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如何写英语作文基础小学【汇编20篇】

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小学生圣诞节英语作文附翻译

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Christmas is very important for a foreigner, it is equally important for Chinese people, today is Christmas Eve, is the first day of Christmas.

On Christmas Eve, Santa Claus is ready to gift this year, in the day but to send oh! I was just about to send mom a big apple, after school, I quickly came to a store, "boss, have a Christmas fruit?" I loudly of say, the boss looked at me and shook his head, ah! Not so soon, alas! I had to go home crestfallen, mother see me frown, said: "whats wrong?" I like sewed the mouth not to tell the truth, I turned her eyes a brainwave, then find ways to make Christmas fruit, see I like listen to the who command to lay down their bags, hide in the room not to come out, first of all, I first took a red and big apple for the main body, with my favorite ribbons to decorate the tree, suddenly a princess appeared in front of me gorgeous dresses, translucent jade bracelet, blue glass slipper, ah! How beautiful, use my card made into the shape of a Christmas tree, the above also write a words: "mom, I love you, you are the most beautiful in the world of the mother, mother Christmas to you soon!" Succeeded, I quickly ran to mom, mom was shocked, she shed a drop of tears, the tears are sweet.

The second day of Christmas morning, I received a gift, I know this is from the mother, but I still like a child, when I came to school, my drawer is filled with CARDS, mother and I am very touched, the card is the card are He Yu, only written on a card, I was very angry, because he and I played a joke on.

Christmas, someone make fun of others makes me very moved, anyhow I wish you all a merry Christmas!

圣诞节对于外国人来说非常重要,对于中国人来说也同样重要,今天就是平安夜,也是圣诞节的第一天。

平安夜到来了,圣诞老人正在准备着今年的礼物,在这一天里可是要送苹果的哦!我正准备送妈妈一个大苹果,放学后我赶忙来到小卖部,“老板,有没有圣诞果?”我大声的说,老板看了看我,摇了摇头,啊!这么快就没有了,唉!我只好垂头丧气的回家了,妈妈见我皱起眉头,便说:“怎么了?”我像针缝了嘴似的没说出真相,我转了转眼睛灵机一动,便想出法子来做圣诞果,只见我像听了谁的命令似的放下书包,躲进屋子里不出来,首先,我先拿来一个又红又大的苹果来做主体,再用我那最喜欢的彩带来装饰它,顿时一位公主出现在我面前华丽的服装,透亮的玉镯、蓝色的水晶鞋,啊!多么漂亮,用我的卡纸做成了一个圣诞树的形状,上面还写上了一句话:“妈妈,我爱你,您是世界上最漂亮的妈妈,妈妈祝你圣诞快了!”成功了,我急忙跑去送给妈妈,妈妈惊呆了,她流下了一滴眼泪,这滴眼泪很甜。

圣诞节的第二天早晨,我收到了礼物,我明知道这是妈妈送的,但我却依旧像个小孩子,当我来到学校时,我的抽屉里堆满了贺卡,和妈妈一样我非常感动,贺卡就是贺卡上面都是一些贺语,只有一张贺卡上写的,我非常生气,因为他和我开了一个玩笑。

圣诞节正是如此,有人开玩笑,也有人令我非常感动,总之祝大家圣诞节快乐!

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I like toys very much. There are all kinds of toys in my home. These toys are bought by my father and my mother. I grew up with these toys. It not only brings me happiness, but also inspires my intelligence.

我非常喜欢玩具,在我的家里有各种各样的玩具,它们是妈妈、爸爸买给我的。我是玩着这些玩具长大的,它带给了我快乐,也开发了我的智慧。

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篇2:小学四年级环境保护英语作文

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Humans have only one earth. He is the cradle of life, is the homeland of all mankind. However, the environmental pollution and ecological destruction have on human social and economic development and peoples normal life constitutes the real threat. Take good care of the environment, advocate civilization, is the human moral and responsibility.

