初一年级英语作文：Weekend（合集20篇）

“砰！”沉重的书包被扔在了“无辜”的转椅上，转骑“吱吱”地打着转。我垂头丧气地走到了被美食摆满的餐桌前，坐了下来。

那时正值无比紧张的小升初，倒计时的天数在黑板上一天一天的减去一，减去一……可我的成绩一直低迷。我神色黯然地坐在了父母愤怒的冷冰冰的目光前，不知所措。

“说说你怎么考的大综合吧！”爸爸用他那深邃的目光像钩子一般钩住我，使我害怕极了。

“你看看你语文怎么考的，选择题顺利的避开了四个正确选项！”我屏住呼吸，这时候我怎么还敢笑出一声。

“一篇阅读满分十五分，你光扣分就扣了十分儿。”

“可我真的不会分析那篇文章。”我辩解道。

“都要小升初了，连个阅读题都答不明白，你还想不想考北校了。”爸爸把我辩得理去词穷。听着爸爸的数落，心里空荡荡的。

又是一阵如机关枪似地突突突地扫射：“你的英语又怎么考的，满分五十分你达二十九，你认真了吗？

“二十九分还算低吗？”我想争辩。

“住嘴，英语排班级第十三，一个英语科代表考得这么惨，还不算低吗。”爸爸愤怒地说。

我羞愧难当，感到一桌美味都没了吸引力，我感到那时的心十分彷徨，如在迷茫的大海中找不到指路的灯塔。小升初的目标早就已经定好，除了上北校数特外，还能有什么呢？如果现在改变主意，动摇“军心”，那么在考场上就无法取得胜利。我总是没有信心，爸爸好似看出了我的难色。

“不用担心，儿子。爸爸对你信心百倍，只要你不轻言放弃，爸爸相信你会成功的。”爸爸的这一番话好似干涸的小湖遇到了大川的浇灌，甘甜清爽。我不能负于父母对我的期盼，我不能负于老师对我的希望，我不能懦弱地退缩，我不能做无意的彷徨。

这次餐桌上的谈话使我触动颇深，我再次想起了糟糕的成绩，它现在化为了动力，使我有了奋起直追的勇气与力量。我从年组一百一十六名如推土机一般，横砍竖劈，终于摘到了北校第四十四位的签，顺利地进入了这个温馨的一班大家庭中。这一次的谈话对我心灵中的创口是一个慰藉，在成绩不好的时候，让我走出阴霾，奋勇向前，勇攀高峰，尽力就好！

我们大家应该都知道保护环境人人有责!

We should all know that protecting the environment is everyones responsibility!

我们生活的地球是很脆弱的，地球上的自然资源也是有限的，如果我们从现在开始保护环境和地球的话，我们生活的地球一定会变的更美好!

The world we live in is very fragile, the earths natural resources are limited, if we start from now on the protection of the environment and the earth, our earth will become more beautiful!

保护环境从我做起从我们大家身边的小事做起吧!

Protect environment begin from me to start from the US side of the little things!

保护环境就是保护地球还是间接的保护我们人类自己，如果环境被破坏的话，那么我们赖以生存的家园就很有可能被沙漠吞噬 !

Protect environment is to protect the earth or indirectly protect ourselves, if the environment is destroyed, so the survival of our homes will likely be the desert!

我在这里向全世界的人们呼吁 保护环境人人有责 ! 如果我们还在这样的破坏环境的话，我们的家园即将遭到崩溃 。 那时我们便没有去处了， 保护环境人人有责 ， 从小事开始作起吧，

I am here to call for the protection of the environment is everyones responsibility to people all over the world! If the damage to the environment we are such words, our home will breakdown. Then we will have no place Protect environment is everyones responsibility, from the minor matter, starts,

如我们不乱扔垃圾， 随地吐痰等。

If we do not littering, spitting etc..

保护环境人人有责!

Protect environment is everyones responsibility!

This summer, I had some special days. I joined dongzhou international educational exchange summer camp.

First, I will tell you about our foreign teachers, they are shrina and rebecca. They are friendly and beautiful. They are students at oxford university.

We talked about many things: famous people, subjects in england, different jobs, our deal days, western star signs, what can we say in a restaurant and so on.

