作文英语老师二三事(精选20篇)

Dear Mr. Cao

Hello!

Today, I would like to recommend to you a picture book of traditional

Chinese festivals, Spring Festival.

Spring Festival is the most grand, the most lively and the most important

ancient traditional festival in China. Every Spring Festival, we paste couplets,

red window decorations, and "pour" blessing. But why should the word "Fu" be

pasted upside down? It turns out that the word "Dao" and "Dao" are homophonic,

and vice versa is Fu "Dao". Its like "Fu" is home.

During the Spring Festival, we should not only paste couplets, red window

decorations and "pour" happiness, but also set off firecrackers and fireworks,

and wear red clothes. After reading this book, I realized that there was a

monster called Nian in ancient China. It went to the village to eat cattle,

sheep, chickens, pigs and people every year. Until one year, an old grandfather

who came to the village to beg lived in his wifes house when the villagers went

to avoid animals in the cave. When the "Nian" beast came, he set off

firecrackers in the yard and came out wearing a big red robe. In this way,

"Nian" beast was scared away. Since then, people have pasted couplets, red

window decorations and "Daofu" on their doors. They also set off firecrackers

and fireworks, and put on red clothes. If you are interested, dont read this

book.

Then there is the new years money. Every year on the eve of the Spring

Festival, adults give children lucky money. The original purpose of lucky money

is to suppress evil and expel evil spirits. Because people think that children

are vulnerable to the invasion of ghosts and insects, they use new years money

to drive away evil spirits and help children celebrate the new year safely. I

wish the children good health, good luck and peace in the new year. There is

also an old legend. This legend has something to do with a little demon called

"Sui". You will know after reading this book.

In a word, after reading this book, I gained a lot and also felt the spirit

of Chinese traditional culture. So I want to share with you, hope you will like

it!

wish

Happy new year and good health!

Your student: Wen Zhuo Yan

My teacher is very beautiful, a piece of melon seeds face with a pair of watery big eyes, a pointed nose below a cherry small mouth. When the teacher will be on a comb her long wavy hair, behind like opened a large and beautiful flower, scattered down and becomes a shawl, this is my teacher li. Miss li like mother kindly at ordinary times, I like her very much.

My teacher is very like me, for a long time, I on duty in the monitor of the class, I am very proud. When I meet with difficulties, the teacher will extend a hand of the gentle, help me to solve problem, teach me how to get along with classmates, how to solve some petty things in class, the teachers careful help, I slowly grow up.

On one occasion, the teacher give us homework dictation is family, because I dont have a dictation, hand in your homework on the second day, I have no homework, also didnt tell the teacher. I know Im wrong, but I dont have the courage to admit your mistakes. The bell rang, the teacher came into the classroom. My heart pounding incessantly, like a rabbit, I always low head, didnt look at the teacher. The teacher began to check my dictation, my heart is beating more severe, the teacher call to: "KuiRenJie", I slowly walked to the front of the teacher, is afraid of the teacher in the class criticized me, very regret in my heart, if theres a rift in the classroom, Ill go into, hide. I move to the front of the teacher step by step, the face rises very red, whispered: "I... I didnt write the teacher." Will I always thought the teacher sternly criticized me, but the teacher did not do that, but rather patiently said to me: "hereafter have what matter all want to advance with the teacher to explain, dont wait for the teacher found out again, so you will be very embarrassing, reduce the credibility in front of the students." The teachers words and earnest, deeply printed in my heart. Every time I am determined to complete the teacher leave homework seriously, get rid of the bad habit.

My teacher is lighted up with flashes of holy in my heart, in my heart planted the seeds of love.