We want to clean the earth, eager to healthy earth, eager to the homes of environmental protection, eager to green, health, community health... Let us use love to pay attention to changes in the environment, with passion to spread the idea of environmental protection, with actions to shoulder the important task of environmental protection. Starts from me, start from now, intravenous drip minor matter, starts from the side the environmental commitment into action.

Remember, protect the earth, is to protect ourselves.

人类只有一个地球。他是生命的摇篮,是人类共有的家园。然而,环境污染与生态破坏已经对人类的社会经济发展和人们的正常生活构成了现实威胁。爱护环境,崇尚文明,无疑是人类自身的道义和责任。

我们渴望干净的地球,渴望健康的地球,渴望环保的家园,渴望绿色,健康,卫生的社区……让我们用爱心去关注环境的变化,用热情去传播环保的观念,用行动肩负起环保的重任。从我做起,从现在做起,从身边的点滴小事做起,把环保承诺变为实际行动。

记住,保护地球,就是保护我们自己。

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篇3:关于建筑的英语作文小学

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In Tianjin,there are many buildings of bygone times.Some of them are

imposing and have great artistic and historic value.However,these buildings do

mot fit in well with each other,because most of them were built by foreigners in

different times.The traffic in the city is not very convenient.The street are

usually narrow and twisted.If the government wanted to have them widened,a large

number of buildings would have to be pulled down.Some buildings are too old and

are nothing more than cottages,and in place of them,some new high buildings have

been set up.However,the new ones are still few and in many places they seem

quite out of place.

Yet those Western-style buildings give Tianjin a different characteristic

from other cities and those new ones lend the city fresh vitality which will

spread rapidly with the reform going on.

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篇4:小学生关于我的朋友英语作文

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Friend, you are a part of my life. Friend, you are a part of my life, is an indispensable person in my life. Friends ah, you are my savior, my door in adversity, but you always sacrifice to save me; Friend, are you...... Friends have a variety of character, but some of the character is not good, hell tell him. I have too many friends, I would say a big friend.

My big friend, she is my neighbors a child, she read the first now, but she also every time when painting or see the understanding friend diffuse guest or related Japanese animation; Sometimes take out her MP3 player to listen to music in Japan, will be great to sing with her sister, I also want to go to complain about her, but it sounds too good, I dont have the heart to go to complain about her.

This is one of her hobbies, she usually likes to find small meeting, we talk about then up food sometimes, sometimes talk then go to the north cellar library reading a book, sometimes...

A lot of friends of my hobbies, I will introduce to here, your friend also have this hobby? So, that you might be very lucky!

朋友啊,你是我人生中的一分子;朋友啊,你是我生活中的一分子,也是我生活中不可缺少的人;朋友啊,你是我的救兵,我门处在逆境之中,但你总是舍己救我;朋友啊,你是……朋友有多种的性格,但有些性格是不好的,他还要你告诉他。我的朋友太多了,我就说一位大朋友吧。

我的大朋友,她是我的邻居的一位孩子,她现在读初一了,但她还每天有空时都会画画或者是看看《知音漫客》或者是有关日本的动画片;有时会拿出她的MP3来听日本的音乐,也会和她妹妹一起大唱起来,我还想去投诉她,但听起来实在太好听了,我不忍心去投诉她了。

这是她的爱好之一,她平时都喜欢找上我们开些小会议,有时谈那时开大食会,有时谈那时去北窖图书馆看书,有时……

我的朋友爱好多多,我就介绍到这里,你的朋友也有这样的爱好吗?有的话,那你可能会很幸运哦!