We know lots of things, like what the difference is between “chef” and “cook”, all the parts of the body…

We tried to write a letter to principal zhang. We made a play and we drew our own comics and tried to sell it. We gave some other students english lessons, we taught them about chinese dragon, chinese martial arts and the olympics.

Every afternoon, we played exciting games: chinese whispers, tongue twisters, wheelbarrow, egg and spoon, three legs…

On the last day, we had a good time. We made black tea. We put tea bags, some milk and lots of water in to a big bowl, and then we stirred the tea until it became red and dark. Oh, it tasted good! later, we used eggs, flour and milk to make many pancakes. To cook them is very interesting. When we finished it, the pancakes looked round and nice. We put some jam on it. how delicious! I won’t ever forget it.

The summer camp is a really good chance for me. I know the local things in england. I learned a lot and like english more. I also know better ways to learn english well.

I hope one day i can see you in england.

今年夏天,我有一些特殊的日子。东洲国际教育交流我加入夏令营。

首先,我将告诉你关于我们的外籍教师,他们是shrina和丽贝卡。他们是友好的和美丽的。他们是牛津大学的学生。

我们谈了很多事情:名人,受试者在英格兰,不同的工作,我们的天,西方的星座,我们能说什么在餐馆等等。

我们知道很多事情,像有什么区别“厨师”和“厨师”,身体的所有部位…

我们试图给校长写封信。我们玩了,我们把自己的漫画,并试图把它卖掉。我们给其他的学生上英语课,我们教他们关于中国龙,中国的武术和奥运会。

每天下午,我们玩激动人心的游戏:中国的低语,绕口令,手推车,鸡蛋和勺子,三条腿…

最后一天,我们有一个美好的时光。我们做了红茶。我们把茶包,一些牛奶和大量的水在一个大碗,然后我们搅拌茶,直到它变成了红色和黑色。哦,味道很好!之后,我们用鸡蛋、面粉和牛奶使许多煎饼。做饭是很有趣的。当我们完成它,煎饼四下看了看,不错。我们把一些果酱。多美味啊!我永远也不会忘记。

夏令营对我来说是一个很好的机会。我知道在英国当地的事情。我学到了很多,更喜欢英语。我也知道更好的方法来学好英语。

我希望有一天我可以看到你在英格兰。

Nowadays there are still many behaviors against public morality, such as

spiting or littering in public places, cutting in line, wasting water or

electricity and so on.

One of the main reasons for these immoral behaviors is that some people

lack personal manners and public consciousness. Actually these small things in

many peoples eyes have brought great bad effects on our community. Above all,

these immoral behaviors disturb social order and disrupt socialsbility.

Moreover, ones violating public morality not only evades others benefits but

also does harm to himself. For example, if most people buy pirated products,

those original producers will suffer great damage and might lose the enthusiasm

to continue their producing. Which in turn, influences consumers taking the

profits into consideration, I think it is high time that we would take more

effective measures to improve public morals.

First of all, education plays a very vital role. We must utilize education

to make people know their behaviors influence on the society and follow public

morals consciously. Besides the government should improve the administration

system and ensure the efficient improvement of administration measures.

我第一次接触它，竟是无意的。

那一日阳光明媚，孤零零落在门口的纸张被我随意捡起，几个醒目的大字顺势映入我的眼里：浙江占4席，我市义乌入选。看到这儿我郁闷的想：这和我又有什么关系呢？恰在此时，一个娇小的身影偷偷摸摸地钻了进来，那道身影像一只乳燕般扑闪而来，我手拿报纸，眼底不见一丝慌乱，一个灵巧的转身就躲过了她的“扑食”。

“嗨，小姐姐，别躲开啊！”女孩转头向我抱怨，脸上尽是狡黠之色。我神情不变，伸手就揪住她的小辫子说：“你就不怕我怕告诉云姨？”“嘿嘿，”女孩尴尬地笑了两声，而后一本正经地问，“姐，你手上是什么东西？”我将手里的报纸给她，移步想去喝口茶。

“哎呀，我妈他们昨天就在说这个，这里怎么都有啊！”

