激动人心的旅行用英语怎么说（推荐20篇）

Warmly welcome all of you to visit to China. I hear that you are a Canadian high school students delegation who come to China to exchange learning. I sincerely hope you can have fun in China.

Its a great pity that you only stay for two days in Beijing that you cannot enjoy every tourist attractions. But you can still visit the attractions of the most representative. Firstly, I suggest you going to the Great Wall, which is the longest wall and one of the eight wonders of the world. It was built by hands only, which seems unimaginable. On the second day, you can visit to the Imperial Palace where you can learn more about Chinese history. It was built in 1406 and there were 24 emperors living in there. And then you can go to Summer Palace or Beihai Park.

Beijing is a modern city as well as a historic city where there are many places worth visiting. Given the chance, welcome to travel to Beijing in the future.

热忱欢迎各位参观中国。我听说你是一个加拿大高中学生代表团来中国学习交流。我真诚地希望你能在中国过得开心。

遗憾的是，你只呆一两天在北京，你不能享受每一个旅游景点。但你仍然可以游览的景点中最有代表性的。首先，我建议你去长城，这是最长的墙和一个八世界奇迹。它是由手，这似乎是不可想象的。次日，你可以参观故宫，在那里你可以了解中国的历史。它建于1406，有24位皇帝居住在那里。然后你可以去颐和园或北海公园。

北京是一个现代化的城市以及一个历史悠久的城市，有很多地方值得参观。如果有机会，欢迎来北京旅游的未来。

在一个阳光明媚的上午，运动会开始了，操场上彩旗飞扬，跑道上旌旗飘扬。

当校长宣布运动会开始的时候，“耶”校园里顿时充满了欢呼声，我也随着欢呼起来。

比赛的内容有：立定跳远、60米短跑、100米、200米、400米中长跑和800米长跑等等。

最激动人心的是男子400米中长跑，我们班派出了一元猛将——张驰！只看他先在操场上热身，大约2分钟后，比赛开始了，随着“砰”的一声发令枪响，张弛似离弦的箭，又像脱了缰的野马，飞一般的冲了出去。之前，他的体力还是好的，到了后来，我发现他的速度变慢了。我想，他似乎是体力不支了，因此，我也加入了呐喊的队伍：“张弛！加油！张弛！加油！”他好像是听到我们的声音，迈开双腿、咬紧牙关、摆动手臂，大步流星的向前跑去，终于冲到了第一名的前面！得到了男子400米的第一名！

天空的鸟儿仿佛在为我们加油，好像在观看着激烈的比赛，又好像在议论下一局比赛谁会胜利，可是，谁知道它们在干什么呢？

好一个激动人心的运动会啊！

转眼一个学习又要结束了，大家都期盼着在假期中踏踏实实的玩的愉快，下面是小编帮大家整理的假期旅行英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

【我的假期英语作文篇一】

This year’s National Day I went to Beihai for travel with my friends. As we were afraid Beihai will be too many people on National Day, so we went there on Oct.4. Our first stop is to the Bei Hai silver beach. We found ther are huge people on the beach. Outside the beach, we can’t see the sea but only people. Though I was shock, we still joined the people on the beach quickly. We swam in the sea and played with each other. We all felt happy about that trip.

【我的假期英语作文篇二】

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing . I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it . First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much . Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them . I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

I really have a meaningful holiday. I want to finish doing my homework as soon as possible, so that I can have a lot of free time. I spent three days with my grandparents and help them do some homework. I also visited my old friend, and they go to the park. In addition, I learned how to play tennis, its so cool. And, more importantly, I reviewed their lessons, and preparation of the new curriculum and read some interesting books. This is a wonderful holiday.

【我的假期英语作文篇三】

In my vacation,I went to my aunts house.I miss her really much and I was so excited to see her.I had a lot of fun with my aunt,she taught me how to cook.It was kind hot where my aunt lives,so I stayed at her house for the most of the time.I had so much fun,cant wait to visit her again!

