中考必考英语作文带翻译优秀20篇

Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数８０左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_____________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Tom

I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep going’.

今天，我做了一个决定，有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样，我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在，我要说一句：加油!

Dear teachers, students are good:

My name is Xiao Ming, is a confident, cheerful, friendly and active girl, I have widespread interest hobby, piano, reading, playing chess, listening to the story, to host performances and also has a strong interest in, hosted by my kindergarten graduation performance, first prize in a good result.

Mom and Dad, the kindergarten teachers careful cultivation, I have become a qualified primary school students, in the next six years to learn life, can and dear teachers, the students become the best friends! We all together happy to learn, happy to grow!

Thank you!

亲爱的老师，同学们好：

我叫小明，是一个自信，开朗，友好，积极向上的小女孩，我有着广泛的兴趣爱好，弹琴、看书、下棋、听故事，也对主持和表演也有着浓厚的兴趣，由我主持的幼儿园毕业演出，获得了一等奖第一名的好成绩。

在爸爸妈妈，幼儿园老师的精心培育下，我已成为一名合格的小学生，希望在今后六年的学习生活中，能和亲爱的老师，同学们成为最好的朋友！我们大家一起快乐地学习，快乐地成长!

谢谢大家！

地球上板块与板块之间相互挤压碰撞，造成板块边沿及板块内部产生错动和破裂，是引起地震的主要原因。以下是小编带来的关于地震的英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

Strong earthquake composition of the devastating earthquake so large, to show once again brought out. In the vicinity of the epicenter, and in some cities and villages, many houses collapsed and damaged roads, telecommunications disruption, many schools and hospitals have become ruins. Human vibrant homes, Zhuanshun between appalling.

This is a natural disaster caused by difficult to avoid the tragedy, it is sad. And this kind of tragedy, and in fact the long history of human companions, Ruyingsuixing. Far not said that the 1976 Tangshan earthquake, despite the past 32 years but has remained a matter of fear. In 1998 the major flood disaster in 2003, the "atypical pneumonia" crisis, the end of 2004 Indian Ocean tsunami and the recent tropical storm in Myanmar, have caused a large number of casualties and property losses. Human nature is no stranger to disaster, but when Wenchuan earthquake and the plain reality of the time, the natural power of human beings before the fragile, exposed completely.

Wenchuan earthquake, the people to disaster areas has caused tremendous physical and mental suffering, but also makes the map as a small region, the people throughout the country the most about the place. As a so-called human life, compatriots suffering in some of the time, the countrys grief out of the full performance. The international community has also expressed concern about the rapid and condolences.

When a major earthquake has occurred, and aftershocks continued, the key word at this time only a matter of fact the word "save" and "assistance." In a sense, the "assistance" is also "save" an integral part. There is no doubt that relief has become Chinas current government and the people most important task.

Disaster relief to save what » This seems to be without a thought. But in fact, the true meaning of disaster relief must be clarified. The primary task of relief, when in order to save lives. Compared with the life, property loss and post-disaster reconstruction and so has been relatively minor, or that include the rescue of property and the seismic reflection of the problem, should be moved back to "save lives" extremely important After that.

In the earthquake disaster site to direct rescue of Premier Wen Jiabao said a word, "as long as both hands, will be able to rebuild their homes" - these words to the real interpretation of the true meaning of the disaster. In other words, this is also the Chinese government will as a primary task of saving the idea of the source. That is only one life, not to the other of alternative, the response must be to the fastest speed, with the greatest efforts, even at the cost to take any means, "at any cost," the disaster areas to save peoples lives.

This means that the government-led rescue system should be the focus fell on the lives of the rescue. With the passage of time, the number of casualties will also continue to increase. Safety of the lives of tens of thousands of people, in fact, the most severe disaster order. As long as theres hope that the front line, who must rescue efforts to hundredfold, from the ruins in search for possible survivors, from under collapsed buildings in a rescue every life.

It should be noted that not only rely on relief confidence, courage and a spirit of solidarity, but also rely on the professional rescue teams and technical configuration. Although available for disaster relief to everyone, but under certain conditions, relief is also a live technical, professional and strong, high-risk, large amount of labor. Can not fail to mention that Chinese soldiers once again played a "steel wall" role in the relief difficult conditions, the elite combat units in the affected areas to give full expression to the mighty army of glory. The young Chinese soldiers in the affected areas of the rescue scenario is indeed deeply felt the blood is thicker than water like fish and water deeply.

Will save lives as the overriding priority, also means that aid must race against time, and death race. Those dying in the ruins of the life, is eagerly awaited relief. "Time is life," meaning, at this point has been the most vivid expression. Early into the second relief to the affected areas, we can save a life back. In the epicenter of local traffic inconvenience or even interrupted the circumstances, Premier Wen Jiabao asked the rescue team "is to walk as soon as possible into the most affected areas," highlighted the earthquake relief the importance of the concept of time.

