外国朋友来中国的建议英语作文【经典20篇】

你们好!

我是一个中国小朋友，我生活在一个和平的环境中。中国是一个可爱、美丽、富裕而又生机勃勃的国家，这里没有仇恨，也没有硝烟，更没有战争。我们在空闲时间外出虽然我们从来没有见过面，也不曾相识，但我非常同情你们，欣赏江南美景、塞北风光，名胜古迹。在今天，我们中国小朋友过得很幸福。

虽然我们从来没有见过面，也不曾相识，但我非常同情你们，在电视上我看到你们那儿不和平，正在发生的战争使你们国家人民的生命财产遭受到了严重损失，尤其是看到少年儿童在战争硝烟中哭泣的画面，我的心在震撼。我们爱好和平的心是相通的，我要尽最大努力来帮助你们，减轻你们的战争苦难。

我们中国有句名言：“家和万事兴”。你们国家的人们要团结一心，努力进取才能把你们的国家建设好，才能不被外人欺负，人民才能过上幸福的和平生活。你们才能够有一个好的学习环境。

我们要再一次向全世界大声疾呼：我们应该一致行动起来，维护和平，制止战争!让二十一世纪已经能够听到的脚步声为和平敲响希望的钟。让明天的世界充满阳光、鲜花和友爱!

祝你们和你们的国家，早日迎来和平的阳光，各民族人民过上美好幸福的生活。祝你们身体健康，天天快乐，愿你们那儿早日结束战争，迎来和平。

中心小学吴XX

Di Yage is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

我的好朋友

蒂亚戈是我的好朋友。她在Class1 ， Grade4的天骄小学。她是一个模范学生。她的聪明，她的帮助，太。她常常帮助教师和青年学生在学校。她是在中国好，数学，英语，艺术和手工艺，音乐等等。她有很多爱好。她喜欢绘画和绘图。和她喜欢听音乐，野餐后与她的父母。噢是的，她喜欢钓鱼，太。但她并不喜欢打篮球，足球，乒乓球和排球。张颖是最好的朋友。我喜欢与她一起玩。我们总是一起工作，互相帮助。

in this chapter of the novel，jane met her new friend-helen。what helen said really impressed me a lot，driving me think deeply。

life is too short to hate other people。we all have faults，but when we die，only the pure flame of the spirt will be left。thats why i never think of revenge，i never consider life unfair。i live in calm，looking forward to the end。

honesly speaking，i plained about my life or people around me now and again，wodering why it was always unfair to me。however，think it over，i shouldt have been so mean。time flies。we need to expand the width of life instead of wasting time to think about something meaningless。

国际青年节(International Youth Day)是一个由联合国发起设立的节日。1999年联合国通过54/120号决议，将每年的8月12日定为国际青年节。第一个国际青年节是在2000年8月12日。

International Youth Day (International Youth Day) is a sponsored by the United Nations day. The 1999 UN resolution 54/120, to August 12th of each year as international youth day. The first International Youth Day is on August 12, 2000.

国际青年节是全世界革命青年反帝国主义、反军国主义、反世界大战的纪念日。它的产生背景，是在第一次帝国主义世界大战打得昏天地黑，各国社会民主党都一齐在保护资产阶级祖国的名义之下，而完全出卖工人阶级的利益的时候举行的。当时各国革命青年于1915五年在瑞京举行国际青年大会，决定国际青年反对世界大战一致的步骤，并决定以每年的九月第一星期日为国际青年日。自1915年九月第一次国际青年纪念大示威举行以后，全世界的共产主义青年运动便如潮水一般的汹涌起来了。在反帝国主义大战，反国主义以及一切革命斗争中，都表现出了革命青年的重大作用。

International Youth Day is the world revolutionary youth anti imperialist, anti militarism, anti World War Memorial day. Its background, is played with black in the world the first imperialist world war, the Social Democratic Party together under the name of protection the bourgeoisie of the motherland, and completely betrayed the interests of the working class is held. The revolutionary youth in 1915 for five years in the Swiss Beijing International Youth Conference, international youth against World War consistent steps, and decided to each of the first Sunday of September as the International Youth day. Since 1915 September the first international youth Memorial held large demonstrations, the Communist Youth movement around the world as the tide surge up. In the anti imperialist war, the anti imperialism and all revolutionary struggle, have shown a significant role of revolutionary youth.

每年的国际青年节，联合国都会举行相关主题的活动。

The annual International Youth Day, the United Nations will be held related theme activities.

