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597最新高考英语写作指导:七项基本原则
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一、 长 短 句原则
工作还得一张一弛呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主 题 句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比
我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:Walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:Slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:Sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:Dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:Stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I encore music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用:
Besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
Despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
Then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mir liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
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+ 加入清单掌握一些常用的句型对高考英语写作尤为重要。下面是语文迷网整理的句型,大家一起来看看吧。
一、开头句型
1.As far as ...is concerned
2.It goes without saying that...
3.It can be said with certainty that...
4.As the proverb says,
5.It has to be noticed that...
6.It`s generally recognized that...
7.It`s likely that ...
8.It`s hardly that...
9.It’s hardly too much to say that...
10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是
11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...
13.what’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in point is ...
As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that...
Further, we hold opinion that...
However , the difficulty lies in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to...
not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above...
In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
三、结尾句型
I will conclude by saying...
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...
All things considered,总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….
The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….
It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好
四、举例句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明
let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
Here is one more example.
Take … for example.
The same is true of….
This offers a typical instance of….
We may quote a common example of….
Just think of….
五、常用于引言段的句型
1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.
3. I believe the title statement is valid because….
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….
5. My argument for this view goes as follows.
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….
9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.
10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.
六、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法
1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.
2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.
3. A and B differ in….
4. A differs from B in….
5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….
6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….
7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….
8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….
9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.
10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….
11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….
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I apologize that I cannot go to school today. Last night my mother had a high fever and coughed badly. I think that she has got flu. She didn t have a good sleep and is very weak today, so I will go to Tiantan Hospital with my mother, and then stay at home to attend her. Because of this I have to ask for leave. I will appreciate you very much if you can allow my leave.
很抱歉我今天不能去上学了。昨天夜里我妈妈发高烧,咳嗽得厉害,我想她可能是得了流感。昨天晚上她休息得不好,而且今天很虚弱,所以我陪妈妈去天坛医院,然后在家照顾她。因此我不得不请假。如果您能准假我会非常感激。
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Every coin has two sides , which is the same as surfing the Internet. On one hand , we benefit a lot from computers. For instance , many people are accustomed to going shopping on the Internet, which is a way to save time and money. What’s more, Internet makes it convenient for friends and relatives to communicate with each other. So people are more closed. Besides, we can go through the news all over the world through the Internet, which can broaden our eyes and assist us to learn more about the world.
On the other hand, with the popularity of computer games, more and more teenagers are addicted to virtual world , leading to a terrible grade and health. Moreover, plenty of unhealthy information emerges on the Internet, making a bad influence on teenagers.
Only we combine the real life and computers can we use it reasonably.
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Our life has a great change since we use the Internet. We benefit a lot from the Internet. As for me, I am accustomed to going shopping on the Internet, which is a good way to save my time and money. Many people do the same as me. What’s more, the Internet makes it convenient for us to make friends and get people closed . We can also go through the news all over the world. The Internet not only broaden our view but also assist us to know more about the world . On the other hand , more and more teenagers are addicted to virtual world and they all play computer games everyday they want, leading to a terrible result.
In conclusion, we should have selective using the Internet and keep away from the virtual world. Don’t always use the Internet to chew the fat and do something meaningful.
【参考译文】
每个硬币都有两面,这和上网是一样的。一方面,我们从电脑中受益匪浅。例如,许多人习惯于在网上购物,这是一种节省时间和金钱的方法。更重要的是,互联网方便了朋友和亲戚互相交流。所以人们更加封闭。此外,我们可以通过互联网浏览世界各地的新闻,这可以开阔我们的视野,帮助我们了解更多的世界。
另一方面,随着电脑游戏的普及,越来越多的青少年沉迷于虚拟世界,导致了糟糕的成绩和健康。此外,大量的不良信息出现在互联网上,对青少年产生了不良影响。
只有把现实生活和电脑结合起来才能合理使用。
我们都知道,第二十一世纪的互联网。随着互联网的发展,越来越多的人开始用它来享受自己或做一些特别的事情。然而,每一个硬币都有两面,互联网也有自己的优点和缺点。
我们的生活发生了巨大的变化,因为我们使用互联网。我们从互联网受益很多。至于我,我习惯于在网上购物,这是一个很好的方法来节省我的时间和金钱。许多人和我一样。更重要的是,互联网使我们可以方便地交朋友,让人们关闭。我们也可以浏览世界各地的新闻。互联网不仅开阔了我们的视野,而且帮助我们了解更多的世界。另一方面,越来越多的青少年沉迷于虚拟世界,他们每天都玩电脑游戏,他们想要的,导致一个可怕的结果。
总之,我们应该有选择性地使用互联网,远离虚拟世界。不要总是用网络咀嚼脂肪,做一些有意义的事。
篇4:2024年高考英语作文
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俗话说:早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。
【参考范文】
the early bird will catch worms
an old saying "the early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.
