高中关于吸烟有害健康的英语作文（汇编20篇）

小编导语：Happy Valentines Day!2月14情人节是一个全世界性的节日，这天情侣们会在一起共度美好时光，在这浪漫的节日里，温情的情人节祝福怎么能少呢?情人节英文祝福语大全：快为你的中外友人送上温馨的情人节祝福吧。

To the girl of my dreams and the mother of our child: you are the only Valentine for me. 献给我梦中的女孩及我们孩子的母亲：你是我惟一的爱人。

On this Valentines Day, just like every day, all I have is love for you. 如同每一个平常的日子，我在这个情人节里所拥有的东西，就是对你的爱。

I will be your Valentine until the end of time. 我将是你的情人，直到地老天荒。

To my one and only Valentine: I love you. 献给我唯一的爱人：我爱你。

I didn’t think that I could ever trust happiness. Then I met you.Happy Valenti ne’s Day, Dear. 我一直不相信有真正的“幸福”，直到不久以后，我邂逅了你。亲爱的，情人节快乐。

Be genuine and conceal noting.I write every wiod I wand to say on this small card.I wish my honey a happy Valentine’s day. 真诚，不必隐藏，把所有的话语，都写在那小小的贺卡上。祝我新爱的人，情人节快乐。

Sending you a kiss to say I’m glad that you are mine. Happy theday! 送你一个吻，悄悄的说我很高兴你是我的。情人节快乐!

I love you not because of who you are, but because of who I am when I am with you. 我爱你，不是因为你是一个怎样的人，而是因为我喜欢与你在一起时的感觉。

To the world you may be one person, but to me you may be the world. 对于世界而言，你是一个人;但是对于我，你是我的整个世界。

It is graceful grief and sweet sadness to think of you, but in my heart, there is a kind of soft warmth that can’t be expressed with any choice of words. 想你，是一种美丽的忧伤的甜蜜的惆怅，心里面，却是一种用任何语言也无法表达的温馨。

Do you understand the feeling of missing someone? It is just like that you will spend a long hard time to turn the ice-cold water you have drunk into tears. 你知道思念一个人的滋味吗，就像喝了一大杯冰水，然后用很长很长的时间流成热泪。

Those days when we were together appear in my mind time after time, because they were so joyful, happy, blest, disappointing, sad and painful. I miss you ,and miss you so mach…… 常常想起曾和你在一起的那些日子。开心、快乐、幸福、失落、伤心、痛苦的所有日子。很想你，很想你……

Do you know there is someone thinking of you and caring you all the time ? Your smiling eyes are just like the sparkling stars hanging on the curtain of my heart. 你知道么，有个人时时想念着你，惦记你，你含笑的眼睛，象星光闪闪，缀在我的心幕上，夜夜亮晶晶。

Listening to my heart beating. Seeing how much I love you ,I dare to admit how much I love you .When thinking of you, I hope you can receive the passionat words I left for you! 心要让你听见，爱要让你看见，不怕承认对你有多眷恋;想你的时候，盼你能收到我的真情留言!

I miss you not because of my loneliness but I do feel lonely when I miss you. Only when I miss you deeply I feel so lonely. 不是因为寂寞才想你，是因为想你才寂寞。孤独的感觉之所以如此之重，只是因为太想你。

Yesterday,I went to have a picnic with my old classmates.We dated with each other several days ago.And we were all expecting the days come. At last, the excited day came. We went to the part where we have decided to have the picnic. During the picnic ,we talked with each other,played games,and so on. On balance, I had a nice day and I will never forget it.Because it is so happy in the picnic and we remaided so many pleasures things in our childhood.

2we had a picnic in fall last year. first we climbed to the top of the hill. we saw many pupils there. we talked ,laughed and played together. then at picnic time, we shared our food .we saw a beautiful stream near by. but there was much rubbish in it. thats a pity .we thought we should tell the people to protect our living environment. so after our picnic, we put up several signs near the stream. we wrote "please keep the stream clean and beautiful" on the signs. time to go home, we said goodbye each other and we made an appointment of next year.. on our way home, we all thought thats a very interesting picnic.

