英语日记的写作模板实用20篇

3.3 星期五 小雨

今天是我实习的最后一天。因为课程安排在上午一、二两节，所以我得起早，偏偏天公不作美，下着小雨，清晨躺在床上的我真的不想起床，看看表，哎呀！快六点了，再不起来就会迟到了，可是由于昨晚备课到很晚加上心里一直惦记着今天要起早。所以整夜没睡好，夜里醒了好几次，真不想起床啊......然而想到那些学生们，我自问“我有理由迟到吗？”最后我终于没有给我的实习留下什么遗憾，事后我却想了许多，也明白了由立志到实现目标非常关键的一点就在于坚持。坚持对于我们来说都是再熟悉不过的字眼，可是真正把握住它的人却凤毛麟角，坚持需要毅力，需要对目标价值的深切期望和正确估价，有时甚至需要人格力量来支撑。事情的成功有时往往便在于我们能否坚持那关键的一步，走过去，前面就可能是另一番海阔天空，而习惯了坚持，久而久之，这一信念范畴的东西便会逐渐地融入我们的个性之中，成为一种素养，一种道德，现在的我们马上面临毕业，就要踏入社会了，或许一些人会认为到了现在我们可以不再努力，毕业后找份工作，那便是一生了。如果这样的话，那么我们就永远失去了成就某种事业的机会。事实上作为师范专业的学生，我们更应该树立正确的劳动观念和道德意识。为人师表，认真而严肃的从事自己所热爱的事业，愉快而充实的度过我们平凡的一生。

An English proverb says that time is money. I consider it (this) wrong.

Why? Because we all know that we can earn money by work but can not in any way

get back time (in anyway). For this reason, we may (can) say that time is more

valuable than money.Many people do not know the value of time. It (this) is

indeed a great pity. We must bear (keep) in mind that wasting time is equal to

wasting your life.

I made a decision today。 Becuase I often lose my confidence， I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day。 I believe this will make me confident。 Thus， I can do things I want bravely。 Now， I will say， ‘Keep going’。

译文：这一天，我做了一个决定，有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每一天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样，我就能够大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。此刻，我要说一句：加油！

Today I`m not doing homework. I`m making dumplings. After that, we`re

having lunch, my grangfather is saying to each other" Happy New Year", I`m

saying to him" the same to you". We`re laughing. In the afternoon, I`m going

shopping with my brother and sister. Two hours later, we`re getting home, we`re

playing computer. Today is a happy day.

What can I say about Pixar? Amazing?? Perfect?? Got to see this at the Cannes Film Festival in France (went>【扩展阅读篇】

所谓“感”

可以是从书中领悟出来的道理或精湛的思想，可以是受书中的内容启发而引起的思考与联想，可以是因读书而激发的决心和理想，也可以是因读书而引起的对社会上某些丑恶现象的抨击、讽刺。读后感的表达方式灵活多样，基本属于议论范畴，但写法不同于一般议论文，因为它必须是在读后的基础上发感想。要写好有体验、有见解、有感情、有新意的读后感，必须注意以下几点：

首先，要读好原文

“读后感[1]”的“感”是因“读”而引起的。“读”是“感”的基础。走马观花地读，可能连原作讲的什么都没有了解，哪能有“感”?读得肤浅，当然也感得不深。只有读得认真，才能有所感，并感得深刻。如果要读的是议论文，要弄清它的论点(见解和主张)，或者批判了什么错误观点，想一想你受到哪些启发，还要弄清论据和结论是什么。如果是记叙文，就要弄清它的主要情节，有几个人物，他们之间是什么关系，以及故事发生在哪年哪月。作品涉及的社会背景，还要弄清楚作品通过记人叙事，揭示了人物什么样的精神品质，反映了什么样的社会现象，表达了作者什么思想感情，作品的哪些章节使人受感动，为什么这样感动等等。

其次，排好感点

只要认真读好原作，一篇文章可以写成读后感的方面很多。如对原文中心感受得深可以写成读后感，对原作其他内容感受得深也可以写成读后感，对个别句子有感受也可以写成读后感。总之，只要是原作品的内容，只要你对它有感受，都可能写成读后感，你需要把你所知道的都表示出来，这样才能写好读后感。