“什么？”听到女孩惊呼一声，我刚要落下的脚硬生生扭转了一个方向，想绕到她的身后去。

女孩大方的将报纸递过来，张口就问我：“姐啊，你知道义乌吗？”这下轮到我尴尬了，傻笑两下，并不开口回答。她见我不说话，就开始洋洋得意地向我介绍义乌：“义乌啊，和杭州、宁波、温州并列浙江四大区域中心城市，它应该在浙江省的中部……”她的声音在知了的蝉鸣下变得恍惚，却在我童年里留下了深刻的一笔。

直到那时我才明白报纸的意义，它并不是与我无关，它应该与所有人有关。我将报纸翻过来，突然发现原来学生也可以有一番作为，比如说……

几天后，老师桌上的稿子中多了一份以我署名的文稿，在小道消息如飞般传递的校园，我早就知道了这批稿就是交给、投给金华晚报的。投稿之后的日子里，我的生活并未改变太多，只多了一份每日必到的报纸和朋友们谈天说地时间。

夜晚的月光不会跌碎在窗台，银丝凝成光柱落在我手里的纸张上，那夜我翻来覆去地睡不着觉，下了床看见桌上的报纸，也就拿起打发时间。在那个年纪，政治新闻我看不进去，我更喜欢阅览“靓图趣图”、“学生天地”、“娱乐新闻”什么的。在月光的映照下，我时而捂嘴偷笑，时而闭眼沉思。想起与爷爷近日的聊天，我突然发现我们聊的东西变得多了，也变得更加深奥了，这都是它带给我的改变。同学曾对我抱怨：“看书会睡着的。”而那晚我却越看越精神，为此，第二日我一到学校就对那人感叹：“朋友，其实你‘看着看着就睡了’只是你想睡觉的一个借口吧！”那人看着我眼周围的阴影，很没形象的笑出了声。

到了中午，朋友去拿报纸的时候意外带回了一个属于我的信封。上面写着潦草的大字，有着送件人的地址金华晚报，我已经猜到了什么。我拆开信封，对他们说：“想不到我人生中的第一桶金竟然是金华晚报送给我的。”

那一日，不足五十元的稿费被我似宝一般地捧在怀里。从那一日起，我对写作有了不一样的情感。

作为我童年里的报刊，我更愿用“益友”来形容它，它是我世界里一颗亮闪闪的星星，为我开启了广阔的天地。

[初一年级作文报刊伴我成长

Birthday

My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.

At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards， picture books， pens.

They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out.

We sing and dance.We have a good time at the party.

A good book not only brings happiness to people, but also comforts; it can

not only make you think deeply, but also enlighten you. A good book is a wise

man, a mentor, a friend, and a partner. My favorite thing is reading.

books also bring me much joy. I remember one time, my mother bought me

"Insects", the book records many insects and their habits. I couldnt put it

down, and when I got home, I picked up the book and read it with interest. When

I read the firefly insect, a beautiful scene immediately appeared in my mind: On

a summer night, I was walking in the park, and at this time, many fireflies were

flying around me. Illuminate the way forward... The more I think about it, the

more excited I am, and I read it more seriously. When I read about ants, an

insect, I couldnt help but be shocked by its unity. Together, ants can move

things that are several times heavier than them. I also feel that we must learn

from the spirit of ants. Reading and reading, I forgot the time. It wasnt until

my mother came to ask me to eat, I reluctantly put down the book and swallowed a

spit, as if swallowing wisdom into my stomach, my heart was still in the

colorful world of insects.

Gorky once said: "I am on books, like hungry people are on bread." Food

feeds only our bodies, and books feed our souls. Books can increase our

knowledge, broaden our horizons, and improve our writing skills; they can bring

us inspiration and happiness. "When the book is used, we hate less", so I think

we need to read more and read more books to make our achievements bloom like

sesame seeds.

There are four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,autumn and

winter.Every season has three months and each month has about thirty days.

The first season is spring.In spring time we have warm weather and sunny

days.There are many beautiful flowers in the gardens and in the fields.The birds

begin to sing their songs.Everything comes to life again.

The second season we call summer.In summer the weather is very hot and it

rains a lot.All trees are beautiful with their green leaves.The sky is very

clear and blue,and the sunshine is much stronger than that in other seasons,so

many people go to the seaside or the mountains to avoid the heat.

