we are good.

Our art teacher is not too old and not too young. He’s tall and strong. He has a big mouth and small ears. He likes wearing a hat. He is good at drawing. He’s very funny. We all like him.

My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。

My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t heToday, we have

science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is heHe’s a Mr. Zhou .

My English teacher

I have a very good English teacher. Our class all like her very much. Though she’s our English teacher, but we often call her name Holly.  She is very friendly to us. We all like to have English classes very much.

She is so young and beautiful. She looks like a middle school student. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes wearing T-shirts and jeans.

She teaches English very well. In class, she looks like our elder sister. We usually learn new things by playing games and singing songs ,so we always have fun in English class. She often helps us to solve problems. After class, she looks like our friend. We often play games together.

Now , you see , do you like our English teacher too

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

译文：

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

黄老师非常喜欢狗，因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

Hello! I’m Jessie. I like English very much, because of my English teacher, Nettie. Today, I’ll introduce her to you.

In my eyes, she’s not a teacher, but a lovely girl and a good friend of mine. She is not tall. She is thin. She has the long hair. Her face is round. There are two small eyes on her face. She likes smiling. When she smiles, her eyes just like the moon at the beginning of the month. I think she is very beautiful girl.

She’s very kind, like an old friend. She can sing. She can draw. She can dance. She can speak very good English. She can tell us stories. She can play games with us. When we have an English lesson, we feel very happy. All of us are interested in her lesson.

I have a good teacher. I think I’m very lucky.

My english teacher

Today, I go to school with a headache. At the beginning, it is just a slightly pain. Nevertheless, it is not until the English lesson that my head pains heavily. So it is difficult for me to take notes. Luckily, my English teacher notices it so she takes me to theoffice. With a big smile on her face and caring words, she gives me a glass of water. To my surprise, she offers to help me notes. It is her love that warms me up. At that moment, I whisper myself that I will do my utmost to help others as kind as my English teacher.

Dear teachers

hello everyone!

"Spring comes early again", the Spring Festival of the year of the dragon

is quietly coming to us. On the occasion of the Spring Festival, president Xu of

pinggudian Town Central School, together with the leading class of the central

school, extended new years blessing and festival greetings to all the teaching

staff and retired teachers who have been working hard in the teaching line. I

would like to express my high respect and sincere thanks to the families of the

staff who have been caring and supporting the work of the school for a long

time!

The past year has been an extraordinary year. It has been a year in which

we have worked hand in hand, overcome difficulties, forge ahead in unity, and

work hard to start a business. It has also been a year of great achievements and

good news. Under the correct leadership of the County Bureau of education and

sports, all the cadres and staff of pinggutian central school are in the same

boat, united in spirit, striving hard and enterprising, overcoming difficulties,

striving for first-class achievements, and making remarkable achievements in

education and teaching under the correct leadership of the county education and

Sports Bureau It is presented. The schools school running conditions have been

significantly improved, the school running taste has been gradually improved,

the classroom teaching reform has been continuously deepened, the quality of

education and teaching has achieved leapfrog development, the preschool

education has made breakthrough progress, the achievements of art education have

been fruitful, and the provincial education supervision and evaluation has

passed the high standard All these are full of the painstaking efforts and sweat

of our front-line teachers. 2012 is the "year of quality improvement". Our

education and teaching management needs to be further standardized, classroom

teaching reform needs to be further deepened, and the quality of education and

teaching needs to be further improved. The new years bell has sounded, the east

wind is surging, and the clarion calls for expeditions. We are about to embark

on a new journey full of hope, opportunities and challenges. Let us use the

sonorous and powerful oath, the indomitable spirit of struggle, and unremitting

efforts to compose a new chapter in the education of pinggutian central

school!

Dear teachers, winter vacation is a holiday full of happiness; Spring

Festival is an auspicious and happy festival. In order to let you have a

civilized and full Festival, the Central School suggests to you:

1. Give yourself more reminders

We should always pay attention to the safety of fire, electricity and gas

during the holidays. When visiting relatives and friends, we must pay attention

to guard against theft, close the doors and windows, lock the door, and do not

drive after drinking to ensure the safety of yourself and your family. We should

consciously avoid gambling, drinking, feudal superstitious activities and

indulging in the Internet. We should do more physical exercise every day and

take part in healthy and beneficial cultural and recreational activities. Pay

attention to scientific diet, dont overeat and take good care of your body.