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篇5:有趣的英语课小学六年级日记

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今天,天气转凉,大家都披上了大衣,来到了美丽的校园,小鸟似乎变少了,小草开始掉发了,大叔开始掉牙了,这意味着一年即将过去了,一眨眼十月已经过半,一年还有最后的三分之一,一天跟光速一般,在这光是的日子里发生了许多有趣的事情,在中学的每一节可我都听得非常认真听从老师指挥和安排,也在每一节课里紧紧抓住每一个知识点,虽然上课很死板,但有几堂课却让我记忆犹新,比如今天的英语课……

“叮铃铃”上课铃响了,我静静的坐在位子上等待老师上课,在我看来英语课有时有趣,有时却非常无聊,而今天这堂英语课让我改变了对它的看法,我相信这样有趣的课堂老师也一定发了不少心思来准备这堂课,在上课时老师突然给我们来了个对抗游戏,男生VS女生哪一方选手问题回答的多,那方就获胜。

比赛开始了,男生,女生都不甘示弱,勇于站起来回答问题,外面狂风大作,里面却是这番热闹的情景,一分钟过去了,二分钟过去了,三分钟过去了男生和女生之间出现了距离,眼看第一大题就要结束,我们男生非常着急,想挽回局面,正当我们要开始翻盘时,第一大题居然就这然结束了,不过还好,还有第二大题,谁赢谁输还不一定呢?第二大局开始了,经过一番调整的我们,又开始追逐了紧张又激烈的气氛依旧未停,男生们依然努力的追赶着分数,能追一分是一分,女生好像有点骄傲了,回答的人越来越少,我们分数渐渐多了起来,直到最后一题是我们只差女生两分了,当我们认为胜负已定时,老师突然说最后一题回答对加两分,这是我们脸上又有了笑容,因为班长把自己的手举得高高的,他是我们最后的一线希望了,你是男生唯一的靠山了,当老师在黑板上花了两个大星星后就意味着我们的努力没有白费,我们终于胜利了!

今天的这节有趣的英语课给我们打来了许多欢乐和笑声!

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篇6:2024年小学六年级英语作文:AFarewellParty

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一、导语

给同学们汇总了小学六年级英语作文,在我们考试中是经常可以遇到的,希望同学们学习后能有所帮助.

A Farewell Party

It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.

Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.

Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.

二、要领点评

写法:

这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目,以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。

时态:这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时,所以这里我们才用一般现在时,现在进行时和一般将来时来写。

句型:

一般现在时:主语+动词原形+其他。

现在进行时:主语+现在分词+其他。

一般将来时:主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。

三、注意

由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多,所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时,将要去做什么,要用将来时。另外还要注意,一般现在时在肯定句中,主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。

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篇7:我喜欢太阳小学五年级英语作文

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In North, when winter comes, the weather is very cold, the cloud covers the sunshine all the time, it is hard for people to see the sunshine. So the sunshine becomes very rare in the winter, when it comes, I will feel very comfortable, my mood turns good even I am not happy. I love sunshine, it just like the hope for me.

在北方,当冬天到来的时候,天气变得很冷,云朵总是遮挡着阳光,人们很难看到阳光。因此冬日里的阳光变得很稀有,当它出来的时候,我很感到很舒服,即使我不高兴,心情也会变好。我爱阳光,对于我来说就像是希望。

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篇8:小学英语作文我的宠物猫

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My Pet cat 我的宠物

I have got two baby cats. They are very beautiful. One is yellow. The other is white. They are very lovely. The yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.

Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.

我有两只小猫。他们非常漂亮。一个是黄色的。另一个是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他喜欢和人玩。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。她也喜欢玩的人。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。

噢,我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是很好的朋友。我爱他们。

[小学英语作文我的宠物猫

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篇9:我的家庭小学英语作文Myfamily

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My family lives in Taiwan, but my father doesnt. He lives in China. My family name is Jian. I have one brother and one sister. My name is Jeff. My brothers name is Art. My sisters name is Sophia. My fathers name is Jian Zong-he and my mothers name is Jenny. I like to watch TV and play PC games. My brother likes them, too. My father and my mother both like to watch TV. My brother and I are both junior high school students. My father is a businessman. My mother is a businesswoman. I like my family very much.

