有关描写人物的英语作文刘翔(汇集20篇)

From grade one to now, all the teacher makes me very unforgettable, but there is a teacher let me never forget. I wont tell you who she is temporarily, let everyone guess.

She has a head of golden hair, and there were two small plait, although already 30 years old, but still dress up like a little girl, never grow old. Her, and a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, just like the eagle eye (eagle eyes are the brightest, see anything), as long as she saw the classmate speech or desertion, with his eyes looking at the students, the students immediately knowing, listen attentively, and there are some of my classmates speak in secretly, passing notes, read reference books, such as this thing she tell at a glance.

In class, she gave us, always very humor, when some classmates deserted, she said: "so-and-so is puppy love? In which a mm?" With all of us laughed. We answer this question, shes always staring at us, look forward to if we have the answer, it doesnt matter even if the answer is wrong.

She, who is it? Everyone should guess. These unique description, the unique appearance, unique style of class, only one teacher who has she is our dear English teacher, Ms huang!

从一年级到现在，所有老师都令我十分难忘，可是有一位老师让我永远不忘。我暂时先不告诉大家她是谁，让大家猜一猜。

她，有一头金黄的头发，还有两条小辫子，虽然已经三十几岁了，可却还是打扮得像小女孩一样，永远不会老。她，还有一双炯炯有神的眼睛，跟鹰眼一样(鹰的眼睛都是最亮的，什么都看到的)，她只要看到了有同学在讲话或是开小差，就用那双有神的眼睛盯那位同学一下，那同学马上就会意了，就专心听讲了，而且有一些同学在偷偷讲话、传纸条、偷看课外书啊，这之类的事她一眼就看出来了。

她，给我们上课时，总是十分幽默，有一些时候同学开小差了，她就说：“某某某是不是早恋啦?在想哪一个mm啊?”逗得我们大家都哈哈大笑。我们回答问题时，她总是用期待的眼神看着我们，如果我们有回答，就算回答错了也没关系。

她，是谁呢?大家应该都猜出来了吧。这些独特的描写、独特的外貌、独特的上课风格，只有一位老师有具备她就是我们敬爱的英语老师，Ms黄!

The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

[高中写人英语作文

My favorite sports star --- Liu Xiang

Liu Xiang is one of the famous athletes/ players in China. He was born on July 13th, 1983.

In his spare time, he likes singing and playing computer games. He is best at 110-metre hurdle in sports. He got the gold medal in 2004 Athens Olympic Games. And in 2006, he set a new world record with the time of 12.88 seconds.

He didn’t take part in 2008 Beijing Olympics because of the condition of his wound(伤势).But he got the gold medal in 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games. He hopes to to be the winner at 110-metre hurdle in 2012 London Olympic Games.

We think that his dream will come true. We are very proud of him. Good luck to him.

[有关描写人物的英语作文

爸爸是这个世界上最伟大的男人。下面请看语文迷网为大家提供的我的爸爸英语作文，欢迎参考。

【篇一】英语作文： 我的爸爸

Father is also very kind to people. He often invites those poor temporary workers who are far away from home to have dinner with us. He always helps our neighbors repair bikes, fill the flat, fix locks, and so on. Whenever any one is in trouble, he never hesitates to offer his warm hands. All this earns him lots of friends and their respect as well.

Father is filled with enterprise in his life. He lost many chances of studying before for .some reasons. But he has never given up learning all the time. He has read many books on architecture in order to work much better as a house-builder. He has gone through lots of difficulties because of his inadequate education. But he hasnt lost heart at all. He keeps learning with strong will. Now he has become a very excellent worker in his company.

【篇二】英语作文： 我的爸爸

My father is a handsome man . He is tall and medium build. He has short black hair and big eyes.

My father works in a hospital. He is a doctor. He wears a uniform in the hospital. He drives his car go to work. He is a good doctor. He loves his job.He works hard.

My father likes sports. He gets up at 6:00 clock every morning.

Then he runs go out. In the afternoon, he plays basketball.Sometimes

he plays chess with my brother.

My father also likes listening to music and watching TV. He likes

listening to the popular music. He likes action movies best. His favorite movie star is Li Xiaolong.

My father thinks healthy food is good for our health. So we eat apples every day. We dont eat French fries. We often eat vegetables,fruits and fish.

My father is also a humored man. I love my father very much.

【篇三】英语作文： 我的爸爸

My mother and father are funny. They are my dear friends. My mother is not tall, not short but slim. She has a round face, two big eyes, a small nose and small mouth.

