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1000我的英文写作的经验举例分析
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+ 加入清单一、英语写作的特点.
The characteristics of formal writing
1.名词化趋势
I do not eat much.-->I am a light eater.
The clock on the desk reminds me of time.-->I put a clock on the desk as a reminder of time.
We once cried, laughed and disappointed.-->There were moments of tears, moments of laughter, and moments of disappointment.
注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.
2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)
我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.
More and more young students studied further in the past two decades.
-->The past two decades witnessed a growing number of young students for further study.
Looking out of the window, you will have a nice view.
-->A glance out of the window offers you a nice view.
注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.
3.被动语态
这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:
Great efforts should be made to…..
What can not be denied is that….
二、句式的写作:
Main features of English sentences:
1.长短句结合
Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrong that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, and always perseveres. Love never fails.
一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.
2.并列复合句
这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:
He who wants to save his life will lose it, and he who loses his life for me will save it.
3.单一复合句
也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.
三、Variety of sentences:
1. ”-ing & -ed” groups
e.g.
(1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed,” May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”
(2)Reviewing what one has learned and gaining new insights, one is fit to be a teacher.
(3)Compared with the tradition, modernity is more dynamic.
2. ”to do” groups
e.g.
To spend too much time in study is sloth; to use them too much for ornaments is affectation; to make any judgment wholly by their rules is the humor of the scholar.
3. adverb
Simply, amazingly, absurdly, broadly, practically and so on
e.g.
Intelligently applied to daily life, modern technology will surely bring benefits to the well-being of the human race.
4.介词短语
In pursuit of, in spite of (注意平时自己的收集)
e.g.
In pursuit of excellence, ever pushing up the limit, life consists in the hope born of despair.
5.主语从句
e.g.
What China needs is not more morals, but more prisons for politicians.
句子的变化还有 It is self-evident(adj) that…….和There be 这样的句子
6.倒装
(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.
Never before has such a high standard been achieved.
Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.
(2)为使描绘更加生动,与介词同形的副词可以移动到句首,而把主语放到谓语后面去.
Following the roar, out rushed a tiger from the bushes.
In came a pretty girl he had never seen before.
四、插入语
插入语可以是一个小词,也可以是一个同谓语的形式.
1.先看一个小技巧:(对there be 句型均有效)
There is, recently, a debate amongst educators that……
通俗的讲,在老外眼里,主语与谓语离的越远,句子的档次越高.
2.插入语后面再接上一个定语从句;
Direct experience, a necessary means to recognize the world, which differs from knowledge acquired from books, is a major step to the cognitive world.
再看几个同谓语从句的例子:
1.Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.
2.Courage, a basic quality that every human being is supposed to possess when facing a dilemma, is highly cherished among young people.
3. Convention, generally accepted practice especially with regard to social behavior, has now been increasingly challenged.
平时要多积累这样的句型,使之变成自己的语言.
Tip:对同谓语的解释尽量宽泛一些,有利于句子的拉长.
对于入语加定语从句开头.
就是说:将题目中的中心词拿出来,进行宽泛的解释.
这一方法对很大一部分的考题都是有效的.
以上就是我的一点总结,希望对大家会有所帮助.
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Amiss is as good as a mile.差之毫厘,失之千里。
Two is company,but three is none.两个和尚抬水吃,三个和尚无水吃。
Walls have ear.隔墙有耳。
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Two can play the game.孤掌难鸣。
Newbroom sweeps clean.新官上任三把火。
Speak of the devil,and he appears.说曹操,曹操到。
The grass is greener on the other side of the hill.这山望着那山高。
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In fair weather prepare for the foul.如译成“晴天要防阴天”,不如译成“有备无患”或“居安思危”或“未雨绸缪”。
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An empty sack cannot stand upright.空袋立不直。
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Pride and Prejudice is a famous classic written by Jane Austen. I was attracted by the characters and plots of the film adapted from the novel.
Elizabeth is the heroine of the story. When she meets Darcy, a handsome, rich but arrogant man, on the party for the first time, she is dissatisfied with the proud manner of Darcy. Darcy looks down on those who are in a lower social class,
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Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December.It is a very happy day
for many boys and girls .Before the term ends in some schools ,the children act
a nativity or “birth” play,showing how Jesus was born in a stable.
On the twenty-fourth of December,all children are very excited.Usually they
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even hang up a pillow-case or a sack to try to get more presents.Later that
night,Father or Mother will put presents in the sock,and leave others at the
side of the bed.
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light at two oclock,and most of them are awake by six oclock although it is
not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.Children
look for their presents,and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared.At
about one oclock in the afternoon,the Christmas dinner is brought in.The turkey
or chicken is quickly eaten.Children search in their Christmas pudding for new
coins which are hidden in it.The rest of the day is full of games and eating
until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.
