介绍英国首都伦敦的英语作文【精品20篇】

Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.i am very glad to be here for your interview.my name is song yonghao, i come from luoyang,a very beautiful aicent city.my undergratuade period will be accomplished in changan university in july ,20xx;and now,i am trying my best for obtaining a key to tongji university.

Generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. when i was sophomore, i found web design very interesting, so i learned it very hard . to weaver a homepage for myself, i stayed with my pesonel computer for half a month.,and i am the first one in my class who own his home

page. forthermore,i am a person with great perserverence. during the days preparing for the first examination,i insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like.and just owning to this,i could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.

Well ,in my spare time ,i like basketball, tennis and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i often go to english corner to practise my oral english on every thursday,and write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.

Ok, that is all,thank you for your attention. n be soon turned into products in all of the modern industry. Four years’ university education gives me a lot of things to learn,a lot of chances to try,and a lot of practices to improve myself.It teaches me not only what to study and ho-w to think,but also to see the importance of practical ability (such as doing expriment as much as possible). In the university life,i have made many good friends.They help me improve my study and research ability, do ererything just like a man,and often give me good example to follow. Besides what i have introduced myself above,i also have many interests in my spare time.I like playing football,which is an effective way i

think to improve my body health,and it can teach me how to join in a group and deal with other people.Drawing and writing is another favor to me.

Above all,I choose the major in order to broad my view in biology scince,and enhance my research ability.I will do my best to join the new group and be good at postgraduate study.

Recently, I met a new friend, she is the daughter of mom colleague, called Xu Jia times. This year is 8 years old, she is very cute. She has a black head of hair, firm two small plait. With big eyes, very bright; She has a cute little nose, the nose there are a very good laugh, very will talk little mouth, what a lovely little girl!

Times times are sometimes very naughty, just for today, times times in homework, halfway through, suddenly a tantrum, throw a pencil, just after the next to her, then her mother pencil is just stamp onto her mother palms, all blood out, the original times times no problem when you do your homework, came a tantrum. See mother palm bleeding, times times, wordlessly sat there, her mother harshly criticized her, times times pretended to cry, really let a person in distress situation. Said times times is very lively, because she is always jammed, kept talking. In the mothers unit, she and I play poker. I win every time her, but she sometimes play to depend on, all want to change a few CARDS, let me very angry, but I still forgive her, because I was when my sister. Later, we use poker guess Numbers, every time I can guess, all the CARDS to win back immediately, at this time, she can dance to show me, give me drawing, want me to return the card to her, was a lively and lovely.

This is I met a new friend, lively, lovely, naughty a little girl, I like her very much, every time go to mothers unit is called her mother took her to, so that we can often meet two people, often play together.

最近，我认识了一位新朋友，她是妈妈同事的女儿，叫许嘉倍。她今年8岁了，很活泼可爱。她有一头乌黑的头发，扎着两只小辫子;眼睛大大的，很明亮;她还有一个可爱小鼻子，鼻子下面还有一张很会笑，很会说话的小嘴巴，真是个很可爱的小姑娘!

倍倍有时也很顽皮的，就在今天，倍倍在写作业，写着写着，突然发起脾气，把铅笔一扔，这时她妈妈刚好经过她旁边，铅笔就刚好戳到她妈妈手心上，血都流出来了，原来倍倍做作业时遇到不会的难题，就发起脾气来了。看到妈妈手掌心流血了，倍倍就一声不吭地坐在那，她妈妈狠狠地批评了她，倍倍就假装哭起来，真让人哭笑不得。 说倍倍很活泼，因为她老是蹦蹦跳跳，说个不停。在妈妈单位时，她和我玩扑克牌。我每次都赢她，不过她有时会耍赖，都要换几张扑克牌，让我很生气，不过我还是原谅了她，因为我是当姐姐的。后来，我们用扑克牌猜数字，每次我都能猜中，一下子就把扑克牌都赢回来了，这时，她会跳舞给我看，还给我画画，希望我把扑克牌还给她，真是又活泼又可爱。

这就是我结识的一个新朋友，活泼、可爱、顽皮的一个小女孩，我很喜欢她，每次去妈妈单位都叫她妈妈带她来，这样我们两个人就能经常见面，经常在一起玩了。

导语：山九华山是中国佛教的四个神圣的山脉之一。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Jiuhuashan(also called "Mount Jiuhua"， literally "Nine Glorious Mountains")

Mount Jiuhua is one of the four sacred mountains of Chinese Buddhism. It is located in Qingyang County in Anhui province and is famous for its rich landscape and ancient temples.

