英语作文寒假趣事带翻译(精品20篇)

寒假到了，我欣喜若狂，因为马上就要过年了。正所谓“千门万户曈曈日，总把新桃换旧符。”在这举国欢庆的时刻我怎么能不高兴呢？当然过年也会发生许多趣事。

初三的时候，我闲来无事。便翻翻家里有什么好玩的。忽然我看见妈妈用的化妆品，眼珠一转一个鬼点子出来了：不如我也学学李玉刚。

说罢，我找来一些大的衣服，又拿来一喝水彩笔和粉底。

一切准备就绪。我把爸爸的大衣服穿在身上，袖子抖一抖，很有一番唱京剧的韵味，再穿一个大肥裤子。服装算是大功告成了。

现在就差化妆了。我一说拿着镜子，一手拿着粉底往脸上抹。然后，我用黑色的笔在我双眼上都涂了“熊猫眼”；在用红色的笔把嘴唇涂了一下，用绿色的笔把眉毛涂了一下；又用棕色的笔涂了胡子，用紫色的涂了腮红。最后再用蓝色的笔，黄色的笔，灰色的笔，把没有涂的地方都涂起来。完工后，我咋一看吓了一大跳，我的脸就像欠人五百万没还，被人打得，青一块，紫一块。那家伙惊天地，泣鬼神！

正好，妈妈回来了，我就在她面前唱《新贵妃醉酒》：“爱恨就在一瞬间，举杯望月情似天，爱恨两茫茫，问君何时恋。”妈妈笑得上气不接下气：“你…你…是男的…还是女的…怎么又…画胡子…又涂口…口红。”我袖子一挥，回答道：“我可是纯爷们。”妈妈又笑得说不出话来。

这件事像一朵洁白的浪花，永远的飘在我记忆的长河里。

Fall is the third season of a year . There are three months in fall : July

, August and september . The weather in fall is cool , Sometimes it’s windy . I

can wear my jackets and jeans . I often fly kites and go hiking with my good

friends. And there are many fruits in fall , Just like : apples , bananas ,

oranges…… And the Mid Autuain Festival is in fall , too . So I like fall very

much.

秋天是一年中的第三个季节，秋天有三个月：七月，八月，九月。秋季天气凉爽，有时会刮风。我可以穿外套和牛仔裤，我经常去放风筝和我的好朋友去远足。而且秋天有很多水果，像：苹果，香蕉，橘子……同时中秋节也是在秋天。所以，我很喜欢秋天。

January 27 20XX

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the city center of Beijing. It was cold outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t nete into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted, we went to the 5-star restaurant to have lunch. The lunch cost us 800 yuan. Oh, dear! They were all very rich, and one was poor.

January 28 20XX

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare for the college entrance examination. It is the most important for us now.

January 29 20XX

I was bored. So I wanted to travel to Hong Kang. I told my father my decision. To my surprise, my father agreed. My father thought I always at home was bad. He thought I should go out to see our country clearly. How beautiful our country is! My father drove me a travel service. I filled out an application form. After that, the agency would finish every things. At last the agency told me it would take a week time to transact procedures.

January 30 20XX

The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.

January 31 20XX

The food in Shanghai disagree me. I think the food in Beijing is the most delicious. Seafood in Beijing is very fresh. Prawns in restaurant are all alive. And there are many food that you can’t see in other cities. It is very cheap that you eat seafood in Beijing. The less money you pay, the more enjoyable you are. Maybe my stomach is ill. Whatever food I eat, I am still thin. And I am too thin, I want to be a litter fatter. So I must eat more.

February 1 20XX

My dog will be dead. She is very old. We have kept her for ten years. Now her hairs are falling. And she always lies on the ground. She can’t see very clearly. She eats a little. She benetes thin. She was very strong before. She is still guarding my family. She is one of my family member. Now we are all uneasy because she will die. I think you may know my thinking. Even if it is a dog, you can’t forget it. So these days, we feet her the best food.

First day of losing weight

Today is the first day of my plan of losing weight.This morning , i drunk

only a cup of milk oatmeal as plan,and then i started to studied my english.when

it was 10：00 am, the inner man began to crave the nourishment, i couldnt

concentrate my attention to study， and there fried all kinds of delicious food

in my brain:hamburgers、dumplings、egg fried rice and omelette…… .After ten

minutes strugling，I couldnt help that anymore! I rushed to the kitchen, in

which then i ate whatever that was eatable!After that i finally gave up to lose

weight, thinking that im not that fat to need to go on a diet. Anyway, i should

continue to enjoy delicious food which i think is most beautiful thing in the

world.

