英语日记的写作模板【推荐20篇】

My father bought me a lovely pet on my birthday.He has two orange paws,a

sharp and orange mouth.Of course he has a pair of small and blue eyes and a long

tail with bright and black feather all over.

Do you know what it is? Yes,its a bird .His names KaKa. He is sometimes

very friendly and quite but sometimes a little naught.He likes singing when he

feels happy.He can even mimic what we say.

Becase of KaKa ,the whole family is usually full ofmuch more

happiness.KaKa is my favorite animal.

暑假的8月12——14号，我跟着爸爸妈妈随旅游团去普陀山游玩。普陀山是风景名胜区，以悠久的佛教文化和独特的海山风光驰名于世。

以前，我只是在书上和电视里看见过蔚蓝的大海。8月12号那天我好激动，因为我可以真的看见大海了，可以近距离的触摸大海了!可以在大海里尽情地游泳了!可是浙江沿海由于台风的原因，这天摆渡的车子实在太多了，到傍晚的时候，我才终于看到了蔚蓝的大海，闻到了大海的气息，心里甭提有多高兴了!

站在海岸上，放眼望去，一排排浪花涌向海边，真是漂亮极了。一片金黄色的海滩上已经有好多游客了，他们有的卧在沙滩上休息，有的在沙滩上堆着自己的艺术品，有的已经在大海里游泳了，也有的三三两两在散步……我有点迫不及待的想到大海里，和电视里的小朋友一样在大海里尽情的游一游。

妈妈马上带我到更衣室换好泳衣，我便赤脚跑下沙滩，暖暖的、柔柔的，“真舒服!”我高声叫道。可脚下都是沙子，软绵绵的，一点也跑不快。爸爸和妈妈也赤脚走了下来，妈妈提议，让我先跟大海和个影，我摆了个姿势，在浪花一排排涌来的时候，爸爸抓住时机按下了快门。

走进海水里，真凉快!可一排浪花涌过来，那浪花是力量真大，把我推回了几步，我便不敢往下走了，心里有点害怕。爸爸于是给我套上救生圈，拉着我的手拥着我向大海走去。还没走几步，一个浪头迎面打过来，弄得满脸都是海水，由于害怕嘴巴张开着还喝到了一口海水，海水又苦又涩，我差点哭出来，想要往回走上沙滩不想去游泳了。爸爸鼓励我勇敢些继续往前，并且告诉我在浪头打过来的时候，把头转向另一边，这样海水不会再扑面而来了。我随着爸爸游到了禁止线那里，一排排浪花把我时不时地托起来，我已不再害怕，相反感到象摇篮一样，一摇一摇，好舒服!怪不得有那么多的人喜欢大海，喜欢在大海里游泳!游了一阵子，爸爸便和我回到沙滩上，我便和几个小朋友也玩起了堆沙堆的游戏，我还在平整的沙滩上用手指写下了名字，还和妈妈一起捡到了大海送给我这个远道而来的朋友的礼物——漂亮的贝壳。虽然我没有捡到大的贝壳，但这些小巧带着五颜六色的贝壳我还是爱不释手。天色快暗下来了，导游催促我们回宾馆了，我才依依不舍离开。

接下来的两天，我们浏览了普陀山的美景，但我记忆犹新的就是这第一次在大海里游泳，因为大海告诉我要做一个勇敢的人。

Now I would like to give you some details about Thanksgiving Day in the

United States. Thanksgiving Day is the most truly American of the national

Holidays in the United States and is most closely connected with the earliest

history of the country.

现在我想给你们详细谈谈美国的感恩节。感恩节是美国国定假日中最地道、最美国式的节日，而且它和早期美国历史最为密切相关。

In 1620, the settlers, or Pilgrims, they sailed to America on the May

flower, seeking a place where they could have freedom of worship. After a

tempestuous two-month voyage they landed at in icy November, what is now

Plymouth, Massachusetts.

1620年，一些朝圣者(或称为清教徒)乘坐"五月花"号船去美国寻求宗教自由。他们在海上颠簸折腾了两个月之后，终于在酷寒的十一月里，在现在的马萨诸塞州的普里茅斯登陆。

During their first winter, over half of the settlers died of starvation or

epidemics. Those who survived began sowing in the first spring.