2. Give more time to study

Winter vacation has a relatively concentrated, discretionary time, it is

recommended that we should arrange a little time for self charging. On the one

hand, we should sum up the experience and lessons in the work of this semester

and formulate the work plan for the next semester. On the other hand, we can

calm down and seriously familiarize ourselves with the curriculum standards of

teaching subjects. We should read the textbooks of next semester in advance,

read one or two good books, and study some educational and teaching theories. We

should constantly enrich, enrich and improve ourselves, let our thinking and

practice go hand in hand, so that we can better adapt to the class It is

necessary for the reform of classroom teaching.

3. Give your family more care

Enjoy the family, our life journey is not lonely, spread the family, can

win the respect of others. During the Spring Festival, lets be filial to our

elders, take care of our younger ones, and keep in touch with our friends. In

particular, we should take care of our bodies, experience the beauty of human

nature and feel a better life in dedication and care.

Finally, once again, I wish you all a safe, happy, peaceful and meaningful

festival. I wish all the staff a happy Spring Festival, all the best of luck,

good health and happiness for the whole family!

Pinggudian Town Central School

8月初，我们重回到熟悉的校园。眼前的一切依然还在，一张张熟悉的面孔呈现在眼前。可是，有一张再熟悉不过的面孔却找也找不到了。

后来听说，她出了事故，目前在医院接受治疗。顿时，同学们的心情都陷入了低谷。虽然平时最厌烦她的课了，但我们的心都还是一直牵挂着她。她，就是我们的英语老师——李碧。

往日，她的霸道，让同学们对英语充满恐惧。

美术、信息……一些非主科的课程都被她无情地霸占了。同学们都愤怒地抱怨她封杀了他们的“艺术细胞”。终于，今天的到来，它们又有了“重见天日”的机会了。可问题是，这些所谓的“艺术细胞”们已不再那么活跃了。

铃声一响，她又熟练地走进教室，开始她的英语课。除了有非常紧迫的事，她决不迟到。因此，在我的记忆中，她只有两次迟到教室几分钟。口中还不停念叨“sory！I’msory！”课堂上，她的每节课都“精打细算过，都备了教案，果然，时间都在她的意料掌握着，决不会留下一分钟让我们有机可趁的机会。因此，每个单元都在她的一丝不苟下结束。

最让人厌烦的还得数那频繁的考试了。一个单元的学习内容刚结束，第二天就测验，所以，就别期待有课来复习了。但考试完毕，你也不必期待轻松一下，

因为第二天，她就捧着早已改好的试卷走进教室，随后，卷子都发到了每个人的手中，虽然考得不理想，可她从不不会骂我们，而是鼓励和赞扬：“comeon！Belineyoarself！”，让每一个学生的的信心树立起来。

她已经两个月没有踏入这熟悉的教室了。原以为我们得到“解放”，会变得更开心。可后来才慢慢发现自己早已不能与她脱离。我们不能适应也不想适应另一个英语老师。我们期盼，期盼美术、信息课又变回英语课；期盼每天早晨又是一只国宝来教我们读单词；期盼下一节英语课又是那张消失两月了的面孔。可是，这些想法要寄托到下个学期才能实现。

相信她的每个学生都有一个自私的想法，让她赶快康复起来，回来与我们一起度过初三时光。但愿上帝保佑我的自私，祝她早日康复！

我的英语老师姓闫，叫继旭，是个帅气的中年男子。闫老师个子有一米七多，皮肤黑黑的，看起来很老实。他英俊的脸上总是挂着微笑，不过有时发火时就不是了。

闫老师是个十分幽默的人，给我留下印象最深的就是几星期前的那节英语课。

那时闫老师提问到了一位同学，但是那个同学没有听讲，不知道是哪个问题，也不会。就在这时，闫老师想到了一个绝妙的办法，想着，他笑着对那位同学说：“没事儿，坐下吧，不是你的问题，是脑子的问题，回家花三毛钱换一个脑子就行了！”

课还是接着上，一旦提问到了谁，但是站起来不说话的，老师就会笑着对他们说：“嘴巴忘记带了吗？现在可以回家拿的！”

