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+ 加入清单“天才出自勤奋。”这句话说得不错,勤能补拙,即使这个人不是天才,但经过勤奋地学习,不断地努力,一定能成为一个天才。但是,如果这个人天资聪颖,出生下来就是个天才,他引以为傲,但不勤奋地学习,懒惰成习,那么,即使他再聪明,也会变愚笨。所以,一个人不管他天赋怎么样,只要经过勤奋,就一定能够成为天才。
刚刚放学,我就被老师叫到办公室,我想;八成又是坏事吧!我的心咚咚直跳,轻手轻脚的走进办公室,低声问;“老师找我有事吗?”我看见了老师头紧皱,正在拿着前天的考试卷子,突然就有了一种不祥的预感。
老师告诉我我英语考了94分,我居然考了意料之外的分数,94分。我想;“不会呀!怎么会考94分,过老师的一番夸奖我脸红了。领到卷子后我才知道,这是细心的结果,这是几个月来刻苦努力的结果。我才想起,原来,考的低分是不细心,不读题的后果,如果做宇宙飞船的人们忽疏了一个小数点,造成的后果是可想而知的。”
我渐渐低下了头,才知道,一个人要想把事情做好,首先要做到细心,因为只有细心才能把问题追根个水落石出,而就为了细心,我几乎天天做阅读、完型,这让我明白了不要认为只要勤奋过就会永远聪明,只要你一懒惰下来,为自己取得的成就感到自满,骄傲时,那么你也会从天才降级为平凡的人。人不应该拥有骄傲自满的心态,否则再勤奋也没用。勤奋应该为每个人所拥有的心态。
勤奋,是成功的秘诀,也是成功的铺路石。“一分耕耘一分收获”,“一分辛苦一分才”。没有耕耘,没有辛苦,就没有收获,没有知识。
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篇1:2024中考英语作文写作高分秘诀
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+ 加入清单中考英语考试中“书面表达”往往是最后一项,怎么样在那么短的时间内尽可能的拿到高分呢?
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。
所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
标点错误:每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。
篇2:英语作文:拥有合作,才能拥抱成功
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+ 加入清单As the saying goes, "brothers, satisfy broken heart." A mans strength is too small, only have cooperation, can achieve. Man is standing in the far out at sea coast mast-head can have a ship, the need to promote, One mountain is in the far east has whose shimmering rays of the sun, need a set, One of the force is restless in its mothers womb, the maturation of maternal infant to nourish.
Cooperation is the path to success to mark. Danish astronomer with 30 years DiGu observation of the planet, precision accumulated extensive accurate and reliable information. But no good theoretical thinking and scientific arrangement, not a great discovery. Before his death DiGu will material to assistant Kepler, and told him the material preparation. DiGu accurate observation and the profound study of Kepler, combining finally leads the movement of the planets of the three laws of motion of the object, uncover secret. Without cooperation, the three laws of motion to the planet?
Cooperation is spread to the foundation of success. Many of the warring states period, and Lin xiangrus WanBiGuiZhao nov.1992, WangChongYong zhao zhao4 guo2s prime minister, as when lian Po old general prided himself on that very defy spirit, and everywhere. Lin xiangrus for the countrys interests to lian Po old rivalry everywhere. General In the old general understand Lin xiangrus on the original, very ashamed, personally to prime minister mansion QingZui auxiliary thorns. In dealing with national affairs of their cooperation, make an increasingly, JiangXiangHe as historical legacy. Without cooperation, which come national prosperity?
The train is bound for successful cooperation. In 1935, MAO zedong not before the zunyi meeting presided over the job. By chance, the influence of socialist left the situation is very difficult, forced march. The long march in zunyi meeting, held in zhou enlai, and WangJiaXiang insistence, established MAO zedong in the partys leadership, the new army under the leadership of the CPC in MAO zedong, seeking truth from facts, solidarity and cooperation, the battle is one by one. Since then, the communist party of China, the ideal ship across the narrow waterway, light avenue. Without cooperation, which to historic transition?
BC, chu, zhao 318, wei, Korea, yan five components of the coalition against aggression, qin, however, due to the heart, want to own interests, not very good cooperation, resulting in failure. If at all in the world cooperate, concentrated force, material and financial resources, is certain to beat the qin dynasty. Say so, with cooperation, can achieve.
Let the flower of success in the cooperation in the soil in the spring, the cooperation in the spring, let the success of spewing eagles flying in the sky in the cooperation. Let us have cooperation, hug success!
译文:
俗话说“兄弟一心,齐力断金,有关合作的英语作文,作文素材《有关合作的英语作文》。”一个人的力量太小,只有拥有合作,才能拥抱成功。一人之力是站在海岸遥望海中已经看得见桅杆尖头了的一只航船,需要风浪的推动;一人之力是立于高山之巅远看东方已经光芒四射喷薄欲出的一轮朝日,需要朝霞的映衬;一人之力是躁动于母腹中的快要成熟了的婴儿,需要母体的滋养。
合作是通向成功的指向标。丹麦天文学家第谷用30年时间精密观察行星的位置,积累了大量精确可靠的资料。但不善于理论思维和科学整理,未能有重大发现。临终前第谷将资料交给助手开普勒,并告诫他按这些资料编制星表。第谷的精确观察和开普勒的深刻研究相结合,终于引出行星运动三大定律的发现,揭开天体运动的秘密。没有合作,哪来行星运动三大定律?
