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1000圣诞节小学生英语
全文共 1373 字
+ 加入清单Today, I had an interesting Christmas. In todays morning song, the teacher told us about the story of Christmas and the legend of Santa Claus, and so on.
The most interesting thing is the afternoon. In the afternoon, the students in our class first made a handmade greeting card and then shared the Pingan fruit, the apple.
Manual is the teachers idea. This card is to be given to mom and dad and to thank them for their hard care for a year. The method is: Handmade cover is a "Merry Christmas", there is a pine tree, pine trees on both sides are some of his paintings about Christmas figures etc.. The back is a letter of gratitude to mom and dad. The handwork seems simple, but its hard to do it. I was anxious to cut the paper, and all the sweat was crying. After cutting the paper, the framed frame is cut. After cutting the box, draw the pine tree first, then fold it along both sides of the pine tree, and finally decorate it with the edge, so that the card is almost ready. The cover read "Merry Christmas" and write a letter of thanks to mom and Dad, will be accomplished.
After the card for mom and Dad, we started to divide the apples. Every student is rushing to the forefront. The class is bustling with excitement. Everyone is happy to eat apples. They are chattering Like a bird flying away.
This is an interesting Christmas, a meaningful Christmas, a happy day!
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篇1:小学六年级英语写一封信
全文共 621 字
+ 加入清单Dear Wei Fang,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇2:小学五年级英语作文:AHappyDayinSpring
全文共 398 字
+ 加入清单Its spring. Its sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Blacks family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.
篇3:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译
全文共 1830 字
+ 加入清单端午节是我们中国十分隆重的节日,它是为了纪念战国时期伟大的爱国诗人屈原,现在的中国人还在延续这一习俗,甚至还有一天的法定节日。
Dragon Boat Festival is a very grand festival in China. It is to
commemorate Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in the Warring States period. Now
Chinese people still continue this custom, even a legal festival.
农历五月初五就是端午节了,家家户户都要包粽子,还有有趣的划龙舟比赛呢!奶奶在家已经煮好了香喷喷的粽子,打开锅盖满屋都飘着粽子的清香,让我闻得口水直流个不停。我迫不及待地剥开粽子叶津津有味的吃了起来,真是回味无穷呀!
The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day of may in the lunar calendar.
Every family needs to make zongzi. There are also interesting dragon boat races!
Grandma has cooked delicious zongzi at home. When she opened the pot cover, the
fragrance of zongzi was floating all over the house, making my mouth water
continuously. I cant wait to peel off the zongzi leaf and eat it with relish.
Its really memorable!
吃完粽子后,爸爸带我去看划龙舟比赛,这里人山人海,车水马龙的可热闹了!比赛开始了,各个队伍都蓄势待发,随着一阵枪声一条条龙舟飞快地划过水面,犹如一支支箭向前飞去。在场的观众们兴奋喊道着加油加油,在为参赛者加油鼓励,参赛者们听了心里充满了信心使劲地划桨,水花到处飞溅。各条龙舟你追我赶的,最后,落后的一号终于追上了遥遥领先的二号第一个冲过了终点,观众们不禁欢呼起来,到处都是一片欢乐的海洋。啊!这真是我最难忘的一天了。
After eating zongzi, my father took me to watch the dragon boat race. There
are lots of people here, and the traffic is very busy! The race started, and
every team is ready to go. With a burst of gunfire, each dragon boat flies
across the water like an arrow. The audience cheered and shouted, cheering and
encouraging for the contestants. The contestants listened with confidence and
strove hard to paddle, and the water splashed everywhere. Each dragon boat
chased after each other. At last, the laggard No. 1 finally caught up with the
far ahead No. 2. The audience couldnt help cheering. There was a sea of joy
everywhere. Ah! This is the most unforgettable day for me.
还有许许多多的传统节日也是和端午节一样有趣的,我们要一起保护中国的传统节日。
There are also many traditional festivals as interesting as Dragon Boat
Festival. We should protect Chinese traditional festivals together.
篇4::秋天的果园小学生英语作文
全文共 1523 字
+ 加入清单With a piece of yellow leaves of the fall, cicadas away from the last call in the summer, autumn day and earth came to earth.
This weekend, autumn, the sky is high, our family ready to go to the outskirts of the orchard to pick fruit.