大概翻译：

昨天，我到有我的老彼此几天给classmates.We野餐ago.And大家都期待的一天来。最后，兴奋那天。我们去的地方，我们决定有野餐的一部分。在野餐，我们彼此交谈，玩游戏等。总的来说，我有一个愉快的一天，我永远不会忘记it.Because是这样的野餐高兴，我们remaided这么多的乐趣在我们的童年的事情。

2we曾在去年秋季野餐。首先，我们爬上了山顶。我们看到有许多学生。我们交谈，笑着一起玩。然后在野餐时，我们分享我们的食物。我们看到了一个美丽的流附近。但有许多内容是垃圾。这是一个遗憾。我们认为我们应该告诉人们保护我们的居住环境。所以我们的野餐后，我们提出了几个附近的流标志。我们说“请保持清洁，美丽的流”的标志。回家的时候，我们彼此说了声再见，我们进行了一个任命明年..在回家的路上，我们都以为这是一个非常有趣的野餐。

There are many festivals in China，During these holidays, my favorite holiday is Chinese New Year.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在中国，一年有很多节日，在这些节日中，我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日，更因为它是新一年的开始，给人们带来新的希望，也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方，人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常，我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，之后家人团座一起，分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一，人们通常会早起，会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里，人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之，春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

I miss you very much, Mum.

I have left you for four days. Maybe it is really a short time. But I feel it is too long. I found that I couldn’t do a lot of things without you. For example, I couldn’t wash my clothes clean. It is too hard for me. I felt it is too troublesome and toilsome, but I’m sixteen years old now. I must be independent. So, Mum, I don’t know what’s what and I’m very stubborn. Sometimes, I disobeied your desire, which made you very angry. Now, I regret it. When I see some white hair in your head, I felt very sad. You are not young nay more. Sometimes you look very haggard. I know that’s because you give too much. You always concerned with my school record, healthy and a lot of other things. My school record always made you very sad. That’s my falt. I’m sorry.

Mum, you are too labbrious. You must have a good rest. I come of my ago now. I will correct my mistakes. You can rest assured!

Mum, I wish you good health and happy. I love you! Mum!(www.kuaidu.com.cn)

Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to become wealthy overnight; some people want to become well-known in the world overnight.I have a lot of dreams, too.When I was a girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogeng one day.But I know, plum flower. So I studied hard and hard for my dream when I was in high school and college.

After graduating from college, I became a teacher. Although I was busy every day, I didnt forget my dream. I still kepIn the knowledge on the road constantly groping forward, and. Now, I have made great achievements, and many of my research papers have been published, and the research results also have a very high application value.I am so happy。 Although the goal of becoming a scientist is far from it, I am still moving forward.

【翻译】

每个人都会有许多梦想。有的人想变得富有，一夜暴富;有的人想一夜成，名扬四海。我也有许多的梦想。当我还是一个女孩的时候，我就梦想着，有朝一日成为一名像华罗庚那样的科学家。但是我知道，梅花香自苦寒来。所以，我在中学和大学时为我实现我的梦想而认真刻苦的学习。

大学毕业后，我成为了一名老师，虽然我每天都很忙碌，但是我没忘记过我的梦想，我仍然不断坚持学习。在求知的道路上不断摸索前进，废寝忘食。现在，我已经小有成就了，我的多篇研究论文相继发表，研究成果也有着极高的应用价值。我很快乐。虽然，成为一名科学家目标还很远，毕竟我还是在不断向前迈进。

Last year, I went to Guilin for travel. On the train, I felt so bored. A

girl who sat next to me was reading a book, which caught my attention. I asked

her about the book, I found that I had read it before and then we discussed

about the novel. We talked happily, when the train arrived, we got off together.

When we got aparted, we promised to keep in touch. We communicated by the

computer. Now a year has passed, we become good friends and I miss her all the

time. She is a genuine friend. I plan to go to Guilin again and then we will

meet.

27th, September of every year is World Tourism Day.

Of course, it is to advocate people to travel often.

Nowadays, as people’s living standard improve, the number and frequency of people to travel is also increasing. Why? I think it may because of the advantage of travel. First of all, travel can make people relaxed. In today’s competitive society, everyone is under great stress.

They may be crazy if they are in that situation in the long term. Going travel, leaving all the troubles behind for a period of time, people will have a good rest and then fight again. Secondly, travel can broaden people’s vision.