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篇10:小学生英语

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my holiday was very wonderful.and it was very busy. in the morning.i went to the park with my parents.im very happy. at noon.i went to the restaurant with my parents. the food was very delicious. in the evening.i was watch tv.then i did my homework.last,i went to bed at10 oclock.

oh! it was winter holiday. i was very happy. i read my favourite books. i have many wonderful books. but i could not read these books too much. i also had a lot of homework to do. i like playing computer games, too. it”s very interesting. but i could not play it too much. i wear glasses, i”m very sad. it”s not good for my eyes to play computer games too much.

oh! it was the spring festival. it”s chinese traditional festival. people were very happy. they went shopping, cleaned their houses, had supper together......i went to my grandparents” home with my parents. my grandparents were very happy to see us. they prepared many kinds of nice food, such as fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. in the evening, we watched tv and lighted fireworks. we also knocked on people”s doors and gave some presents to them. after the spring festival, we went to shanghai to go shopping. we bought clothes, shoes and some delicious food.

i had a good holiday, i think. i also have very nice school life now.

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篇11:小学二年级英语作文Sang Lan 桑兰

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My favorite star isSangLan. She is one of the best gymnasts in our country and she is very beautiful. Her smile like sunshine makes everyone happy.

Unluckily she was hurt badly in a contest. Since then she hasnt stood up. But she faces the fact bravely and overcomes all kinds of difficulties.

Now she is studying hard in Beijing University. She wants to do some useful things for our country after graduation. Her spirit encourages many people.

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篇12:小学生英语作文:我的爸爸

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爸爸用他的勤劳给我们创造了美好的生活,下面是写我的爸爸英语作文范文,希望对你有帮助。

我的爸爸英语作文篇一:

My Father My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses. Everyone says he is a kind-hearted man. He often helps his neighbours and some strangers whom he doesnt know at all. He has really done a lot for others. I dont like him to do so because I think it has taken him too much time. When I discourage him, he always says with a smile,The world needs warm hearts. My father loves his family, and loves his work even better. In the company, he is called workaholic He spends most of his time working, and often forgets to have meals or to go to bed.As a result,he doesnt enjoy good health. My father likes reading in his spare time. He told me reading was very interesting. I became interested in reading little by little. I like books, because they help me in many ways. My father has a bad habit he likes smoking very much. I hate it. See, the house is full of smoke. I know its bad for his health as well as mothers and mine. I advise him to give up smoking. Im sure he will follow my advice some day. Such is my father. I am proud of having such a good father.

我的爸爸 我的爸爸个子高高的,戴着一副眼镜。大家都说他是个好心肠的人。他经常帮邻居排忧解难,对于一些他压根不认识的陌生人,他也总是尽力相助。他为别人真是付出了许多许多。我不愿意他这么做,因为这花费了他太多的时间。每当我劝阻他时,爸爸总是笑着说:“世界需要热心肠嘛!” 爸爸热爱家庭,更注重事业,公司里的人都叫他“工作狂”。他把大部分时间都用于工作,为工作他常常废寝忘食。过度的劳累使他的健康状况欠佳。 爸爸闲暇时爱读书。他告诉我,读书很有趣。我渐渐地对读书产生了兴趣。我爱上了书,因为书对我帮助很大。 爸爸有个坏习惯——太爱吸烟。我不喜欢他抽烟。瞧,家里充满了烟味。我知道吸烟有害他的健康,对我和妈妈也有害无益。我建议他戒烟。我相信总有一天他会这么做的。 这就是我的爸爸,我为有这样的好爸爸而自豪。

我的爸爸英语作文篇二:

My father is a teacher.

He teaches very well.

His students like him.

I love my father.

He oftern helps me when I study.

He is very good at playing basketball.

He also plays pingpang well.

I am no match for him in all ball games.

He is not good at writing compositions.

He doesnt help me when I have difficulty in writing.

What a pity!

Thats why I go to other people for help when i write.

