世界和平的英语作文精选3篇 作文高中(汇编20篇)

our shool, wuhan heping middle school, lies in the center of wuhan city. it was just built and has the perfect size. the school yard is two hundred meters long, one hundred meters wide, and is surrounded by trees.

when you walk throught the front gate, there is a huge garden that greets you with every kind of natural things. to the left is the school library in which there are more than 100, 000 books. to the right is the eperiment building. in the very middle of the school yard stands the teaching building that stretches for one hundred and fifty meters. this teaching building has four floors with the teachers offices at either end of each floor. standing on the top of the teaching building, you can see a flower bed. behind the teaching building is a large playground on the right side. the students often do sports here after class. to the left lies the dining hall which can hold 500 people. this is our school, a beautiful one.

our school, wuhan heping middle school, is in the center of wuhan city. the school yard is two hundred meters long, one hundred meters wide, and is surrounded by trees. it is 20, 000 square meters in area.

when you walk into the school yard, you will see a wide road in front of you. on your left, you will see the school library in which there are more than 100, 000 books. on your right is the eperiment building, walk ahead,and you will see a beautiful garden in front of you. when you go through it,there stands the teaching building: it has four floors with the teachers of rices at either end of each floor. behind it, there stands the dining-room on the left side. to the right lies the playground where the students often play football. this is our school, a beautiful one.

这是一张旧照片，上面记录了1937年8月28日，日本侵略者轰炸上海火车南站真实情景。

看到这张照片时，我的心情久久不能平静下来……

那天,天灰蒙蒙的，一对夫妇抱着自己可爱的孩子在等火车。突然，“轰”的一声打破了家园的宁静，一枚枚炸弹从天而降，顿时，人们逃窜着，硝烟直插云天。妇女的尖叫声，孩子的哭声，男人的叫喊声，交杂在一起，乱成一团。火车站瞬间变成了一片废墟。

我仿佛看到了当时的画面：夫妇抱着自己的孩子飞奔，日本侵略者又投下了一枚导弹，在生命的最后一刻，母亲吻了一下孩子，就使出仅剩的力气把孩子推到安全地带，自己却被导弹炸得血肉横飞。桥塌了，瓦碎了，废墟下不知埋葬了多少生命。一个悲惨的景象出现在我眼前……

我仿佛又听到了当时的声音：那个三四岁的小男孩撕心裂肺的哭声，他用沙哑的声音大喊道:“爸爸，妈妈，你们在哪?”可是，没有人回答他。他抱着妈妈缝的布娃娃，瞪大了充满恐惧的眼睛望着四周，他不敢相信眼前的一幕，多希望父母再抱抱他……

停止战争，呼唤和平。侵略者们，放下冰冷的屠刀。有多少人渴望和平，有多少人渴望生命。一起对和平发出呼唤，让和平永驻人间!

We havebeen told when we were a little child that we help others as they are in need. Weoften do as what we were told in the childhood, but when we grow up nowadays weare not dare to help others.

Because the society becomes more and complicated. Thereare some people will make traps for the kind people.

For example, you see anold lady falling on the ground and you would like to help her. However, you maybe charged for pushing her down and ask you to give money for seeing a doctor. Yeah,this things often happen.

But helping others is the traditional for ourChinese, we should carry it out on any condition. Helping others will not onlyhelp other people but also help yourself.

You will feel happy and satisfy whenassisting others. So please give a hand to the people in need carefully.

我们在很小的时候就被告知要帮助那些需要帮助的人。

我们小的时候经常就像被告知的那样做，但当我们长大了，我们却不敢去帮助别人了。

因为社会变得更复杂了。有一些人会对善良的人设陷阱。例如，你看到一个老太太倒在地上，你想帮她。

但是，她可能会说是你把她推到的并让你赔偿医药费。是的，这种事情经常发生。但帮助他人是我们中国的传统，不管在任何情况下我们都要发扬光大。帮助别人不仅可以帮助别人也是帮助自己。在帮助他人时你会感到快乐和满足。所以请小心的帮助需要帮助的人。

[高中英语作文：帮助别人

Christmas Day is very popular around the world, when that day comes, we can

see the Christmas products sell everywhere, though Christmas Day is not

originating from China, in our country, more and more people spend that day. A

foreigner pointed out that Christmas meant to be grateful for them, while for

Chinese people, it was just a day for celebrating. To me, Christmas indeed means

a day to have fun.

