初一年级英语作文：Weekend(汇总20篇)

Look,this is my family .Its a small family .There are three people in my family,they are my father my mother and I.

My father is a engineer,he likes playing football and reading news paper.

My mother is a college teacher.She likes playing computer games and watching TV.She likes eating apples and pears.

Im a student in

a middle school.I am 13.I like playing tabletennis and reading books.I like eating ice-cream.My favourite colour is pink.

I have a dog. Its name is Mary.It is very lovely.I like it.

I have a very happy family.

I have a wonderful dream in my heart。 Its to speak English very well。 Since English is everything for me。 English is my best friend。 English is my soul。 English is my power。 Without English， Im nothing at all。 Nothing。 Now， I can think in English， speak in English， and write in English。 Some people think Im an Indian。 Some people regard Im a Pakistan。 And some people even consider that Im an Egyptian。 But if I could speak English as good as an American， my future would be brilliant。 So I work very hard。

在我心中有一个美丽的梦想。那就是说一口流利的英语。因为对我来说英语就是我的一切。英语是我最好的朋友。英语是我的灵魂。英语给予我力量。没有英语，我什么都没有。什么都没有。此刻，我能够用英语的方式思考，用英语说话，用英语书写。有些人以为我是印第安人。有些人以为我是巴基斯坦人。有些人甚至认为我是埃及人。但如果我能说英语能像美国人说的那么好，我的未来会很完美。所以我很努力学习。

初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

I am 13 years old now. Yesterday was my birthday. My parents had a birthday party. I invited some friends to the party.

In the morning my mother got up early and began to cook. My father helped her with cooking. They were so busy that they had no time io talk with me.

When all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake. My father gave me new clothes and some books as presents. I was moved to tears. My friends sang birthday songs for me and gave me some presents. I had a wonderful birthday.

[初一英语作文 My Happiest Day

It was the eighth day of our summer holiday.I felt good.I felt I am free.My parents went to camping.So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely.I stayed at home and watched TV.I wrote an English daily composition.It was my homework.Today,I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired.It was time for dinner.I must go!I am very hungry.

这是我们放暑假的第八天,我感觉棒极了,我感到十分自由.因为我的爸爸妈妈出去旅游了,所以我独自一人在家,但我并不孤独,我呆在家里看电视.我写了一篇英语日记,那是我的作业.今天我睡了十四个小时,我认为我是太累了.该是吃晚餐的时间了,我去吃了!我感觉太饿了.

Mid Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of China. It used to be as

important as Spring Festival .It is usually celebrated in September or Ocotber.

This festival is to celebrate the havast and to enjoy the beautiful moon

light.To some extent, it is like Thanks Giving day in western countries. On this

day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. After

that, people always eat delicious moon cakes, and watch the moon. The moon is

always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relitives and

friends. It is a day of pleasure and happiness. Hope you have a wonderful Mid

Autumn festival!

我梦想的职业 My Dreaming Career

In the past two years， my parents took me to travel to many places， including big cities， small towns， famous mountians and so on。 Therefore， I like traveling and I hope I can visit to many more places。 Since then， I hope I can be a tour guide in the future， so I can travel to many tourist attractions。 Besides， I can meet various people and I think municating with different people is interesting， wchich can broaden my field of vision。 I hope they can share their life stories with me so that I can know the general life of a place。 I know it would be a challenging job， but I believe I can do well in my job。

在过去的两年里，我父母带我到很多地方旅游，包括大城市，小城镇，著名的大山等等。因此，我喜欢旅游，我期望能够参观更多地方。从那开始，我就期望我将来能够成为一名导游，这样我就能够到很多旅游景点旅游了。此外，我能够认识各种各样的人，我认为和不一样的人沟通很搞笑，能够开阔我的视野。我期望他们能够和我分享他们的生活故事，这样我就能够了解一个地方的普通生活。我明白这是一份具有挑战性的工作，但是我相信我能够在工作中表现得很好。

My Attitude towards Life

Life is an endless voyage, as theres no destination in our life. Life is also very fickle, since anything may happen in our life. We may be successful or defeated at any time.