第三、选准感点

一篇文章，可以排出许多感点，但在一篇读后感里只能论述一个中心，切不可面面俱到，所以紧接着便是对这些众多的感点进行筛选比较，找出自己感受最深、角度最新，现实针对性最强、自己写来又觉得顺畅的一个感点，作为读后感的中心，然后加以论证成文。

第四、叙述要简

既然读后感是由读产生感，那么在文章里就要叙述引起“感”的那些事实，有时还要叙述自己联想到的一些事例。一句话，读后感中少不了“叙”。但是它不同于记叙文中“叙”的要求。记叙文中的“叙”讲究具体、形象、生动，而读后感中的“叙”却讲究简单扼要，它不要求“感人”，只要求能引出事理。初学写读后感引述原文，一般毛病是叙述不简要，实际上变成复述了。这主要是因为作者还不能把握所要引述部分的精神、要点，所以才简明不了。简明，不是文字越少越好，简还要明。

第五，联想要注意形式

联想的形式有相同联想(联想的事物之间具有相同性)、相反联想(联想的事物之间具有相反性)、相关联想(联想的事物之间具有相关性)、相承联想(联想的事物之间具有相承性)、相似联想(联想的事物之间具有相似性)等多种。写读后感尤其要注意相同联想与相似联想这两种联想形式的运用。

编辑本段如何写读后感

格式

一、格式和写法

读后感通常有三种写法：一种是缩写内容提纲，一种是写阅读后的体会感想，一种是摘录好的句子和段落。题目可以用《读后感》;还可以用自己的感受(一两个词语)做题目，下一行是——《读有感》，第一行是主标题，第二行是副标题。

二、要选择自己感受最深的东西去写，这是写好读后感的关键。

三、要密切联系实际，这是读后感的重要内容。

四、要处理好“读”与“感”的关系，做到议论，叙述，抒情三结合。

五、叙原文不要过多，要体现出一个“简”字。

六、要审清题目。

在写作时，要分辨什么是主要的，什么是次要的，力求做到“读”能抓住重点，“感”能写出体会。

七、要选择材料。

读是写的基础，只有读得认真仔细，才能深入理解文章内容，从而抓住重点，把握文章的思想感情，才能有所感受，有所体会;只有认真读书才能找到读感之间的联系点来，这个点就是文章的中心思想，就是文中点明中心思想的句子。对一篇作品，写体会时不能面面俱到，应写自己读后在思想上、行动上的变化。

八、写读后感应以所读作品的内容简介开头，然后，再写体会。

原文内容往往用3～4句话概括为宜。结尾也大多再回到所读的作品上来。要把重点放在“感”字上，切记要联系自己的生活实际。

九、要符合情理、写出真情实感。

写读后感的注意事项

①写读后感绝不是对原文的抄录或简单地复述，不能脱离原文任意发挥，应以写“体会”为主。

②要写得有真情实感。应是发自内心深处的感受，绝非“检讨书”或“保证书”。

③要写出独特的新鲜感受，力求有新意的见解来吸引读者或感染读者。

④禁止写成流水账!

编辑本段要写关于学习的读后感应该读什么有感

(1)引——围绕感点 引述材料。简述原文有关内容。

(2)概——概括本文的主要内容 ,要简练,而且要把重点写出来。

(3)议——分析材料，提练感点。亮明基本观点。在引出“读”的内容后，要对“读”进行一番评析。既可就事论事对所“引”的内容作一番分析;也可以由现象到本质，由个别到一般的作一番挖掘;对寓意深的材料更要作一番分析，然后水到渠成地“亮”出自己的感点。要选择感受最深的一点，用一个简洁的句子明确表述出来。这样的句子可称为"观点句"。这个观点句表述的，就是这篇文章的中心论点。"观点句"在文中的位置是可以灵活的，可以在篇首，也可以在篇末或篇中。初学写作的同学，最好采用开门见山的方法，把观点写在篇首。

