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关于初三英语的作文:Privatecar

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Advantages of owning a private car. 2)Disadvantages of owning a private car. 3)Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where theregular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds. However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage. Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles.

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篇1:初三英语作文:课本应该循环使用吗

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Should Text Books Be Recycled?

When the school begins, students need to start their new semester, the first thing they do is to buy the text books, most students will buy the new books, while it has become popular that students choose to buy the second-hand text books. It is good that text books are recycled, it can save the resource and reduce the waste, thus leaving more resources to the next generation. What’s more, it also saves students a lot of money. Students can buy the second-hand book at a very low price, students use the book only for a semester, it will become useless after they reading it, so there is no need for them to spend so much money on the contemporary book.

课本循环使用吗?

当开学的时候,学生需要开始他们的新学期,他们做的第一件事情就是买课本,大部分学生会买新的课本,然而一些学生选择买二手书,这变得越来越流行。课本循 环使用,这是好的,这能节省资源和减少废物,给后代留下更多的资源。而且,这也省下学生很多钱。学生可以低价买下二手书,他们的书本只用一个学期,看完后 就会变得无用了,所以对他们来说没必要花那么多的钱在暂时性的书本。

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篇2:初三年级英语作文:Serious Floods

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The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it’s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can’t go to school as usual .Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too. In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we can’t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

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篇3:保持健康初三英语作文及翻译

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Its very important to keep healthy.

I think we should have healthy diet every day and eat proper food. We shouldnt eat junk food because it is bad for our health. Drink water and milk as often as possible. Milk is a great drink that can give us more calcium that make our bones much stronger.

Dont eat too much because it will make you uncomfortable and fat. Dont spend too much time watching TV, DVDs and Videos or using computers. Its good to take more exercise such as basketball, bike riding , swimming and so on. Follow these and you can be healthy.

保持健康是非常重要的。

我认为我们每天都应该有健康的饮食,吃适当的食物。我们不应该吃垃圾食品,因为它对我们的健康有害。尽可能多的喝水和牛奶。牛奶是一种伟大的饮料,可以给我们更多的钙,使我们的骨骼更强。

不要吃太多,因为它会让你不舒服和脂肪。别花太多时间看电视、dvd和视频或者使用电脑。很好多加锻炼,如篮球、骑自行车、游泳等等。遵循这些,你可以很健康。

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篇4:初三毕业季英语作文

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I used to be a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What’s worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time.Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well with the help of my classmates. What’s more, I get on well with others and always help others. I have learned a lot over these three years, but I know I could hardly succeed without the people who helped and supported me—my teachers, my parents and my classmates.

I won’t forget the days I have spent in my junior high school. I’m looking forward to new experiences in senior high school. Although the life in high school is hard ,I have confidence to do better in the future.

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篇5:初三英语作文大全

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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate

the lunar calendar ‘s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival

,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set

off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the

festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes

.They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to

children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good

fortune . The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives

and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring

Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

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篇6:节约用水的初三英语作文

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As we all know water plays an important part in peoples daily lives. More and more water is needed in the modern society. So we should try to save it.

Now many places are short of water. For example, a big drought hit the Southwest of China at the beginning of this year. especially Yunnan province, milions of people has not got enough water for common life. A lot of rivers and lakes are polluted. Whats worse, many people are wasting water seriously.

In order to protect water, lets do something to fight against all kinds of pollution and waste of water.

我们都知道,在人们日常生活中,扮演重要的角色。现代生活中,我们需要越来越多的水,所以我们应该保护它。

现在很多地方缺水,今年年初在中国西南部就发生严重的干旱,特别是云南地区,数以万计的人们没有充足的水资源供日常使用。很多河流湖泊被污染,更严重的是,人们对水浪费严重。

为了保护水资源,让我们付出行动抵制水污染和浪费的行为吧。

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篇7:Shouldthemiddleschoolstudentsdohousework初三优秀英语作

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Yesterday, there was a discusion in our class. We talked about whether we should do housework or not. I agreed with with Sharon. She said,“The middle school students should do some housework. Because doing housework can let our parents feel relaxed. At the same time, doing housework can train us to be more useful.” I think we should do some housework. Doing housework can improve ourselves. But I also think students’ major job is studying. Doing too much housework is bad for our study. So, I think doing housework is good, but at the same time we should pay more attenion to our study. Right?