在我成长的道路上，参加过也观看过许许多多的比赛，有跳绳比赛，夹球比赛，还有跑步比赛。但其中最令人印象深刻的是一场在南京大学的200米跑步接力。

一进入南大，一下子进入我眼帘的是一个巨大的操场，起码是我们的好几个操场一样大，我被震撼了。随后，我们做了一些准备工作，就开始比赛了。

每个班都得派出两名队员，其中我们班派出的是速度之王孙吉志和飞毛腿马孙行，运动员们一个接一个进入操场，他们个个生龙活虎，摩拳擦掌。有的在操场上跑，好像在炫耀自己有用不完的力气，有的人原地打坐，好像在为跑前蕴藏力气，还有的正在兴高采烈的像自己的同学招手，好像在说：“你看到了吗，我在这里。”整个操场都沸腾起来了，大声呼喊着自己班的运动员，来为他们打打气，加加油。

这时，广播上喊到：“请各位运动员准备。”他们不敢疏忽怠慢，赶紧回到了起跑线上，这时，在旁边的裁判用洪亮的声音喊到：“预备，跑！”这时，有一个班的运动员一下子就遥遥领先了，而我们班呢？一个第八，一个第九，紧紧的靠在一起，然后，一班的同学就在旁边神气活现的说：“哈哈，我们班第一名。”可是，好景不长他们班的运动员很快就被其他班的超越了，一直到最后了，而我们班呢？一直在五六名徘徊，超不了其他人，我们都为他们捏一把汗，心想“加油呀，一定要超越他们！”我们班的运动员仿佛听到了我们的心声，在最后时候，以飞一般的速度开始了疯狂冲刺，手拼命地挥舞着，使劲的蹬着，发出“嗒，嗒”地声音，好像在演奏一曲优美的圆舞曲，而他们呢，就像一位位舞蹈家，在舞台上拼命地跳起美丽的舞蹈，最后，他们超越了，一个第三，一个第一。我们手舞足蹈大喊：“太好了！”

这次比赛我终生难忘。

周五，我们汉推部全体同学去本部参加了一年一度的运动会开幕式，那情景至今回想起来，都非常激动。

这次的开幕式与以往不同，主题是奥运会，每个班级都选择了一个自己喜欢的国家入场，装扮啦，表演啦都要体现这个国家的特色。我们班选择的是墨西哥，我们身着彩条衣，头戴彩帽，迈着整齐的步伐进场后，随着极富动感的BARBARBAR的音乐，为大家带来了一段有墨西哥风情的草帽舞，挥舞的草帽，奔放的舞姿，那一刻，我觉得自己好像就是墨西哥人！

在近六十个班级的表演中，有一个班级特别让我难忘，他们代表的是阿根廷。在运动员进行曲的伴奏下，这个班级慢慢地走向场地中央，表演队列排齐后，只听音乐一响，阿根廷的球星梅西闪亮登场，足足有十几个假梅西，他们在场地中踢着各种世界杯曾经的比赛用球，旁边的啦啦队跳着整齐划一有力的舞步。没过多久，有些梅西把球扔到了空中，翻完跟头之后又精准地接到了落下的足球，迎来了全场一片贺彩，真是太酷了！

他们的精彩表演一直在我的脑海萦绕，久久不能忘记！

This time, the main destination is Australia, a country which is in the Southern Hemisphere. I want to feel the opposite climate, see never-seen scenery and experience the land and its people and live a quite new life for 7 days.

So I have chosen a travel agent to help me with my journey. They offer Qantas flights the entire journey with free meals and three-star or four-star hotels for accommodation.

The first day:

I will take the Qantas Airways non-stop international flight (QF106) to Sydney, the capital of South Wales and Australia’s oldest largest city and port, to star the trip to Australia, overnight on board.

The second day:

Upon arrival, I will take a bus to visit St. Mary’s Church, Hyde Park and other interests. Then, I will visit the world-famous, Australia’s most beautiful building----the Sydney Opera House. There will be professionals conducting a detailed explanation in the House. By the

evening, I can visit the well-known Darling Harbor; enjoy the Sydney Bridge and a western-style dinner on board.