Sometimes, I have the feeling that I was successful, but that happiest time has already passed away. Sometimes, I feel as if I went to the end of my life, but after a long tour, I find I have a long way to go. I always miss myself in this endless road and I feel very lonely. But in this loneliness, theres nothing to fear. So I have learned to grow up. I have learned to hold back my tears. I have learned to smile to others.

Im not defeated. However hard the situation is, I will never give up! However hard the situation is, I will never say I cant! However hard the situation is, I will never stop running! Never!

生活是一段漫长的旅程，因为我们的生活是没有目的地的。生活也很善变，因为在我们的生活中任何事情都有可能发生。我们随时都可能成功或失败。

有时候，我感觉我要成功了，但那快乐的时光却消逝了。有时，我觉得我已经到生命的尽头了，但经过长时间的旅行，我发现我还有很长的路要走。在这漫长的道路上，我总是想自己，觉得很孤独。但在这孤独中，没有什么好怕的。所以我已经学会了长大。我已经学会了忍住我的眼泪。我已经学会了对他人微笑。

我不会被打败的。不管处境有多么艰难，我都不会放弃!不管处境有多么艰难，我绝不会说我不行!不管处境多么困难，我永远不会停止奔跑!绝对不会!

根据所给的四幅图画，以“Mikes Test Paper”为题，按顺序写一篇不少于80字的短文。内容必须符合题意。

迈克英语学得不好。昨天，参加了英语考试。他又没考及格。他不敢告诉他妈妈他得了低分。在他回家的路上，天下起了大雨。于是他有了个主意。为什么不把卷子当伞用呢?他就把卷子顶在头上开始往家跑。当他到家时，卷子全湿了，几乎被雨淋成了碎片。当他妈妈问他分数时，迈克尴尬地笑了笑，把试卷递给妈妈看。

Mike is bad at English. Yesterday, he had an English test. He failed again. He dared not tell his mother the low marks. On his way home, it rained heavily. So he got a good idea. Why not take the paper as an umbrella? He just put the paper on his head and began to run home. When he arrived home, the paper was all wet and almost torn to pieces by the rain. When his mother asked about the marks, Mike showed the paper to his mother with an embarrassed smile.

First of all, let me tell you a true event. That is my grandpa with me by boat from yichang to three gorges occurs when one thing.

We all got up that morning, the people on board, is preparing to play water to wash shu. But the faucet for half a day on the boat were down only a few drops of water, one asked, originally is the boat ran out of water! So, we only have stood in long lines, slowly, etc. Although I looked at the ship, the ship under a stream of water, but no one would like to use it. Because the water is so dirty, so HunHuang, who dare to use? Line only slowly, slowly, etc!

Although in the high-speed development of science and technology nowadays, but the impact on our environment. Reduced river pollution, air pollution, the trees, the increasing of the desert... All this is all thanks to the human! Countries while in value, although the world in value, environmental protection, what and how much these things figure up attention? In my opinion, is rare. Although countries in so to speak, but whats the use of words and not of deeds? Did just a few, too! Dont grab from main reason! You see, the Yellow River water is not still contaminated? So the factory does not still pollute the atmosphere? Should grasp, starts from the quality of people, quality grab, but the country and the world to do so? No! Just like to do even when you are done. In the polluted environment is not so?

Animals are extinct, flash floods in explosion, dust storms still exist... It fully shows the environmental pollution! Countries will only go to disaster relief, instead of simply grabbed, will only go to disaster relief, whats the use? Dont all kinds of disaster is still in? We should like lu xun. He had become a is in order to save the Chinese, and he found that it will not solve the fundamental, so he became a writer, to save the people of the spirit. Because this is the fundamental! So, we as the master of the 21st century, you should understand, what is the root of the damage to the environment, from the point to solve it. Work hard -- the 21st century we!