When I was small, I did not have the concept of Christmas, because in my

mind, I only knew Chinese traditional festivals, I liked Spring Festival best, I

could get a lot of money from parents. When I went to high school, all of my

friends would talk about Christmas Day when the day was near, so I started to

know it. Almost every young people like Christmas, but if you ask them what the

meaning of the day, less of them can answer.

The meaning of Christmas Day is to remind people of Jesus’s birth, it is so

important for the western people, but for me, I only want to have fun, everyone

is celebrating it, so I join them, being happy, that’s enough for me.

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

如果你的国家被侵略，而又无力反抗，只能眼看着你的国家被侵略者毁灭，人民饱受磨难，你有什么感受？

我想：“侵略者你的良心是不是应该受到谴责”。你把你的人民送上战场，让他们无辜的死去，你的野心和欲望是建立在别人的鲜血和痛苦上的，战争的硝烟给我们的家庭带来的是毁灭，让这种毁灭停止吧！我们渴望和平，请不要发动战争。我要对那些帝国主义大国说：“世界上有那么多需要帮助的人，为什么不能献出你的一份爱心，将大量用在军事装备上的钱，拿出来去帮助那些困难的人们，让他们脱离痛苦和磨难呢？

可事与愿违，让我们来看看吧。

蔚蓝色的大海，本来是海鸥的乐园，可是巡弋的战舰和水雷成了不速之客；金黄色的沙漠本来是蜥蜴和甲虫的天下，可轰隆隆的坦克和大炮打破了他们的梦幻；宁静的星空，本来属于星星和月亮，可是频频发射的导弹把星星家园那份宁静揉碎了；绿茵茵的草地，本该滚动着欢乐的足球，可是如今散落着的地雷碎片阻挡着孩子们奔跑的脚步。

这究竟是为什么？

我们祈盼着让战火中的孩子们有一张课桌，平稳的课桌，不被导弹气浪掀翻；有一间教室，洁白的教室，免遭x弹的弹片击穿。和我们一样在阳光中读书，一样享受着春天般的温暖——。多好啊！是啊，给我们一张平稳的书桌，让我们一起平静地学习。因此，要向国际社会呼吁救救孩子们，要和平不要战争！为了母亲不再失去孩子，为了妻子不再失去丈夫，为了孩子不再失去父亲，全世界应该一致行动起来，维护和平，制止战争！让那已经能够听到脚步声的201x年，为战争敲响丧钟，让明天的世界真正成为充满阳光、鲜花和爱的人类家园！让和平鸽飞往世界每一个角落，让我们齐声呼喊那句话：“世界和平！”

About a month ago ,U.S. President Barack Obama traveled to New York to honor the victims of the September 11, 20xx terrorist attacks, days after U.S. forces killed al-Qaida leader Osama bin Laden in Pakistan. Mr. Obama was laid a wreath at the site of the destroyed World Trade Center buildings and met with relatives of those killed in the 20xx al-Qaida attacks.

This year is the tenth anniversary of the attacks against the United States on September eleventh, two thousand one. This is undoubtedly an important and relaxing news.

And then the leader of al-Qaida in Yemen is warning the United States of more attacks.In a statement posted on the Internet, Nasser al-Wahishi tells Americans that the “((holy war)) is brighter" following bin Ladens death and that "what is coming is greater and worse."

In my opinion, Peace and development should be the topic of todays world, we should love peace,and call for peace, fight against terrorism, to gain a better future.

There is no doubt that Osama bin Laden had to answer for the ideology he espoused and the death and destruction he reveledin. But serious questions remain in this ongoing fight. So now who, if anyone, will take control of al-Qaida?

For al-qaida , regardless of what purpose should not take innocent peoples lives as a negotiation of weights. The only hope is that Muslims who truly study, understand, and live their faith will eventually convince their brothers and sisters to give up on violence as a solution. ...I sure hope Developed countries are just a little closer to peace with the middle east.

