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931初中生应把握中考英语作文的评分标准
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+ 加入清单写作,作为中考英语三大重点模块之一,满分15分,是整张试卷中最难拿满分的部分,也是很多同学头疼的地方。
中考英语作文分四档:第一档(15—13分),第二档(12—9分),第三档(8—5分),第四档(4—0分),每一档都有具体的评分细则。
乐加乐中考研究中心胡赛楠老师强调:“充分认识到写作评分标准的重要性,按照标准要求规范自己的写作并多加修改,才能做到知己知彼、百战不殆。”
首先,审题要准。要点齐全,8分以上;要点不全,直接进入三类文;
其次,一档文应“观点正确”“语言准确”。“观点正确”是文章要积极向上,不可出现反动消极言论;所谓“语言准确”是要忠诚于词汇的惯用法和辨析,要有非常好的文字功底才能达到。
最后,第一档的“句式多样,词汇丰富”与第二档的“语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要”不同,要求更多的句式和词汇。因此,应在作文中适量使用定语从句、感叹句、倒装句、祈使句等特殊句型;此外,一二档文的差别还在于“逻辑性”,在句式、词汇都相当的基础上,逻辑性强的文章容易得高分。
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篇1:初中优秀英语作文谢谢你,我最好的朋友
全文共 919 字
+ 加入清单Three years ago, I was a cool and detached girl. I never helped others or cried, because I thought that was very boring.
One day an unusual girl rushed into my life. She looks like a boy and she is also very lovely. She is very cheerful. I always feel she is a "Red Sun". She is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. She often helps me and plays with me. We became good friends at once. Since then, I have been sanguine.
Now, I am still a happy girl. I‘m often moved by the world. I think our life is so short, and it isn‘t easy for people to live in the world. I‘ve learned to help others and to cry. I‘ve also learned to be happy and grateful. I also understand that crying doesn‘t mean "coward", crying can mean "visualize a bright future!"Though she has lots of new friends and I have many too, she will be my best friend forever, because she has taught me a lot…
Thank you--my best friend!
篇2:初中暑假的英语
全文共 1772 字
+ 加入清单I have always had a wish in my heart, which is to go to the sea. This summer holiday, July 25, afternoon. We went to the changzhi railway station and sat down to the sun. The sound of the sound train slowly disappeared into the horizon.
On the train I saw the tall of taihang mountain, the Yellow River, the spectacular, sat for 7 hours, we finally come to rizhao railway station, the train get off a hot muggy, I know that I have come to rizhao.
Leave me the deepest reflected in sunshine is square, we went to the square, flew under the waves in the breeze of show more beautiful sea, it is really so beautiful sea grand, turbulent waters under the sway of sea breeze, contemplating the spirited, Mercedes, growled, rolled towards the shore. In rows of sea water, the waves of spray, and the thousands of beads of water, are sent to the sea. At this time. I admire the fact that the ancients could write such phrases as "the waves of the waves, the thousands of snow." I left 10,000 square beaches.
Seafood in the afternoon, we went to the supermarket, smell I go in I hate seafood flavor, under the advice of family I just know some seafood is delicious, I ate a lot. The suns seafood is cheap for 50 yuan for a 5 yuan sunshine.
In the two days of sunshine, we went to the sea by the sea. The journey is short but the scenery is always in my heart.
我心中一直有一个愿望,那就是去大海边看看。今年暑假的7月25日,下午。我们来到了长治火车站,坐上了到日照的专列。随着呜~呜~呜~的声音火车慢慢的消失在了地平在线。
在火车上我看见了太行山的高大,黄河的波澜壮阔,坐了7小时的火车我们终于来到了日照火车站,一下车闷热闷热的,我知道我已来到日照。
在日照给我留下最深映现的是万平口,我们到了万平口,哗哗哗的海浪在微风的吹拂下显的海更美丽了,那真的是太美了大海的气势恢弘,汹涌的海水在海风的吹拂下,似群群烈马,奔驰着,咆哮着,向岸边卷来。一排排海水,激起如雾的浪花,化做千千万万的水珠又汇向大海。此时;我真佩服古人能写出“惊涛拍岸,卷起千堆雪”这样的绝句。我依依不舍的离开了万平口海滩。
下午,我们来到了海鲜超市,我一进去就嗅到了我最讨厌的海鲜味,在家人的劝阻下我才知道有的海鲜好吃,我一口吃了一大把。日照的海鲜很便宜长治50元的日照买5元。
在日照的两天,我们在海边赶海。捕小鱼,行程虽短但,但美景却常绕在我心中。
篇3:感恩节的英语初中
全文共 697 字
+ 加入清单Live with thankfulness
Do you know Thanksgiving Day? Do you know why human thankGod?