闫老师幽默归幽默，搞笑归搞笑，他同时又是那么地关心自己的学生。

那天我们正在写书面作业，最后一排的李文婧只小声地说了一声自己头疼，然后用手按住头部，简直没有一点声响。可是闫老师竟然像雷达一样发现了这一小小举动。他就像看到自己的孩子生病一样，在瞬间跑了过去，问李文婧哪里不舒服，还拿着她的水杯，问她用不用去倒点热水。那时大约离下课还有十五分钟，可是单单这十几分钟，闫老师就去问候李文婧三十次之余。可见闫老师是多么地关心自己的学生啊！

这就是我的英语老师，这就是我帅气的英语老师，这就是我幽默的英语老师，这就是我关心自己学生的英语老师，这就是我的好英语老师！

our class is a bad class in our school。 but when mr。 johnson came，everything changed。 he looks kind and special。 before he came， we thought classes were boring。 and no one listened to the teachers carefully。 but mr。 johnson has made us the best class only half a year later。

he is fond of talking with us equally and never forces us to study。 he develops our interests in studying。 besides， he tells us how to be a man first， then to be a good student。 he respects our feelings， so we all trust him and feel glad to follow what he says。

[我们的新老师英语作文

New semester has come a new teacher, thin and long face with a broad-brimmed glasses frame, laughed, and a bright red lips up become warped, moment, back to the serious look, this is my math teacher, miss zhao.

Whenever the class, he always come first "prologue" : read the topic, and requirements. Followed by plain, there is no passion to ask: "have faith?" There is no doubt that we must answer "yes". In class, each persons actions to escape his sharp eyes, however, as long as one finds that someone has to do little affectations, or whispering has nothing to do with mathematics, he immediately walked over to the students, to carry the paper, "pa", on the students table, will continue to have a class, the classmate reluctantly shook his head, pulled out a pen and write down his home telephone number on the paper, waiting for the fate of any...

Once, the hot weather, the classroom "shout shout" fan, a classmate said: "somehow, other classes, the classroom as a stove, have math, like in the snow, cold I get goose bumps!" Next to a classmate echoed: "yes, yes, I also feel this way!" I smiled and said: "you also too exaggeration! Miss zhao really have so much magic?" "May, might!" Never know who is 1.

Tender and loving seen too many female teacher, to such a distinctive male teacher, is also very unforgettable.

新学期，来了一位新老师，瘦瘦长长的脸上架着一副宽边眼镜，笑起来，鲜红的嘴唇往上一翘，瞬间，又回到那严肃的模样，这就是我的数学老师——赵老师。

每当上课，他总先来段“开场白”：先读题目，再说要求。紧接着平平淡淡、毫无激情地问一句：“有信心吗?”毫无疑问，我们肯定回答“有”。上课中，每一个人的所作所为都逃不过他犀利的眼睛，只要一眼发现有人做小动作，或者窃窃私语与数学无关的事，他便立刻走到那位同学跟前，把随身携带的纸，“啪”，放在那位同学的桌上，便继续上课，那位同学无可奈何地摇摇头，拿出笔，在纸上写上自己家的电话号码，等待不测的命运……

一次，天气闷热，教室里的风扇“呼呼呼”地转个不停，一位同学说：“不知怎么回事，上其他课，教室像火炉，上数学课，却像在下雪，‘冷’得我起鸡皮疙瘩!”旁边一位同学附和着：“对，对，我也有这种感觉!”我笑着说：“你们也太夸张了吧!赵老师真有这么大的魔力吗?”“可能，可能!”不知是谁插了一句。

见过太多温柔可亲的女老师，来了这样一位与众不同的男老师，也很难忘哟。

Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last

two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your

serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You

inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with

English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering,

I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the

fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and

develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement

supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that

everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet

to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep

going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere

appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

敬爱的布朗老师：

我谨以此向您表达我最真诚的谢意，感谢您在过去两年里对我的帮助。在过去的两年里，成为您的学生，我学到了许多。首先，您对教学和学生的认真态度使我深受感动。您鼓舞着我不断地努力学习。其次，在您的影响下，我深深地喜欢上了英语。作为一名理工科学生，我以前一直认为英语对我毫无用处，但您使我认识到了英语的魅力所在，带我走进了一个全新的世界，培养了不同的思维方式。最后，您的鼓励总在我遭遇困难或挑战是鼓励着我。您曾经说过：“每一件事情到了最后都会变成好事，如果不是，那说明还没有到最后。”每当想起您说过的话，我就有了坚持下去的动力。

