关于读书的英语中考作文【精选20篇】

导语：每个人都来自不一样的地方，而这个地方就是家乡，你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.

我的家乡是个美丽的地方，它在乡村，由于它远离城市，因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈，我几乎能看到鱼，山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候，因为空气很清新，还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫，我喜欢听到他们的声音，听起来像在为我歌唱。而且，雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样，我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我，我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。

my secret dream

Everyone has his or her own secret dream. I wonder why I am gonna tell you my secret dream. No way! Heheh... I am gonna make up one secret dream for you. Any way, you will not copy everything I have written down. I am sure that you will get good ideas about writing it up.

When I was much younger, I had some secret dreams. One of mine was about becoming a super hero to save the world. Hehe. I hope it doesnt sound funny to you. Another secret dream of mine was about being the most handsome and intelligent man in the world.

Yeh, I know that sounds unrealistic. After all, that was a bubble dream only. I had a lot more secret dreams when I was a little boy. Some of them came true!

[中考英语优秀作文：我的秘密梦想

Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数８０左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_____________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Tom

好的句子运用得到可以为作文提高分值。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语励志名言，希望对你写作有帮助。

1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。

2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。

3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前， 决不放弃!

4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。

5、Never say die.永不气馁!

6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。

7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。

8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.

对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

11、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.

你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

12、Knowlegde can change your fate and English can accomplish your future.

知识改变命运，英语成就未来。

13、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

如果你想要成功，不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它，成功自然到来。

14、Jack of all trades and master of none.

门门精通，样样稀松。

15、Judge not from appearances.

人不可貌相，海不可斗量。

16、Justice has long arms.

天网恢恢，疏而不漏。

17、Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.

近朱者赤，近墨者黑。

18、Kill two birds with one stone.

一箭双雕。

19、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.

君王发狂，百姓遭殃。

20、Kings have long arms.

普天之下，莫非王土。

21、Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量。

21、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.

博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。

22、Learn and live.

活着，为了学习。

23、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.

好人越学越好，坏人越学越坏。

24、Learn not and know not.

不学无术。

25、Learn to walk before you run.

先学走，再学跑。

26、Let bygones be bygones.

过去的就让它过去吧。

27、Let sleeping dogs lie.

别惹麻烦。

28、Let the cat out of the bag.

泄漏天机。

29、Lies can never changes fact.

谎言终究是谎言。

30、Lies have short legs.

谎言站不长。

31、While there is life there is hope.一息若存，希望不灭。

32、I am a slow walker,but I never walk backwards.我走得很慢，但是我从来不会后退。

33、Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止，奋斗不息。

34、Never underestimate your power to change yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我的能力!

35、Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能!

36、Do what you say,say what you do.做你说过的，说你能做的。

37、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible ".凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

38、Live a noble and honest life. Reviving past times in your old age will help you to enjoy your life again.过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。

39、You have to believe in yourself . Thats the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。

40、If you fail, dont forget to learn your lesson.如果你失败了，千万别忘了汲取教训。

41、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

42、There is but one secret to sucess---never give up!成功只有一个秘诀--永不放弃!

43、For man is man and master of his fate.人就是人，是自己命运的主人。

44、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.没有了目的，生活便郁闷无光。

45、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。

46、Gods determine what youre going to be.人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。

As a student, we have study for many years. During there years, we study Chinese, English, science and so on. In this period, with the improvement of our knowledge, we not only read the books in class but also read extracurricular after school. In my opinion Dream of the red chamber is the best book I have read. In this book, the great author Cao xueqin his view about love. He had firmly faith in what is the true love and try to tell us that there are different kinds of love, only one kind which should be considered as True Love.

In a dream, and under mythical circumstances, the main character of the novel, Jia baoyu, met the Fairy Disenchantment in the Land of Illusions. She showed him three "registers" each containing the names and "the happenings in life" of 12 girls in his clan. Each girl represents a kind of love.

From the stories which are unfolding in the novel, the reader should know the characteristics of the different kinds of love, and should be able to distinguish True Love from the other kinds.

True love is acceptance, committal, mutual and without any post conditions. The love between Lin daiyu and Jia baoyu is considered to be True Love. Just saying or hearing I love you is not good enough because talk is cheap. Action in mutual commitment is essential, as we can see in the novel.