参考翻译

减肥的第一天

今天是我减肥计划的第一天。今天早上，按照计划，我只喝了一杯牛奶燕麦，然后就去学习英语了。到了上午10点钟的时候，我的肚子开始咕咕叫想要吃东西了，我不能集中精神好好学习，满脑子飞过各种各样的美食：汉堡包、饺子、蛋炒饭、煎蛋……经过10分钟的挣扎，我终于忍不住了!我冲进厨房，把所有能吃的食物都吃了!吃完之后，想着自己其实并没有胖到要节食的地步，我最终决定放弃减肥。不过怎么样，我应该继续享受我所认为是世界上最美好的东西——美食。

寒假以来就是有做了。两份工作吧，其中一项是在自己的计划之中的，也就是去补习班里面教小孩子去见自己想见的人，然后去做自己想要做的事情，其实这整个过程还是蛮快乐的，虽然说也有因为这个当补习班的小老师的事情，然后流过眼泪啊，当然也流过汗了，但是呢，其实欢声笑语还是要多于这种辛苦的。所以整体来说，自我感觉就像一开始自己对自己这个补习班工作的评价一样，就是如果没有了这一份工作的话，那自己的寒假会更加暗淡一些的。

就毕竟自己也没有其他的活动啊，或者是去接触更多有趣的人，但是也正好是因为有这个机会让进去接触了更多有趣的小朋友，甚至是很优秀能够让自己特别钦佩的这些小朋友，当然他们也是有反逼我嘛，就是见到这么优秀了，他们自己会觉得自己应该是更加的努力一些，毕竟。作为那么年轻那么幼小的他们，他们的能力都已经可以说是超过我了，只不过就是接受了知识还没有那么广泛，所以他们的知识面会比自己攒一些都是，其实他们都是特别优秀的小孩子，就觉得其实还是蛮幸运，能够去认识这一群小朋友，但又觉得其实蛮悲哀的就是在这里同一层次的这些人呢，在自己同一个年龄段，然后自己认识的人中，并没有如他们这么优秀的人比较存在，那也是很幸运，就是自己也给自己创造了这个机会去碰见这些优秀的人吧。

然后这份工作的话，其实占有自己的时间也并不多，就相对来说是比较自由的，也就是去亲戚家里帮忙嘛，这样子其实每一天早上也是允许自己睡得很晚，就基本上也是中午的时候再起床，吃完饭然后再去上班，这样子也是比较轻松的，但是就这多少也是我打发了自己的时间嘛，但是在这个打发时间的过程中，也是有霸总的这也很多的空余时间的，虽然说有可能是自己没有去行动，从来没有让自己生活得更加积极一些，就早上可以不要睡得那么晚起床的对吧，但是就也是觉得假期就想着偷个懒吧，所以也是因此然后自己没有好好的读书，也没有好好的去写作业，以至于现在的作业都没有完成，现在假期就已经过了一大半了，但接下来的日子我想应该还是会积极奋斗起来的吧，毕竟就今天开始也是有行动起来的，就和弟弟一起去运动啊，然后也是有珍惜。一些每一段时间的。

今年的寒假发生了许多趣事。

“兄弟大战”就是其中一件趣事。

春节那天，我故意打烂了弟弟最心爱的杯子，弟弟哭着说：“你还我杯子。”说完，拿起玻璃碎片向我扔来，玻璃碎片“啪”的一声砸在墙上，还好我躲得快，不 然，后果肯定不堪设想。我早有准备，便将手中的“秘密武器”——橡皮擦扔向弟弟，扔中了，弟弟嚎啕大哭，可他还是不甘心，便想和我“贴身肉搏”。我匆匆忙 忙地拿来鸡毛掸子，准备进行“战斗”。

“ 弟弟战斗”开始了，握着拳头向我袭来，我拿着鸡毛掸子，“啪”地一声打在弟弟的屁股上，只好认输了。

这就是“兄弟大战”，有趣吧？

[关于寒假趣事的200字作文

The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy.

As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the

morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at

noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.