我的老师非常美丽，一张瓜子脸上嵌着一双水汪汪的大眼睛，尖尖的鼻子下面一张樱桃小口。当老师将她那长长的卷发一梳上，后面就像开了一朵美丽的大花朵，一散下来就变成一件披肩，这就是我的李老师。李老师平时像妈妈一样和蔼可亲，我非常喜欢她。

我的老师非常喜欢我，一直以来，都让我当班里的大班长，我非常骄傲。当我遇到困难时，老师会伸出那只温柔的手，帮我解决难题，教我如何与同学们相处，如何解决班内的一些琐碎的小事，在老师的细心帮助下，我慢慢地长大了。

有一次，老师给我们留的作业是家庭听写，由于我没有听写，第二天交作业时，我就没有交作业，也没有告诉老师。我知道自己错了，但是我没有勇气去承认自己的错误。上课铃响了，老师走进了教室。我的心怦怦跳个不停，好像装了一只兔子，我一直低着头，不敢看老师。老师开始查听写了，我的心跳得就更厉害了，老师叫到：“隗仁杰”时，我慢慢地向老师跟前走去，害怕老师在全班批评我，心里非常后悔，如果教室里有一个地缝，我会钻进去，藏起来。我一步一步挪到老师面前，脸涨得通红，小声地说：“老师我…我没有写。”我总以为老师会严厉地批评我的，可是老师不但没有那样做，反而耐心地跟我说：“以后有什么事情都要提前跟老师说明原因，不要等老师查出来再说，那样你会很尴尬的，在同学们面前降低威信的。”老师的话语重心长，深深印在了我的心底。我决心每次认真地完成老师留的作业，改掉这个坏毛病。

我的老师在我心中闪耀着神圣的光芒，在我的心中播下了爱的种子。

Dear teacher

Hello! First of all, I wish you a happy Spring Festival and a happy

family!

Time like water, five years of primary school is fleeting. In these five

years, it is you who have given us the blue sky, let us fly freely in the ocean

of knowledge, it is you who have given us sunshine and let us open like

flowers.

I still remember that on the first day of entering the school, our first

Chinese teacher and the first head teacher of my primary school, Ruan, led us to

visit the campus. I was most impressed by her bright laughter and warm eyes. Mr.

Zhu, a lovely math teacher, is very vivid in class. There is also mis Wang, our

English teacher. She is the spirit of our class. At Christmas, she came to our

classmates with a bag of presents on her back. At this moment, your smiling

faces flash in front of my eyes.

After entering the fourth grade, we have to change teachers. Looking at

each others eyes, we are sad. At this time, a small pink figure on the

platform, a baby face, is a pair of bright eyes. Fashion clothing, bright colors

suddenly lit up our small eyes. This is the second head teacher of my primary

school --- Mr. Zhao Ying. Mr. Zhao teaches us how to be a human being ten

minutes before class every day. Tell us that it is not important to win or lose

once, but to never give up and stick to it. Our math teacher is as quick as a

gust of wind, speaking fast, marking homework fast. My slow temperament is often

confused by this speed.

Our English teacher Mr. Wangs decomposition learning method makes me no

longer hate English.

Dear teachers, over the past five years, you have been making great efforts

to educate us. You are like a big tree, and we are thriving in your shade. You

have given us the same care as our mother, which makes me feel extremely happy

and makes me interested in learning,

Yes, sometimes you are very strict with us, and you are often strict with

us. You also often teach us lessons and be responsible for us. Even if we have a

little bit of mistakes, you will find out. But I know that you are for us to

learn better and deeper, so that we can have great achievements in the

future.

Teacher, thank you for your serious and responsible education, thank you

for your concern for us, thank you for teaching us a lot of knowledge, thank you

for your selfless dedication to us, a thousand and ten thousand "thank you" can

not express my gratitude to you!

I wish teachers:

Healthy and beautiful forever!