She often wears a shirt, a coat, a pair of trousers and boots. She’s beautiful. She is forty-three years old, but she looks so young!And her finger is long and thin. She often uses finger to tooth my ears, wow! Collected by izuowen.com

My father is strong, he is tall and handsome. He is my hero. He has a round face, big eyes, a big nose and a big mouth. He’s tummy little fat. He likes wearing a T-shirt a pair sport shoes.

I love my mother and father. I love my family!

我的爸爸是个个子高高的，眼睛大大的，头发黑黑的……

My father is a tall, big eyes, black hair......

他也是个善良的人，喜欢参加活动……

He is a kind man, like to participate in activities......

我记得有一次我在考试上考砸了。但是爸爸并没骂我还说“以后要好好学习”我现在是个5年级的孩子，还得需要爸爸妈妈的照顾。在我小小的心里爸爸是多么伟大呀!爸爸要工作赚钱养活我们，爸爸每天还要起早贪黑的工作。星期一到星期五爸爸会很早起来为我们做饭……

I remember one time I flunked the exam. But my father did not scold me and said "I will Study hard" is now a grade 5 children, also need to mom and Dad take care. In my small heart father is so great! Dad to work to make money to feed us, dad every day to work from dawn to night work. Monday to Friday, Dad would get up very early and cooks for us......

在我小时候的时候爸爸经常会给我讲故事比如说：《灰姑娘》《小红帽》《白雪公主》……其实我小时候很调皮，经常会摔烂东西，弄坏东西，爸爸都会说：下次小心点不要再摔烂东西了，每个孩子都会出错，知错就改那是好孩子。这句话深深的印在了我的心里。我想对爸爸说：爸爸你真的很伟大，在我的心目中你是我的英雄。

When I was young my father always told me a story "Cinderella" say: "Little Red Riding Hood," "Snow White"...... In fact, I was very naughty, often fall off bad things, to break things, my father would say, next time be careful not to fall off the bad things, every child can go wrong, Zhicuojiugai it is good child. The words impressed deeply in my heart. I want to say to my father: Dad, you really great, you are my hero in my mind.

Lei Feng was a model(模范) soldier, On December 1 8,1940, he was born in a poor farmer family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province. He didnt go to school till 1950. At the age of 18, he worked as a steel worker. He was often praised for (因…受表扬)his good job. On January 8, 1960, he joined the army.

In the same year, he joined the Communist Party. He loved the Party and the people, and always did good for others. As a result(结果), he became a model soldier. After his death, Chairman Mao called on(号召)the people to "Learn from Comrade Lei Feng". The whole nation were moved by his deeds(事迹). Lei Fengs spirit will live in our hearts forever

Ann is one of my friends. She is my classmate. She always dress in blue. I don’t known whether is because of her that my favorite color is blue. She is cute and naive. Our teachers always praise her in front of the class for her excellent study and great personality. I like stay with her. So does she. She likes drawing pictures. To be a painter in the future is her dream. I know she will realize her dream on day.

安是我其中一个朋友。她是我的同学。她总是穿蓝色的衣服。我不知道是否是因为她，我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。她很可爱也很单纯。我们老师总是在全班面前表扬她，因为他优异的学习和良好的性格。我喜欢和她待在一起。她也喜欢和我待在一起。她喜欢画画。她的梦想是将来成为一个画家。我知道总有一天她可以实现她的梦想。

My grandfather has a pair of small eyes, smiling eyes narrowed into a seam, his face engraved with the traces of the years. I am very impressed with him, the most profound is his forgetfulness and stingy.

On one occasion, the sun in the summer sun drying the earth, I was too hot at home, let my grandfather to buy ice cream, Grandpa readily promised. At the store, grandpa bought two ice cream, paid the money to go away, but forgot to find the change, the waiter shouting in the back, grandpa does not know, or I take those changes back. On the way home, Grandpa saw a long lost friend, and grandpa to play chess, the grandfather of the ice cream into the trash, eating the skin, jubilant to play chess, Grandpa suddenly feel right, look down, the original, Grandpa threw the skin as ice cream, snow cake, I was laugh, oh! My grandpa is so forgetful. I remember once, Grandpa and I went to buy food, go to the door locked, went to the market. To the market, Grandpa wanted to buy some tomatoes, even forgot to give money away, but fortunately I remind Grandpa, or else we will be regarded as a thief. Buy vegetables, car home, to the door, Grandpa dig out pocket, said to himself: "hey? Wheres the key?" Grandpa thought carefully, the original lock the door, locked the key inside, only to call the door to the grandmother. Hey! But I cant help him.