We always have dreams. What’s ours dream? Do you know what you exactly want? And do you work hard for it. In this book, you can taste the feeling of the author about his strong will. In his words, you can find the charm of Chinese. It is not a book, but a precious deposits. You can get a lot from it. But unfortunately, the novel was never "completed" to such a state. On the other hand, maybe, it is another kind of beauty of the book. If you have not read this book yet, just go and read it. You will love it.

作为一名学生,我们已经研究了许多年。年,期间我们学习语文、英语、科学等等。在这段时间,提高我们的知识,我们不仅在课堂上读的书也读课外放学后。在我看来红楼梦是我读过的最好的书。在这本书中,伟大的作者曹雪芹他对爱的看法。他坚定地相信什么是真爱,试图告诉我们,有各种不同的爱,只有一种应该被认为是真爱。

在梦里,在神秘的情况下,小说的主要人物,贾宝玉,遇到了仙女觉醒在幻想。她给他三个“寄存器”包含名称和“生活中的事件”的12个女孩在他的家族。每个女孩都代表一种爱。

的故事展开的小说,读者应该知道爱的不同的特点,并且应该能够区分从其他类型的真爱。

真正的爱是接受,承担义务,相互,没有任何条件。林黛玉和贾宝玉之间的爱是真爱。只是说或听我爱你不够好,因为言语是廉价的。行动共同承诺是至关重要的,因为我们可以看到小说中。

我们总是有梦想。我们的梦想是什么?你知道你到底想要什么?你努力工作。在这本书里,你可以品味的感觉作者对他的坚强的意志。用他的话说,你可以找到中国的魅力。这不是一本书,而是一个珍贵的存款。你可以得到很多。但不幸的是,这部小说从来没有“完成”这样一个状态。另一方面,也许,这是另一种美丽的书。如果你还没有读过这本书,就去读它。你会喜欢它。

俄国作家契诃夫有这样一个比喻“人要有三个头脑，天生的一个头脑，从读书中得到的一个头脑，从生活中得到的一个头脑”。天生的聪明才智固然重要，倘若只依靠天赋，后天不努力，恐怕也只会重蹈“伤仲永”的覆辙，所以汲取营养，必然要读书。书籍凝聚着前人的心血，是人类智慧的结晶，生活需要书籍，智慧需要书籍。不读书的人心灵好比一片荒漠，只有撒下知识的种子，它才能变成绿洲。 Russian writer Chekhov has such a metaphor "a man must have three minds, a natural mind, a mind obtained from reading, one obtained from life from lifemind".The natural wisdom is important. If you only rely on talent and do not work hard the day after tomorrow, I am afraid that you will only repeat the mistakes of "injury Zhongyong", so you must read nutrition.The book condenses the effort of the predecessors. It is the crystallization of human wisdom. Life needs books and wisdom needs books.People who do not read are like a desert. Only the seeds of knowledge can become an oasis.

面对书籍，莎士比亚曾说：“书籍是全世界的营养品，生活中没有书籍，就好像没有阳光;智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。”从此，西方文坛上站起了一个巨人，用毕生的精力铸就一部又一部著作。

面对书籍，东坡居士曾说：“发奋识遍天下字，立志读尽人间书。”从此中国文坛多了一分豪迈之风。

面对书籍，周恩来曾说“为中华之崛起而读书”。从此政界走出了一个杰出的领袖，用智慧和爱引领亿万人民走向幸福。

读书会弥补天然之不足，然而只读书不会读出大智慧，还要读生活，生活是一本大书，它蕴含了好多书本中没有的知识，这些都需要我们用心去读。

生活教会我们宽容。它可以化冲突为祥和，化干戈为玉帛，它是对别人最起码的尊重，若非宽容之心，前人怎会造出个弥勒佛来?那一副意味深长的对联“开口便笑，笑古笑今，凡事付之一笑;大肚能容，容天容地，于人何所不容”时刻告诫着后人要待人以宽。