Your student: Zhou Kexin

我有一位奇怪的英语老师，你想认识认识吗？现在我就来给你们介绍一下吧！

记得有一次上英语课时，她把我们交上去的课堂作业本端到教室里。站在讲台前，非常严肃地对我们说：“老师报到名字的同学，字母写的真惨不忍睹。”

我们一听，突然间一个想法不知从谁的脑子里窜了出来：老师开始报到一个同学的名字时，我们就一起喊道：“惨不忍睹。”当老师报到另外一位同学，我们又不约而同喊：“惨不忍睹。”逗得老师也边笑边说：“如果你们还这样，我可是要打你们的哦！”说着，还做了一个超级无敌奇葩的动作——电视剧里一个窈窕淑女打人的样子，我们都仰天大笑起来。因为老师是笑着说的，所以全班同学没有一个人认为老师这句话会是真的。但是我们第一、第二、第三组的同学都停了下来，仅剩第四组的同学还是一直喊一直叫，而且越喊越带劲、越喊越有节奏感呢！

老师依然笑着对他们说，让他们安静下来，并没有惩罚他们，我觉得，老师好温柔啊。

有一次上课时，我回答问题不小心发音不标准。老师说我读错了，应该一秒变兔子。我们都被她这句话笑喷了。有的同学仰天大笑，有的同学捧腹大笑，还有一小部分同学都快要笑瘫痪了呢？我们笑了好久好久才停下来。我们继续跟读，老师又请一位同学起来回答和我一样的问题，可他的回答竟然和我一样不标准。这可真是火上浇油、错上加错，气的老师是哭笑不得，最后，她只能耐心地教我们重读N次，我们才学会。

这就是我的英语老师，一个好玩风趣又温柔的老师，我们都喜欢爱戴的老师。

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make

great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to

learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I

work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and

helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me

to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my

gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

亲爱的梁老师：

您好!我写信是想要感谢你为我做出的努力。在你的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大的进步。一年前，我的学习成绩很差，我不想再学习了，但是你从来没有放弃我。你告诉我我很聪明。只要努力，我一定很棒。近年，你很关心我的学习，帮了我很多。当我犯错的时候，你总是指出错误并帮我更正。现在，我的学习比以前好多了，我想向你表达我的感激。祝您一切顺利。

在世界上有我两个最爱的人。一个是父母，一个是老师。父母把我们养大，而在阶梯中付出一切的、教我们学会道理和智慧的却是默默无闻的人民教师，他们的岗位最辛苦、工资也不是很高。

The most loving people in the world have I two. One is the parents, the other is a teacher. Our parents gave up the ladder, and pay all, teach us to learn the truth and wisdom are unknown to the public of the people of teachers, their jobs most laborious, wages are not high.

有人会说：啊!老师哦多好啊!又能出校门，又能在外面吃饭(我们属于封闭式学校)……然而你可想过，一位老师是多么辛苦，你们在玩的时候，你们可想过老师在干什么?可能在想怎样才能更好的理解学生?怎样才能更好的让学生从学习中找到更多的快乐?怎样才能提高孩子们的阅读能力?怎样才能更好的培育祖国的花朵?这些既浪费时间又浪费思维，老师出校门散散心不行么?难道老师生病都不能出校门么?老师就不是人。是神么?难道就不会生病、不会烦恼么?你们有没有想过老师多么辛苦，老是生病了。你却说老师懒惰、

Some people will say: ah! Teacher Oh! And out of school, but also can eat out (we are closed schools)...... However, you can think of a teacher, how hard it is, you are playing, you can think what teachers doing? May have wondered how to understand students better? Students find more pleasure from learning how to better? How to improve childrens reading ability? How to better cultivate flowers of the motherland? This is a waste of time and thought, the teacher out of school can not walk? Dont teachers sick can not out of school? Teacher is not the person. Is God? Wouldnt that be sick, not worry? Have you thought about how hard the teacher, always sick. Lazy, you say teacher

老是像蜡烛一样，照亮了别人，却燃烧了自己。哪怕自己再苦再累，他都不会说出来。老师都伟大啊!

Always like a candle, lit up the others, but burning yourself. Even if again no tired, he will not say it. Teachers are great!

我像所有的老师说声：老师们，你们辛苦啦!

I like all the teachers say: teacher, you have worked hard!

The teacher is human soul engineer, they feed a another young seedlings, cultivate a batch of another batch of talent. Under their care, we grow up healthy, lively. In so many teacher, what impressed me most was his, two years ahead of us, taught language teacher - mao-de wang teacher.

