寒假计划的英语作文初一（20篇）

Moving is the most sincere moment of the person. It gives people a spirit of praise, but also reflects the peoples side most chastity. Maybe people would think that moving is needed, but last night, I was touched by that little moment.

Last night, the air was fresh, and a few dazzling stars were hanging in the gray sky. My mother and I decided to go shopping in the street. We stopped at the doorway of a dessert house, and my mother whispered to me, "I havent been with you for dessert for a long time. Come on, lets go in and have a bowl." I nodded, and I went in my mothers hand.

Sitting next to me was a young father and a little girl about 4 years old. The girls dress was very lovely, a pink coat and a waking jeans, and a pair of new sports shoes. The round face on the face of red microwave, the day really no evil smile hung on the face, let people intoxicated.

The little girl is playing with her father. They play a lot of games, such as palm, guessing and so on. The father and daughter created a kind of warm scene. At the moment, Bing Bing like dessert because of the two daughters presence and become warm.

At this moment, the waitress finally put the rice cakes from the kitchen - out, the little girl saw very happy, kept patting hand, happily smiled, but her attentive father stroked the little girls head, slightly in front of her smile, and then use the spoon to cut into a rice cake a. When the father carefully picked up the spoon feeding time was about to put the rice cakes in the mouth of the little girl, the little girl suddenly walked away, gently pull his fathers shirt, and said: "Daddy, daddy, I grew up, let me. My mother told me before he went to my uncles home that I could do what he could do and not make you worry too much. " The little girl kept on the corner of his father. Father listened in amazement, he gently spoon down, staring at her daughter, said: "yes, mom said, grow up to learn to do things by yourself." Then the father put the spoon in her hands, breaking off her finger and said: "come, hold it tight, dont drop." So, he put his hands on his head, watching his daughter eat.

I saw this little girl cleverly putting the spoon into the mouth every time. After eating, she made a grimace of grimace to her father and said with a grin, "its delicious, daddy, do you eat it?" Ill feed you, would you like it? " The father seemed to be thinking about something, and it was easy to go back to God and say, "well, dad wants, dad wants it!" The little girl put the spoon into the mouth of the father, and the father and daughter see smile, and a tear out of the corner of the father falls gently on the table when......

I was touched by this moment, this young girl should be so filial and sensible, and in contrast, what do I do?

Instantly moved, and left a beautiful moment, my mother and I walked out of the dessert, looked at walking in front of us and the two long leaned back, my mothers hand more real......

Many children are always looking forward to the winter vacation; This is because during the vacation, children needn’t go to school; They can do everything they like,such as playing, watching TV, traveling, or even sleeping all the day and so on.and when winter vacation come on ,It means that spring festival will come on soon.

I spent the whole day at home nearly every day, I played with my computer .I played computer games and surved the Internet. during the vacation I,I still stayed in touch with my classmates and my friends.I thinked I hasve been a potatoes mouse .

During the spring festival,I visited my relatives ,and I got a lot of red bags.

Even though my vacation wasn’t crazy and exciting, but I really learnt a lot. It was good for relaxing, and I am getting ready for the coming new term now. Good-bye, my winter vacation.

[寒假打算初中英语作文

2018年寒假来袭！这是我上小学的最后一个寒假了，放假那天，老师在黑板上布置的作业比较多。对于我来说，老师布置的寒假作业要全部完成还是需要很多时间的，因为又是很难，又是很多。由于寒假作业比较多，需要合理的安排好时间才能完成，所以我制订了一个寒假学习生活计划。

我的计划是这样的：每天上午把在新华书店买的《语文寒假作业》和《数学寒假作业》各做完一页(两面)；每天上午进行30分钟以上时间的课外阅读；上午做完寒假作业和课外阅读后剩下的时间自由活动，可以看看电视，玩玩电脑游戏等。中午午休睡一个小时后，就要完成下午的安排了：每天下午坚持写一张毛笔字，学一个小时的电脑应用知识，读熟一篇好文章后再读给家长听。最后是在每天晚饭后睡觉前写一篇日记：可以写发生的事情，自己的心得体会，心情故事和读后感等；睡觉前再钻研一道奥数题，最后枕着精彩的电视少儿节目催眠入睡——这可不是一个好习惯哦!