The third day:

After the breakfast, I will start from Sydney to Wollongong by bus. We drive to the Sea Cliff Bridge, the most beautiful and special part along the road. I can visit in accordance with steep cliffs and built up to 655 meters of overhead bridges to appreciate the beauty of the Pacific. Then I’d go to the cleanest beach of the New South Wales State; visit the first brewery in Wollongong and have lunch there. In the afternoon, I plan to go to Flagstaff Hill and enjoy the quiet and beautiful environment. At last, return to the urban area.

The forth day:

I will take a flight to Cairns, a city which is rounded by palm trees. It’s a tourist city, where there are magnificent mountains, dense rain forests. The forests are the world’s oldest, largest tropical rain forest. I can novel amphibious vehicles traveling around the forests, experience exotic enjoyment. What’s more, I can watch the indigenous people’s wonderful dance performance.

The fifth day:

Take a bus to the Great Barrier Reef Marine Terminal and take a ship to the world-famous Reef. Located off the coast of the north-eastern Australia, it is the world’s largest coral island, which stretches over 2000km, including thousands of coral reefs and shoals, known as “the eighth wonder of the world”. I would watch the colorful sea view, taking a submarine. And I have enough time to enjoy a wide range of water sports. (Including a buffet lunch on the island)

The sixth day:

I would fly to the capital of Queensland----Brisbane. Then I’ll take a visit to the South Bank Parkland where the 1988 world exposition had been held. Go to the City Hall located in the King George

Square. It is the central symbol of Brisbane. Then I will drive to the Gold Coast, which is known as a paradise for tourists. After arrival, I’d visit the Fool Terminal.

The seventh day (the last day):

After breakfast, I will go to the Warner Movie World, which is a theme park of an area of 1.68 square kilometers. I can enjoy the

roller coaster and see a different film production process, great

effects and super performance and a lot of cartoon characters. Then I will go to a farm to pay a visit. There I can experience a real farm life and get close to the koala, kangaroo and take photos with the cute creatures. (I need to pay for the lunch.) At last, I will take the QF505 to Sydney and the QF105 back to Hangzhou.

It is my plan to have a journey abroad. It will cost about 12000 RMB for the agency and I need another sum of money to support my self-consumption and other costs. Now I am excited about my upcoming travel to the very place that I have longed for for a long long time. I can not wait to go there .With my well-prepared plan, I firmly believe that I will have a wonderful journey in Australia.

[7天出国旅行计划英语作文

8月30日，在雅典奥运会室外水上赛场上，正在举行皮划艇比赛。

“砰“，比赛开始了!只见十几只皮艇在水上争先恐后地比赛。我国队员孟关良是个右撇子，而后面一位队员(因为当时太激动，把后面那位的名字给忘了)是个左撇子。他俩极力配合。但可惜的是，我方队员在一开始的时候就落后了好几名。两位队员奋力追赶，一左，一右，一左，一右，终于追上了暂时位居第一的俄罗斯队!当快到终点的时候，我们全家都屏住了呼吸，只见我国队员和俄罗斯队员几乎同时到达终点!因为裁判无法用肉眼判断，所以只有靠监视器判断。而监视器里显示：我国的皮艇和俄罗斯的皮艇到达时，我们以不到十厘米的优势打败了俄罗斯队!全场一片欢呼!

而在绍兴观看皮划艇比赛的孟关良的父母激动地当场就晕了过去。等他们醒来时，身边已经是围满了市领导和记者，这下把孟关良的父母高兴得合不拢嘴!

是啊，孟关良不仅为他的父母争了光，也为祖国和人民争了光!

For most people, they will choose to travelduring holiday because they want to relieve themselves from the high pressureof work. However, it happens quite often that people often ran into trafficjams on the way to travel. Some people think that we can relax ourselves bytraveling no matter of how many people there. Some people would rather to stayin home than going out to travel because they think there are too many people swarminto the scenic spots. In my point of view, I would rather to stay indoorsrather than going out to travel. Reasons are listed below.