Teacher wang oval face with a pair of little also not small eyes; In the dark, dark hair, is also a big mouth, it is this is just a big mouth, gave us the knowledge, gave us happy.

In class, the teacher will use mouth, brilliantly interpretation of the text, let you hear and see, will let you in body and mind, wont consider other has nothing to do with learning. Thus, in the exam, you will get unexpected results.

Remember a test, we had a bad, were down in the dumps the classmates,. The teacher to adjust our depressed mood, he put his hands together, said with a sigh: "amitabha, good indeed, good indeed." The whole class laughed, some students asked the teacher: "teacher wang, are you a" monk "?" The teacher replied: "yes!" At this time, the radio and put a song, wang teachers also along with the music sang "lattice, thats..." Students have also taken to give the teacher a rhythm, at this moment, the bell rang, the teacher wang sing a way: "thats, everybodys time for class." Ha, ha, ha... Teacher wang not only adjust the depressed mood, we also brought joy.

This is my teacher wang. We are happy, wang also follow happy; We are not happy, miss wang is always trying to make us happy.

老师——是人类灵魂的工程师，他们哺育了一颗又一颗稚嫩的幼苗，培养了一批又一批的人才。在他们的精心呵护之下，我们健康、活泼的成长。在那么多的老师中，给我印象最深的却是他——教了我们快两年的语文老师——王茂德老师。

王老师椭圆的脸上镶嵌着一双不大也不小的眼睛;黑黑的头发，不大也不小的嘴巴，正是这张不大也不小的嘴巴，给了我们知识，给了我们快乐。

在课堂上，老师会用嘴巴绘声绘色地讲解课文，让你听得如醉如痴，身临其境，会让你投入身心，不会顾及别的与学习无关的事。这样，在考试时，你定会取得意想不到的成绩。

记得一次考试，我们考得很差，同学们个个垂头丧气，打不起精神。老师为了调节我们苦闷的心情，他把两只手合在一起，叹了一口气说：“阿弥陀佛，善哉，善哉。”全班同学哈哈大笑，有的同学问老师：“王老师，你是‘和尚’吗?”老师回答：“是啊!”这时，广播放了一首歌，王老师也随着音乐唱了起来“格的，格的，格的格的……”同学们也拍着手给老师打节奏，这时，上课铃响了，王老师唱道：“格的，格的，大家上课了。”哈，哈，哈……王老师不仅调节了我们苦闷的心情，还给我们带来了快乐。

这就是我的王老师。我们快乐时，王老师也跟着快乐;我们不快乐时，王老师总是想办法让我们快乐。

Our English Teacher

Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.

She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says,"Practice makes perfect."

She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English playS.

She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.

Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.

我们的英语老师

黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30多年的英语老师。她工作努力，多年来一直是模范教师。

课下，她对我们很友善，但课堂上却对我们要求很严。她经常带鼓励我们多说多读英语，常常说“熟能生巧”。

她教得很好而且尽可能使每节课都上得生动有趣。她常给我们放幻灯片，教我们唱英语歌曲，还帮助我们排演英语小话剧。

她不仅是我们的老师，同时又是我们的朋友，我们都尊敬和爱戴她。

明天，她将出席一个重要会议，而且由于她的先进事迹将在会上受到表彰。

[关于我的英语老师的英语满分作文

我们的英语老师真有趣。他，大约四五十来岁。他黑黑的皮肤，身穿一件漂白的衬衫。他慈祥的脸上已被岁月无情地刻下了道道“印迹”_皱纹。他高挺的鼻梁上夹着一副金丝边框的眼镜，活脱脱一位文质彬彬的诗人。眼镜下一双炯炯有神的小眼睛，孤溜溜得转着。鼻梁下一只红润的嘴，嘴唇极薄透着机敏和灵气，冷不防，还会蹦出几句耳目一新的话，让我们开怀大笑。这就是我们的英语老师！