Many of the mountain’s shrines and temples are dedicated to Ksitigarbha (known in Chinese as Dìzàng， Traditional Chinese：)，

who is a bodhisattva and protector of souls in hell according to Mahayana Buddhist tradition. Pious Buddhists often come to this popular attraction in Anhui to climb to Greater Tiantai peak， which is regarded as Jiuhuashan’s most important peak， although it is not the tallest.

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(也称为“九华山山”字面上的“九光荣山”)

山九华山是中国佛教的四个神圣的山脉之一。它位于安徽省庆阳县并以其丰富的景观和古老的寺庙。

很多山的神殿、寺庙都致力于地藏(中国传统在中国被称为地藏)

菩萨保护灵魂的入地狱率根据大乘佛教的传统。虔诚的佛教徒经常来这个流行的吸引力在安徽爬到天台峰这被认为是九华山最重要的高峰虽然它不是最高的。

I come from Enshi, Hubei Province, a small developing town. I like to watch

the scenery, walk, chat on the Internet and play games.

In sports, I occasionally play basketball, football, soldier ball and

badminton.

For the coming college life, my expectation is to learn English well, adapt

to college life as soon as possible,

and also hope to know more friends. Wonderful four years of University.

In addition, I am professional and solid, reading is my greatest enjoyment,

and studying computer makes me feel happy.

Im practical in my work, and Ill finish no matter how small I am.

I can repair the computer, manage the network, network operation and online

sales.

Whats important is that I have a kind of spirit of persevering in

research, a kind of neck that will never stop until I understand.

The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.

The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.

The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!

Henan province is a province of the great motherland, located on the plains of the central part of the motherland. It is one of the major cradles of Chinese civilization. Henan Province ancient Yuzhou, also called "Zhongzhou", "central plains".

Henan province is a big country of rail transportation hub connecting the four corners of the world. It is rich in wheat and is a famous "big granary" in china". "The ancient capital of Anyang, Luoyang known to the world, opened the" Temple (Shaolin Temple), central water conservancy project. Henans outstanding figures in history and contemporary heroes have added luster to their hometown.

The famous poet Du Fu, was later known as the "poet", he was born in Gongyi City, Henan Province, patriotic general Yue Feisheng in Tang Yang county. And Wu Daozi, Zhang Zhongjing, Xu Shiyou, Wu Huanxian......

Is located in Henan province Anyang huanshui river lake is Chinese Yin Ruins, found so far the earliest ancient ruins. 3300 years ago, as the king Pangeng moved to Yin capital. The land is flat, the soil is fertile, and the climate is pleasant. Since then, Yin has been the political, economic, military and cultural center of the late Shang Dynasty for 250 years. Now, because of the war the Yin Ruins, so called yin. Archaeologists have found the earliest inscriptions on oracle bones here. And unearthed a weighing 750 kg of the mother of the big tripod ding. Today, the Anyang old city, in the new era of rip writing new songs. There are nine in the ancient city of Luoyang, where the closed forest, the White Horse Temple, Longmen Grottoes, peony, jiguandong known to the world. One of the city, the ancient capital of seven dynasties, is a very beautiful city, where the famous "Dragon Park".

Having said so much, we havent mentioned our hometown yet. My hometown is in Puyang, where it is called "green home". It is very beautiful. The square is full of poetic culture and the Cultural Palace is full of cultural atmosphere. The Green Manor scenery is pleasant......

Henan Province, there are many famous brand products: red tractor, Sanquan food, Yutong Bus, Anbo group, Shuanghui food, Red-Cooked Chicken, Daokou Style, Nanyang beef, apple, Oriental Anyang steelmaking plant......

Henan, Im so proud of you! Proud of you!

导语：八一建军节诞生于1933年，她的第一个节日庆祝活动，是在中央苏区首府——江西瑞金举行的。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It is the Army Day of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army on August 1. It stems from the August 1 Nanchang Uprising which the Chinese Party members lead of revolutionary period of the peoples mainly main justice in China. The August 1 Nanchang Uprising for will it be August 1 1927 fire Communist Party of China arms resist the Kuomintang first rifle of reactionaries indicate China enters the Communist Party of China and leads the new period for revolution of arms independently mark the birth of the new peoples army of China.