我的爸爸英语作文篇三:

My father is thirty-five years old. He is an attractive middle-age. He is an engineer, working in a big factory of my city. His working time is regular, going to office at eight o’clock and coming home at six o’clock. He works hard and becomes an important person in his factory. At weekends, he does not go to work, so that he usually stays at home or take my mother and I go out. In my opinion, my father is a great person. He brings happiness to my family.

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篇13:小学四年级英语作文myhobbies

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I have lots of hobbies, among them, my favorite hobby is playing computer.

Play computer in fact there are many benefits, not only gives me much help in the study, but also in life also gave me a lot of help. You see: no problem can be find on a computer; In recent days the weather conditions can see on the computer; You can order things on the computer, cheap and convenient; You can watch TV on the computer, watching a movie; Can also be on the computer games... Is there anyway.

Remember one night, I was in a language the basic training, stumped by a question and she ran and asked my father: "dad, this topic in the flesh in the text said what mean?" After dad thought for a long time said: "this is not very clear to me, you still to look at the computer!" Then I thought to myself: this topic how so difficult? Even give up my dad. "And then, I will go online to find, as a result, let me check the best answer," flesh "is" the human body. In this way, my problem is solved.

In addition, I also like playing computer games, so, after I finish my homework every day, I can play for a while, but I have to remind everybody is, playing computer games, but dont be hidden, it can only be as a relaxation after the completion of a job, playing on the computer at the same time should pay attention to: protect good vision; Computer disease prevention...

This is my hobby?? Play computer.

我有许许多多的爱好,其中,我最喜欢的爱好是玩电脑。

玩电脑其实有许多的好处,不仅在学习上给了我很多帮助,而且在生活当中也给我很多帮助。你瞧:不会的问题可以在电脑上查找;最近几天的天气情况可以在电脑上查看;可以在电脑上订购物品,既便宜也省事;可以在电脑上看电视、看电影;还可以在电脑上打游戏……反正是举不胜举。

记得有一天晚上,我在做语文《基础训练》时,被一道题目给难倒了,就跑去问爸爸:“爸爸,这个题目里的‘血肉’在课文中表示什么意思?”爸爸想了很久之后说:“这我也不是很清楚,你还是去查看一下电脑吧!”当时我心里想:这题目怎么这么难啊?居然都把我老爸给难倒了。”然后,我就上网去查找,结果让我查到了最佳答案,“血肉”表示的是“人的身躯”。这样一来,我的问题就迎刃而解了。

另外,我还喜欢玩电脑游戏,所以,每天我做完作业之后,我可以小玩一会儿,不过,我得提醒大家的是,玩电脑游戏时,可千万不能上隐,那只能是作为在作业完成之后的一种放松,同时玩电脑时要注意:保护好视力;预防电脑病……

这就是我的爱好??玩电脑。

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篇14:有关圣诞节英语作文小学

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Christmas Day is very popular around the world, which originates in western

country, but now it is celebrated by the world. When this big day comes, there

will be a lot of products that sold in very low prices, and the Santa Clauss

image will be seen all the street. Shops will play Christmas songs. I always

spend this festival with my friends, because my parents dont take this day

seriously. We hang out the street and join the big crowd in the square, singing

with people and then wait for the time to count down. It is such a great moment

for me. I can feel the lively atmosphere, like the New Year. On the way home, we

share our wishes and talk about the happy incidents. Christmas activity brings

me unforgettable memories.

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篇15:英语作文我的小学生活

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导语:作为一名学生,你觉得你的小学生活过的怎么样呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

I am a student at grade 6,I want to say something about my life in primary school.

My school life in primary school is wonderful! I have a lot of friends. They are friendly to me.We study together play together and talk together. My teachers are very patient .They teach me a lot and help me with many problems. The school life is unforgettable.