最后，请允许我再次向您表达我的感谢，接受我真诚的谢意。献上最美好的祝福。

他，戴着鸭舌帽，他，披着一件灰外套，好似一个老干部。他就是我的老师——应老师。还记得我们的师生之旅是从我小升初那年开始的。那时，我来到一个完全陌生的地方，难免有些生疏。可是他的课，我觉得格外亲切。

那是他上的英语课，在课堂上告诉了我们一个记单词的诀窍，就是用音标记单词，可是刚接触音标的我，根本搞不清楚哪几个字母读哪个音，使我的听写没的不堪入目，应老师见了，不由的开起了玩笑：“我可真是伤心啊！”他说完后没有马上走开，反而是帮我认真的分析起来，边说边让我作笔记。让我记清楚，下次听写不要那么多错，那么辛苦的订证。

窗外的鸟儿在欢唱，伴着我“唰唰”的写字声和应老师的讲解声。

“colour，green，smart……。”又是一次听写，可这次，我有了应老师亲身传授的听写宝典，终于破了我的记录，拿了听写的第一个一百分！拿着听写本时，我的耳边好似又响起应老师给我认真的讲解声。

应老师在我的脑海中不只是英语王，还是一个“百科全书”。

在上课的前几分钟，应老师总会来和我们“谈谈人生”，“八婆八婆”。就拿最近几次的英语课来说说吧。

致尊敬的英语老师：

您好!

时间飞快流逝，光阴似箭，弹指之间六年时间就快逝去，想起要与相处以久的老师分别，心中涌现出依依不舍之情，让我们打开封闭已久的记忆匣，重温那一幕幕感人的情节。人世间，有真诚无限;记忆中，有繁星点点;生命里，绿色永不干枯。面对这一切，我有千言万语……

在离别的最后一刻，我要对老师说：“老师您辛苦了!谢谢您多年来的教导，您就像是我生命中的一盏明灯，照亮了我生命的道路，引导我走向光明。”

是谁在深夜迟迟入睡?是谁在课堂中传授我们知识?是谁在临将毕业时为我们查找资料?是您，是您在明亮的台灯下专心致志地批改作业;是您在趣味课堂中一丝不苟地传授知识;是您在临将毕业时为我们查找英语资料。因为有缘，千里来相会，让我成了您的学生。让我们一同学习，一起悲，一起伤，一起乐!到了那苍茫的七月，就走进了分离的悲伤。

在我的记忆中您是那么勤勤恳恳，每一次去到您的办公室您都在忙碌的工作，您总是在默默工作着，在屡行自己的职责。

您在寒风怒号的冬天中，您总是会对我们说;“今天很冷，注意穿多点衣服和今天有人不舒服吗?”这一句话蕴含着您的关怀，您的真心。让我的心立刻温暖起来，您的关怀藏在您经常对我们说的话中。马上就要毕业了，我即伤又悲。真不知道到时是哭还是笑?我好怕着一天的到来，想到要离别了，我至今都快让泪水一涌而出了，我真希望时间能够停止，永远停留在那美好的时刻!我想，我想……但我知道我在做白日梦!但是我真的不想离开您。

您是我印象在最好的老师，也是我心中之最。您表面十分严格，但是内心是那么的和蔼。您在课堂在是verystrict，但下课却是那么和蔼可亲。

记得在大家一起去旅游时，您笑逐颜开。像吃了蜜一样，脸上时刻挂着一张慈祥的笑脸，我至今依然留念着……这一点一滴都是曾经的过眼云烟了，但不知道为什么却总是浮现在我脑海中，成了最美好的回忆。我想对您说的就如同是大海边五彩的贝壳，数也数不清。这是我多年来挥之不去的记忆!

是缘分将我们欢聚一堂，相信缘分不会就这么缘尽的，希望有缘相见。

祝您：心想事成!

万事如意!

事业步步高!

您的学生：___

20__/5/27写

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

I want to say Thank you to Miss Wang our English teacher.

I can never pay you back for your kindness and your patience. I used to be weak in English. You found my problem and helped me out. With your help I am now good at English. I still remember your smile on the day when I won first prize in the English speech competition.