在第一个冬天，半数以上的移民都死于饥饿和传染病，活下来的人们在第一个春季开始播种。

All summer long they waited for the harvests with great anxiety, knowing

that their lives and the future existence of the colony depended on the coming

harvest.Finally the fields produced a yield rich beyond expectations. And

therefore it was decided that a day of thanksgiving to the Lord be fixed. Years

later, President of the United States proclaimed the fourth Thursday of November

as Thanksgiving Day every year. The celebration of Thanksgiving Day has been

observed on that date until today.

整个夏天他们都热切地盼望着丰收的到来，他们深知自己的生存以及殖民地的存在与否都将取决于即将到来的收成。后来，庄稼获得了意外的丰收，所以大家决定要选一个日子来感谢上帝的恩典。多年以后，美国总统宣布每年十一月的第四个星期四为感恩节。感恩节庆祝活动便定在这一天，直到如今。

The pattern of the Thanksgiving celebration has never changed through the

years. The big family dinner is planned months ahead. On the dinner table,

people will find apples, oranges, chestnuts, walnuts and grapes.There will be

plum pudding, mince pie, other varieties of food and cranberry juice and squash.

The best and most attractive among them are roast turkey and pumpkin pie. They

have been the most traditional and favorite food on Thanksgiving Day throughout

the years.

感恩节庆祝模式许多年来从未改变。丰盛的家宴早在几个月之前就开始着手准备。人们在餐桌上可以吃到苹果、桔子、栗子、胡桃和葡萄，还有葡萄干布丁、碎肉馅饼、各种其它食物以及红莓苔汁和鲜果汁，其中最妙和最吸引人的大菜是烤火鸡和番瓜馅饼，这些菜一直是感恩节中最富于传统意义和最受人喜爱的食品。

Everyone agrees the dinner must be built around roast turkey stuffed with a

bread dressing to absorb the tasty juices as it roasts. But as cooking varies

with families and with the regions where one lives, it is not easy to get a

consensus on the precise kind of stuffing for the royal bird.Thanksgiving today

is, in every sense, a national annual holiday on which Americans of all faiths

and backgrounds join in to express their thanks for the year s bounty and

reverently ask for continued[5] blessings.

人人都赞成感恩节大餐必需以烤火鸡为主菜。火鸡在烘烤时要以面包作填料以吸收从中流出来的美味汁液，但烹饪技艺常因家庭和地区的不同而各异，应用什幺填料也就很难求得一致。今天的感恩节是一个不折不扣的国定假日。在这一天，具有各种信仰和各种背景的美国人，共同为他们一年来所受到的上苍的恩典表示感谢，虔诚地祈求上帝继续赐福。

I made cake today

Today,I suddenly wanted to eat cake,so I decided to make one. Firstly,I

prepared ingredent: eggs,flour,butter,orange juice,baking soda, sugar and milk.

Then started work. First step, beat the eggs.Second step,mixed the flour, butter

and sugar.Third step, put fruit,milk, orange juice and baking soda into them and

mixed.Fourth step, kneaded into a small dough.Fifth step,put the dough in the

oven and baked for one hour. Finally the cake was done!I ate the cake that I

made myself,that was very delicious,I was so happy.

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我今天做蛋糕了

今天，我突然想吃蛋糕，所以我决定做一个。首先，我准备原材料：鸡蛋、面粉、黄油、橙汁、小苏打、糖和牛奶。然后就开始做了。第一步，打鸡蛋。第二步，将面粉、黄油和糖和打好的鸡蛋混在一起。第三步，放入水果、牛奶、橙汁和小苏打，并且拌匀。第四步，将拌好的面粉揉成一个个小面团。第五步，将小面团放入烤箱烘焙一个小时。最后，蛋糕就做好了。我吃着自己做的蛋糕，美味极了，我很开心。

脑海中的每一件事，都如一朵朵飘落的小雪花，数量如此之多，而且每一朵都令人深思。

——题记

那是去年冬天了，由于冬天来的比较早，所以大家都穿上了厚厚的棉衣，但还是感觉到了冷。走在去姥姥家的路上，寒风刺骨，把我冻得瑟瑟发抖，嘴里的上牙和下牙冻得打颤。风刮在脸上火辣辣的疼，像有一千只猫在挠我的脸一样。我几乎是寸步难行，就在这艰难的挪动中，我遇见了她们，一个小女孩正搀扶着一位老人在雪中困难的行走，那位老人大概六十来岁，衣着朴素，历尽沧桑的脸上刻满了岁月的痕迹，如树皮一样的手紧紧地抓着小女孩，生怕她跑丢了似的。小女孩那幼稚的小脸蛋上挂着一个迷人的微笑，在雪地里蹦着跳着，但丝毫没有挣脱老人的意思。