生活教会我们淡泊。它不是力不能及的元素，也不是心满意足的自赏，更不是碌碌无为的哀叹。若非淡泊之心，又怎会有“非淡泊无以明志，非宁静无以致远”的修身养性;若非淡泊之心，又怎会有“斯是陋室，惟吾德馨”的安贫乐道;若非淡泊之心，又怎会有“不以物喜，不以已悲”的仁者之心。生活无时无刻不在警示我们学会淡泊。

生活教会我们拼搏。生活之路不是宽阔平坦的，有时穿过尘埃，有时横渡沼泽，有时行经丛林，不迎头搏击，决不能前进。若非拼搏之心，又怎会有《资本论》的问世;若非拼搏之心，又怎会有维也纳音乐厅那经久不息的掌声。生活用无声的语言告诉我们爱拼才会赢。

天生的头脑，加上读书获取的知识，再用心灵倾听生活，我们才会成为一个完整的人!

【模拟题目】阅读下面材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇600字左右的文章。文体自选。

材料一：莎士比亚说：书籍是全世界的营养品。生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光;智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。

材料二：一盏明灯，一方亮窗，从冬燃到春，从夏燃到秋。当太阳被月亮替代的时候，当空中淅沥淅沥下着小雨或纷纷扬扬飘着雪花的时候。。。。。。桌上，一本书，一截铅笔，还有纸上躺着的一首诗夜深了/我醒着/梦亮了。。。。。。

【思路导引】这道材料作文题，由一则名言和一个故事组成。虽然，语言表现形式有差异，但我们不难发现，这两则材料表达的意思是相同的：书是精神的营养品，我们热爱读书。

写好这篇作文，应该关注下面几点：

1、定意。

“材料一”给了我们主心骨，也就是主题：书籍是最好的营养品这是全文必须遵循的“基调”，否则是离题之作。

“材料二”是一则小故事，认真阅读，细细研究，就会发现，这则材料为我们设置了诗一般的意境，同时为我们拟定了比较大的写作空间。

首先，文章要写的事件应该是“读书”;第二，时间是一年四季，或早或晚，有白天有黑夜;第三是天气，无论是晴天还是雨天或是下雪，照样一如既往;第四 是对材料中诗句的理解：“夜深了”，说明时间之长，“我醒着”表示“我”还在读书，“梦亮了”蕴涵着“我”心中有远大的理想。

2、构思。

可以用“材料一”作为“纲”串起全文，或用“材料一”作结，升华文章主题。

可以用“材料二”恰当地渲染天气，烘托气氛，将“我”、“他(她)”读书的经历、表情、心态、收获等加以细致描述。

注意“材料二”中的一个规定：写“独坐窗前读书”的内容，如果写其他范围的读书是不行的，如果谈书的作用、种类，就更偏离了命题的意图。

3、拟题

标题的好坏，对一篇文章的优劣起着至关重要的作用。不落俗套，散发着美丽馨香的标题自然会引起评卷人对文章的好感。如何给材料作文拟一个好标题呢?首 先要有紧扣材料的关键字眼，保证标题正确无误;其次，要善于运用修辞手法，让其形象、生动。第三，要富有诗意，体现一定的文化底蕴;第四，要敢于想象，让标题插上放飞的翅膀。

导语：读书可以教会我们很多道理，你喜欢读书吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I m free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I ve put my heart into it so that I ll forget all the troubles. It s in this way that I ve formed the habit of reading in any time.

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, and essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

Reading The Emperor s New Clothes , I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. The Little Match Girl couldn t keep me from crying for her misery. Robinson Crusoe took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller s patience and perseverance Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn t before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

I ll never forget this famous saying, Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.

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当我空闲或遇到麻烦时，我总是拿出一本书静静地读。在任何时候，我都把我的心，使我会忘记所有的麻烦。就是这样，我养成了随时阅读的习惯。

小的时候，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我被他们震惊了。我一进中学就开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们那里得到很多。渐渐地，我对文学产生了浓厚的兴趣，上学期我在浙江省中学生作文比赛中获得一等奖。

读皇帝的新衣，我不得不对他的傻瓜发出一阵笑声。卖火柴的小女孩无法阻止我为她的不幸哭泣。鲁滨孙漂流记把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生世界。海伦·凯勒的耐心和毅力给我留下了深刻的印象，除此之外，书籍还告诉我其他的事情：如何成为一个男人，如何分辨是非。总之，好书能让我知道我以前没有做过什么。所以我认为一本好书是我最好的朋友。