天空很蔚蓝，树木很翠绿，鸟语很清脆……我看到了有朵艳丽的花儿叫“和平”，需要全球共同来珍惜。我们抚摩着地球亲切的脸庞，谁忍心用战火去摧毁它？谁愿意用炮弹带走我们熟悉的地球同胞？谁愿意让血来作抢夺的开场白？可是不希望发生的事情总是发生了。

美国与伊拉克的战争爆发在2003，悲剧开始在3月的阴天。伊拉克战场完全浸没在枪炮声和哭声中，罪恶的杀戮不分任何人，当然，包括了许多无辜的老百姓。战争至今仍在进行。目的已经不是那样的单纯了，谁在背后操纵着这可恶的战争？利益。

以色列和真主党的战争殃及的是更多的平民。他们生的权利被剥夺了，最后成为战争的牺牲品。自杀式袭击、绑架人质等等充斥着人们生活的周围。最可怕的是，黎以冲突是否只会是一场更惨烈的战争的序幕？

“天空依然阴霾，依然有鸽子在飞翔，谁来证明那些没有墓碑的爱情和生命；雪依然在下，那村庄依然安详，年轻的人们消逝在白桦林。”战争的罪恶无止境地摧残人的生命与心灵。我穿过层层薄雾，时间来到了那个画面，这里是罪恶的战场。我看到了，看到了。片片狼籍的城镇，满目苍痍的市郊，可爱的孩子失去他们慈祥的母亲，年轻的妻子失去她依靠的丈夫，父亲失去了他最最疼爱的孩子，树木也不得不离开那亲爱的土壤……不安和迷茫的目光再也找不回哪个温暖的归宿，只能望着蒙蒙的天空：阻挡你前进的人，就该永远沉睡吗？这一切太可怕了，战争太可怕了！

世界什么时候才能铸剑为犁呢？战争的发动者和参与者，放下武器吧，重新拾回那遗失已久的善良；摆脱罪恶吧，撇掉虚假正义背后刻着的孤独。否则你们最终只会堕落于罪的国度！当我们都在微凉的风中，拿出心中最真的爱与阳光同在，对我们身边的是非对错致以美丽的微笑和宽容的态度，纵使最尖锐的矛盾也能融化，一切会变得更美丽的。战争不要再来。我害怕，害怕还没来得及哭，嘲笑的子弹就带走身上的温度。让我们与臂上的和平鸽一齐共同守望和平，守望那最初的纯真。

今天对于中国以及世界上所有受到过法西斯侵略和伤害的国家来说，是极其特殊的一天，因为70年前的今天，我们中国作为二战东方主战场，终于在经过长达八年的艰苦卓绝抗战后，夺取了胜利，让日本帝国主义签了投降书，迎来了世界的和平。为了纪念这个伟大的日子，在北京天安门前举行了盛大的纪念活动——纪念中国人民抗日战争暨世界反法西斯战争胜利70周年大阅兵。

上午九点，首长主席与国母彭丽媛在端门会见了应邀来观礼的各国首脑及贵宾，并于待客厅稍稍休息后，带领远道而来的宾客们共同登上了天安门城楼。

天安门城楼上，首长主席发表了慷慨激昂的演讲，接着千人合唱团唱起了一首首抗战歌曲，听着这一首首抗战老歌，心头竟浮起一抹没来由的熟悉感，听着听着，嘴里便跟着哼唱起来：“风在吼，马在叫，黄河在咆哮，黄河在咆哮，河西上岗万丈高，河西河北高粱熟了……”。唱着唱着好似回到了那烽火连天的战争岁月，眼前浮现出被战火焚毁的家园，还有那被炮火夺去生命的抗日军民，我的眼眶不知不觉浸满了泪水。

上午十点，阅兵正式开始了，首长主席乘车检阅了中国人民解放军三军将士，接着是各方队接受检阅。首先通过天安门城楼前的是抗战老兵及亲属方队，我们敬爱的老兵都是90岁上下的老人，他们脸上虽然被岁月刻下了沧桑，但他们却举起颤巍巍的右手，行着庄严的军礼，满是皱纹的脸上透着坚毅和自豪。

紧接着是抗战英模方队，只见将士们迈着整齐划一，威武雄壮的步伐，喊着震天响亮的口号，雄赳赳气昂昂的通过了天安门城楼，展现了我们的军人的队伍是威武铁血之师，有着保卫祖国，维护和平的担当和能力。

接下来通过的是机械化方队，各种各样的武器装备轰鸣着依次通过天安门，观礼台上的人们发出一阵阵惊呼，个个都伸长了脖子，每一张脸上都洋溢着骄傲和自豪，这就是我们的祖国，她如今已经强大！她现在也已经拥有了世界上最先进的武器：两栖装甲车、近程和中远程的火炮、射程几千公里的洲际导弹、核导弹、先进的空中预警机、无人侦察机、空中加油机，还有不能到现场的核潜艇、航空的母舰……唉，我都记不过来了，反正太多的先进武器啦。