亲爱的外国小朋友：

你们好!当我从报纸和电视上看到你们的画面时，知道你们正深受战争之苦，我很同情你们的遭遇。你们的遭遇实在是太惨了!

你们的家园，美丽的家园没有了。那些名胜古迹，房屋都被摧毁了。你们的亲人，相依为命的亲人没有了。他们有的被埋在了废墟下，有的和你们走散了，有的死在了罪恶的子弹下。你们现在虽然脱险了，而你们的同胞却死的死，伤的伤。他们孤独无助、流离失所，正在流亡。我很为他们担心。

我知道你们的流亡过程是艰辛而恐怖的，是吧?先是有“野兽”不断搜寻你们，结果有的同胞死于“利爪”之下，而逃过一死之后的你们，吃不饱，穿不暖、、、、、、天啦!我不敢往下再想了。你们现在在哪儿?在流亡路上?还是已经被收养了?你们现在幸福吗?安全吗?你们和我们比起来真是太不幸了。

我们现在正在教师上课，而你们现在也许正在逃亡;我们在睡觉，而你们也许正在赶路;我们在玩耍，而你们现在或许正面对穷凶恶极的敌人。为了世界不再有战争;为了世界上不再为参军而在战争中牺牲;为了亲人们不再痛苦，不再流泪，我们一起反对战争。让我们一起呼吁：珍爱生命，爱护和平吧!

亲爱的外国小朋友你们别害怕，我们相信和平年代就快要到来了。希望你们尽快恢复以往的生活!我们永远永远祝

祝

你们健康快乐

永远祝

Dear Lily,

How is everything? I do not see you for a long time, and I miss you very

much. So I write to you. I was very busy in the last month, because I have much

homework to do. The final exam is coming, so I must work hard. Besides, I must

learn piano very two days. It takes me some time, but I feel happy. These are my

life in recent. And what’s yours? I am looking forward to your letter and tell

me about your life.

Sincerely Yours,

Carla

Chinese, known as "a state of ceremonies" reputation, for 5000 years of Chinas etiquette is profound, as descendants of the dragon, we should pay attention to etiquette.

"There are many good people in the world."."Often hear mom and dad and people around to chat, such a feeling.They taught me to be a sensible child from childhood, and I did the same.Of course, thanks to so much appreciation, I should thank one of my teachers.On the first day of school, the teacher told us a story about her when she was in normal, day Zixi, lost her pen, she let the classmate in front of her to help her pick up, she said to me, the man left her teacher table things off the others, or let the person in front of her to help her pick up, but others say that help me pick up, after also said thank you, the teacher in front of students said to see people talk more polite, teacher very feel shy.After finishing the story, the teacher blushed, and the students understood one thing: to be polite to others, to be civilized.I want to thank my honest teacher.Civilization is always around us.The friendly smile, say hello to the teacher sincerely, gently turning the sound in the reading room, the waste paper into the trash can, turn off the lights after school......Yes, the world will be a better place as long as all of us are from around us.

Remember the day of this summer vacation, my mother and I were waiting for the car on the side of the road to the county town.It took a while for the bus to come.There are so many people on the bus, its stuffy and hot.My mother and I managed to squeeze into a ventilated seat.Seated a roughly forty year old middle-aged women, face dark, plain and neat clothes.I was confused when suddenly the car came to a screeching halt.I missed the railing next to it and hit the middle-aged woman.I thought she might blame me, but then there was a caring voice: "little boy, is it all right?"Come and sit here with auntie!"Never encountered this situation, I did not know what to do, I have to use the look of help looked at my mother.Until my mother smiled and motioned me to sit down, I say thank you, and sat down.After sitting in my seat, I always feel lucky.Later I realized that it was not lucky, it was civilization, and it was civilization that gave her the seat to me

In fact, civility is very simple.We should start from the small things around us and become a civilized and polite person.

如果外国的朋友向你请教如何学中文，你会怎么样跟他说呢?下面是语文迷整理的教外国朋友学中文的英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

英语作文一：

how to learn chinese for foreigners There are more people to learn chinese at present . but they always think it is difficult to learn it . Especially they dislike to remember characters by heart . I always think about this questions to learning chinese . I would like to state a simple way to learn it .I will be happy if these methods are useful for you .

first , you should grasp the difference between languages .

the chinese pronaunciation has four tone . it sounds the music 1234 . I found it by myself , everyone like music , if you like music , then you can grasp the pronaunciation easily .

the second , you should only grasp a word in chinese instead of a single character . it looks like friends , if you see them everyday ,then you will know them . only watch them every day , and you will remember them soon

the third , you can find where to stop when you can read a long chinese sentence . and it is more improtant in learning languages ,because it can express the whole meaning in your voice .

in the end , read some texts in chinese every day . you should read chinese articles every day , then you can speak chinese quickly .

you can speak a little chinese in three months , believe youself , you can succeed soon .

