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Good morning/afternoon, teachers and classmates.

Im XXX from class 1. I am a girl/boy of 13. My family including my father, mother and me. I like basketball best. In addition, I also like table tennis. My favorite food is carrots. Im also very interested in snacks. What, Im good at computer. Using the computer E-mail, shopping and even solve my problems in the study and the life is so convenient. So I put my computer as my good helper. As for reading, Ive read about magic novel. Are these. Nice to meet you! I sincerely hope to make friends with you.

老师同学早上/下午好。我是XXX。我现年13岁(女生或男生)。我的家庭包括我爸爸,妈妈和我。我最喜欢篮球。除此以外,我也喜欢乒乓球。我最喜欢的食物是胡萝卜。我也对小吃很感兴趣。还有什么,我很擅长电脑。用电脑发邮件、购物甚至是解决我学习和生活中的问题是如此的方便。所以我把我的电脑视为我的好帮手。至于阅读,我以前读过一些关于魔法的小说。就这些。很高兴认识你们!我真诚地希望与你们做朋友。

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大家好,我是你们的导游杨小洋,今天我将带领你们去游览我的家乡。我的家乡在北方的一个农村,虽然不起眼,但那儿的人朴实得就像高粱一样。这里风景优美,四季各有自己的特色,尤其是秋天的景色,虽然秋天没有春天的百花齐放,没有夏天的热情奔放,没有冬天的银装素裹,但它在我的心中却是最美的。

秋天的天空像被洗过一样,湛蓝湛蓝的。天空下金黄金黄的稻子在风中跳起了秧歌舞,如一片金黄色的海洋漾起一层一层的浪花。农民伯伯望着金黄的稻子,个个脸上笑了花儿。枫叶红了,像一只只红色的小手;银杏叶黄了,像一把把黄色的小扇,扇走了夏日炎炎,扇来了秋天的凉爽。当风吹起来时,金黄的树叶随着风翩翩起舞,像一只只金黄的蝴蝶。

果园里,瓜果飘香,柿子穿上橙色的袍子,挂在枝头上,如一个个小灯笼;石榴在树上披上厚厚的衣服,向我们咧开了笑容;鸭梨戴上了黄色的帽子;桔子披上了厚厚的大衣,等待着人们来摘取。

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篇2:改变自己中学生英语作文

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改变一般说的是事物发生显著的差别。改变自己中学生英语作文又该怎么写的呢, 我们来看看。 改变自己中学生英语作文(一)

Change is indispensable to life a action, perhaps, you will change their career, maybe you‘ll change your status, but whatever oneself forever is the most important.

Change, can make you more harmonious and his colleagues, can make you look more excellent, can make other people to you is very satisfied, can make you more up a level! Change, is the best choice.

A young man came to work in a company, at first he hold all kinds of lofty goals want to do a great business, but then he found; The company all the way up and out, as in his he is like air, invisible, and generally feel it, as does not exist generally...... Various pressures and prompted him to want to dissatisfaction with another company to begin his work, the new journey, but a best friends said to him, "now find a proper is not easy, why don‘t you look at yourself, then decide?" He embraced the idea of try stayed. Indeed he found, his own performance is not outstanding, the attitude is not friendly to colleagues, to work isn‘t aggressive enough... Finally he a rude awakening, after that, he became more friendly, active, work hard...... Also no longer as usual go it alone, when he again meet the best friends, the young man has been promoted as a manager.

Change yourself, change is successful state before, try to change their shortcomings, will give you a brilliant!!!!! Once, in near the exam in a week for several times, test, I lost, in the heart a remorseful, feel that they couldn‘t save good grades, is change reminds me, make me change the learning methods, won the final victory.

Change your, make oneself more outstanding, more perfect, let life shine for change. 改变自己中学生英语作文(二)

Things in the world are changing.

People are changing and every creature is changing. Changing is a neutral word. We can’t judge it is good or bad in general, because every coin has two sides. But sometimes we need to change, because it is good for us. Sometimes we will meet some difficult or uncomfortable situation. When we are not able to change it, we need to change ourselves. If both of us refuse to budge, the problem would not be solved. Sometimes we need to change our life attitude; sometimes we need to change our views of seeing things; sometimes we need to tolerant; sometimes we need to be strong.