Thanksgivingfalls on the fourth Thursday of November, a different date everyyear. The President must proclaim that date as the officialcelebration.
Thanksgivingis a time for tradition and sharing. Even if they live far away,family members gather for a reunion at the house of an olderrelative. All give thanks together for the good things that theyhave.
In thisspirit of sharing, civic groups and charitable organizations offera traditional meal to those in need, particularly the homeless. Onmost tables throughout the United States, foods eaten at the firstthanksgiving have become traditional.
What shouldwe thank?
篇4:优秀初中英语作文
全文共 1784 字
+ 加入清单children should be loved
most of us own a simple and good life. city born and city bred, we sometimes imagine the idyllic pastoral scene such as the friendly people, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the gentle pace of living. in face, everything has its pros and cons. the other side of picture is that leftover children have become a heavy topic nowadays, because most parents of these children consider that to feed their children well and to let them grow up health and safe in body are the most important task.however, as a matter of fact, in addition to provide the basic needs for their children, parents should pay more attention to their childrens psychological needs and their education.
for one thing, parents who cannot accompany their children often need to pay more attention to their childrens psychological needs.therefore, it seems to me that government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays and organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. we can also raise money to donate to these children. as the song says:"if everyone gives their love, the world will be better." its very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.
for another, education of leftover children is also quite important. as the saying goes, “knowledge can change our fate”, education is an effective way to change the future of those children. in order to make those leftover children grow up in health, therefore, we need to show more concern about their psychological needs and their education.
in my view, leftover children should be encouraged to live with or near their parents, which is very helpful for them to be loved and concerned, they also can have a simple and good life.
篇5:初中英语作文春节
全文共 940 字
+ 加入清单On the thirty, is the new years day, everywhere permeated with a festive atmosphere. Everybody happily sit together to eat dinner, I love to eat fish balls on the table, my sister and brother Sweet and Sour Spare Ribs favorite, favorite braised fish in soy sauce. After the dinner, my brother and sister began to set off firecrackers and fireworks. At this time, I brought a carefully lit fireworks, fireworks, and for a while a green spray, spray red, while spraying purple, is really fun.
My sister brought the firecrackers, the "popping" and "shout shout" sound like thunder, scared us everywhere escape. Brother of fireworks and crackers, is even more magical, while fly to the sky, while flying on the roof of the night dressed as the day, we see dazzling.
Just as we are playing vigorously, "when Dangdang, Dangdang", the bell of zero hour is ringing, the new year begins. Lets all wish the happy new year and the happy family together.
篇6:初中英语作文:愉快的暑期生活
全文共 772 字
+ 加入清单I had a summer holiday from Jule to August.I was very happy ,because I could do many kinds of things.
I went to the beach and I swam in the sea.I called my friend and played with them.I visitde my grandparents and ate much delicious food.But in August,there is a first typhoon.With terrifying fear and my mother bought some food.I was very unhappy,because I could not played out side.
Then I went to the zoo whit my sister.I was very happy.Because I saw a lot of animals.They were very lovable.So I took photos of all animals.I loved the butterfly the best.They were colourful and beautiful.My sister liked it too.
In summer holiday,I went to the places where the sun shines brightly.I went to where the sea is blue too.All students had a happy summer holiday.