合作是铺向成功的基石。战国时期的蔺相如多次立功,并使完璧归赵,被赵王重用,担任赵国宰相时,廉颇老将军居功自傲,十分不服气,并处处刁难。蔺相如为了国家的利益,对廉颇老将军处处相让。在廉颇老将军明白了蔺相如的初衷后,非常惭愧,亲自到宰相府辅荆请罪。他们在处理国家事务中精诚合作,使赵国日渐兴旺,将相和被传为历史佳话。没有合作,哪来国家兴旺?
合作是开往成功的列车。1935年遵义会议前,不主持中央工作。受左倾机会主义的影响,红军的处境非常艰难,被迫长征。红军在长征途中召开了遵义会议,在周恩来、张闻天和王稼祥的坚持下,确立了在全党全军的领导地位,新的党中央在的领导下,实事求是、团结一致、精诚合作,红军的胜仗是一个接着一个。从此,中国共产党的理想航船,跨越过了最为狭窄的航道,驶向光明大道。没有合作,哪来历史性转折?
公元前318年,楚、赵、魏、韩、燕五国组成联军抗击秦国的侵略,但是,由于人心不齐,只想自己的眼前利益,不能很好的合作,导致失败。若各国在当时精诚合作,集中各国的兵力、物力和财力,是一定能够打败秦国的。所以说,拥有合作,才能拥抱成功。
让成功之花在合作的土壤里盛开,让成功的清泉在合作的泉眼中喷涌,让成功的山鹰在合作的蓝天中翱翔。让我们拥有合作,拥抱成功吧!
[英语作文:拥有合作,才能拥抱成功
篇3:成功的秘诀
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+ 加入清单这周老师让写一篇读后感,一想起读后感我就发愁了。因为我写的读后感很不好,真么办呢。在这时,我忽然发现了我的图书角里有一本非常耀眼的书——《点亮智慧的明灯》。这本书了是我印象最深的就是第一章——名人成功必备的八大素质。
这一章主要写了成功的人有哪些素质。第一个是兴趣,第二个是要有个奋斗的目标,第三是面对困难要有坚韧不拔的信念,第四是做任何事都必须专心致志,第五是勤奋努力,就一定会比别人收获的更多,第六是保持一颗自信乐观的心,第七是要思维创新,第八是每天都要和时间赛跑。
又会想起这些事,我又有了和以前不一样的感受:
每当看见第一项的时候我都会想起如果没有兴趣,还会成功吗。可后来我都会得到的信息是没有兴趣就没有成功……
再次看到第二项的时候,我会想很多天真的想象,比如:想不努力就成功;想让别人给自己定个目标,并帮我完成……但是这都是不可能的有了兴趣还不够,还要有个目标,而且还要努力实现这个目标。
然后看到第三项的时候不是的想起了在危险中的一些人,他们有的不放弃希望,把一丝希望都好好用上,最后成功了;可没有信念的人最后不幸去世了。让我明白了,面对困难要有坚韧不拔的信念。
看到第四项我就想起了一个故事:居里夫人小时后学习非常专心,不管周围多么吵闹,都不会分心。就是他的这种专心,才让他成功。
接着看到了第五项,只有勤奋努力才会成功。林肯小时候家里非常的贫困,于是就他放牛,砍柴……为了换一本书来学习,最后他就成为了美国总统。
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最后我又重新翻了一下,我感受到:一个成功的人士,不仅要有兴趣,一个目标,乐观,创新。还要有坚韧不拔的信念,努力。不要忘了,还要每天和时间赛跑。
篇4:如何取得成功英语
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+ 加入清单Every body wants to succeed. But when it comes to the question that which factor leads to success, opportunity or hard-work, different people will offer different answers.
Some people think that opportunity is the first factor leading to success. They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, “Man proposes, god disposes”. Because almost all successful people have good luck and have caught their valuable opportunities, they believe that opportunity is a leading condition of the success. If seizes and makes the best use of opportunity available, one can succeed surely. In summary, to them, chances and lucks play the most important role on the road to success.
However, others maintain that “no pains, no gains” .Without exerting oneself, one could never expect to achieve success in no matter what one is doing. As is known to all, there is no royal road to the summit of success. One is likely to succeed only when one has worked with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance. Those who are lazy, sloppy and indifferent to their work, those who never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure. On the whole, as far as they are concerned, hard-working is the decisive factor to success.
In my view, both hard work and opportunity eventually matters. They are inseparable from each other, and put together, they make a great success. Hard work is to luck what fish is to water, and can be seen as an interior precondition of success. It lays the corner-stone for building a house while luck serves to cement it, to make the building bricks adherent to one another. They are the twins that contribute to success together. They are the factors from within and without respectively. We must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. When opportunities come, meet and make full use of them. Only in this way can we succeed one day.
