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初三关于学习的英语作文

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Most Chinese students have difficulties in learning English. The difficulties vary so much from person to person that it is difficult to cite here in a few words. Some may have problems in reading. Others may have trouble in writing. I also had problems in English learning, but my difficulty seemed to lie in listening. For example, when tested for listening comprehension, I couldnt understand a single sentence, let alone a passage of medium level.

In order to overcome the difficulty in my English learning, I made great efforts to find the key to the problem. I consulted my teacher and found out that I merely didnt have enough time to practice listening. So I bought a tape recorder and listened to it at least two hours a day. In addition, I listened to "Special English" on VOA. I also went out of my way to speak to foreigners on the campus whenever we meet so that I could have the chance to listen to the native speakers. After half a years hard work, I could get 70% of the questions correct in listening comprehension tests.

I own my success to my English teacher. It is him who tells me the correct way to learn English. It is him who always encourages me when I encounter difficulties and feel disappointed.

大多数中国学生在学习英语方面有困难。人与人之间的困难出现如此大的差异,很难在这里引用几句话。可能有一些问题在阅读。其他人可能有困难。我学习英语也有问题,但我的困难似乎躺在听。例如,当听力测试,我无法理解一个句子,更不用说一段中等水平。

为了克服困难在我的英语学习,我努力找到问题的关键。我咨询我的老师发现我只是没有足够的时间来练习听力。所以我买了一个录音机,听了一天至少两个小时。另外,我听美国之音特别英语”。我也出去和外国人说话校园时我们见面,这样我就可以有机会听母语。经过半年的努力,我可以得到70%的问题正确的听力测试。

我拥有我的成功归功于我的英语老师。这是他告诉我学英语的正确方法。他总是鼓励我当我遇到困难,感到失望。

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篇1:介绍春节的英语作文书信篇

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导语:春节是中国最隆重的节日,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike想了解中国的春节,请你给他写封回信介绍这个节日。要点如下:

1)春节的由来及寓意;

2)春节的庆祝活动;

3)邀请他到来中国欢度春节。

注意:

1)词数100左右;

2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3)开头和结尾已为你写好。

范文:

Dear Mike,

In your last letter, you mentioned that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. I am writing to tell you about it. Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”. Slightly different from that in the past, it is now given new meanings and regarded as a way forpeople to enjoy reunion with their families however far they live or work. On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and eat a lot of delicious meals in the warmth of the family. Children can get lucky money in red paper. People have a good time, holding opera performances, and other celebrations.

I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.

Yours,

Li Hua

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亲爱的迈克,

在你的上一封信中,你提到你想知道春节的一些事情。我写信是想告诉你这件事。春节有着悠久的历史,最初是为了吓走一只凶猛的野兽“念”。略有不同,在过去,现在是赋予了新的内涵和作为人与他们的家人不管他们居住或工作的团聚。除夕之夜,每个家庭成员都聚在一起。他们在过去的一年里告诉彼此的生活,交换礼物和吃了很多美味的饭菜在温暖的家庭。孩子们可以用红纸得到压岁钱。人们有一个很好的时间,举行歌剧表演,和其他庆祝活动。

我希望你能来这里体验这个美妙的节日。

你的,

李华

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篇2:InformationAge初三英语作文

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It s the age of information now and information is very important in the society.we need verious of information to live a normal life.we need to know the lastest news ,listen to the weather forecast,learn about the newly published books and many other things we are interested in and want to know.

There are many way of acquiring information,for example we can watch TV,listen to radio, read newspaper and magazines and go on line which is to most popupar ,convienent and effective way now.

Living in such an age of information,what should we to to face up to the challenge of it?I think we should try our best to learn as much knowledge as we can and try to master the new techonology.

[Information Age初三英语作文

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篇3:初三年级英语作文:Save time

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Lost time is never found again. This is something which I learned very clearly last semester. I spent so much time fooling around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time for a change. Now I have a new plan for using my time wisely. I have set my alarm clock ahead half an hour. This will give me a head start on the day. I have also decided to keep a log of what I do and when I do it. Looking back on what I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to reorganize my time.