随着7万只和平鸽以及70万只彩色气球飞上天空，这次盛大的大阅兵也结束了，看着漫天的气球和飞舞的和平鸽，正象征着我们中国人对世界和平的期盼和不懈追求。同时我们不再是那个任人欺凌的旧中国，如今我们有能力维护我们国家的安全与和平，我们还在为了世界的和平而努力并贡献自己的力量！

It goes without saying that english plays an important role in our modern

society. english is an international language. wherever you go, you can hear

english spoken by many people.

From this point of view, it is true that english is important to our daily

life. learning english is like learning to swim or learning to play ball. our

primary trouble is that we have tackled the study of language from the wrong

end. we are like theman who thinks he can learn to swim only by reading books

about swimming. in actuality, we learn by doing. the grammatical rules are

valuable as we plunge into the language and need some assistance. in the same

way, advanced instructions about swimming are helpful as we learn something from

actual experience in the water. but reading books never makes a swimmer and

learning rules never makes a practical linguist. the regular procedure in

learning english involves listening first, to be followed by speaking. then

comes reading, and finally the writing of the language. the way you learn

english is much the same as the way you learned your own language.

First of all you must listen and then repeat and repeat until you can use

the language easily. in other words, you have to build up language habits in

english just as you build up english habits in your own language. to sum up, we

must bear in mind that nobody can learn to swim for you. nobody can learn to

play ball for you. nobody can learn english for you. its up to you. you must

learn for yourself and you will learn if you really want to and are willing to

practice.

Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.

The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.

China’s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people’s standard of living will become higher and higher.

At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.

一、勤读、多背词汇，好精句

要想写好一篇文章，没有充足的词汇量是不行的。课文中的俗语和谚语的识记是通过背诵来完成。背诵是语言学习的重要手段，也是语言学习的必经之路。

1.背词句，背诵课文中的重点句型和短语尤其是课文中的俗语、谚语和经典句子。

2.背范文，将近几年高考中的作文和课文中好的段落以及报刊上的各种各样的体裁和优秀文章让学生多背，这样学生才能在自己的脑子中形成一定的写作框架，做到心中有数。

3.多读书，用英语进行思维。为了培养学生用英语思维的定势，增加对英语国家文化、社会风俗、风土人情、思维方式的了解，扩大视野，选择课外阅读，提高学生分析、判断、猜测、推理和领悟的能力。部分学生在写作时习惯用汉语思维，然后再逐句译成英语，结果写出来的文章是汉语式的英语。要想学会用英语进行思维，就要有计划、有目的地培养学生的语感。一个重要的方法就是大量阅读，选择精彩的词句、文章和佳句，引导学生阅读，摘抄或背诵来培养语感。

二、亲自动手，自己写作

教师应注重基本功训练，严格要求学生正确，工整，熟练地书写字母，单词和句子，同时注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句，组句成段练习时，要学生写出最简单的短句，为以后英语作文打好扎实的基础。这种练习可以安排在刚开始的训练中，要求学生能够用最基本的时态去完成写作。另外结合高中英语基础知识的复习，对学生提出较高写作能力的要求。

1.范例引路

学生在进行短文写作训练时，教师应提供各种文体的范文，讲明各种文体的写作要求和注意事项，如日记，便条，书信，通知的格式等，并给予必要的提示，并掌握各种体裁文章的格式。在平时的教学中，教师应该指导学生应对高考中各种体裁文章。

2.限时训练

教师当场发题，限时交卷。这样能促使学生瞬间接受信息，快速理解信息，迅速表达信息，提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键，也是学生的的难关。必须要求学生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀：“先读提示，要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致;结构搭配，莫违背;文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视”。学生明确目的，并掌握要领后，要严格在规定时间内完成作业。

3.多想精炼

在平时的教学中，教师要求学生多看、多听、多想，用心体验和感悟身边的人和事，然后将自己的体验和感受用英语写出来。教师可要求学生每周写两篇，有话则长，无话可短。对不同水平的学生作不同的要求。鼓励表达自己的看法和体会。