People can learn more through what they see and hear.

This knowledge is good for them. Last but not least, travel can enlarge people’s social circle, because they can make new friends on the way of their trip. In conclusion, travel has so many advantages. It is no wonder that there is a World Tourism Day to encourage everyone to go travel.

每年的月二十七是世界旅游日。当然，这是为了提倡人们多旅游而设的。

如今，随着人们生活水平的提高，去旅游的人数和频率都随之增加了。为什么会这样呢？我觉得可能是因为旅游所拥有的优势。首先，旅游可以使人放松。

在当今竞争激烈的社会，每个人都承受着巨大的压力。长期处于这种状态下，他们可能会疯了。

去旅行，把所有的烦恼暂抛脑后，人们将会得到良好的休息，然后再奋斗。

其次，旅游能开阔人们的视野。人们可以通过他们的所见所闻而学习。这些知识对他们是有用的。最后但并非最不重要的，旅行可以扩大人们的社交圈，因为他们可以在旅途中结识新朋友。总之，旅行有很多优点。难怪会有世界旅游日来鼓励大家去旅行。

[高中英语作文：旅游

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吸烟并不会帮你放松，只会逐渐摧毁你的意志，戒烟可以帮你恢复意志力和自信，小编收集了 ，欢迎阅读。

1.烟山有路抽为径，酒海无涯吐为舟。

2.烟路漫漫其修远兮，吾将左右而吸之。

3.香烟担道义，苦茶著文章。

4.南国风光，千里烟飘，万里知道。望椒陵内外，唯烟茫茫;大家忙活，顿失腰包。

5.香烟几时有，弹之问青天。不知你我他她，口袋是何烟。我欲乘烟归去，又恐琼楼玉宇，高处点不燃。

6.戒烟的痛苦不是生理上的疼痛，而是精神层面的自我折磨

7.真相是吸烟一点用也没用

8.任何人都可以轻松戒烟

9.吸烟不仅对健康造成大的伤害，而且也严重浪费钱财

10.吸烟不是一种习惯，而是尼古丁上瘾

11.吸烟真正的作用是尼古丁对戒断症状的暂时缓解

12.吸烟并不会帮你放松，只会逐渐摧毁你的意志，戒烟可以帮你恢复意志力和自信

13.一根接一根的点燃香烟，每天重复这样的过程，是全世界最无聊的事

14.戒烟并不能帮你集中注意力，只会适得其反

15.尼古丁上瘾者永远无法彻底放松，而且毒瘾越深程度越严重

16.香烟只不过是暂时缓解戒断反应

17.吸烟并不能填补空虚，吸烟才是造成空虚的罪魁祸首

18.吸烟不会提高生活质量，只要毁了我们的生活

19.吸烟的本质是毒产瘾

20.戒烟不会放度任何东西，只会给你带好处

21.吸烟是因为第一支产生的烟瘾，之后每一支都是加重这种烟瘾

22.在非吸烟者家里或禁止吸烟声所忍受折磨时，折磨他们的并不是非吸烟者，而是尼古丁这个恶魔

23.吸烟是一种连锁反应，如果不主动戒的话，他会一辈子缠着你

24.尼古丁能消磨我们的意志力，同时又给我们提高意志力的假象

25.床前香烟香，疑是地上霜。举头问明月，低首烫衣裳。

26.恸哭男人怕老婆，冲冠一怒为香烟。

27.粉身碎骨浑不怕，要留烟魂在人间。

28.人生自古谁无死，留取香烟照汗青。

29.有的人抽着，他已经戒了;有的人戒了，他还抽着。

30.你永远不质疑戒烟的决定。

31.你不去等待自己变成非吸烟者，因为转变过程已经发生了。等待只会导致恐惧。

32.你不去等待"启示性的一刻"，也不会故意忘记吸烟这回事。否则只会导致恐惧。

33.你不使用戒烟替代品。

34.你看清所有吸烟者的本质，可怜他们而不是羡慕他们。

35.每支烟都会导致你抽下一支烟，你吸一辈子烟可以连成一个导火索

36.吸烟对身体和精神影响都是积累的，以至于我们根本意识不到这些影响，还以为我们处于正常状态

37.吸烟能让你放松，提高自信心，这是严重的错误

38.戒烟能驱散我们原有的心理阴影

39.吸烟者痛苦是心理上的，是犹豫和怀疑的结果

40.只要坚持三个星期不抽烟，身体对尼古丁的饥渴就会消失

41.吸烟是满足烟瘾，如果把身体和头脑中的毒瘾彻底清除掉，你就没有任何理由吸烟了

42.不存在《一支烟》的说法，吸烟是一个连锁反应，每支烟都会接着吸下一支，直到生命结束

43.吸烟是毒瘾结果，不是你自己问题，你的性格没有任何缺陷

44.吸烟者从吸烟中唯一享受的就是尼古丁戒断症状的暂时缓解

45.吸烟者永远得不到享受，所谓享受只是一种幻觉，吸烟本身十分痛苦，绝没有值得享受的地方

46.每当你想到吸烟这件事时，都会想：耶!我是个非吸烟者!

Nowadays, some discussions about the childrens education and management

have raised the whole social concern. It seems not only about childrens

personal development, but also about the whole countrys future.

There are two main views in debate, which of them is that children should

obey the rules set by parents and teachers. The other is that less control will

help children to deal with their future adult life.

As for the former, the advantages of it seem to be very apparent, which of

them is that children can make a distinction between right and wrong things. And

they will have a sense of principle and responsibility. Of course, the

disadvantages are also very clear. Firstly, children will be lacking in

imagination and creation. Secondly, they cannot make up their mind on their

own.

Concerning the latter, the view seems to be reasonable because in this ways