[Should the middle school students do housework初三优秀英语作文

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篇8:初三英语作文电视电脑的优缺点

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Nowdays,TV and computer is becoming more and more popular in our ldaily life,since which is a important tool to our entertainment and a way which we can scan and understand the thing that happened outside.

But every coin has two sides .computer and TV can make us learn new knowledge which we cant leran from class ,it can help us find out the diference between our life and out world,so that us make a progress.However,on the contary TV and computer also take us some disadvantage to our life ,especially to young student ,like us.TV and computer easily male us addicted to its fun ,we easily like its game so fogert to finish our homework ,even want to play game so cut classes .

So to younger generation,as far as i am concerned,i think that we should handle the problem ofTV and computer in a prpper way ,not pnly see the advantage but also see the disadvantage of it ,apply it reasonable to that it can help to our study.

[初三英语作文电视电脑优缺点

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篇9:关于初三的英语作文:MyClassmate

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请以My Classmate为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

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My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

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篇10:初三年级英语作文: Spring in Our School750字

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Spring comes at last. Everything begins to grow. The trees turn green, and the flowers come out. On the playground, in the fields, on each side of the road, the young grass grows everywhere.

Spring also arrives in our school. Come and see, behind our teaching building, there are some small pear trees covered with white flowers; on both sides of it, there are some other flowers smiling at you, Some are yellow, some are red. In our school garden, more flowers are there. All kinds of flowers of many colours can be seen.

Look, there are some Kites flying in the sky. The spring wind is blowing. The sun is shining brightly. Some boys are playing games in the sun, Listen, a group of girls are singing Where’s spring? It sounds like the singing of lark birds. All these make me think that spring is here, spring is there, and spring is just in our school. Fhe boys and the girls are all like flowers in spring.

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篇11:初三年级优秀英语作文friendship

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I never thought ourFriendshipcould be so long. We are classmates, not only are still friends. We was like peas and carrots, no words do not say, learn from each other, to long for short.

Name is ling-ling jin, she is my good friend, she is fat, black hair like a black waterfall down vertically, a pair is eyes, his mouth with a knife. She commanded, considerate, in her heart is how to think how to say, serious and responsible. Speak is a disadvantage, but she is hurt others self-esteem.

We have two years of friendship, can be said to be my friend stay together life learning the longest time of friends. But sometimes, the cup of friendship, we sometimes jokes, but dont to heart. Until that time, we continue to cold for three days, meet dont say "hello", also no longer together, become a stranger, with indifference. Several times we all want to apologize, to lose me, she in and out of a person, very lonely, she and I justdont willing to give up this friendship. After days of ideological struggle, I decided to be friends, although the fault is not in me, we still made up. I often think: true friendship is to pass the test. From now on, we cherish the friendship

True friendship, it is purity transparent ice and snow, the cold the unity, the more tight.

True friendship is a clear spring water, not only to the column into the withered life vitality, but also can wash the stain of the mind

Original all stronger after the test of friendship, will never be apart.

我从来都没想过我们的友谊会如此长。我们不仅是同学,还是好朋友。我们形影不离,无话不说,相互学习,以长补短。

她是我的好朋友,叫金玲玲,她微胖,乌黑的头发像黑色的瀑布垂直下来,一双水灵灵是眼睛,嘴边有一条刀痕。她心直口快,体谅别人,在她心里是怎样想就怎样说,认真负责。不过她有个缺点,就是有是说话伤别人的自尊。

我们已两年的友谊,可以说是我的朋友当中待在一起生活学习最长时间的朋友。但有时,友谊之杯也会裂,我们有时开玩笑,但都没放在心上。直到那一次,我们持续三天冷漠,见面也不打招呼,也不再形影不离,成为陌生人,以冷漠相待。有好几次我们都想道歉,失去我以后,她进进出出都一个人,很孤独,我和她都舍不得放下这段友谊。经过几天的思想斗争,我决定和好,虽然错不在于我,我们还是和好如初。我经常想:真诚的友谊是要经过考验的吧。从此,我们更加珍惜这个友谊