for example, the chinese athletes excellent performance in xx olympic winter games in vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. if they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.
another case in point is my learning experience. i was good at english, but i couldnt pass the exam, for i wasnt prepared well before the examination. i had many things to solve at that time. as i met the complex things, i was at a loss. the reason was that i had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so i failed.
in short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.
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双人间(共15间),150元/天;
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参考范文:
Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business。
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain。 It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms,all with hot showers。 A single room is 100 yuan and double room 150 yuan for one night。 You are advised to book in advance。 The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from。 You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening。 We also have a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge。
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篇6:高考英语作文模板范本
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+ 加入清单英语写作对很多同学来说是件头疼的事,今天,小编就为大家整理了高考英语作文模板,无论高考英语作文出什么类型的题目,套上这些模版都能拿高分。
英语备考高考英语作文模板:图表作文
图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题。
The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 .
This means that as 进一步说明。
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节
图表细节一 . After 动词-ing :细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) .
The figures also tell us that图表细节二 .
In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论).
The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). b或是 It is high time that we (发出倡议).
篇7:2024高考英语写作素材:万能句子带翻译
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一.开头句型
1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻,...
3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到,...
6.Its generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...
7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为...
8.Its hardly that... 这是很难的......
9.Its hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是…
二.衔接句型
1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...
2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...
3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
5.But its a pity that... 但遗憾的是…
6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......
7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外,我们坚持认为,...
8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而,困难在于…
9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样,我们要注意...
10.not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势
12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说
14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
三.结尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此,我们有理由相信…
3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......
4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此,在我看来,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论…
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是,....
7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好
篇8:2024年高考英语作文分类汇总
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+ 加入清单导语:高考英语作文是高考英语中比较重要的一部分,好的句型又是英语作文中的亮点。下面是作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
一.表示感想
1、我非常喜欢这部电影。
I like the film very much.
2、我很喜欢这个戏剧。
I am very fond of the play.
3、我厌烦了这儿的食物。
I am tired of the food here.
4、我感动得哭了。
I was moved to tears.
5、我兴奋得睡不着觉。
I was so excited that I could not fall asleep.
6、我如此的悲伤以至于眼里充满泪水。
I was so sad that tears came to my eyes.
7、多漂亮的画啊!
What a beautiful picture!
8、士兵们多勇敢啊!
How brave the soldiers are!
9、我从来没看过这么好的电影。
I have never seen a better film.
10、我的书比你的书多。
I have more books than you.
二.叙述事件
1、故事发生在伦敦。
The story happened in London.
2、起初,他没看见那个人。
At first, he didn’t see the man.
3、然后,他走到汽车那儿。
Then he went over to the bus.
4、过了一会儿,他上了小汽车。
After a little while,he got on the car.
5、后来,他掏出了枪。
Later on he took out his gun.
6、最后,他被捕了。
At last, he was arrested.
7、开始时,老师给我们做了简短的介绍。
In the beginning, the teacher gave us a brief introduction.
8、后来,他开始在黑板上写东西。
Afterwards, he began to write something on the blackboard.
9、同时,学生记笔记。
Meanwhile, the students took notes.
10、最终,学生们成功了。
In the end, the students succeeded.
三.通知与信件
1、先生们,女士们,请注意!
Ladies and gentlemen,attention please!
2、我有重要的事告诉你们。
I have something important to tell you.
