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2017年广东中考英语作文(汇编20篇)

在英语学习过程中,我们常常会需要撰写议论文,大家看看下面的2017年广东中考英语作文吧!

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自律的乐趣

给初三学弟学妹的一封信

新学期已经开始,今年学校进行了教育改革,将课程改成了上午五节课与下午四节练习课。其实这本像是一场赌局,因为下午的四节练习课赌的正是同学们的自律。无论是对升学率还是我们都是极大的挑战,那些自觉、自律、认真的同学可以竿头直上、日就月将,而那些不自觉的同学更会退行千里、雪上加霜。可以说这个决定是一场意志的磨炼,你准备好了吗?

在当今社会,最靠谱的不是你有多少金钱,你有多大靠山,而是你是否是个优秀、自律的人。人们说:“自律的人最可怕。”这是为何?难道是自律的人凶残无比吗?不,不是的。

人们所畏惧的是那颗积极向上、不受干扰、严于律己的心啊。有一颗自律的心,你不怕世间的_;有一颗自律的心,你不惧前路的艰险;有一颗自律的心,你不缺高尚的友人。你说自律是多么强大,你视他人所追求的的功名利禄为粪土,你可以比别人的内心更强大、坚定,你比别人更优秀,那么,养成自律的习惯何乐而不为呢?

自律的人往往是优秀的、大有作为的人。就如曾国藩,一个幼年时笨到读了百遍的课文都无法背诵的人,后来居然成为清朝中兴之臣,这真是让人大吃一惊。他为何有如此成就?

如果他幼年时期没有自觉地学习而去安逸享乐,他会如此名震四方吗?曾国藩曾经有好色的缺点,为了改正每天写日记责骂自己禽兽不如,以此警醒自我。从他开始写日记起,他从未断过,直到临死前一天还在写,你说这样一个严于律己的人是多么令人敬畏。他将极致的自律贯穿到底,人们怎能不会称他为“半个圣人”呢?他的一生正印证了苏轼的一句话:“古之成大事者,不惟有超世之才,亦必有坚忍不拔之志。”

曾国藩的《诫子书》中说:“自修之道,莫难于养心;养心之难,又在慎独。”自律之难,难于精心,难于不受纷扰。若能严于律己,方能秀出班行!

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篇1:一场足球比赛中考英语作文

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Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.

I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.

昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力,但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信,他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。

我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。

Yesterday evening the team of China played against the team of Brazil. The game started at 7: 30. It was an exciting game.Brazilian Team is the best one in the world. Everyone in the team of China tried his best, but the team of Brazil was too strong.Chinese Team couldn't stop them. They kicked four goals, and our team lost the game.

We hope the players in Chinese Team can make great progress, and it will be a strong team one day.

昨天晚上,中国足球对迎战巴西足球队。比赛在7:30开始。那是一场令人激动的比赛。巴西队是世界上最好的足球队,中国队的每个队员都尽了最大努力,但是巴西队太强大了。中国队根本抵御不住他们的进攻,最终以零比四输了这场比赛。

我们希望中国足球队队员能取得较大的进步,将来能成为一个强队。

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篇2:2024年中考英语作文模板:减肥问题

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今天又为大家更新一篇中考作文范文,关于减肥问题的。

假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。

Dear Xiaowei,

Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So Idon’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating lateat night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are goodfor you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running isgreat. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends?Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will bewilling to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losingweight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’sreally important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sureyou will succeed one day.

Good luck.

Editor

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篇3:中考英语作文素材:中国新年

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chinese new year is a chinese traditional festival. we also call it the spring festival. it is on lunar january 1st.

on new year’s eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. there are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. after dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. we have a wonderful evening on new year’s eve.on the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. after breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. on the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

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篇4:最新中考英语作文

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A great man said: "forget the past means betrayal!" Let usmove along the time tunnel, to feel this extraordinary history.

Since the founding of the people in every field, China hasmade great progress.