忽然，小女孩一个趔趄，摔倒在地，老人急忙弯下腰来扶起小女孩，她轻轻的拍了拍小女孩身上的雪，雪儿听话的落了下来。多好的老人呀!我心想。我目光顺着他们的脚步，她们走着走着，停了下来，老人挥了挥手，跟小女孩说再见，天哪!难道小女孩的父母就让他们的爹妈住这样的房子吗?这座房子外表简陋，地上还零散着堆着几块掉下来的石头，老屋四周杂草丛生，凌乱不堪，我百思不得其解，没办法，问一下那个小女孩吧!，我快步追上小女孩，问道:“小朋友，刚才那个老奶奶是你的什么呀，她为什么对你那么好呀?”她仰起头，扑闪扑闪她那双大眼睛对我说:“其实刚才那位老奶奶我并不认识，可能因为她摔倒了，我扶她起来，她才对我那么好的吧!哦，对了，你愿不愿意和我一起去帮老奶奶捡碎石头呢?”我迷迷糊糊的点了点头，她高兴的拉着我飞奔起来......终于捡完了，她蹦跳着离开了我的视线。

虽然看不到她了，但她那身影却在我的脑海中挥之不去，并不断清晰起来，高大起来，美丽起来......

只要人人都献出一点爱，生活就会更加精彩..

早晨，我被噼里啪啦的炮声惊醒了，原来，今天是元霄节啊，我飞快的爬起来，和妈妈去姨姨家过节。

In the morning, I was produced crackling of guns to awaken, turns out today

is The Lantern Festival ah, I climb up quickly, and her mother went homes

feast.

在姨姨家，我和妈妈度过快乐的一天。

In the homes, my mother and I spent a happy day.

晚上回家时，刚走出姨姨家，我和妈妈就被突然响起的炮声包围了，妈妈吓得捂住耳朵躲在一辆小车的后面，而我却兴奋地直往前冲，当炮声小一点的时候，我妈妈才慢慢地探出头来，我一把拉住妈妈的手向大门跑去，费了好大功夫，我们才逃出炮的包围圈，我们坐上一辆出租车，这才松了一口气。

Go home at night, fresh out ofs home, my mother and I were sudden sound of

guns surrounded, mother scared to cover your ears hiding in a small car back,

and I was excited straight forward blunt, when guns small bit of time, my mother

just slowly explore successful in career, I a pull a mothers hand to the gate

ran, and made an effort, we just escaped from the gun battalion, we took a taxi,

this just breathe a sigh of relief.

啊!这个元霄节过得真刺激呀!

The Lantern Festival is really exciting!

★高中英语日记100字★

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★儿童节英语日记★

Hello, Im Sally. I get up at seven oclock.I have some bread and an egg

for breakfast. I study English an hour after breakfast. I play with my dolls at

half past nine. Theres a good cartoon at ten oclock.I like it very much.In the

aftemoon, I go to play table tennis with my dad.

Whata happy day!

1. To cherish the enviroment is to love ourselves.

爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。

2.Water is the source of ourlives

水是生命之源。

3.I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation

我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状。

4.Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution.

我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争。

5.We are sure that well win the battle.

我们坚信我们能赢得战斗。

6.Its high time that we should protect our enviroment from being polluted.

是时候我们应该防止环境污染了。

7. Keep our mountains green，the wate clean，and the sky blue.

使我们山更绿，水更清，天更蓝。

8.However，natural resources are not inexhaustible.some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion.

然而自然资源并不是无穷无尽的，一些储量已经到了穷尽的边缘。

9.If we do something with no thought for the furture . The later generation would be in danger.

如果我们不为将来考虑，后代就会受到威胁。

10.Our earths days are numbered without urgent help.

没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了。

11(Sth.)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them.

如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话，……一定会有恶劣的后果。

I was so busy in the previous winter holiday for I am going to take the

university entrance exam in July this year. Everyday, I buried myself in

studying. I had to review each required subject and do lots of exercises.

Besides, because I did bad in mathematics and physics, I had to do much more

exercises than other courses, which made me discouraged. I spent more than ten

hours a day in studying. When I was tired, I watched TV or listened to music for

a little while. But It was a big pity that I couldnt go to the see cinema. In

addition, I had to refuse all the invitations of friends and relatives. I only

called them or sent messages in the New Year’s Eve. I desperately hoped that

there is no exam but I know it’s impossible. The only thing I can do is to study

hard to get good scores and can be admitted to Tsinghua University.