3、今天下午3点在图书馆有一个讲座。
We are going to have a lecture in the library at 3:00 this afternoon.
4、演讲者是一个美国教授。
The speaker will bean American professor.
5、他将谈论空气污染的问题。
He will talk about air pollution.
6、请大家按时到场。
Please be there on time.
7、我要说的就这些,谢谢!
That’s all. Thank you!
8、你最近怎么样?
How have you been recently?
9、我写信是要告诉你一个好消息。
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news.
10、希望早日收到你的回复。
I am looking forward to your early reply.
篇9:广东高考英语写作基础题备考策略
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+ 加入清单导语:小编就高考英语广东卷写作题将由基础写作(满分15分)和任务型写作(满分25分)两节组成。为了更有效地备考基础写作题,需要搞清楚基础写作题的特点和对考生写作能力的要求。本文将探讨这两个方面的问题,并对备考给出一些建议,供考生参考。
一、基础写作题的特点
高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力,如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。因此,基础写作题与往年的书面表达依然会有很多相似点,但也会出现一些新的特点。
1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活,如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游,和考生有关的话题讨论等。可以预料明年高考写作题的题材还会在这些范围之内,并为所有所考所熟悉。
2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。
3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。作文试题逐步走向开放将是大势所趋。但是,基础写作题还只能是半封闭的,其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的,考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来,但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等,考生又有一定的自主构思空间。
4. 用5句话表达。这是基础写作题与往年书面表达题最显著的不同点。往年是规定字数(100词左右),句子的数量不作规定,所以很多考生为了不犯句法错误总是用一些简单句。而基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点,但所给的信息点与往年的书面表达相比并不会减少,所以,用5个简单句很难完成任务,必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点,而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。从这一点来说,基础写作题对考生运用语言能力的要求大大提高了。
二、基础写作题提出的新要求
由基础写作题的特点可以看出,它对考生提出了一些新的要求。
1. 信息组织能力。笔者认为,信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。对于题目所提供的各种信息点,考生首先需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类,并初步计划将哪些信息放到同一个句子中;其次是将信息进行合理的排列,排列必须依照一定的标准,如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;第三是选择信息表达的秩序,确定句子之间的先后关系,这既要考虑语法上能否衔接,还要考虑语意上的连贯。在组织信息的过程中,还要对某些信息进行必要的增删,使文章意思连贯、语言畅通、逻辑严密。
2. 运用复杂句子的能力。在整理和归类信息点之后,就需要正确地使用比较复杂的句子,综合地表达信息。复杂句子主要有三类:
第一类是复合句,包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。
第二类是并列句,包括具有递进关系的并列句, 如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。
第三类是一些特殊句型,如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。
正确地使用各种句型,不仅能够完成题目所要求的任务,还能使文章的句式变得丰富、行文更加流畅、中心和主旨更加突出。
三、基础写作题的备考策略
在基础写作的备考过程中,一方面要重视养成一些良好的写作习惯,如认真审题、巧妙构思、常写草稿、工整誊写、仔细核对等好习惯,另一方面在组织信息和训练复杂句子结构方面要多下些功夫。下面我们以“广东省普通高等学校招生全国统一考试广东省英语科考试说明”中的样题为例,探讨如何备考基础写作题。
第一节:基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中考生英语演讲比赛并获奖,该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动,下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。
活动时间
7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日
活动内容
参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲
听英语讲座 表演英语短剧
看英语电影 教外宾学中文
【写作内容】
电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求用英语以书信形式给予答复。
1. 选择适合你的时间并说明理由;
2. 解释你只能参加其中的两项活动(听英语讲座和教外宾学中文),虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义;
3. 说明你选择的理由:听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息;教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。
【写作要求】
1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Sir or Madame,
I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
【评分标准】
句子结构的准确性和复杂度;信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
