my favourite animals英语作文带翻译推荐20篇

Health, from our point of view is how common a word. But on the inside of the meaning is not so simple. Life down is a blank sheet of paper is written to draw after waiting for you to go to.

Is people will grow, grow up, the white paper will write many words, is that your story of growing up, but these things are healthy? There are a variety of health, mental health, mental health, family health...

I am a healthy girl, I love life, I like to looking for more happy in the happiness. Is probably influenced by mom and dad, my mom and dad are teachers, they use a unique approach to education me, they like to help others, love to laugh, can enjoy life, will give students in class. They are not asked me what, as long as Im happy, healthy, they would like to eat the honey is sweet, now grown up, have the initiative. They support me in various aspects, I grow up happily and in a healthy family.

Some single parent families children, only one love their parents, some of these children will grow when not language, some will want to worry all day. Such unhealthy phenomenon is psychology, such children should be more concerned about them, let them feel the socialism the warm family, let they never health to health.

Health is of tens of thousands of eager to get, but who can really understand the meaning? We want to do in this warm family of socialism a healthy person.

健康，在我们看来是多么平常的一个词语。但里面所含有的意思却不是那么简单。人生下来就是一张白纸，是要等你以后去写去画。

人是会成长，会长大的，白色的纸上会写有许多字，那是你成长的故事，但这些事是否健康呢?其实健康有很多种，心理健康，思想健康，家庭健康……

我是一个健康的女孩，我热爱生活，我喜欢在快乐中寻找更快乐的事。大概是受到爸爸妈妈的影响，我的爸爸妈妈都是老师，他们用独特的方法来教育我，他们喜欢帮助别人，爱笑，会享受生活，会用心给学生上课。他们并不要求我什么，只要我开心、健康，他们就会象吃了蜜似的甜，现在长大了，有了进取心。他们在各方面支持我，我在一个健康的家庭里快乐地成长着。

有一些单亲家庭的孩子，只能得到父母中一个人的爱，这些孩子有的会长时不语，有的会整天想心事。象这样的现象就是心理不健康，这样的孩子，应该要多关心他们，让他们感觉到社会主义这温暖的大家庭，让他们从不健康变为健康。

健康是成千上万都渴望得到的，但又有谁能真正明白其中的意思呢?我们要在这温暖的社会主义大家庭中做一个健康的人。

My best friend is WangMing. He is 12 years-old.He always play jokes

with me.I like to stay with him.It is because he can help me all the time. When

I find him say that I am sad or happy,he always listen to me and he is very kind

to me.He is very clever.He always help with my homeworks.If I have a worry and

dont know how to do he could help me.He can be a friend with

everyone

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我最好的朋友是王明。他是12岁。他总是与我玩笑。我喜欢和他呆在一起。那是因为他能帮助我。当我发现他说我悲伤或快乐,他总是听我的,他对我很好。他是非常聪明的。他总是帮助我的家庭作业。如果我有一个担心,不知道如何去做,他可以帮助我。他可以和大家做朋友。

Weekends to people mean that people can have two days‘ rest. They can go out or get together at home.

Everybody spends weekends in his own way. Some people relax themselves by listening to music, reading in libraries or doing sports outdoors. In a word, different people have different relaxations.

I often spend weekends with my family. Sometimes my parents take me to visit our relatives. Sometimes we go swimming or go dancing and sometimes I go to read some instructive books. I often enjoy myself at weekends.

周末对人们而言意味着可以有两天的休息时间，他们能够外出或在家聚会。

每个人都以自己的方式过周末。有的人通过听音乐、到图书馆读书或在户外运动来放松自己。总之，不同的人有不同的放松方式。

我常与家人共度周末。有时我父母带我去走访亲戚，有时我们去游泳或去跳舞，有时我们去看一些有益的书。我常常在周末过得很愉快。

[周末的英语作文附翻译

The puppy home, many grow very cute, round head has a pair of long big, hairy ears, it can hear the sound of distant tiny; A pair of big eyes sparkled like a pair of black stones, the golden hair soft and fine fan, its tail often like a broom, and he is very cute.