我永远不会忘记这句名言：好书是最好的朋友，永不放弃。

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

twenty-five hundred years ago life in china was very hard. most of the people were hopelessly poor. into these times one of china’s great leaders was born. he was confucius. confucius came from a noble family, but his parents were poor. his father died when confucius was only three years old. the boy was a good and obedient son to his mother.

he grew up to be quiet, thoughtful, and studious. as confucius watched the people around him, he became eager to help them. at last he left his family and started out his students to be honest and kind, and to honor their parents. he taught them that a good man never lets himself get angry. many of his savings were gathered together and written down. one of his famous savings is “do not do to others what you do not wish others to do to you. “ for years he wandered from province to province spreading his ideas to all who would listen to him.

Recently,I have just finished reading a famous novel written by Margaret mitchell—“Gone with the Wind”,which is one of the most popular works among American novels.It took the auther about 10 years to finish this great novel,the only novel in her life. The story happened during the Civil War eve.Scarlett OHara,a 16-year-old girl,who was living in Tala manor in Georgia,was loving her neighbor Ashley Wilkes.However,after the war have broken out, Ashley Wilkes married his yonger cousin Melanie. Scarlett was so angry that she decided to marry a man she didn?t really love---- Charles Hamilton.Not long after that, Charles Hamilton joined the Army and died of illness in the war.So Scarlett had to act as a widow.Afterwards,at a donating dance party,Scarlett is acquainted with a captain named Rhett Butler. Then the flames of war approached Atlanta.Everyone was busy leaving away from the war.Scarlett managed to escape from Atlanta with the help of captain Rhett.Having come back to Tala manor,Scarlett made up her mind to rally her homeland at any cost when she saw that the former manor had been ruined.Later,her second husband died in the fight,she was a widow again.Durling that time, Rhett had been loving Scarlett sincerely and warmly.Seeing that Rhett could help her rally the manor,Scarlett married

him.Although Rhett had similar characteristic attracting her,Scarlett still loved Ashley.Later,their only daughter died accidently,Rhett left Scarlett sorrowly.And then Scarlett realized that Rhett was the only one who could fall in love with her.

The novel takes the US Civil War as the background.It takes Scarlett?s individual activity as the thread.The book show us a tragic love story .A couple who could have a perfect future,but finnally go in opposite direction.As a matter of fact,their charactristics have decided their tragic result inevitably.We feel sorry about the end because we are looking forward to a perfect end,just like Scarlett and Rhett.In fact,ferfect is always a excessive damand.

I affirm Rhett.He brings excitement to Scarlett?s life and encourages her impulse to change and succeed.Like Scarlett,he goes after what he wants and refuses to take ?no? for an answer.He is humorous,intelligent and cynical with a hint of treason.He is really a respectable man.I think he finnally left because of love .Otherwise,he couldn?t have gone without hesitation.

Ashley Wilkes is the foil to Rhett?s dark, realistic opportunism.If there was no Civil War,he is surely a nobility of grace and charm.But history cannot be changed.He bocame a victim of the war.His era was gone with the defeat of the war.At the same time,we cannot deny the

fact that he had a chear understanding about reality,which just contribute to his tragedy.

In this book,what I appreciate most is not Melanie?skindness or Rheet?s dedication and patience,but Scarlett?s courage to throw her long-standing morality and tradition whe faced with diffiiculties.At the beginning of the war,she didn?t care about this.In her world are endless dinner parties and dance parties.In her body are her father?s brave Irish blood and her mother?s noble French pure blood.She had a vast farm as her home.She had hundreds of slaves.This is Scarlett.,a member of noblity,proud and different.However,the war changed everything.Her mother died of illness.Her father become silent and the farm was nearly deserted.Even food became a big problem.All the pressure was put on Scarlett?s shoulder.She must feed a family of 9 people in it.What a big difference of level.If all this happened to someone else,he or she may choose to escape.On the contrary,Scarlett choose to face the change of life bravely.How can we not admire her courage of to change herself.Life is like a mountain.The road can?t be completely smooth.When we fall down from the peak,we may get hert ,we may get disappointed,we may feel despair.But if you want to survive,you must stand up to face it.