It should also be noted that the earthquake disaster relief is not just a matter of the Government. As the face of ever, a major natural disaster, the governments influence, life-saving operations, but also relies on public and non-governmental organizations surmount. Including encouraging the spirit of the people of disaster areas, material support, including positive and practical actions, such as blood donation, both will have a positive effect rescue operations. Wenchuan after the earthquake, many enterprises and individuals, has begun an emergency donation of property, to the most needed areas. Non-disaster areas the peoples blessings and encouragement, people have fully felt the warmth and firm national strength.

No Valentines love of natural disasters. In a battle to save the lives of all people, the victory will come after a disaster test of the Chinese nation.

强地震的破坏力如此之大，又一次淋漓尽致地呈现出来。在震中以及附近的一些城市与乡村，许多房屋倒塌，道路毁坏，电信中断，不少学校与医院成了废墟。人类生机勃勃的家园，转瞬之间惨不忍睹。

这是一场由自然灾难造成的难以躲避的悲剧，令人悲痛。而这样的悲剧，事实上与人类漫长的历史相伴，如影随形。远的不说，1976年的唐山大地震，尽管已经过去32年，但至今依然令人心有余悸。1998年的特大洪涝灾害、2003年的“非典”危机、2004年底的印度洋海啸，以及最近发生在缅甸的热带风暴，都造成了大量的人员伤亡和财产损失。人类对于自然灾难并不陌生，但是，当汶川大地震现实地摆在眼前的时候，人类在自然威力前的脆弱，显露无遗。

汶川大地震，给灾区的民众造成了巨大的身心痛苦，也使得地图上那样一个狭小的区域，成为全国人民最为牵挂的地方。所谓人命关天，在部分同胞受难之时，举国的悲恸充分表现了出来。国际社会也迅速表达了关切与慰问。

当一场大地震已经发生，而且余震不断，此时的关键词其实只剩下两个字，即“救”与“援”。某种意义上，“援”也是“救”的组成部分。毫无疑问，救灾已成为当前中国政府与民众最为重要的任务。

救灾救什么?这似乎是一个无须思考的问题。但事实上，救灾的真义必须得到厘清。救灾的第一要务，当为拯救生命。与生命相比，财产的损失与灾后的重建等都已经相对次要，或者说，包括抢救财产以及对于地震中出现问题的反思等，都应该退到“拯救生命”这一极端重要的议题之后。

在地震灾害现场指挥抢救的温家宝总理说过一句话，“只要有双手，家园就能重建”——这句话真切地诠释出了救灾的真义所在。换言之，这也是中国政府将救人作为首要任务的理念之源。正因为生命只有一次，无法以其他之物替代，故救灾者必须以最快的速度，以最大的努力，甚至不惜采取任何手段，“不惜任何代价”，拯救灾区民众的生命。

这意味着，以政府为主导的救援体系须将重心落在对生命的挽救上。随着时间的推移，伤亡数字也将会不断增加。数万人的生命安危，其实就是最严厉的灾情命令。只要有一线的希望，救援者就必须以百倍的努力，从废墟中寻找可能的生还者，从正在倒塌的建筑物中抢救出每一个生命。

应该看到，救灾不仅依赖信心、勇气与团结的精神，也依赖专业的救援队伍与技术配置。尽管人人都可为救灾尽力，但在一定条件下，救灾又是一个技术活，专业性强、风险度高、劳动量大。不能不提到，中国军人又一次发挥了“钢铁长城”的作用，在艰苦的救灾条件下，作战在灾区的精锐部队充分体现出了威武之师的雄风。年轻的中国军人在灾区救援的情景，确实令人深切地感到了血浓于水的鱼水深情。

将拯救生命视为压倒一切的首要任务，也意味着，救援者必须争分夺秒，与死神赛跑。那些废墟里奄奄一息的生命，正在急切地等待救助。“时间就是生命”的含义，在此时也得到了最真切地体现。救援者早一秒进入受灾地区，就能早抢救出一个生命。在震中地区交通不便甚至中断的情况下，温家宝总理要求救援队伍“就是步行也要尽快进入受灾最严重的地区”，突出强调了地震救援之时间概念的重要性。

还应该看到，地震救灾不仅仅是政府之事。如同面对以往任何一场重大自然灾害一样，在政府之力之外，拯救生命的行动，还依赖于民众与非政府机构众志成城。包括给予灾区人民的精神激励、物质的支持，以及包括积极献血等切实的行动等，均会对救援行动产生积极效果。汶川大地震发生之后，不少企业与个人，已开始紧急捐赠财物，运往最需要的地方。非灾区民众发出的祝福与鼓励，已让人充分感受到了温暖而坚定的民族力量。

天灾无情人有情。在一场拯救生命的全民战斗中，胜利终将属于历经灾难考验的中华民族。

导语：春天的草那么绿，春天的花那么红，春天的天那么蓝! 下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的作文，希望对您有所帮助。

春天英语作文_第1篇：

When the stream to play the piano, when the primrose, sing the spring, when the warm spring breeze, I will know that business is full of spring had come.