Autumn is the third season of the year.In autumn the weather becomes cooler

day by day.It is the best season we have.So many people like it very

much,especially the farmers.They are very busy with their harvest.

The last season is winter.It comes with frost and snow.The weather grows

colder and colder,and much snow falls.But winter is not very long with us,for

spring comes again soon.

我有一只小狗，我妈妈给他取了一个好听的名字叫贝贝。他非常可爱，雪白的毛发、黑宝石般的大眼睛，还有梅花似的脚印。淘气的它发生了不少好玩的事呢。

I have a dog, my mother gave him a nice name Bei Bei. He Adorable, white hair, black jewel like eyes, and plum blossom like footprints. Naughty it happen a lot of fun.

又一次，妈妈带它去打针，它在车里把警报器按得直响，结果却因为警报声太大，把自己吓得缩成了一团，妈妈跑去看到这小家伙的熊样，结果被逗得哈哈大笑，笑的后来肚子都痛了。而它则在一旁用惊恐的眼神，奇怪的望着我们。

Once again, my mother took it to an injection, the alarm by whistling in the car, but because the results of the alarm sound is too large, scare myself all huddled, mom went to see that little bear, the result was a good laugh, then belly laugh all pain. And it is in the side with frightened eyes, strange looking at us.

还有一次，我们带她去玩。不一会儿，又有一只大狗来了，胆小的它非常害怕，却想不出什么办法，于是他就用可怜巴巴的眼神看了看我，好似在向我求救。我当然要考研一番啦。

Another time, we take her to play. Not a little while, and theres a big dog, it was very afraid of timid, but can not think of what way, so he used the pitiful eyes looked at me, as if to me for help. Of course I want to ones deceased father grind a.

我当做没看见，它咬咬我的裤脚，我还是当没看见，突然大狗追了上来，追了上来，它只好拼命地跑，忽然见了一个洞，它立刻跑了进去，大狗钻不进去只好垂头丧气的走了，它看着大狗慢慢离去，就又开心地走到我身边。

As I did not see it, bite my leg, I was when I saw the big dog, suddenly catch up, catch up, it had to run, suddenly saw a hole, it immediately ran into the big dog, couldnt get to become dejected and despondent walked, it looked at the dog slowly away go, and happy to come to my side.

我希望它快快长大，能够保护自己。

I hope it can grow up quickly, to protect themselves.

第一篇

To tell you the truth, I dont like the Spring Festival at all. When I was young I liked it very much,because I could had something tasty to eat during the Spring Festival,and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes,too. I also could had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do. I dont like it now, there are many reasons.

说实话，我一点都不喜欢春节。不过我年轻的时候，我非常喜欢，因为我可以在春节吃到美味佳肴，我可以享受到非常精彩的电视节目。我还可以有很多自由时间来做我喜欢做的事情。现在我不喜欢了，有许多理由。

Firstly, I cant have a good time during the Festival. Every New Years Eve something unpleasant often happens. Once I quarreled with my second brother.

首先，在节日期间我玩得不开心。每年除夕夜总有不愉快的事发生。有一次我跟我的二弟吵架。

Secondly, I cant relax myself during the Festival. I have to do many things, watch so many TV programmes, meet so many people,all these things make me very tired.

其次，在节日期间我自己无法得到放松。我要做很多事情，看很多的电视节目，见很多的人，所有这些都让我感到很累。

Thirdly, spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older. I dont like to be old. I want to live longer and be young all the time.

第三，度过一个春节意味着我又老一岁了，我不喜欢老。我想活得更久，并且永远年轻。

Readers, what is your opinions about the Spring Festival? Please tell us, we can share our opinions. Thanks for reading! Goodbye.

读者们，你有什么关于春节的想法吗?请告诉我们，我们可以分享我们的想法。感谢您的阅读!再见。

第二篇

My Spring Festival is special. My uncle and my aunt came back from Shanghai. My family were very happy to keep the Spring Festival with them. And it was the most exciting festival of all the festivals.

我的春节很过得特别,我的叔叔阿姨重上海回来.我们家的人十分高兴可以和他们过春节.这是我最兴奋的一次春节。

On New Years Eve, my father and my uncle talked about their work together. My mum did some cooking with my aunt Grandparents and I watched the New Year TV programmes. At about six oclock, we had a special family dinner. We all thought the dumplings were delicious.