In agriculture, the father of hybrid rice in China famous yuanlongping, produced the planting, has many advantages such as highyield of rice, grain yield was obviously improved, now China notonly, and still can self-sufficiency in grain output a lot fromabroad. Also, that the Chinese are called "agricultural country",not fictitious.

In the military, on November 5, 1960, the first missile soaredinto the sky, 16 October 1946, spectacular RuYun sing to the sky,in Chinas rising rob from the atomic bomb has its own, Founding 50years, we also daqing to show the world our armed forcesmodernization of weapons and equipment. These are proved ourmilitary technology weaponry and equipment has greatlydeveloped.

In science and technology, shenzhou 6 manned spacecraftsuccessfully developed is a good example.

Students, we are happy new generation, also have importantresponsibility of the new generation. Our today determines therevival of the Chinese nation tomorrow. Let us of carrying forwardthe national spirit, the XiongHun. "Far, BuPaLei, inquisitive a"spirit, knowledge, skills, and strong physique, practice spirit ofpatriotism, trees, country and ready: for our great motherlandspeace and development.

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篇5:广东中考优秀

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舞台

“嚓”,聚光灯刺破黑暗,打在身上。身处高台,我从容地鞠了个躬,款款坐下。

微微仰头,灯光如月光流水般淌来,心头思潮随之阵阵涌起。我缓缓抬手,琴音从指尖溢出……

曲子前奏温凉如水。一如我初学这首歌时的态度。每日练琴总是有些心不在焉,时间还有很多呢,窗外阳光正好呢,楼下伙伴们的嬉笑很欢呢……每次复课,老师总是皱着眉。我暗自撇着嘴巴,不以为意。

那一天,老师让我提前半小时上课。我准点到达,课室门却依然紧闭。透过窗,师姐正在凝神上课,目光如矩。随着纤纤细手按挑勾拨,音乐就如一个个小精灵手拉手一串串亮相,有的端庄款步,有的调皮蹦跶,有的止步沉吟……师姐也融入音乐中,仿佛已化身为曲中的小精灵。我叹为天籁,音乐却嘎然而止。只见师姐微微蹙眉,低头沉思一会,又抬手重来……我恍然大悟,才知道自己所欠缺的东西。于是,每节课,我都提前到,看着师姐练,听着师姐弹,回到家,从形到神地模仿;每每想松懈时,师姐蹙眉重弹的身影自动浮现,我知道,那是我的方向。

曲子高 潮激情四射。一如演出前疯狂练习的我。曲子的高

潮部分我还是练不好,总是欠缺速度和力道,狂野恣肆之气无法显露。阳光越来越毒辣,天气越来越炎热,离表演日子越来越近。那一天,老师忽然轻轻地拉起我的手,说:“你想象一下你正在大草原上驰骋,心有多大,舞台

我闭上眼,软细的双手莫名地充满一股劲儿,如一匹健硕的野马,二十一条琴弦,便是我的广阔无垠的草原。马儿肆意地奔跑,摔了跤,不要紧,站起来,继续跑。马儿的身影晃得人眼花缭乱,马蹄与大地的接触发出惊天动地的回音……经过半个多月的苦练,我的手指越来越灵活,声音也越来越浑厚,我找到了,那是我的力量。

聚光灯下,我的手指在琴弦上跳跃着,舞动着,像森林间小鹿,宛若精灵;又似脱缰的野马,如此不羁。飘逸的衣袖也配合着清脆的琴音,时而飘扬,时而低拂。冷色的指甲映照着绚丽的灯光,闪烁着我的眼睛。不看身后的大投屏,我也能想象到我的豪气干云,酣畅淋漓的模样。

身处高台,厚积薄发,这是我;台上三分钟,台下十年功,十年间埋头坚持,三分钟艳丽绽放,这才是少年应有的模样!

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篇6:2024年中考英语作文题目预测:财富篇

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[适用话题]“财富”“我有一个梦”“慈善”“奉献”等。

Money Everything?(金钱就是一切吗?)