Firstly, during holiday, so many peopleswarm into the travel spots that we can’t enjoy ourselves to the full. For mostpeople, they want to travel because during holiday, they can have several days torelieve themselves by traveling. However, so many people crowd together willmake their tour lose the original fun.

Secondly, during holiday, price will berising drastically. It is known to all that you need to spend much more to buythings or taking bus or any other transportation since many retailers will raisegoods’ price during this holiday to get fat profits.

All in all, travel during holiday is not agood choice for us since its inconvenience in traveling among a huge crowd ofpeople and also the dramatically high price for goods and transportations willlet us pay extra money.

上周星期四，我们实验小学举行了别开生面的秋季运动会，运动会有许多项目，比如：两百米跑、三人四足、滚轮胎这些项目真是一个比一个激动人心，尤其是男生的两百米跑。

“砰”，一声枪响，何永超和其他班的同学“嗖”的一声冲出了起点，我们班同学扯着嗓子大喊：“何永超加油!”“快超过他们!”“快!冲啊!再加一把劲儿!”时间一分一秒的过去，好似流水般。眼看着就要到终点了，可何永超却依然跟四班的同学平齐，我们班的拉拉队都急了，这时拉拉队的一员铆足了劲儿，带头喊了起来：“五三加油!五三必胜!我们是最棒的;”不知是一种什么样的力量鼓舞着他。正如他的名字一样：要永远的超过别人，这时他使出了全身的力量，咬紧牙关，那拼了命的样子好似一只被猎豹追赶的羚羊，在惊天动地的呐喊声中。何永超风驰电掣般地第一个冲到了终点!我们激动地又跳又喊，我们的帽子、衣服、全部扔到了空中，全班欢呼雀跃。操场顿时成了欢乐的海洋。

那激动人心的一刻，将永远印在我的脑海中!

记忆深处,有许多令我刻骨铭心的时刻:舞蹈获得一等奖,绘画荣获全国三等奖……但让我记忆犹新的还是作文被当众宣读。

三年级时我的作文写得很糟,总像流水帐似的被老师批评。

可是有一次,却让我感受到了作文给我带来的激动。那天,老师正在评讲作文,作文一直写得不好的我心里可紧张了。老师又要表扬本次作文写得好的同学了:“鸣柳、苏晨靓、帅昊天、宋琦月……”宋琦月?我一下子呆住了,老师说我写得好?我生怕自己听错了,用力打了打自己,啊!有痛意,是真的!是真的!老师表扬我这次作文写得好。嘿!还让我们按次序去朗读,这可是我的第一次啊!我兴奋得脸涨的得通红!

前几个同学都去讲台朗读了,可我却心不在焉,想象着我上去朗读时的情景。

马上就要轮到我了,我有些紧张,心儿怦怦跳个不停!

轮到我了,我拿着作文本,故做镇静地走上了讲台,我偷偷扫视了一下全班同学,只见大家都用羡慕的眼神望着我。我心里乐开了花,真可谓是心花怒放啊!我镇定了一下情绪,声情并茂地朗读起来。渐渐地,我读得越来越投入,越来越忘我,完全进入了文中的境界。读完后,教室里响起了经久不息的掌声。我心里激动极了,这是我第一次当众宣读我的作文,心里像吃了蜜一样甜。

那激动人心的时刻我将终身难忘!

以后,我一定要好好写作文,争取经常得优星,经常被宣读!

We got to Hong Kong early in the morning. It had taken us about 2 hours to come here by plane. It is really an exciting city and very different from Taiyuan. My uncle showed my mother and me around Hong Kong. We visited Hong Kong Park.

我们在清晨到了香港。我们花了大约2个小时的飞机来到这里。这真是一个令人兴奋的城市，和太原完全不同。我叔叔带我和妈妈到处游览。我们参观了香港公园。

After lunch we went to St. Johns Cathedral. It is an old and quiet church. Then we did some shopping in a supermarket and bought a nice watch for my father. On the way back to the hotel we both felt tired but happy. We enjoyed ourselves very much.