Will it be July 1933 the republic temporary central government Soviet of Chinese determine to be tenable on commemoration day for the Chinese Workers and Peasants Red Army (the predecessor of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army ) on August 1. From then on August 1 became the Army Day of the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army. During Army Day will concentrate on launching the activity of " support the army and give preferential treatment to the families of the armymen and martyrs support the government and cherish the people " all over China commemorate the birth of the peoples army.

Since the Chinese Peoples Liberation Army built up the Army goes through the innumerable hazards and hardships from small to large change from weak to strong develop into an army with synthetic multi-arm is advancing on the roads of the picked troops with Chinese characteristics courageously become the great wall of steel that China defends the peace and development.

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它是八月一日中国人民解放军的一天。它源于八月一日南昌起义，中国共产党领导的革命时期，人民的主要正义在中国。的八一南昌起义为将它是8月1 1927年，火共产党中国武器抵抗国民党反动派的第一枪，表明中国进入的中国共产党，领导新时期革命武装独立，标记的中国新型人民军队的诞生。

1933年7月，该共和国临时中央政府，中国苏维埃，确定以成立纪念日为中国工人和农民红军(前身中国人民解放军)8月1日。从那时起，八月一日成了中国人民解放军的一天。建军节期间，将集中开展“活动支持军队和优待军人、烈士家属，政府支持和珍惜的人”都在中国，纪念人民军队的诞生。

自从中国人民解放军建造的军队，去通过无数的危险和困难，从小型到大型，改变从弱到强，发展成军合成多臂，是推进中国特色勇敢精兵道路，成成为的钢铁长城，中国维护和平与发展。

1.有关建军节的英语作文

2.八一建军节的英语介绍

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5.建军节英语作文带翻译

6.以建军节为话题的英语作文

7.建军节英语作文3篇带翻译

I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because

I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I

am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby

brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner.

I said to my mum; let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “are

you sure you can?” “Yes, believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the

kitchen. I went towards my baby brother. “Oh baby, don’t cry. I will sing a song

for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I

was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first

time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.

I love small animals very much, but my favorite is the puppy.

The puppy is not big, but the head is big. There is a pair of small triangular ears, faces are small. A pair of gem-like flexible and translucent big eyes, a round yo black nose. The body of the hair was yellow, smooth like painted a layer of oil. Tail hairy, often swing to swing, feels very comfortable.

Puppy eating food will be issued a little sound, eat quickly, it seems hungry look. Sleep when motionless, very quiet, a movement to lift his head to see, nothing to keep lying on the ground to sleep. When you play the game, if you are happy, will be hard to put the tail, jumping to the distance, the tongue often stretched out.

Because my neighbor has a puppy, so I often play with it. Puppys head is big, I called it "big head". Once, I just returned to the door, see the dog playing on the roadside, running around. I was ready to open the door, the dog immediately ran over, shook his head in front of me, as if very welcome me.

I really like this lovely and naughty puppy! I believe you will like this "big head" it!

My favorite little animal - puppy.

My name is . I am from . There are people in my family. My father works in a com#puter com#pany. He is a com#puter engineer. My mother works in a international trade com#pany. She is also a busy woman. I have a older sister and a younger brother. My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in English. My brother is an elementary school student. He is 8 years old.

Hello,everyone. My name is giffer and Im 12-year-old .I am Very pleased to be admitted to the Xicheng Foreign Language School. My favourite subject is Chinese and English. My hobby is blown flute and reading. There is also a very good Orchestra here. The school orchestra and this will allow me to learn a lot of knowledge in this three years. I want to study well. To give our parents and ourselves a satisfactory answer at this holiday. I took part in the training of the orchestra. Participated in the torch relay Task. I will Learn a lot and I hope that I can learn more knowledge at this secondary school.

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大家好，我叫giffer，今年12岁。很高兴今年考上了西城外国语中学。我喜欢的科目是语文、英语、我的爱好是吹长笛、看书。在这里也有一个很好的管乐团.这个学校和这个乐团能让我学习到很多知识.在这三年里。我要好好学习，给自己和家长一个满意的答卷，在这个假期，我参加了管乐团的训练，参加了火炬传递的任务，学到了很多东西，我希望我能在这所中学学到更多的知识。

My name is xx, a postgraduate student from Tianjin University, and will get my master degree in March 2007.