It likes to sleep, when we are not at home, it is always a man lying on the sofa asleep, and when we come back its spirits. All right, it also like to bite. Remember once, I in the ball, great aim at time, quickly, bite into, snatch my ball, diao back to its nest, with its claws hold tightly, afraid to let me take away; If one day my socks are missing, there must be many away again; Even my toy is always not immune, it dont change this bad habit of always.

But it is also very smart, attractive. Every time I come home from school, so I always a lot, my legs tightly around, say what also dont loosen. Also kept licking my hand and bite my skirts, Ill dog hair all over.

A lot of the most lovely characteristics which is able to examine yan guan is lubricious.

When I am angry, carefully, it always stay in my side, or lie on my feet, as if to comfort me.

When I am angry, it immediately shrewdly drilling under the table, hide yourself, prevent angry at it.

When I am sad, it is sensitive to come and use it to rub your body, or gently lick your hand, let me feel hospitable, as if my bosom friend.

When I am happy, it is presumptuous to jump on the sofa, amuse me...

You said my family a lot of cute?

我家的小狗多多长得十分可爱，圆乎乎的脑袋上有一对长长的、毛茸茸的大耳朵，它能听到远处极细小的声音;一双水灵灵的大眼睛象一对黑宝石一样闪闪发亮，金黄色的毛柔软细迷，它的尾巴像一把扫帚经常扫来扫去，十分活泼可爱。

它喜欢睡觉，当我们不在家的时候，它总是一个人躺在沙发上呼呼大睡，当我们回来了它就精神大振。没事时，它还喜欢咬东西。记得有一次，我在拍皮球，多多瞄准时机，迅速扑过来，一口咬住，把我的皮球抢走，叼回它的窝里，用爪子紧紧按住，生怕我来夺走;如果有一天我的袜子不见了，准是多多又叼走了;甚至我的玩具也时时不能幸免，它的这个坏毛病总也改不了。

但它也十分聪明，讨人喜欢。每次我放学回家，多多总是老远就扑过来，把我的腿紧紧抱住，说什么也不松开。还不停地舔我的手，咬我的衣角，弄得我满身都是狗毛。

多多最可爱的特点就是能察颜观色。

当我生气时，它总是小心翼翼地依偎在我身边，或躺在我的脚丫上，好象安慰我似得。

当我发怒时，它马上机灵地钻进桌子下面，把自已藏起来，防止迁怒于它。

当我伤心时，它又善解人意地过来用它的身子来蹭你，或温柔地舔你的手，让我倍感亲切，好似我的知音。

当我高兴时，它又放肆地在沙发上跳来跳去，逗我开心……

你说我家的多多可爱吗?

I like riding bicycle

Today,I rode bicycle to travel around the Guilin central.I enjoy the

scenery while riding bicycle.The scenery of Guilin was so beautiful that I

couldnt help to take photos,which finally cause my cellphone lacked of

memory.Riding bicycle is not only helps me to keep fit，it also a good way for me

to travel and enjoy scenery.I like riding bicycle.

参考翻译

我喜欢骑自行车

今天，我骑自行车游玩桂林市区。我一边骑车一边欣赏风景。桂林的风景真的很美丽，让我忍不住拍照，结果导致我手机内存不足。骑车不仅帮助我保持身体健康，对我来说也是可以用于游玩和欣赏风景的好方式。

A new year has come.

In order to have a fruitful year, I make a plan for it. Firstly, I must study hard as much as possible. After all, study is the most important for me. Secondly, I will take more exercises. I always got illness last year. Therefore, I must be healthy this year. Thirdly, I want to learn swim this year. I like swimming very much, because I think it’s cool.

I hope I can do it. Finally, I hope happiness is fully filled my home in the new year.

新的一年已经到来。

为了有一个丰硕的一年,我制定一个计划。首先,我必须努力学习尽可能多的。毕竟,学习对我来说是最重要的。其次,我需要更多的练习。去年我总是得到疾病。因此,今年我必须健康。第三,今年我想学习游泳。我非常喜欢游泳,因为我认为它很酷。

我希望我能做到。最后,我希望在新的一年里幸福是完全充满了我的家。

乡村游记(A TRIP TO the COUNTRY)

One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.

While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful).

When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.

有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。

当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲，风景实十分美丽。

当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。

Do you know how my day was spent?