以上就是我的寒假生活计划，怎么样?我的寒假计划不错吧!我不仅要完成寒假作业，也要帮爸爸妈妈做一点事情，这样爸爸妈妈才会高兴，而且这样过得才有意义。最后，快要过年了，这是我们中华民族的重要传统节日，我在这里先祝大家心想事成，万事如意!

寒假到了我相信我们每个人都有计划，比如：我们出去玩，我们在家上午学习，下午玩，还有我们可以一天把我们九科去预习。而我的寒假计划是学习、因为只有学习我们才能把成绩提高因为成绩提高是需要我们努力的，我们的学习任务，是我们每个人应该做的。这时我想：“我应该在这个假期争取考一个令自己满意的成绩，令家长满意的成绩，令老师不失望的成绩，这个寒假对我来说是一个非常充实的寒假，因为在寒假我学习到几点也没关系，因为我如果学到很晚，第二天我也不用着急，因为在寒假里不是让我们去把学习忘记，而是让我们更好地利用假期时间，来完成我们的学习，因为我们学习才会使我们大脑丰富，这个假期可以让我学到很多知识，这个寒假是一个让我提高成绩的寒假，在平时上学的时候是不可能像寒假有这么多的时间来学习，如果学习学的佷晚，早晨起来会很困，如果学一会就把书放下，又担心会把要复习的和要预习的课本的东西忘掉，所以我认为这个寒假是一个让我提高自己学习成绩的寒假，我一定会把这个寒假利用好，这就是我认为的充实寒假。

这就是我的寒假计划，除了学习还是学习，我希望通过自己的努力，在下学期成绩能有所提高！我相信我一定行！

I have stayed in Shanghai alone for a week. It’s time for me to go to my real home—it is in Beijing. My parents are waiting for me. Although outside is no matter how beautiful, Beijing is still my home. In fact, there is many fresh things. Like red bayberries.

In the afternoon, I took a bus to Beijing. I was very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. I was very sad. I didn’t know why thieves went to steal other’s things. Why don’t they hunt for a job? I don’t why! I hope there is no thief in our motherland.

I’m going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I’m going visit my friends by bike. Because I haven’t seen them for a long time. Then, I’m going to the bookstore on foot. I’m going to read lots of books there. On Sunday morning, I’m going to go for a walk. Then, in the afternoon, I’m going to go shopping with my mother. Then, in the evening, we are going to watch TV together. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

我就要过一个忙绿的周末了!星期六的时候我会骑车去拜访我的朋友。因为我已经很久没见他们了。之后，我会走路去书店。我打算在书店里看很多的书。星期天早上，我打算去散散步。然后，下午的时候我会和妈妈去买东西。之后，我们晚上打算一起看电视。那肯定很有趣!你呢?周末你打算做什么呢?

在放寒假时校长要求我们在假期中要多充实自己，多看书，所以一有时间我就喜欢四处看看，但就是在自己的不经意间发现了很多有价值的东西，你看这样故事：

《杯子满了》一天，南因先生家里来了一位客人，要向南因请教学问。南因先生抽空接待了他。宾主落座之后，客人没有听他的话，自己却滔滔不绝地大谈起来。从自己的生活、工作，及至家庭，又谈到自己的事业和研究，一口气说了大半天，南因先生几次想插话都未成功。

南因先生静静地听着，过了一会儿，他站起身来，走进厨房，端来了茶。他往客人的杯子里倒茶，虽然倒满了但是仍在继续倒，仿佛根本就没有看见一样。

一旁高谈论阔的客人一开始觉得十分奇怪，看到南因先生还没停下，水已经开始往外溢了，他终于忍住了手。

“你没看见杯子已经满了吗?”他说，“再也倒不进去啦!”

“这倒是真的，”南因终于住了手，“和这个杯子一样，你自己已经装满了自己的想法。要是你不给我一只空杯子，我怎么给你讲呢?”

从这个故事当中我知道，要使自己的思想吐故纳新，就要及时将大脑清空，如同必须清空装满了水的杯子才能容纳更多的东西一样。这让我想起自己的工作，在工作当中也一样，要及时的清空大脑，做好充分的准备来迎接新的东西。只有如此，你才能在工作中不断进取，不断创新，也才能做出好的成绩来。

Spring Festival is the most solemn festival, spent the day the Chinese people rejoice together, although custom is different, but the joy is still rippling in everyones heart. According to the custom of our hometown, the beginning of the Spring Festival is around the twelfth month 20, a month, 20, every family began to prepare for New Years day, the children also put off.