译文:
每个人都想成功。但当涉及到哪些因素导致成功,机会和辛勤工作,不同的人会给出不同的答案。
有些人认为机会是第一个成功的主要因素。他们认为,作为一个谚语说,“谋事在人,成事在天”。因为几乎所有成功的人都有好运气,抓住宝贵的机会,他们认为机会是成功的主要条件。如果抓住和充分利用机会,一定可以成功。总之,对他们来说,机会和运气在成功的道路上扮演最重要的角色。
然而,另一些人则认为“没有痛苦,就没有收获”。没有发挥自己,没有人能指望取得成功,无论你在干什么。众所周知,没有捷径成功的首脑会议。一个成功的可能只有一个曾与全心的奉献精神和毅力。那些懒惰的,草率的和对他们的工作,那些不专心的工作一定会失败。总体上,就他们而言,勤奋是成功的决定性因素。
在我看来,都努力工作,最终事情的机会。他们互相离不开,放在一起,他们让一个巨大的成功。勤奋是好运什么鱼是水,可以视为一个内部成功的前提。它奠定了基础,为建设一个房子虽然运气用于水泥,使建筑砖块附着到另一个。他们是双胞胎,一起有助于成功。他们是从内部和外部因素分别。我们必须努力工作,努力做好准备。每当机遇降临,达到充分利用他们。只有这样我们才能有成功的一天。
篇5:成功的秘诀作文800字
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+ 加入清单日月如梭,白驹过隙。在当今社会,这个发展飞快的信息时代,想成功,没有捷径,秘诀倒有——不忘初心。
想象时光倒流,再度回到几千年前的那个特别的抉择,初心会展现它带来成功的魔力。
司马迁本乃朝中重臣,只因替一疑似投敌的将领辩护,便被投入狱中。在一死与腐刑之间,他必须作出抉择。一想起几天之内天上地下的变化,司马迁不禁泪湿眼角:“上天啊,你为何如此对我!三条路:死刑、宫刑或是以钱抵命。死是不能的,我司马家族编写《史记》的重担还未卸下,钱我早已用于买书和出门寻访古迹,哪有闲钱!可这最后一条出路,可怜我堂堂一须眉……为了初心,为了编《史记》,我忍了!”数月后,伤口仍隐隐作痛的司马迁正在那微微泛黄的灯下坚持着,他没有忘记当初的诺言,这才成功,这才名垂青史!
想象流水西去,再度回到那个百年之前的瓷都景德镇,初心会重演它辉煌的剧本。
“无论汝等如何反对,这集大成者的瓷瓶我是造定了!”随着爱新觉罗·乾隆皇帝的一声令下,景德镇的匠人们开始了非比寻常的忙碌。想造出乾隆皇帝爷口中轻易的“集大成者”在当时又谈何容易?虽身处“康乾盛世”不用担心材料资金,技术方面又如何攻关?现在连仿品都做不出来的有中华“瓷母”之称的各种釉彩大瓶被当时的工匠实现了。13种纹样,13种时代;13种工艺,13种温度;13种部分共同造就了中华陶瓷的集大成者。匠人们在当时那种简陋环境之下能够支持着做下去,靠的是什么?是初心的不忘,的确,不忘初心,成功总会眷顾!
时光回到现代,马云在创立阿里巴巴是靠的是什么?当然也是初心。
几十年前,马云因一次偶然的机会决心创业开一家互联网企业。他很年轻,没有经验,甚至没有二十一世纪进入信息社会的钥匙——英语,但心中的初心一直推动着他。他开始自学,甚至跑到西湖边上给外国友人作免费的导游,最终他还是成功了,因为初心,更因为自己的坚持,他成为了家喻户晓的的人物。
成功固然可贵,背后的初心才是秘诀。坚守初心吧,它将成为你心中最根本的动力。
篇6:关于成功的因素的英语
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+ 加入清单As we all known, the man who wants to be success should have a good
disposition. As the saying goes, “disposition decide to everything.” I remember
a famous motto: there are no two identical people in the world, but the success
people are similar in many ways. Exactly, good disposition is the foundation of
success. From my point of view, I deemed it success should also rely on these
factors: diligent, confident, humor. It can help us to open the door of
success.
There is no denying that diligent is the first step to the success. As the
proverb says, no pains, no gains. Absolutely, guess that a person without
diligent, how can he get achievements. Many successful people have become famous
in the world by their diligent. Therefore we should take diligence as a good
habit rather than lazy at every time.
Edison said “confident is the mother of the success. There is no doubt that
confidence is important to our daily life .If someone without confident, he will
never succeed in the end of his life. If someone trusted himself, he would
gained more chance to succeed. How could you get other’s trust if you didnt
trust yourself?
In addition, humor plays an important role in our life. It’s obvious that a
sense of humor can bring happiness to others and get involved to a group easily.
Just like my friend who is an energetic and lovely boy. The boss and staff like
him very much. Boss thinks highly of him in the company. Sometimes, we should
learn to how express humorously. A sense of humor can create unexpected
result.
From what has been mention above, a good disposition is an important factor
to our success. Therefore, how to develop a good disposition is essential.
篇7:关于成功的因素的英语
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+ 加入清单There are many characteristic exist in the world, and characteristic is
very important to people. For example, active, persistence, optimistic makes
people successful; lazy, passive makes people fail. Having a good characteristic
means you have the key to the successful door, but you have to find the way of
success. This is what I am going to talk about, the key to success:
persistence.
Persistence is a key to success, whether for a single person or an
organization. People who lack of it would mean failure in reaching a certain
goal. People need to know that success seldom comes easily on the first try;
they should have the patient to insist trying until they get the goal.
Unsuccessful people try something just a few times, and when it fails, they give
up; they usually pass the blame onto someone or something, and learn nothing
from their experience. Successful people are different, even they fail, and they
won’t lose their passion.