由此我们可以看出,信息点的数量与往年的书面表达题相比并没有减少,要想用5个句子把所有的信息都表达出来,考生必须从以下三个方面进行备考:
1. 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:
思考的问题
样题分析
要写的文章主题是什么?(topic)
参加夏令营。
为什么要写这篇文章?(purpose)
电视台邀请参加夏令营,写信回复
要写文章的信息点有哪些?(information items)
选择的时间、参加活动的内容、解释为什么。
怎样安排信息点的逻辑顺序?(order)
说明要参加的活动并解释原因—→说明要参加的时间并解释原因。
动作是什么时候发生的(时态)?(when)
夏令营还没有开始,文章主要用一般将来时。
2. 提高组织信息的能力。组织信息的过程包括信息分类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。这些步骤看起来好像很繁琐,但对于中下成绩的考生来说,一步一步地思考这些问题是很有必要的。现以样题为例,说明该怎样组织信息。
信息分类
信息排列
信息表达
时间信息:两个时间段。
内容信息:6项活动。
选择信息:其中的两个活动及其理由。
夏令营的内容信息点排列:可以将自己要参加的两项活动放在前面,其它信息点可以略写。
作者的选择信息点排列:依照自己所参与的活动顺序逐项表述,紧接着给出选择的理由。
结合已经给出的头和尾,写作的顺序可安排如下:
很高兴被邀请(已给出)——感谢安排这么多的活动——说明活动的意义——表达自己只能参加两项活动的遗憾和原因——说明参加的活动内容及原因(两项活动用两句话)——说明自己选择的时间及原因。
3. 夯实基础,掌握基本的句子结构及其用法。对于大多数考生来说,用词不准和句子结构错误是写作失分的“罪魁祸首”。夯实基础、掌握基本的句子结构及其用法是基础写作备考的主要任务,完成这项任务可以分步骤进行:
第一步:练习写简单句,练就写简单句基本不犯语言错误的“真功”。简单句大体上可以分为两个基本类型,考生必须掌握:“主语+谓语+(其它成分)”“主语+系动词+表语”。
第二步:练习运用复杂句。要提高运用复杂句的能力,考生必须要攻克三个易错点:一是主句与从句之间主谓结构混乱,造成主句缺谓语;二是没有掌握关联词的用法,错用、多用、漏用关联词;三是该使用简单句的地方人为地复杂化,如可以用分词或介词短语来表达的,却偏要用从句。
下面以样题为例,介绍笔者是如何思考写这篇文章的(为了分析方便,笔者将5个句子进行编号),仅供参考:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. ①Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. ②I am sure all the activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③But it’s a pity that I can only take part in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. ④I would like to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn more about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
⑤I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, so I am going to attend the camp from August 15th to 22nd.
Thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
第①句顺应已给出的句中的glad心情,表示感谢安排这么多的活动,具有较好的连贯性。同时很自然地将活动内容做一介绍。
第②句用简单句表达活动的意义,语意上连贯,句式上没有继续用“长”句,有变化。
第③句用but转折并用it’s a pity 句型表示委婉的歉意,然后解释原因。
第④句用一个长句子表达自己要参加的两个项目,并解释原因,解释原因的第一句用定语从句,第二句用状语从句,使句子结构富于变化。
第⑤句解释参加的时间并给出解释。之所以把时间放在后面,主要是考虑它与题目已经给出的句子之间在语意上的连贯性不够。
篇10:英语高考
全文共 702 字
+ 加入清单Graduation and Moving on
Graduation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out
into the real world.
Before graduating from school, We usually have a variety of activities,
like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our
friendship, or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show
respect.
However, I have mixed emotions about moving on.I want to stay and have more
fun with my friends, but I will have to move on.Graduation means taking a step
forward---moving onward and upward.Thus I can learn more and will be more
skilled and experienced.
Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not.Lets make great efforts
so that our dream will come true.
篇11:高考英语作文:介绍广场舞
全文共 1379 字
+ 加入清单导语:广场舞是舞蹈艺术中最庞大的系统,因多在广场聚集而得名,融自娱性与表演性为一体,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
假定你是李华。近日有网友在推特贴出了中国大妈带领美国大妈在新泽西大跳广场舞的照片,你的美国朋友David看过后,很想了解中国流行的广场舞(square dance)的相关情况。请你用英语给他写封回信,要点包括:
1)广场舞跳的时间、地点、参与人员等;
2)广场舞流行的原因;
3)广场舞的缺点。
注意:
1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头语和结束语已为你写好。
范文:
Dear David,
I am writing to tell you something about the square dance in China. In the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly women, will gather in squares to dance to popular music. More and more young people are also joining in now.