Id like to summarize myself from 3 aspects:

First, Im an excellent learner. In my sophomore year, I passed the entrance examination to the Excellent Student Program in Tianjin University and was recommended as the postgraduate student with special courses, and then I joined the IBM Center in Tianjin University. After finishing my undergraduate courses, my GPA was 3.8 out of 4.5.

Second, Im an excellent problem-solver. During the last 4 years, I have finished 5 projects, including the Hydraulic Engineering Project Management System, and so on. And I took part in the Mathematical Contest in Modeling in 2003 and won the second prize in Tianjin region.

Last, Im an excellent team player. Ive been serving as the monitor for 6 years and team leader for 2 years. And besides taking more responsibilities, I also placed great emphasis on teamwork, in order to meet the teams goal.

Please allow me to introduce myself fou you. My name is xx, I am as born in Qinghai Province. Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview. Now I will briefly introduce themselves.

I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools.

My specialty is computer software applications.

In the past year I have the basic expertise. I like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, and so on. I think I am an honest and optimistic, can also work under great pressure. This is probably, thank you.

hi, good afternoon everyone :

my name is xxx .and i am from no.*** overseas chinese middle school of *** .it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview . i would like to answer whatever you may raise , and i hope i can make a good performance today .now let me introduce myself briefly .

i am xxx years old . i graduated from “*** university”in *** . and then i got a higher degree in“ xx university ” in xx . i have worked for *** years since i graduated from the university .and i have been a headteacher for *** years .

being a teacher is tired but excited . having taught for so many years , i think i am experienced in teaching field . i have ever got much honor in teaching , but still i think i need a new environment to challenge myself .

i am open—minded , quickly thoughs and skillful in searching for information on internet . i can operate computer well . in my spare time, i have broad interests .such as reading ,surfing the

internet ,enjoying music ,writing some articles on my blog and even chatting with foreign friends online if possible .

i always believe working hard can bring us more opportunities . to be the best one is a little bit hard. but “trying all my best

“ always can cheer me up .to succeed or fail is not the only thing . it’s in how we face and invaluate ourselves .this is the chance we take , and this is what weve worked for all our lives . shining like a shooting star at night , and always smile at life .we’ve got to

give it all . someday when we turn back for what the footprint we have left , time will record the victory in our heart . so “ try all my best ” --- this is the motto of mine .

ok !so much .thank you !

[英语教师自我介绍面试

My name is Li Haiqing. I am a local person who is 21years old. Iam from chongqing and I am of the opinion that my hometown is a beautiful city.

Moreover, I would like to say something about my family. I have my mother ,my father,and my elder sisther,they love me very much,I know my parents have so much hops and dreams for me。So I must study well.

I have the confidence because I have such ability! I am kind-hearted, patient, outgoing and creative. I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to resolve any problem no matter how difficult it is. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.

In spare time, I like reading books, surfing on the Internet, listening to music like, classic, or light music, because they can make me feel relaxed. Nobody could keep on working efficiently, therefore proper amusement is a must. In addition, I insist on do some physical training such as running, and horizontal bar as well. By doing this, I can always stay healthy.

That’s all. Thank you for giving me such a valuable opportunity!

我叫李海清。我是本地人，21岁。我来自重庆，我认为我的家乡是一个美丽的城市。

此外，我想谈谈我的家庭。我有我的母亲，我的父亲，还有我的姐姐，他们非常爱我，我知道我的父母有很多的希望和梦想，所以我必须好好学习。

我有信心，因为我有这样的能力!我善良，有耐心，外向，有创造力。我是一个勤奋的学生，特别是做我感兴趣的事情。不管有多困难，我都要尽力解决任何问题。我一直相信一个人如果不继续学习就很容易落后。

课余时间，我喜欢看书，上网，听音乐，古典音乐，轻音乐，因为它们能让我放松。没有人能继续有效地工作，因此适当的娱乐是必须的。此外，我还坚持做一些体育锻炼，比如跑步，以及水平的酒吧。这样做，我就能一直保持健康。

这年代。谢谢你给了我这么宝贵的机会!

good morning, my name XX, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september. now i will introduce myself briefly,i am XX years old,born in XX province ,and i am curruently a senior student at beijing XX university.my major isXX.and i will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 with a ease. and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice.

