世界和平的英语作文精选3篇 作文高中（热门20篇）

The Origin of Halloween

While there are many versions of the origins and old customs of Halloween, some remain consistent by all accounts. Different cultures view Holloween somewhat differently but traditional Halloween practices remain the same.

Halloween culture can be traced back to the Druids, a Celtic culture in Ireland, Britain and Northern Europe. Roots lay in the feast of Samhain, which was annually on October 31st to honor the dead.

Samhain signifies "summers end" or November. Samhain was a harvest festival with huge sacred bonfires, marking the end of the Celtic year and beginning of a new one. Many of the practices involved in this celebration were fed on superstition.

The Celts believed the souls of the dead roamed the streets and villages at night. Since not all spirits were thought to be friendly, gifts and treats were left out to pacify the evil and ensure next years crops would be plentiful. This custom evolved into trick-or-treating.

万圣节的起源

尽管关于万圣节的起源和旧俗有很多不同的看法，但有一些是被所有人接受的。不同文化看待万圣节总是有点不同，但是传统的万圣节做的事情都是一样的。

万圣节文化可以追溯到德鲁伊教，这是一种爱尔兰、北欧和英国的凯尔特文化，根植于Samhain节的庆祝活动，Samhain节于每年的10月31日纪念逝者。

Samhain节说明夏天结束或者十一月，是一个丰收的节日。在Samhain节会燃起神圣巨大的篝火，标志着凯尔特一年的结束和新一年的开始。一些做法因为迷信被加入庆祝活动中。

凯尔特人相信死者的灵魂会在夜里出没在街道和村庄。因为他们认为不是所有的灵魂都是友善的，所以就把礼物和好吃的留在外面安慰恶灵来确保来年的庄稼可以丰收。这种习俗演变成了trick-or-treating。

[高中万圣节英语作文

为什么天下会有如此多种多样的事故呢？为什么会有那么多小女孩受到伤害呢？而又为什么会出现人造食品夺去人们的生命呢？这种种问题给人类的亲属们带去了极大的悲哀。

我希望，世界可以和平。在这个世界上，有穷人，有富人，有些富人会同情穷人，有些却对穷人冷冷漠漠。正因为这些不公平，造就了人类心灵的疾病。一旦有了这种疾病，对孩子善良的人也已经对孩子冷漠。本来懂得的尊重也不再懂了。而交通事故，也只是意外的事故。

我渴望天下和平，我真心希望，让这个世界和平吧！

翻开这张发黄的纸，只能依稀看清几个苍劲有力的字：西线无战事。我仿佛在一瞬间穿越了时空，来到了战争年代，那个兵荒马乱的年代。

主人公博伊默尔是一个高中生，怀着一颗爱国心的他和朋友们放弃了学业，奔赴战场。在西线这片罪恶的土地上，“我”再也无法找到校长所说的光荣和自豪。相反，“我”反而天天被恐惧和死亡压迫着，不得翻身。

当阵地失守的噩耗传来，敌方的炮火更是肆无忌带地狂轰滥炸，丝毫不停歇。“我”分明看见了死神在战场上加快了穿梭的脚步。弥漫着硝烟的战场上随处可见被炸得面目全非的士兵，悲凉凄惨的喊叫声不绝于耳。整个战场被黑色的烟云笼罩，只有远处的村庄传来几声德国兵狂妄的笑声。

1918年10月，“我”在一阵炮火过后闭上了眼睛，永远地闭上了眼睛。一片死寂的战场上只留下一份战报，上面写这几个赫然大字：西部无战事。

是呀，西部无战事，这是所有在前线浴血奋战的士兵共同的愿望，也是全世界人共同的愿望。

和平，这个词对于我们并不陌生。但是，你们知道么，为了捍卫这朵弱不禁风的“和平之花”有多少中国人倒在了战场上，为了使战争不再继续，有多少中国人付出了自己昂贵的生命。中华儿女经历了一百多年的噩耗，才养育了这朵“和平之花”，才换来了今天我们幸福美满的生活。

一百多年前的第一次世界大战，演绎了一场血与刀光的悲剧，1000多万条鲜活的生命就这样无声无息地消失在炮火的吼叫下。1000万呀，多么惊人的数字，这个在我们现在想都不敢想的数字在一百多年前的战争中只用几枚炸弹就可以杀个精光。