Happy to play with friends, parents are busy in busy outside, all the prosperity of a busy year.

How time flies, suddenly arrived quickly when it gets dark. Moms cooking in our home but the best, so definitely want to taste her hearty dinner for us! Faced a table of delicious food, we are a large family sitting at the table, everyone is permeated with a happy smile on their faces, I really feel the taste of the "life is sweeter than honey"!

On New Years eve night, we are a group of friends, holding firecrackers, under the guidance of adults devolved firecrackers, blew up in the sky, a rainbow flower drill out, like a rainbow, colorful; And like a fairy flowers, give people happy, its beautiful! Put the firecrackers mom and dad and I went to see the Spring Festival party. Every lights, very lively.

The next day, the day not bright, mother urged me to hurry up, I got up, grandma and grandpa, dad and mum are up. Mother put wrapped dumplings yesterday, in the dish, we eat the steamed stuffed bun talking and laughing. Soon, it is day, most people wear new clothes to visit friends and relatives to elder happy New Year. Our house is not exceptional also, my parents and I all put on new clothes, appear more handsome dad, mom become more young and beautiful! "Will beep PaPa", the ringing of firecrackers welcomed on the first day, I and the daddy, mother go to relatives happy New Year. Walking, we came to grandmas house. Dad a grandma to me like knelt down to old woman kowtow, but was stopped by a grandma! "Well, what do you say you ke head! To eat melon seeds, a smoke!" "No no, I dont smoke!" . Thanks to the old womans house, we went to the aunt home, uncle happy New Year! Soon we finally finished thanks!   Blink at the beginning of the eight, the Spring Festival is over, everyone went back to the normal track, the work of the work, the school to go to school. A New Year begins, people are heading for a new life, new goals and efforts.

Chinese food is colorful, varied, delicious, and nutritious. Chinese people

cares not only about the taste of the food, but also about its color and smell.

Food in different places has different flavors. Beijing food is quite oily and

salty; Shanghai food is sweet and light; Sichuan food is spicy and hot; and

Cantonese food is fresh and tender. Whats more, there are some popular local

snacks. For example, Beijing Roast Duck has a good reputation for its tender

meat, while the steam buns in Shanghai are well known for their juicy

ingredients.

My school is in the east end of the city. It takes me half an hour to get to school on foot. I usually ride a bike to school.

There are over one hundred and fifty teachers and about two thousand students in our school. We have two classroom buildings.The office building is three storeys high. On weekdays our teachers often take us to the laboratories to do experiments. Sometimes we have English lesson in the language lab. We have a very large playground.

After school we take part in various activities, such as ball games, painting, singing and dancing. I like to play football with my classmates.

I love my teachers. I love my school.

How to study English?

Study English,You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isnt easy, since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership (where English is in use at least some of the time) is, for many people, even better. If nothing like this is accessible, you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.

[初一英语作文之如何学习英语

1、认真回顾课本知识

这个阶段过程主要是用于高中三年全部课程的回顾。这时候希望大家在回顾的过程中能够找到自己知识遗漏的部分。

这个阶段相当的冗长，最主要的是要会学回归课本。无论如何，高考绝大部分内容都贴近课本的。高考试题的80%是基础知识，20%是稍难点的综合题，掌握好基础，几乎能上一个比较不错的大学。因此高三前期，希望同学们老老实实把课本弄懂。弄懂课本不是光记住结论，而是要通读。即理科全部的原理要弄清、语文课文内标注的字词句摘抄、英语课文至少要达到念的通顺、文史类知识主线及同类型知识要素要学会整理等。

注意，第一轮复习十分重要，大家千万不要埋头做题，而是先看课本，再“精”做题目。在复习过程中一定先将课本看明白了，然后再做题，做题过程中不许看课本，不许对答案。会就会做，不会做一定要先想哪些内容遗忘了，哪里想错了，先做后面的，等隔一定时间再看不会做的，马上看的话效果打折扣的。

2、把握好自己的节奏

很多学生因为在复习过程中跟不上老师的节奏，导致前面部分没弄懂，后面部分更是拉下，学校在教学节奏控制上又不能根据学生本身制定。

因此建议学生一定要提高自学能力，如果实在跟不上节奏，就先关注最基础最简单的题目，将遗漏的课本部分做好画线标记，或将页面折起做标记，以利于及时的回顾。

在学的过程中不要因为面子问题不敢发问，建议学生在弄不懂的问题上多问同学，多问老师。最好能够找到水平相当的同学，互相约定好给对方做考察，给对方讲解双方对知识点的认识，互相研究题目。