Connect force to pull out the grass is sleeping underground, wake the flowers hidden in the underground. The jujube tree in the yard is like just connect to wake up from a dream, it woke up, the body bare, still hang a few dead leaves! Can a few days later, body and filled with green, tender leaves. It wag of branches, please the bird to be a guest, a shake the branches, with voice "hello."

Willow trees by the river began to take new branches, long out of the green leaves, like handfuls of a sword, and like a few equals. It reminds me of a colourful depiction of the poetry of willow: jasper makeup into a tree height, ten thousand lop green silk sash. Know who thin leaf cut out, breeze like scissors. Colorful flowers make a colorful painting, bright red, white jiao, the beauty of yellow, pink tender, around the spring in the air. The geese flew back from the south, while arranged in the "people" glyph, for a while in the "big family" shape, for a while in the "one" glyph.

I like the white winter, I like fruitful autumn, I like hot summer, but I prefer the colorful spring!

当小溪弹琴的时候，当迎春花歌颂春天的时候，当温暖的春风吹拂过的时候，我就知道生意盎然的春天已经来临了。

春姑娘用力把正在地下睡觉的小草给拽了出来，把藏在地下的鲜花唤醒了。院子里的枣树也好像刚被春姑娘从梦中叫醒，它醒来的时候，身上光秃秃的，还挂着几片枯叶呢!可没过几天，身上便长满了碧绿的、嫩嫩的叶子。它一会儿摆摆树枝，请小鸟来做客，一会儿摇摇枝条，跟春姑娘打招呼。

河边的柳树开始抽出新的枝条，长出了嫩绿的叶子，尖得像一把把利剑，又像几个难兄难弟一样。这让我想起一首描写柳树的诗词：碧玉妆成一树高，万条垂下绿丝绦。不知细叶谁裁出，二月春风似剪刀。五颜六色的鲜花组成了一幅绚丽多彩的画，红的艳，白的娇，黄的美，粉的嫩，到处发着春天的气息。这时大雁从南方飞回来了，一会儿排成了“人”字形，一会儿排成了“大”家形，一会儿排成了“一”字形。

我喜欢雪白的冬天，我喜欢果实累累的秋天，我喜欢炎热的夏天，但我更喜欢色彩缤纷的春天!

春天英语作文_第2篇：

In a year the four seasons, I like the beautiful spring, sister because when spring comes, the nature is beautiful.

Green LiuShao, when the spring breeze blows the green grass blowing, blowing is wrinkly to knit the river water, blowing drum the buds of plants. In the winter, the willow like a dying old man, dying, waiting for the final death, but at this time, saves the life of the willow spring elder sister come back, he lifted his head to willow, like a gentleman, the protection of the lake is good, not to let the human throw garbage in the lake. Spring elder sister the day really, lively, naughty to catch the birds, the birds are chirping in the same tree in concert. Suddenly, a bird flew away, I followed it, but this only birds are being naughty mouth pecked the basketball goal in our school on the net, like death, together with the basketball net fight until the last possible moment.

In the spring, spring sister put myself on a beautiful make-up, help the grass and flowers a makeup, make flowers more bright, more sweet, spray a little perfume.

Connect through the whole nature, through our red scarf, let it blowing in the wind, blowing the trees and flowers, let them become more beautiful, green trees and red flowers.

I love this charming and beautiful lovely spring.

在一年四季中，我最喜欢美丽的春天，因为当春姐姐来临的时候，整个大自然都美丽起来了。

春风吹绿了柳梢，吹青了小草，吹皱了河水，吹鼓了植物的花苞。在冬天，柳树像生命垂危的老人，奄奄一息，等待着最后的死亡，但在这时，春姐姐把柳树的生命救了回来，让柳树把头抬起来，像一位绅士似的，把湖面保护好，不让人类把垃圾扔在湖里。春姐姐把那天真、活泼、调皮捣蛋的小鸟给抓来了，小鸟们在同一棵大树上正叽叽喳喳的开着演唱会。突然，一只小鸟飞走了，我跟着它，谁知这只调皮捣蛋的小鸟正在用嘴啄着我们学校里的篮球架上的网，好像视死如归似的，跟篮球网一起奋战到最后一刻。

春天的时候，春姐姐把自已化了一个美丽的妆，帮小草、花朵也化了一个妆，让鲜花变得更鲜艳、更香、还喷了点香水。

春姑娘吹遍了整个大自然，吹遍了我们的红领巾，让它随风飘荡，吹拂着花草树木，让它们变得更加美丽，变成了绿树红花。

我非常喜欢这迷人又美丽可爱的春天。

Rising above the sinful lotus, obscurity of sunflower, and sofe orchids, but I most like the national flower of Japan (cherry blossom).