回想俄罗斯保卫战，多少战士丧生在战场上，又有多少青年在一声声“魔鬼的吼叫中倒下。他们原本属于他们的幸福美满的生活被打破，被刺刀与罪恶的子弹打破。多少人民妻离子散，家破人亡。硝烟笼罩的大地上，随处可见居无定所的人民。

南京大屠杀就是一个很好的例子。

1937年12月13日这个中华民族的恶梦。日军大举进犯当时的首都南京城，杀伤抢掠，无恶不作。这群丧尽天良的匪徒把杀人当作游戏，把放火当作一种娱乐。把南京这片原本欢声笑语的城市变为了一座切切实实的“空城”。魔鬼般怒吼着的大炮吞噬这34万条生命。机枪的怒吼已经化为了一道永久无法弥补的伤痕，刻在了每个人的心中。

虽然现在我们中国已没有了战争，但是在别的国度，战争还在继续。伊拉克每天就有上万条生命被葬送，无辜的老百姓整天过着提心吊胆的生活。而美国只要一颗炸弹，就能让伊拉克炭涂生灵。但美国只发射了一颗导弹么?没有。他们全然不顾伊拉克的人民的苦楚，凶狠地打破了他们对未来的憧憬，对美好生活的憧憬。

战争是可怕的，它在我们的心理和生理上打下永远也无法弥补的创伤。所以，我们应该阻止战争，呵护“和平之花”。

要知道，世界需要和平!!

Taiwanlies off the east coast of Fujian Province. It’s an island surrounded by the Pacific Ocean to the east, and the East China Sea to the north.

Taiwan is the largest island in our country. The island, which is about 3,6000 square kilometers, has a population of over two hundred million. There are lots of resources in Taiwan. Its products like banana, rice and tea are well-known all over the world. It has a good environment and mild climate. Thousands of people like to come here for traveling.

Taiwan is part of China. Most of people settling there come from Fujian and Guangdong. We Chinese all hope that Taiwan can return to the embrace of the motherland at an early date.

我们生活在世上，除了要充实自己的知识、孝敬父母、缔造美满幸福的家庭之外，还希望有一个繁荣的社会及和平安的世界！

现在，我们置身站在这个科技发达的文明世界里，社会进步一日千里。更有先进的国家发明了穿梭机，能够飞达太空，探测那神秘的月球，在月球慢步，甚至留下一些标记。想起远古时代我们祖仙钻木取火的情况，跟现代文明做一比较，相差何止十万三千里呢。

所以，我们应该知道，人类生存在这个世界上，是需要互相关怀勉励的，科学是用来改善人类生活的；如果人类发明太空穿梭机、原子弹来当战斗武器，残害人类那真是太可惜了。为了大家的和平共处能过安定的日子，我希望大家同心协力维护世界的和平，人与人之间也要互相谅解，减少纷争。

我们这年轻的一代，是未来社会的主人翁，我们应用自己的决心和毅力去创造将来。使我们的地球成为一个真正和平的世界。

Holiday back, clean up a lot of stuff, and then, feeling, very comfortable very comfortable

First of all, moved toward the shoe ark of the head of a bed for a couple of years (my mother said to do bookcase, open on see, incredibly still really put a lot of my book is on the inside). Then, on the window is to the bed foot, however, is a cycas, very lush very lush, every time I open the window, sees the thorns are uncomfortable uncomfortable, so I put it away again.

Then, put on and inclined toward my room two sundry room (eighty percent eighty percent can be called junk) anything that moved away. Then, bathroom stone to the room, flower POTS, a bird than the bad bad, a lot of basin of aloe vera (original aloe is quite thorny) also moved away.

On the balcony, having a heap of mud and cling to my room to the head of a bed (think of that song, unrequited loves the mud, you might as well listen to again, that song was once the golden melody, xu also incredibly took the best male singer), the mud it was covered with a layer of steel net, piled on the following objects: a very bad bad mouse cage, 10 lousy flowerpot, within a few rotten stone, there are other I have forgotten. Clean up the mud, unexpectedly found it still has a lot of broken tiles, more surprisingly, inside still have a lot of iron, very young, but rough tough than wire, but the strange thing is, its doors on my bed, its so strange (cant help but think of oneself since moved to the Jin Juhua community so much has happened).