Besides, i have attend several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, i have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these i have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry. compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkard. but i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. i guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, i would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,i like my major packaging and i wont give up,if i can pursue my master degree here i will combine law with my former education. i will work hard in thesefields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p, my character? i cannot describe it well, but i know i am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,

My favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance beetween study and entertainment. by the way, i was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride.

[大学新生英语自我介绍范例

Good afternoon .I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .First of all ，my english name is ...and my chinese name is ..If you are going to have a job interview ，you must say much things which can show your willness to this job ，such as ，it is my long cherished dream to be ...and I am eager to get an opportunity to do...and then give some examples which can give evidence to .then you can say something about your hobbies .and it is best that the hobbies have something to do with the job.

What is more important is do not forget to communicate with the interviewee，keeping a smile and keeping your talks interesting and funny can contribute to the success.

I hope you will give them a wonderful speech .Good luck to you !

Chengdu City Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan province in China, has been recognized as “the land of abundance” for a long time. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China. People who once step onto the land of Chengdu city will quickly fall in love with life there. It seems that Chengdu people are living a happy life with less pressure from their occupation, family or from the conflict social competition. Children, for example, can enjoy the child-only facilities in the parks. They can play with peers and make friends with each other. For teenagers and adults, the various entertainment places and snack streets are indispensable part of their life. The old in Chengdu can also sit in a teahouse with a cup of tea after dinner and gossip their family. The pace of life in Chengdu is slower than in other big cities. People tend to spend more time and efforts to create and experience happiness.

Chengdu is a city where one comes and doesn’t want to leave. There are many famous scenic spots such as Jingli, Kuanzai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. In Chengdu, one can not only enjoy shopping in Tianfu square, walking on the ancient streets and buy souvenirs in traditional houses or stores on Jingli and Kuangzai Street, but also play with cute pandas and help feed their cubs in the Panda Base. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide a newcomer with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture.

Hello, everyone! My name is BaiXinyu. My English name is Amy. I’m 13 years

old. I am in Class 7, Grade 7 in the 29 Middle School. I love my new school, it

is very big. I have big, black eyes, short hairs. I am very tall and slim. I’m a

sunny、friendly girl. My teachers and classmates all like me. There are three

people in my family: my father, my mother and me. I have a dog, he is white. He

is so lovely and simple. Oh, he’s a poodle. I love him very much. I have a lot

of hobbies. Such as drawing pictures, reading books, doing exercises……I like

reading, because it called me lots of about would. I am good at swimming, and I

like water, it is very cool! But I don’t like skiing, it’s difficult with me.

This is me, do you know?

你好，每个人!我的名字叫BaiXinyu。我的英文名字叫艾米。我13岁。我在课堂上7，在29中学7年级。我爱我的新学校，这是非常大的。我有大，黑色的眼睛，短头发。我非常高又苗条。我是一个阳光明媚的，友好的女孩。我的老师和同学都喜欢我。我家里有三个人：我爸爸，我妈妈和我。我有一只狗，他是白色的。他是如此可爱和简单。哦，他是贵宾犬。我非常爱他。我有很多爱好。比如画画，看书，做练习……我喜欢阅读，因为它给我很多的。我擅长游泳，我喜欢水，它非常酷!但我不喜欢滑雪，和我是很困难的。这就是我，你知道吗?

I live in Jinan.Itvery beautiful.Its famous for the springs.Its said that there is 72 springs in Jinan.On the other side,there are many mountains here.The most beautiful mountain is Qianfo Mountain .It lies in the south of Jinan.Daming Lake is other sineary .In Daming Lake Park,swillows are here and there.Air is fresh.Fish is swimming

freely.When you come here,youll be fancinated by it. Quancheng Sguare which is in the middle of the city is a mordern work.

You are welcome to Jinan.

More than three years of administrative personnel work let I realized profoundly, the importance of human resources management for enterprise development. Internal work, employee relationship management, and administrative work, let me finish the work in at the same time, also better exercise oneself, strengthen the actual combat experience and communication skills. My ongoing human resources helps the teacher training, I wish to continue to develop and improve in the field of human resources.

Willing to communicate with people, good at socializing, has certain organization plan ability, strong team spirit and collective sense of honor, learning and constantly seeking progress in work.

[应聘hr的英语自我介绍

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。