Let me take a famous person to example. His name is Da Vinci, he is known
as a great painter, artist. Everyone knows him, but I think there are not much
people known that how much effort did he made before he became a famous artist.
Da Vinci draw eggs everyday when he was young, hundreds and thousands times a
day. It is definite a boring work, many people could not bear to face an egg and
draw it in different angle thousands times. But Da Vinci did it, and he made it.
We could say it is not for his persistence that he would not get the great
aptitude for painting.
Talent is a gift from god, persistence is a key you’ve got, and effort
makes those working which bring you to open the door of success.
篇8:成功的秘诀300字作文
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+ 加入清单伽利略的成功,在于坚持对自然界的观察和不懈的实验。勤奋、忘我工作、勇于攻克难关,是每一个成功者共有的特性。但是,他们还有各自不同的经历和秘诀,伽利略的秘诀是不轻易相信别人。
我认为成功的秘诀是发现自己的潜能。一个经营很成功的企业家,为了保持良好心态,激发自己的潜能,录下自己讲的一段话:“我感觉一天比一天好,我身体很健康,工作很顺利。我很走运。”几乎每天他都把这段话放给自己听,以激励、鼓舞自己,所以发掘了自己的潜能,获得了成功。有一个孩子在沙滩上用沙子堆城堡。一位长者走过来问:“你在玩沙子吗?”孩子说:“不,我是设计师,在建一座美丽的城堡。”多年后,这个孩子果真成了一名著名的建筑设计师。
可见发现自己的潜能,是取得成功的重要条件。但如何发掘自己的潜能呢?我们要经常给予自己积极的暗示,在心中想象出一个比自己更好的“自我”形象,然后在实践中激发自己的潜能。
篇9:成功的秘诀在于观察
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+ 加入清单我从不知一个微小的细节 ,竟会有这多么多不同之处……
那年暑假,我住在奶奶家。因为奶奶家住的是平房,所以在院子里有一块菜地,那里种了几株牵牛花,那是我最喜欢去的地方。
每天早上,我都喜欢去那块土地去看看那个浅紫色的小花。
一根木棍上爬满了深绿色的细细的花蔓,翠绿的叶子在朝阳的沐浴下显得那样的娇小,浅紫色的花朵上缀着点露珠,我好像一个玉杯中盛满了琼浆玉液。
我每天都看它们在成长,看它们的藤蔓细密的缠绕在木竿上,并越长越高,我十分高兴。
直到有一天,我发现,一株牵牛花已经爬到里木竿的顶端,仔细一看,原来是它空过了中间一节木竿,直绕到了顶端!作文
那夜,不知为何,刮起了狂风,我不禁为那些花儿担心起来
第二天一早,我便来带了木竿前,果不其然,那株爬的最高的花儿被吹打到了地下,委缩的叶子,被泥土沾染的花朵,失去了往日的风采,藤蔓扭曲在一起,失去了鲜活的生命力,看来那场暴雨便是对他狂妄与骄傲的惩罚。
我的内心好像揉进了一把细碎的沙石,那种细微却遍布全身
的那种疼痛惊醒了我。
成功真的那么容易取得吗?恐怕不是,像牵牛花那样妄想一不 登天 ,即便成功,最后隐藏的还不是失败吗?
成功并不容易,需要靠一步一个脚印的前进,而并不是投机取巧,往往一个细微的情节,决定一个人的成败。
细节往往不可忽视。我看破了成功的真谛,原来只要足够隐忍,成功并不难。
一个微小的细节往往决定一切,所以,成功就在细微处。
篇10:关于成功的英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Personality Characteristics That Make You Successful
When we talk about those famous people, we all like to know how they succeed. Meanwhile we all admire their personal special virtues which lead them to triumph. And it is obvious that many successful people have some personality characteristics in common. As far as I concerned, I deem that persistence, prudence, confidence and courage are the most important.
当我们在谈论那些名人的时候,我们都想知道他们是如何取得成功的。同时我们都很钦佩引导他们走向胜利的特别的个人美德。很明显,许多成功的人都有一些共同的个性。就我而言,我认为毅力,谨慎,自信和勇气是最重要的。
Firstly, I think persistence should come first before the other three personality characters. As we all know that a person cannot always successfully reach his aim at his first try, there are many barriers waiting for him. Therefore the person will fail many times before he gets his victory. If he doesnt persist in trying again and again and make a breakthrough, thus he will stay still, no progress. He may not move forward or even regress. A person without the personal character of persistence can’t finally succeed in getting his goal.
首先,我认为毅力要比其他三个个性都要重要。总所周知,人不可能总是在第一次尝试的时候就成功地达到自己的目标,肯定会有很多阻碍等着他。因此,人们会在多次失败后才会取得胜利。如果他没有坚持不断地努力和突破,他将会保持静止状态,没有进步。他不可能前进甚至是倒退。一个没有毅力的人不能取得最终的成功。
Secondly, a man who wants to be successful should also own the characteristic of prudence. The inventor of the electric bulb gives a good example for explaining that. It is said that the inventor tried to use thousands kinds of metal to make electric bulb filament in order to find the most suitable metal which can let the lamp light longer and brighter. I suppose that without the very prudential work, the inventor could not triumph in the end. A self- made man should do his jobs with prudence, sometimes even should be careful doing a very trivial thing. Like when those scientists or mathematicians are dealing with a complex matter, if they make a small mistake, the efforts which they made before will be in vain. Accordingly, cautiousness is necessary.