(4) 联——联系实际，纵横拓展。围绕基本观点摆事实讲道理。写读后感最忌的是就事论事和泛泛而谈。就事论事撒不开，感不能深入，文章就过于肤浅。泛泛而谈，往往使读后感缺乏针对性，不能给人以震撼。联，就是要紧密联系实际，既可以由此及彼地联系现实生活中相类似的现象，也可以由古及今联系现实生活中的相反的种种问题。既可以从大处着眼，也可以从小处入手。当然在联系实际分析论证时，还要注意时时回扣或呼应“引”部，使“联”与“引””藕”断而“丝”连这部分就是议论文的本论部分，是对基本观点(即中心论点)的阐述，通过摆事实讲道理证明观点的正确性，使论点更加突出，更有说服力。这个过程应注意的是，所摆事实，所讲道理都必须紧紧围绕基本观点，为基本观点服务。

我的周末

201_年_月_日 星期_ 晴

I have planned a happy weekend.Saturday morning, I must go to see me

aunt.In the afternoon, I must go to the shopping center to go shopping.Evening,

I planned makes the homework.Sunday in the morning, I watch the television, the

television program is e_tremely interesting.In the afternoon, I planned listens

to music and paints pictures.I thought this weekend I can be very weary, but is

certainly very joyful.

我打算过一个愉快的周末。周六的上午，我要去看望我的阿姨。下午，我要去购物中心买东西。晚上，我打算做家庭作业。周日上午，我看电视，电视节目非常有趣。下午，我打算听音乐和画画。我想这个周末我会很疲劳，但一定很快乐。

Grandma’s hand in hand to work every day， the heart rough coarse hair。 Every time I go to touch her hand， as in touch a old bark。 I thought: today I’m going to help grandma do some housework， take this as a holiday gift to send grandma。

译文：奶奶的手每一天都在干活，手掌心长出了毛毛糙糙的东西。每次我去摸她的手，就像是在摸一张老树皮。我想：这天我要帮奶奶做做家务，把这个当做送奶奶的节日礼物。

On the first day of the year, my father and I went to the cinema to see a

movie. That movie was good.

That movie is called "the kingdom of Rock 2, dragons wish". It is mainly

about Abu and partners to overcome difficulties, to find the king of the elves:

Abu and friends in the game, Abus arm was slowly disappear, Xinglong (Abu

Masters) very worried, suddenly a man named repy singing "wonderful house clues,

snow Temple of God God is......" Come out to remind them. We listened to repy

tips, pick up the artifact to help Abu. They also helped Abu beat the wicked

black clothes man. In everyones efforts, Abu finally found the Elven king, king

of the elves use mana Abus arm, Abu can become a saint!

I hope dad will take me more to see this movie in the future!

大年初一，我和爸爸去电影院看电影。那部电影很好。

那部电影叫《摇滚王国2，龙的心愿》。主要是关于阿布和伙伴们克服困难，寻找精灵之王：阿布和朋友们在游戏中，阿布的手臂慢慢消失了，兴隆(阿布大师)很担心，突然一个叫雷比的人唱起了“奇妙的房子线索”

，雪神殿是……”出来提醒他们。我们听了回复提示，拿起神器帮助阿布。他们还帮助阿布打败了邪恶的黑衣人。在大家的努力下，阿布终于找到了精灵王，精灵王使用法力阿布的手臂，阿布可以成为圣人!

希望爸爸以后多带我去看这部电影!

The winter vacation is coming to an end, and finish the homework. I heard a story, so that the origin of the Spring Festival: long long ago, there was a call in strange monsters, the annual New Years day will come, years of strange people afraid of fire and cannon dozen years blame, he put in strange beat, and this is the Chinese New Year. Have a year of Spring Festival, I and other children put ChongTianBao, the Spring Festival party began, dad and mom told me to come home to see the Spring Festival evening party, dont want to leave home, watching the Spring Festival evening party. My father, mother, grandpa and grandma watching the Spring Festival evening ate fruit, I be very happy!

I am very happy, very happy, hope every day was Chinese New Year!Today is New Years Day, every day, every family is very lively, a Chinese New Year every family to eat a very fatty foods, each meal should be placed before the whip, burn incense to the God of Wealth and hopes to make a fortune, a children are up early to wear new clothes to go to the elders to pay, hoping to get older, the red envelope, Chinese New Year, and full of gaiety, today I am feeling very good.