It is a call not famous cherry blossoms. From a distance, cherry tree with red flowers, like a fire, give a person a kind of warm feeling; Have a lavender flowers, such as round and charming girl lovely face; Patients and white flowers, as if the metal gray metal gray face. Look from up close, cherry blossoms, such as chardonnay, fluttering; The cherry blossom as snow, light; The cherry blossom rumei, resists the snow; The cherry blossom as gold, shiny; Cherry blossoms, such as fog, fantasy ethereal.

Cherry blossoms like lily, holy simplicity such as lotus, romance, such as sunflower, gorgeous roses. Cherry blossom, beautiful beautiful, transcendental and free from vulgarity, beautiful beauty, too pampered agglomeration with beautiful more than anything else.

I gently walked over, touched it as great a tender petals, ice BingLiangLiang, wen run into picking, wet drink, relaxed and happy.

The cherry blossom is said to be color and XiangDou is very weak, but once it is fully blooming cherry blossoms, but more brilliant than the peony, more alcohol than sweet osmanthus.

All of a sudden, everything is quiet. "Sound", I seem to hear the voice of dew on petals are rolling, slowly, slowly. "Sasha vujacic", I have heard of the spring breeze stroke, cherry blossoms, and branches collision with each other, friction; "Pop", I seem to hear the petals fall to the ground, petals rotate dance in midair, falling on the ground, but still beautiful petals, not polluted.

Cherry blossom on behalf of a country, to become the national flower of Japan, also because it has special temperament. People dedicated "drop-dead gorgeous, an" to four ancient beauty, I prefer to the much-anticipated cherry blossoms.

有出污泥而不染的荷花，有默默无闻的太阳花，还有刚柔相济的兰花，但我却最喜欢日本的国花(樱花)。

那是一种叫不出名的樱花。从远处看，樱花树上有红色的花，像火一般，给人一种温暖的感觉;有淡紫色的花，如娇媚的小姑娘那可爱而圆润的脸蛋;还有白色的花，好似病人那铁青铁青的面孔。从近处看，樱花如霞，飘飘荡荡;樱花如雪，光明圣洁;樱花如梅，傲霜斗雪;樱花如金，闪闪发光;樱花如雾，奇幻飘渺。

樱花圣洁如百合，纯朴如荷花，烂漫如向日葵，艳丽如玫瑰。樱花美得无奈，美的张扬，美得超凡脱俗，美得万千宠爱集聚一身，美得胜过一切。

我轻轻走过去，摸了摸它嫩得不得了的花瓣，冰冰凉凉，温润成剔，湿湿润润，心旷神怡。

据说樱花是色和香都是十分淡的花，可樱花一旦完全盛开，却比牡丹更艳，比桂花更醇。

突然，一切静得离谱。“哗哗”，我似乎听到了花瓣上有露珠滚动的声音，缓缓地，慢慢地;“沙沙”，我又听到了春风拂面、樱花晃动的声音，枝头互相碰撞着，摩擦着;“砰砰”，我仿佛听到了花瓣落地，花瓣在半空中转动舞蹈，坠在地上，可花瓣依然美丽，没有被污染。

樱花代表一个国家，能成为日本的国花，也因为它有非凡的气质。人们把“沉鱼落雁、闭月羞花”献给古代四大美女，我更愿意献给这万众瞩目的樱花。

1、以MY Future plan为题目，100字左右

2、我决定大学毕业后当一 名中学教师，这是我孩提时代的梦想

3、我很喜欢教师在个职业，与中学生在一 起可以使自己永保青春

4、我国师资力量缺乏，主要原因是教师工作辛苦，收入低。想当老师的人很少，所以需要大批有志青年献身教育事业

中考英语作文范文：我未来的打算(My future plan)

I decided to be a middle teacher after college. （大学毕业后我决定当一名中学教师）There are many reasons contribute to this decision.（这有很多理由来说服这个决定）

Firstly, when I was a little/boy, I have been dreaming of being a teacher.（首先，当我还是个小孩时就梦想成为一名教师） It seemed so fascinate to me and I hope I can make my dream come true.（它让我很着迷，我希望我的梦想能够实现）

And, I like so much to be with middle school students. （另外，我是如此的喜欢中学生）Most of the students at that age are full of youthful spirity and I am sure their passion would pass to me.（大多数的学生都在充满年轻激情的阶段，我确信仪仗队他们的热情会传染给我） I will retain all the zest of adolescence.（我将可以使自己永保青春）