有很多的人学习中文,目前.但他们始终认为这是很难学习.特别是他们不喜欢记住心脏字符.我经常思考这个问题,中文的学习.我想说明一个简单的方法来学习它,如果这些方法对您有用,我会很乐意.首先,你应该掌握的语言之间的差异.中国pronaunciation有四个音.这听起来音乐1234.我发现自己,每个人都喜欢音乐,如果你喜欢音乐,那么你可以把握pronaunciation容易.第二,你应该只掌握在中国,而不是一个单一的字符的字.它看起来像朋友,如果你看到他们的日常生活,那么你就会知道他们.只能眼睁睁地看着他们每一天,你会记住他们的到来第三,你可以找到在哪里停止时,你可以阅读长的汉语句子.它是在学习语言的improtant的,因为它可以在你的声音表达的全部意义.在年底,在中国,每天读一些文本.你应该每天阅读英文文章,那么你可以说中国很快.你可以说一点的中国人在三个月内,相信自己,你可以成功很快,

英语作文二：

Dear Tim

I am very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. Learning Chinese just like learning any other foreign language, is hard work. Learning Chines takes time so you should spend as much time as you can. Use Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. So why not take every oppotunity to practise using Chinese for communication. And youd better listen to the tape and repeat after it, watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on. "No pains, no gains". If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well. Thats all. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Jack

英语作文三：

Dear Lucy,

I’m very happy to hear from you. Don’t worry too much. Many students have the same problem like you. I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing. Here’s my advice. But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think. If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.

First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers’ questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. What’s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. I really hope my advice can help you out and get ‘A’ in English and history exams. Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.

Yours,

Zhang Fang

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is * *.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫**。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

My friend and I are good friends.she is shy and I am outgoing.she likes studying English but I like studying math.she has long straight black hair and I have short curly blackhair.she likes playing football but Ilike playingbasketball.we are still friends.

She is always studies home but I always study at school because it is very interesting.I like watching action moves but she likes watching the TV show she has big eyes and she likes wearing jeans but I like wearing shirt.she usually helps me in my study

Friend is everybody cannot lack of communication event in life, every one have a good friend, a man without a friend will be very lonely, I am no exception, I also have a very good friends. Her name is tingting, she and I are in the understanding of the Internet, I hate chatting with her a night. She and I had a thing, that thing only till now I still remember deeply in my mind, what had happened, let me tell you

I remember when the season is summer, the day the weather was very hot, I go to school very early at noon, but no time so the gate is not open yet. I just stood there waiting for the school open, standing for 20 minutes after the sweat clip back, can help to open the door, entered the classroom, is almost a lesson after I head suddenly fainted, head lying on his desk, and see if I can make it better, then there is a familiar voice said a words, ask me who is uncomfortable. I looked up and looked down at the who, the original is I most hate people tingting, how she is so kind to ask me. So I asked her if she wants to laugh at me, her face is very earnest of say not to laugh at you, after a while, she is holding a white oil give me put on the skin, also ask my body have better? At school when she still insisted on sending me home, because I feel dizzy, I argue but her, let she sent me home.

After this thing I from her, hate and she are good friends, until now we can only read together. We have a common wish is to become a doctor and save people.

朋友是人人不可缺乏的人生交际大事，每一个都有一个好朋友，没有朋友的人会很孤单，我也不例外，我也有一个十分要好的朋友。她的名字叫婷婷，我和她是在网上认识的，我和她一聊恨晚认识。我和她发生过一件事，那件事只到现在我还深深的记在脑海里，事情的经过让我来告诉你们吧

我记的那时的季节是夏天，那一天的天气很热，我中午很早就去上学了，可时间没有到所以校门还没有开。我就站在那里等校门开，站了20分钟后汗流夹背，才有校工来开门，进了教室以后差不多是上了一节课左右，我头突然就晕了起来，头趴在桌子上躺着，看能不能好一点，就在这时有一个熟悉的声音说了一句话，问我人是不是不舒服。我抬头望了一下看是谁，原来是我的最讨厌的人婷婷，她怎么会这么好心来问我吖。所以我问她是不是想笑我吖，她表情十分认真的说不是想笑你，过了一会儿，她就拿着白花油给我搽，还问我身体有没有好一点呢?到了放学时她还坚持要送我回家，因为我头晕，我争辩不过她，就让她送了我回家。

在这件事以后我从讨厌她，变成和她是好朋友了，只到现在我们还一起读在一起。我们都有一个共同的愿望就是当一名医生救百姓。

导语：从小养成好习惯，不在路上玩游戏，行走应走人行道，没有行道往右靠，天桥地道横行道，横穿马路离不了，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aims at creating metro bus systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.