午餐后我们去了圣约翰教堂。这是一个古老的、安静的教堂。然后我们在超市购物，买了一只很不错的手表给爸爸。在回酒店的路上，我们都感到很累但很高兴。我们玩的很开心.

Tomorrow we are going to Disneyland.

明天我们要去迪斯尼乐园。

Im happy to have such a good summer holiday.because I will have much time to visit some places of intrest.Im going to Beijing tomorrow,so now I feel very happy.I will go there by plane and stay there for 10 days.This is my first time to go to Beijing,not only the Olympic Games is coming,but also I can learn more knowledges about the Olympic Games.And it is a great chance for me to communicate with foreigners,so I wont miss it.Therefore,now I want to say:Beijing,Im coming!

It was fine for traveling last Sunday . I showed Ann round the museum . she was surprised to see many old things , and she was interested in the King’s hat . She wanted to buy one. I told her it wasn ’t real . Ann kept asking me some other thinges.

When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top , she stopped to point at in and asked me , “ What is that ? ” “ It is a cup . ” I told her .

We had a good time in the museum .

[故宫旅行英语作文

巍巍华山，尽在脚下。悠悠群山，眼下之绿。多么巍峨壮观的景象呀！此情此景，此时此刻，怎能不欣喜若狂激动万分呢！

刚走到山脚下，我便累得直不起腰来，但是老爸鼓励我：“儿子不经历风雨怎能见彩虹？到了山上，一片风光会呈现在你的眼前，那时你会品尝到成功的滋味”。我听了这番话打起了精神继续向山上前进。

到了半山腰我精疲力尽，累得气喘吁吁口角直吐自味，这是老爸又发话了：“要一鼓作气不能半途而废，要知道不到长城非好汉”！我思考良久终于下定决心拼了这一次，我一股做气直接爬到了山顶。

啊！终于到了山顶，和煦的微风拂面，一道道青影映在脸庞，于光福是作怪石嶙峋的山峰，上有碧云蓝天，下有群山连绵。多么秀丽的景象呀！我见景抒情：“岱宗夫如何，齐鲁青未了。造化钟神秀，阴阳害昏晓。荡胸生曾云，决眦入归鸟。会当陵绝顶，一览众山小。”看！眼下还是漂浮着千姿百态的雾。我的心也随着雾气而变化，激动万分手舞足蹈地把《望岳》唱成了慷慨激昂的歌曲。

华山之险冠名天下，我的心情也如华山一样直插云霄到天际。

今年的十月一日国庆节是多么令人激动的一天啊!它不但是举世瞩目的世博会中国国家馆日，也是“嫦娥二号”成功发射的日子。

早在发射之前我就从报纸、电视上了解到“嫦娥二号”是我国第一个自主研发的地月轨道形卫星，装载它的长三丙火箭也是一种大名鼎鼎的火箭，是一个不对称的火箭。

紧张的发射时间到了，我坐在电视机前，双眼直直地盯着屏幕，看到火箭不时冒着水蒸气，真担心它会把里面的化学物质化光，都有点按耐不住了。直到听专家说“火箭出发前会补满这种液体”时，我才放心了，继续坐在电视机前等待火箭的升空。终于等到10秒倒计时了，每过一秒我的心就高一点，心卡到了嗓子眼。随着一声口令，火箭升空了……多么激动人心的一幕，相信全中国人民都在为之欢呼!“一切正常!”当控制室里传来一声声报告正常的声音时，我悬在心里的大石头也终于落了地。

“嫦娥二号”的发射成功，不只是探月史上的一小步，也是我国航天史上积极探索迈向辉煌的一大步。这里面凝结着许许多多工作人员的心血。他们工作了三年，为的就是火箭升空的那一刹那，每一个航天器做完之后又是一个新的开始。我赞扬那些研制航天器的科学家们，你们孜孜不倦的工作就是为了让中国航天史添上光彩的一笔，我感谢你们!