Later, I found, to my room still has a long very lush yellow skin fruit (colloquialism commonly known as chicken excrement), heard this name, I want to cut it, but mother has been planted for years, is too big, in fact I was also dont understand, why do miniascape of yellow skin. However, mother also planted sweet potatoes cane over the past two years, a lot of basin are put in window edge, and fe (vernacular called nine dishes), as for the carambola, I find it hard to entrance.

Moved a lot of a lot of things these days, though hard, your body is not good (since moved to this community, to the present as in the whole body is ill, strabismus, obesity, poor spirit, should be very poor, kidney failure, hernia, also recently appeared signs of high blood pressure, heart, breathing rapidly, and disfigured before the hearing loss, rhinitis, afraid of see the sunshine, communication difficulties, gangsters, hubei hubei, do things round, personal ability serious decline, was suddenly unprovoked pointing to DuMa (a junior high school of Yang classmate) can get no response, etc.), but after moving, comfortable a lot of really, really, really very comfortable, twisting his years of disfigured (mom difficult for his nose, but mom said, this is your own thing, want to rely on yourself to break through this obsession, who also cant help you) is loose.

First wrote here today to continue next time, bye.

放假回来，清理了不少杂物，然后，感觉，好舒服好舒服

首先，搬走了对着床头好几年的鞋柜(妈妈说要用来做我的书柜，打开一看，居然还真的装了很多我的书在里面)。接着，对着窗口不过是对着床脚的，是一棵铁树，很茂盛很茂盛，我每次打开窗口，见到它的刺就很不舒服很不舒服，于是，我又把它移开了。

然后，把对着和斜对着我房间的两个杂物房里面的东西(八成可以叫做垃圾)八成搬开了。接着，对着房间卫生间的石头，花盆，一张远比上述烂的烂台，很多盆芦荟(原来芦荟还挺多刺的)也搬开了。

在阳台上，有着一堆烂泥紧贴着我房间也正好对着床头(想起许志安的那首歌--烂泥，大家不妨再听一下，那首歌曾经是当年的金曲，许还居然拿了最佳男歌手)，烂泥上面还居然铺着一层铁网，上面堆着如下物体：一个很烂很烂的老鼠笼，10个以内的烂花盆，几块烂石，还有其他我都忘记了。清理烂泥时，居然发现里面还有很多碎瓦，更奇怪的是，里面还有好多条铁条，很幼，但比铁丝要粗韧，而奇怪的是，它门都对着我的床头，真奇怪啊(不禁想到自己自从搬到这个金菊花小区之后发生了这么多事)。

之后，我发现，对着我房间的还有一棵长的很茂盛的黄皮(白话俗称鸡屎果)，听到这个名字，我就想把它砍掉，但妈妈已经种了很多年了，太大了，其实我当时也不明白，为什么盆景要种黄皮。不过，妈妈这两年还种了番薯藤，好多盆都放在窗口边，还有菲菜(白话称为九菜)，至于杨桃，我觉得很难入口。

这些天搬了很多很多东西，虽然辛苦，自己身体也不好(自从搬到这个小区后，到现在好像周身都是病，斜视，肥胖，精神不佳，应该是很不佳，肾亏，疝气，最近还出现了高血压迹象，心跳很快，呼吸急速，还有以前破相所带来的的听力下降，鼻炎，怕见阳光，交际困难，混混鄂鄂，做事轮尽，个人能力严重下降，被人突然无端指着来毒骂(一个初中的杨姓同学)都居然可以无反应等等了)，但搬走后，真的舒服很多，真的，真的很舒服，缠绕自己多年的破相(被妈妈捏难了鼻子，但妈妈却说，这是你自己的事情，要靠你自己去冲破这个困扰，谁也帮不了你)困扰也松了。

今天先写到这里，下次继续，再见。

人生便真的只如那一趟单程列车，你无法控制它的前进，而在这班列车上，也只有你自己，你不知道它开往何处。因为，这是你的人生。因为你的人生是孤独的。

有位作家说过：“坐在时代的列车上，每个人都是孤独的。”第一次看见这句话，它便深深地触动了我的内心。很久以前便真真切切地知道没有什么会永垂不朽，也没有什么人会陪你走到最后。