It is obvious that is really a good book,even if a long time has passed away,it is still suitable for today?s

society.It is of great importance to change ourselves,change our value even our thoughts when our life chages.

On the other hand,I think there is no real perfect in the world.Everybody has his shortcomings.It is necessary for us to learn to forgive others? faults.If we keep good-tempered,Ibelieve there will be more comedy and less tragedy.

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

书是一位朋友或是一位老师，他能让你获得许许多多的知识，有时还能让你从不开心变到开怀大笑。我在小时候一点也不喜欢读书，觉得这是一件无聊的事情，爸爸妈妈害怕我不读书，给我订阅了许多的书，可我连摸都不想摸，有一次，我玩得不想玩了，便随手拿了一本图画书，让外婆教我读。 The book is a friend or a teacher. He can make you get a lot of knowledge, and sometimes you can change from unhappy to laughEssenceI didnt like reading at all when I was a kid. I felt that this was a boring thing. My parents were afraid that I would not read and subscribed to me many books, but I didn’t even want to touch it. Once, I didn’t want to play anymore. I don’t want to play it. I don’t want to play it., I took a picture book to let my grandmother teach me to read.

结果，外婆没时间，我只能光看图画了，看得津津有味，从此，我就爱上书了。只要一有书，我就忘了吃饭，一次妈妈叫我吃饭，我一直说等一会儿……

爸爸实在忍不住了，就一把夺过书，把我拉到了餐桌上，这时我才吃起饭来，把饭三口两口吞到肚子后，又看了起来，连时间都忘记了。这时，眼睛开始反抗了，我心里想，应该才过几分钟吧!为什么眼睛这么快就不舒服了。我跑出去一看，呀!都9点多了，都看了几个小时了，这才依依不舍的把书放在桌上，上楼睡觉去。

书给我们带来的好处有很多，可以提高我们的作文水平，扩展想象力，积累许许多多的好词好句，让作文更加丰富，我正是因为多看书，作文才提高了一些，暑假里，爸爸给我在QQ上发表了我的许多文章，很多人都说我写得好，这让我更加自信了，但是这些都离不开书的馈赠呀!

爸爸在前一些日子送给我了11本书，我当时就像一匹饿狼，贪婪的读着，不过几天，这些书就被我看完了，实在没书了，我便找来以前的书来读，《女生日记》和《五三班的坏小子》让我念念不忘，我看了都快十几遍了，还是看不厌，里面的很多好词好句引起了我的注意。开始我只是了用笔划出来，自从有了摘录本后，我便抄了下来，对我的写作大有帮助。

看了我的文章，让你悟出一些道理没呢?书是我们的朋友，让我们一起在知识的海洋里遨游吧!

读书破万卷，下笔如有神。下面是小编收集的2017中考作文素材：读书学习，希望对你们中考的写作有帮助!

1、读书使人充实，讨论使人机智，笔记使人准确。因此不常作笔记者须记忆力特强，不常计论者须天生聪颖，不常读书者须欺世有术，始能无知而显有知。读史使人明智，读诗使人灵秀，数学使人周密，科学使人深刻，伦理学使人庄重，逻辑修辞之学使人善辩：凡有所学，皆成性格。人的才智一旦遇到窒碍，读书则可使人顺畅。如智力不集中，可令读数学，因演题需全神贯注，稍有分散即需重演;如不能辨异，可令读经院哲学，因为这些人皆吹毛求疵之人;如不善求同，不善以一物阐证另一物，可令读律师之案卷。如此头脑中凡有缺陷，皆有特药可医。

2、语文像沙砾一样，不如黄金耀眼，却也有招人喜欢的一面。你看有的草地上插着形态各异、五颜六色的牌子，上面写着请高抬贵脚，听，小草在哭泣!有的写：请勿打扰，小草在熟睡!委婉的语言招引着人们前去欣赏，再加上此时优美的风景，这才是完美的语景结合!