“加油！加油！坚持就是胜利…”一年一度的运动会在同学们的呐喊声下拉开了帷幕。这次运动会与往年不大一样，因为这是在我们学校的新操场上举行。

星期一早上我们在老师的带领下来到学校新操场。刚进入操场，映入眼帘的是彩虹般的跑道，走在上面，像是走在棉花上，舒服极了！操场的正中是一片绿草如茵的足球场，如果说操场是一块五彩的勋章，那么，足球场就是一块镶嵌在胸章中间的绿宝石，在阳光的照耀下闪闪欲动。

运动会期间，我们开展了许多比赛：广播操比赛、跳远比赛、200米跑…其中我最难忘的是50米接力赛。

接力比赛前，运动员们都在热身，有的压压腿、有的弯弯腰、还有的在做拉伸…运动员们像一只展翅欲飞的小鸟，个个摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试，准备在操场上一绝高下，操场上顿时充满了火药味。随着碰的一声，我们班的体委蔡霁韬像离弦的箭冲了出去，一下子拉开了距离，我们班已遥遥领先，第二棒，第三棒…我们班没有掉棒，运动健儿们努力奔跑着，拉拉队为他们加油、鼓劲，一阵阵呐喊声冲破云霄。运动员们把他们的激情和汗水洒在了这片绿茵茵的草地。功夫不负有心人，我们班以优异的成绩获得了全年段接力比赛第一名，这个名次是运动健儿们用汗水和刻苦换来的，我们要学习他们这种坚持不懈、永不放弃的精神。

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[关于旅行的中学英语作文

“肯定又是在家里”我抱怨到。星期五妈妈去上海出差了，只剩下我和爸爸待在家里。我知道我们这个周末肯定待在家里。谁知爸爸说：“妈妈出差去了，我们也去玩吧!”我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵，我说：“真的吗?”爸爸说：“那当然”。我欣喜若狂，因为爸爸是个非常守信用的人，他答应别人的事，他一定会做到。

第二天，果不其然，我们要去旅行了。在路上爸爸叫我发短信给妈妈，我告诉妈妈我们要去旅行了，妈妈回给我说：“你们来了场说走就走的旅行呀!祝你们旅途愉快!”

我们先来到宁波凤凰山游乐园，我远远看见一个大标牌，上面写着“胖子节”三个字。爸爸看了看开心地说：“终于感受到胖的好处了。”因为“胖子节”爸爸受到了优惠，因为爸爸的体重达到了180斤，门票打了5折。我们在那里玩了碰碰车、摩天轮，我还在一个化妆的地方，把脸化成了小猫咪，爸爸哈哈大笑。

晚上爸爸还请我吃了一顿大餐，吃完饭我们来到宾馆里的健身的地方，我看见有个游泳池，泳池的水面非常平静，里面空无一人。爸爸开心的说：“我刚好可以游泳。”我就在岸上的跑步机锻炼跑步，我们度过了一个愉快的夜晚。

我们还去了东钱湖，去了动物园，我们俩玩得不亦乐乎，爸爸把我们旅行中拍的照片差不多都发给了妈妈。妈妈开心地说：“你们夫女俩这场说走就走的旅行，玩得很愉快吗?”

“五二班加油!”“五二班必胜!”加油声一声高过一声，喝彩声一浪高过一浪，这就是我校第四届运动会中女子800米比赛的镜头之一。一想到这次比赛，我就热血沸腾。

那天我参加了女子800米比赛，跑道上的我，心里就像只小兔子紧张地怦怦直跳。比赛开始了。只听司令员“砰”一声枪响。我便努力地向前奔去。一百米，两百米，四百米……一圈过了，这段时间对我来说是多么的漫长，我的腿麻木了，就在我想要放弃时，我听见了，听见了“阮诗婷加油!”这些加油声给了我莫大的鼓励，这股力量仿佛在我身边推着我，迫使我勇往直前。五百米，六百米，七百米……近了，更近了!离胜利就差最后一点了!该冲刺了，我重整旗鼓，抬起僵硬已久的双腿向前冲刺。胜利离我越来越近了20米，10米，5米，我迈着大步跨过终点线。我成功了!同学们个个兴奋无比，大伙全都激动地拥抱在一起……