It was you who gave me the confidence. Thank you,my teacher.

Dear Ms.___,

I write this letter because I want to talk to you about thepunishment of

copying the sentences on the English book.

I don’t think this punishment is fair.

Firstly, I am quite sure that I did complete my homework before. Itis a

weekend assignment. Li Peiqi goes to myhouse every Friday. We do our homework

together. She can prove thatI did it exactly.

Secondly, I remembered that I handed in the paper.

Thirdly, I don’t know the rule of punishment before. Besides, Idon’t know

my paper disappear.

Last, I still like you so much while I would like you to know thetruth.

Love,

Dora

★英语道歉信范文★

★英语书信范文10篇★

★英语文摘精选5篇★

★给老师的一封毕业信600字★

My favourite English teacher

There is a person that I thank for in my life, this is my English

teacher. She is my favourite teacher who helps me out. Now let me tell you why.

I had a bad score in English when I first met her one years ago. It made me more worry and nervous. From then on, our English

teacher started to spend her free time teaching me and I paid more attention to study. After several exams, the score of my English improved thanks to her.

As well as helping me with my English she always takes care of me. For example, once when I got a bad cold, It was her that look after me call my parents to pick me up and because of this I became lively again soon.

Anyway it’s my English teacher who not only gives me the care but also helps me improve my English. What’s your favourite teacher

[我最喜欢的老师英语优秀作文

我们的英语老师辛蒂，齐肩的头发，高挑的身材，长相非常漂亮。她喜欢穿好看的裙子，看起来就像我们的大姐姐。辛蒂老师喜欢和我们做游戏，每次玩拍单词游戏，她都比我们拍得慢，我知道是故意让着我们，我们才对英语产生了兴趣。

辛蒂老师很爱漂亮，给我们上课的时候，有时也在画眼影。她画一只眼睛的时候，另一只眼睛还盯着我们。有个调皮的男生突然喊了一声：“辛蒂!”。我们都吓了一跳，辛蒂老师也被吓着了，额头上留下一条长长的眼影。

这时候，同学们哄堂大笑，辛蒂很生气地对那个男生说：“你也太调皮了吧!罚你把今天学的单词在黑板上写十遍!”辛蒂就是这样，在游戏中，让我们增强对英语的兴趣，并在欢笑中学到了知识。

老师，感谢您用自己的生命之光，照亮了我们人生的旅途。下面请看语文迷为大家提供的关于老师的英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

You are like a third parent. We all love you and respect you.The primary purpose of education is not to teach you to earn your bread, but to make every mouthful sweet.

——James AngelWe all like having you as our teacher. You have our respect and gratefulness.This is Teachers Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.

This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.

There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers Day.We are more thankful than we can express.

You have been a qualified teachers and even better friend. Thank you for all that you have done.

Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.The man who can make hard things easy is the educator.Send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulneand thankfulneon this special day.A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops. — Henry AdamsIt is the most appropriate time to show you our thanks.This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness. We all want to thank you.

I am truly grateful to you for what you have done.

Dear teacher, thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. My grateful sentiments come from the bottom of my heart.

The whole secret of the teachers force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.Thank you for ma-ki-ng learning not a dull thing but a great joy.We all pitched to buy this gift. We are all grateful to you. Without your unselfish dedica- tion could we achieve no suc- cetoday.Our beloved teacher, you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts. The love and care you have given us will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.You are not only a good teacher but our close friend. Thank you for helping us make something of our lives.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honor you sincerely.

我们的英语老师可凶了。她脸上没有一丝笑容，只会鼓起嘴巴生气。你看她的嘴角，总是鼓鼓的，随时都有一股气要发泄出来。

周四有英语课。上课前，吴老师提前来到我们教室。我们就当没看见，照旧玩自己的游戏。

一上课，吴老师站上讲台，我们就感觉大事不妙，赶紧坐得端端正正的。吴老师开始给我们上课，一切都好好的。

可是，有几个男生趁吴老师在黑板上写板书，没时间注意他们，开始说小话。谁知，吴老师耳朵特别灵。她听到同学说话，立刻火冒三丈，大吼大叫。我们都吓了一跳，那几个同学却不闭嘴。吴老师彻底被惹恼了，罚他们抄写英语单词。