Autumn of the wind, with a slight coolness, gently brush in the face. Raised his head, a group of geese, a row of adult words, one will be lined up, they are and the clouds farewell, ready to warm the winter in the south. On the roadside, on the ridge, the golden wild chrysanthemums are so different that they dance gently in the autumn wind and seem to welcome us to pick.
Marching all the way to the beauty, we came to the orchard. A lively scene took the lead into the eye. You see, apples on the apple tree like drunk like, rose with a red little face, persimmon tree also hung a nice red lantern. Maple Leaves like flowers in February, ginkgo leaves are like a little fan of yellow, maybe it is, the fan is gone hot summer. Some children are busy picking leaves, and some in the careful to do specimens ... ... the most interesting is to pick the apple. Apple sweet smell hooked my feet, I hastened to mention the basket, tiptoe, spent a lot of effort, only to pick a big red apple, Apple is so attractive, I regardless of March Twenty one, bitter bitterly, my greedy like arousal father and mother laughed.
I and my little companion in the orchard picking fruit, hide and seek, but also put a kite, the wind passed our laughter very far away.
Sun sunset, I reluctantly left the orchard.
篇5:小学生英语日记格式
全文共 1449 字
+ 加入清单我们写日记的时候要注意格式,下面是关于小学生英语日记格式,希望对您有帮助~
1. 日记写作格式
英语日记的格式与中文日记大体一样。英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。
英语日记的第一行,要写明年、月、日与星期,然后要写明当天的气候状况,日期通常顶格写,后面是星期,天气状况写在右上角。如果是游记,还要写明地点。
Sunny, clear 晴 shower 阵雨
Cloudy 多云 heavy rain 大雨
Light rain 小雨 drizzle 毛毛雨
Overcast 阴 cold 冷天
2. 英语日记的写作文体
英语日记正文可以是叙事、描述、说明、议论等各种形式。其实,由于日记是非常随便的,因此上述文体常常结合在一起使用。英语日记内容取自生活,可长可短,有时无事可记,一两句也可以。写日记贵在坚持,不可断断续续地几天写一篇,那样起不到学习英语的效果。另外,英语日记也应该尽可能讲究一些文采,切忌写成流水账。初学者只要能写出完整并符合语法要求的句子就很难得,所以文采要求是次要的。而对于高中及其以上程度的英语学习者来说,就要求不单要语法正确,而且对句法、选词、谋篇布局等都有较高的要求。
3. 时态
写日记的时间一般是在下午或晚上,有时也有在第二天补记。所记叙的事情通常发生在过去,所以常用一般过去时。但如果要记叙天气、描写景色、展望未来、议论某事或对话引语等,可以使用一般现在时或一般将来时,以生动再现当时的情景。
4. 养成积累词语的习惯
日记是对生活中方方面面的事情的描述和感想的表达,所以写日记要用到单词面很广,这就要求英语学习者在平时要养成积累单词的好习惯,而把记忆的单词运用到日记中更是起到温故作用。值得注意的是,在写日记时,我们都会遇到很多不会写的单词。这时千万不要就此止步,而要先空出来,或者用拼音代替,等一篇日记写完了再查词典不上所缺的单词,并且重点记忆这些单词。这是通过这样的方式,我们才能更快地积累单词和提高英语水平。
5. 英语日记中的缩写与省略
英语写作中经常会有缩略语,比如:Nov. / November. Apr. / April
eg / For example 等各种形式的缩略语。
建议初学者不要用这些缩略语,因为初学者对单词的熟悉程度还不是很高,要不断的应用学过的单词才能记得牢,记得准。
最后需要一提的是,英语日记习惯一年一本,因此日期不必写年份,而只是在每年一本的日记本封面上或者在日记的第一页和最后一页加以注明即可。
6.范文:
May 30, xxxx Friday Sunny
In our class, every student has a big kettle (水壶). But sometimes there is no water in some kettles. My friend Mike and I often fill1 them with water.
Every day at lunchtime, we take lots of kettles downstairs. We run from the sixth floor to the first floor. The kettles are heavy. But we are happy. It’s fun to help others. At the same time, we get closer with our classmates by helping each other.
篇6:小学生关于暑假的英语作文
全文共 530 字
+ 加入清单I had a busy summer vacation. I did my homework every day . I went to the library to borrow some books and went to the shops to buy some books and I read books almost every day .I did sports such as playing table tennis, swimming and so on. I visited my grandparents and stay there for a week. I helped my parents do some housework. Of course I went to Hannan Island to spend a week there because it is such a beautiful place.