通过这件事我明白了：只要努力就会成功，不管你付出多少，只要收获了就是最大的喜悦!正所谓“不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹……”这次比赛将会永远留在我记忆的海洋里，成为我最美好的回忆，它将激励我大胆地去追求梦想，我将永远不会忘记这个激动人心的时刻。

20xx年8月8日晚上，随着倒计时：3……2……1……0！顿时，（加上“激动人心的场面在我们的眼前展现：”这样就扣题了。）礼花在空中绽放，形成29只脚印，象征着北京奥运会正迈着阔步向着鸟巢进发。到达了，开幕了，我的心也沸腾了！因为这，又是中国的一大成功。

我们要向众人说明（改成“宣示”更好）：我们申奥成功了！无数次的尝试，无数次的失败，但我们并不放弃。最终，我们成功了，我们成为了第29届的`奥运会东道主。在这里，我们欢迎各国选手，欢迎他们入住奥运村，欢迎他们参加激烈的比赛。但我相信，既然我们中国是东道主，就应该拿出东道主的样子，要勇夺金，争第一。

奥运会精彩的开幕式显示了我们的热情，表达了我们无比激动的心情。20xx面奇特的缶，20xx位伫立的人，形成了一个巨大的阵形，缶手（可换成“鼓手”）击起缶来，就发狠，简直就是忘情了，没命了，那声音就像似千万只猛虎在咆哮，那声音充满着活力和激情，每一声都颤动人心。（充满想像，具体而生动。）

晚上12点左右，“体操王子”李宁出现了，他高举燃烧着的火炬，在“空中跑道”上踩着“祥云”飞奔了一圈，缓缓照亮“祥云画卷”，将奥运火炬在世界传递的景象一一重现出来。（这里的句号应是逗号。）同时也燃烧起了人类的奥运之梦。（本段画面描摹细致。）

20xx年8月8日，一个令炎黄子孙振奋（可改成“激动不已”，这样又可以扣题了）的时刻；20xx年8月8日，一个令华夏儿女铭记的时刻……

一个晴朗的午后，麦田尽头处的一块小空地上，引来了不少围观群众，有大人，也有孩子。

地上有一个用帽子和书包搭成的球门，一个金发小男孩向前弯着腰，手撑着膝盖，全神贯注地盯着前方，很明显，他的右膝盖上包着一层层白色医用纱布，是擦伤或者碰伤的。但是，尽管受了伤，也丝毫打击不了他的小小足球梦，没错，他就是这次比赛的守门员。

在小男孩的斜后方，站着一个棕发碧瞳的男生，他双手背后，双腿微微分开，眼睛直视前方，嘟起嘴巴吹口哨，一副不可一世的样子，他是这次比赛的裁判。

虽说是孩子们的“战争”也有不少大人过来看呢。你瞧，坐在最右边的叔叔，戴着一顶黑色帽子，神态焦急，身体微微向前倾，好像迫不及待地想要过去；一位中年妇女坐在旁边，抱着熟睡的婴儿，嘴角微微上扬，好像在夸奖孩子们的认真、专注；大人都来了，小孩怎么可以不来呢？这不，一个长发女孩就坐在那，双颊泛着红晕，眼眸里充满了期待；地上卧着一只熟睡的小狗，全场只有它对比赛的事不感兴趣，为什么呢？它是跟着主人一起来的，只管呼噜呼噜睡大觉。

突然，一只足球朝小男孩飞来，说时迟，那时快，小男孩朝前一扑球被按住了，对方的计划并没有得逞。小男孩的伤口虽然碰到了地面，可是他一点也不觉得疼，他站起来趁对方正闭着眼睛沾沾自喜，以为自己已经进门时，小男孩奋力一扔，队友一配合，“进门啦！”观众欢呼起来，对手一睁眼，发现球已经进了门，愣在原地，一动不动。

就这样比赛一场接一场，呐喊声一浪高过一浪……

落日的余晖染红了大地，染红了大家的脸颊，比赛仍在继续……

月亮老师评语：一个个鲜活的人物形象从小作者笔下走出，仿佛一支画笔，勾勒出一幅赛事图！