开学都好几天了！教室里同学们还在叽叽喳喳。忆往昔峥嵘岁月我们的欢笑声掩盖了闷热的天气。闷热的天气被晾在一旁，因为插不上嘴，便发起火来，教室很快变成蒸笼。“叮铃铃~”我们拖着沉重的步伐极不情愿地踏着铃声回到了各自座位。english老头儿（英语老师的别称，这当然也是我们的杰作）也如约而至。教室里静得出奇（也许是为了给老师留个好印象，所以各各做个乖孩子）。english老头儿貌似对我们的言行举止表示怀疑。

随后，他又点了几位同学上去板书26个英文字母。我暗暗地想：“不会有人这都不会写吧！那这也忒让我无语了吧！”我以迅雷不及掩耳之势拿出文具，三下五除二的把这些ko了。在我耳畔想起了笔尖触碰白纸的发出声音“刷刷~”我抬头一看——黑板。我彻底石化了！不禁在心里暗自叫道“还有这样的人啊！……

没等我想完，english老头儿便开始讲。着准备将下一题，english老头儿一看，瞬间呆滞。我心里暗暗的叫道“不好，教室里又将掀起一场腥风血雨！”没一会功夫，english老头儿犹如幡然醒悟（毕竟身为资深讲师，还是要救场滴）我们看着黑板上孤零零的“g”和“j”竟被写反了。我们哄堂大笑了起来。一阵笑声之后，我们屏住气等待着english老头儿的勃然大怒，然后拂袖而去。可是，令我们做梦都想不到的一幕竟然发生了。english老头儿笑着说：“这真是大千世界，无奇不有啊，“g”和“j”都能被写反！不错啊！”瞬间教室像炸开了锅似得。再一次进入高潮。我在心里暗暗地为他们捏了一把汗。

但高潮过后，我们都低下头，陷入例如无边的沉寂，和深深的反思……室外，几片泛黄的叶子在地上打着旋儿，室内，english老头儿继续着他的讲课……

Our art teather is not too young and not too old .She has black hair two big and black eyes ,a big mouth and a small nose .

Look, She is wearing a blue and white jacket ,a blue hat ,brown pants and a pair of old shoes.She is very funny.

She is a good art teather .we all like her .

瞧，这位身穿紫色外套和牛仔裤，脸上带着微笑的年轻老师，就是我们喜欢的老师——马珠爱老师。

马老师知识渊博，教学经验丰富。上起课来总是那么轻松、活泼、生动，有趣。我们十分爱听她的英语课。她讲起课来那么风趣、幽默，引人入胜，让我们觉得兴趣盎然。

“叮铃铃”，上课的铃声响了，这一节又是我们喜爱的英语课。马老师微笑地走进教室，大声地表扬了我们课前准备不错。开始上课了，马老师先比了一个洗碗的姿势，问：“大家知道这是干什么吗？”我们异口同声地说：“洗碗！”然后，马老师再教英语单词，我们听了感觉既幽默生动，又牢记在心里。

马老师为了我们成绩的提高，可谓呕心沥血、兢兢业业。她每天要认真地为我们批改作业，放学了还把差生留下来辅导。回家时也常常带着“功课”回家。为了我们的点滴成长，她付出了很多、很多。然而，她初衷不改，一味地爱着我们。每当我看到晚归的马老师，我的心中总有一种难以言状的感动。

同学们，难道你不觉得马老师是个多么好的老师吗？

Dear Miss Wang:

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not be the top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall. You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always worked tirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatest motivation.

I sincerely hope that you can have a good health and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attention to your health, get more rest.

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Our English teacher， Mrs Wang， is about forty years old。 She always wears a pair of glasses。 She is very strict with us。 When we make a mistake， she often makes us stand up。 But we hear that her home is far from our school。 Every morning she has to walk to school for forty minutes。 And she is never late。 Then we come to see that Mrs Wang loves us dearly。 She teaches us so carefully。 In fact， she is a good teacher.

dear teacher:

hello!