译文：终于放暑假了，应该好好歇歇了!可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了，帮妈妈洗碗，扫地，做饭等等，到了中午，我快累死了，往床上一躺，扇扇电风扇，舒服多了。

My best friend is WangMing. He is 12 years-old.He always play jokes

with me.I like to stay with him.It is because he can help me all the time. When

I find him say that I am sad or happy,he always listen to me and he is very kind

to me.He is very clever.He always help with my homeworks.If I have a worry and

dont know how to do he could help me.He can be a friend with

everyone

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我最好的朋友是王明。他是12岁。他总是与我玩笑。我喜欢和他呆在一起。那是因为他能帮助我。当我发现他说我悲伤或快乐,他总是听我的,他对我很好。他是非常聪明的。他总是帮助我的家庭作业。如果我有一个担心,不知道如何去做,他可以帮助我。他可以和大家做朋友。

May Day is coming. I?m so happy because my father and my mother take me to

WuQuan Park this holiday. In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers.

There are many children and many happy playing games, too.

My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears,

deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever

and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!

I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.

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五一节即将来临。我很开心,因为我的父亲和我的母亲带我去五圈公园这个节日。在公园里,我看到很多树和美丽的花朵。有许多孩子在快乐的玩游戏,。

我的父母带我去动物园。有狮子、老虎、鹰、熊、鹿、猴子等等。我最喜欢猴子,因为他们非常聪明，他们让我们开怀大笑。他们是多么可爱啊!

那天我玩得很开心，多么美好快乐的假日啊。

happy winter holiday I have got a happy winter holiday this year. In this year, I have a 7-day winter holiday. In the first day, I went back to my hometown with my parents. When I got there, I saw my grandparents. Then we had lunch together. At that time, we not only had dilicious food,we also talk about our wonderful life. We laughed and sang, it was so happy then. After lunch, I got out and found my old friends in the field. They were all taller and stronger than before. We sat down on the ground and talk about funny things. It was so interesting and fun. We also played some funny games. I have never play such a funny game since I leave my hometown for a big city. I was so happy that day.It was the happiest time in my holiday. And it was so funny.

雪花像绽放的礼花，在天地间肆意的飘洒，掩埋了这个寒假不多的阳光的温暖气息。蓦然，这个世界一片银白。

踏着一路风尘仆仆，终于回到了老家……

二十八雪祭

爷爷颤抖着擦亮火柴，轻轻点起了一卷纸钱。大家都不再说话，静静看着那三棵树。姥太的墓就在那三棵树下，此刻三棵树洁白得庄严。爷爷沉毅地跪在姥太的墓前，凝神地看着那三棵树。我们安静地烧着纸钱，摇落纸钱上晶莹的雪花。腊月二十八，祭祖的日子。爷爷扬了扬了袖口，抖落衣服上的雪，叹了口气，他轻轻地叩了几下，再和我们一同坐到树下，静静地烧起了纸钱，每年的今天我们都要陪着爷爷来祭奠姥太，爷爷像那三棵树一样老了，我们也不再吵闹，转头，看到爷爷的眼角滑过一大滴浑浊的泪，满树的雪花扑簌簌的落下。

二十九香火

我陪着奶奶去庙里进香，庙里香烟袅袅，形形色色的人穿梭往来，全都是刺鼻的香火味，呛得一片寂静，我默然地伫立在亏跪垫旁，看看看来来往往的善男信女，奶奶无比认真地跪下，双手合并，喃喃地祷告着，看着奶奶那虔诚的脸，我的心中生出一股感动，奶奶点燃了香火，干枯的双眸中闪烁出火光的润泽，她深深地鞠了三个躬，小心翼翼地把香插入香灰盆中，仿佛如释重负一般地长吁了一口气。，庙里的古钟响起了深沉的磬音，余音卷起了一缕又一缕腾起的烟气消失在空荡荡的天空，所有人的表情都是一样的虔诚，双目张望看一种远远的却无比美好的希冀，那对来年无比的期待似乎都寄托在这祈祷之中，十指合并，香火缭绕之中奶奶的脸盘如此安详。

三十年夜

天终于放了晴，雪花终也不干心的凋零，大年三十的烟花已绚烂了整过夜空，看着那一团团绽放在空中的花朵，啧啧称赞“快许出新年的愿望！”哥哥看着刹那间升空的焰火大声嚷嚷。大家都笑了，笑着看天空中变幻美丽的凤尾，那短暂却永恒的美丽，有如昙花一现令人无法忘怀，鞭炮拉出了一串串的吆喝，一点火星撕破了黑夜，“轰隆”一声 。 巨响，震耳欲聋却如此大快人心，大家捂着耳朵，笑容像烟花那样灿烂，在人们迫不及待的笑声中，仿佛一粒石子漾起了涟漪，最大的焰火点燃了！它盛开的奇葩是那么美丽，以至于人们无法言表心中的溢出的激动，彻夜，焰火照亮了除夕夜。