真正的友谊,是冰雪纯洁透明,越冷越团结得越紧。

真正的友谊,是一涧清澈的泉水,不但给即将枯萎的生命柱入活力,而且还能洗涤心灵的污点

原天下所有人的友谊经过考验之后更加坚固,永不垮。

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篇12:初三年级关于全国爱眼日英语作文

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In order to better take care of the eyes, prevent eye disease and protect vision, on September 25, 1992, tianjin medical university, professor of ophthalmology Wang Yanhua and professor of epidemiology at GengGuan to national initiative for the first time, and held a national held seminars for the first time in tianjin. The initiative response by educational circles and eye eye experts, decided on May 5, every year for the "national sight day". On May 5, 1993, tianjin held promotional activities for the first time.

Affected by this, starting in 1994, Beijing, Shanghai, guangzhou and other domestic large and medium-sized cities have yizhen advisory activities on May 5, publicity of the significance of sight day at the same time.

In 1996, the state ministry of health, the ministry of education, central, China disabled persons federation and other 12 ministries jointly issued a circular, will held activities listed as one of the national holiday, and reschedule on June 6 for "national sight day" every year.

为了更好的爱护眼睛、预防眼底疾病及保护视力,1992年9月25日,天津医科大学眼科教授王延华与流行病学教授耿贯一首次向全国倡议,并在天津召开了全国爱眼日第一次研讨会。这一倡议受到眼科学界和眼科专家们的响应,决定每年5月5日为“全国爱眼日”。1993年5月5日,天津首次举办爱眼日宣传活动。

受此影响,从1994年开始,北京、上海、广州等国内大中城市相继在5月5日举办义诊咨询活动,同时宣传爱眼日的意义。

1996年,国家卫生部、国家教育部、团中央、中国残联等12个部委联合发出通知,将爱眼日活动列为国家节日之一,并重新确定每年6月6日为“全国爱眼日”。

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篇13:初三英语

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Hi,boys and girls. I’m a Chinese girl. My Chinese name is Chen Jinrun. Chen

is my first name. Jinrun is my last name. My English name is Helen. I’m 12 years

old. My favorite color is black white and red. I like sports、computer game and

go shopping. And I like French fries、ice cream and bananas. My QQ number is

1047850027.

I have a friend. Her name is Song Yihan. Song is her first name. Yihan is

her last name. She is 12 years old. She is very pretty. Her favorite color is

blue. She is my good friend.

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篇14:初三我的暑假英语作文带翻译50字

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Summer vacation is coming, the happy mood cant tell, dont have to get up early to go to school every day, dont need to do homework every day, practice, also can see a lot of animation, ha ha...

But once a year of Latin dance competitions in the summer, often have to deepen practice, I like to dance, not only can enhance physical fitness, can also be good temperament, let me become more beautiful!

This years summer have another plan, is to go to my dream for a long time of Hong Kong Disney, finally look forward to that day, my mother and I and my cousins family, can early boarding a plane to Hong Kong Disney, flew to the fantastic when you get there, and I saw on TV about the tomorrowland, adventureland, fantasyland, American town and r Jones, the warehouse, I feel the most exciting is a roller coaster, the best is a small world, the most fun is a buzz lightyear ride, small town in the United States still has a lot of a lot we like gadgets, every little girl can fondle admiringly, eat the delicious homemade ice cream to street ice cream car.

My life is quite rich yellowed over the summer vacation, I had a very happy, play of very good! Looking forward to next year!

暑假到了,那种开心的心情无法表达,不用天天早起上学了,也不用天天写作业,练琴了,还能看很多的动画片了,哈哈……

不过每年一次的拉丁舞比赛就在暑期,还得经常加深苦练呢,我喜欢跳舞,不仅可以增强体质,也能练好气质,让我变得更加漂亮哦!

今年的暑期还有一个计划,就是去我梦想以久的香港迪斯尼,那天终于盼到,我和妈妈还有堂弟的一家人,登上开往香港的飞机可心早飞到了梦幻般的迪斯尼,到了那里,跟我在电视上看到的差不多那有明日世界、探险世界、幻想世界、美国小镇和反斗奇兵大本营,我感觉最刺激的是过山车,最美的是小小世界,最好玩的是巴斯光年星际历险,在美国小镇还有很多很多我们每个小女生都喜欢的小玩意,简直爱不释手,吃到最好吃的要数街边雪糕车的自制雪糕了。

我的暑假生活还挺丰富多彩吧,我过得很开心,玩的很过硬!期待明年吧!