these children are more clever and active to create something special. However,

the drawbacks couldnt be ignored as a result of a problem that children cannot

get a clear understanding of their lifetime.

Combining the both points, as far as Im concerned, parents and teachers

are supposed to instruct children to obey the primary principle when they do

some deeds. Moreover, children need more freedom to realize their dreams. Only

in this way can the problem be solved perfectly.

In conclusion, we cant only support one side simply. On the contrary, we

ought to choose different measures to educate children flexibly.

Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival。 It usually es in September or October 。On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes。 It is said "Hou Yi" missed his wife，so he made mooncakes。 It looks like the moon。

There are many kinds of mooncakes。 They are small round cakes with meat， nuts or something sweet inside 。 eating mooncakes has been our custom。 Families stay outside in the open air eat a big dinner and mooncakes。 The most important thing is looking at the moon， On that day， the moon kooks brighter and rounder。 We call this moon the full moon。

On that day， families get together， so we call this day getting together。 This is Mid-autumn Day。 I love it very much。 Because on that day I can eat mooncakes。 And my brother es back home。 He works outside all year。 Only that day and the Spring Festival。 He es back。 So that day I am especially happy。 On that day my family gets together。

中秋节是一个中国节日，通常是九月或十月。当天我们经常吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。据说“后羿”想念他的妻子，所以他做了月饼。它看起来像月亮。

有各种各样的月饼。它们是小圆饼，里面有肉，坚果或者里面的甜点。吃月饼是我们的习惯。家人在户外露天吃大餐和月饼。最重要的是看着月亮，在那一天，月亮变得越来越明亮。我们称这个月亮为满月。

在那一天，家庭聚在一起，所以我们称这一天聚在一起。这是中秋节。我非常喜欢。因为那天我可以吃月饼。而且我的兄弟回家了。他全年都在外面工作只有那一天和春节。他回来了。所以那天我特别开心。那天我的家人聚在一起。

The Importance of Details

"The devil is always in the details" is a proverb which means that details determine our success. Therefore, this quotation aims to tell us that every detail is important enough to be paid attention to.

Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldnt pay much attention to details，but those who desire to do something big at once will constantly be haunted by disappointment, frustration or even failures，as when something big " shows up，they can hardly seize the opportunity because of the lack of ability to deal with small things. Keeping an eye on details may help us in many ways. For instance, when we were small children, we were sometimes very careless and there were many lapses in our homework, but if we could pay much more attention to these trifles, we would get a higher mark in the exam. Whats more, when we make decisions, making every detail clear will reduce risks.

To sum up，under no circumstances should we undervalue the importance of details, for paying attention to small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big.

1、Happiness lies first of all in health.