There are many reasons behind its popularity. First of all,China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves. Besides,doing the square dance is a good way for people to keep fit.
However, just as each coin has two sides,this kind of dance has also leads to some problems. For example, dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, which annoy many other people.Maybe square dancers need to make some changes.
Yours,
LiHua
【参考译文】
亲爱的戴维,
我写信是要告诉你关于在中国广场舞的东西。在早上或晚饭后,人们,特别是老年妇女,将聚集在广场跳舞流行音乐。现在越来越多的年轻人也加入进来。
它的流行背后有许多原因。首先,中国在过去几十年的社会和经济发展取得了巨大进步,人们有更多的时间和精力去享受自己。此外,做广场舞是人们保持健康的好方法。
然而,正如每个硬币都有两面一样,这种舞蹈也导致了一些问题。例如,舞者大声地演奏音乐,占据了许多公共场所,这让许多人感到不安。
你的好朋友,
李华
2.介绍学校的高考英语满分作文
3.介绍光盘行动的英语作文
4.介绍红楼梦的英语作文
5.介绍英国文化的英语作文2篇
6.介绍丝绸之路的英语作文
7.介绍英国的高考英语作文
8.介绍英国文化的英语作文
篇12:高考英语作文之时间的表达必备万能模板
全文共 527 字
+ 加入清单导语:你会用英语表达时间吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为还在备考的同学整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
一、“年、月、日、小时”的表达
(一)表示“在某年”:
① in + 阿拉伯数字(读的时候用基数词,从后到前,分两截来读)。如:
He was born in 1971. (1971读作nineteen seventy-one)
②使用year时,year放在数词之前。如:
in the year 253 B.C. (253 B. C. 读作two five three B.C. ) 在公元前253年。
(二)表示“在某月”:
in +月份名词(开头第一字母要大写), 如:in January / February。
(三)表示“在某月某日”:
① on + 月份+ 序数词(th可省略, 但读时要念出来)。如:
National Day is on Oct. 1.
② on + the + 序数词+ of + 月份。如:
National Day is on the 1st of October.
(四)表示“在某整点钟”:
at +基数词 (+ oclock / sharp)。如:
Our meeting will begin at five oclock.
篇13:2024年重庆市高考英语作文题目
全文共 553 字
+ 加入清单五、写作(共两个写作任务.满分35分)
写作一(满分15分)
请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
A mother said,”My son is always on the phone,sleeping, out with his friends.or in his room.
He never has time to talk to me.”
要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;
(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;
(3)词数不少于60;
(4)在答题卡上作答。
写作二(满分20分)
调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而频临灭绝,目前总数不足1000只。
暇设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信,请他们关注这一状况并
提供帝助。内容应包括:
·说明写信目的
·简述江豚现状
·希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)
·表示感谢并期待回复
注意:(1)词数不少于80;
(2)在答题卡上作答
(3)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student from Chongqing,China.
___________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
篇14:独自旅行高考满分英语作文
全文共 776 字
+ 加入清单I like to travel to different places, I can see thebeautiful scenery and get to know the differentcultures.
我喜欢去不同的地方旅行,我可以看到美丽的风景和了解不同的文化。
My friends and I always travel together, we makemany plans in advance.
我总是和朋友一起旅行,我们提前订好很多计划。
But the plans will always be interrupted by all kinds of unexpected incidents, like the badweather, the holiday being cancelled, so we have to spend another time to wait for the trip.
但是计划总是会被各种各样意想不到的事件打断,比如天气不好,假期被取消等等,因此我们不得不花时间等待下次的旅程。
Traveling alone can ignore these problems, I can go to travel whenever I want, I just need topick up my backpack, and then buy the ticket.
独自旅行就能忽视这些问题,我可以随时去旅行,只需要背起背包,买上票。
It is so free, I don’t have to wait for others, I can go to the places I want to.
那是多么的自由,我不用等其他人,去我想去的地方。
Traveling alone is good.