At present some people think that money is everything. They say that you can do everything if you have money. You can live in a beautiful house, keep a luxurious ear and have all sorts of delicious food.

I dont think so. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. But there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough/; with money.

For example, knowledge cannot be bought with money. One cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. Time cannot be bought with money, either. Who can buy even a second with money?

There are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. Just think, if a person hasnt these things at all, is the money still useful?

Now, do you think money is everything?

金钱就是一切吗?

近来,有些人认为钱就是一切,他们说,要是有了钱,你就可以做任何事情,你可以住舒适的房子,坐豪华的轿车,吃可口的饭菜,

我不这么认为。的确,钱可以买到我们需要的许多东西,但是,世界上还有许多美丽的东西用钱是买不到的。

例如,知识是买不来的,一个人要想获得丰富的知识,只有通过艰苦的学习。时间用钱也是

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篇7:中考英语作文:MayDay五一劳动节

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May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

May Day is my favorite day!

五月一日是一个星期日。这是劳动节。妈妈对我说:“打开你的眼睛,看看窗外。多么好的一天!让我们去公园,“所以我的母亲,我的同学和我去公园。我书包里带了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看到一些梨树和苹果树等。在树下面,有几种不同种类的花。它是丰富多彩的,蓝色,红色,黄色,粉色,紫色,橙色和白色。我看到一些气球和蝴蝶在天空。我吃了爆米花,玉米片,香蕉和棒棒糖。他们都很棒。在下午,我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类,老鼠,猫,狗,鹦鹉,仓鼠,兔子等。可能是我最喜欢的一天!

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篇8:2024中考英语作文预测:交通安全塞车和车祸

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越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含:

1、遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。

2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3、可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。

4、参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注:第一段已给出,不计入总数

参考范文:

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

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篇9:英语作文写作指导:中考英语作文万能句子

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下面是语文迷网小编为大家整理的中考英语作文万能句型,欢迎大家阅读参考。

一、开头句型选择

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____。

2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____。 What makes things worse is that______。

4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______。 Many people like ______because ______。 Besides,______。

5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them,_____。

7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.

8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______while. Obviously,______,but why?

11、Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

最近,…问题已引起人们的关注。

12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题。

13、Nowadays,(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

14、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…

二、结尾句型

1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。

5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

8、不用说…… It goes without saying that = It is obvious that …

例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

9、……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……

是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

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篇10:2024中考英语作文万能句子精选

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导语:2016中考不久就要到了,写英语作文的时候可以套用万能句型。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。

1.打算做....../计划做......

intend /plan to do 打算做......

be going to do 打算做......

decide to do决定做......

determine to do决定做......

be determine to do 决定做......

make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......

2.想/希望......

want to do= would like to do想做......

hope to do希望做......

expect to do期待做......

wish to do 希望做......

consider doing 考虑做......

looking forward to doing盼望做......

dream of doing 梦想做......

cant help doing 情不自禁地做......

3.表示喜欢和感兴趣

like /love doing 喜欢做......

enjoy doing 喜欢做.......

be fond of doing 喜欢做......

be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......

prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣

show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣

4.其他短语

keep on doing 坚持做......

keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......

be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......

spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......

have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难

满分句型

1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...

2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...

...too...to do 太...而不能...

such...that...如此...以至于...

3.not...until...直到...才...

4. The reason why+句子is that +句子...的原因是...

5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因

6. That is because+句子 那是因为...

7.It is said that+句子 据报道...

It is reported that+句子 据报道...

8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...

9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...

10. There is no need to do 没必要做...

11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做

13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?

14. I think you should do我认为你应该...

15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...

16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话,我会做...

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篇11:英语中考作文练习TalkingaboutHavingSports

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根据下面的提示,以Talking about Having Sports为题编写一段对话(字数:80--120)。

提示:

Susan每天下午参加体育活动。她喜欢游泳,每星期游泳一次。David在中学时代也常游泳,但现在没有时间,人也开始发胖了。Susan邀请David当天下午一起去游泳,并约定下午三点在游泳池见面。

Talking about Having Sports

David: Susan, you like sports, dont you?