The Spring Festival diary  Start looking, and, well, Spring Festival is arrived, on New Years day, I was at my  grandmothers house. There NianWei of very heavy, every family in the lunar New Years eve put red lanterns hanging out, write the couplets, stick it out. And put the door, and pack dumpling, I was at my grandmothers house also help up busy, help adults get this made with that, own also lost in this New Years day busy atmosphere, on New Years day to getting up early, to follow the parents to other peoples home New Year, worship the years later, in the afternoon, the family got together, talking and laughing eat a big dinner, everyones faces lit a smile, after lunch, my brother and sister and the racing to rob to let grandpas grandmother to New Years money, finally we got,also are delighted, finish to grandma and grandpas New Years money, go with aunt uncle to, so a a will, this just on New Years day, I will be up to 600 yuan, and before you know it was this time for bed, looking back on this day, really is in the thick NianWeiEr spent, really looking forward to every day was Chinese New Year.

This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, computer

word I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, my mother

said to me:“go on, you must belive that you can do it.” So I have to try. Now my

English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me.

Practices makes perfect.

这个假期是我最好的繁忙的节日,因为我在周末考试没考好，所以我学习英语和计算机单词。许多次,我想放弃今天的学习,妈妈对我说:“继续,你相信你能做到。"所以我不能不试一试。现在我的英语比2个月前好得多。我要感谢我的妈妈,她对我很好。实践才能达到完美。

今天早上的英语课上老师不一样了，在这个时候就会有人需要注意了，因为在这个时候的人大多数就是玩手机和睡觉的，因为我们需要回答问题！

老师在今天早上突然之间不知怎么回事就让我们回答问题，让我们在这个时候就有一些难以接受，而且我们也不好意思说一句不会，因此在这个时候就需要努力对待了！我和大家原本是一样的，也属于在这个时候玩手机的人，可是没有想到的是老师让人回答问题的时候会站在面前，根本就不得不认真负责，而且她总是在这里来回转悠着，因此过来的时候就不得不注意了，而不知怎么回事，今天早上回答问题的人大多数就在我们旁边，因此在这个时候就需要小心谨慎，而且她让我们一起翻译，而由于我们根本没有仔细阅读，根本就不会翻译，因此我们几个人在这个时候就用手机百度了一下，不过这节课的翻译一下子就出现了，而我们在这个时候就需要努力看看就可以了。

老师多次在我们这里问答，在这个时候就需要认真对待了，而且由于老师在我们旁边，根本就没有人在这个时候还不认真负责，因为一下子就会轮到我们了，当该我的时候属于突然发生的情况，不过由于我这个人在这个时候看了一下，在这个时候还是有一些印象的，而且我的舍友在这个时候还是打辅助的人，我还得到了这个人的帮助！

The food in Shanghai disagree me. I think the food in Beijing is the most

delicious. Seafood in Beijing is very fresh. Prawns in restaurant are all alive.

And there are many food that you can’t see in other cities. It is very cheap

that you eat seafood in Beijing. The less money you pay, the more enjoyable you

are. Maybe my stomach is ill. Whatever food I eat, I am still thin. And I am too

thin, I want to be a litter fatter. So I must eat more.

食物在上海不赞同我。我觉得食物在北京是最美味的。海鲜在北京是很新鲜。大虾在餐厅都活着。而且有很多的食物，你不能看到其他城市推广。你吃海鲜在北京是很便宜的。你付出的更少的钱，更多的愉快你。也许我的胃就是生病。我吃什么食物，我还是薄。而我太瘦了，我想成为一个垃圾箱腰包。所以我必须多吃。

It doesn’t matter that the air-conditioner has been broken. But my notebook-computer also was broken. I really don’t know what to do. So I went to play basketball. I didn’t know any one in that place. And I was the first time to go there to play basketball. At first, there was no person playing basketball. So I played basketball alone. A few minutes later, some students came to play. So we played together. Of course, we had a match. And It lasts two hours. After the match, I felt I would be dead. I was too tired.

Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.

The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.