I get up at half past six every morning. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. At this time, my grandma made breakfast for me. After I had finished my meal, I went to school with my bag on my back.

Usually, I go to school by bus. There are a lot of cars to get to our school. However, I like to take the eight bus to go to school. Because the eight way station is close to my home, it is very close to the school.

We have seven classes every day, four in the morning and three in the afternoon. I have lunch at home.

We have Chinese, maths, English, science, sports, art, music and computer. I like every class. So, my study is very good.

We go home at half past five in the afternoon. This is my happiest moment. After I have finished my homework, I can play happily.

Every night, I read a story book and english. Then go to bed.

This is my day. Every day, I am very happy.

你知道我的一天怎样度过的吗？

我每天早上六点半起床。然后，我刷牙洗脸。这时候，奶奶为我做好了早饭。我吃完饭后，就背着书包去上学了。

通常，我上学乘公交车。有很多车可以到达我们学校。但是，我喜欢乘坐八路车上学。因为八路车站离我家很近，离学校也很近。

我们每天有七节课，早上四节，下午三节。我在家吃午饭。

我们有语文课、数学课、英语课、科学课、体育课、艺术课、音乐课、计算机课。我喜欢每一门课。所以，我的学习很好。

下午我们五点半回家。这是我最快乐的时刻。我写完家庭作业后，就可以高兴地玩了。

每天晚上，我还要读故事书和英语。然后，上床睡觉。

这就是我的一天。每天，我都很快乐。

[英语作文翻译我的一天 my day

Today is the Mid Autumn Festival, the street has a thick festive atmosphere. There are many varieties of moon cakes in the supermarket! People choose their favorite flavor.

At night, the sky fireworks four. There are a lot of lamp of heaven, like a shining star. The moon hid in the clouds like a shy girl. The whole family was sitting on the balcony looking forward to the moon to come out and have a snack......

Come on the moon! Today is your holiday!

今天是中秋节，街上有浓浓的节日气氛。超市里的月饼品种真多呀!人们在挑选自己喜欢的口味。

晚上，天空中礼花四起。天上有很多许愿灯，就象一颗颗闪闪发光的星星。月亮躲在乌云中就象害羞的小姑娘。我们全家人坐在阳台上盼着月亮快点出来吃点心……

月亮快来吧!今天可是你的节日噢!

My family has a father, mother, grandfather, grandmother, and my family.

My father is a humorous dad, he would often make everyone laugh, speak some jokes to me, sometimes joke some fallacies, mother will said Dad, what did you teach your daughter, daughter are bad. Dad said nothing, not. In fact, he is very concerned about me.

My mother is a good mother, is not "free" at home what are not the wife. Eleven hard-working and beautiful wife and mother, mother often give us to do good, that smell, taste really called the people saliva. Say, now eat. My grandfather is a hard-working grandfather, grandfather every day very early, every time we get up, Grandpa back to the ground clean, clean up, the rice is cooked, but also to the field to turn back.

My grandmother is a frugal grandmother, grandmother if you see good-looking clothes, she will look at the store for a long time, the way to see the clothes in the eyes, go home to buy a cloth to do one, you do not say that, compared to buy a little also not bad, but a lot cheaper. Although the beauty of her grandmother, but very frugal, but also often education I do not spend money. To use on the blade.

This is my family.

我的家庭有爸爸，妈妈，外公，外婆，还有我这个大家庭组成。

我的爸爸是一个幽默的爸爸，他时常会把大家逗笑，讲一些笑话给我听，有时笑话有一些歪理，妈妈就会说爸爸，你怎么教女儿的，女儿都学坏了。爸爸却说没事，不会的。其实他是非常关心我的。

我的妈妈是一个贤惠的妈妈，不是“闲”在家里什么都不会的妻子。十一勤劳又美丽的妻子和妈妈，妈妈时常会给我们做好吃的，那个香味，味道真叫人流口水。说起来，现在就想吃了。我的外公是一个勤劳的外公，外公每天都起的很早，每当我们才起床，外公早把地扫干净了，拖干净了，饭煮好了，还到田里转了一圈回来了呢。

我的外婆是一个节俭的外婆，外婆要是看见好看的衣服，她会在商店看很久，把衣服的样子看在眼里，回家就自己买布做一件，你还别说，比买的一点也不差，却便宜了很多。外婆虽然爱美，却很节俭，也经常教育我不要乱花钱。要用在刀刃上。