My grandfather is not only healthy but also very stingy! When I came home from school in the summer, I felt very hot when I entered the room. When I turned on the electric fan, I was enjoying it. My grandfather turned off the electric fan. He said to me, "its a waste of electricity."! Grandpa fan wind is much stronger than the electric fan, do not believe you try!" Say that finish, the hands of the fan to make the fan fan, and for a while, I will be very cool, and grandpa tired sweating profusely, he is also the provinces electricity tariff grin, hey, my grandfather can really mean!

Look, this is my grandfather who is forgetful and mean!

My dad tall tall, keep a flat head, is a love joke, humor. He often said his eyes can open the "plane", but his eyes covered with bloodshot eyes, may be the reason my father often drink it!

My father is a love of people every night to eat, my father on the side of the glass and wine side and we talk and laugh, while drinking up, he drank a drink to blush, and a look to know to drink A lot of wine, even talking slowly. Sometimes a drink at night, the mother said he wanted to go out, in fact, my father did not drink fun, ran out to drink, drink midnight drunk. Dads friends put him back home, my mother saw his father drunk drunk, angry did not care for my father, but do not worry Dad a person in the living room asleep, told me to help her father back to bed Sleep, wake up the next day dad did not know what happened.

In fact, my father though love to drink, but his love for us a lot.

I remember, 10 years old, in the middle of the night my stomach suddenly hurt, he was from the 7th floor, I came downstairs to see a doctor, watching his father sweating look, I really want to say to him: Dad, Im all right!

As the saying goes, "father loves mountains", my father is such a person.

[小学生写人英语作文：我的爸爸

My English teacher is a woman of medium-height. She is in her thirties. She always has a smile on her face and a kind word for her students. As she is also a little plump, she gives people the impression that she is a patient, responsible and easygoing teacher. This picture of my teacher is true. She devotes herself to the cause of education. She prepares and organizes her lessons so well that we are fully attentive in her class. After class she often gives lessons to the students who have been absent from school because of illness. With her help we have become more and more interested in our English study. Whenever we have problems we will turn to her for help. As a matter of fact, she is more an intimate friend to us than a respected teacher. We have learnt a great deal from her devotion to her work, her conscientiousness in teaching, and her readiness to help others.

My dad is not tall, dark eyes, giving the first feeling is amiable. What he loves is: "Doing people keep trustworthy."

Dad is not only a very wide communication, but also a warm-hearted person. So my father in the community to get to know a lot of close friends, always someone asked him to attend some parties.

Once, I let my father at the weekend to accompany me to Fuyang ecological park to play one day, my father readily agreed. By the end of the week, I was preparing to go to the ecological park with my father, suddenly, the phone rang. From the fathers conversation, I vaguely heard is to invite my father to a friend party. I was so discouraged. Who knows my father said to the man resolutely said: "Im sorry, I have promised his son to the ecological park to play, the child can not speak without a letter, so can not participate, next time it!" Then, put the phone hung up The Happy to accompany me to the ecological park.

On the way to the ecological park, my father took my hand and said, "Children, know why I refuse to attend the party?" I thought for a moment, then hurriedly said: "You are a trustworthy person, promised me "Do not go back!" "That s right." Dad took my shoulder and said, "Since Dad has promised you, it must be done and can not speak." It s a man s truth!

At this time into the ecological park of the door, I suddenly felt that the figure is even more tall father.

Im so proud of having such a dad!

My mother is a clean worker, she has a long hair, perennial hard work, so that she made a hair of a long hair white hair. She has a pair of big eyes, but now it becomes boring. Her face darkened, eyes wrinkles began to rise more. In order to make more money for the family, in order to let me and my brother and other children as comfortable day, my mother swept the streets during the day and night to someone elses restaurant to wash the dishes, she washed every day like a bowl of rice, only to the Late at night, she can drag her tired body to go home.

She for our family to eat a lot of bitter, she will get up at three or four every morning, help us find clothes, boiled porridge to us as breakfast. After doing these things, she also went to the street to clean up. I only know that the cleaners are looked down upon by the people, I told my mother, said: "Mom! You find other work is good, open the parents will be when someone elses children are pointing to you," that persons mother is a clean Ah! Is such a job ah! "I have been looked down upon others, hum! You better find out the job soon." Mother did not speak, she head down, silently tears. My mother did not listen to me, still doing the job, I know my mother did not want to change jobs, it did not force her.

Until now, I understand that the mother is for our family will be so tired, here I want to call the world: mother, I love you!