此外，有时根据所学单元知识布置一篇作文，或给学生提供一些与时事或与学生学习活动和生活有关的材料。此类话题的现实性能诱发学生的写作兴趣，使其有话可写，有感而发;还能增强其信心，使其写作能力、技巧得到充分的锻炼和提高。对于有待进步的学生要及时励，激发其写作热情，增强其自信心。

4.自改互改

对照范文，学生先对已查出的表达有误的地方进行初改。范文不可能把各种表达方式都包括进去，况且学生作业中的错误也不尽相同，因此，还可安排学生互改。以同桌两人为宜，这样同时进行了改错训练。

三、培养学生良好的写作习惯

写作教学是一项“由简单到复杂，循环往复不断上升的”过程。不是一蹴而就的，需要教师在教学中由浅入深、由简入繁、由易到难、循序渐进。起始阶段，培养学生良好的写作习惯是非常重要的。要求学生做到以下几点：

1.认真审题。要求学生认真审读图表或提纲，领会意图，捕捉信息，确定文章时态及体裁。

2.写提纲。教师引导学生构思文章要点，写出每个段落主题句、关键词，然后确定细节和内容要点。

3.写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后，学生开始写作，教师指导学有意识地使用固定句型，使用关联词，把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体，形成基本连贯的初稿。

4.检查错误。检查是书面表达不可缺少的环节，学生完成初稿后，老师指导学生从以下六个方面进行修改和查错：(1)看要点是否齐全，有无遗漏;(2)体裁是否恰当，有无偏题;(3)内容是否连贯，有无缺词;(4)语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等有无错误;(5)用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误(6)最后注意句与句、段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡，经过有效的训练，学生犯的错误会逐渐减少，同时学生的书面表达能力会逐步提高。

总之，教学有法，教无定法。教师面对的教育对象是多样化的，因此在教学中一定要关注学生的个体差异，采取相应的措施，激发学生写作的兴趣。让学生参与实践，体验成功的快乐，循序引导，学生点滴积累，不断磨练，这样能达到理想的效果。

Nowadays, with the development of computer, the function of computer has developed, too. We can use computer to check the instant news, make friend and so on. The reason why so many people addict to computer is that they like to play the computer games, there are all kinds of computer games, everyone can find a game which is suitable to him. Too much involve in the computer games is wasting time, we should control our habit. First, we must set the limit time on it, wed better not to play the game over an hour. We have to tell ourselves that we must stop playing when the time is up, we have another thing to do. Second, we should go out with friends often, so we can communicate with others, it makes our mind not focus on the computer games. I am not saying we should not play computer games, but we should not addict to it.

原来，这个世界上，有那么多患有抑郁症的人，他们每天都在挣扎着与这个伪善的世界做斗争，只是，最后，多半是不快乐的离开。毕竟，一个人孤独的活着，身边没有人理解没有人关心，被全世界抛弃的感觉，就像是凌迟处死般痛苦。

其实，他们不是不喜欢说话，只是，天性如此，冷淡是他们的本质，只是，他们也希望有人可以带他们走出那个逼仄的世界，有人可以关心他们。他们不想过疏离人世的生活，可是他们没有办法活得和常人一样。他们比常人敏感，他们也比普通人活得辛苦。你的一句风凉话，可能会让他们难过很久，你的一句关切的话语，可能会让他一辈子记住你。张国荣，乔任梁，都在抑郁症的折磨下，离开了人世。他们一定是过的不快乐，人世太多欺骗太多虚伪，而他们，却是已善意的眼光看待世界。对了，还有那个，写出一首又一首苦涩情歌的段子手薛之谦，他的内心也很压抑很孤独，不然，他写不出这些，否则，他又怎能如此撕心裂肺的演唱。只是，薛之谦，希望，你可以坚强，不要被网上的流言蜚语所击倒。我们一直都在。还有那个，写出“其实，我是如此爱你，虽然它寂静无声”的秦一，希望你在另一个世界可以快乐安宁。还有那个，写出“躲了一辈子的雨，雨会不会很伤心”的走饭，其实，你的离去，很多人在意哦。他们不是普通人，因为他们的心思更加细腻，感触也较常人灵敏。

很多普通人，在才华和孤独方面，都会选择才华，然而，他们没得选。他们的孤独，让他们拥有常人所没有的才华。他们也希望过普通人的生活，他们也希望被更多人看见。可是，没有人在意他们的离去，就像没有人在意他们的到来一样。

寂静的黑夜中，天空中划过几颗流星，不必躲藏，那不是照明弹，曳光弹，那是和平的使者发来的讯息。

——题记

“用兵之道，攻心为下，攻心为上，攻城为下;心战为上，兵站为下。”这是古人留给我们的警句。就在刚刚过去的20世纪，全世界发生的大小战争总共不下400次!在两次世界大战中，人类更是付出了惨重的代价。人们无时不在呐喊着：“世界，何时才能铸剑为犁，和平永驻?”