我暑假很忙。 我每天要写作业。 我去图书馆去借书、去商店买书,我几乎每天都看书。我做运动,如:打乒乓球、游泳等。我去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我帮父母做家务。当然了我也去海南度过一周,因为那里是如此美丽的地方。
篇7:小学二年级关于阅读的英语作文
全文共 824 字
+ 加入清单I like reading, reading and listening. Comic books, picture books and storybooks and popular science books, I like it.
When I was small, mom and dad told me "the frog prince" and "the thumb girl", "journey to the west" and other stories. A little bit grow up, parents also teach me some poems, what "again before Wang Xietang yan, flying off the shelves." , what "children meet strangers, smile ask the guest where to." Wait, I to now still fresh. It was also at that time, I feel the pleasure of listening, reading and reading. And promise, grow up, must use a lot of books to enrich their extracurricular knowledge.
我喜欢读书、看书和听书。无论是漫画书、小人书、故事书还是科普书,我都很喜欢。
在我还很小的时候,爸爸、妈妈就给我讲了《青蛙王子》、《拇指姑娘》、《西游记》等故事。稍微长大一点,父母又教我一些诗词,什么“又是王谢堂前燕,飞入寻常百姓家。”,什么“儿童相见不相识,笑问客从何处来。”等等,我到现在仍然记忆犹新。也正是在那时,我感到了听书、看书和读书的乐趣。并且立下誓言,长大以后,一定要用许许多多的书来丰富自己的课外知识。
篇8:小学三年级英语作文
全文共 817 字
+ 加入清单Your enthusiasm, your both hands, can help others ; Your sincerity, your smile, can move others ; Your compliment, your blessing, can reciprocate others ……This, are all what you should do . Because you are accepting others help all the time , you should reciprocate them. No matter the friend or enemy, no matter the one that is familiar w-ith or strange one, whether he is a rich man or beggar. Help to be not to choose the target , choose time , choose the place. Go , make others warm with heart of you , g-o , help others with hand of you , go , persuade someone else with your action. This is what you should do . You should learn to pay , learns help, learn to present . So long as everybody can do so both, this world will be a cradle that is full of loving , the earth is that one is full of warm collectives!
篇9:小学生写人英语作文:我的爸爸
全文共 918 字
+ 加入清单Every child has a favorite father, no children are different fathers, I like my father, I will tell you about my father now!
My dad tall tall, thin face, pointed nose, moisten mouth, nose with a pair of big glasses, curved eyebrows.
My father is very kind, never how to criticize me, if I made any mistakes, my father told me some reason. What to do, what should not do, have to tell me.
My father is very economical, he often said to me, to save water, save electricity, my father often said, I had to do so.
My father is busy, busy also nothing, he is the unit on the leadership, generally at home, only my mother and I at dinner table to eat, my father is also outside to eat, sometimes, my father should take me and my mother go together The
My father no love to drink, drunk, home is not sleep. I know my father and mother so hard to work, do not want me to be better.
I love my dad, I love my mom, I love my home more.
篇10::秋天的果园小学生英语作文
全文共 1329 字
+ 加入清单Autumn to a field after the autumn rain, the fruit of the orchard mature. When I walked into the orchard, I was attracted to the fruit.
The first thing that catches my eyes is yellow pears. Look, that pear tree hanging a pear, like a gourd! A gust of wind blowing, pear shook his head, naughty you squeeze me touch, as if to say: "Come pick me! I am sweet and sweet "I finally could not help temptation, hand to pick one, but I did not pick, because I could not bear.
Go through the pear tree, I came to the banana tree, saw a tree banana tree sturdy tall and straight. A string of bananas hidden in the leaves, like the children of the month, like a fishermans boat, like my fathers sickle, like our children playing the "roundabout", but also like the fairy tale dwarf side by side in the cradle The I want to pick a string, but my mother said: "Only pick the banana can not eat, must go home to cover their yellow to eat."
The fruit of the orchard is so beautiful that the fruit of the orchard is too fragrant, and the feet of many children are painted, and they are sketched under the fruit trees, pick up the leaves, or eat the fruit. See all this, full of apples are laughing red face, persimmon tree also hung a red lantern.
This beautiful autumn orchard, I love you, could not bear to leave, really want to put the home here.