The most important reason is that our country needs plenty of teachers.（最重要的原因是我们的国家需要教师） So far, teaching is considered a tough and low-income job in China.（讫今为止，在中国，教书被认为是一项辛苦又收入低的工作） However, if we have not enough teachers, our future will lack of excellent scientist, managers, businessmen, soldiers and even goood workers and farmers.（然而，如果我们没有足够的教师，我们将来会缺乏优秀的科学家，经理，商人，士兵甚至于好的工人和农民） How can our country to be strong and wealthy? （那我们的国家怎样才能强大和富饶起来呢）I wish my country to be a better one. （我祝福我的祖国的明天会更好）I am ready to be a teacher and hope all the persons with lofty ideals may dedicate themselves to this meaningful career.（我准备在为一名教师，我也希望大家带着崇高理想献身于这有意义的工作．

导语：英语作文在英语试卷中还是相当重要的一部分，你知道写作有哪些技巧吗?下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：

实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：

中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。2014年中考英语写作技巧

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：

这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：

其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：

当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累，但是在面临中考的紧要关头，要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情，这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。

August 7,2014 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to

grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.

Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文：今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.

When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.

After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.

我们都知道，我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功，并得到别人的尊重。在我看来，成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。

当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢用手做东西。有一次，我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子，我通常做的，但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况，我真的很想放弃。然而，经过一次思考，我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分，最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴，因为我的创造力，我得到了第一个奖。

之后，我明白每当我们面对麻烦，抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。

[中考英语满分作文努力

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：

2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)

2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)

2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词，少15个词扣0.5分，610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

Dear Miss Brown,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for caring me in the last

two years. During the days of being your student, I learn a lot. Firstly, your

serious attitude towards teaching and our students moves me too much. You

inspire and push me to work harder and harder. Secondly, I fall in love with

English under the influence of you. As a student of science and engineering,

I’ve been thinking that English does no good to me, but you help me to find the

fabulous glamour of English that leads me to know a totally different world and

develop a different way of thinking. Finally, your continuous encouragement

supports me a lot when I meet challenges or difficulties. You said that

everything to the last will certainly become a good thing, if it is not, not yet

to the last. Every time, remembering your words, I am so inspired to keep

going.

Above all, I want to say thank you again and please accept my sincere

appreciation. Best wishes for you.

Cruse

敬爱的布朗老师：

我谨以此向您表达我最真诚的谢意，感谢您在过去两年里对我的帮助。在过去的两年里，成为您的学生，我学到了许多。首先，您对教学和学生的认真态度使我深受感动。您鼓舞着我不断地努力学习。其次，在您的影响下，我深深地喜欢上了英语。作为一名理工科学生，我以前一直认为英语对我毫无用处，但您使我认识到了英语的魅力所在，带我走进了一个全新的世界，培养了不同的思维方式。最后，您的鼓励总在我遭遇困难或挑战是鼓励着我。您曾经说过：“每一件事情到了最后都会变成好事，如果不是，那说明还没有到最后。”每当想起您说过的话，我就有了坚持下去的动力。

最后，请允许我再次向您表达我的感谢，接受我真诚的谢意。献上最美好的祝福。

Recently I have seen such a story, the story on the way to save a giant snake women in banda aceh in Indonesias aceh province provincial capital, a woman under the guidance of a serpent, arrived in safety. 26-year-old woman riza said, on December 26, 2004, she lives in a village was flooded with waves, panic in the people running for their lives.

At this time, a female neighbor because of badly wounded, riza, please take your a pair of twins, she then back up the twins. To fight with in the jet stream, she saw a big snake down the flood from the left to swim, she is just like the serpent has been to swim, the results arrived in a safe place. After the event, riza said: "very strange when meet the serpent, I do not feel panic." Moreover, the serpent did not bite them.

Yes, as long as we treat animals, animals will be kind to you, but if you hurt the animals, which hurt just dont know is you a person but a human. In recent years my human destruction of the food chain, all the time and so many animals die because we humans, spirited, extinction. Some even have some rare animals fur to make clothes for money! Some people regard animals as the experiment, according to statistics, there are 2.5 million animals die each year from drug test, in this world, animals are used in shampoo, cosmetics, cancer drug test, although it is not the same with animals, but people and animals have the same right to life, they also have a desire to survive, so human cant go to such a large number of experimenting on animals. Now so many animals came to attack us, because we damage to them, so want to animals will also be kind to you, you will be kind to animals.

最近我看到过一个这样的故事，这个故事讲着一条巨蛇引路救妇女是在在印尼亚齐省省会班达亚齐，一名女子在一条大蛇的指引下，抵达安全地点。26岁女子丽扎说，2004年12月26日，她住的村落被巨浪淹没，慌乱中人们纷纷逃命。

这时，一名女邻居因为受了重伤，请丽扎带自己的一对双胞胎逃生，她于是背起了双胞胎。在与急流搏斗时，她看见一条大蛇从左侧顺着洪流游去，她就跟大蛇一直游，结果抵达了安全的地方。事后，丽扎说："很奇怪，当时见到大蛇，我并不感到惊慌。"而且，大蛇也没有咬她们。