同学之间相互沟通时所掌握的内容比问老师的效果更好，因为在互相沟通的时候可以带者任何疑问，可以很容易的将思维的漏洞补齐。

3、正确处理作业练习

在处理作业上，千万不要死磕题目，记住两个原则：

一、不要和自己过不去。第一遍做不出来或做错就直接先放弃，但是要保留这道题，每天抽1——2分钟看下这类不会做的题，无论是看课本也好，听老师讲解也好，做到一眼看出这题怎么做时，再动手做，并将这类题型留好。

二、要加强互动性。不仅是和同学之间的互动，还要和课本进行互动。做完作业不要看对答案，留到第二天把有困难的和同学交流，或第二天看别人怎么做，然后问他怎么想的。

当基本弄懂一个章节后，一定要定期回顾，如一周的时间后，翻一下课本，这周学了什么，然后给自己限制时间做几道题，用以验证自己哪些内容真正是明白了。通过这么练习，远远比大量做题效果好的多。

4、如何利用每一次考试

处理考试上，要认同自己。分数很重要，重要的是你得到的那些分数和你得不到的分数，毕竟不是高考，当前阶段分数的高低没有任何意义。你只需做三件事：

一、根据你所获取分数的部分，整理你当前会的知识，会做的题型。

二、根据你所丢的分数，立即回归课本，看完课本后再做一遍。

三、拿着卷子问自己，当时做对的题自己是怎么想的，不会的题当时是怎么想的，现在会的题和当时不会做时差距在哪里。

总之，制定高三英语一轮复习计划一定要根据自己的学习情况根据自身的条件，抓住每一个时间点和时机，规划好自己的进度，全力做好一轮复习工作，让自己的基础知识地基打的牢固一点。一轮复习时间最长，是高考复习和高考能否取得高分的关键。所以同学们一定要高度重视一轮复习的重要性，一定要制定好高考一轮复习计划。

On May 1sh,I m going to my grandmother s home.I think that must be very significative.Because she is too old to visit me and my parents,and she must be very have in mind our.

I will go for a walk with my grandmother and buy she some summer wears.they must fit her like best.Of course ,I don t think that is a easy work!So it must takes me many time.

After shopping,we will have a good rest and have lunch in my grandmother s home.

And then,I will clean the home with my grandmother.

At last,I go home.

Of course,I must finish my homewolk.

I have got a happy winter holiday this year. In this year, I haappy day winter holiday. In the first day, I went back to my hometown with my parents. When I got there, I saw my grandparents. Then we had lunch together. At that time, we not only had dilicious food,we also talk about our wonderful life. laughed and sang, it was so happy then. After lunch, I got out and found my old friends in the field. They were all taller and stronger than before. We sat down on the ground and talk about funny things. It was so interesting and fun. We also played some funny games. I have never play such a funny game since I leave my hometown for a big city. I was so happy that day.It was the happiest time in my holiday. And it was so funny.

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一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

寒假又来啦，我可不能像上次放假一样疯玩，来看看我的寒假计划书吧！

1~3页

寒假来了，天气凉了。所以我要多做运动，从小身体弱的我要每天坚持清晨绕着小区跑两圈，然后做20分钟的健美操。晚上，到公园去练练各种健身器材，活动活动筋骨。可做到这些对我这个平时“衣来伸手，饭来张口”的小孩来说比登天还难，没办法，霸王敬酒——不干也得干啊！！！

对了，我要把爸爸妈妈也拉进来。(*^__^*)嘻嘻……

4~7页

虽然放假了，但我还是不能放松自己，除了完成寒假作业之外，我还要在寒假中好好补一补功课。

我要在寒假的每天去拜访我那当外语老师的二哥，补补我的外语。每隔三天去一次图书馆，阅读课外书。课外的知识也要学一学。另外，我得把以前的课本，资料都调出来看看，俗话说的好，温故而知新嘛！

8~9页

寒假中，我要学习一技之长，我要在音乐的海洋里畅游。我要打磨自己的毅力，锻炼自己的耐性心。钢琴，我要征服你！

10页

这页是留着备用的。寒假中，我要参加各种课外活动，所以，寒假时我再慢慢填上去哟！

以上就是我的寒假计划了，是不是丰富多彩呢？当然，我也会把寒假过得丰富多彩！

时间过得真快，不知不觉一个学期又悄悄地从我们身边溜走，随之而来的是同学们向往已久的寒假!