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篇15:最新初三英语作文:Howtomaketomatoandeggnoodles

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First cut up two tomates.Next put two teaspoons of oil into the pan.When the oil is hot,put the tomatoes into the pan and fry for a few minutes.Then add a bowl of water and boil.When the water boils,put the noodles into the pan and boil for 5 minutes.Break two eggs and put them into the pan.Finally ,add two teaspoons of salt.It’s very easy.

You can try to make it.

[最新初三英语作文:How to make tomato and egg noodles.

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篇16:2024初三寒假英语复习计划作文

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紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说,距中考还有短短的几个月,寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里,怎样制定复习计划,怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?

通过这学期的几次月考,发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题,针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。

1、单词掌握得不错,却不会在填单词的句子中运用,失分很多。

2、能记住重点句型,但不会灵活变换句式。

3、了解语法,却不会做时态填空。

4、能读懂短文,却做不对选项。

5、知道如何写作文,却在写作时漏洞百出。

6、选择填空马马虎虎。

7、听力很差,失分很高,尤其是分析题。

所以,针对存在的问题,为避免以后重现类似错误,为复习考试奠定一个好的基础,特做计划如下:

1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍,锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期,肯定有收获。

2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文,写上一篇类似的作文,用上里边的好词好句,对于连词成句部分,不妨每天写上5个连词成句,摸索里边的规律,在做这个题的时候,先看看里边有什么词组,什么句型,这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了,集中练上一段时间会有提高的。

3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大,所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案,对做错的题分析原因,对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来,有必要的要背过,以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外,要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。

4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况,同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍,把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书,把书吃透了,里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上,经常看看巩固巩固。

5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少,在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章,短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会,可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆,每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题,学会灵活运用。

6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题,在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题,做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定,风格相对一致,做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”,明确复习方向,最后找出自己的不足之处,作为下一次的努力目标。

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篇17:游长城初三英语作文

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It is fine today. I made an appointment with my foreign friend Peter to visit the Great Wall on Badaling.

We set out early in the morning. We first took the subway and then the bus. On reaching the foot of the Great Wall, Peter was attracted by the landscape immediately."What a won der!" he said repeatedly and pulled me onto the cable car at once. We got a view of the beautiful scenery. After a while, we got to the Great Wall. Peter was very excited. He touched the bricks frequently. I explained to him when and how’ we Chinese built the wall. He listened with great interest. When we entered a turret, Peter was more curious. I told him what the turret was and what it was built for. "It was really an amazing achievement!" Peter gasped with admiration and took several photos. Unconsciously, we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man, the symbol of the Great Wall. A lot of visitors gathered around it and took photos. I translated the words on the stele for Peter. "Only the one who can reach the Great Wall is a brave man." "Really?" Peter asked jokingly. We both laughed.

It the time to go back. We were fascinated by the scenery and reluctant to leave. We really had a pleasant time.

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篇18:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选

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导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧:

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。

最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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篇19:初三年级英语作文:徒步旅行

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I like traveling on foot With my brother in holidays.

At the very beginning, I felt very tired. I got out of breath so easily.Then my brother started to tell me some interesting stories.We walked and walked while he didnt stop telling stories. We walked a long way without knowing.

Then my brother asked me, "Are you still feeling tired?" The feelings of tiredness were already out of my mind.

我喜欢在假期跟哥哥一起徒步旅行。刚开始的时候,我还真有点吃不消,没走多远就累得上气不接下气。

于是哥哥就给我讲动听的故事。他一边讲我们一边走,不知不觉走了很远。哥哥问我:“你还累吗?”呵呵,我早把“累”这回事忘到九霄云外去了。

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篇20:初三年级英语作文:Save water

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Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it?

A poem:

Water has no taste at all.

Water has no color.

Water’s in the waterfall.

The pump.

The tap.

The well.

Water is everywhere around us.

Water is in the rain.

In the stream.

In the pond.

And in the river.

And in the sea again.

There isn’t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.

It is very valuable.

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