是啊，只要我们善待动物，那么动物也会善待你，但如果你伤害了动物，哪受伤害的就不知是你一个人而是人类。就在近些年来我人类时时刻刻都在破坏着生物链，而因此许多动物都因为我们人类的搏杀而死亡、灭绝。甚至有些人为了钱把一些珍稀动物的皮毛做成衣服!还有些人把动物当成了实验品，据统计每年有250万的动物死于药物试验，在这个世界，动物们被用于洗发水，化妆品，癌症药品的试验，人虽然与动物是不相同的，但人与动物却有着相同的生存权利，它们也有求生的欲望，所以人类不能去这样大量的用动物做试验。现在之所以这么多的动物都来攻击我们，是因为我们对他们的破坏，所以要想动物也会善待你，你就要善待动物。

In the firecrackers, ushered in the traditional festival - the Lantern Festival in China.

The Lantern Festival, of course, in the morning should eat a bowl of steaming hot dumplings. Dumplings made with sticky dough rub, powder white, thin, on the pot steamed for a while. Cooked dumplings, like a lovely baby. A bite, very hot hot black sesame roll like water flowing into the lungs and mouth is filled with thick sesame flavor, emotions and thoughts on the tip of the tongue with that kind of sweet honey and taste, represents a HeHeMuMu life.

In the evening, I go play outside, streets are decorated, the most beautiful is the moat. City moat lights, thronged. I wander in the light of the world, watch carefully, lifelike gold fish lamp, image lifelike lotus lamp, of primitive simplicity and elegant palace lantern, all kinds of lights elegant, exquisite decoration, fine workmanship, really make a person dazzling, breathtaking. In a calm river, which reflects the light shadow, as if under the river also lit a lamp. There was a slight breeze, surface ripples, light shadow followed the wobbly.

"Good!" Attracted by a burst of cheers me, turned out to be nearby someone guess riddles. I also want to guess in the past, but we had too many people, formed a "person" wall, enclosed as the stage of guess riddles. I stand outside the people wall, listening to the sounds of laughter from inside. The host began to say lantern riddle: "a man a mouth (guess a word)." I thought to myself: what is that? Im thinking of, an old man raised his hand, replied: "is a or word." The host and smiling said: "congratulations to you, right." The words sound just fell and around there was a thunderous applause.

The Lantern Festival, the boisterous festival, in the laughter of people in the end.

在爆竹声中，迎来了我国的传统节日——元宵节。

元宵节，早晨起床当然应该吃一碗热气腾腾的汤圆。汤圆用黏黏的面团搓成，有大有小，有粉有白，放在锅里蒸上一会儿。煮好的汤圆，像一个个可爱的胖娃娃。咬一口，烫烫的黑芝麻像流水般滚入心脾，嘴巴里充满了浓浓的芝麻味，舌尖上留着那种甜蜜蜜的情思和味道，代表着一家和和睦睦的生活。

晚上，我到外边去玩，大街小巷都张灯结彩，最美的还要数护城河边了。护城河边灯光辉煌，人声鼎沸。我漫游在这灯的世界，细细观赏，栩栩如生的金鱼灯，形象逼真的莲花灯，古朴典雅的宫灯——各式各样的彩灯造型优美，装饰考究，做工精细，真让人眼花缭乱，美不胜收。在平静的河面上，映照出了灯的影子，好像河的底下也点着一盏似的。一阵微风拂过，河面上微波荡漾，灯的影子也跟着摇摇晃晃了。

“好!”一阵喝彩声吸引住了我，原来是不远处有人在猜灯谜。我也想过去猜猜，可无奈人太多，形成了一堵‘人’墙，把猜灯谜的舞台围得水泄不通。我站在‘人’墙外，听着里面传来的阵阵欢笑声。主持人开始说灯谜了：“一人一张嘴(猜一字)。”我心想：那是什么呢?我正想着，一位老爷爷举起了手，回答道：“是个‘合’字。”主持人笑眯眯地说：“恭喜您，答对了。”话音刚落，周围就响起了一阵雷鸣般的掌声。

元宵节，这个热闹非凡的节日，在人们的欢笑声中结束。

dear mum and dad,

time flies! ive been here for nearly a year. im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. the students in our school__________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________

yours,

tom

中考英语满分作文：

dear mum and dad,

time flies! ive been here for nearly a year. im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. the students in our school work hard at their lessons. they take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. they are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.

the teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. they work hard and do what they can do to help their students. and the students respect their teachers. they get on well with each other. the students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean

1、maintain a good attitude of tolerance towards people , the students are friendly to each other, to create a harmonious interpersonal relationships.