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我是一个五年级的学生,我想说说我的小学生活。

我的学校生活,小学是美好的!我有很多朋友。他们是友好的我。我们一起学习一起玩,一起聊聊。我的老师非常有耐心,他们教了我很多,帮助我很多问题。学校生活是令人难忘的。

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篇16:小学英语

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Almost every child will complain about their parents sometimes. It is

natural, because when people stay together for a long time, they will start to

have argument. But ignore about the unhappy time, our parents love us all the

time. No matter what happen to us, they will stand by our sides. We should be

grateful to them and try to understand them.

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篇17:我幸福家庭小学英语作文

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I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a businessman. He is always busy with his work and he often goes to business trips. But when he is free, he stays with us. My mother is a worker. She works hard, too. She works hard to take care of our home. I love my parents

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篇18:小学生写作基础及提升技巧

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会写文章,善于写文章,需要若干条件,其中一个条件就是练好基本功。以下是为大家分享的3小学写作基础提升技巧,供大家参考借鉴,欢迎浏览!

打好写作基础,练好写句子的基本功,要从把句子写完整、具体、通顺、连贯这几方面做起。

一、把句子写完整

怎样的句子才算是完整的呢?读读下面的句子:

1.我们劳动。(谁,干什么)

2.小蚂蚁运送食物。(什么,干什么)

3.哥哥是一名少先队员。(谁,是什么)

不难看出:在一般情况下,句子是由两部分组成的,前半部分交代“谁”或“什么”,后半部分交代“做什么”“怎么样”或者“是什么”。前后两部分说全了,句子才算是一句完整的话。

需要强调说明的是:知道什么是完整句,怎样的句子才算完整,这只是一个知识性的问题;落实在行动上,即平日在说每一句话,在写每一句话时,都要认真思考,反复斟酌,提高“完整”意识,不写残缺不全的句子,这才是最重要的。

二、把句子写具体

句子要完整,这是首要的。但在许多时候,句子只做到“完整”是不能准确表达意思的,还要做到“具体”。怎样的句子才算是具体的呢?读读下面这几组句子,体会一下:

第一组:

1、爸爸做工。

2.爸爸在工厂里做工。

分析:第二句写清了爸爸在哪儿做工。

第二组:

1.小蜜蜂飞来。

2.夏日,一只金色的小蜜蜂从远处嗡嗡地飞来。

分析:第二句写清什么时候,有多少,什么样,从哪儿,怎么样。

由上面这两组句子可以看出:在句子主要成分的前面或后面,写清什么时候(时间)、有多少(数量)、在什么地方或从哪儿(地点)、什么样(形状或颜色)、怎么样(态势)、达到什么程度(情境)等,就写清了事物外形特点、活动特点,就把自己要准确表达的意思写出来了,这就叫做把句子写具体。这样的句子就算是完整、具体的句子。

学习把句子写具体,这是一项极为重要的技能,需要同学们抓住人物或事物的特点,准确运用词语,进行持久练习。

三、把句子写通顺

句子通顺,就是句意明白,读得顺口。具体来说,句子通顺包括以下几个方面:

1.用词要准确,经得起推敲。例如:我们把门口的泥土消除掉了。句中,“泥土”不能“消除”,只能“清除”掉。

2.句中词语排列的顺序要合理。例如:正在花上,有几只漂亮的蝴蝶翩翩起舞。这句话改成“有几只漂亮的蝴蝶,正在花上翩翩起舞”,句子就通顺了。

3.词语使用搭配要得当。例如:公园里生长着各种树木和五颜六色的鲜花。句中“生长”和“鲜花”两词搭配不当,应改为“公园里生长着各种树木,盛开着五颜六色的鲜花”。

4.句中各词语的意思不能自相矛盾。例如:我断定他大概是王小刚的哥哥。句中“断定”与“大概”矛盾,应删掉“大概”。

5.关联词语的使用恰到好处。例如:只有天下雨,地才会湿。“下雨”不是“地湿”的唯一条件,因此,第一句应改为:只要天下雨,地就会湿。

6.句意明白,合乎实际,符合情理。例如:博物馆里展出了五千多年前新出土的文物。说“五千多年前新出土的文物”不合实际,应改为:博物馆里展出了新出土的五千多年前的文物。