周五早上，下了第二节课要去参加英语比赛。虽然准备比较充分但我的心情还是有点紧张。万一过不了预赛怎么办？“叮铃铃，叮铃铃”第二节课下课的铃声响了，我拿起水杯，飞快的向外跑去。

到了赛场，哇！真是人山人海，有的大人在着急的等待，有的同学紧张的要哭，还有的同学紧张的直冒汗……我找了一个空，挤了进去。轮到我抽号了，就要这个吧！打开一看，耶！是39号，不错，和我的参赛号一样。我拿好笔和纸，信心十足的上楼做听力。之后又满怀希望的回一楼讲了一个英语故事。最关键的时刻到了，马上就要公布成绩了，我又紧张起来。我也感觉到我的手心一直在冒汗，以前从来没这么紧张过。人名一个一个的念着，我的心情也是时起时落，终于在最后颁发的一等奖获得者名单里念到我的名字了，“我得了个一等奖，这表示我晋级了！”

加油！相信自己能走到最后。我兴奋的对自己说。

Lets prevent H1N1 from happening to usDuring the last few months,H1N1 ful has set off across the whole world.If we have the right way to prevent it ,it wont scare.Here are some suggestions for you:First of all,you should cover your mouth with a napkin whtn you cough re sneeze,Next youd better stay away from the public place if possible, if you have to,please wear a mask.Wash your hands carefully before meals and always keep your windows open so that the air will be fresh.At last,try to do more excisice to make your body strong so that you can stay in health.I think this is the most important.

最近这几个月里，H1N1病毒在全世界引发起来。如果我们用正确的方法预防它，免费学英语网站，它就不会那么可怕。这里有一些为你的建议：首先，当你在咳嗽或者打喷嚏的时候，你应该用手捂着嘴。然后你最好尽可能的离公共场所远一点，如果你必须去，免费英语学习网站，请戴上口罩。饭前仔细洗手，经常打开窗后这样使空气保持清新。最后你应该做更多的运动去使你身体更强壮，这样你就可以保持健康了。我认为这才是最重要的。

英语写作：Freedom in my Dream

一、 教学目标：通过片段训练，使学生能进行细致的描写。

二、 教学重点：片段练习

三、 教学难点：通过片段练习，掌握进行细致描写的技巧。

四、 教学设想：演示实验——练习——分析——片段练习——方法

五、 教学过程：

(一) 组织教学、课堂导入： 同学们在学习语文的过程中，感到最可怕的是写作文，往往胶尽 脑汁而无处下笔， 搜肠刮肚找不到一个词语。 其实，

你们都是幸运的， 因为前人留给我们太多的宝藏，

“孔子的‘三人行，必有我师’，李太白的杯中酒，曹雪芹笔下的十二金钗，只要我们能多读好书，再掌握一定的作文技巧，又何愁写不好作文呢?这节课，就让我们一起解决作文中的一个难题：

“怎么进行细致的描写”?

(二) 讲授新课

1、 教师演示：教师手拿一个纸飞机，用力射出去，然后飞机掉 教师演示到了地上。 要求： (1)同学们要仔细观察，然后用一段话进行描写。

(2)同学们之间交流、分享。

2、摘录例句： 、摘录例句： a、老师把纸飞机用力的射了出去，飞机在空中飞了一圈，掉到 了地上。

b、老师右手拿一个纸飞机，高高向斜后方举起，身体向右倾斜 45 度角，右脚后退一小步，头微微抬起，向斜上方看，用力的将

飞机射了出去。飞机在空中像一个翩翩起舞的女子，画了一道优 美的弧线，轻轻地站在了地上。

3、分析：这两段话，你认为哪段写的好?为什么?