和平是宁静，是财富，是幸福。在和平的世界里，有着高度发达的物质和文明，无论哪个民族，何种肤色，人们都相亲相爱。国家与国家，城市与城市，人与人互相携手，建起和平的桥梁。

在和平的世界里，没有硝烟，没有战火，在这和平的年代里，我沉醉于其中，乐在其中。和平，使花儿更加芬芳，和平，使天空更加湛蓝，和平，使鸟儿更加欢畅，和平，就在你我他之间。

不觉间，太阳已从西方落下，而我却还沉醉于其中……

Last year, I went to Guilin for travel. On the train, I felt so bored. A

girl who sat next to me was reading a book, which caught my attention. I asked

her about the book, I found that I had read it before and then we discussed

about the novel. We talked happily, when the train arrived, we got off together.

When we got aparted, we promised to keep in touch. We communicated by the

computer. Now a year has passed, we become good friends and I miss her all the

time. She is a genuine friend. I plan to go to Guilin again and then we will

meet.

导语：寒假来了，身为高中生，当然不能闲着，要想学好英语，先从写作开始。下面为大家带来一篇寒假英语作文。

Chinese New Years day, we at home the next day to discuss where to go. Because these days the weather is clear, sunny, cloudless, and we unanimously decided to go to picnic in the mountains. So, we have informed Yidie Aunt them, ready to picnic the next day when the dumpling skin, meat, condiments and bowls, chopsticks, pots and so on. The next day, we are mighty walked to the hill.

After a lengthy one hour, we finally boarded the summit. Then, we started the division of labor: Yidie had to base lesions, aunts dumplings, some of our kids went to the collection of firewood. A moment later, a good stove base, and great people to immediately lift the pan up, doped Sheung Shui. This is, Chai has Picking is running out, we started to light a fire. Fire is getting bigger wang, the boil was the dark. 3 Yidie saw, and said humorously: "with a small double (my nickname) is the same as black." Listening to other people, have a laugh. Moment, dumplings have been wrapped, and five aunt carrying his dumplings to the pot was about to fall, the three Yidie looking dumplings, and shook his head and said: "The package was too fat, and nothing like the small pairs only skinny monkey." Once again, other people laugh, I laugh again and good gas, not help then added: "with the same glowing three-Yi Die." Other people laugh even more fiercely.

I do not know how long before, dumplings cooked in. We are holding a bowl of Wai in the pot next to desperately grab dumplings. I finally grabbed one, is to eat, they were snatched his brother.

After eating dumplings, we discovered that the sky late and had to leave here, reluctantly go to the house to the direction。

我们除了要不断的充实自己的知识外，还需要有一个繁荣而和平安定的世界。

我们因该知道，人类生存在这个世界，要互相帮助，互相关心，互敬互爱的，科学应该用来改善人类生活的，人类发明原子弹使用与战争，那真是太可惜了。相信谁也不希望见到漫天烟火，谁也不希望离妻子散，美好的家园变成残破瓦砾，谁也不希望那天真活泼的孩子，变成无父无母的孤儿，那个本该和平安定的环境，转眼间变成废墟，因此，我们应该齐心协力来维护世界和平，共同创造一个和平安定的世界，人与人之间，互相谅解，减少纠纷。

我们这一刻年轻、纯真的时代，是国家的未来，是世界的新一代，更应该挺起胸膛，用我们的决心和毅力去创造未来，使人人都能过上丰衣足食，自由安定而幸福的生活。

5月31日的无烟日是众人皆知的，它诞生在“儿童节”的前一天。因为，现在已经有太多青少年因家长的忽视造成不良恶习(吸烟)。

In May 31st No Tobacco Day is known, the day before it was born in the "childrens day". Because, now there are too many young people because of bad habits (smoking) neglect of parents.