每当繁星高挂，月亮爬上柳梢，我就开始回忆往事，这时才发现，我可以忘却别人的名字，别人的笑容欢颜，但那些伤害过我的东西，却忘不掉，挥之不去。那些在记忆里的一闪而过的永恒的思念，依旧会像长春藤一样缠绕着我，任凭人怎样去努力怎么去拼命紧锁那片泪水打湿的回忆，它依旧会在某个角落悄悄地叩响我的心门，于是我领略到了什么叫做孤独。

在夜晚中只有影子陪伴着我，陪伴了我多年，我也孤独了多年，也领悟了朋友的内涵，朋友原来是两颗飘忽不定的心在长长旅途中必然的邂逅;友情，会在瞬间里发出紫色的浪漫，粉色的柔情，红色的热情，随着时针的不断滑过数字，友情，不应是茶水，越冲越淡，而应该像隔年的陈醋，愈久愈香。

当潮湿的空气，湿润了我的心田，时间的季风，吹皱了对朋友的思念：在细雨蒙蒙中，孤独寂寞的空气又弥漫在回忆的空间，我愿把笑容伴泪水留下，回忆中朋友的脸模糊了又变得清楚，原来友情还没从我视线中消失，于是孤独使我明白：人生总有离别，朋友也难免产生矛盾，“忘却”不属于我的不快回忆，美好就会注满心田，愿你我他现在都将心中的孤独放置最僻远的心园一隅。

其实，孤独很美好。

It goes without saying that english plays an important role in our modern

society. english is an international language. wherever you go, you can hear

english spoken by many people.

From this point of view, it is true that english is important to our daily

life. learning english is like learning to swim or learning to play ball. our

primary trouble is that we have tackled the study of language from the wrong

end. we are like theman who thinks he can learn to swim only by reading books

about swimming. in actuality, we learn by doing. the grammatical rules are

valuable as we plunge into the language and need some assistance. in the same

way, advanced instructions about swimming are helpful as we learn something from

actual experience in the water. but reading books never makes a swimmer and

learning rules never makes a practical linguist. the regular procedure in

learning english involves listening first, to be followed by speaking. then

comes reading, and finally the writing of the language. the way you learn

english is much the same as the way you learned your own language.

First of all you must listen and then repeat and repeat until you can use

the language easily. in other words, you have to build up language habits in

english just as you build up english habits in your own language. to sum up, we

must bear in mind that nobody can learn to swim for you. nobody can learn to

play ball for you. nobody can learn english for you. its up to you. you must

learn for yourself and you will learn if you really want to and are willing to

practice.

Recently, a Chinese student who studied abroad delivered a speech at the

graduate ceremony. Her speech soon became the hot issue, because she criticized

Chinese air pollution, which was a great threat to her health. Though her speech

had exaggerated the problem, it is true that China has faced many pollution

problems. The haze in Beijing is famous around the world, which is the

punishment for human to ruin the environment. It needs time to fix the problem,

but there is no need to deny our country. Even for the developed countries, they

have once faced such problem before. We can do something in the daily life to

protect it, such as do not throw away the rubbish.

There is no doubt that learning English is vital for us. On the one hand,

English has become an international language that people can communicate with

each other in many countries. On the other hand, if we learn English well, we

could get more chance of success.

However, it is well-known that there are many methods for us to learn

English well. There are some tips. First, we can study in a group to improve

learning efficiency. Second, we could listen to English songs and watch English

movies; this way is very suitable for student to improve their listening and

speaking abilities. Third, I have believed that a great deal of practice can

strengthen language knowledge.

In a word, it is natural for us to learn English well by making efforts. If

we didnt work hard, we would never do well in learning English.

Recently, the movies about the old people happen to have the magic and then

come back to their 20 years old time are very popular. The old people do all

kinds of crazy things that they never have the chance to do. These movies tell

people that given another chance, they will do whatever they want to do. I

always hear my parents said when they retired, they could carry out all kinds of

their plans and enjoyed the life. In my opinion, when we are young , we shuold

enjoy our moment and chase our dream. It is a little to carry out the plans when

we are old. Youth is the advantages.

我向往世界和平的那一天，我相信那一天的到来将会给人们带来更多的希望，更多美好的生活。我们都不喜欢战争，战争的硝烟给人们带来了多大的伤害啊，让战争远离，让和平到来吧!