在新年的前夕(除夕夜)，我的父亲和我的叔父上一起谈论他们的工作。我妈和我的伯母和祖父母起做饭，而且我看了新年电视节目。 在大约六点钟，我们有了一份特别的家庭晚餐。 我们全部认为饺子很可口。

On the first day of the New Year, we visited our relatives. In the afternoon, we went shopping in Jiefang Road. My uncle bought some Jays CDs. He likes Jays music very much. There were so many people on the road. It was more alive than any other time of a year.

在新年的第一天，我们拜访了我们的亲戚。 午后，我们在解放路逛街。 我的叔父买了一些周杰伦的唱碟。 他非常喜欢周杰伦的音乐。 道路上很多人。

On the second and the third days, we spent a wonderful weekend in the country. There were much bigger trees than in the city. And the animals were more beautiful than in the city. We all enjoyed ourselves.

在第二、三天里，我们度过了一个好周末。有比较大的树比较在城市中。而且动物比在城市中更美丽。 我们玩得好高兴。

What a colorful world of the fall,this is a credit to the leaves,they have

red and green,the autumn dress up like a large garden.

Red maple leaves,like palms,just five piece children.Leaves a small number

of prominent teeth,the base of the heart-shaped,dark green to dark green above

to below the axillary vein has hair sense,the edge is also trimmed with lace

irregular.Bark grayish brown,with the old growth,the surface grooves and

scales.Maple leaves,autumn brings a festive and warm.

Holly tree is the symbol of vitality,crown thriving,flourish.Leaves

oval,pointed at both ends,like the two tilt of the boat.Stem and leaf surface

veins is very clear,long from bottom to top,from coarse to fine.The front of

dark green leaves,very smooth,negative light green,because there are many

prominent veins and coarse stems.Holly leaves have wavy lines on the edge of the

same jagged,but not scratchy.

The campus,red maple,holly green,a passionate,full of vitality,this is

really the mental outlook of our young pioneers it!I love autumn,I love the fall

on campus.

SinceI was a little baby, my parents read simple stories for me. They bought me manycartoon books with stories. They were my bedtime stories. Among all theinteresting stories, I like fairy tales most, because they are often beautifullove stories between prince and princes or Cinderella. They are so moved andfull of love. Besides, in fairy tales, no matter how much they suffer, theywill always live a happy life in the end. The happy endings bring hope andsatisfaction to people, making us hopeful to our own lives. Every time I readfairy tales, I put myself into the story, imagining I am one of them. That’swonderful.

The first fall of snow is not only an event but it is a magical event. You go to bed in one kind of world and wake up to find yourself in another quite different, and if this is not enchantment, then where is it to be found?

The very stealth, the eerie quietness, of the thing makes it more magical. Ifall the snow fell at once in one shattering crash, awakening us in the middle of the night the event would be robbed of its wonder. But it flutters down, soundless, hour after hour while we are asleep. Outside the closed curtains of the bedroom a vast transfbrmation scene is takiag place, just as if a myriad elves and brownies were at work, and we turn and yawn and stretch and know nothing about it. And then, what an extraordinary change it is! It is as if the house continent. Even the inside, which has not been touched, seems different, every room appearing smaller and cosier, just as if some power were trying to turn it into a woodcutter’s hut or a snug logcabin. Outside, where the garden was yesterday, there is now a white and glistening level, and the village beyond is no longer your own familiar cluster of roofs but a village in an old German fairy-tale.

You would not be surprised to learn that all the people there, the speetacled postmistress, the cobbler, the retired school master, and the rest, had suffered a change too and had become queer elvish beings, purveyors of invisible caps and magic shoes. You yourselves do not feel quite the same people you were yesterday. How could you not when so much has been changed? There is a curious stir, a little shiver of excite-ment, troubling the house, not unlike the feeling there is abroad when a journey has to be made. The children, of course, are all excitement but even the adults hang about and talk to one another longer than usual before setting down to the day’s work. Nobody can resist the windows. It is like being on board a ship.

As a child, I am very naughty and forget about what my mother tells me. One time, I go back home very late. When I see my mother, she smiles at first and then turns angry, because she has told me before if I go home late, I must tell her in advance. I let my mother heart-broken. I feel sorry and promise it won’t happen again.