today is the day we were with you, you said a lot of us touched by the words of the students cried, although you installed in front of us very strong, but you are actually very fragile, and we clearly see your heart tears, at the same time, you also give us too much asked, to be honest, i really there is highly touched, because you are too self-interested for my face, and for "those who do not learn from it, with the junior high school students were mixed together" to large to encompass all of their mind to see these, each and every student class, or even usually strong and then boys could not help but to cry, but fortunate because we have the opportunity to repay you, as long as we strive to learning, a good test results, and this is the greatest consolation to you!

teacher, i will always remember you, you are on our education (junior high, high school, not because some trivial way to go landslides, leading to decreased academic performance) i will always be unforgettable! teachers, we love you!

meanwhile, i would like to ask the teacher you are assured that i will not be shaken because of the harassment of others, please believe me, please?

student: vvv

Dear Mrs. / Mr. XX,

I am just writing to say “thank you”.Thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love youve shown to us.

I am lucky to have a teacher like you. And no matter what kind of person I will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and evenhow to be a man. From you, I learned what kind of person I want to be and what I should get from life. This means everything to me.

My dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and I will remember what I have learned from you and carry the knowledge through my life!

Best wishes!

Sincerely,

X X X

[感谢老师初中英语作文例文

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main

material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can

get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We

can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other

materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which

will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from

learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of

my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours

Bella

尊敬的蒋老师：

您好!我写信是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本，这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源，比如英语杂志，歌曲，电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识，同时从其他材料获取更多知识。另外，那些材料更真实和实用，这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外，通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得更多乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议，谢谢!

Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.

She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.

She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.

This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

我最喜欢的老师

嗨，我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师，但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。

她很年轻，但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌，和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。

她喜欢读书和运动。下课后，李老师经常和我们一起运动，我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。

这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?

我在英语学校换过好几位老师，而令我印象最为深刻的还是王欣老师。

王欣老师中等个子，一头长发随意扎起，她笑时嘴角有两个梨涡，让人感到温暖。在我心里，她就像神一样完美、善良、乐观、开朗……，而她最显著的特点就是温柔、细心。

她从来不对我们发脾气，就算她多么需要发泄，也不会迁怒于我们。又一次例外，老师到外边接了个电话，回来后脸色很差，十分苍白，嘴唇也颤抖着，而我们仍在吵闹。终于她忍无可忍地大吼：“吵什么，你们能不能懂点事。”我们愣了，低下了头，几分钟难挨的沉默后，她才继续讲课。后来几天都由代课老师上课，我们感到不自在，觉得课程枯燥无聊。几天后，她回来了，大家围着她七嘴八舌地问，她笑吟吟地回答，只是面容有些憔悴。

在诸多的事中，我记得最清楚的是她改变我的性格。在英语学校，除了上课发言我几乎不说话，于是我成了孤家寡人，她似乎觉察到了什么，叫我来，希望我能多说话，多表达，理由是想多听听我的声音，我答应了，但效果不佳。于是，她开始有意无意的让我和同学，外教交流。起先我试图逃避，后来我发现，敞开心扉，与别人交流原来也是一件愉快的事，慢慢地，我变得健谈起来。当我去感谢王老师，她冲我微微一笑，我瞬间明白了，我也对她报以一笑，接着我们心照不宣地笑了。

虽然教完三级后，王老师就不教我们了，但我想，如果我们重逢的话，我一定送她个大大的拥抱。并附在她耳边说：“王老师，谢谢你！”

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

My English teacher, Mr. Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose. We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting. After class, he often plays table tennis with us. And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.

When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.

We all get along well with him. All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.

DearMissJiang,

IamwritingtosharemyideasaboutourEnglishclass.

Now, ourmainmaterialintheclassisthetextbook, whichisreasonable.

ButIthinkwecangetsomeotherresources, suchasEnglishmagazines, songs,

moviesandsoon.

Wecanlearnthebasicknowledgefromouttextbook,

andgetsomemorefromothermaterials.

Inaddition, thosematerialsaremoreauthenticandpractical,

whichwillbeusefultoourlearning.

Besides, bydoingso,

wecangetmorefunfromlearninganddevelopourinteresttoEnglish.

Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice. Thankyou!

SincerelyyoursBella