篇11:以生日为主题英语作文小学
全文共 446 字
+ 加入清单March 5th is my birthday.Its also a special day to memorize a great person
-- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the
morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped
my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.After school, I took my birthday
cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All o~ them
hoped that I would be back again.What a joyful birthday it was!
篇12:小学生写春节的英语
全文共 724 字
+ 加入清单The spring festival is the most important festival for the chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like christmas in the west. all people living away from home go back, becoming the busiest time for transportation systems of about half a month from the spring festival. airports, railway stations and long-distance bus stations are crowded with home returnees.
Strictly speaking, the spring festival starts every year in the early days of the 12th lunar month and will last till the mid 1st lunar month of the next year. of them, the most important days are spring festival eve and the first three days. the chinese government now stipulates people have seven days off for the chinese lunar new year.
篇13:MySchool小学二年级英语作文
全文共 655 字
+ 加入清单参考范文:
I study in a beautiful school. There are many trees and flowers in campus.
It’s green all the year round. There are three buildings in my school. Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. Our classroom is large and bright. We are happy to study in it. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a basketball court and a football field.
After class, I often play in the basketball court. And, there are many other places for fun in my school. I like my lovely school.
参考译文:
我在一个美丽的学校学习。在校园里有许多树和花。
一年四季都是绿色的。在我的学校有三个建筑。他们两个是教学大楼和一个办公室和图书馆。我们的教室又大又明亮。我们乐于学习。除此之外,有两个操场在我的学校,一个篮球场和一个足球场。
下课后,我经常在篮球场上。,还有许多其他有趣的地方在我的学校。我喜欢我可爱的学校。
篇14:有关自我介绍小学英语作文
全文共 701 字
+ 加入清单Chapter one:self-introduction
Tips:
名字和年龄:My name is peter, I am six years old.
兴趣:My hobby is playing basketball.
个性:I am a talkative person.
My name is peter. I am six years old. I am from Taiwan. Many people ask me about my Chinese name because they think the meaning of it is very interesting. But I hope my friends can remember my English name rather than my Chinese one. My hobby is playing basketball. I usually play it with my friends after school, and I believe playing basketball will bring me good health. I am a talkative person. It is very difficult for me to keep quiet. Now I am studying in English, so I hope everyone can speak English to me. Otherwise I will feel very bad if I keep quiet.
篇15:我幸福家庭小学英语作文
全文共 512 字
+ 加入清单My name is Yu Geqin. I’m nine years old. There are three members in my family, my father, my mother and I.
My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of my family. He can solve the difficult problems, too.
My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.
I have a happy family. I like it very much.
篇16:体育英语作文小学80词
全文共 620 字
+ 加入清单Taking exercise is good for our health. All work and no play makes Jack a
dull boy. By taking exercise, we can relax our body and mind. At the same time,
we can harden our muscle and have a good figure. If we dont take exercise for a
long time, we may easily fall sick.
I enjoy several outdoor sports. Swimming in the sea is my favorite. Because
there are too many people in a swimming pool and the water is always dirty, I
prefer to swim in the sea.
Playing badminton is also fun. I can always find a place in the park for
playing badminton. Besides, I enjoy jogging in the morning. Sometimes, I jog
with my parents in the park.
篇17:关于建筑的英语作文小学
全文共 825 字
+ 加入清单In Tianjin,there are many buildings of bygone times.Some of them are
imposing and have great artistic and historic value.However,these buildings do
mot fit in well with each other,because most of them were built by foreigners in
different times.The traffic in the city is not very convenient.The street are
usually narrow and twisted.If the government wanted to have them widened,a large
number of buildings would have to be pulled down.Some buildings are too old and
are nothing more than cottages,and in place of them,some new high buildings have
been set up.However,the new ones are still few and in many places they seem
quite out of place.
Yet those Western-style buildings give Tianjin a different characteristic
from other cities and those new ones lend the city fresh vitality which will
spread rapidly with the reform going on.
篇18:小学六年级圣诞节的英语
全文共 3980 字
+ 加入清单I like Christmas, it is just like our Spring Festival.
Maybe the Spring Festival is much more important and interesting than Christmas, but I like Christmas Day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during Christmas. When it is snowy, Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine I am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place! So we can also call Christmas “Snowy Lovely Day.”