4、教师引导分析：得出“描写三原则” 。师总结：描写是什么呢?我认为描写就是把你看到的东西，可能是一 个人、一件物品、一个场景，告诉没有看到的人。

如果你要告诉别人什么，

首先一定要告诉别人。师总结：描写时，除了告诉别人“有什么”“怎么样”外，还要告诉别人“像什么”(板书：像什么)运用一定的修辞，这样才能使你的作文生动形象。“有什么”使我们明白了描写的对象，“怎么样”使描写具体起来，而“像什么”使描写变得更形象、生动，这三点就是描写三原则。

5、下面，同学们按照描写的三原则，检验一下自己刚刚的描写，进行修改。

6、教师让同学们将自己修改后的片段读出来，然后同学之间进行互评，教师让同学们将自己修改后的片段读出来。

7、美文共赏： 朱自清的《春》 分析：春天里“有什么”? 春天里“怎么样”? 春天的事物“像什么”? 8、作业：每人发一张图片——小鸭游水图，

让同学们课后按图片所画进行 描写练习。 要示：用词准确，100 字左右。

9、板书设计：三式妙法巧绘大千世界

1、有什么(对象) 描写三原则： 2、怎么样(细致) 3、像什么(修辞)

10、教学反思：通过本节课对描写的练习，同学们都有一个感觉：原来作文很简单。这也是这节课，我要告诉同学们的一个道理——作文 并不难。

但也有一部分同学词句匮乏，以后教学中，一定要加强词句的积累。

As soon as I opened a book to read,she would sit down beside me ask me about all kinds of things at the college.

At college, I missed my parents a lot. As the term was drawing to an end, I eagerly looked forward to going home. And I planned to do a thousand one things during the vacation. Above all, I wanted to help my mother with housework. I also wished to read many hooks which my teachers had recommended. However, at home, my mother would never let me do anything. She completely deprived me of sharing her work. As soon as I opened a book to read,she would sit down beside me ask me about all kinds of things at the college. To please her,I told her one thing after another,and soon I forgot all about books. Even when I was actually reading,she would, now then,insist that I should eat an egg or drink a cup of tea. When I left home at the end of the vacation, not a thing in my plan had been carried out. But I felt very happy. I believed more deeply than before in the old saying: Home, sweet home. There’s no place like home!

英语日记带翻译

英语日记：English Host I did it

Yesterday, it was really a nice day. I got the English Host in the end.

Now, allow me to tell you the gain of writing English articles.

The first, I learned a great many new words. They are very useful for me. While writing, meeting some new words are ineluctability. And when I met the new words, I would look up the dictionary immediately, and I would remember them soon. Bit by bit, the new words will be in my mind.

The second, I grasped a lot of practical verb tense and sentential form. Such as Past Tense, Future Tense, Future Continuous Tense, etc.

They are very useful for my writing.

The third, I got many praises and encourages. They made me very happy, and I made progress more and more.

Last, I got so much fun. English writing makes me happy. I study in it, and harvest in it.

Dear my friends, what you got? Show us, and let us work hard together, grow up together!

英语达人我做到了

昨天真是美好的一天，我终于得到了“英语达人”称号。

现在，请允许我来与大家分享我在写英语文章时收获了什么。

首先，我学到了很多新单词。每当我在写文章的时候，遇到生词是不可避免的。当我遇到生词时，我就会马上查词典，我还会记住这些单词。渐渐地，生词就会不再陌生。

其次，我掌握了许多常见的时态和实用的句型。例如：一般过去时、一般将来时、将来进行时，等等。它们对我的英语写作很有帮助。

第三，我收到了许多表扬和鼓励。它们让我非常开心，我在这里不断地成长。

我还收获了很多的乐趣，英语写作使我愉悦，我在写作的同时也学习着，收获着。

亲爱的朋友们，你收获了什么？和我们分享吧。让我们共同努力,共同成长！

词汇拼写错误较为严重，词汇选用上会有不当的情况。

应对策略就是平时阅读过程中注意单词拼写，关注单词使用语境，多积累高级词汇和句型。

语法掌握不好，句子的基本构成主谓结构掌握不清。

Due to the fact that the mental state, we have to keep a balance between the physical and the mental.

这句话中，due to the fact that后面需要接一个句子，而上句中只是一个名词性短语，所以错误。另外，between...and...需要连接两个名词短语，上句中形容词physical和mental后缺少名词性成分。改正为Due to the fact that the mental state plays a significant role, we have to keep a balance between the physical well-being and the mental health.