小时候，我很顽皮，忘记了妈妈交代过的事情。有一次，我回家很晚，当我看到妈妈时，她先是微笑，然后马上就生气了，因为她以前告诉我，如果我回家晚了，就必须提前告诉她。我让妈妈心碎了，我感到非常抱歉，并承诺不会再发生这种事了。

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

[初一年级作文教学实录

Nothing can be more exciting than success to a man. But you must face many difficulties before you can succeed. No one can make it easily. And it’s harder for those who are in adverse conditions to succeed.

However,everything has two sides. Just as someone said, in every adversity there lies the seed of an advantage and in every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory next time. The most important forus is to establish a brief, that is perseverance. The British ex-prime minister Winston Churchill had a motto of "Never, never, never, never give up . Nothing can substitute for hard work. Life is a process of struggle for success.

禁锢的翅膀始终有着关于蓝天的梦想，碧空下的一双双眼睛，充斥着对飞翔的渴望。只等冲破枷锁的刹那，完成多年的宿愿。

年轻就是资本。在青春岁月里，我们遭遇的困惑与挫折恐怕数不胜数了，每一次跌倒，即使再疼，笑着告诉自己，花样年华，经得住风吹雨打。我们还年轻，我们还有的是时间，失败了，别放弃，重头再来也值得鼓励。抬头挺胸，阔步向前，豪迈的转身，对失败说：“拜拜。”这样的我们，蓬勃向上，定会在时光的余晖里留下辉煌的背影。

年轻就是动力。答应过自己的话时刻盘旋在耳边，警醒着自己。既然年轻，就该是精神抖擞的。面对生命中的一个个“关卡”，即使“通行证”再难获取，终归也是有途径的。只要方法对，百折不回的“冲锋”，时间哪有攻不陷的“堡垒?”只要没倒下，就有机会，而我们也不会倒下。因为我们有的是原动力，开足“马力”，放手一搏，激情四射的每一天，任风侵雨蚀，早已镶成永不褪色的老照片。

年请允许幻想，却不允许痴心妄想。年轻人心中应该有一个梦，与未来有关的梦。这个梦会是航海时的罗盘，指引着方向。这个梦会是星空下的薄雾，剪不断的纱。若即若离，不离不弃。我们朝着梦中的影子前进，一步一个脚印。累了，或是泪了，那斑驳的梦会抚平你所有的伤痛，叫你怎么能割舍一直想要的自己?而这一切不同于黄粱一梦，不是梦醒了继续睡就会重新浮现的。它需要默默耕耘时种下希冀，然后去编织，去劳作，才会收获那含苞待放的花儿。绽放的倩影背后，是泪水与汗水交织的灌溉。

年轻终究会不再年轻。即便是将死之人也是从年轻过来的。而当你站在任何一个将死之人面前的时候，他们都会给的忠告肯定是“珍惜你那未曾老去的容颜。”这就告诉我们再年轻也会成为过去，那把锉刀总会叫你体无完肤的。而我们能做的，无非是活在当下了去做那些有意义却一直未去做的事，我已相信，在不疯狂我们真的老了。抓住现下的时光，才是对年轻最好的诠释，对生命最美的囊括。

渴盼那宽广的胸怀，容纳一切的梦中，藏着心底最深的秘密。趁着我们还年轻，还在爱做梦的年纪，去抓住风中那一袭白衣吧。

Mother, it is we are thankful people was born. Who is how many years, every day in the laundry to cook for us, who are both in sorching summer, or in the snow after send us to school, and hurried off to work, who is lets us grow from day to day in her arms, and she is getting old, who has raised us, but I do not wish for any return. Is mother! Life, some people are looking for a mothers love, but dont ignore the ubiquity of maternal love!

Remember the night I was only five years old, it was raining, I have a fever, my father on a business trip is not at home, mother picked up I will go to the hospital, my mother in the hospital a night didnt sleep a wink, eyes staring at the bottle of intravenous drip, until my fever is gone, she finally breathed a sigh of relief. Then my mother again give me water, and to buy me a delicious. Looked at his mother busy figure, I secretly in my heart swear: must study hard repay mother.