我想，世界卫生组织想让”儿童节“的前一天当作世界无烟日是因为要全力阻止青少年甚至未成年人继续吸烟吧，同时，我也对他们的举动感到赞同。据统计因吸烟致死的人就有3.5亿!其中15岁以下儿童有 1.8亿!一个个幼小的生命被吸烟恶习夺去，难道那些被吸烟致死的人还不感到忏悔吗?被动吸烟人群中，82%在家庭中、67%在公共场所、35%在工作场所接触二手烟。 多么有意义的数字!那些还在继续吸烟的人们难道不应该为死去的人做一个挽回吗?我国每年死于被动吸烟的人数超过10万!

I think, the World Health Organization want "childrens Day" on the day before as World No Tobacco Day is due to the effort to prevent teenagers even minor continue to smoke it, at the same time, I also feel sympathy for their actions. According to statistics from smoking deaths is 350000000! 15 children under the age of 180000000! The life of a young is the bad habit of smoking kills, is that smoking kills people did not repent? Passive smoking group, 82% in the family, 67% in public places, 35% in the workplace exposure to second-hand smoke. How to make sense of the numbers! Those who continued smoking people shouldnt do a restore is dead? The number of deaths due to passive smoking in China every year more than 100000!

这一切都因吸烟而起，才使我们失去亲人!失去伙伴!失去父母!失去朋友!

Its all because of smoking, that we have lost loved ones! The loss of a friend! Lost their parents! To lose a friend!

Buying Vegetables

This morning I got up early and went to the market to buy some vegetables instead my mother for the first time.

The market was very crowded and busy with nearly all kinds of goods on display. Some sellers were shouting at the top of their voice to attract the attention of the people. Housewives were picking out vegetables and bargaining with the sellers. A man was selling fresh fish, which were swimming in a big basin, and a lot of buyers crowded around it and chose what they wanted. One fruit seller, standing behind piles of fresh fruit, greeted me Warmly, trying to persuade me to buy some. He felt a little disappointed when I shook my head.

What a busy and noisy market! (128 words)

我们热爱和平,不喜欢战争.但在这个世界上,经常有战争的爆发.就在过去的20世纪世界发生了大大小小的战争400多次.而在两次大世界大战中人类付出了惨重的代价.

中国从1840年英国殖民者用片和大炮轰开了中国的大门,强盗般的闯进中国这片富饶而神圣的土地,烧杀抢掠无恶不作.当时昏晕无能的清政府卑躬屈膝,通过三个不平等的条约,割让了香港,中国的领土和主权受到践踏.香港陷入英国殖民统制中.从这时起中国便成了半殖民半封建的社会,从此以后中国又遭受"9.18"事件七七卢沟桥事件和南京大屠杀等一系列的战争.305死难同胞的呼告声.时时为我们敲响警钟.

21世纪的今天,我们更加热爱和平.

往事不堪回首,但我们必须回顾历史,记住历史,想想香港为什么会有如此命运

.历史会告诉我们落后就要挨打!清政府闭关锁国,导致中国经济萧条,文化落后.当英国人拿着洋枪大炮进入时,清政府还怎能经的住这样的轰打!

因为珍爱和平,我们回首战争.因为我们不喜欢战争,所以我们热爱和平,世界

记得我们在讲课的时候，老师放映了一些战争残忍有可怕的图片。其中有一张让人十分恐惧的图片：只见那人脸上全是血，是那么的血腥，真是惨不忍睹。我沉默了，还有多少无辜的人在可怕的战争中失去了宝贵的生命。自从看到那张照片，我更多的还是愤怒，愤怒那可怕的战争，愤恨挑起战争的人，难道他们没有亲人吗?如果那些死去的人就是他们自己的亲人，他们会又有何感想?这一切的一切，都是战争造成的。

战争，可怕、残酷的战争啊!战争的硝烟吞食这我们的幸福，而和平，是世界上最美好的花朵。和平是什么?和平是友谊的“桥梁”，架起国与国之间的友爱之桥;和平是世界的“瑰宝”，在每个人心中留下了美好。

在和平的世界里，花朵争芳斗艳，草坪碧草如茵，再没人去践踏;树木参天挺拔，再没人去砍伐;小溪清澈见底，永远不会变污浊。

啊!和平的天空和平鸽自由飞翔。它无时不提醒人们：“热爱生活，珍惜和平!”同学们，让我们一起呼吁和平，现在的和平，永久的和平。愿和平二字永远印在每个人的心中，让和平鸽永远伴我们飞翔!

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