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+ 加入清单how to save environment? i think we should do the followings: first, it’s best to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. second, i will remember to turn off the lights when i leave the classroom. third, in my free time, i will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. the fourth idea is turning off the shower when i ‘m not using it. fifth, it is imporment to save water and money. also, i won’t spend too much money on expensive things. last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . i’ll try my best to save the energy, i hope i can do something for our country.
the environmental protection is the most major problem which in the modern life the humanity faces. must solve this problem must start from foundation. first, must massively propagandize, enhances peoples consciousness with understanding, strengthens the environmental protection consciousness. next, must carry on waste recovery use, reduces to forest-trees felling. also must strengthen to white pollution processing, little uses the plastic product. finally, must make improvement to clean aspect. causes the citys appearance to be neater. for earths tomorrow, we must start from the now diligently, will want the well local constable to protect the environment. to this us proposes as follows suggests: implementation trash classification packed in bags. like this not only can reduce the environmental sanitation workers work load, but also can even better basically arrive makes use of waste, to reduce the pollution, saves the resources.
篇16:关于快乐的英文
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+ 加入清单I spent a very happy Spring Festival this year, because I traveled to Yangjiang, Zhuhai and Zhongshan.
今年我度过了一个愉快的春节,因为我去了阳江,珠海和中山。
It was a very special journey for me, for it was the first time that I had traveled by plane. It was the first time that I had enjoyed myself at the seaside had seen the beautiful Macao. And, it was also the first time that I had spent the New Years Day outside.
这对我来说是个非常特别的旅程,因为这是我第一次乘坐飞机。这是我第一次在海边看到美丽的澳门。同时,它也是我第一次在外面过春节。
When I was in Yangjiang, I had a great time with my brother. We climbed the mountains, visited some parks, walked around the downtown area and spent the happiest time on Hailing Island.
我在阳江的时候,我和我的弟弟玩得很开心。我们爬了山,参观了公园,逛了市区在海陵岛度过的最快乐的时光。
On February 10th, I went to Zhuhai. I was happy in Zhuhai, because my former classmate kept a good company with me. We visited so many interesting places, such as Xiangzhou Port, Gongbei Port, Shijingshan Park, Haibin Park and so on. We also traveled around Macao by ship. It was very exciting.
二月十日,我去了珠海。在珠海我很开心,因为我的老同学和我保持着良好联系。我们去参观了许多有趣的地方,如香洲港,拱北港,石景山公园,海滨公园等。我们还坐船游遍了整个澳门。这是非常令人兴奋的。
After my two-day trip in Zhuhai, I went to visit my best friend in Zhongshan. We toured around the city on the day and chatted with each other happily at night. Both of us enjoyed ourselves very much.
在珠海为期两天的旅行后,我去拜访了我在中山最好的朋友。我们白天参观了城市,晚上大家快乐的聊天。我们都玩得很开心。
This was the golden time in my life, so I’ll keep it in my memory forever.
这是我人生中的幸运时光,所以我会把它永远的珍藏在我的记忆中。
[关于快乐的英文作文
篇17:初中英文
全文共 597 字
+ 加入清单Ofo is very popular nowadays, which brings great convenience to people. For
foreign media, they even treat Ofo as one of new four inventions in China. I
like to use Ofo so much. I can take exercise and enjoy the scenery. But the news
reported that a lot of Ofos had been destroyed. some were stolen and some were
broken. Ofo is the new industry, which needs to be supported. While some
peoples bad behavior hurts publics interest. I believe that most people will
protect the bikes and they return them on time. It is everybodys duty to
protect the public property. Dont be greedy for the small advantage.
篇18:竞选班长英文作文
全文共 1224 字
+ 加入清单The boy students in our clawere preparing to run for monitor. Hearing the news, we girls were full of iaterest and curiosity. We were in bigh spirits and went to listen to their competltive speech. We decided to put our sacred vote to the most suitable person after careful consideration.
The first one who stood up to speak was Yin Xing, who was very active in physical and recreational activities. He pledged to enrich our school life by leading us in singing and dancing and playing games.
The second speaker was Tong Sheng, who was smart and ceonomical and good at planning, He said be would arrange fox our budget in claactivities.
The speeches went on. My eyes fell on Jiang Xin, who sat in a corner, listening attentively. That boy was quiet and always readyto help others in their studies. He could play basketball and dance gracefully. I asked him why he did not run for monitor. He said he was no good. Hearing us talking, someone shouted,"Jiang Xin, why not join in and run for monitor?" Jiang Xin stood up. embarrassed,"I am no good. If anyone is in need of me, I am ready to help. Thats all."
The time had come for us to count the votes. And to my delight ,Jiang Xin received the most votes and was elected monitor.
篇19:发送一封信英文
全文共 923 字
+ 加入清单Dear Sir,
I saw your advertisement for "the perfect lighter" in Sunday Times last
week and immediately sent off a £2 postal order and the completed form for the
lighter.
Imagine my surprise when all I got in return was a box of matches! I could
understand a mistake. I might even pardon a joke. But in this case, your
advertisement is a deliberate lie since a friend of mine who also sent the
coupon got the same result.
I think its a shame to promise an economical lighter when in fact you are
not selling a lighter a1 all. Instead of saying it works quickly, you should
admit that you are offering matches. And what about "only" £2: I usually pay 10
pennies for a box of matches, and they are often given away free.
I regard your advertisement as a serious deception and demand that you send
me my money back immediately. Otherwise I will take active steps to make sure
the Consumers Association hear about it.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Li
篇20:英文考试口语自我介绍
全文共 820 字
+ 加入清单I am. ________. I was born in ________. I graduate from ________ senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. Thats why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.
In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short-term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.
I think language is very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.