Another time, just learning English month, I had to 81 points, the bottom of the class. In the face of such scores, I would be ready to get training, returned home after mother knew, not only not scold me, comfort me, dont lose heart, and now the English course at the beginning, as long as you listen more from now on, read more, write more, practice more. Performance will improve soon. Mother said. This time is I overlooked your English study, later I accompany you a piece of learning. This situation really than scold me, hit me also makes me uncomfortable. From then on, no matter how busy mom, always "nutrition" for me, everything comes to him who waits, the mid-term exam, I achieved good scores of 95 points.

Mother, you have to use solid arms hold up a piece of blue sky for me, when I am frustrated fall, is the care you with infinite comfort me, encouraged me, so I can stand up again. Today, I will use my growing plump wings for you -- -- my mother from the rain.

母亲，是我们一出生都值得感恩的人。多少个岁月，是谁每天起早贪黑的为我们洗衣做饭，是谁无论在炎炎夏日，还是在冰天雪地送我们上学之后，又匆匆赶去上班，是谁让我们在她的臂弯一天天成长，而她却一天天变老，是谁养育了我们，却不求任何的回报。是母亲!生活中，有些人在寻找着母爱，却不忽略了无处不在的母爱!

记得5岁那年的一天晚上，天下着雨，我发烧了，父亲出差不在家，母亲抱起我就去医院，在医院里妈妈一宿没合眼，两眼一直盯着瓶子里的点滴，直到我的发烧退了，妈妈才长舒了一口气。接着妈妈又是给我喂水，又是给我买好吃的。看着妈妈忙碌的身影，我暗暗在心里发誓：一定要努力学习报答妈妈。

还有一次，刚学英语月考时，我只得了81分，全班倒数几名。面对这样的分数，我做好了挨训的准备，回到家妈妈知道后，不但没有训我，反而安慰我，不要灰心，现在英语这门课刚开始，只要你从现在开始多听，多读，多写，多练习。成绩会提高很快。妈妈还说。这段时间是我忽略了你的英语学习，以后我陪你一块学。这情景真比骂我，打我还令我难受。从那以后，妈妈不管多忙，总是为我“补充营养”，功夫不负有心人，期中考试时，我取得了95分的好成绩。

母亲，您曾用坚实的臂弯为我撑起一片蓝天，当我受到挫折跌倒时，是您用无限的关怀安慰我，鼓励我，使我能重新站起来。而今，我也要用我日益丰满的羽翼为您————我的妈妈遮风挡雨。

A lunar New Year, no doubt, is sound, taste and township.

A New Years eve firecrackers. Melody in the New Year, fireworks is low and grand drums, heavy yet explosive, accompanied by a large umbrella of scattering flowers, jinlong fall and arc of the rainbow, here every corner of the flower, a pair of, a group of cheng fang, a piece, a world, in a sudden the incomparable luster. And on the square table, and celebrate the applause, light spirit is ringing, can not help but think of "harps friend" -- it is natural to performance, the smile of gentle feeling let everyone around without his joy. Then a sound clear gong, it is in the middle of the night the cheer of the New Year, is not so short but lingering sound waves, times, stretches, like a stream, seeped into next year. In the end, a string of bells sound, it so mysterious, as if the passage of time, is at the end of the sea and the nien beast roar.

Through every form, and to have bouts of aroma. Like bacon that hard sweet, like the mutton soup hot sweet, like the natural aroma of coarse grains like steamed bread fresh incense, sweet like a sausage chewy, like dumplings a pack of sweet juice, like nuts, crisp sweet, like good old 994 stuffed sweet ChunChun... The fragrance, as they themselves. A wisp of fragrance, flavor, a dish, a table, a handful of happiness. I like dumplings, white white fat, quietly lying on the soup. It successfully, that sweet thick sesame paste, now a love heart.

JianJu the most popular cartoon "bears in the New Years day" in a situation: even if a lumberjack, also know that mothers dumplings, dads wine, are looking forward to the calendar page, end the arrival of the New Years eve. Whether its cold rime, shaking winter bamboo shoot, a speeding train, shimmering bright lights... Township, there is only one, let the wanderer to gallop tirelessly.