篇7:关于低碳生活初中英语作文
全文共 617 字
+ 加入清单My Low-carbon life
With the development of society,low-carbon life becomes more and more important. Some people think it is very difficult to do.In fact,we can do a lot of things .
First, as a student,some of us can ride a bike to go to school, or walk to school every day.It can not only save energy but also it is good to our healty. Second,when we leave the classroom,remember to turn off the lights, so it can save electricity.And third, we can use the water circulary. Fourth,we can use the paper adequately .
I think if everyone does something for the low-carbon life,the world will become more and more beautiful.
篇8:初中英语
全文共 926 字
+ 加入清单Its winter vacation. I went to Grandpas house with my mother and sister for
the new year.
Pay New Years call people are hurrying to and fro. Novel coronavirus will
buddy this year. In order to prevent the virus, I can only stay at home
obediently. Although I cant go out, I can listen to my grandfathers stories at
home, and listen to his stories about the interesting things that happened when
I was a child, so that I can understand that I should cherish my life now and
study hard to realize my dream.
Through the TV broadcast, I learned that the virus was transmitted to human
beings by wild animals, so I hope that everyone will take good care of the wild
animals and not prey on them. Everyone should stay at home, wash hands
frequently, drink more water and try not to go out. Wear a mask when you go out.
Hope the angel in white can control the virus as soon as possible and return to
normal. Come on, Wuhan. Come on, mother China.
篇9:初中英语
全文共 604 字
+ 加入清单Since I go to school, my parents always tell me that I should study hard,
so that I can find a good job in the future and earn a lot of money. To most
people, the purpose of reading books is to make money. But as I study more, I
realize that making money and reading books don’t have the directly connection.
The children should know more about the world by reading more books, at the same
time, they need to sense the great joy of reading. When they are equipped with
knowledge, they can solve problems by the skills they learn, the most important
thing for them is to face difficulties with positive attitude.
篇10:我们周围的污染中考英语作文_初中英语作文1000字
全文共 913 字
+ 加入清单Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
我们周围的污染
近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是,我们的环境越来越糟。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在很多人都有空调和汽车,他们生产的(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在地球(只留下沙)。我们经常看到工厂把废水倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水的城市。现在我们有危险。这是非常必要和重要的保护好环境。我想,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。
篇11:寒假英语作文初中
全文共 589 字
+ 加入清单The winter holiday is coming. I am very excited. I want to better my
holiday plan. Now let me tell you my plan.
I’m going to read some books and listen to music and relax for a few days
first. On the fifth day, I’m going to do my homework. Of course, I’m also going
to do some housework. Lunar New Year’s Day, I’m going to take a trip with my
parents. I think it must be very happy. I can hardly wait! In the first six days
of February, I’m going to visit my relatives. It’s going to be fun! After a few
days, I’m going to finish my homework, because I am going back to my school on
February 16th.
篇12:描写风景的初中英语
全文共 1536 字
+ 加入清单Sunrise at Sea
Ba Jin
I would often get up early to watch the sunrise when it was not yet quiet light and all was quiet except for the droning of the ship engine.
The sky was pale with a bluish blue. Soon a streak of pink dawn broke over the horizon,expanding gradually and becoming brighter and brighter. Knowing that the sun was about to rise, I had my eyes fixed on the distant edge of the sea.
As expected, the sun soon appeared revealing half of its face, which was very red but not bright It kept rising laboriously bit by bit as if weighted down with a heavy burden on its back until,after breaking through the rosy clouds;it completely emerged from the sea aglow with a lovely red. Then,before I knew it, the dark red orb began to shine blazingly, dazzling my eyes until they stung and all of a sudden lighting up the surrounding cloud.
Sometimes,hidden by the clouds, the sun nonetheless shed its rays straight onto the sea water, making it difficult for me to distinguish between the sky and the sea because what I saw in front of me was nothing but a wide expanse of brilliant light.
Sometimes, with thick layers of dark clouds hanging in the sky, the sun was hardly visible to the naked eye. But its radiance managed to show through the dark clouds to edge them with golden lace. Then, after gradually breaking through the tight encirclement, it came into full view and even dyed the dark clouds purple or scarlet. At the moment, apart from the sun,the clouds and the seawater, I too was luminous.