独自旅行真好。
篇15:2024高考英语作文预测:家乡的变化
全文共 906 字
+ 加入清单My home town is in the center of Xuzhou which was a quiet and beautiful place. In the past, there were many animals. They were lovely and nice. The air was fresh and there were many birds fly in the sky.
我的家乡在徐州,是一个安静而美丽的地方中心。在过去,有许多动物。他们是可爱的,漂亮的。空气清新,有许多鸟在天空飞翔。
Over the past years, it has changed a lot. At the present, it becomes a modern town and develops a lot. Now, the people in Xuzhou are richer than before, so most of people go to work by bus or by underground. Sometimes, they also drive their private cars to work. Many people sell out their old houses and move into new flats.
过去的那些年,它已经发生了很大的变化。现在,它已经成为一个现代化城市,也得到了很大的发展。现在徐州的人都比以前富有,所以大多数人都是乘巴士或地铁去工作的。有时候,他们也开私家车去上班。很多人卖了他们的老房子,然后搬进新公寓。
In some ways, the development has brought some good things, but it has also causes much environment pollution. I think we should take action to reduce the pollution.
在某些方面,发展带来了好处,但是也带来了环境污染。我认为我们应该采取措施来减少污染。
篇16:什么是爱高考优秀英语作文
全文共 2431 字
+ 加入清单a lot of people shared their views to what love really is, or at least what love is in their eyes. perhaps love is just an illusion. a strong illusion, especially for those who are searching for a purpose of life. is love an answer? love can be wonderful, special, complicated, a distress, a gift, a curse, a tragedy, and most of all, an eperience. love is a mysterious and a complicated force. what do a person mean when they say they love someone? love is many different things. each of us have our own understanding of love is, and most of the time we base our definitions from feelings and eperiences. the book defines love in many ways. "it is a strong affection for another arising out of kinship or personal ties." it can be an affection and tenderness felt by lovers. love is the object of attachment, devotion, or admiration.
just when we thought we finally grasp what love is, somebody asks:"does anyone really know what love mean? i believe i have a true love, but true love is always hurt, isnt it?"i scratches my head with this thought and began to wonder. what is the answer to this? "this i have to know!" i said to myself. i looked in the mirror and asked "is it a true love when you know you want to live with this special person for the rest of your life? have we reached true love when we are ready to give everything away towards our subject? or maybe when can go as far as to sacrifice ourselves for our love? what about love as an obsession? is that possible?
"but isnt love suppose to be an obsession? if it is not, then youd have to rationalize. if you rationalize then its not love, because there is always a better rationalization.""i think the "in love" phase is obsessive but according to williamson (and backed up by my paltry eperience), love does not involve the ego, is selfless and the opposite of obsession."according to marriane williamson, the author of "a return to love," there is a "holy love" and a "special love." "the latter type is the obsessiveone; finding that one special person absorbs _all_ your attention."
so who is right and who is wrong about love? there is no wrong answer. love is many wonderful things. love may not work out all the time but it leaves you a special sort of feeling, like nothing you have ever imagined. is love a purpose of life? i think are life will be dull without it. but is it necessary? important? it is a part of life, and forever it will be a part of us.
篇17:高考英语满分作文写给杰夫的一封信
全文共 961 字
+ 加入清单Dear Jeff,
Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I m very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.
To Jeff
Dear Jeff,
Im Li Hua from Beijing I-Iongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.
While you are here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home. So we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food there,and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
篇18:2024年高考全国卷二英语作文
全文共 779 字
+ 加入清单2016年高考作文
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱:.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One Possible Version
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It
thwill start from June 15 and last for three
weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you show me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good
change
for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇19:高考英语谚语大全
全文共 2524 字
+ 加入清单导语:学点英文谚语会让你写作增色不少!物以类聚,善有善报、恶有恶报,英雄所见略同……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
1、Ill news travels fast.
坏事传千里。
2、From saving comes having.
富有来自节约。
3、No cross, no crown.
不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。
4、A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难之交才是真朋友。
5、He that climbs high falls heavily.
爬得越高,摔得越重。
6、Experience is the mother of wisdom.
实践出真知。
7、East or west, home is best.
在家千日好,出门时时难。
8、Dont trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.