幸福首先在于健康。

2、Cheerfulness is health; its opposite, melancholy, is disease.

欢乐就是健康， 忧郁就是病痛。

3、It is not work that kills, but worry.

工作不损寿， 忧郁才伤身。

4、All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只工作， 不玩耍， 聪明小伙也变儍。

5、People who cannot find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to find time for illness.

没有时间娱乐的人， 迟早得有时间生病。

6、He is wise that knows when he is well enough.

知足为智者。

7、He who lives with his memories becomes old、He who lives with plans for the future remains young.

终日怀旧催人老， 计划未来葆青春。

8、A good conscience is a continual feast.

问心无愧天天乐。

9、An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.

一分预防胜过十分治疗。

10、Diet cures more than doctors.

自己饮食有节， 胜过上门求医。

11、He is happy that thinks himself so.

自乐者常乐。

12、An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

每天一只苹果， 无需医生进门。

13、Better wear out shoes than sheets.

宁愿把鞋子穿漏， 不愿把床单磨破。

14、Health is not valued till sickness comes.

病时方知健康可贵。

15、Leave off with an appetite.

吃得七分饱， 就该离餐桌。

16、He who has good health is young, and he is rich who owes nothing.

健康葆青春， 无债即富足。

17、Laugh and the world laughs with you, weep and you weep alone.

欢笑， 则世界与你同乐； 哭泣， 则独自悲伤。

18、Blessed is the person who is too busy to worry in the daytime, and too sleepy to worry at night.

白天忙得没有时间发愁， 夜里困得来不及发愁的人是真正幸福的。

19、Happy is he who only desires what he may and does what he ought.

不作非分之想又能尽本分的人是快乐的。()

20、There is no greater grief than to recall a time of happiness when in misery.

没有比在悲惨中回忆幸福的时刻更痛苦。

my  winter  holiday  pian

the winter holiday  ia  corning.  i’m  going  to  beijing  next  week.  i  will  go  there  by  piane.  my  perents  are  going  there  with  me.  we  are  going  to  take  a  trip  and  visit  my  aunt.  i  think  we  will  be  happy. 我的寒假计划

我下周要去北京。我将乘飞机去那里。我的父母和我去那里。我们打算去旅行，去看望我的姨妈。我想我们会幸福的。

生命的前提条件就是有强健的体魄，不然没有强健的体魄就没有了生命，有了强健体魄，生命才得以延续。因此强健的体魄对于生命极为重要。

近年来，青少年的体质不断下降，随便你进入一所学校，你都能看到一些"胖墩“可爱的身影，而一副副眼镜也不容乐观的搭了许多同学的鼻梁……针对这些问题，国家也启动了"全国亿万学生阳关体育运动“要求学生参加体育锻炼，上一学期，我校也开展了一次体育锻炼，是集体在操场上跑几圈，尽管我们只跑几圈，但对于我们意义非凡，而对于我更加是意义非凡，因为迎着阳光跑步，结着队儿锻炼为我换来的是健康的体魄和压不垮的坚强意志！

体育为人类做了许多贡献，体育使人类拥有了强健的体魄，可以说，没有体育也就没有健康的人类，因为有句老话说得好，“生命在于运动，有了体育运动”。人的生活才充满酸甜苦辣的感觉，体育，让刘翔创造了世界新纪录，体育，让许多中国人走到了世界的前列。体育是无穷无尽的，我为体育而感到骄傲。

“如果整天我们只知道学习或者工作，即使聪明也会变成傻瓜的”，是的学好知识是固然重要的，但是身体素质也同样重要，因为只有好的身体，学习才能够更好，因此我向同学们提议，让我们一起手拉着手，走出教育，走出班级，走向操场，走向自然，亲近阳关，进行各种体育活动，只有这样，才能让我们的身体和精神世界更强健更加活力。

青春是充满活力的，充满欢声笑语的，因此我们有大量”阳光”的时间去玩，没有任何思想包袱哪怕是慢跑之类的活动，还是玩其他的游戏因此”阳光"和快乐，其实离我们很近，只要我们推开那扇门，那么”阳光“的生活也会朝你走来，因此，健康体魄也会向你招手，想要拥有它，就从现在锻炼吧！