Everyone has his favorite teacher, so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficult when we began to study English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples, bananas, and oranges. She said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English. ”All the students listened carefully and studied hard. Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class was over, and the fruits were all eaten. From then on, I am more and more interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss Wei!”

Miss Li often sticks to have lessons when she is ill , She looked weak, but still beautiful. Miss Li love us very much, she teaches us so carefully .I think she is a good teacher. We all love her, too.

I think teachers are like candles , giving off light for others by burning themselves 。

每个人都有他最喜欢的老师,我也是。我最喜欢的老师是魏老师,我们的英语老师。我们觉得英语很难,当我们开始学习英语。魏老师有一个好主意来解决这个问题。有一天,魏老师走进教室和一些水果,如苹果,香蕉,橘子。她说:“今天我们要学习这些水果的名字。你可以吃水果,如果你能告诉我他们的名字在英语。“所有的学生都听得很认真,努力学习。有人甚至站起来回答问题。下课,水果都已经被吃掉了。从那时起,我越来越对英语感兴趣,从我的心,我想说:“谢谢你,韦小姐!”

李小姐经常坚持上课,当她病了,她看起来有些虚弱,但依然美丽。李小姐很爱我们,她教我们这么仔细。我认为她是一个好老师。我们都爱她。

我认为老师就像蜡烛,散发光为别人通过燃烧自己。

My father is an ordinary farmer, on the career, on the status of my father are nothing worthy of my pride, but my fathers love for me, but it is meticulous.

People often say "strict parent", but in my eyes, my father and my mother, my father is more kind than my mother. Life no matter how many of our sister to do something wrong, my father always patiently educated us, inspired us.

I clearly remember that my father had never used violence to educate us. It was a summer day, the sun was burning, without a trace of wind. When we work in the ground, inadvertently I found the neighbors of the family of watermelon, has matured, my family has not cooked. Looking at the round and big watermelon, my mouth straight mouth saliva. Suddenly my mind flashed a thought: it is better to pick a taste. Wait until the morning my father and mother came home, I secretly picked a watermelon, sitting under a tree, relish to eat up. Just eat a few mouthfuls, I saw a person from afar. I took a closer look at my father. I hid the watermelon in the back. Dad came to see me panic panic look, my heart suddenly understand a lot. Dad said kindly: "how can children eat, eat their own homes, how can we eat someone else? Besides, how can we have the nerve to get someone elses labor fruit?" Dad patiently guided me, I was ashamed to low Head of the head.

My father is such an ordinary farmer. He taught me in a loving way, encouraged me, and I was proud of having such a father.

Every child has a favorite father, no children are different fathers, I like my father, I will tell you about my father now!

My dad tall tall, thin face, pointed nose, moisten mouth, nose with a pair of big glasses, curved eyebrows.

My father is very kind, never how to criticize me, if I made any mistakes, my father told me some reason. What to do, what should not do, have to tell me.

My father is very economical, he often said to me, to save water, save electricity, my father often said, I had to do so.

My father is busy, busy also nothing, he is the unit on the leadership, generally at home, only my mother and I at dinner table to eat, my father is also outside to eat, sometimes, my father should take me and my mother go together The

My father no love to drink, drunk, home is not sleep. I know my father and mother so hard to work, do not want me to be better.

I love my dad, I love my mom, I love my home more.

"Only my mother is good, mothers like a treasure ... ..." hear this familiar melody, a picture of my moving picture and surfaced in my eyes.

That day, under heavy rain, blowing winds, even the trees outside the window is also staggering. Day crying, I am crying, because I have a fever of 39 degrees. My mother regardless of thirty-seven twenty-one, holding me to the hospital to run, her face wet, can not tell is the rain, sweat, or tears ... ...

Mom finally took me to the hospital, then it is already morning, the doctors are asleep. Mom kept knocking on the door, after a long time the doctor was blind to appear in front of us, his attitude is very bad. Mom busy said: "I am sorry, my son made a high fever, please help him look at it!" Doctor see my mother so polite, attitude also improved. Help me read the disease, the doctor called my nurse sister to help me injections, take medicine ... ...

Home is already 4 oclock in the morning, I lay in bed, see my mother was busy helping me get medicine, when she handed me the drug, I clearly see her hands covered with cocoon, and my heart said no Out of the taste, this pair of hard work is hard-working performance, is the performance of love ah!

Mom, you are my favorite person, I will keep your love in mind, learn, become a knowledgeable person, never live up to your love for me. Mom, here, I want to say thank you, but also say "I love you!"