初一 ……

一如既往地，在人们的笑语中云淡风清。

寒假中永远在收获着，因为有对亲人的绵长的思念，有对未来幸福的憧憬，有焰火永恒的绚丽，这个寒假的意义变得令人回味许多，品出许多。

呀，寒假里的那些事儿，过往的美好，仍历历在目。

Yesterday, I decided to go outside for picnic, but unfortunately, it

suddenly rained.I felt very disappointed, but I knew one thing: next time, when

I decide to do something, I should pay attention to the weather

forecast.Finally, I had to change my mind, and I had to stay at home all day

watching TV and reading books.I like sunny days very much, and I dont like

rainy days any more. But I know if there are no rainy days, there will be a lack

of water, and I know it is very terrible if there is not enough water.But I

still like sunny days because I like sunshine very much.

昨天我决定去野炊，不幸的是突然下雨了，我感到很失望。但我知道了一件事，下次当我决定做什么的时候，应该留意一下天气预报。最后，我不得不改变我的主意。整天呆在家里看电视和书。我很喜欢晴天，一点也不喜欢下雨天。但是我知道如果不下雨的话，我们就没有水，那很糟。但我仍然喜欢晴天，因为我非常喜欢阳光。

Thurs. ,Feb. 7 Fine

2月7日 星期四 晴

Lucky money

红包

Im so happy today because I got RMB 3,000 in "Lucky Money. "Grandpa alone gave me RMB 1,000. I must try to save this for college though and not waste it. But I think Ill allow myself to use part of it to buy a new dress tomorrow and then Ill put the rest un the bank.

今天我很高兴，因为我拿了三千元的红包。 祖父一个人就给了我一千元。 我必须尽量存起来以后作上大学之用而不去花掉。 不过我想我会让自己明天用一部分钱去买一件新衣服，然后将其他的钱存到银行里去。

My winter holidays plans

My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every day. I will accomplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also , I may take the body exercise coming drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every day. I play with the once computer coming certainly may draw out one small Duan time , watch one meeting TV or. Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter holidays to plan!

我的寒假计划

我为了我的英语学习，我将努力学英语。坚持每天听半个小时的英语。我将以最快速度最好的完成老师布置的作业。我当然也不会忘记锻炼身体，我会在每天的时间中抽出30——1小时来锻炼身体。我当然会抽出一小段时间来玩一下电脑，或者看一会电视。当然只要1小时。这就是我的寒假计划！

[关于寒假计划的英语优秀作文

期盼已久的寒假开始了！我心里甭提有多高兴啊！可事与愿违，寒假第一天，家中冷冷清清，只剩我一人，简直是无聊透顶。突然一副墨镜吸引了我的眼球，我眼睛一转，计上心头：何不来个搞笑时装秀？

我爬进衣柜，一眼就看到了我家的“镇家之宝”——蓝色外套，这件蓝色外套可是一位外国友人在一次活动中送给我的。我迫不及待地一拽，“哗”的一声，衣服瞬间将我吞没。我好不容易地从“衣海”中钻出来，一眼望去，房间已是衣服的天地。我在“衣海”中寻寻觅觅，左右找不到我那“镇家之宝”。正当我想放弃时，蓦然回首，发现不远处有一个散发着金光的蓝色外套。真是踏破铁鞋无觅处，得来全不费工夫！我迫不及待地走了过去，迅速地把它穿在身上。

我再次潜入“衣海”，游入“大海”深处。一件红而帅气的披风映入我的眼帘，我将它收入囊中。回到“岸边”，大红短裤又吸引了我的眼球，我将大红短裤套在蓝色牛仔裤上，最后把红披风往脖子上一系。可是这完美的装备还缺点什么？对了，就是那帅气的“S”形标志。我连忙找到一张A4纸，手忙脚乱地画了一个大大的“S”往身上一贴。我赶紧跑到镜子面前一照——哈！简直是升级后的“超人”。嗯，我对自己的造型很满意。紧接着，我又投入下一轮的创意设计中……

“叮咚”，楼下的门铃响了。“糟了，爸妈回来了。”我以迅雷不及掩耳之势收拾好房间，以0.1秒跑回后房间安静地看书。可在我心里还会情不自禁地偷着乐呢！嘿嘿……

[寒假趣事小学生作文欣赏

Mingming came to my house today. We spent some time playing computer games.