Changing ourselves according to the specific situation is good for us. 改变自己中学生英语作文(三)

From my point of view, we should change ourselves when the situation can’t be changed any more. Difficulties hide in every corner of our life so we have to face them at times. But the problem is that we sometimes are not able to change the challenging situations at all as our abilities are limited. When it comes, we’d better change our attitude towards these difficulties. Only in this way can we get rid of the tough surroundings and be happy.

Something like that happened to me once. There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates while I was walking. I was puzzled so I asked them why they laughed at me. One of them told me that the way I walked was very strange and funny. I was sad but I just couldn’t change the way I walked. And the situation of being laughed at by those people didn’t stop. Therefore, I changed my attitude towards the incident. I ignored those comments on me and walked as I used to. The comments soon disappeared and I was so glad to have succeeded in the quiet war.

So in my opinion, we should change ourselves first and then the situation can be changed at last. It is very difficult for us to change our surroundings but much easier to change ourselves. People around us will see our change, after which they may change their attitude toward us.

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篇3:介绍自己作文600字

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一双小小的眯眯眼,一个扁扁的鼻子,再加一对圆圆的脸蛋。这,就是我。

我的名字叫江x。我是一个平凡又独特的女孩儿,也是一位思想丰富的女孩儿。

和大多女孩儿一样,我爱幻想。因为在幻想里,不会有太多的烦恼和忧伤,不会有那堆成山的作业和背不完的英语单词,也不会有那令人头疼的数学公式。只会有漫天飞舞的蒲公英和一望无际的大草原,在草原上,还有一座宫殿式的房子,而这座房子的主人,就是我。我能够在大草原上奔跑,在风中舞蹈,看着那蓝天白云,自由畅想。没错,这就是我的梦想,一个平凡女孩儿的梦想。长大以后,我还想当一个作家,这不是源于我有当作家的天分,二十我喜欢写作,喜欢将自己的情感用写作表达出来。

我还爱看书。因为书能带给我无穷的乐趣,无限的遐想。在书中,我能知道泰山的巍峨,大海的广阔,与宇宙的奥妙……在书中,我能知道《皇帝的新装》中皇帝的愚昧,《卖火柴的小女孩》中小女孩儿悲惨的命运,还有福尔摩斯的机智,鲁兵孙的乐观、勇敢等。

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篇4:初一英语作文MikesTestPaper

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根据所给的四幅图画,以“Mikes Test Paper”为题,按顺序写一篇不少于80字的短文。内容必须符合题意。

迈克英语学得不好。昨天,参加了英语考试。他又没考及格。他不敢告诉他妈妈他得了低分。在他回家的路上,天下起了大雨。于是他有了个主意。为什么不把卷子当伞用呢?他就把卷子顶在头上开始往家跑。当他到家时,卷子全湿了,几乎被雨淋成了碎片。当他妈妈问他分数时,迈克尴尬地笑了笑,把试卷递给妈妈看。

Mike is bad at English. Yesterday, he had an English test. He failed again. He dared not tell his mother the low marks. On his way home, it rained heavily. So he got a good idea. Why not take the paper as an umbrella? He just put the paper on his head and began to run home. When he arrived home, the paper was all wet and almost torn to pieces by the rain. When his mother asked about the marks, Mike showed the paper to his mother with an embarrassed smile.

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篇5:介绍我自己

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今年我9周岁,上小学2年级了。

我的个子不高,有点瘦。可是我有一头乌黑发亮的头发,还长着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛。妈妈说我明亮的眼睛是爸爸胎教的杰作!因为这时候爸爸总是贴着妈妈的肚皮期盼的对我说:“大眼睛啊,亮晶晶,就似天上的北斗星。”

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今年,老师夸我懂事了!爸爸妈妈很高兴,我也很高兴!

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篇6:关于自我介绍是英语

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I am Ma Yuanhao. Now let me tell you something about my family. My family has seven people in it, my father, my mother, my brother, my sister, my uncle, my grandfather and I. My grandfather is a driver. He drives a bus. He works in Beijing. He has two kids. They are my father and my uncle.

My father and my uncle are both office workers. They are in the same office. My brother is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He works in Shenyang.I am a student. My sister is a student,too. We are in the same school, but in different grades. My mother is a nurse. She works in a hospital. We live in Beijing now with my parents.