不要自寻烦恼。
9、Dont teach your grandmother to suck eggs.
休要班门弄斧。
10、Doing is better than saying.
行胜于言。
11、Birds of a feather flock together.
物以类聚,人以群分。
12、Barking dogs seldom bite.
吠犬不咬人;爱叫的狗很少咬人;善吠的狗很少咬人。
14、As the tree, so the fruit.
长什么树,结什么果。
15、An idle youth, a needy age.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
16、A good wife makes a good husband.
有好妻子就有好丈夫。
17、A good medicine tastes bitter.
良药苦口,忠言逆耳。
18、A good fame is better than a good face.
美名胜于美貌。
19、A good conscience is a soft pillow.
不做亏心事,不怕鬼叫门。
20、A good conscience is a continual feast.
白天不做亏心事,夜半敲门心不惊。
21、A good beginning makes a good ending.
良好的开端就是成功的一半。
22、Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.
逆境出人才。
23、A constant guest is never welcome.
久住非佳宾,常来不欢迎。
24、A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
一鸟在手,胜似二鸟在林。
25、A bad workman quarrels with his tools.
拙匠常怨工具差。
26、A man cannot spin and reel at the sametime.
一心不能二用。
27、It is never too old to learn.
活到老,学到老。
28、Readingis to the mind while exercise to the body.
读书健脑,运动强身。
29、Knowledge starts with practice.
实践出真知。
30、Complacency is the enemy of study.
学习的敌人是自己的满足。
31、A little knowledge is a dangerous thing.
一知半解,害已误人。
32、Laugh and the world laughs with you, weep and you weep alone.
欢笑, 则世界与你同乐; 哭泣, 则独自悲伤.
33、Ill news travels fast.
坏事传千里。
34、From saving comes having.
富有来自节约。
35、No cross, no crown.
不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。
36、Friends must part.
天下无不散之筵席。
37、A bad thing never dies.
坏事传千年
38、Every minute counts.
分秒必争。
39、A years plan starts with spring.
一年之计在于春。
40、How time flies!
时光飞逝。
41、Nature teaches us to love our friends but religion our enemies.
自然教我们爱朋友,宗教却教我们爱敌人。
42、Life without a friend is death without a witness.
在世无朋友,死后无证人。
43、In time of prosperity, friends will be plenty; In time of adversity, not one amongst twenty.
富在深山有远亲,穷在闹市无人问。
44、He is rich enough who has true friends.
有真朋友的人是富翁。
45、He is a good friend that speaks well of us behind our backs.
背后说好话,才是真朋友。
46、Have but few friends though many acquaintances.
结交可广,知己宜少。
47、God defend me from my friends; form my enemy I can defend myself.
防友靠天,防敌靠己。
48、Friends may meet, but mountains never greet.
朋友可相逢,高山永分离。
49、Friendship the older it grows the stronger it is.
友谊地久天长。
50、Everything is good when new, but friend when old.
物莫如新,友莫如故。
篇20:高考英语作文推荐
全文共 1659 字
+ 加入清单In recent yearsRecently,more and more students have studied hard to go to universityies.(Its actually better for you to use the present continuous tense here coz ur trying to explain a well known concept). However,universities always have some limitations tofor students,like the number of students??.So in that case some students often loselost their chances to accept their educationgetting college education.This phenomenon is quite serious.Its a real problem.In our lifeves,we all know that students need to pass the entrance of examination to enter the universityies.,And there are many difficulties may happen.Always it may happen that some talented students missed their chances of getting to entering their imagining dream universityies in the most important test.When it happened,these students may then loset themselves.In addition,it is terrible for them to leave school to obtaintheother knowledge which is not fitting to them.????They could have stayed in their universities which they wanted to go all along but they now are wasting their precious life which is the most important time to do other things which they do not like.??On the other hand,our society lost the recourse which they could have given their best??.Future more,it brought some negative things including that students who can not go to universities to master of right views.??In a word,that is why it is justified and necessary for the government to intake expansion in Chinese universities.Its not a word Only in this way, more and more students can achieve their dreams of studying in their imagining universities.And only in this way can our country be richer in knowledge.