少年智则中国智，少年强则中国强，少年进步则中国进步。所以身为未来的接班人的我们更应该锻炼身体，拥有强健的体魄，以此去努力学习，报效祖国。

对于新世纪的我们，应该必须拥有强健的体魄，这是我们的义务也是我们的责任，只有了健康的体魄，去好好学习，才能为祖国做贡献，这样我们生命才会有意义，有价值。

青春应该这样度过；

我微笑，乐观，自信，坚强。

我轻松，积极，不卑，不抗。

我健康，豁达，心胸宽广。

我将百折不挠，去实现理想。

我要不断超越，走向明天，走向辉煌。

生命对于我们只有一次，何不让自己在有限生命里，做出无限的价值。前提是必须拥有健康的体魄，俗话说；”身体是革命的本钱“。

我已经准备好了，向着阳光，我舞出生命的精彩，为了能更好的面对明天，今天的我需要这阳光体育的锻炼，快乐的奔跑。

我运动，我健康。我运动，我快乐。运动伴我健康成长，伴我一生辉煌。

我呼吁；大家行动起来吧！像我一样为阳光人生而努力，奋斗。

[高中作文：我运动我健康

Today, the young generation likes to stay up, because after a day’s working, they will find fun at night, so they are getting home very late and then wake up late, too. As they are wake up so late, they will ignore their breakfast and wait for the lunch, today people will call the meal brunch, it means to eat things between breakfast and lunch time. The fact is that not eating breakfast is bad for our health, our body hasn’t take in things all the night, we need to take in some nutrition in the morning time, so the body can have the energy to work. Thinking about this, how a machine can work well without electricity, and the breakfast is the electricity. As breakfast is so important, we must have it on time, so our body can work well and keep healthy.

1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题：

1、确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。

2、要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。

3、用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。

在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考：

1、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。

2、使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3、改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。

4、学会使用过渡词。递进furthermore，moreover，besides，in addition，then，etc ;转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc ;总结finally，at last，in brief，to conclude，etc ;强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc ;对比in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc。

5、确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。时态要尽量保持一致。

检查修改：要检查复核，不要写完了事。

要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。

可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰;表达

高中英语高分作文：春节

I like The Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together， just like Christmas in the West. All people living aw

ay from home go back， becoming the busiest time for transportation systems of about half a month from the Spring Festival. Airports， railway stations and long-distance bus stations are crowded with home returnees.

During Spring Festival， the most improtant days are Spring Festival Eve and the first three days.Many customs accompany the Spring Festival.During Spring Festival time， you can see kinds of decorations.you can go to temple fairs and enjoy superb performances of the dances， stilt-walking and amazing acrobatic shows.

so i like it .

I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?

As a middle shool studentfirst you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope.Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Nextkeep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.

I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!

When girls get together, they like gossip. They always talk about the topic of beauty. They will discuss who is the most beautiful girl in school or they will compare the girls and see who is more charming. As the young people, they usually judge people from appearance. The definition of beauty of course is the one who is thinner and has the pretty face. When they ask me which one is more attractive, then I will look at them for a while, because I want to perceive their personality. My view on beauty is not only from appearance as I think most girls have the pretty faces, but also from the inside, only the quality that differentiates them. The pretty faces will fade away anyway, only the quality that helps people to keep charming. So we need to cultivate the good quality.

女孩喜欢八卦，当她们聚在一起时，总是谈论美的话题。她们会讨论谁是学校里最美丽的女孩或者比较谁更有魅力。因为年轻，所以她们通常是从外貌判断一个人，理所当然的认为美丽的定义是瘦跟漂亮的脸蛋。当她们问我哪一个女孩子更有魅力的时候，我会看一会，因为我想想想她们的品行。我觉得大多数女孩都有着漂亮的脸蛋，所以我认为美不仅是外表，还有内心美，只有品行能把她们区分开来。漂亮的面孔会逐渐老去，只有品行可以永远保持魅力。所以我们需要培养良好的品行。

have a sister.Her name is Li Xin.She is fifteen years old now.Like many other middle school students,she has black long hair and always ties them up.But she has a specialty that she can play piano very well.She began to learn the piano at the age of five.She likes piano very much,so she can practice it all the day.She once said that she is happy when playing piano.Until now,she has performed in many places.She is a piano player of some renown.I am proud of her.