But you have such a scene: in the mobile phone clicking, hands of quick-frozen dumplings immodesty slide to the ground, fell to pieces, like a boom ray reminds you, want to travel to Hong Kong this year Spring Festival. So, the sound? Taste? Township?

一个春节，无疑便在于声、味、乡。

爆竹声中一岁除。过年的曲谱中，烟花是低沉而隆重的大鼓，重重的一声声爆响，伴随着大伞的散花、金龙的出落和弧形的彩虹，在这儿的每个角落一朵、一双、一群、一片、一世界地盛放，在瞬间迸发出无与伦比的光彩。八仙桌上的谈笑，与庆祝的掌声，轻灵清脆，不禁联想到“琴瑟友之”——它自然是尽情的琴声了，笑的柔和让周围的每个人都情不自己地欢欣起来。然后是一声清亮的锣响，它就是午夜时分新年的那一阵欢呼，虽短，但余音袅袅，不绝如缕，一直绵延着，就如一条溪，汩汩地流向明年。最终，有一串编钟声，它那么神秘，好像是时间的流逝，是沧海尽头年兽的咆哮。

走过每一个门洞，都有一阵阵的香飘来。像是腊肉那硬硬的香，像是羊肉汤那热乎乎的香，像是粗粮天然的香，像是馒头新鲜出炉的香，像是香肠有嚼劲的香，像是饺子一包汁的香，像是坚果干脆的香，像是陈年佳994酿醇醇的香……这香味，就如它们本身。一缕香，一丝味，一盘菜，一桌人，一捧幸福。我最喜欢汤圆，白白胖胖，安静地躺在汤里。它圆满的外表下，那甜稠的芝麻馅，宛然一颗爱心。

简举最红的动画片《熊出没之过年》中的一情景：就算一个伐木工，也懂得，妈妈的饺子，爸爸的酒，都是期待着日历的那一页，岁末除夕的到来。不管是冰冷的雾淞，晃动的冬笋，飞驰的火车，灿亮的灯光……乡，只有一个，让游子不倦地飞奔。

但是你的身边有这样的场面吗：在手机的点击声中，手里的速冻汤圆不慎滑落在地，跌得粉碎，像轰雷般提醒了你，今年春节要去香港旅游。如是这样，声呢?味呢?乡呢?

我的梦想是出国旅行并且环游世界一周，因为世界是如此的大，充满着许许多多新奇的事物。

My dream is to travel and travel around the world for a week, because the world is so big, full of a lot of new things.

我想出国是因为我想认识更多地方、更多美食以及更多朋友，而且我很想又坐飞机，虽然之前去英语村有模拟搭飞机的程序，但是还是想要那种如同老鹰般翱翔在天空的感受。但是，要出国需要很多的费用， 所以，我现在决定开始不乱花钱了，零用也要存起来，长大以后，我更要努力赚钱，然后带着全家人一起出国。

I want to go abroad because I wanted to know more, more and more Food friend, and I want to fly, although before going to the English village is simulated by plane, but still want that kind of like an eagle soaring in the sky feel. However, the cost of going abroad to a lot, so I decided to start, do not spend money now, pocket to keep up, grow up, I want to work hard to make money, and then with the whole family together to go abroad.

有言道“读万卷书不如行万里路。”到世界各地开阔视野，增长知识，我一定要朝着这个目标努力前进。

Its been said "read 10000 books is." To broaden our horizons, increase of knowledge around the world, I must work hard towards this goal.

In recent years, it has been reported that a large number of people cut

trees down without a plan and triggered many problems. From this matter, we

should realize the importance of trees and take measures to prevent this kind of

inappropriate action.

The importance of trees is mainly featured in following aspects. First, it

is well-known that trees provide us with woods and other products. In addition,

trees are very helpful in preventing water loss and soil erosion and keeping the

nutrition of soil. Finally, trees have a great contribution in purifying air and

make our environment be fresher.

Therefore, in order to make our earth become better, we need to take some

actions to prevent this action of cutting trees without a plan. For one thing,

our government needs to take some mandatory measures to prevent illegal felling.

Besides, our government should keep advocating people planting trees as many as

possible. For another, we need to enhance our awareness of trees protection and

environment protection, and participate in all kinds of activities of planting

trees and protecting trees.