其次,一个人想要取得成功的人还应该有谨慎的性格。电灯的发明者就为解释这一点提供了一个很好的例子。据说,发明者试图用几千种金属来找到最合适的的金属做电灯泡灯丝使得灯的寿命更长、更亮。我觉得如果发明者不是非常谨慎工作,他不可能在最后取得胜利。一个靠自己努力而成功的人应该是谨慎地工作,有时连一些很琐碎的事情甚至都要小心。就像当那些科学家和数学家正在处理一个复杂的问题时,如果他们犯了一丁点的错误,他们之前的努力都将是徒劳的。因此,谨慎是很有必要的。
In addition, the self- made men all are self-confident and courageous. As the saying goes, “fortune never helps the man whose courage has failed.” Supposed that a soldier loses his confidence and gallantry to fight when he is in the field of the battle, I am sure that he does not have the fortune to survive successfully. Therefore people who want to achieve their goals in their work all should be self-confident and courageous.
此外,一个靠自己努力而取得成功的人都是有自信和勇气的。俗话说,“运气永远不会帮助没有勇气的人。”假如一个失去了信心和勇气的士兵仍然在战场上战斗,我敢肯定他不会有幸存下来的运气。因此,想要实现自己在工作上的目标的人应该是要有自信和勇气的。
In a word, my view regarding those famous people’s success is that they persist in working hard, do their jobs with prudence, are confident in themselves and have courage to overcome any kinds of difficulties; it is the reason that they can make themselves into a celebrity and admired by others.
总之,我对于名人成功的看法是,他们坚持努力工作,谨慎,对自己有信心,有克服任何困难的勇气。这就是他们之所以成为名人并受人敬仰的原因。
篇11:成功的要素英语
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+ 加入清单When doing the same thing, some people success but some fail. There must be many factors leading that result. In my view, the most important factor is the difference of confidence, determination and sociability are the foundation and condition of success.
做同样的事情,有些人成功,有些人失败。肯定有许多因素导致这样的结果。在我看来,最重要的因素是人的信心,决心的差异以及社交能力是成功的基础和条件。
First of all, no matter who want to success, they must have confidence, as confidence is the basic need for success. If someone always thinks he can’t do this or that well, then he can’t finish it well. For example, when a person is being interviewed, if he doesn’t believe he can do that job well, how can he act believable, so how can the interviewers trust his ability? Therefore, the interview is obviously a failure. However, if a person is confident, he can receive the opportunity to prepare for every challenge easily, which makes success become closer.
首先,无论谁想要成功,就必须有信心,因为信心是成功的基本条件。如果有人总是认为他不能把这个或那个做好,他肯定不能做好它。例如,当一个人在面试的时候,如果他不相信自己能做好这个工作,他如何能表现得自信,那么如何能使面试官相信他的能力呢?所以,那样的面试肯定是失败的。但是,如果一个人是有自信的,他可以轻易的迎接每一次挑战的机会,这也会使成功更加接近。
In addition, confidence just the door for success, if someone wants to get into the house of success, determination is necessary. The determined meet difficulties always overcome it and insist to the end. On the other hand, if someone is not determined, he would give up when facing difficulty. For instance, when doing homework, the person who is not determined always can’t finish perfectly and even copy from others when he thinks that homework is hard to finish. However, the person who is determined always can finish it well, because he know what he really wants and he is able to carry on.
此外,信心只是成功之门,如果想取得成功,决心是必须的。有决心的人遇到困难总能克服它,并坚持到最后。另一方面,如果一个没有决心的人,遇到困难时他会放弃。例如,做作业的时候,没有决心的人总是无法很好的完成作业甚至如果他觉得作业难以完成就会抄袭别人的。但是,有决心的人总是能很好地完成作业,因为他知道他真正想要的,并且能坚持下去。
The last but not least is that no one can do anything well by themselves, so they need help. At that time, sociable is helpful. It is well-known that success is hard to reach. Therefore, people need others to help them. A sociable person can get help easily, as he has so many friends. On the other side, a person is not good at communication, when he gets in trouble, maybe no one helps him. So we can see the importance of sociability to success.
最后但并非最不重要的是,没有人可以靠自己做好所有的事情,所以他们需要帮助。这个时候,社交是很有帮助的。众所周知,成功是很难取得的。因此,人们需要他人的帮助。一个善于交际的人可以轻易的得到帮助,因为他有很多朋友。另一方面,一个不善于社交的人,当他遇到麻烦时,也许没有人会帮助他。所以我们可以看到社交对于成功的重要性。
In a word, there maybe not only confidence, determination, and sociability are essential to success, but I think they are the most important ones, for they are the foundation and condition of success.