但是小小的地球上，战争从来就没有停止过。是谁把战胜强加于爱好和平的人民?是谁破化了国际秩序?是一小撮霸权主义者。中东以巴的长期冲突，使各自的人民终日处于恐怖甚至丧生之中，给各自的国家带来深重的灾难。而给以色列撑腰的罪魁祸首则是当今最大的霸权主义者。

91年美英联军没有得到联合国的授权，公然对伊拉克进行空中打击，由于这次狂轰滥炸，使伊拉克损失惨重，光被炸毁的油井就有几百口，油井燃烧几个月，火光冲天，浓烟滚滚，遮天蔽日。油井燃烧，除了巨大的经济损失外，造成的空气污染几乎到了令人窒息的地步。

99年以美国为首的北约，为了东扩，对南斯拉夫进行了几十天的狂轰滥炸，还蓄意炸毁我驻南使馆，伤亡我使馆人员。是可忍，孰不可忍!阿富汗长期处于混乱状态，都是霸权主义者留下的祸根。当年美国插手阿富汗事务，制造混乱，并帮助塔利班建立了政权。

02年美国以摧毁本·拉登基地恐怖组织为由悍然出兵阿富汗，推翻了塔利班政权，撂下这个烂摊子，使得本来就多灾多难的阿富汗，几乎成了赤贫，就连人们喝水都非常困难。据报载只有%13的人喝到洁净的水。

03年美英联军借口伊拉克有大规模杀伤性武器(战后并未找到)，绕过联合国，不顾全世界绝大多数国家和人民的反对，公然攻打伊拉克，使用重磅制导炸弹或极束炸弹，对伊拉克进行狂轰滥炸，几十天来，伊拉克上空爆炸声大于滚雷，不绝于耳，硝烟弥漫，血肉横飞，设施被毁，民房夷平，土地烧焦，树木焚毁，文物被劫，生态环境遭到空前破坏。接着数十万美英军士进占伊拉克全境，致使人民流离失所，无法生存。

再看台湾至今未能回归祖国，是台湾当局和岛内外有人执意搞“台独”，而“台独”分子的后台便是美国一小撮霸权主义者、强权政治者。他们借口有所谓《与台湾关系法》为由，不断向台湾出售先进武器，还经常支持台湾参加国际组织。更有甚者，他们竟然提出要有美国来“界定”台湾现状。这些言行严重地干扰了中国和平统一台湾的进程，严重违反了美国一再承诺的一个中国的原则和三个中美联合公报，粗暴地干涉了中国的内政。

够了，够了，美国霸权主义者对世界爱好和平的人民，对中国人民犯下的种种滔天罪行，罄竹难书。

世界人民渴望和平，我呼唤和平。我希望有一天安全稳定不再只是奢望，和平发展不仅仅是一种追求。在这小小的地球上，在人类短暂的历程里，有什么比安全和平更重要呢?大家和平共处，共同进步不是挺好的吗?为什么要穷兵黩武，破坏别国，毁人家园，屠戮无辜呢?要是有一天，橄榄枝绿遍，战争成为教科书的历史，武器只是展览馆的展览品，那该多好啊!

祖国的统一，世界的和平都是一项艰巨的任务，我向往世界和平，我希望世界和平可以早日到来，让和平鸽把橄榄枝插遍世界的每个角落。

The New Year, new weather. Out of their homes, families are decorated; Street, beaming everywhere, laughter. The breath of spring flowers reflected the joy of thepeople in the face.

New Years eve firecrackers rang a hanging outside and another hung, thunderbolt barak ring; Inside the home, everyone was laughing, lively!

In these days, in the morning, people usually watch TV, play computer, only a few people in the homework. In the afternoon, a lot of people in Chen yi square to play, I also went to, Im going to fly a kite. First of all, I put the kite on the ground, thewind blows I started to run... But, I tried many times without success. Chen yi squareand merry-go-round, small train, plane, pirate ship, and a rolling chair, my brother and I played a lot of, can be fun. In the evening, everyone out fireworks, my sister and I are no exception. Lets play with the color fireworks, its appearance is a red and green cross, when lit, start is red, slowly becomes green, can be fun! We also play a lot of fireworks, among them, there is a call "auspicious colorful rain" fireworks, lit up, there will be many "rain" fly to heaven. On one occasion, I put thetwo "auspicious colorful rain" light stick together, fly higher!