My mother has a pair of small eyes, smiling and narrowing into a seam. She

had a small cherry mouth under her straight nose. My mothers hair is a little

different - its curly, and shes joked that she doesnt need a perm.

My mother likes cooking. When mum is free, she will cook delicious meals

for my brother and me. There are her best fried dumplings, spicy dry pot

bullfrogs and crispy fried chicken legs. My brother says they are better than

KFC chicken legs.

Mother is very kind. Every time we meet beggars in the street, my mother

will give them change and teach me to be helpful.

I love my mother.

We three good friends, may be small strong grade is a bit poor, so, I also use the subject Im good at learning methods to teach jack Bauer. Gradually, our result to rise slightly.

However, things are not we imagine so well. At that time is late autumn, is going to enter the winter, the weather is cold, and we go home late again, mom and dad worry about nature. One day, we saw the tsuen wan son seems to be some sad, with his head down in their seats, we immediately ran past, asked her what happened? But she still dont talk with his head down. We all dont understand what is going on? So we have to forget it, but we knew that there must be some great things, tsuen wan son wont like that, because, in our eyes, everyone she is a cheerful girl.

In the third grade, I met a girl called zhang zheyu, but she was very cute when she didnt look at her name. She had large, watery eyes, as if they could talk, and she was full of reiki. She has a very long braid and beautiful black hair. She has a very cheerful disposition, and sometimes makes people laugh. Soon we became good friends.

In the winter of 1953, a powerful jump from a Chinese woman attracted world attention.

Twenty-year-old Chinese athlete Zheng Fengrong shattered the womens high jump world record with a leap of 1.77 metres in a Beijing athletic meet on November 17, 1957.

The new record, the first womens world record for the Peoples Republic of China, was one centimetre higher than the old mark held by American Mildred McDaniel .

The jump also made Zheng the first Asian athlete to break a world track and field record since 1936.

The record jump, although by a tiny margin, was described by the foreign media as "an explosive jump" because it generated Chinas first athletic world record.

Dubbed " a spring swallow （燕子） awakening （唤醒了）Chinese sports, " Zheng sent a message to the world that China was Nolonger the "sick man of the East. "

Born in the spring city of Jinan, Shandong Province, Zheng, who stands at 1.70 metres, has a good physique and a skillful scissor----sharp jump which was seldom seen among top jumpers in the world.

She once leapt 1.78 metres, a national record in 1963.

She claimed a well-merited place in sporting history when her achievement was listed in the Guinness Book of World Records （吉尼斯世界纪录） .

Due to her contribution （贡献） to athletics, Zheng was awarded a series of honours. She was named among the nations greatest athletes （运动员） in 1984.

My grandfather is very kind to me. He loves me very much. I am the apple of his eye, but when it comes to my study he is very strict. Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework. With his help, I have been doing well in my studies. My grandfather is also warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took the girl to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings. My grandfather is a kind and easy-going man, but now he is living in another city with my aunt. We all miss him very much and I hope that I can go to visit him soon.

我爷爷对我很好。他很爱我。我是他的掌上明珠,但当涉及到我的学习他是非常严格的。每天他都要花一个多小时检查我的作业。在他的帮助下,我在我的学习一直非常好。我的祖父也热心的邻居,总是乐于帮助他们。有一天,一个女孩谁是他的一个邻居她的腿不小心受伤。我祖父带女孩去医院,并用自己的积蓄支付了费用。我的祖父是一个善良和随和的人,但现在他和我阿姨住在另一个城市。我们都很想他,我希望我很快就可以去拜访他。

写人的英语作文在高考中不少见，什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。

写人记叙文，一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，应根据要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。

【几点注意】

1.使用正确人称和时态。

①时态：

一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

②人称：第一人称或第三人称

2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等，包括所给的全部信息点，不能遗漏或随意添加。

3.对所给的信息进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。

4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

【常见词语】

①外貌特征：

pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big

smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, …

②性格特点：

absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent,

lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …

③童年情况：

as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,

spend his childhood in, ...

④兴趣爱好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…

⑤教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s

degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …

⑥ 成就或事迹：

become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the

Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,

concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...

⑦他人评价：

an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be

considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make

great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...

例文

你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿，介绍赵郁的成长经历。

注意： 1、词数不少于60。

2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：首席技师 chief technician

Ordinary but Great

We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good

at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

______________________________________

【范文】

Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.

Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

【评析】

1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息：姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组，突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历)，内容完整、详略得当，体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

2. 正确使用人称(第三人称)，灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词，使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

3. 语言规范，表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式，如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等，增加了文章的亮点。