总之,可能不仅仅信心,决心,和社交能力是成功的关键,但我认为它们是最重要的,因为他们是成功的基础和条件。
篇12:成功的秘诀
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+ 加入清单人生需要有创意,创意是成功的秘诀,我回忆起了一篇文章:四年前,一个烈日炎炎的午后,一位路人拦了辆出租车,说去公安局,其实这位路人是想去成人教育学校,这学校就在公安局旁边,他是怕出租车司机不知道罢了。但这位司机一下子便猜出了他的心思,并和这个路人聊天,在交谈中,这个路人发现这个司机很有创意,从中能让自己受益一生。这到底让路人明白了些什么呢?我埋头继续看书,原来这个路人通过了这件事情,使自己生意兴旺。
啊!这就是创意。创意需要努力与经验,还需要认知和勇气,此外还需要一点点灵光。
这个故事让我想起了另外一个故事:曾经有一个父亲对女儿说:“要有创意!”这个女儿长大后,让波菲莱太太给她织了一件自己设计的毛衣,去展示了一番,有一家公司来定购,一下子就要定购40件。这个女儿把波菲莱太太请来,又请20位心灵手巧的织毛衣女佣人,一个星期便把40件毛衣交给了这家公司。
又要服装展示了,女佣人全部都被另外一家织毛衣的给叫去了,这些衣服怎么办呢?有些还有一只袖子没织好,有些有一半还没织好,这可怎么办?
这时她想起了父亲的那句话,突然想出了好办法,把这些衣服展示出去。因为这些没有完工的毛衣也有它的特点。果然,这很有创意,厂家把这些衣服一抢而光,还向她定购了几百件。在生活中还有很多有创意的事件。
有一天,妈妈告诉我们:今天开始,要小孩们倒垃圾了。于是我和哥哥开始轮流倒垃圾。第二天,我该倒垃圾了,我在想我有没有什么简单的办法呢?可以节约一些时间呢?这时,一个简单的想法在我脑海中形成了。倒完垃圾,趁这下楼的机会,我可以去把今天要吃的水果买来,这不是很好吗?一举两得,既倒垃圾又买来了水果。
我便如此行事,果然,节约了一些宝贵的时间。妈妈连声称赞我真会安排事情,肯动脑筋。我也高兴地一蹦三尺高。
这也是创意,人生中有创意,能使人生精彩起来,它是财富和成功的秘诀,能使我们的人生更加辉煌、灿烂,也能使我们那平淡的生活闪烁那灿烂的光芒。
生活中有很多创意,让我们一个个去发现和探索吧!
篇13:成功的一件事英语
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+ 加入清单The success of a person, often is the symbol of victory; successful, allowing a person to fail when light up the hope of a lamp; success, is a way to encourage; in real life, success means one thing for a happy ending!
In each case the results, both success and failure. To tell the truth, in my mind, success is for me a lamp life in the future. From small to large, my life, light up many successful lamp. Especially at that time, the light bright lights lighting will be my life!
In June 24, 2008, I and my mother and sister to go to the public square for a walk, when walking. From our place to play go out, see some people dancing in a side, do not know what to look for in. My heart s doubts, staring at. My mother seemed to see my thoughts, he said to me:" go, Phoebe. We went to have a look to see what they are reading." I heard the word, immediately ran up, a look, oh, turns out to be some people in the skating; but there are still some children. Look oh, here is in a group called children skating. Soon, mom and sister also came to see. Mother looked at for a while, ask where Aunt some publicity, so help me there were reported, as here let me learn to skate.
First, Im wearing skates, as said the coach yourself to look feel. So, I took the side of the rope, one step at a time, with great care to go forward. Then. Wang came, took me, without ropes help, slide alone. Coach Wang step, I with a step, like that, it was really like a small baby toddler. Later, Wang let me alone to practice, I have a man around the rope, a circle. Every time I did not walk a few steps, he almost fell, each fell particularly painful. I was discouraged when, I suddenly remembered a classic song" no experience of wind and rain, how can see the rainbow". I immediately become strong, continued to slide, slide, slide, I finally would be a little. I am happy really want to jump three feet, alas, skates is too heavy, I wouldn t jump ... ...
Since then, I have to go back to practice skating. Finally, nothing is impossible to a willing heart, I was skating speed can be up to the coach, but ah, also some skating tricks!
Is ah! Do not experience wind and rain, how can see the rainbow? That is when I realized a truth, do you? It will light up my future life!
成功,往往是一个人胜利的象征;成功,能让人在失败时点亮希望的一盏灯;成功,就是一种鼓励的方式;在现实生活中,成功意味着一件事的一个美好的结尾!
在每一件事的结果,都有成功和失败的结局。说实在的,在我心目中,成功是为我点亮生活未来的一盏灯。从小到大,我的生活中,点亮了不少成功的灯。特别是那一次,那盏亮闪闪的灯将照明我一生啊!
在2008年6月24日,我和妈妈还有妹妹一起去市民广场走走,就当是散步。我们从玩的地方走出来后,看见一些人为在跳舞的旁边,不知道在看什么。我心中特疑惑,一直盯着那儿看。妈妈好像看出了我的心思,于是对我说:“走,楠浠。我们去看看他们在看什么。”我听了这句话,马上跑上去,一看,唉,原来是一些人在溜冰;而且还有一些小孩子。看来哦,这里是在叫小孩子溜冰的一个团。马上的,妈妈和妹妹也来看了。妈妈看了一会儿,就问那里的宣传阿姨一些情况,于是就帮我在那儿报了名,像让我在这里学会滑冰。
一开始,我穿着溜冰鞋,就照教练说得自己先去找一下感觉。于是,我拉着边上的绳子,一步一步地,小心翼翼的往前走。然后。王教练过来,领着我,不用绳子的帮助,独自滑。王教练走一步,我就跟一步,那样子,真像一个小婴儿初学走路时的情景。过后,王教练让我一个人独自练习,我只得一个人,围着绳子一圈圈的转。我每次没走几步,就几乎要摔一跤,每次摔得特别痛。正当我灰心的时候,我突然想起一句一句经典的歌词“不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹”。我马上又变得坚强起来,继续滑,滑啊滑啊,我终于会了一点儿了。我高兴的真想一蹦三尺,可惜啊,溜冰鞋太重了,我根本跳不起来……
从那以后,我每周都回去练溜冰。终于,功夫不负有心人,我溜冰的速度都可以赶得上教练了,而且呀,还会了一些溜冰的花样呢!