四、把句子写连贯

连贯,即句子之间连接贯通。显然,把句子写连贯,这是指写几句话(又叫“句群”)来说的。

翻开某些同学的作文本,段落中上下句不连贯的现象比比皆是,主要表现在:句子之间无顺序,承接不紧密,跨度大;上下句之间,被描述的对象(即“主语”)重复出现,不会运用“他(她)”或者“它”这些人称代词。怎样才能做到把句子写连贯呢?

1.合理安排顺序,使句子连贯。

有顺序,这是写几句意思连贯的话的最基本的要求。这就要求我们,在写几句话时,一定不能东一句、西一句,想到哪儿就写到哪儿;总要围绕既定的中心意思,按照一定的顺序,把相关的句子组织在一起,使句子前后连贯。

2.学会运用“他(她)”或“它”这些人称代词,使句子连贯。

读读下面这段话,想一想,有什么毛病,怎样说才好:

妈妈的衣袖破了。妈妈赶忙从抽屉里拿出一个小布包。妈妈先从布包里拿出一根针,一根青线,用牙咬了咬线头,把线头穿过针眼。妈妈又从布包里找出一小块布,贴在破了的地方,然后一针一线地缝起来。

读后,大家一定会发现:这几句话写的对象是妈妈,主要写的是妈妈缝补衣服时所作的准备工作,是按事情经过的先后顺序排列的。只是由于这四句话的开头重复出现“妈妈”一词,因此读起来显得很拗口。如果把后面三句开头中的“妈妈”改成“她”字,这几句话就连贯多了。

这就告诉我们:在几个句子里,如果写的是同一个人物(或事物),后面再指这个人物(或事物)时,就可以用“他(她)”或“它”来代替。

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篇19:小学生写人英语作文:我的爸爸

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My father is an ordinary farmer, on the career, on the status of my father are nothing worthy of my pride, but my fathers love for me, but it is meticulous.

People often say "strict parent", but in my eyes, my father and my mother, my father is more kind than my mother. Life no matter how many of our sister to do something wrong, my father always patiently educated us, inspired us.

I clearly remember that my father had never used violence to educate us. It was a summer day, the sun was burning, without a trace of wind. When we work in the ground, inadvertently I found the neighbors of the family of watermelon, has matured, my family has not cooked. Looking at the round and big watermelon, my mouth straight mouth saliva. Suddenly my mind flashed a thought: it is better to pick a taste. Wait until the morning my father and mother came home, I secretly picked a watermelon, sitting under a tree, relish to eat up. Just eat a few mouthfuls, I saw a person from afar. I took a closer look at my father. I hid the watermelon in the back. Dad came to see me panic panic look, my heart suddenly understand a lot. Dad said kindly: "how can children eat, eat their own homes, how can we eat someone else? Besides, how can we have the nerve to get someone elses labor fruit?" Dad patiently guided me, I was ashamed to low Head of the head.

My father is such an ordinary farmer. He taught me in a loving way, encouraged me, and I was proud of having such a father.

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篇20:小学五年级英语作文我的饮食习惯

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Hello. Im Timmy. I like to eat eggs ang milk for breakfast. I often eat my breakfast at home. It starts the day .

I often have lunch at school. For lunch, I often eat rice and meat. It can give me energy.

For supper. I often have vegetables and apples. They are good for health.I after supper within grandparents at home.

你好。我是蒂米。我早餐喜欢吃鸡蛋和牛奶。我经常在家吃早饭。开始这一天。

我经常在学校吃午餐。吃午饭,我通常吃米饭和肉。它能给我能量。我的饮食习惯

吃晚饭。我经常有蔬菜和苹果。它们对健康有益。我在爷爷奶奶家里吃晚饭。

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