China’s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people’s standard of living will become higher and higher.

At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.

暑假到了，我想大家一定都很高兴吧!对，我也很高兴，因为暑假里可以放松心情，去外面旅游，还可以去游泳。说到游泳，我以前可是一只名副其实的旱鸭子。可是，经过一个暑假的努力，我终于学会了游泳，想听一听吗?那我就给大家讲讲吧!

暑假里炎热的一天，我们全家一起去游泳。看着姐姐在游泳池里自由自在地游来游去，犹如一条小鱼在水中欢快地穿梭，套着游泳圈的我，心里可痒痒了。终于，我在家人的鼓励下，我鼓起了勇气对爸爸说：“我要学游泳!”可爸爸却说：“你可别像上次那样半途而废，要知道不被水淹到是学不会游泳的。”爸爸的话不禁又勾起了我去年的回忆。去年我参加了游泳班的学习，可是我却掉到水里被淹到了，我吓得哭了，像一个逃兵逃回了家，再也没有勇气去继续学完游泳课程。可现在我却满怀信心地说：“我不怕，我一定能战胜心里的恐惧!”

于是，我开始了学游泳的旅程。首先，爸爸教我闷水，因为以前在游泳班里学习过，所以我一会儿就学会了闷水。接着爸爸又教我换气。有时我还是会紧张，可一想到我只要学会了游泳就可以与朋友们一起游泳时，我又给自己打气加油。但我总是被水呛到，爸爸没办法只好先让我多练习闷水游，终于在我的努力练习下，我可以闷水游一小段距离了。全家人包括我，都为此感到高兴。

现在，我已经学会了游泳，可以像姐姐那样在水里游泳了，我也从这次游泳的经历中懂得了一个道理：恐惧是可以战胜的，只要你努力，就一定会成功!

日记是人们对日常生活的记录，即用来记述自己一天生活的所见、所闻、所问、所思、所感。下面是小编为你带来的六年级写英语日记的格式，欢迎阅读。

英语日记格式通常由两部分构成，即书端和正文。

下面就是英文日记格式各部分的书写格式示意图：

Date(日期) Weather(天气)

Title(标题)

The body of the diary(日记正文)

那么，小学生写英语日记还应注意哪些问题呢?

11. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置。

日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”

也有把星期放在后面的。

如“ 2003 年 11 月 22 日， 星期一”可写为“ Monday November 22， 2015 ”或“ November 22，2015 Monday ” 。

天气情况应写在正文的右上角，如： Fine、 Rainy、 Cloudy、 Windy 、sunny等。

22. 关于标题的书写。

在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小标题，也可以不写标题。 刚开始写日记，可以用一个词作标题。

33. 关于正文的书写。

正文是关于一天生活的记载，也是日记的主题。

在书写正文时要做到：

1 )要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成简单的流水帐;

2 )日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写;

3 )日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时，但使用时必须灵活掌握。

如景物描写、议论某事、对话引语等要使用现在时态;

4 )日记应以时间发生的先后顺序来展开，并且要简明扼要、条理清楚、写出真实感。

[精彩举例]

Sunday May 21，2015 Sunny

Going on a Picnic

Today was Sunday. The weather was fine and warm. The sky was very clear and blue. My classmates and I were very happy， because we went out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill.

We went to Nanshan Hill by bike with fruits， eggs， meat，vegetables， knives and some other things.

About one and a half hours later， we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill. There were many beautiful flowers and green trees. Birds sang their sweet songs. How pleased we were! Then we were busy with the picnic. Some of us were getting water，some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook，others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.

At about 13 o"clock， our lunch was ready. We all sat around on the green grass， singing， talking， eating and drinking.

At about 16：00 we began packing for our return.

What a nice time we were having!

[点评] 小作者能用准确、 地道的语言， 简练的语句非常生动地描写出了野炊的场面。

这篇文章条理清楚， 尤其是“ some … some … ， others …”句型，以及 singing， eating 等现在分词作伴随状语的运用，使这篇日记增色不少。

本文结尾使用了一个感叹句，更加反映出小作者对这次野炊的真实情感。

［一句话英文日记范例］

Jan. 1st 2015 Thursday Sunny

Happy

It was sunny and cold today. I got up early.