首先，我先给大家讲一个真实的事件。那是我随我的外公从宜昌坐船前往三峡时发生的一件事。

那天早晨，船上的人都起来了，正准备打水洗淑。可是船上的水龙头半天也只下来几滴水，一询问，原来是船上的水用完了!所以，大家只有排着长长的队伍，慢慢的等。我望着船下，船下虽然有着流不尽的江水，但却没有一个人愿意来使用它。因为江水太脏了，是那么的浑黄，又有谁敢去使用呢?只有慢慢的排队，慢慢的等!

如今科技虽然在高速发展，但这影响到了我们的环境。河流污染，大气污染，树木的减少，沙漠的增多……这一切的一切都是拜人类所赐!国家虽然在重视，世界虽然在重视，什么环境保护日，这些事又有多少人影起了注意呢?在我看来，是极少的。国家虽然在这么说，可是光说不做又有什么用呢?做了也只是少数罢了!根本没有从主要原因抓起!你看，黄河的水不是还在被污染吗?工厂不照样还在污染大气吗?抓，就应该从小抓起，从人们的素质，品质抓起，可是国家乃至世界这么做了吗?没有!即使做了也只是做样子罢了。环境不是照样还在被污染吗?

动物还在灭绝，山洪还在爆发，沙尘暴照样存在……这都充分说明了环境还在污染!国家只会去赈灾，而不去根本抓起，只会去赈灾，这又有什么用呢?各种灾难不还是照样在发生吗?我们应该像鲁迅一样。他当初从医是为了拯救中国人，而他发现，这解决不了根本，所以，他当了作家，去拯救人们的精神。因为这就是根本!所以，我们作为21世纪的小主人，就应该明白，什么是破坏环境的根本，从要点去解决它。努力吧――21世纪的我们!

In modern society, pressure is ubiquitous. As students, we have to endure

the pressure from examination, from homework and from our parents’

expectations.As workers, people are faced with the pressure from deadline, from

difficulties and from finance and so on. Here I would like to give some

suggestions about relieving pressure.

First of all, to confide to others is an efficient way for relieving

pressure. When we feel so anxious and worried that we cannot continue to work or

study, go to talk with our friends or family members and we will get some relief

and feel better. Second, to do some exercises is another way to relieve

pressure. If we are under pressure for a long time, doing some exercises can

make us refreshed and regain power to continue our task. Finally, another common

way for women to relieve pressure is to cry. The effect of crying is the similar

as the effect of confiding to others. After crying, we would find that we are

relaxed and then we have spirit to fight against difficulties again.

In a word, there are many ways to relieve our pressure. But the most

important point is that if we cannot solve the problem at once, we need to call

off our attention from the pressure we are faced with to other things. Only in

this way we would not be entangled with the pressure for a long time.

I have a very good English teacher.My classmates and I all like her very much.She is very friendly to us.We all like to have English classes very much.

She is tall and beautiful.She looks like a middle school student.She has big eyes,a small nose,a small mouth and long black trousers.

Her name is Wang Yanjun.We often call her Miss Wang.She teaches English very well.In class ,she looks like our elder sister .She often helps us to solve problems.After class,she looks like our friend.We often play games together.

This is my English teacher.I love her and I love to study English,too.I believe my English will be better and better.

我有一个很好的英语老师。我和我的同学们都非常喜欢她。她对我们很友好。我们都很喜欢上英语课。

她又高又漂亮。她看起来像一个中学的学生。她有大眼睛,小鼻子,小嘴巴和长黑裤子。

她的名字叫王宿州农村。我们通常叫她王老师。她教英语很好。在课堂上,她看起来像我们的姐姐。她经常帮助我们解决问题。下课后,她看起来像我们的朋友。我们经常在一起玩游戏。

这是我的英语老师。我爱她,我爱学英语,太。我相信我的英语会越来越好。

在我四五岁时，妈妈带我去动物园参观了国宝——熊猫。

When I was four or five years old, my mother took me to the zoo to visit the national treasure panda --.