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篇4:高中英语书信类作文的万能模板邀请信

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示例一:

Dear____,

There will a _____(内容) at/in______(地点) on____(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at _______(具体时间). This will be followed by a ____(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),__________(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ______(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

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篇5:关于我的初三英语老师的作文

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这位老师是我初三时的英语老师,至今,我几乎每天都会不由自主地想起他的话,虽已过了两年,但每次回想,似乎前一天还是他的学生,还在上他那个性化的课堂。

我们班是学校历史上最乱的班,初一、初二的英语课就像一张大大白纸上的斑斑点点,零碎得近乎空白。初三伊始,学校大扫除,我们班只有几个人在打扫,大多都溜去玩了。我和同桌在走廊上游荡着,突然被一位老师叫住:“喂,你们两个来,你来倒茶水,你来倒垃圾桶。”“不要,不干。”我说。他喊道:“Go,I’myourEnglishteacher。”这就是我们所等待的英语老师?那天下午我们班里议论纷纷:这个英语老师能管住我们吗?我们初三的英语课还会是空白吗?

答案是我们初三的英语课是满满的五彩斑斓,没有斑点的空白。我们全级有9个班,我们班的英语成绩一直稳居第9名。而这位英语老师一接手,第一次考试时我们就考了个中等,第一次脱掉了第9名的帽子。

我们英语每天总是穿得整整齐齐的,头发丝毫不乱,着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。他总是最后到校,最早离开,戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车匆匆来、匆匆去。走路时也是忽忽匆匆的,昂头直腰,大步直迈。

开学不久,我跟同桌想请他帮我们补习。第一次英语考试我们考了八、九名,我们连连说这个成绩好――若是考差了,他会不补;若是了,又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后,他竟说:“不要,我从来都不帮人补习,我最讨厌补习这玩意了,不要!”我和同桌纳闷了好久:这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知,更纳闷的还在后头,他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了,有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布:“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题,我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生,我最讨厌这些,上课有听就够了,不要再来问我。”话音未落,我们面面相觑,半张着嘴巴,都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的,他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实,这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人,一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前,我们英语站在讲台上,仰头望着风扇,皱着眉头,手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿,他把朝向他的窗都打开了,但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声,他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会,只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇,一手抓着一把大交椅,身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼,不时地听到有人在说:“这……这是老师吗?怎么会有这么个性的老师?”然后呢,我们英语就坐在大交椅上,吹着大风扇,喝着柠檬茶,心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处,他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟,好,”他说,“你们6班就是鬼灵精,一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来,那7班,我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这不补;若是了,又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后,他竟说:“不要,我从来都不帮人补习,我最讨厌补习这玩意了,不要!”我和同桌纳闷了好久:这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知,更纳闷的还在后头,他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了,有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布:“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题,我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生,我最讨厌这些,上课有听就够了,不要再来问我。”话音未落,我们面面相觑,半张着嘴巴,都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的,他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实,这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人,一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前,我们英语站在讲台上,仰头望着风扇,皱着眉头,手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿,他把朝向他的窗都打开了,但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声,他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会,只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇,一手抓着一把大交椅,身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼,不时地听到有人在说:“这……这是老师吗?怎么会有这么个性的老师?”然后呢,我们英语就坐在大交椅上,吹着大风扇,喝着柠檬茶,心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处,他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟,好,”他说,“你们6班就是鬼灵精,一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来,那7班,我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这好,不用考汕头卷。汕头那些家伙出卷呢,就是四个人关在一间房子里,整天坐着椅子转啊转啊,就转出一张试卷来,专考些难题怪题,正经的又不考。汕头的试卷啊,哎哟哟,那真是害死万万生灵哦。”

学生自然是很尊重他的,其他的老师也是,他说什么就是什么,就连我们那让人不寒而栗的杨校也得让他三分。他跟好的学生没啥话谈,倒是跟那些调皮捣蛋的很谈得来。哪一班谁谁谁捣蛋了,他就找谁谁谁去喝茶聊天。他总是站在理字上,也不得不尊重他。有一次录音机坏了,他气得半死,说公物怎能破坏,东西怎能不打紧,越说越气,最后竟然把书一摔,说:“不上课了,学什么书,学做人好了。”后来有一次他看见粉笔头乱七八糟地散在地上,也气得摔书不上课。

我们英语人有个性,课也有个性。课前唱歌的时候,他竟点起歌来,说:“停停停,别唱这个,唱刘欢的什么‘心不在’,什么‘重头再来’那首来我听。”我们不会唱,他皱了眉说:“哎哟,那么好听的歌怎么不会呢?”接着指着指挥员说:“你,下课去7班学唱这首歌,以后我来了你们就唱给我听。”过后有的老师听说了这事,禁不住大笑起来说:“哈……王老师就是这样,真性情!”