Because today is my birthday!

写日记，你会用到以下缩写：

月份缩写：

一月：January 缩写:Jan

二月：February 缩写:Feb

三月：March 缩写:Mar

四月：April 缩写:Apr

五月：May 缩写:May

六月：June 缩写:Jun

七月：July 缩写:Jul

八月：August 缩写:Aug

九月：September 缩写:Sept

十月：October 缩写:Oct

十一月：November 缩写:Nov

十二月：December 缩写:Dec

在日期的缩写中：月份缩写加数字的缩写哦

1号 就是1st，2号2nd，3号 3rd 4号以后都是在后边加上th

如：1月1号 Jan. 1st

12月12号 Dec. 12th

星期的缩写：

Monday 星期一 Mon.

Tuesday 星期二 Tues.

Wednesday 星期三 Wed.

Thursday 星期四 Thurs.

Friday 星期五 Fri.

Saturday 星期六 Sat.

Sunday 星期天 Sun.

时间的表示格式：

通用的各国时间表示 小时:分:秒 AM/PM

Today, i experienced the most irritating traffic jam ever in my life. My father was driving me to watch a movie with my friends from high school, who I have not seen since graduation. I was hoping to have a wonderful re-union with them. However, our car was stuck in the middle of **** road because two drivers were fighting and their cars blocked the way. Even with the help from local policeman, the road was not clear until one hour later. As a result, I missed the entire movie and apologized to my friends.

今天，我经历了最烦人的交通堵塞永远在我的生活。我父亲是驾驶我看和我的朋友，高中同学，谁毕业后我还没有看到电影。我希望能与他们一个美好的重新联盟。然而，我们的车被卡在了路，因为两位车手****战斗，他们的车被挡住了路中间。即使从当地警察的帮助下，这条道路并不清楚，直到一个小时后。因此，我错过了整个电影和我的朋友们表示歉意。

[关于交通堵塞的英语日记

My chinese name is 范依昀。My English name is Kate. Brown. My family name is Brown. My first name is Kate. I’m 12 years old. I am chinese. I’m from Huzhou. I have many hobbies. I like playing football, and playing computer. I like blue best. I have a friend. Her name is 蒋姣姣。 She looks happy, she is lovely. I like her very much. She likes watching TV and singing.there is three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a doctor, my mother is a doctor too. I like them very much. I am happy every day. My telephone number is ********. Welcome to my home.

班主任评语：very good! Your hand-writhing is very nice.

This is our school. There are many classrooms in it. There are eight

hundred students and sixty-nine teachers in our school. There are many trees and

flowers in it. All the teachers and students like our school very much.

We come to school at seven. We have four classes in the morning and two in

the afternoon.

Our classroom is big and clean. We have lessons here, We do our homework at

home.

All the students study hard.

Finally, we arrived in Guilin. After breakfast, we went to River Li. We

listened to the guide and enjoyed the views on boat. But I found the water in

River Li is dirty, many people washed clothes there. I feel angry and the trip

became boring and exhausting.

今天终于到了桂林，我们吃过早饭后就出发去漓江。坐上了船后，我们听着导游的讲解，观赏着风景。可是我发现漓江的水很脏，有很多人在那里洗衣服。我很气愤。在接下来的旅途中很无聊我也很疲惫。

根据中英文提示，与一篇日记，记叙一次(西塞山)郊游。(短文的开头已经给出。)

要求：

1.短文应包括汉语和英语提示内容。

2.语句通顺，意思连贯。

3.书写工整，卷面整洁，标点符号正确。

4.字数不少于80个英语单词。

Sunday, May 1st

I got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got to the foot of the mount at 8:30.We began climbing the mount soon. On our way the air was so fresh and the scenery was so beautiful. Everybody was talking and laughing.We reached the top at about 10:00. The Yangtze River appeared in the north, and over the river there was a great bridge. We felt very relaxed. Seeing some birds flying in the sky, I suddenly remembered a popular poem of Tang dynasty. " Birds are flying in front of Xisai Mount ,…". I kept feeling proud of our city.