熊猫浑身毛茸茸的，就像一个黑白相间的圆皮球，它还有两个月牙般的耳朵，有一双黑黑的、圆溜溜的大眼睛。

Panda hairy, round ball like a black and white, it also has two crescent shaped ears, a pair of black, round eyes.

熊猫最爱吃竹子，记得那天，那两只熊猫就在架子上拿着竹子津津有味的吃着呢!

Panda bamboo favorite, remember that day, the two giant pandas on the shelf with a bamboo eat with appetite to eat!

吃饱的熊猫十分自在，两只熊猫从架子上跳下来，你追我赶，从那边摇摇晃晃的跑来跑去，它们玩累了，就又爬到架子上靠着休息了一会儿。

Feed the panda is very comfortable, the two giant pandas to jump down from the shelf, race each other, from the other side of the rickety ran, they are tired, they climbed to the shelf with the rest for a while.

熊猫休息完之后，一只熊猫的脚放在了底下熊猫的身上，然后往下一翻，翻到了下面，另一只熊猫把脚放在了另只熊猫的屁股上，脚一蹬，它也翻下去了。这时，惹得旁边的人都哈哈大笑。

After having a rest for a panda, panda feet in the bottom of the pandas body, and then down to a turn, turn to the next, another panda put his feet on the pandas ass, a foot pedal, it also turned down. At this time, everyone was laughing.

这时，妈妈拍了一下我说走吧，可是我还想多看一会儿，但时间不早了，我们依依不舍地走了。

At this time, my mother took me to say go, but I wanted to see for a while, but in time, we went to be reluctant to part.

看了我写的熊猫，你们大家也喜欢熊猫了吧!

See I write the panda, you will like the panda!

今天是清明节，既是中华民族的传统节日，又是最有传统特色的节日之一，也是一个扫尘的日子，下面作文频道小编带来了这篇初一年级清明节作文，希望大家认真阅读。

一大早爸爸、妈妈和我一起乘车去了乡下奶奶家，准备一起去山上墓地扫尘。 奶奶家可热闹啦!大姑、二姑都带着家人来走娘家，爷爷和奶奶忙着炸丸子，姑姑忙着包水饺，爸爸当厨师做菜，妈妈给他当助手，我就当孩子王，领着六七个小孩给他们讲我身边发生的新奇故事，忙活了一个中午，我们全家人吃了一顿丰盛团圆地午餐。 下午两点钟左右(当地风俗中午不能去扫尘)，爷爷、爸爸和我带上早已准备好的祭品和香火，沿着水泥路走了二十分钟左右，穿过层层梯田，沿着蜿蜒曲折的小道一步一步艰难的奋力向山上墓地攀登。

终于来到老爷爷和老奶奶的墓地前，庄重而又肃穆的几颗四季常青松树早已在那迎接我们，我们三人都是肃然起敬，直立在他们的墓前。爸爸递给我一根已经燃烧起来的不时向外冒着缕缕烟的香，那香味是那么的浓重，使人一闻到这这股香味，马上就会感觉出一副沮丧而又难过的滋味，我们手里都拿着香，一起为在“九泉之下”的老爷爷、老奶奶鞠了一个九十度的躬，以表示我们对他们的哀悼和敬意。

爷爷熟练地把一些祭品恭恭敬敬地放在了老爷爷和老奶奶的墓前。然后拿出很多黄纸，巧妙地用两手摊成扇形，又在纸上面放上了很多一百万元和一亿元的阴间的钞票，爷爷嘴里不停的念叨"这是老爷爷的，这是老奶奶的，这是二老爷爷的„„”，我听后觉得真好玩，可当时的情景又不敢多嘴问，只好跟在爷爷身后拜了又拜，才依依不舍地离开。，