这就是我的家庭。

[我的家庭英语作文及翻译

快乐的寒假到了，为了能过一个既快乐又有意义的寒假。这次，我计划先把作业搞定。每天完成10页的《寒假乐园》，还要安排一篇日记，练一小时的钢琴。

Happy winter vacation arrived, in order to be able to live a happy and meaningful winter vacation. This time, I plan to do my homework first. Finish 10 pages of "winter vacation" every day, and also arrange a diary to practice the piano for an hour.

作业做完了，我这个“书虫”终于能狂啃书了!我最喜欢啃柔萱写的《好玩数学博客》，在这本书中学到了让人意想不到的数学小知识，享受玩中学的快乐。我认识《今年你七岁》中调皮可爱的刘一波，从辫子姐姐写的《当时年纪实在小》我感受到她童年时代的快乐与悲伤，知道了《皮皮鲁遥控老师》的奇妙故事……狂啃书的滋味真好啊!

I have finished my homework, I was finally able to this "bookworm" mad kenshu! I love eating soft Xuan wrote "fun math blog", in this book to the mathematical knowledge of the unexpected, enjoy playing happy middle school. I know Liu Yibo, seven years old, who is very naughty and cute. From the braid elder sister wrote "at that age is very small", I feel the joy and sorrow of her childhood. I know the wonderful story of Pipiru remote control teacher. Its good to be crazy about books!

大年28，我回到了老家——马山。现在我可以狂吃狂喝狂玩狂乐了。我吃奶奶给我准备的香喷喷、黄澄澄的鸡腿，绿油油、白嫩嫩的蔬菜……喝的是甜滋滋，爽歪歪的橙汁。各种色香味俱全的美味佳肴。看着这些好吃的，我真想一口吃成个大胖子，吃完以后，我就挺着“将军肚”找小朋友玩。我们在沙堆上放火箭炮，只听“吱”的一声，火箭炮如离弦之箭一般直冲天空，“砰”的一声爆炸了!只见几张纸片缓缓地从空中漂落下来。后来我们放了威力最强的彩雷王，我把它点燃，放进纸管里，纸管被炸得面目全非。你看，我多开心呀!

In the year 28, I returned to my hometown, Mashan. Now I can be crazy, crazy, crazy, and crazy. My grandma gave me to eat delicious chicken, yellow, green, tender vegetables...... The drink is sweet, Shuangwai Orange Juice. All kinds of delicacies that are full of color and fragrance. Look at these delicious, I really want to eat into a big fat, eating, Im a "General belly" looking for friends to play. We put the Rockets in the sand, just listen to "squeak" sound, rocket like an arrow into the sky, a "bang" explosion! I saw a few pieces slowly from the sky fall down. Then we put the most powerful color of this, I lit it into the paper tube, paper tube was bombed out. You see, how happy I am!

嘿嘿，这样的寒假真是快乐啊!

Hey hey, such a winter vacation is really happy ah!

Hello,every one!（大家好）My name is **** . （我叫****）

Im a 15 years old girl. （我是一个15岁的女孩）（具体情况自己改）

I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）

Im an active ,lovely and clever girl.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的女孩）

In the school , my favourite subject is maths . （在学校，我最喜欢数学）

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学）

But I like it.（但我喜欢他）

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）

I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. （像跑步、排球等等）

If you need help ,please come to me .（如果你需要帮助，就来找我）

I hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友）

Im very happy to be this winter holiday, because you can get a lot of pocket money. But very boring, because cant in my classmate chat, is really boring.

Im very happy winter vacation, you can buy my favorite clothes, trousers, shoes and I love to play with toys, and can go back to my grandmas, to travel, and go to the He Lan anping castle of the building, three hundred years ago in tainan anping road, please appreciate a lot. Now I will introduce the sites is anping castle, right in the middle have to visit the place. Have a 7th floor tower, the top we could see the beautiful scenery, there are a lot of old cannons, took a photograph. Anping old is a very good place.

Bored, Ill write winter vacation homework, or playing computer, and watching TV. My winter vacation homework pages and pages of writing and also checked for her mother, and looking forward to quick opening day of school.