2、 we should promote a vibrant style of the team, a real study , the unity displayed a style of class and diligence to make personal style in a good environment. the students forge ahead and to the ideal of hard work. learning positive, thereby creating a harmonious atmosphere for education.

with the development of society, harmony becomes the theme of this time. everyone is doing his best to make the surroundings harmonious. as a member of our campus, we should take action in building the harmonious campus.

here are some suggestions. first, treat people sincerely. we should be ready to help each other when someone is in trouble. second, behave yourself. keep our environment clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. third, try to be polite. when we meet someone we know, a “hello” is good enough. then, we can gain their respects for us.

of course, there are still a lot of things we can do to build the harmonious campus. anyway, doing something good to our campus is our duty. let’s do it from now on.

My Naughty Cousin

I have a cousin, she was eight years old this year. She studies in grade

one.

Her character like a boy, she has thick eyebrows and bid eyes, she was

particurlarly active and naughty. she and my cousin had a full head big sweat

everyday, it makes all the dirty. She would rather spend more time to play,

Rather than want to go to study. She makes home in a mess, but she does not pick

it up.

Is she very interesting?

我有一个表兄，今年她八岁了。她在一年级学习。

她的性格像个男孩，她有浓密的眉毛和眼睛，她是活泼好动的。她和我的表妹每天都要大汗淋漓，一切都很脏。她宁愿花更多的时间玩，而不愿去学习。她把家里弄得一团糟，但她没有把它捡起来。

她很有趣吗?

If you choose only to complain and escaperom the ordeal, it will always follow you wherever you go. But if you decide to be strong, the hardship will turn out to be a fortune on which new hopes will arise.

He lost his arms in an accident that claimed his fathers life—who was the main source of support for the family. Since then, he has had to depend on the arms of his younger brother. For the sake of taking care of him, his younger brother became his shadow, never leaving him alone for years. Except for writing with his toes, he was completely unable to do anything in his life.

One late night, he suffered from diarrhea and had to wake up his younger brother. His younger brother accompanied him into the toilet and then went back the dorm to wait. But being so tired, his younger brother fell asleep, leaving him on the toilet for two hours till the teacher on duty discovered him. As the two brothers grew up together, they had their share of problems and they would often quarrel. Then one day, his younger brother wanted to live separate from him, living his own life, as many normal people do. So he was heart-broken and didnt know what to do.

A similar misfortune befell a girl, too. One night her mother, who suffered from chronic mental illness disappeared. So her father went out looking for her mother, leaving her alone at home. She tried to prepare meals for her parents, only to overturn the kerosene light on the stove, resulting in a fire which took her hands away.

Though her elder sister who was studying in another city, showed her willingness to take care of her, she was determined to be completely independent. At school, she always studied hard. Most of all she learned to be self-reliant. Once she wrote the following in her composition: "I am lucky. Though I lost my arms, I still have legs; I am lucky. Though my wings are broken, my heart can still fly."

One day, the boy and the girl were both invited to appear on a television interview program. The boy told the TV host about his uncertain future at being left on his own, whereas the girl was full of enthusiasm for her life. They both were asked to write something on a piece of paper with their toes. The boy wrote: My younger brothers arms are my arms;while the girl wrote: Broken wings, flying heart.

They had both endured the same ordeal, but their different attitudes determined the nature of their lives. It is true that life is unpredictable. Disasters can strike at any time. How you handle misfortune when confronted with it, is the true test of your character. If you choose only to complain and escape from the ordeal, it will always follow you wherever you go. But if you decide to be strong, the hardship will turn out to be a fortune on which new hopes will arise.

翻译：

面对苦难，如果选择抱怨与逃避，苦难就永远如影随形;但如果选择坚强，苦难便会化作甘泉，滋润美好的希望。

在一次事故中，作为家中顶梁柱的父亲永远地离去了，他也因此失去了双手。从此弟弟的手便成了他的手。为了照顾他，弟弟从小到大总是形影不离地跟在他的身边，他除了学会了用脚趾头写字做作业外，生活上完全不能自理。

有一次，他因肠胃不好，半夜起来要上厕所，于是他叫醒了弟弟。弟弟帮着他进了厕所后，就回宿舍躺下了。由于太劳累，弟弟闭上眼就睡着了。结果他在厕所里等了整整两个小时，才被查夜的老师发现。慢慢长大了的两兄弟也有了烦恼和争执，有一天弟弟终于提出要离开他，因为弟弟要和很多正常人一样需要过自己的生活。为此，他很伤心，不知如何是好。

无独有偶，另一个女孩也有着同样的遭遇。因为妈妈长期患有精神病，在一天晚上无故出走，爸爸去找妈妈了，家中便只留下她一人。她决定做好饭菜等爸爸妈妈回来吃，却不小心将灶台上的煤油灯打翻，结果双手便被大火夺走了。

虽然在外地读书的姐姐愿意照顾她，可倔强的她一定要自己照顾自己。在学校，她不但读书认真，更重要的是她学会了生活自理。她曾在一篇英作文里写道：我幸福，虽然断了双手，但我还拥有一双脚;我幸福，虽然翅膀断了，但心也要飞翔……