I often have bread and milk for breakfast. I like eating hamburgers, too. And for lunch, I usually have some chicken with vegetables and rice. Jiaozi is my favorite food. I usually have Jiaozi and an apple for dinner. I think I can eat healthily.

My mother cooks very well. She often cooks nice food for us.

I love my family!

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篇7:自我介绍初一作文400字

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认识我的人都知道我是一个活泼开朗的男孩。今年,我已经度过了九个“六一”儿童节。

站在镜子前,看着镜子里的自己,虽然不突出,但我很欣赏自己。它身高1.4米,头发短而整齐,两道弯弯的眉毛下长着一双明亮的眼睛,扁平的鼻子上长着一张多嘴,常常是一颗不规则的白色小牙齿,一句话也不说。

在学校,我的学习成绩也很好。当然,在其他方面,我也很注重自己的培养,立志成为德智体美全面发展的好学生。在家里,我们经常做我们能做的。由于我性格开朗,我的人缘也很好。我的大多数同学都是我的好朋友,包括我的“亲密朋友”。

我有很多朋友和爱好。我喜欢读书。我喜欢阅读作文书,故事书和科技书籍。当我还是个孩子的时候,我妈妈给我买了故事书,我很感兴趣地看。我的作文书也很多。多亏了这些作文书,我的作文水平提高了很多。

说到缺点,我还有很多。比如,我喜欢吃喝玩乐,做事马虎,爱虚荣。有时,数学考试中最简单的问题是错的,有时语文考试漏掉了一个问题……由于粗心大意,我不知道有多少人先让路。然而,我正在克服这些问题。请看看我的实际行动!

当我长大了,我想成为一名科学家。像居里夫人一样,我为了人类的利益发明了许多东西。

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篇8:介绍自己的英语作文

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My name is ________. I am graduate from ________ seniorhigh school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlargemy knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.

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篇9:英语写作方法介绍

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攻克英语写作:滴水穿石,积累成章

考研作文作为考查考生语言表达等综合能力的题型,是考研英语的压轴戏。考生在日常复习中应更趋向于积累。考研作文的复习和提高是与一些科学的学习方法和有效的学习技巧分不开的,在此,万学海文考研英语辅导专家提供大家一些练习方法及技巧,希望对同学们有所帮助。

考研作文分为大、小两类。小作文多以应用文体裁为主,例如求职信、感谢信、辞职信,道歉信等,这类作文不需要复杂华丽的文采修饰,表意明确就可以了;大作文的题型多是通过图片或者提示文字,要求考生完成提示所透视出来的问题。命题范围,从近几年看,都比较倾向于当前社会热门话题或观念。

一、欲速则不达,步步行进

想要达到一定的程度,首先要向这个程度看齐。就写作来说,如果你想将自己的作文水平提高到一个质的飞跃,首先你要懂得去吸取别人文章中的精华。这个吸取精华的过程就是阅读。只有多阅读,才能够培养起良好的语感,才会知道如何去构思,如何去质疑别人的观点,表达清楚自己的意思。正所谓"读书破万卷,下笔如有神"。无论何时,大家都勿急躁,因为"跑"得好的前提是"走",

作文这种慢火候才能提高的题更是如此,一步一个脚印才是写作稳步提高的策略。

近些年写作考题的内容和主题,基本都与当年的热点话题有一定的关系,所以平时多阅读英语报纸、杂志,能够帮助你掌握更多的话题资源。对于比较热点、比较重要的主题,可以有目的地进行搜集整理。阅读的过程也应该讲究方法,应该以泛读与精读结合的方式进行学习。一些好的文章建议你读过以后做英文阅读笔记(即观后感)。在读与写的过程中,你的写作水平自然会得到快速提高。

二、在研读中背记

除了读与写,还要进行适当的背。背诵是积极备战快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径。建议考生可以选择历年真题中的写作佳文,先是研究,思考人家是怎么构思,怎么写的,获得高分的闪光点在哪。再在理解的基础上记忆,更能够在无形中增强你的表达能力。同学们也可以拿一些英语原著名篇来读、背,这样可以加强自己的语感,使自己的表达更加地道。