我这次的寒假非常开心，因为可以领到很多的零用钱。但是又非常无聊，因为无法跟班上同学聊天，真是无聊极了。

我非常开心的寒假，可以买到我喜欢的衣服，裤子，鞋子还有我最爱玩的玩具，又可以回去外婆家，去旅行，还有去看三百年前何兰建筑的安平古堡，就在台南市安平路，请大家多多欣赏。现在我要介绍的古迹就是安平古堡，有参观的地方就在正中央。有一个七楼的塔，那座顶端可以看到美丽的美景，那里有很多以前的炮，还照了一张相。安平古保是非常好的地方。

无聊的时候，我会写着寒假功课，或打电脑，还有看着电视。我的寒假作业一页又一页的写完毕，也给妈妈检查过了，而且每天盼望着快开学快开学。

This morning, mum wakes me up, I can jump three feet high, because today to see the New Years gala!

As soon as I came into the classroom, I was happy. Us A breakfast, began on New Years gala, dong the teacher gave us put animation, ready to have A, B, C, D this several options, dong teacher with the most commonly used method, statistics, to see the put the cartoons, my deskmate and I choose B, finally, the end, choose B students the most, but xue teacher say: "lets open gala!" We all agree!

On New Years gala is started, in the beginning, seo to give us the first performance, gore silk, two song, the song is "lotus pond moonlight", the other piece is a "golden peacock gently jump" I heard can become fascinated, if mother also quote me a hulus interest class, that it would be good!

Letter of the second program is the gong of our class, give us the English song performances, rainbow, although very simple, but she sings very rhythmic, have feelings!

Next, are not a one-man show, xue the teacher gave us put music, some dance Latin, some jump of the most popular jiangnan Style in our class.

Although, on New Years gala is very short, but Im still very happy!

今天早上，妈妈一叫我起床，我就一蹦三尺高，因为今天要看元旦联欢晚会了!

我一进教室，就很开心。我们一吃完早饭，就开始了元旦联欢晚会，董老师准备给我们放动画片，有A、B、C、D这几种选择，董老师用了最常用的办法——统计，来看该放那个动画片，我和我的同桌都选的B，最后，统计结束，选B的同学最多，但薛老师说：“我们先开联欢晚会吧!”我们都同意了!

元旦联欢晚会要开始了，一开始，徐浩 给我们表演了第一个节目——吹葫芦丝，有两首曲子，一首是“荷塘月色”，另外一首是“金孔雀轻轻跳”我听得可入迷了，要是妈妈也给我报一个葫芦丝兴趣班，那该多好啊!

第二个节目是我们班的龚 涵，给我们表演的英文歌——彩虹，虽然很简单，她却唱得很有节奏，很有感情!

接下来，可就不是单人表演了，薛老师给我们放了音乐，有的跳拉丁，有的就跳我们班最火的江南Style。

虽然，元旦联欢晚会很短，但我还是很开心!

With the development of economic,people now living a better life.But at the same time,many of the earths animals have already died out.

Nowdays,more and more animals lost their homes and they have no choice but to face the sorrow of missing relatives and friends.What makes it comes about?What makes their living condition even worse?The answer is human!Some people cut down plenty of trees to make fortunes,which damaged the forest and made the animals lost their home.And there are also some greedy people even hunt for animals to make money,which lead a terrible result--a number of animals are in danger.

Each anmimal especially wildlife is our friend,they play an important role in ecological balance.So,lets take action,planting trees,buliding birdhouses and so on to pretect our earth.

随着经济的发展,人们现在过着更好的生活。但与此同时,地球上的很多动物已经灭绝了。

现在,越来越多的动物失去了家园,他们别无选择,只能面对失踪亲友的悲痛。它是什么?是什么让他们的生活条件更糟糕吗?答案是人类!有些人砍伐大量的树木让财富,破坏了森林,使动物失去了他们的家园。甚至还有一些贪婪的人寻找动物赚钱,导致一个可怕的结果,许多动物都处于危险之中。

主义每个动物特别是野生动物是我们的朋友,他们在生态平衡发挥重要作用。让我们采取行动,种植树木,建筑物的鸟屋等等来保护我们的地球。

There is no doubt that we should never go out there to see what happens; instead, we should take actions to make things happen. A telling example is Youyou Tu. She and her colleagues made 380 extracts from 2,00 herbs before they finally succeeded in discovering the pure substance qinghaosu, which can be used to treat malaria. As we all know, there were numerous scientists who wanted to find this substance, but it was her firm actions that made her the first Chinese Nobel laureate in medicine.