啊，那么多，他们肯定会抄死去。这下，他们老实了，吴老师就好好给我们上课。

教师节那天，我们很多同学送花给吴老师。吴老师一边不停地接过我们的花，一边不停地说谢谢。这个时候，她的高兴藏不住了，露出了一丝丝笑容。嗯，笑起来的吴老师比生气时的吴老师漂亮多了。如果她可以哈哈大笑，一定会更漂亮。

吴老师，我们好好学习，你每天笑给我们看，好吗？

1.你在知识的这头，我在那头，你用温柔的眼光将我摆渡;你在智慧的这头，我在那头，你用温暖的关怀将我启迪;你在梦想的这头，我在那头，你用不懈的鼓励助我飞翔。老师愿你节日快乐。

2.以关爱为支点，撬起知识的大地;以教诲为明灯，指引青春的迷津;以温暖为乐土，培育智慧的幼苗;以无悔为格言，践行生命的责任。老师，愿你节日快乐。

3.因为你的微笑，我们学会了笑对人生;因为你的执着，我们学会了勇往直前;因为你的自信，我们学会了坚持到底;今日，我们成功了;今日，你却满头白发，教师节到了，我要忠心祝您永远快乐安康。

4.你让精神的田园开满知识的花朵，你让求知的路途弥漫智慧的芬芳，你让成长的旅途沐浴关爱的春风，老师，是你让我们的人生变得更加美好，节日快乐。

5.三尺讲台上，演译您的伟大，小小粉笔里，抒写您的智慧，谆谆教诲中，载满您的慈爱，滴滴汗水里，浇灌您的辛劳，老师您辛苦了，教师节到，愿老师节日快乐!

6.在千载难逢的13年09月10日教师节里，在这个大“顺”的日子里，祝您工作顺利，生活顺利，事业顺利，生意顺利，入学顺利，事事都顺利!

7.无怨无悔，把自己的青春岁月献给三尺讲台;无偏无倚，将每一个学生都当成自己的子女;无私奉献，传授知识从未想到回报。教师节到了，祝老师们节日快乐!

8.是您给我们解答难题，是您让我们不要轻言放弃，是您带我们走过风雨，是您用知识把我们哺育，让美丽的鲜花带着我们的敬意，让动听的旋律带给您一丝甜蜜，教师节到了，老师，您辛苦了!

9.是你让知识的风筝飘荡在心灵的天空，是你让智慧的明灯点亮青春的殿堂，是你让快乐的骏马奔驰在梦想的草原。老师感谢你的付出，愿你教师节快乐。

10.老师的爱，凝结在红色的批注里，软化在亲切的话语里，躲藏在阳光的角落里，串通在学生的心灵里。教师节，谢老师栽培之恩!

11、杨谭的家长：感谢各位老师对杨谭的精心教导和给予的鼓励，希望您们以后对他严加管教，谢谢！

12、像天空一样高远的是您的胸怀像大山一样深重的是您的恩情请您接受我诚挚的祝福吧，教师节快乐！

13、老师，假如我能搏击蓝天，那是您给了我腾飞的翅膀；假如我是击浪的勇士，那是您给了我弄潮的力量！

14、希望尚德小朋友在辛勤的园丁栽培下，快快乐乐；健健康康的成长和学习！不要辜负老师和父母的厚望！

15、唐吴骥家长：谢谢老师的辛勤教育，希望在老师的严格要求下，孩子能一点点进步，这就是我最大的心愿！

16、希望该孩子在校能遵守学校的一切规章制度，能尊师爱友，虚心求进，能以优异的成绩回报老师，回报父母。

17、一个个日子升起又降落，一届届学生走来又走过，不变的是您深沉的爱和灿烂的笑容。祝福您，亲爱的老师！

18、让我这份美好的祝福通过电波，跨过重重高山，越过滔滔江水，掠过高楼大厦，飞到您的身边：祝您教师节快乐！

19、手中的粉笔慢慢化为漫天爱的灰屑，这爱染白了您原本乌黑的头发。在这特别的日子，献上一句：老师您辛苦了！

20、不管将来我会成为挺拔的乔木，还是低矮的灌木，老师，我都将以生命的翠绿向您致敬！感谢您，我亲爱的老师！