到了复习期间,他大步迈上讲台,把手在半空中一挥,喊道:“来,我们的口号是……”全班一起大喊:“用声音唤起记忆!”感觉,就像在上幸运52一样。

初三即将结束时,他不经意间说起:“老师扮小丑,拼命逗笑,只为了让你们记得更深。”我当时低着头,红了眼圈。在每一次笑声的背后,我们学到了很多,而老师付出了很多很多。他说:“我自认对得起我的教学,你们想想,老师什么时候在课堂上讲错一个字。”真的没有,他从来没有口误,从没说错过一个字,那,精神该多么集中啊。

上学期,有一次我早早地回家,遇见了他,没变,我们英语还是穿得整整齐齐,头发丝毫不乱,着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车。我惊喜地大叫:“啊,老师!”他一忽而过,也来不及听见。

后来,我梦到了他,也没变,还是在上那么个性的课堂,我还是他的学生,幸福地听着“哎哟哟,这是个黑面鬼,得注意咯……学英语呢,就得这样,我们不但要有激情,还要有表情……来,我们的口号是……”

[关于我的初三英语老师的作文

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篇6:初三英语重点

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The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Liu Xiang is

the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004, he won his first Olympic gold medal

in the men,s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the

same event in Lausanne.Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu

Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.

With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This

encourages me to study harder from now on.

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篇7:初三的英语作文:TheMoonFestival

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The Moon Festival is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It is one of the traditional Chinese Festivals.

On that day, the Chinese usually have a special family dinner. Each member of the family, even from far away, will go back home to have the dinner. During the dinner, they eat a lot of delicious food, watch TV programmes and chat about everything happily. They also eat moon cakes.an important kind of food of the Moon Festival. Moon cakes are always round like the moon. There is bean paste, egg-yolk, ice cream or some other nice fruits or food in them.

After the dinner, all the family members go out and enjoy the moon and the moonlight. They talk about the stories about the moon and laugh a lot.

They say there is a fairy maiden named Chang E with her rabbit and a sweet osmanthus tree on the moon. Is that true? It is just a legend. But the legend is so wonderful that we would rather believe it, right?

[初三英语作文:The Moon Festival

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篇8:初三年级英语作文:小词大义

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Small Words

【范文】One day, the Buddha passed a village, some villagers speaked to him with foul language. The Buddha listened to them quietly for a while, then he said to them:"thanks a lot, and now l have to preach the villagers of the next village, goodbye." "Dont you heard the foul words for you?" One of the villagers asked unbelievably."Of course l did, but l am not controlled by somebadys words, and l would never have response to someones feelings. l am the master, not the slave of my own feelings."

【翻译】有一天,佛陀经过一个村庄,一些人对他口出秽言。佛陀静静地听了一小会,然后说:“谢谢你们,我今天还要赶去下一个村庄。”其中一人听后觉得不可思议,说:“难道你没有听见我们骂你吗?”佛陀:“我不会被别人的嘴巴所控制,也不会对别人的情绪做反应,我是情绪的主任,不是情绪的奴隶。”

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篇9:2024年初三英语作文:假期计划

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The summer holiday is approaching. Our class have had a heat discussion about what to do during the vocation.

Some agree to staying at home. They think it’s convenient and comfortable. What’s better, they can save some money for some other purposes. But they will lose a chance to get to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for travelingbecause it can increase their knowledge and broaden their views. But it will take them more money and meet some more difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

暑假即将来临。我们班有一个讨论热放假期间该做什么。

一些同意待在家里。他们认为这是方便和舒适。更好的是,他们可以节省一些钱用于其他目的。但是他们可能会失去一个机会去了解外面的世界。然而,另一些人喜欢出去旅游,因为它可以增加他们的知识和拓宽自己的视野。但需要更多的钱,旅行时遇到一些困难。

在我看来,这将是更好的呆在家里,因为我可以做我想做的事,如读书、看电视,并帮助我的父母做家务。

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篇10:初三毕业英语作文

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i will be graduating from middle school in the coming days. i have a lot of feelings that i want to express. first, i want to thank all the teachers. you have been working hard to teach us. i would also like to thank my classmates. you have been offering great help to me.

i am so happy today. this will be an end to my middle school life, and soon we will begin the new life in high school. dear teachers, dear classmates, i will always remember you.

i would like to thank you for all the help you gave me during this past semester. you were alway so patient when i asked you questions. you listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. you showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. i felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking english. you made the excercise so interesting that i was always very eager to participate and practice. my english has improved so much. how could i thank you enough?! i cannot wait to take your class next semester and keep working on my english.