3、有人说：好好学习，天天向上，的确，我们是应该这么做，作为一个中小学生的感受来理解学习，我们大概都认为学习不好玩，读书的都是书呆子，但是等到知道学习能干什么时，大家也就都会恍然大悟了，因为学习能使我们学习到更多的知识，用知识来充实自己。

4、在学习中，难免会碰到一些困难，给我们带来烦恼。成绩较差，虽然自己努力了，却总不见效;练习立定跳远，却总是跳不过那根优秀线……这样的例子有很多。当我们遇到这些困难时，该拥用怎样的心态?我们“班务栏”里“班级目标”后写着一句话：“每天进步一点”。我们就是要抱着这种良好的心态，努力学习，争取每天进步一点。

5、学习着，书中，那优美的文字令我陶醉，令我感悟到了人生的哲理。我的心灵颤抖着，用心去读每一个字，每一句话，去感受作者的心。风儿，轻轻地抚摸着我的脸庞，闭上眼，我感受到了学习给我带来的无穷快乐。

6、学习总是在一点一滴中积累而成的，就像砌砖，总要结结实实。踏踏实实的学吧!加油!成功属于努力的人!

7、在掉以轻心时、不在状态时、上课不好好听讲时，成绩会下降，心情会低落，但是只要觉得学习是快乐的，那这将成为动力，引你向前。当你取得好成绩时，你不快乐吗?当你被老师表扬时，你不快乐吗?这些都是通过自己的努力和付出，所取得的回报。当你经过辛勤的劳动得到丰硕的果实时，你就会觉得快乐。

8、自卑是长在心中的杂草。自卑，会让人觉得自己比别人低一等了，自卑它会让你不能正常发挥自己的潜能。但同时，自卑也是一种良药，它会促使你勇往直前，将压力变为动力，然后去实现自己的目标，到达成功的彼岸，然后扬起自信的风帆。

9、“珍惜时间，勤奋学习”是我们青少年共同的目标，就让我们新一代的年轻人时常要记住这句话，共同为了祖国的明天而努力吧!

10、书籍好比一架梯子，它能引导我们登上知识的殿堂。书籍如同一把钥匙，它能帮助我们开启心灵的智慧之窗。

11、在学习中，是否有高高的阶梯拦住你的去路?又是否有让你获益匪浅的话语激励着你?你有时可曾想过，这些话在启迪我们迈上台阶的同时，永久保存着他们最芬芳的清香。

12、“一分耕耘一分收获”只要我们肯付出汗水付出努力，那么我们会得到学习中最大的快乐。梁启超曾告诉过我们：“未尽责任最苦，尽责任最乐“。学习是我们的责任，也是我们为自己的将来而努力，学习虽苦但能从学习中得来快乐，乐趣。那么我相信世上的快乐莫过这种苦中得来的快乐了!

13、我匆忙，书本是我善良的朋友;我悠闲，书本是我真诚的伙伴。生活于善良和真诚的氛围里，哪儿还有不悦之理?

14、对于我们中学生来讲，中考是一次重大的敲打。有人从此可以继续深造，前途一片灿烂;可更多的被拒之“象牙塔”外，望“塔”兴叹，前途一片茫茫。当理想之舟刚刚起锚，就被狂风所掀翻，哪会不黯然神伤?然而，人总要长大，总要逐渐走向成熟。敲打总要挺住，泪水总要拭干，受伤的心总要愈合，布满荆棘的路总要走下去……

16、越能愉快的学习，产生快乐的感觉就越好。好希望每个人都能明白这个道理，能够在有限的生命里懂得，在学习这无限的海洋中体会快乐，在快乐中学习!

17、“一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴”时间是宝贵的，但也是无情的。我们应该好好地利用宝贵的时间，来勤奋学习。

18、语文像家人一样，时时刻刻给人温暖、鼓励。语文像是：“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。”在我们迷惑的时候使我们恍然大悟!语文又像是：“墙角一枝梅，凌寒独自开。”给人一种坚强的意志。这也是语文呀!