Susan: Yes. I have sports every afternoon.

David: Do you often go swimming?

Susan: Yes, I go swimming once a week.

David: I used to swim at middle school, but I don t have time any more.

Susan: Thats too bad! Exercise is very important.

David: I know. I am getting fat, you see. Anyway, I dont want to be heavy.

Susan: Well, Im going to swim this afternoon. Do you want to go with me?

David: OK! I really need more exercises. When and where shall we meet?

Susan: How about three oclock, at the swimming-pool?

David: All right. Good-bye!

Susan: Good-bye!

[英语中考作文练习Talking about Having Sports

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篇12:广东中考学生的必备描写话题

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马克思曾说过:“只有劳动才能创造价值,是劳动创造了世界,劳动最光荣!”

说到劳动,让我想起之前看过的一个小视频——一个农民工叔叔坐公交车,那时候车上没有其他的乘客,位置上空空如也,他却坐在了地板上。

售票员说:“您坐位子上吧!劳动光荣,您是我们眼里最干净的人!”售货员扶着农民工叔叔站起来。

可是他再三推辞:“我身上实在太脏了,我怕弄在你们的椅子。”

“您坐!您工作一天也辛苦了!”

“谢谢!谢谢!”他连连道谢,他没有立马坐下,而是把身上的外套脱下来,平铺在椅子上,小心翼翼的坐下,坐的笔直笔直的,丝毫不敢靠着背椅!他明明那么地累,还不愿意给别人造成麻烦,劳动人民最光荣!

还记得之前,他是一位环卫工人,每天天还没亮,他就开始一天的工作,打扫街道,清理垃圾,一直工作到店铺都开始营业,他就会来店里买早餐——仅仅是一瓶纸盒的便宜饮料以及一个绿豆饼,付钱时,他那粗糙干燥的手,就会在皱巴巴的钱里搓搓,慢慢的把两块钱拿出来。

下午他还会再来一次,远远的就看见他,拖着疲惫的身躯,沉重的步伐,慢悠悠的走着走着,他没有直接走里店里,而且小心翼翼地把鞋子脱下来,生怕把泥土带进店里,生怕把地板弄脏,付完钱,老板对他说:“下次啊,您不用担心把地板弄脏,您尽管进来就好,地板脏了我们可以在拖,您来,我们很开心!劳动人民最光荣,辛苦了!”

“谢谢!谢谢!”他似乎被老板感动到了,眼泪从红丝的眼眶里流了出来!

没错!劳动最光荣,劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽。最美是你。

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篇13:2024年中考英语作文写作技巧解读

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一、写作决窍

总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;

关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;

组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;

字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿,后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求:

1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]:档次9-11分。

①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露,理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]:档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体:记叙文。

②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错,写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求:

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺。

3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示:

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源,再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]:

①文体:记叙文。

②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。

③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]:

①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

②时态:一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

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篇14:2024中考英语作文预测例文

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2018中考英语作文预测:Talk about Internet

Today,I’ll talk about going online. We know thatthere are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to usethe computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us cleverthrough playing computer games. I can sende-mails to our friends quickly. We can chatonline with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系) people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government doesn’t allow communication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons andthey don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn’t goonline when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winterholidays.

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篇15:中考英语作文:健康问题1000字

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How tokeep healthy /fit?

All of us want to be healthy. First,we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second,we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third,we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally,we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger。

That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 (1)保持健康的重要性;(2)保持健康的方法;(3)保持健康的结论;(4)你的看法。

How to keep healthy /fit?