在回家的路上，爷爷告诉我以前老爷爷过着贫穷的日子，像我这样大的时候，还给人家当小工混饭吃，没上一天学，凭自己的努力奋斗为爷爷创下了这份家业„„。”我听后觉得很受感动，我现在有着优越的家庭，过着无忧无虑，丰衣足食的日子，却不知道老爷爷过去吃过那么多苦、受过那么多难，才为我们换来今天来之不易的幸福生活，我应该好好珍惜，在学校要好好学习，长大为社会贡献一份力量，我坚信老爷爷在另一个天堂也有这份心愿。

The classmates, we live is getting better and better now, almost all of the people live a happy life, people to live and work in peace and contentment.

But, one day when you walk on the broad road, enjoying the green trees, red flowers beside the sudden smell of the nose is sewage smell, dont you feel sick? When you felt comfortable walking in a clean campus, it suddenly occurred to one of the plastic bags fly into your face, you dont feel disappointed? Believe that the students feel the same way. Human and animal survival environment has been badly damage. Many rare animals facing extinction. So to protect our only earth, protect our homeland, is our this generation of youths responsibility.

I really want to those who damage the environment loudly said 1: "please stop your behavior." Although I personally "power" is very weak, but I can call all the classmates do "struggle" and damage the environment, to clean up our home. A clean piece of blue sky and human and animals. Let the children thrive in the sunshine, let the birds fly freely in the sky.

Here, I once again called on the students start from personal, starts from me, dont litter, do not spit everywhere, love flowers and plants trees, save water electricity. Determined and damage the environment people do a "struggle" environmental protection "little warrior.

同学们，我们现在的生活过得是越来越好了，几乎所有的人们都过上了幸福快乐的生活，人们安居乐业。

但是，当你有一天行走在宽阔的道路上，欣赏着旁边的緑树红花，突然闻到扑鼻而来的是污水的臭味时，你不觉得恶心吗?当你心情无比舒畅的走在干净的校园里，突然一个塑料袋飞到你的脸上，你不觉得扫兴吗?相信同学们也有同感。人类和动物的生存环境已经受到严重的破坏。使许多珍贵的动物面临灭绝的危机。所以保护我们唯一的地球，保护我们的家园，是我们这一代青少年的责任。

我真想对那些破坏环境的人大声的说一句：“请停下你们的行为。”虽然我个人的“力量”很弱小，但是我可以号召所有的同学们一起和破坏环境的人做“斗争”，来净化我们的家园。还人类和动物一片干净的蓝天。让小朋友们在阳光下茁壮成长，让鸟儿们在天空中自由飞翔。

在这里，我再一次号召同学们从个人做起，从我做起，不要乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰，爱护花草树木，节约用水用电。坚决和破坏环境的人做“斗争”做一个环保“小勇士”。

Smile, how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy. and this happiness is from the bottom of heart.

It’s not like enthusiastic laughter, but just warm, makes your heart warm.

Mother’s smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again…

Smile, so easy, but also so useful.

So, let’s learn to smile. everyone needs others’ smile. when we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. and maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you.

Let’s learn to smile often, i believe it can even make the whole warm. living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.

Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds.

However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage.

Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles.

据《史记》“屈原贾生列传”记载，屈原，是春秋时期楚怀王的大臣。他倡导举贤授能，富国强兵，力主联齐抗秦，遭到贵族子兰等人的强烈反对，屈原遭馋去职，被赶出都城，流放到沅、湘流域。他在流放中，写下了忧国忧民的《离骚》、《天问》、《九歌》等不朽诗篇，独具风貌，影响深远(因而，端午节也称诗人节)。公元前278年，秦军攻破楚国京都。屈原眼看自己的祖国被侵略，心如刀割，但是始终不忍舍弃自己的祖国，于五月五日，在写下了绝笔作《怀沙》之后，抱石投汨罗江身死，以自己的生命谱写了一曲壮丽的爱国主义乐章。