19、有学习的日子中，我们可以锻炼自己。老师是给我们搭建舞台的工程师，同学是为我们捧场的观众，让我们有尽情发挥自己的时刻。课堂上与老师争执课文中的疑问，体会着自己辩论的风采，思维的灵敏;课后与同学们赛歌赛舞，唱出青春之歌，舞出自己的身姿;体育课上与同学游戏，体验合作的作用，展现自己的特长。我们会怀恋有学习的日子。

20、爱迪生曾经说过：天才是百分之一的灵感加百分之九十九的汗水，百分之一是灵感，百分之九十九是汗水。但那百分之一的灵感是最重要的，甚至比那百分之九十九的汗水都要重要。

无数文人墨客，无数感人故事，伴着阵阵墨香，悄然飘入我的心头，如同在语林漫步，吮吸着大自然不羁的律动，触摸着真实的语文。如同在书海徜徉，纵然惊、险、奇、难、却滋味百般，浪花与我的心灵猛烈撞击，如此神奇之感，读书也。

古人曾云：“书中自有黄金屋，书中自有颜如玉”然也!捧一本好书，翻开书的扉页，上面或深或浅的墨字在瞬间使读者如临夏日冰凉，冬日温暖。

读书，似与童真的孩子游戏，在当中感受真诚;读书，似与老者促膝谈心，在字里行间触摸静谧;读书，似与亲人共唠家常，在温暖词句中体会熟悉;读书，似与朋友推心置腹，在怀念思考中回味美好……

在书中成长，在书中欢乐，更在书中体会!读《骆驼祥子》，体会人生百味;阅《红楼梦》，感受人情世故;品《三国演义》，赞叹英雄豪情……在文字中可以学习很多，也可以感受很多。“人生自古谁无死，留取丹心照汗青。”那是文天祥的大义;“我们把世界看错了，反说他欺骗我们。”那是泰戈尔的深知;“横眉冷对千夫指，俯首甘为孺子牛。”那是鲁迅的志向……

正是读书，给一成不变的生活添加了趣味，告诉人们什么是酸、甜、苦、辣。正是读书，让一张白纸，涂上了缤纷的色彩。“众里寻她千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在灯火阑珊处。”原来一切书中都有。真情、斗争、光明、黑暗、社会、人生，一切书中都有。

何不捧起一本书，品书情，闻书香，漫步语林，徜徉书海……

美哉，美哉!

Reading and practice integral, wisdom in the study, with books in practice, if used to guide the practice of reading, also lost the significance of reading, become real "nerd". Chairman MAO said: "reading is a kind of learning, practice is also a kind of learning, and it is more important to study." Practice is the most important, if not in practice to use and test in the book of truth, is that reads the book, chairman MAO yu as "bookishness". Enclosed, theory "archaic and failure to defeat countries;" Have been read the art of war "ma, also pavilion doctrine in the street.

Any knowledge gained from practice, knowledge of books, too, are peoples records of the social practice and summary. How to read the book knowledge and used in practice, it is a topic that is hard to answer. The so-called "overtones three hundred, several sound self-evident" sincerely. To read, the more practice, combine book knowledge and the specific work, do put this to use, can play the role of reading.

读书与实践不可分割，在读书中增长智慧，在实践中用活书本，读书如果不用于指导实践，也就失去了读书的意义，成了真正的“书呆子”。毛主席说：“读书是一种学习，实践也是一种学习，而且是更重要的学习。”实践是最重要的，如果不在实践中去使用和检验书中所讲的道理，那就是读死书了，毛主席喻之为 “本本主义”。 纸上谈兵”的赵括，食古不化，以致兵败国衰;“自幼熟读兵法”的马谡，也在街亭败于教条。

任何知识都是从实践中得来的，书本上的知识也是一样，都是人们对社会实践的记录和总结。如何将书本的知识读懂并用于实践，这实在是一个很难回答的话题。所谓“弦外之音三百曲，几声听真心自明”。要读书，更要实践，将书本知识和具体工作结合起来，做到学以致用，才能真正起到读书的作用。

参考范文：

Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.

First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

参考译文：

我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。

首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。

Speaking of reading, many people are excited because reading brings them

both knowledge and entertainment. By reading, we can learn lots of information

and know our history. But for some people, reading is not their priority. They

will choose to watch movies to have fun. However, I think people can benefit a

lot by reading.

First of all, reading can let us know what have happened in history. Since

history is recorded in books, if we read books, then we can not only what have

happened in history but also we can better understand the great figures of the

age.