Wasnt that a marvelous spectacle?
篇13:初中英语作文:关于五一假期的英语作文
全文共 370 字
+ 加入清单In this holiday l was very happy.Why? Because my famliy go to Beijing.We saw Tiananmen.The sky was blue ,Tiananmen was red and yello.It is very nice.Then I played with my mother and father in Xiangshan.In the afteroon we went to Yuanmingyuan.
Look at Yuangmingyuan, I was very sad.In the evering we ate some litto food.
Beijing was very big.I love it very much.
篇14:初中英语作文大全
全文共 1081 字
+ 加入清单Friends, have you ever seen the most functional capsule robots in the
world? Of course I invented it. Yeah! Again to a tumor-bearing patients.
Originally should be frowned doctor, since happy into the operating room, why? A
closer look, he took a box of my invention of the capsule machine.
I saw the doctor to the patient to take a capsule machine, this capsule
robot in the patient to cut the tumor site to stop, immediately stretched out
two hands, left hand spray anesthetic, right hand quickly cut off the tumor.
This will not be a lot of blood, it will not hurt. That the capsule robot has
been parked in the patients stomach, get out of it? It cut the tumor, will be
converted into vitamins to help patients with nutritional supplements, both
convenient and affordable, the doctor to help patients cut the tumor, swaggering
out, with a happy mood, while walking singing: "My job is really easy, this
Capsule really convenient! "
Look, I invented the capsule more convenient, more amazing, you like it?
Let us hard study, the courage to explore, for the day to come to do some
contribution!
篇15:初中英语作文大全
全文共 912 字
+ 加入清单The parents love between heaven and earth is the greatest love, born since
we came to this world, parents began to love us forever. The parents love their
children is a natural love, love of nature. Like a heavy rain, however, Pei Mo
to the Royal. This will safeguard the lives of the largest, oldest, most
primitive, the greatest and most wonderful parents to us is the power of
love.
As an ancient saying goes: "lines in the hands of a loving mother, found
wandering clothing. Departure thick seam, Italy has the fear. Who made the
heart-inch grass, was reported three Chunhui." Mothers love, as if in the
spring sunshine, I bring Warm, I bring to light; mothers love, as if in the
wind in a stable and calm umbrella, I Zhefengdangyu; mothers love, I always
difficult to give time to help me and give me power. Silky as a continuous sense
of love, I become a strong backing, I will not always have the feeling of
emptiness.
篇16:期待初中英语
全文共 2349 字
+ 加入清单Over the last page calendar in 2010, time wheels and leave a deep imprint.
With winter snow after the warmth of the sun, in the joyful mood, 2011 to keep
the New Years day.
New Years day, is a connecting link between the preceding and the node.
The New Year is about to begin, standing on new starting point, the aftertaste
is past, have heavy harvest; Looking ahead, waiting for us is the beautiful
future. After a busy year of you I, can at this time to make a little stay,
close your eyes, bathed in sunshine, enjoy harvest thick feeling. From this day
started again, we will have a new targets, and on a one-year new journey.
The grass sprout out of the earth, clouds scud across, and year after year,
annual similar different. But, has not changed for New Years day is my
expectation.
When I was young, every New Year comes a few days ago, the morning wake up,
the first thing is bare bottom from woli leafing out of nowhere, then this
calendar day several times of snapping to finger countdown. Young Im such a
keen on New Years day this festival, in fact, only to have something good food,
new clothes to wear, but also need not go to school.
New Year dyed the our happy childhood, pulled close distance we grow up.
Slowly, I from elementary school, junior high school, arrive at the university,
blossom years as accelerated film a flash and pass. This years New Years day,
we are in a busy spent, work overtime everyday, we need to make very late. In
order to finish the task smoothly, we are often a pack of instant noodles, a
computer, four people take turns input. In order not to delay working, teacher
Chen just will just go to the kindergarten children locked in the home. The
nearest xiaoliu has also been no home, and together we live in the dormitory,
have a meal. Less childhood innocent romance, much work responsibility, also
enjoy our work of fun. During, no one has complained, increasingly mature we use
special ways of enjoying the unique New Years day holiday. As a word that said:
"even though we cannot stop the passage of time, but we can dominate oneself
mood."