三、每周一练,积累成章

表达能力需要考生平时多一点练习,给自己制定一个写作计划。一周至少练习一篇文章。在加强写作练习之后,你的文章才能够 "成章"。因此,实际动手的能力至关重要。平时训练的重点应该锁定在文章是否切题,行文是否表意明确、通顺,有无语法错误等。另外,一定要给每一次行文限定一个可行的时间。并且,按照这个时间严格要求自己完成。

如果你能够找到范文,然后在练习之后进行比较,效果会更加明显。假使没有范文作为标样,建议你可以找英语水平较好的同学看一看。也许评看你作文的这个考生英语水平不是很高,但个人看别人文章的缺点很容易看出来。如果条件允许,找老师请教一下最好。

掌握好的方法加之持之以恒,相信最后的成功一定属于你,继续坚定的考研信念,自信满满的走下去。

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篇10:考博英语口语自我介绍

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Good morning, Dear Professors:

Thank you for giving me the chance to interview and it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is LiFeng. I major in and I will graduate from the.. Medical University in July, 2006. Hope a chance to work and develop in your department. During the past three years, under the strict guidance of my tutor, professor in college of , I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about .. With the help of my supervisor, I have successfully finished the subject “ ” and grasped some experimental skill , such as cell culture, DNA extraction and other molecular biology technique; abstraction, separation,  I passed the CET band 6 test in2002, after that, I tried my best to learn Medical English and mastered a lot of professional vocabulary. I am good at listening, speaking, reading and writing.. I can manipulate computer proficiently and master Microsoft Office software, also be familiar with SPSS and Photoshop, etc. During three-year study in research, I studied hard and strived for excellence in our field. I benefit from working together with excellent colleague. I developed quality of diligence, responsibility, kindness and honesty. My internship in college of .. could qualify me for this job, and I believe I can be fit for the position quickly. I am looking forward to working in your department. If I am admitted, I will be thankful and try my best to work for you.

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篇11:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇12:中学英语作文自我介绍

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self-introduction自我介绍

Introducing yourself is very important when you meet new people. You always want to make a good impression when telling others about yourself. Allow me to introduce myself.

当你认识新的人时,介绍自己是非常重要的。你一定会想要在告诉别人有关自己的事时,给别人留下好印象。让我来介绍我自己。

My name is Pat and Im from Taiwan. Right now, Im a student. I study very hard every day. I like going to school because Im eager to learn. I enjoy learning English. Its my favorite class. I like to make friends and I get along with everyone. This is the introduction I give whenever I meet new people. It tells people a little bit about me and about what I like to do.

我的名字是派特,我来自台湾。我现在是学生。我每天都很用功念书。我喜欢上学,因为我渴望学习。我喜欢学英文。那是我最喜欢的课程。我喜欢交朋友,而且我和每个人都处得很好。这就是我每次认识新的人时,所作的自我介绍。它可以告诉别人一点关于我的事,还有我喜欢做什么。

[中学英语作文自我介绍

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篇13:高中英语口语考试自我介绍

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good morning, my admirable professors and my dear fellows. it’s my great honor to be here to introduce myself to all of you. my name is xing heng and i’m in my eighteen years old. i come fromxiamen, which is a famous and beautiful city. i strongly suggest you visiting there and i can be your guide if it’s convenient. after three years’ hard work, i am so excited that i am finally enrolled by my dreaming school,sichuanuniversityand be one of you. i am outgoing and i have many interests, such as playing basketball, football, and swimming, but i am only good at basketball.

i hope we can always play together in the next four years. computer science and technology is my favorite subject and i am sure that it’s also a promising area in the future, with the great development of computer science and our society. i am glad to be a classmate of you and i hope we can study and make progress together in the future. i greatly expect my life to be with you in the coming four years.

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篇14:介绍自己作文300字

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我叫吴昊,今年10岁了,我是一个活泼的小男孩,也是一个很瘦的男孩。

我有一双小小的眼睛,但是很亮,小小的鼻子,一笑就露出了白白的大门牙,白白的脸,一个会听话的耳朵,瘦小的身材,但是我身体很健康的。

有一天,我的同桌忘拿书了,他很着急,我主动把书借给他,我和他看一本书,读了几分钟后,开始上课了,他把文具盒打开时,发现一支笔也没有拿,我有借给他三支笔,之后他说:谢谢你。我说:不客气。我是一个乐于助人的男孩。

我会继续帮助需要帮助的人,我会成为一个好孩子。

这就是乐于助人的我。

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篇15:大学英语自我介绍范文

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Good morning/afternoon:

It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview. I hope I  can make a good performance today.My name is xx. I am 20 years old,born in a  little village in Southern Zhejiang. My parents are farmers,and I am the only  child. Though not well-to-do,the family always be hopeful. My major is  engineering technology. I will graduate in July,2011. I have some hobbies like  listening to music,swimming,and especially seeing western movies.