在漫长的一个月里，我们可以不用上学，不用早早地起床，整天无忧无虑的，想干什么就干什么。不过好不容易才得来的假期可不能就这样荒废了，看来，要想过好整个寒假还得好好地计划一下。

相信很多同学都会有和我有一样的体会，那就是上学时作业很多，总是做到很晚才睡觉，早上又要早起，总是睡不饱觉。既然到了寒假，一定想赖床赖到很晚才起来，这样可不行，我们要做个勤劳的孩子嘛。早上起床虽不用像上学那样早，但也不能到太阳晒屁股了才起来。我认为在七点到七点半起床最好，晚上九点睡觉，这样才有规律。

除了有良好的作息时间外，还要按时完成作业。有些性急的同学为了寒假里没有负担，一定会在几天之内一下子把作业做完，可这也是一个不好的习惯。老师们布置作业是为了我们在寒假里要时时复习功课，每天都做适量的作业我们才能好好地复习。要是一下子全都做完，还不得全都忘光了?!所以，我决定每天寒假作业每科各做一个单元，隔几天写一篇日记，不仅轻松，又有条理。

我是一个非常喜爱看书的女孩，平时只要一有空就到新华书店去。到了寒假，休息时间多了，去新华书店的次数也越来越频繁。现在，我已经读了许多以前没有时间看的名著，知识更加丰富了。

一个月很长，也很短暂，我要努力把它过好，过得充实。

又到了寒假，今年我要把寒假生活安排得多姿多彩、井井有条!

首先，我要把寒假作业工工整认认真真地做完。接下来就可以准备开开心心、热热闹闹的新年啦!年前，我先帮爸爸妈妈贴春联、打扫卫生、整理自己的小房间，把我们的家打扮得漂漂亮亮、干干净净。过年，我就到亲戚家拜年、吃饭，和小朋友一起玩耍，无忧无虑、开开心心地玩几天。年会，就在家定定心心、安安静静地看看书，练练琴，写写日记，把精彩的寒假生活记录下来，准备迎接新学期的到来，争取在新的学期做一个全面发展的好孩子。

小朋友们，你们觉得我的寒假生活安排得怎么样啊?

导语：每当暑假一到,我都会很高兴.想到有两个月的时间可以不用上课,那简直就是一年当中最美好的时光了。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.

First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve myEnglish.

Then, I will see some funny comedies. They can relax myself!

If I have enough time,I will go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.Well stay there for three days. We also will do a lot of things there,for examper，playingvolleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.and so on.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever have been going.

I will try my best to do these tings! I hope I have a good time 。

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我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然，我有许多事情要准备。

首先，我要制定计划关于我的假期。我将要做我的家庭作业每天5个小时，我想读一些著名的英文书籍，来提高我的英语。

然后，我将会看一些有趣的喜剧。他们能使我放松!

如果我有足够的时间，我将会去海滩。我将和我父母和堂(表)兄弟姐妹。我们会在那里待三天。我们也将会在这儿做很多事情，例如，打沙滩排球，冲浪，在晚上烧烤，等等。这次旅行将会是我曾经去过的一个极好的地方。

我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我希望我过得开心。

我的暑假计划英语作文

the summer vacation had come round again. i was happy that i could forget about school at least for a while. lest i fool around all through this summer vacation, i made a plan as to how to spend it. first, i thought i should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that i could have a better understanding of them.

then i thought i should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. it stood to reason that with such a good plan i should make the best of my vacation time. i did, because i lived up to what i had planned.

Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

i have a good friend , her name is gina . she is a girl. she is 13 years old.she is a student in class 1 of no.1 middle school . she studies very well. her favorite subject is chinese , beacuse it is very interesting.her like strawberries best.

she usually gets up at 6:00am .then she brushes her teeth. next she goes to school at 7:40. she has four classes in the morning . her last ciass is history . that is her faorite subject , too.she goes to bed at 9:00pm.

she has a big family.she love her mother and father . and she also has a sister.she also like she.

this is my good friend . i want to learn about your good friend. please write and tell me about your friend.