New Year, new opportunities, we need a new struggle. Wind is being tidal
flat, hereunder sails; No matter what happens, the more must be quickened his
horse. In the New Year, let us follow temple head, with the development of steps
to the glorious future -- -nikita Khrushchev and walked on.
篇17:初中英语日记
全文共 323 字
+ 加入清单20XX.X.X 晴
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happest men in the world.
篇18:初中1500字作文英语老师
全文共 1985 字
+ 加入清单“ABCDEFG……”自从我开始学英语起,我就特别厌烦英语,每当听到跟英语有关的字母或者是单词,就心想:“我是一名中国人,我为什么要学英语?英语好有什么用?我不一定会出国外,而且中国是我的家!”爱国之心是中国人必须拥有的品质精神,那时候,我总是觉得,我爱国,我不学英语!
可是,就是因为我从小有这样的心理,加上学校一个星期才两节英语课,我的英语只能勉强及格。自从转学后,我意识到了一些学英语的重要性,但是我并没有完全领悟,为什么中国人要学英语?我的语文和数学成绩在班上也算是优秀的,但是因为每次英语只有60到70分,庆幸的时候也就是80分左右,但是同学们的成绩,四分之一都是80分以上,虽然人数很少,就因为这样,我的英语成绩远远落后于一些同学,每次总分加起来,我顶多也是个第二名,这让我特别恼火,我没有去好好学习英语,而是更加厌烦英语,对于英语,只能用一个字形容——烦!
我尊敬老师,但是唯独不尊敬英语老师。这学期,新来了一名英语老师,我无所谓,心想:“教英语都不是中国人,都一样,一种人,我何必去理他。”我这种态度似乎被老师一眼就看出开了,老师从容地说:“同学们,说实话,你们喜不喜欢英语呢?”同学们哑口无言,“实话要实说,我知道你们都讨厌英语,成绩都是勉强提上来的,但只是以前你们死打死背单词,没掌握好方法。而且你们都有叛逆心理。”老师稍停了一会儿,说道:“也许你们以为学英语是觉得对不起国家、对不起父母,但是你们错了,你们知道吗?以前的英国统治了世界,即便是现在,连美国也比不上英国,如果你们想让中国的孩子不再学习英语,不是在这里叛逆,而是好好学习!要知道英语是主课,会加到总分里面,英语不好的同学,即便你语文数学再好,总分也是稍逊一筹……”
英语老师给我们讲了很多很多,基本上遇见某个同学不认真听讲、或者是不做作业,都会讲一些故事或者是道理,而我们就像听故事那样津津有味,这给我们很大的启示,我们也渐渐不厌烦英语了。
咦?这是什么?电饭煲吗?才不是呢!这是英语老师给我们带来的录音机~英语老师说:“你们不是一出生就会写字的,而是靠语言和交流才会说话写字的,英语也是一样,课前十分钟我让你们听一会儿磁带,但是,必须要安静,而且要去思考,我相信你们的成绩会挺高的,以为只要会说,渐渐的就会写。”老师还告诉我们:“听力占试卷很多分,所以要学好听力。而且,要把学习当作一种乐趣,而不是负担……”
英语老师从来不让我们默写单词,而是让我们背单词,一天背三到十个单词,我们觉得很轻松、也很快乐。老师要求我们快,还讲解了学好英语用速、效、雅三个要素(尊敬的老师对不起,我忘记了。)还讲解了这些代表什么,等等,很多很多,我们不知不觉喜欢上了英语。
英语老师很灵敏。一次出黑板报,由于一直没有画好灯笼,我就在英语课时不时地往黑板报看,可是我每次都是在老师转身写英语的时候才偷偷看的。“凌优!”英语老师突然的一声把我吓呆了,“你是不是再看后面还没有画好的灯笼?我宽恕了你好多次了……”我听着,脸羞红羞红的,不敢再回头看黑板报……
还有一次,我由于英语练习没错,老师就点名批评我,其实也不是批评,而是说读书不是为了父母和老师等道理。我很伤心,其实我不必去伤心,那只是英语而已,学不学好无所谓啊!但是我为什么这么伤心呢?