In the passed two years,I have learned some practical skills and gained  some major certificates. I paid more attention to learn Engling,and I have  passed CET4 in my efforts. I am looking forward to becoming a member of your  company . Thankyou!

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篇16:介绍我的房间小学英语作文

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I have a beautiful room. Although my room is very small, I love it very much. Look, there is a bed near the window. I like sunshine so my bed is set near the window. In front of the bed, there is a desk on which is several series of books. What’s more, I have plastered my bedroom wall with photos of my family. The light in my bedroom is light pink because I like this color.

我有一件很漂亮的房间。虽然我的房间很小,但是我很喜欢它。看,靠近那里有一张床。我喜欢阳光所以我的床是安在窗户边的。床前有一张桌子,桌子上摆了几套书。我还把卧室的墙都用我们家人的照片挂满了。我卧室的灯是粉红色的,因为我喜欢这个颜色。

Do you like my bedroom? If you like, come here and have a look!

你喜欢我的卧室吗?如果你喜欢,来看看吧!

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篇17:介绍苏州园林的初一

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俗话说:"上有天堂,下有苏杭。"苏州园林是闻名天下的旅游风景区,我们早就盼望着去那里游览。在明媚的阳春三月,学校组织我们去游览苏州园林。

汽车穿过苏州城繁华的街道,在虎丘公园附近停了下来。据说这里的丘陵形如蹲虎,因此被称为"虎丘"。我和几个同学结伴进了公园,一座高高的丘陵出现在眼前,真像一头猛虎!看,前头两棵矮矮的松树下不正是猛虎竖起的耳朵吗?那圆圆的虎丘塔不正是猛虎粗粗的尾巴吗?丘陵旁边,一潭碧波在荡漾,映衬着美丽的虎丘山,犹如一幅美妙的山水画。绕过青灰色的虎丘塔,山坡上五彩缤纷的花儿争相开放,娇艳美丽,宛如含羞的少女。我们还兴致勃勃地游览了试剑石、剑池、断梁殿等名胜古迹。

游完虎丘,我们又乘车来到西园。西园可真够气派!一对威武的石狮立在大门两旁,瞪着鼓鼓的眼睛。忽然一股浓郁的檀香味儿扑鼻而来,进了正门,才看到院中横放着一只硕大的石香炉,插在炉中的一柱柱檀香正燃着,飘出缕缕青烟,给这佛门寺院笼罩上一层幽雅而肃穆的薄纱。

游了正厅,我们夹杂在人流中,一边顺着青石铺成的小径漫步,一边饱览着西园的美丽的春天。高高的槐树顶着湛蓝的天空;嫩嫩的草儿像绿色的毯子铺在地上;黄莺在歌唱,小雀在飞舞;苏醒过来的树则像个长发姑娘,迎风梳理着她那头秀美的青丝……走着走着,来到一个亭子前,那朱漆木柱,既华丽又典雅,沿着曲曲折折的走廊往前走,就是著名的罗汉堂。罗汉堂分三部分,共有泥塑全身罗汉五百尊,神态各异,栩栩如生,富有浪漫色彩。

最有趣的是第三部分,里面矗立着阴阳怪气的济公和尚。你看他,鞋儿破,帽儿破,身上的袈裟破;一把遮羞的破扇儿挡住半边脸,头上的`僧帽歪戴着,一副玩世不恭的样子。在他周围,大大小小的罗汉盘膝而坐,有的慈眉善目,有的尖嘴猴腮,有的嬉笑,有的嗔怒,活灵活现,妙趣横生。

最后,我们游览了拙政园、狮子林,这里的假山、亭子真多,还有一连串的山洞,我们在这里尽情地玩耍嬉戏。

集合的哨子吹响了,下午四点多钟,我们依依不舍地踏上了归途。

再见了,美丽的苏州园林!