Why?Reasons are quite simple and can be listed as follows. To begin with, only by taking actions can we find the best way to solve those problems we are facing, but as a bystander, we can learn nothing meaningful. In addition, in an age full of ruthless and relentless competitions, without taking actions to make things happen, we are bound to lose those valuable opportunities. For instance, if Apple had just gone out there to see what happens in mobile phones, it could not have presented the amazing product, iPhone, to us.

Accordingly, we college students should not just be a watcher but a doer. In my humble opinion, we can start from applying what we have learned into practice.

毫无疑问,我们永远不应该走出去看看发生了什么;相反,我们应该采取行动让事情发生。一个生动的例子就是由你。她和她的同事做了380提取物2 00草药才终于发现了纯物质青蒿素,可用于治疗疟疾。我们都知道,有很多的科学家们想找到这种物质,但这是她公司的行为,让她第一个中国医学诺贝尔奖得主。

为什么?原因很简单,可以列出如下。首先,只有采取行动才能找到最好的方法解决我们面临这些问题,但作为一个旁观者,我们可以学到什么有意义的事情。此外,在一个充满残酷和无情的竞争时代,没有采取行动让事情发生,我们注定要失去这宝贵的机会。例如,如果苹果刚刚在手机看看会发生什么,它不可能呈现惊人的产品,iPhone,给我们。

因此,我们大学生不应该只是一个观察者,但一个实干家。依我拙见,我们可以从应用所学付诸实践。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

一、Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

to introduce myself(介绍我自己) hello,every one!(大家好)my name is **** . (我叫****) im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改) i live in the beautiful city of rizhao.(我住在美丽的rizhao城)(你可以把rizhao

改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩) in the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在学校，我最喜欢数学) perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

but i like it.(但我喜欢他)i belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件

事付出努力就会有害结果)

i also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动) such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)im kind-hearted.(我很热心)i hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友) ok.this is me .a sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩) 首先要看你写信的性质。是官方而正式的书信?还是朋友间的通信? 无论是哪一种，基本的英文书信格式应包括四大部分：日期，称呼，正文，和落款

In my heart, my father is a great man, he wakes up early and goes to work,

in the event, he goes home late. He is working so hard, all he does is for the

family and to support my education. Once I ask him if he is tired, he smiles and

says that I am his sweet burden. I feel so moved, his love for me is so

deep.

在我心里，我的爸爸是个伟大的人，他很早就起来上班，在晚上，他很晚才回家。他一直都很努力工作，他所做的一切都是为了家庭和支持我的教育。曾经我问他是否感到很累，他对我微笑，说我是他甜蜜的负担。我很感动，他对我的爱是如此的深。

The conception of money is different for the old and the young. The old

generation believes that money should be saved in case of the urgent situation,

while most young people think that money should be spent to realize its value.

When I was struggled about the different opinions, I saw the news report about a

man got back his money that he saved in the early 1990s, which was about 1000

RMB. People made their comment that this amount of money meant so much at that

time, which could buy a nice big house, while today it was just a big meal in

the restaurant. This news inspired me to make reasonable plan of money. The old

way to treat money is not suitable, because money will lose its value as time

goes by. I choose to spend part of money while saving another part of it.

老人和年轻人对于钱的概念是不一样的。老一代认为钱应该存起来，以防紧急需要，然而大多数年轻人认为，钱花出去才能实现它的价值。在我纠结这两个不同观点时，我看见了一则新闻报道，是关于一个人拿出了他在19世纪20年代存的钱，大约1000元人民币。有人说这钱在当时就是一大笔钱，可以买一栋漂亮的大房子了，但是现在只能在餐馆大吃一顿。这个消息激发了我要合理规划金钱的想法。老一辈对待金钱的方式是不对的，因为钱随着时间的流逝价值也会贬值。我会选择花一部分、存一部分。