On Christmas Day, shops are red and green. There are so many Christmas cards, Christmas hats, Christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “Merry Christmas.” By the way, I think studying can also become much more interesting.
Christmas is coming, it also means a new year will come. Let’s study harder to welcome the new year!
六年级圣诞节的英语作文【二】
it was christmas day yesterday. we had a christmas party at school. many friends of mine came to the party. after we said"merry christmas",we began to sing christmas songs, such as edelweiss, andso on. then we told some christmas stories, such as christmas father. then i danced and laughted with my friends. we all had a good time. when the party came to the end,we said "happy new year" to each other.
六年级圣诞节的英语作文【三】
christmas is one of the most important celebrations of the year for the western countries. it falls on the twenty- fifth of december and has the same importance as chinese new year to people with english backgrounds. the celebration is for the birth of jesus christ, who is the son of god in christianity. now days christmas is no longer only celebrated by the christians, but by most people from all over the world.
on the twenty- fourth of december everyone gets excited for it’s the day before christmas which is called christmas eve. the children are usually sent to bed early and are warned that “santa claus will only come and give you a present if you be good.” the younger kids actually believe that santa will come down the chimney on the sleigh that’s pulled by his reindeers. food like short bread and beer are prepared for santa when he comes, however most times parents just eat them. some children put socks and sacks up for the holding of the presents (that their parents put in).
rise and shine on christmas morning! the children are always the first ones to wake up, some even do at four. present wrappers everywhere! they look into their presents with a big smile on their face and oh dear….i hope no one’s disappointed. i feel sorry for anyone that got pink underwear. children play while dinner is prepared by the adults. the christmas dinner are usually eaten together by relatives. the tradition of christmas pudding and roosters are usually eaten with deserts afterwards. the rest of the day is usually games and fun before the good
六年级圣诞节的英语作文【四】
Christmas is the most important festival in the western world.It falls on December 25th.When my mother and Istayed in America,we were invited by one of my mothers friends to have Christmas with an American family.We bought some presents for our American friends on our way to their house.They had prepared different kinds of gifts for their family and guests when we got to their house,such as Christmas candles,cakes,cards,little toys,biscuits and so on.A Christmas tree was placed in the comer of the brilliant hall.How beautiful it was!We were impressed by these.We had abig meal.After dinner,they told us some interesting stories about Christmas.We learned that Christmas had something to do with God.We went to bed at midnight.Though we knew the Santa Claus was not true,we were still waiting for the Santa Claus with white beard to bring us presents.And we received many beautiful presents the next morning.This Christmas was really unforgettable.Not only did Ihave agood time,but also Iknew something about foreign culture.
篇19:寒假生活小学英语作文
全文共 787 字
+ 加入清单Chinese New Year is coming and my family is very busy. Its because Chinese
New Year is very special and important. We must prepare many special things to
get ready for this festival.
First, will make a big New Year meal. Second, we will make “Good-luck
wishes.” Third, we will set off firecrackers. New Year meal is delicious and we
think that eating some will bring us good luck. A long time ago, Chinese people
believed red color could bring our good luck too. And we set off firecrackers
could frighten ghosts away.
Chinese New Year is very popular between students. Because we can have a
long happy holiday.