According to "historical records" "Qu Jia biography" records, Qu Yuan, is the spring and Autumn period chuhuaiwang ministers. He advocated the virtuous empowerment, enriching, strongly linked Qi Qin, is strongly opposed by the son of noble Abram, Qu Yuan was greedy removal, was driven out of the capital, exiled to the yuan, Xiang river. He was in exile, wrote his "Li Sao", "heaven", "Nine Songs" and other immortal poems, unique style, profound (and thus, Dragon Boat Festival, also known as the poet Festival). In 278 BC, the Qin Chu kyoto. Qu Yuan saw that his country was invaded, heartbroken, but always not abandon their country, in May 5th, was written in words as "Huai Sha", bouldering Miluo River to die, to their own lives and write a magnificent patriotic movement.

传说屈原死后，楚国百姓哀痛异常，纷纷涌到汨罗江边去凭吊屈原。渔夫们划起船只，在江上来回打捞他的真身。有位渔夫拿出为屈原准备的饭团、鸡蛋等食物，“扑通、扑通”地丢进江里，说是让鱼龙虾蟹吃饱了，就不会去咬屈大夫的身体了。人们见后纷纷仿效。一位老医师则拿来一坛雄黄酒倒进江里，说是要药晕蛟龙水兽，以免伤害屈大夫。后来为怕饭团为蛟龙所食，人们想出用楝树叶包饭，外缠彩丝，发展成棕子。

Legend of Qu Yuans death, Chu abnormal grief people poured into the Miluo River to pay their respects to Qu Yuan. The fishermen rowed boats, back and forth on the river to salvage his real body. A fisherman out of rice ready for Qu Yuan, eggs and other food, "plop, plop into the river to throw, let the fish and shrimp to eat, not to bite the flexor doctor. People imitate one after another after seeing. An old physician, a jug of wine poured into the river, say to medicine Halo Water Dragon beast, so as not to harm flexor doctor. Later, as if for the Dragon Balls food, people come up with neem leaves board, color outside the winding wire, developed into a brown son.

以后，在每年的五月初五，就有了龙舟竞渡、吃粽子、喝雄黄酒的风俗;以此来纪念爱国诗人屈原。

Later, in the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year in May, have dragon boat races, eating zongzi, drinking realgar wine customs; in order to commemorate the patriotic poet Qu Yuan.

What I saw was a great opportunity to provide computing technology in a more efficient way.That was the core idea of what became dell computer Corporation, and that’s one we were stuck over ever since.当时我看到一个大机遇就是以更有效的方式提供电脑技术。那后来成为了戴尔公司的核心理念，自那以后我们便一直坚持不懈。

I started the business with a simple question: how can we make the process of buying a computer better?The answer was :sell the computer directly to the end customers.Eliminate the reseller’s markup and pass the savings on to the customers.我是从一个简单的问题开始创业的：我们如何使购买电脑的过程变得更方便?答案是：直接把电脑卖给终端用户。去除转销商这一层的钱，并把省下的钱还给用户。

As we know , English has become an internationallanguage. It is more

popular than any other language inChina. English is widely spoken inthe world

and it is the most useful language around the world . But how tolearn it well

?

The best way is to use it all the time . If we cantalk in English , think

in English we can learn it well . At school , we shouldlearn to hear , speak,

read and write carefully . We should spend enough timein practicing English . If

we keep on working hard at English , we will be ableto be good at it one day

.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

The proverb "Haste makes waste" means that one may delay the time to complete one thing if he rushes to do it, because he may neglect something important in the process and has to do it again from the beginning. So one should do every step well.

Take remembering English words for example, every student wants to enlarge his vocabulary. But this aim cannot be achieved in one or two days. You should stick to remem bering some words a day and revise the words every few days. In this way you can keep the words in your mind firmly. There is mo shortcut. If you want to stuff all the words into your brain and mot to revise them, you will remember nothing. So dont be hasty. Haste makes waste.