有一天，他们被一家电视台邀请到了演播室。面对主持人，男孩表现出了对前途的迷茫，而女孩则对生活充满了热情。主持人要求他们分别在一张白纸上写一句话。他们分别用脚趾头夹起了笔，男孩写的是：“弟弟的手便是我的手。”女孩却写下了：“翅膀断了，心也要飞翔。”

他们俩都经受了同样的苦难，但不同的人生态度却决定了其生活的本质。是的，人生多变幻，苦难总是在不知不觉中骤然降临。如何应对苦难，是对你的性格的真正考验。面对苦难，如果选择抱怨与逃避，苦难就永远如影随形;但如果选择坚强，苦难便会化作甘泉，滋润美好的希望。

On the side of the mountain some cannot calculate measuring the height of the building.

It is a mountain, the mountain of overgrown with weeds and jungle, covered with white paper and the piles of the tomb.

Dreamed of in a flash difference to pull open. The depth of the lingering thoughts like write lyrics. Dead, whats the point? Alive, what is the value?

Busy all day not intentional. Spare time thought of love, career, family love, friendship. Is that there is no thought that green filled with trees and grass, colorful flowers and BaoLei, the calm mind suddenly enlightened rainbow after the rain, the head of the blue sky. White clouds, and birds. And suddenly touching the water in the mountain.

How much time back home, watching the sunset in the mountains down, listen to the well flying birds twitter called, feeling from underground water cools the ding-dong, see the distant mountains and Jeremy goldkorn, as well as in the jungle, which is totally neatly long picnic, sleep in the evening on the grass in the open to hear of the worm light at night...

Unable to describe the good and noble sentiment. A mountain, located in the hometown of the soil at home and left me through overlapping ignorance of stone and NiBa Road for several times, when ignorance of boring let me miss. Once upon a time... Originally I only belong to natural, not to return to earth. Dont want to grow up, and time just tested the fragile life.

Really want to make a pot of wine, drunk in my country.

山的一边上又多了几幢无法算测高度的楼房。

那是一座山，一座长满野草和丛林的山，还有就是那一堆堆挂满白纸的坟墓。

没想到差别竟在一瞬间拉了开。像写抒情诗一样地缠绵思想的深度。死了，有何意义?活着，有何价值?

整天忙碌无心。空闲的时候想到过爱情，事业，亲情，友情。就是没有想到过那绿腾腾的树林和野草，那缤纷的花儿和苞蕾，那雨后沉着思想豁然开朗的彩虹，那头上的蓝天。白云和飞鸟。还有忽然触到的山中水流。

多少次回到家乡，看夕阳夹在山中落下的情景，听那学成飞舞的小鸟儿叽喳叫过，感受来自地下的水的清冽叮咚，看远方的山峦和高岗，还有就是在那些长得整整齐齐的丛林中搞野炊，睡在空旷傍晚的草地上听入夜的虫儿轻鸣……

无法形容那些好和高尚的情操。家乡的一座山，家乡的土，留下了我走过重叠无知好几次的石头和泥巴路，小时侯无知时的趣让我怀念。从前……本来我只属于自然，不回归尘世。本来不想长大，而时间硬是检验了脆弱的生命。

真的想提一壶酒，醉到在我的乡村。

I like the Chinese new year better than any other festival。 This is a time especially for rest and joy。 I need not study。 I wear good clothes and eat good food。 I have a good time from morning till night。 I am as happy as a king。翻译：我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时光。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服，吃好东西。我每一天从早到晚日子过得简单愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。

Dear Miss Wang:

I am writing to express my sinceregratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not bethe top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall.You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always workedtirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatestmotivation.

I sincerely hope that you can have a goodhealth and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attentionto your health, get more rest.

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours

Lily

亲爱的王老师：

我写信是想诚挚的感谢你在我学习上的帮助。没有你的帮助，我的成绩就不会排在班级前三名。是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。我帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。

我真心祝愿您身体健康，永远快乐。另外，我希望你能多注意你的健康，多多休息。

再次感谢你的帮助!

你的学生

李丽

A new year,a new start,when i stand on the edge of a new year,i cant help thinking about my plan of next year.

just as the old saying:"well began is the half of the success.”so i decide that i should be at work while the others are still relaxing,and then,at the beginning,im quicker than the others and of course i will get better result than the others.

But,what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can spare though it seems impossible. while,i will do my best to live up with what i have planned,and the result will prove it.

新的一年，新的开始，当我在新的一年的边缘立场，我不禁在想我明年的计划。

正如古人云：“好开始是成功的一半”，所以我决定，我应该是在工作，而另一些性传播疾病就会放松，然后，在开始时，我比其他人更快，我当然会得到比别人更好的结果。

但是，我真正决定做的是，我必须利用好，我可以随时备用，虽然它似乎是不可能的。虽然，我会尽我所能，用我生活已计划了，结果将证明这一点。