【参考译文】

毫无疑问，交通堵塞成为大多数城市居民日益担心的问题。一些主要道路在交通高峰时经常堵塞。有限的运输能力在很大程度上造成了令人烦恼的问题。如何解决头痛?

现有的交通堵塞解决方案主要是建立地铁公交系统和拓宽主要道路。拓宽现有道路，可以在一定程度上解决交通挤塞。飞涨的汽车拥有权构成了长期困扰的问题，所以我们必须大幅减少对汽车的依赖，推动大众运输的发展。这是一个便宜又好的方法。我们可以建立一个系统的定制巴士路线，并突出发展的地铁，手推车和轻轨。这些解决方案的有效结合将使城市地区拥有顺畅的交通。

A friend is a lamp, guide you; when you lost A friend is an umbrella, zhefengdangyu for you when you difficult; A friend is a fire, warm you when you have the cold; A friend is...

My friend is an honest modesty, learning super nice man, he did not talk much, at ordinary times but gushing in helping me. In my mind, he was the one who can do real friends.

About me and his story, it was three days and three nights also said not over. Remember that a few days before the final exam last semester, I suddenly a cold have a fever, it can, in order not to affect the final exam, my mother let me temporarily leave an injection, after two or three days sick, but my class fell in, although is not new review period, but a key part of the review but I missed it. I, recovering from a back to school, was like a cat on hot bricks, at that moment, he comes silently behind me, gave me a pat, and then put the book on the table, "I knew you would try so hard, its not, you didnt come to this a few days, I made notes in detail, however, will wait for you to come back, I well give you, so you cant drop too much." Listening to his words, I suddenly realize, looked at his sincere, warm in my heart, even say a word, just nodded his head. Then, he carefully explain the review the content of a few days, I seriously listen, with his help, I put the knowledge learned.

When I need his uninvited; In when I am in trouble, he brought me help; When I get good grades, he happy for me. In my disappointment, he gave me encouragement, he is my true friend.

朋友是明灯,在你失落时指引你;朋友是把伞,在你困难时为你遮风挡雨;朋友是团火,在你寒冷时温暖你;朋友是……

我的朋友是一个诚实谦虚,学习超好的人,他平时的话不多,但在帮助我的时候却滔滔不绝。在我的心目中,他才是可以做真正朋友的人。

说起我和他的故事,那简直是三天三夜也说不完。记得那是上学期期末考试的前几天,我突然感冒发烧了,实在打不起精神,为了不影响期末考试,妈妈让我暂时请假打针,过了两三天病就好了,可我的课却落下了一大截,虽然是复习期间没有新课,但复习的关键部分我却错过了。大病初愈的我回到学校时,急得就像热锅上的蚂蚁,就在这时,他悄悄地来到我身后,轻轻地拍了我一下,然后把书本摆在桌上,“我就知道你会着急,这不,你没来这几天,我可是详细地做了笔记,就等你回来,我好给你讲,这样你就不能落下太多了。”听了他的话,我恍然大悟,望着他那诚恳的模样,我心里热呼呼的,一时间竟然说不出话来,只是点了点头。然后,他仔细地讲解着这几天复习的内容,我认真地听着,在他的帮助下,我把落下的知识学会了。

在我需要时,他不请自来;在我困难时,他给我帮助;在我取得好成绩时,他替我高兴;在我失望时,他给我鼓励,他就是我真正的朋友。

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：

优点：1. 话题广泛;

2. 图片丰富;

3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。

建议：适当降低词汇难度。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

满分作文

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.

In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.

However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.

Best regards,

Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，

作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。

在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。

然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。

最好的问候，

李华

Zhu__ He is my good friend. She has a pair of big eyes, watery like two big

grapes, and her eyelashes are dense and long, very beautiful. She has black and

beautiful hair, and her little face is always red, like a big apple. She wears a

ponytail every day. Its very cute!