自从那几次教训起,我也不知道为什么,每当到英语课,我就异常的认真,动都不敢动一下,坐姿端正,读单词或句子的声音也是最大的,我也不知道为什么,也许是因为害怕英语老师,也许是因为为了弥补以前的过错。
英语带给我的那些烦恼都被清风带走了,每当英语课听到那些磁带里发出的录音时,我总是想:“总有一天,我们不用学英语,而是那些外国的小孩学好中国的语言。而在迎接那天到来的之前,为了老师对我们的期望,也为了自己,学好英语!“
英语老师,我真的很想感谢您!但是,每当我看您的时候,刚刚来的勇气却又沉了下去,或许您已经把我列入学生中的黑名单了,可您还是我心目中的好老师!
我也不知道为什么,我爱上了英语,每当同学们说一个词、一句话的时候,我就会想,这些言语用英语来说是怎样的呢?学英语可以让自己更自信!我爱英语,IloveEnglish!
或许是因为老师对我的批评,或许是因为老师的教学方法,或许是因为老师给我们讲的道理。但是,无论是怎样,这都是来自于我的英语老师,他不仅仅传授于我、于我们知识,还有许许多多对我们人生很大帮助的启示。
英语是我曾经最讨厌的东西,但是我把他们搞混了,我讨厌英语而不是老师。而现在却因为我的英语老师喜欢上了英语。英语和老师两者皆不同,一个是……,还有ing也是……哎呀!又这样了!英语你完全进入我的世界了!
英语不是老师,老师不是英语。英语是给我们学习的,老师是来给我们教英语的,因为有一位有方法,又特别灵敏的老师,使我们再一次对英语有了重新的认识。
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篇19:我的舞台优秀初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单I am a shy girl, when my teachers ask me the questions, I will always low down my head and answer them with small voice. Because of my character, I miss the chances to make myself stand out and I also don’t have many friends. I really want to change my situation, I don’t want to be a stand by anymore, I want to be part of the group. So I force myself to join the class activities, I find I enjoy them and I talk to my classmate a lot. I become active and start to try more things, I take part in the debate competition and show my ability, I find my stage.
我是一个害羞的女孩,当我的老师问我问题,我总是低下我的头低, 小声音回答。因为我的性格,我错过了让自己脱颖而出的机会,我也没有很多朋友。我真的想改变我的处境,我不想成为旁观者了,我想成为班里的一部分。所以我强迫自己参加班级活动,我发现我爱上这些活动,跟同学有个很多交流。我变得活跃,开始尝试更多的东西,我参加了辩论比赛,展现我的能力,我找到舞台。
篇20:关于初中生活的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Most people miss their grade school days and think they are the happiest time of their life, but whenever I recall them I cannot help feeling a little sad. In my young days I disliked any dismal atmosphere and could not bear the feeling of loneliness, yet the fact was that I often lived in a dismal home and frequently had the bitter taste of lonesomeness. I was not cheerful even in the company of my classmates at the grade school I attended. When I was alone at home the dismal atmosphere often filled me with fear even though thought here went to work in the morning but always came later than I did. For a young person like me t was too bad. Not until I was about sixteen years old had I outgrown t feeling of fear. Then there was that nagging feeling of loneliness either at home of at school. My father changed his job several times and with each change of his job we had to move and I had to attend a different grade school. Before I finished my elementary education I had attended three grade schools and thus it was difficult for me to cultivate enduring friendships. The feeling of being friendless was a constant source of pain to me. Those unhappy grade school days have of course long been over. I still have an abhorrence for any dismal atmosphere and lonesomeness, but hardened by experience I now find them less disturbing than they were.