Looking at the sky of fireworks, listening to the scratching of firecrackers everywhere, the Spring Festival, is really busy!

With the development of technology, today, our life is facilitated with all kinds information sources. We can read books on the Internet, which is much convenient than buying the books in the stores. I like to read E-books, because there are many advantages. First, I can save a lot of money. Downloading the E-books is for free, I can find all kinds of free sources. It is good for students because they can save the money. Second, I can save a lot of time. Some books are not easy to be found in the bookstore, sometimes I need to go to several shops. But if I search the Internet, then the information is in front of me. How fast it is.

我们除了要不断的充实自己的知识外，还需要有一个繁荣而和平安定的世界。

我们因该知道，人类生存在这个世界，要互相帮助，互相关心，互敬互爱的，科学应该用来改善人类生活的，人类发明原子弹使用与战争，那真是太可惜了。相信谁也不希望见到漫天烟火，谁也不希望离妻子散，美好的家园变成残破瓦砾，谁也不希望那天真活泼的孩子，变成无父无母的孤儿，那个本该和平安定的环境，转眼间变成废墟，因此，我们应该齐心协力来维护世界和平，共同创造一个和平安定的世界，人与人之间，互相谅解，减少纠纷。

我们这一刻年轻、纯真的时代，是国家的未来，是世界的新一代，更应该挺起胸膛，用我们的决心和毅力去创造未来，使人人都能过上丰衣足食，自由安定而幸福的生活。

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

这世界需要你，需要你去证明，需要你去发现，需要你将这个世界领向新的辉煌。

90后是众说纷纭的一代。有人摇头叹息，中华会因此没落，有人感叹有永远说不完的失落。他们说90后在蜜罐里泡的涨开，因此眼睛深深地陷进了肉里，只能看见自己，看不见别人，看不见整个中国。

然而你是新叶。旧叶早己匍匐在树根旁，为你提供养份，你才刚刚绽开你的绿意，这些评论，实在是为时过早。

在这片绿意里，吴子尤大喊：谁的青春有我狂！这是我们90后要扬帆起航的象征，也是你积极进取不尽的动力，你会时刻想起，你需要这个世界，这个世界也需要你。

伽利略17岁时发现钟摆原理。伽罗华17岁创立群伦，牛顿20岁创立微积分，爱迪生21岁取得第一次专利。他们的岁数与我们相差无几，我们的青春也应相差无几。

有人说我们长不大，始终是个小孩。有人说我们太脆弱，经不起一点风吹雪打，雨淋日晒。有人说我们太娇气，经常上演一哭二闹三上吊的姿态。但是请看看汶川地震的现场，看看北京奥运会的现场，看看世博会的现场。闪动着的是18岁的身影，也许我们只能帮助极小的一部分，那是因为我们还太年轻。我们有资本去扬帆，而你就应该去那船头掌舵，掌握自己，也掌握中国的方向。

花开花落一季又复一季，潮落潮涨一年又复一年。

转眼即将进入大学，那又是你新的一个起点。青春，上面谱写的乐章是璀璨的，你需要在下面填上歌词。

我们父亲已经累了，我们的前辈已经为我们做了太多太多，他们已经累了，也需要休息，他们把这个世界交给你，交到你的手中。你紧紧地握住他，像擎着火炬一样，将它举高，让它烧的更旺。

小到大街小巷里的一举一动，小到学校食堂里的一行一言，小到考场上的一思一念，小到路过网吧时的踌躇，小到电脑上的游戏画面。小小的事，正等待着你去做，只有做好了这些，更大的事在等着你。那是国家兴亡，匹夫有责。

树的生长不能没有地，云的浮动不能没有天，鱼的生活不能没有海。

因为你生活着，所以你爱这个世界。因为你爱这个世界，所以这个世界需要你。你继续小白菜的身影，学吴子尤向天空呐喊：谁的青春有我狂！

你登上船头，去驰向世界需要你的地方。

等到你也累了，等到把风景都看透，那就坐在岸边看细水长流。

Today is the 21stcentury, as the highly developed of technology, we

facilitate our life with all kinds of newly invented products, such as computer,

digital camera and so on. The technology products indeed brings us convenience,

the old way of doing things has been challenging. Before, people like to write

letters to say hi to others or send letters to give people information, while

today, people can use smart phone or computer to call others quickly, that saves

a lot of time. Does the way of writing letters will be kicked out and disappear?