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篇18:大学英语介绍家乡

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I am from shenzhen. In spring ,the weather is warm and wet.I can play kite. In summer, the weather is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. I can play kite, too. In the winter, the weather is cold and dry. It never snows.

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篇19:参加英语剧表演初一作文

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今天一大早,我就风风火火的赶到少年宫。这是为什么呢?因为我今天要参加英语表演

刚进会场,哈,我们已经迟了里面早已热闹非凡。第一个上场的表演的节目是狮子觅食。一个同学头戴狮子面具威风凛凛的出场了。只见他伸伸懒腰说道:“I  am   hungry,What’s  for  dinner 。”说完就出去觅食了。这时一只小兔子拿着一个红萝卜蹦蹦跳跳的走了过来,狮子一见就上前去威严地说:“把食物给我吃吧。”小兔子一看是狮子,连忙把手中的红萝卜送给了狮子,狮子吃了一口觉得不好吃,发了狮威恶狠狠的把红萝卜砸向小兔子还大声的骂着,小兔子吓得飞快的逃跑了。他们精彩的表演赢得了一片掌声。狮子表演者熟练的英语对话、惟妙惟肖的动作,仿佛把我们带进了一个动物园。

接下来的节目是皇帝的新装、狼来了和拔萝卜,各班的表演都很精彩,让我觉得心里不踏实起来,怕自己表演不好。

终于轮到我们上场了,我的心怦怦直跳怕我们班会输给其他的班级。当音乐一响起来,我们每个人都很快进了状态。我那颗怦怦直跳的心也平静了下来。大家各自表演者自己的角色,十分认真。突然电脑出问题了,把我们出场的顺序都打乱了,弄得我们几个团团转转都不知道怎么去表演了。这是老师在后面打着手势让我们跟着幻灯片来表演,我们手忙脚乱的的样子把评委都逗笑了。最后我们的成绩只有76.365分。

虽然这次我们没有取得好的成绩,但是我们却收获了快乐。

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篇20:高中自我介绍英语作文

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高中自我介绍英语作文1

i am linjiang. i was born in jilin changchun. i graduate from henan university of urban construction. i started learning english since i was 15 years old.my father is a farmer . and my mother is a housewife. i am the youngest one in my family. my brother have a lot of american friends. that’s why i have no problem communicating with americans or others by speaking english.

in my spare time, i like to do anything relating to english such as listening to english songs, watching english movies or tv programs, or even attending the activities held by some english clubs or institutes. i used to go university for a short- term english study. during that time, i learned a lot of daily life english and saw a lot of different things.

i think language is very interesting. i could express one substanceby using different sounds. so i wish i could study and read more english enlarge my knowledge.

我是。我出生英寸我毕业的高中和英语专业。我开始学习英语,因为我是12岁。我的父母有很多美国朋友。这就是为什么我没有问题,与美国或其他国家的英语沟通。

我在业余时间,我喜欢做的任何与英语的听英文歌曲,看英文电影或电视节目,甚至参加一些英超俱乐部或学院所举行的活动。我曾经去作短期英语留学。在此期间,我学到了很多日常生活的英语,看到了很多不同的事情。

我觉得语言很有意思。我可以表达一种substanceby使用不同的声音。所以,我希望我能学习更多英语文学和扩大我的知识

高中自我介绍英语作文2

my name is . there are 4 people in my family. my father is a chemistryteacher. he teaches chemistry in senior high school. my mother is an english teacher. she teaches english in the university. i have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

i like to read english story books in my free time. sometimes i surf the internet and download the e- books to read. reading e- books is fun. in addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

i hope to study both english and computer technology because i am interested in both of the subjects. maybe one day i could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

我的名字是。有4人在我的家人。我的父亲是一个chemistryteacher。他教高中化学。我的母亲是一名英文教师。她教英语的大学。我有一个弟弟,他是一个初中学生,是联考的准备。

我喜欢阅读,在我空闲时,英文故事书。有时我上网冲浪和下载电子书籍阅读。阅读电子书籍的乐趣。此外,还扩大了,因为我的先进技术词汇和生动的动画。

我希望学习英语和计算机技术,因为我感兴趣的是两个科目。也许有一天,我可以把他们和今后适用于我的研究。

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