We often play the game of Eagle catching chicken together. At the beginning

of the game, we always use the form of stone, scissors and paper to decide who

is an eagle. Once, when Cheng Rui was an eagle, her movements were very agile. I

blocked left and right, and I did my best to solve the skill. I couldnt protect

my chicken. She caught her. We had a good time every time, and happy laughter

spread all over the campus.

We often run together, jump rope together and draw together... We do a lot

of things together. We are a pair of inseparable good friends.

朱__是我的好朋友。她有一双大大的眼睛，水汪汪的像两颗大葡萄，睫毛又密又长，非常漂亮。她有一头乌黑亮丽的头发，小脸总是红彤彤的，好像一个大苹果。她每天扎着一根马尾辫，可爱极了!

我们经常一起玩老鹰捉小鸡的游戏，游戏刚开始时，我们总是用石头剪刀布的形式来决定谁当老鹰。有一次，程睿当老鹰，她的动作非常敏捷，我左挡右挡，使尽浑身解术，也保护不了我的小鸡，被她捉住了。我们每次都玩得很开心，欢乐的笑声传遍校园。

我们还经常一起跑步，一起跳绳，一起画画……好多事情我们都一起去做，是一对形影不离的好朋友。

亲爱的黑人小男孩罗伯特：

你好!

很高兴能从我们的语文课本中认识你。我叫向钰，出生于一个普通的农民家庭。我今年读六年级，是一个你不曾相识的中国女孩。我从书中得知你不喜欢自己的那个破烂不堪的家，是因为家中满地乱跑的老鼠，还有其它杂物冲鼻的霉臭。你喜欢玩具店橱窗里的战斗机模型，可你为了实现与白人女孩丽莎友好相处的梦想，忍痛放弃梦寐以求的战斗机，将自己辛苦存了很久的钱全部捐给她治病。我相信你既然能改变你和丽莎他们一家人的种族歧视心理，也就一定能用你那善良、宽容、真诚、豁达的美好心灵让那“红红的玫瑰花”在所有人的心中绽放的。我相信你，一定行!

我的家乡金堂出产橘子。那又大又甜的橘子特别惹人喜爱，就像照红秋天的一盏盏灯笼。不爱吃，也会忍不住吃上一个。我外婆家就有，那从叶缝中挤出头来的橘子，把秋天的果园衬托得格外的热闹，布满成熟的气息。如果你来，我一定请你吃个够。只要你愿意，还可以带些走。如果实际允许，我会带你到万里长城去玩。从长城的嘉峪关走到山海关，去摸一摸那数不清的条石，和你照很多的照片。就怕我走不了那么远，走不到那雄伟高耸的山海关。我还要带你去我们的国都——北京，去看看那故宫，踏上那长长的刻有龙的图案的台阶。如果你同意的话，我也打算到你们的国家去看一看，玩一玩。欣赏你们那儿的迷人风景，到你们的游乐场体验体验。到时，你一定得为我做导游，去饱览你们的千山万水。我很早就有一个梦想，就是到月球上去旅行，察看月球是否真的没有水，没有空气，没有一切生物，是不是只有环形山?我还想到外星人哪里去，把地球人的文明行为带给他们，把他们的文明行为带回地球。还要与他们签一份合约，一份发展友好的合约。最后，祝你身体健康、笑口常开，早日成为我的朋友!

Dear John,

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing

so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have

traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with

you!

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is

rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I

buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the

snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a

word, I really appreciate the life there.

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

Truly yours,

Zoey

亲爱的外国小朋友：

你们好！你们肯定不认识我，不过没关系，当邮递员带着这封信，飞过千山万水送到你手里时，你就会知道我是一个中国小女孩。

我是一名龙的传人，我的故乡在中国，中国是一个历史悠久的文明古国，在这里，人们过着幸福安康的生活，做着悠闲自在的工作，这里是一个没有战火的国家。我们国家人口众多，资源丰富，这里山清水秀，绿树成荫，真可谓是山美、水美、人更美。

我国的万里长城好像一条巨龙，蜿蜒在祖国辽阔的北方，它跨越浩瀚的沙漠，翻越巍峨的山群，穿越茫茫的草原，连绵起伏，雄伟壮观是世界上罕见的奇迹之一，它西起嘉峪关，东至山海关，全长6000多千米。

我国还有两条神奇的大河—长江、黄河。长江从沱沱河开始，经安徽、湖南、上海等省、市、自治区，最终注入东海，全长6300千米，是一条名副其实的“长河”；黄河是中国第二大河，是闻名世界的万里巨川，经甘肃、四川、山西等九个省区，全长5464千米。

亲爱的外国小朋友，我们国家的名胜古迹繁多、景色怡人、人们热情好客，几天几夜也介绍不完，有机会一定到中国来做客，看看我们伟大的祖国。

祝你们身体健康、学习进步

What is a friend? A friend is when I have difficulty to help, when I meet to worry how to share for me; When I am happy to share... With these, is a true friend.