Well, on my opinion, though people like to use the new technology, letter still

has its charm. Writing letters means someone is in sincere attitude, the one who

receives the letter will be touched deeply. Sometimes message is hard to use

phone to explain, then letters will be used. In a word, writing letter will be

not out of day.

I still remember the first time I went to the zoo.

When I was only five years old, my mother took me there.We took the camera and went to the station together. There were so many monkeys, tigers, lions, wolves and other animals in the zoo. We took many photos in the zoo with the animals. I was pleased to see so many real animals at the same time. They seemed so lovely and active.

I spent a nice day. But on my way home, I began to feel sorry for them. They were taken away from their parents and friends and also far away from the nature. They must have felt lonely, I thought. Every day, the only thing they could do was to sit there and wait for food.

我仍然记得第一次去动物园的那一天。

5岁那年，妈妈带我去动物园。我们带了相机一起过去。那里有猴子、老虎、狮子和狼等等，我们跟它们照了很多相。我很高兴能同时看见那么多活灵活现的动物，他们看上去又活泼又可爱。

我度过了快乐的一天。可是在我回家的路上，我开始替它们难过起来。人们把它们从父母和朋友身边捉走，它们一定感觉很孤单，我想。它们每天惟一可做的事就是等着人们来喂食。

街道旁的一辆辆单车，书店里的一本本好书……共享的世界正在与我们接轨。人们的生活理念也悄然变化着。

越来越多新奇的科技跳入人们的眼球。出门时，只需要拿一款手机，就可以“扫遍天下车”殊不知此为好还是为坏。

刚扫出一辆车，骑着它听见拂过耳边的声音，心情不由得一阵愉悦。哼着小曲，便可以“骑遍天下”。到最后，只需付钱即可。这可真让人心里爽快极了。

在大街两旁的人行道上，随处可见的单车。一辆辆也堆放在那里。在马路上，抬眼即可看见一辆辆单车在眼前驶过。车驶过时扬起的风，让人感到一阵凉爽。

和朋友相约一起游玩，和同学相约一起出行，和父母一起游览，只需要手机扫一下二维码，车就可以骑走了。和朋友骑到公园，游行一周，似乎进入了美不胜收的世外桃源。看艳丽多姿的花海，闻着芬芳的花香，听着犹如银玲般优扬的声音。而自己的好友坐在车上，骑行间畅游这大千世界，感受风拂过耳边的舒心。和好友笑着嬉戏，打闹。累了就躺在花海里，看蓝天上一朵朵的白云，闭上眼，仿佛自己在仙境般畅游似的。

坐在共享书店里，拿上一本好书，坐到椅子上，悠然自得地翻着，感受书中的美好。想象自己就是书中的主人公，自己的情随着主人公而变化着。眼睛看得累了就放下书，趴在桌子上休息一会儿。在共享的世界里畅游着。

拿上共享篮球，走到公园的体育场中，和朋友们来一场开心的篮球比赛。赛场中一句句的“进了!进了!”“加油!”“拿下一分了!”“两分了”!开心地扬着手里的篮球，听朋友们嘻戏的笑声。累了，就躺在地上，也顾不得地上有多少人踩过，有多脏，反正就静静地享受朋友给予的开心，我们的心情也因共享的世界而开心起来。

啊!共享世界带来许多乐趣，许多我开心的理由，让我得以在这共享世界中畅游!你是否也与心一样享受这共享世界吗?

My Family

My name is Li Hua. I am from a workers family. There are six people in my

family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister

and I.

Every member in my family works for his or her own trade①. My grandfather

and grandmother are peasants. They do farm work every day in my hometown. My

father is a senior engineer. He is now working in Africa, helping to build a

power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school.

My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the Peoples Hospital of our

county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student. And I

am going to take this years college entrance examination. I wish that I could

be enrolled② by a famous university.

That is my family. All the members in my family live in harmony③. We love

each other devotedly.