是啊!不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹?着是我成功时悟出的一个道理,你呢?这个道理将点亮我未来的生活!
篇14:成功的秘诀
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+ 加入清单成功对父母来说是养育出好的儿女;对于老师来说是培养出更好的国家栋梁。而成功有许多秘诀,其中最大的秘诀是坚持。所谓:坚持就是胜利。
相信大家都听说过灰姑娘的故事吧,但有没有看过《魔法灰姑娘》呢?这个是一本充满勇气趣味十足的小说。小主人公爱拉一出生就得到了仙女的一份恐怖的礼物——服从,对任何人的话必须惟命是从,这让她随时随地的陷入困扰,矛盾和痛苦之中。然后爱拉凭借她智慧,勇敢和反叛的个性,在寻求自由和发现自我的路途中化险为夷。她机制的驯服了食人妖,与精灵结尾朋友,并与王子坠入爱河。在宫廷盛大的假面舞会上,与终于进行了激烈的抗争,最后,他胜利了,她破解了咒语。
爱拉靠着坚定的信念破解了咒语,而我们生活中缺的往往是坚持。比如:一样东西不见了,刚开始,怎么都找不到,你放弃了,那么这件东西就永远的没了。又比如:去登山,爬到半山腰,你觉得太累了,就不往上爬了,那么这一般的路不就白费了吗?只相差这么一段时间,可你却放弃了,只要再坚持一会儿,再爬一段路,就可以成功,何乐而不为呢?
有一次体育课上,我们班测800米。这个项目是我们女生最害怕的体育项目,只要听到这个名字,我们就脚软。800米又要开始了,随着一声哨响,我们大家都用尽全身的力气跑完一圈又一圈,我早已累的气喘吁吁。最后一圈了,我拖着疲倦的身体向前跑,还又五十米。四十米,三十米,近了,更近了。可是我的双腿早已不听使唤,再也卖不动步伐了。每跑一步都要稍微停一下,像定格的图画。我有时几乎就要放弃了,反正我不会跑进四分钟的,但是如果没跑进四分钟,那么就要重跑。我使出了最后的力量,大步迈向终点。但是,成功仿佛与我无缘,我没能跑进4分钟。哎,成功就与我相差那么一眨眼的时间,只要我不犹豫,直接用尽力量向终点跑,那么我就不用重跑了。但是,一切都无法改变了。
还有一次,我和爸妈去爬山。我们大家好不容易爬上了半山腰,爸爸坚决提议:”别上去了,我们下山去吧!”我有了上回的教训,对爸爸说:“爸爸,我们再上去看看吧!上面有许多好看的风景,是这里看不到的,既然来了,就上去看看吧!“爸爸终于被我打动了,我们决定上山顶去欣赏美丽的风景。
坚持就是胜利,爱拉用自己的坚持破解了咒语,我们要像爱拉那样用坚持不懈的精神去做好每一件事情。
篇15:成功英语年级
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+ 加入清单Every body wants to succeed. But when it comes to the question that which
factor leads to success, opportunity or hard-work, different people will offer
different answers.
Some people think that opportunity is the first factor leading to success.
They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, “Man proposes, god disposes”. Because
almost all successful people have good luck and have caught their valuable
opportunities, they believe that opportunity is a leading condition of the
success. If seizes and makes the best use of opportunity available, one can
succeed surely. In summary, to them, chances and lucks play the most important
role on the road to success.
However, others maintain that “no pains, no gains” .Without exerting
oneself, one could never expect to achieve success in no matter what one is
doing. As is known to all, there is no royal road to the summit of success. One
is likely to succeed only when one has worked with whole-hearted devotion and
perseverance. Those who are lazy, sloppy and indifferent to their work, those
who never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure. On the whole, as
far as they are concerned, hard-working is the decisive factor to success.
In my view, both hard work and opportunity eventually matters. They are
inseparable from each other, and put together, they make a great success. Hard
work is to luck what fish is to water, and can be seen as an interior
precondition of success. It lays the corner-stone for building a house while
luck serves to cement it, to make the building bricks adherent to one another.
They are the twins that contribute to success together. They are the factors
from within and without respectively. We must work hard, make efforts and get
prepared. When opportunities come, meet and make full use of them. Only in this
way can we succeed one day.