One day, we are in the exam. Basic knowledge in front of me to do fast, also very well done, when I do read the topic, a difficult problem in front of my eyes, I think for a long time also didnt know the answer, I cant help but looked quietly sit at the same table, luckily, she also thinking about this problem, I thought for a moment, suddenly a good idea, patted her on the shoulder and asked in a low voice: "the first reading of the third question is, can you make it?" She nodded to me and said, "you also do the problem?" I dont speak, she pretend dont care, said: "ah, finally done, really great!" "What? You went to?" "Just tell me what to do!" She saw my eager eyes, expression on her face is very serious, I know her heart must be very proud. "You just tell me!" My eyes will get very angry, but still not be quiet, see shout also useless, it is no use, I had to helplessly to continue.

It took a long time, I suddenly find tips, think of the answer, a wild heart, write the answer quickly, the following a few problem I have solved...

The test finished, I told the few answer to this conundrum to sit at the same table, she had said the answer again, the results of each question file are all the same, at this time, the neighbor said to me: "to yourself and confidence, as long as there is confidence, everything will be successful!" Yes, I also feel the quiet of the result is more worth to cherish.

Things although has in the past several days, but I always cant forget, I think friends should use appropriate methods to help each other, this is a friend indeed.

朋友是什么?朋友是在我有困难的时候乐于帮助，在我遇到烦恼的时候替我分担;在我快乐时共同分享……有了这些，才算是真正的朋友。

有一天，我们正在考试。前面的基础知识我做得很快，做得也很顺利，当我做到阅读题的时候，一道难题摆在我的眼前，我冥思苦想了很长时间也没想到答案，我忍不住悄悄看了一眼同桌，正巧，她也在思考这道难题，我想了一会儿，突然冒出一个好主意，轻轻拍了拍她的肩膀，小声问道：“第一个阅读的第三道题，你做出来了吗?”她对我点点头，说道：“你也做到那道题了吗?”看我不说话，她假装不在意的说道：“啊，终于做出来了，真爽!”“什么?你竟然做出来了?”“快告诉我怎么做吧!”她看到我急切的目光，脸上的表情十分严肃，我知道她内心一定很得意。“你快告诉我呀!”我的眼睛都要冒火了，但同桌仍然不作声，看到喊也没用，求也没用，我只好无奈的继续冥思苦想。

过了好长时间，我突然找到窍门，想到了答案，内心一阵狂喜，赶紧写上了答案，下面的几道难题我都迎刃而解……

考试结束了，我把几道难题的答案告诉了同桌，她也把答案说了一遍，结果每道题的档案都一样，这时，同桌对我说：“要对自己又信心，只要有信心，一切事情都能成功!”是啊，我也觉得自己静心思考得到的结果更值得珍惜。

事情虽然已经过去好几天了，但我一直不能忘记，我觉得朋友之间就应该运用恰当的方法互相帮助，这才是真正的朋友。

Dear Zhou Yuan;

I’m Bi Nanxin, your new friend. I have a new home. It’s big and beautiful.

Let me talking you about my new home.

In front of my house. There is a beautiful garden. there are many flowers

in it. There are blue, red,, yellow, pink and green. Behind the house. There is

an apple tree. there are some birds are singing in the tree.

In the house, there are many clean rooms. There is a living room, a dining

room, a bathroom, a study and three bedrooms. I like reading books. So I have

two big shelves. I like studying on the computer. So I have a computer, too.

My father is cleaning his car, my mother is cooking lunch. I’m doing my

homework. My grandparents are watching TV.

Is my home beautiful? What about yours? Please talk me about it.

Yours;

Bi Nanxin

2013年山东高考英语作文题目：给美国朋友Tom的回信

第二节：写作(满分30分)

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件：

1. 未及时回复的原因;

2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意： 1. 次数：120~150;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【试题点评】

今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。

【经典套路】

第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的

第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

第三段：“假期安排”部分

第四段：补充说明+客套话

【高分范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)

How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)