中国新的一年的到来,我的家人很忙。这是因为中国的农历新年是非常特殊和重要的。我们必须准备许多特别的东西能为这个节日准备。
首先,将做一顿丰盛的新年。第二,我们将“祝福”。第三,我们会放鞭炮。新年餐美味,我们认为吃一些东西会为我们带来好运气。很久以前,中国人认为红色可以把我们的好运气。我们可以燃放爆竹吓唬鬼魂。
中国的新年是很受欢迎的学生之间。因为我们可以有很长的节日快乐。
篇20:简单实用的小学生写作基础知识大全
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+ 加入清单小学生学写作,打好写作基础,练好写句子的基本功,要从把句子写完整、具体、通顺、连贯这几方面做起。
一、把句子写完整
怎样的句子才算是完整的呢?读读下面的句子:
1.我们劳动。(谁,干什么)
2.小蚂蚁运送食物。(什么,干什么)
3.哥哥是一名少先队员。(谁,是什么)
不难看出:在一般情况下,句子是由两部分组成的,前半部分交代“谁”或“什么”,后半部分交代“做什么”“怎么样”或者“是什么”。前后两部分说全了,句子才算是一句完整的话。需要强调说明的是:知道什么是完整句,怎样的句子才算完整,这只是一个知识性的问题;落实在行动上,即平日在说每一句话,在写每一句话时,都要认真思考,反复斟酌,提高“完整”意识,不写残缺不全的句子,这才是最重要的。
二、把句子写具体
句子要完整,这是首要的。但在许多时候,句子只做到“完整”是不能准确表达意思的,还要做到“具体”。怎样的句子才算是具体的呢?读读下面这几组句子,体会一下:
第一组:
1、爸爸做工。
2.爸爸在工厂里做工。
分析:第二句写清了爸爸在哪儿做工。
第二组:
1、小蜜蜂飞来。
2、夏日,一只金色的小蜜蜂从远处嗡嗡地飞来。
分析:第二句写清什么时候,有多少,什么样,从哪儿,怎么样。
由上面这两组句子可以看出:在句子主要成分的前面或后面,写清什么时候(时间)、有多少(数量)、在什么地方或从哪儿(地点)、什么样(形状或颜色)、怎么样(态势)、达到什么程度(情境)等,就写清了事物外形特点、活动特点,就把自己要准确表达的意思写出来了,这就叫做把句子写具体。这样的句子就算是完整、具体的句子。
学习把句子写具体,这是一项极为重要的技能,需要同学们抓住人物或事物的特点,准确运用词语,进行持久练习。
三、把句子写通顺
句子通顺,就是句意明白,读得顺口。具体来说,句子通顺包括以下几个方面:
1.用词要准确,经得起推敲。例如:我们把门口的泥土消除掉了。句中,“泥土”不能“消除”,只能“清除”掉。
2.句中词语排列的顺序要合理。例如:正在花上,有几只漂亮的蝴蝶翩翩起舞。这句话改成“有几只漂亮的蝴蝶,正在花上翩翩起舞”,句子就通顺了。
3.词语使用搭配要得当。例如:公园里生长着各种树木和五颜六色的鲜花。句中“生长”和“鲜花”两词搭配不当,应改为“公园里生长着各种树木,盛开着五颜六色的鲜花”。
4.句中各词语的意思不能自相矛盾。例如:我断定他大概是王小刚的哥哥。句中“断定”与“大概”矛盾,应删掉“大概”。
5.关联词语的使用恰到好处。例如:只有天下雨,地才会湿。“下雨”不是“地湿”的唯一条件,因此,第一句应改为:只要天下雨,地就会湿。
6.句意明白,合乎实际,符合情理。例如:博物馆里展出了五千多年前新出土的文物。说“五千多年前新出土的文物”不合实际,应改为:博物馆里展出了新出土的五千多年前的文物。
四、把句子写连贯
连贯,即句子之间连接贯通。显然,把句子写连贯,这是指写几句话(又叫“句群”)来说的。翻开某些同学的作文本,段落中上下句不连贯的现象比比皆是,主要表现在:句子之间无顺序,承接不紧密,跨度大;上下句之间,被描述的对象(即“主语”)重复出现,不会运用“他(她)”或者“它”这些人称代词。怎样才能做到把句子写连贯呢?
1.合理安排顺序,使句子连贯。
有顺序,这是写几句意思连贯的话的最基本的要求。这就要求我们,在写几句话时,一定不能东一句、西一句,想到哪儿就写到哪儿;总要围绕既定的中心意思,按照一定的顺序,把相关的句子组织在一起,使句子前后连贯。
2.学会运用“他(她)”或“它”这些人称代词,使句子连贯。
读读下面这段话,想一想,有什么毛病,怎样说才好:
妈妈的衣袖破了。妈妈赶忙从抽屉里拿出一个小布包。妈妈先从布包里拿出一根针,一根青线,用牙咬了咬线头,把线头穿过针眼。妈妈又从布包里找出一小块布,贴在破了的地方,然后一针一线地缝起来。
读后,大家一定会发现:这几句话写的对象是妈妈,主要写的是妈妈缝补衣服时所作的准备工作,是按事情经过的先后顺序排列的。只是由于这四句话的开头重复出现“妈妈”一词,因此读起来显得很拗口。如果把后面三句开头中的“妈妈”改成“她”字,这几句话就连贯多了。这就告诉我们:在几个句子里,如果写的是同一个人物(或事物),后面再指这个人物(或事物)时,就可以用“他(她)”或“它”来代替。