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篇11:写给同学的信初三英语作文

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假如你(Li Hua)在互联网(Internet)上看到美国高中生Tony希望结识一位中国朋友的息,请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件,希望和他作网友,并希望能尽快收到他的回信。内容包括:

1. 表示愿和对方交朋友; 2. 简单介绍自己,如爱好、特长(体育、文艺等); 3. 希望多了解美国文化。

注意:1. 电子邮件格式已经给出,但不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100左右。

From: lihua@yahoo.com.cn

To: tony@163.com

Subject: making an e-pal

Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version:

Dear Tony,

I am Li Hua, a boy of 16 from China. Im a middle school student. Im glad to read your information on the Internet and I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese. I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA.

Im good at English and I think we can help each other to know more about America and China by sending e-mails. We can also chat on the Internet in English or Chinese. I like table tennis, enjoy singing and prefer popular music. At the same time, I like collecting stamps and traveling around in my spare time. I hope you can come to visit China, and Ill show you around many places of interest.

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篇12:关于初三英语的作文:寄信

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All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city, and even the smallest village has at least one postal station. You may go to a post office to mail a letter. However, there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.

Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes. If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address, he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.

[关于初三英语的作文:寄信

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篇13:初三英语

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Anything can happen in this rapidly changing society. People who cant

believe in miracles are impossible to achieve miracles and to create miracles.

In fact, sometimes it is easy to get a miracle. If you dont hesitate, you can

do it. Good luck, you think, is the result of action. The only way to catch the

seemingly impossible is to go after it. It is impossible to create a miracle if

you are satisfied with the status quo, doubt everything, and fear the

failure.

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篇14:初三毕业暑假英语

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This afternoon, we play a game called Family Tree. This game is very interesting. Im very interested in it. Our teachers family is very large. She has many brothers and sisters.

But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too. When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.

When I was a child, I cant undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no bread house. Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think of this things. I will cry I cant use words to say I love them.

I love my family!

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篇15:初三年级英语作文:快乐之家

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It is a happy family.Toms family are all at home in the evening.Tom is listening to music while his young sister is playing with a Cat.What are his parents doing? His father is reading a book. His mother is making a telephone call to someone.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.They are all enjoying themselves.It is cold outside, but inside it is warm.

这是一个幸福的家庭。汤姆的家人晚上都回家来了。汤姆正在听音乐,而他的妹妹在和猫玩耍。他的父母在干吗?爸爸在看书,妈妈在给人打电话。看,爷爷和奶奶在看电视。一家人都自得其乐。外面寒风凛冽,屋里其乐融融。

It is the best time in the evening.Tom and his family members all return home.After supper they enjoy themselves.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.Father is doing some reading as usual. By the window his mother is calling someone.His little sister is playing with the cat while Tom is listening to music.

这是晚上最好的时光。汤姆一家人都回到了家。晚饭后,全家人都过得很愉快。看,他的爷爷、奶奶正在看电视。爸爸像往常一样在看书,窗边的妈妈正给谁打电话。小妹妹在逗着小猫玩儿;而汤姆在听音乐。

The living room is very clean and tidy. You can see a nice picture and a clock on the wall. There are some books on the desk.It must be a happy family.

这间客厅干净而整洁,墙上挂着一幅漂亮的画和一个钟,桌上放着些书。这真是一个幸福的家庭。

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篇16:初三英语作文-AFootballGame

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A Football Game

Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.

I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.

昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力,但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信,他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。

我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。

[初三英语作文-A Football Game

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篇17:初三寒假英语日记

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How to get happyness 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它,人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐,你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

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篇18:初三英语作文:我的偶像MyIdol

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My idol is Chairman Mao. I think he must be many people’s idol. He is a great hero. It is him makes us live a better life. Without him, maybe we still can’t satisfy our hunger nowadays. We may not live comfortable, eat delicious food and so on. All the happiness we have now maybe is due to his wise leadership. Though he made mistakes once, no one is perfet. I admire him. I think all the people should respect him.

我的偶像是毛主席。我想他一定是很多人的偶像。他是一个伟大的英雄。是他使我们过上了更好的生活。没有他,也许我们还不能解决温饱问题。我们也许不能舒适的住着,吃美味的食物等。我们现在所有的幸福生活都是源于他的英明领导。尽管他曾经也犯过错误,但是人无完人。我很敬佩他。我觉得所有人都应该尊敬他。

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篇19:关于朋友英语初三

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We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend.

If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot.

Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make

friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made

since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much

about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends.

What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about

anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for

drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make

friends, the real one is what we need.

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篇20:2024初三中考英语作文技巧:常用多变句式

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如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“I think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, Lin Haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:Being saved from the earthquake, two of LinHao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

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