Secondly, reading can enrich our knowledge. By reading, we can know

different kinds of things, how things happen and how to avoid bad things from

happening. Books record a wide range of things about life. Through reading, we

can know various aspects of life.

Thirdly, reading teaches us skills. There are so many books about how to

learn a certain language, how to get a good job, how to become popular in your

circle, how to cook and so on. Thus, these kinds of books can make us more

skillful if we do a certain thing.

All in all, we can find lots of benefits through reading.

一、…the + -est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen( known/heard/had/read, etc)

…the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：helen is the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

mr. chang is the kindest teacher that i have ever had.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

*二、nothing is + -er than to + v ;nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + v

例句：nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

*三、…cannot emphasize the importance of …too much. (再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)例句：we cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

*四、there is no denying that + s + v ...(不可否认的……) 例句：there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

*五、it is universally acknowledged that + 句子…… (全世界都知道……)例句：it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

*六、there is no doubt that + 句子……(毫无疑问的……)

例句：there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、an advantage of …is that + 句子 (……的优点是……)

例句：an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution.

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、the reason why + 句子…… is that + 句子 (……的原因是……)

例句：the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

*九、so + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子…… (如此……以致于……) 例句：so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

十、adj + as + subject(主词)+ be, s + v~ (虽然……)

例句：rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. (by no means = in no way = on no account =at no time = in no case = in no sense = under no circumstances = not ...in the least 一点也不)

虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、the + -er + s + v, …the + -er + s + v…

the + more + adj + s + v, …the + more + adj + s + v …(愈……愈……)例句：the harder you work, the more progress you make.

你愈努力，你愈进步。

the more books we read, the more learned we become.

我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

十二、by +ving, …can…(借着...，..能够..) 例句：by taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.

借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

*十三、…enable + object(受词)+ to + v (……使……能够……) 例句：listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

*十四、on no account can we + v…(我们绝对不能……) 例句：on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

十五、it is time + s + 过去式 (该是……的时候了) 例句：it is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十六、those who…(……的人……) 例句：those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

*十七、there is no one but…(没有人不……) 例句：there is no one but longs to go to college.

没有人不渴望上大学。

*十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + v (不得不……) 例句：since the examination is around the corner, i am compelled to give up doing sports.

既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

*十九、it is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的) it is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)

it is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) 例句： it is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

二十、that is the reason why…(那就是……的原因) 例句：summer is sultry. that is the reason why i dont like it.

夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

根据下面的提示，以Talking about Having Sports为题编写一段对话(字数：80--120)。

提示：

Susan每天下午参加体育活动。她喜欢游泳，每星期游泳一次。David在中学时代也常游泳，但现在没有时间，人也开始发胖了。Susan邀请David当天下午一起去游泳，并约定下午三点在游泳池见面。

Talking about Having Sports

David： Susan, you like sports, dont you?

Susan： Yes. I have sports every afternoon.

David： Do you often go swimming?

Susan： Yes, I go swimming once a week.

David： I used to swim at middle school, but I don t have time any more.

Susan： Thats too bad! Exercise is very important.

David： I know. I am getting fat, you see. Anyway, I dont want to be heavy.

Susan： Well, Im going to swim this afternoon. Do you want to go with me?

David： OK! I really need more exercises. When and where shall we meet?

Susan： How about three oclock, at the swimming-pool?

David： All right. Good-bye!

Susan： Good-bye!

[英语中考作文练习Talking about Having Sports

Now, many encyclopedias, such as: "hundred thousand whys", the mystery of

the world "and so on a wide variety, all kinds of books can give us many

benefits, our world is so vast, some things in the world, and books have,

encyclopedia like" dumb teachers diligently teach us knowledge. Visible, how

useful book! Also, we learn knowledge also want to use in our daily life, to be

accurate and determine whether to do so, the right to enrich our knowledge, the

outside is good for our healthy growth. You said, a lot of the benefits of

reading?

Nowadays, more and more of the books in the library, we should also learn

to read and appreciate books, should put the book back on the in situ after the

play, not just throw the place. Also, we must find a give us the knowledge of

books to read, dont look at those who are not good for our growth.

In short, the benefits of reading. Come on! Let us to soar in the sky of

knowledge fully!