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy/fit. As a middle shool student. first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games ,running, swimming and jumping ropes(绳子)。Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat or suger,but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

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篇16:广东中考作文题目预测

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乐在其中

这是一种凡人的快乐,不浓烈,不滂沱,却可以渗透到生活的每一条缝隙里,弥漫在整个房间……——题记

勇于面对,前程似锦

世上没有不凋零的花,人间没有不弯曲的路。在人生的旅途中,难免会遇到挫折。不要怕,它只是一段小插曲,抬起头来,直起腰来,相信自己“我能行”!你,就是主宰者,主宰着你的生活。怕什么!向前冲就是希望。就让我们尽情享受挫折带来的乐趣。

读万卷书,行万里路

读书破万卷,下笔如有神。多读书有助于我们开阔思维,陶冶情操。一个真正的读者会热衷于读书,只要一读书,自己就会完全沉浸在书的世界,一个只有读书人才能了解的境地,他们喜欢那种感觉。

客路青山外,行舟绿水前

“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”,这是陶渊明的生活情趣。这不是人人都可以享受到的。现今世界,人们追名逐利,你争我抢,明争暗斗。人们被金钱名誉冲昏了头脑,为什么不能看淡一点呢?只要你停下脚步细心观察你的周围,用心体会,你就会感受到快乐的,那是与追名逐利截然不同的乐趣……

我的日子仍然安稳地继续着,一直延伸到我看不见的地方。如今的我,努力学习,学习就是我的乐趣,读书就是我的乐趣,交友也是我的乐趣……

时间悄无声息地从指尖滑过,我把多数的心思放在了学习上,不知不觉中初三就这样的过去了,回想起来,那些人、那些事都让我难以忘怀。太多的美好回忆让我沉浸其中……

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篇17:我的学校生活中考英语作文100字

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i like my school life very much,it is very interesting.i usually reach school at half past seven.then we do morning exercises at eight oclock.we have eight lessons every day.the lesson begin at a quarter past eight.my favourite subject is english.i can get a lot of english knowledge from our teacher.our teacher are very good-natured.they are always kind to us.i also like our outdoor activities.when we have outdoor activities,everyone in the playground is active and lively.how happy we are in our beautiful school!i love the life in my school!

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篇18:英语中考作文:诚信

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请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括:1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。

提示词:traditional virtue(传统美德), wolves(狼), tell lies(撒谎)

To Be an Honest Man

As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.

I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.

Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.

[英语中考作文:诚信

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篇19:广东中考作文题目预测

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舍得

人生总恍若初次相见,是杨柳下那一抹天蓝色的身影折光入我眼眸,桃花相映红;人生里我们携手共前,笑看天下永并肩。然而,时光流逝似刀斩缱绻,我哀叹劝解自己说,舍得

一回眸,一转身。是否是那一次漫步就敲定了我们的今生缘?定入那共同的心扉。是否是这一次的共苦,便决定了我们今生的相知?刻入一样的明眸。

我道是天下无不散的筵席,却终究迈不过这坎,放不下心去分别,放不下心去相离。

舍不得,舍不得那解救我于数学题海中的手,一笔一划化解无数的难题,终了却用一个笑脸融化我脱口而出的言谢——我懂,我们之间心意相通,不必言此。

舍不得,舍不得那同我一起大扫除的身影,一擦一抹中挥洒着汗水的少女,从不道苦累言乏味,末了用一声击掌道出我的欣慰——得友如斯,吾之甚幸!

舍不得,舍不得那与我笑谈风声的语调,一扬一抑里漂浮着的是无尽的依恋,即便爱好不同,却依旧能欢声笑语,似钟子期与俞伯牙之间的高山流水——你是我的知音,天下仅有。

行舟千里终有一别,心中纵然是千般不舍,却也只能无语凝噎……

说舍得

说舍得

一支信笺,约定一起看花开花落,云起云覆,潮涨潮汐。

挣断一直纠缠我们的优柔寡断,勇敢的面对那即将到来的分别。说舍得

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篇20:食品安全中考英语作文

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a publishing house on food safety. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety

June 15th, 2006

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for taking time to read this letter. As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.

Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned?ish in the

food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the mouth?atering chicken. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.

This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.

Thanks!

Yours,

Julie

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