篇16:成功的秘诀作文600字
全文共 579 字
+ 加入清单有一幅漫画,看后很有启发,有一群人,各自的背上都背着一个沉重的十字架,在缓慢而艰难的前行。当时环境恶劣,黄沙漫天,道路坎坷。
途中,一个黄衣男子停下来休息,他实在不愿再背起这沉重的十字架了,可又无可奈何,于是心生一计,悄悄掏出一把小刀,把十字架砍去了一截,这样背起来就比较轻松了。
他继续前行,可是走着走着,还是感觉十字架很沉重,于是再次拿起小刀,又把十字架砍去一截。这样,他感觉轻松多了,于是心情愉快地哼着小曲:“啦啦啦,啦啦啦……”
谁料,前面忽然出现了一条又深又宽的沟壑,可是又没有桥,这可怎么通过?后面的人渐渐赶过来了,他们纷纷把自己背上的十字架架在了沟壑之上,于是形成了桥梁,他们很顺利地就过去了。
黄衣男子也如法炮制,只可惜他的十字架已经砍去了一大截,根本无法搭成桥架在沟壑之上。他只好留在原地,看着沟壑对面的人群渐渐走远,此时他沮丧不堪,追悔莫及,可是为时已晚。
在人生的道路上,我们每个人都背负着各种各样的“十字架”,在步履艰难的前行,它也许是责任,也是是事业、也许是我们的求学之路,总之,这些都构成了我们每个人在这个世界上存在的意义和价值,所以,我们要肩负起来该承担的一切,不要轻言放弃,更不可投机取巧,只有在逆境的不断挫折中才会更加磨炼自己,勇敢克服了这些困难,终究会获得成功的。
不积跬步,无以至千里;不积小流,无以成江海。要想成功,就要脚踏实地。
篇17:励志中外名人故事3:科比成功的秘诀
全文共 281 字
+ 加入清单科比是NBA著名的篮球明星,他曾经四次率领洛杉矶湖人队登上NBA年度总冠军的宝座。有一次,一位记者在采访中曾经这样问科比:“你为什么如此成功呢?”
对于记者的提问,科比并没有直接回答,而是反问记者道:“你知道洛杉矶凌晨四点的样子吗?”
这个问题搞得记者一头雾水,他疑惑地摇了摇头。
科比见状言道:“我知道每天凌晨四点洛杉矶的样子。”
记者听完,不由得对科比格外尊崇。
一个人的成功绝非偶然,它是有多种因素构成的,但有一个条件是必须的,那就是勤奋努力,任何一个没有付出的人,断然是不会成功的。就像科比,每天不到凌晨四点就起床训练,洒下了那么多的汗水,才造就出了一位篮球天才。
篇18:我收获了成功的秘诀作文600字
全文共 667 字
+ 加入清单加油!加油!体育场上传来了一阵排山倒海的欢呼声,这是前段时间我们学校召开一年一度运动会的场景。
运动场上到处都充满了紧张、激烈的比赛气氛。作为运动员,我此次参赛的项目是跳高和垒球。进行跳高项目时,望着那看似拦路虎的跳竿,我心中望而却步,我紧张地助跑、起跳,第一个拦路虎被我拿下。然而第二次我却因左腿蹬腿慢没能跳过杆。那一刻,空气似乎凝固了起来,因为这样的结果意味着我进入不了决赛了。我把希望寄托于第二个项目——垒球,我一心想着为班级体争光,没想到垒球项目我也和决赛失之交臂。
面对比赛结果,我没有了往日的欢呼,这时,我想起妈妈告诉我泰戈尔的一句诗:“如果你为错过太阳而流泪,那么你也必将错过群星了”。我对自己说,“收起眼泪,让自己坚强起来。”虽然这次我被淘汰了,但我决不会气馁。因为运动会上,我收获了远比结果更为珍贵的东西。运动场上的失败,使我懂得了成功是来之不易的,失败并不可怕,关键是去积极参与,感受过程,在不断的经历中积累经验,提高自己的实力,并从失败中汲取教训,然后坚定理想信念,不轻易动摇,坚持心中那一定胜利的“最强音”,我想总有一天,我能体会到成功的喜悦。
“成功”和“失败”不仅仅是两个字的不同,更是一种差距。运动场上我读懂了什么是朝气,什么是活力,什么是责任,什么是担当。运动会上取得的胜利凝聚的是运动员勤学苦练和坚韧不拔的毅力,只有坚持不懈得去努力拼搏,才会拉近成功的距离。我一定要把运动场上的这种奋力拼搏、勇往直前的精神用到学习上。
这次运动会,我虽然失败了,但我增长了见识,懂得了人生道理,最重要的是我收获了成功的秘诀。
篇19:中考英语作文高分秘诀介绍
全文共 2143 字
+ 加入清单想要获得更加高分的英语写作,在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导,大家一起来阅读吧。
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有:She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
拓展阅读:写好作文"加分点"
合理使用动词使表达更生动
(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。
In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性
(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。
I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。
改变动词增强文章的感染色彩
(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。
At the news of his death, she felt very sad。
篇20:2024中考英语大秘诀
全文共 2136 字
+ 加入清单导语:书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下是yuwenmi小编就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。如ago,last…——过去时next,in…——将来时等人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thanks to the teachers,we have improved our English.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but Although+clause(从句),Inspite of+n/doing On onehand…On the other hand…Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:Forexample,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
10.文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment,our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
常用状语从句句型:1)时间when,not…until,as soon as 2)目的so that+clause;todo(为了) 3)结果so…that+clause,too…todo(太……以至于……) 4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要) 5)让步though,although,eventhough,even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how 6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable。改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers.改正:much information(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV.改正:There are many programs on TV.(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。