We played basketball game online. I chose NBA and Mingming had to take CBA. Of

course, I won finally. We had a good time.

明明今天来我家。我们一起玩电脑游戏。我们打在线篮球游戏。我选NBA 球队，明明只能选CBA球队。当然，我赢了。我们玩的很开心。

寒假假期虽然短暂，但它却像一场精彩纷呈的电影。回想起那件最有趣的事情，至今忍让我忍俊不禁。

那天晚上，我们到平台上去放鞭炮，老爸神秘兮兮地拿出一个炮，轻轻点燃，鞭炮腾空跃起，如同一个小火箭猛地窜上了云霄，一眨眼就无影无踪了。过了一会儿，一颗流星乘坐着降落伞缓缓落下，宛如一位婀娜多姿的仙女从天而降，我们欢呼雀跃，手舞足蹈，为第一次放鞭炮成功而兴奋不已。

这时，老妈捧出了一个“大家伙”——孔明灯。听老妈说孔明灯又叫天灯，相传是三国时的诸葛孔明发明的。听了这话，我迫不及待地想马上就放，可这时，老妈又说：“现代人放孔明灯多作为祈福之用，男女老少亲手写下祝福的心愿，向往丰收成功，幸福年年。”这下才让我明白，于是老爸一边点着火，我一边握着拳头许愿，只见孔明灯一摇一晃地飞上了天空，我真担心它会从天上掉下来，可是它还满争气的，慢慢地飞上了天空。可就在这时，孔明灯突然停到了十五楼的阳台上，我心急得像热锅上的蚂蚁团团转，就在这时，一阵风吹来，孔明灯又渐渐地飞走了，这才把我心中的石头给落了下来。看到孔明灯像星星一样飞上了天，我心里别提有多高兴了！孔明灯带着我的祝愿和星星去做伴了……

寒假假期虽然过去了，可一件件趣事却带给我无穷的快乐，它不但使我增长了知识，开阔了视野，还使我许下了美好的心愿，我的寒假假期真快乐，真有趣！

A blackout

It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home. My father was writing a composition in the study room. My mother was interested in Shanghai opera. She was watching a Shanghai opera contest. The apartment was very quiet. Suddenly the light went out. It was a blackout优秀作文 专注写作 , but I liked it very much. It came and I didn’t have to do my homework. We went to the living room very slowly. After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa. It was a lucky, fortunate day. I said that let’s held a concert. My parents agreed with me. I took out some candles and lighted up. We were singing, laughing and talking. We had a really good time. But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on. Oh, my God. My father went back to his room went on writing. My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt very frustrated. I sat at the desk and thought I hated light. I hoped there would be a blackout the next day. I thought I would enjoy myself more and more. I went into a dream……

I went to watch the movie Wolf warriors 2 today

I went to watch the movie Wolf warriors 2 today as I heard it was a big hit

in China. I am not the biggest fan of WuJing(the director and leading role of

the movie), but this movie he direct really impressed me. I have watched Wolf

Warrior which I would consider as a good movie, but II is way much better. It is

the first Chinese movie that is built on the context of African country and

actually shot in South Africa, bearing the risk of suffering the disturbance on

the set. The way the plot unfolds and the courage and patriotism is delivered to

its audience makes it more than a simple action movie. Love this movie and will

go for it a second time!

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我今天去看了电影战狼2

当今天听到《战狼2》轰动了中国时，我就去看了这部电影。我不是吴京(这部电影的导演和主演)的死粉丝，但是他导演的这部战狼2真的令我印象深刻。我之前看过战狼，并且我认为这是不好电影，但是第二部简直是要好太多了。这是首部以非洲国家为背景的中国电影。整个剧组实际上冒着在片场遭遇动荡的风险在南非进行拍摄。情节的展开方式，以及片中体现出的勇气和爱国情怀都传递给了观众，这部电影不仅仅是一部简单的动作片。我爱这部电影，我决定将看第二遍!

I like the winter holiday very much.Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.   I can watch cartoon every day.I neednt go to school frepuently.Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time.I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.We had dinner together.   Its so lively that Iam very happy.liuxue But I still have to do my homework.During the holiday,I learned a lot.I love the winter holiday.

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。