格式不正确，结构不清晰，汉语式英文思维太过明显，翻译的过程中常常不合英文写作要求。

应对的策略是多阅读范文，写作前列提纲，注意使用衔接词。

格式不正确常常出现在应用文中，有人会忘记写落款。这是我们在写作过程中特别需要注意的，否则格式错误就要相应的扣分。另外，有些文章结构不清晰，或者没有分段，或者段落之间的内容混乱。开头段就开始论述问题，第二段提出建议，结尾段又给出原因，逻辑混乱不清，抓不住重点。所以我们在写文章时一定要先打腹稿，明确行文结构和大概内容，这样在写作过程中才不至于不知道说什么，甚至瞎写一通。

总而言之，新大纲非常强调大家的英语写作技能，我们在平时的备考过程中一定要多进行英文文章的写作，养成良好的写作习惯，注意单词拼写、语法检查、逻辑结构，这样写出的文章才能过关。

Dear Friend,

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember

me?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the

days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the

world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear

brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always

thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank

you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my

life.

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because

we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we

are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is

always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright

future.

Sincerely yours,

Jason

也许在别人心中，我是个乐观的人，并没有太多的烦恼。殊不知我的烦恼并不少，其中学不好英语最令我头疼，它就懔是一张粘鼠板，我越挣扎就被粘得越紧。

每当英语老师在讲台前滔滔不绝地讲课时，我总是一本正经地望着老师邓一张一合的嘴巴，却不知道老师究竟在说什么每次我咬紧牙关翻开英语书准备好好学习时，总感觉书上的字母都在疯狂地跳着华尔兹，我怎么也看不懂上面到底写了什么每当同学们自信满满地交上英语作业时，我却只字未动，看着讲台上邓一摞高高的作业本，我真恨不得自己找个地洞钻进去·····。

就在昨天，我做完了语文和数学作业，正准备好好放松一下，却不由自主地想到了英语作业本上少得可怜的钩。算了，为了能听懂英语老师讲课的内容，为了能看懂英语书上的单词，为了能按时交上英语作业，为了期末英语考试不抱。大鸭蛋》······我还是努力搏一搏吧。我一边想一边大义凛然地抱起英语书背起了单间spring、...ing"···春季。。我机械地背着单词，反反复复，心里却不时地想这外国人可真够怪的，创造的单词怎么这么难背，我还不信我背不出!

不知不觉10分钟过去了，20分钟过去了，一个钟头过去了······。天哪，我怎么才背了一个单元的单词?为什么我不是外国人啊!。一番感叹后，又忘了几个单词，照这速度，我的"周末计划"肯定要泡汤了。没办法，谁让我的英语不咋地呢!用一甸话来概括我当时的心情，真可谓。哥背的不是单词，是烦恼。。后天就是周末了，看来这个周末我只能在枯燥的背单词声中结束了，一想到这些，就觉得自己好可怜。真烦啊!

让我烦恼的英语啊，你何时才能成为我的快乐呀?

写作是英语的第二大重头戏，仅次于阅读。但是这部分又经常被考生忽略，考前不动手，依赖临考模板，很难写出高分作文。下面是小编为大家整理的大学基础英语写作诀窍，欢迎阅读。

1、灵活改变句子开头

在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等，会使文章增强表现力。

- You can do it well only in this way.→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

- A young woman sat by the window.→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女

2、避免重复使用词语

为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。

- I like reading while my brother likes watching television.→ I like reading while my   brother enjoys watching television.

我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。

3、合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。

- He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要    是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?

- If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。

- She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。

4、运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。

- When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

- As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。

5、结合使用长、短句

在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。

-At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。

6、使用短语代替单词

使用短语代替单词。

- He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

他已决定长大了当老师。

- He doesnt like music.→ He doesnt care much for music.

他不大喜欢音乐。

- He told me that the question was now under discussion.→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.

他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

7、套用某些固定表达

套用某些固定表达

- He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

他太累了，不能再往前走了。

- The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

- Your son is old. He can look after himself now.→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

8、使用地道英语

使用地道英语

- Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.

别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

-Thank you for playing with us.→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

谢谢你陪我玩。

9、综合使用“高级”结构

综合使用“高级”结构

- We had to stand there to catch the offender.→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

- If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

10、引用名言警句点缀

在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。

- As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.- There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.- In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”

I have rested for 10 days. in these days, i felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what.Although i had a lot of things to do, i felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather.I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. In fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when i went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, i was ill.

[英语日记我的生病经历

Today, I still went to my mother’s office. My mother was very busy, so was

my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they

will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my

money. Also I should help them. Although I can’t do something useful, but I

think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the

future, I will take a job and work. It’ time for me to begin to learn how to

work.

The end of the summer， should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy. As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the morning I got up， washed the dishes， sweep the floor， cooking and so on， at noon， I tired， lying on the bed， fan fan， more fortable.