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春天,又称春季,是一年中的第一个季节,时间范围指立春至立夏期间,所包含节气有立春、雨水、惊蛰、春分、清明、谷雨。是万物复苏的季节。下面是小编带来的对我而言的春天小学优秀满分日记,希望你能够喜欢!

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小学二年级英语作文:我的学校

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I love my campus, the beautiful campus.

In school, teaching building eight golden characters on the wall are greeted, "harmonious, bold and unrestrained, exploration, innovation", this is the school motto of our school.

Right, foot on the way with the stones of cobblestone, unknowingly came to the gallery. Corridors, greeted the vine climb to the top of gallery to for students to keep out the sun. The class was over, the students all like to play here. The park has a small bamboo forest, spring, small bamboo forests of bamboo shoots crowds of his head.

Go further to the right, it is the playground of school. Have children in the rope skipping, running on the playground... there are a large camphor tree, spring, pulled out big camphor tree buds, summer big camphor tree is like a big green umbrella, to shade the students. In winter, at school, large camphor tree was covered with snow, like a big white hat. Big camphor tree is very charming all the year round, the classmates all like to go there to play, after gym class. Big camphor tree is like a kindly grandfather, to meet us to school every day, has watched the us to leave.

Campus, in the most distinctive is the teaching building of the hall, walked into the hall, the most noteworthy is that hung on the hall on top of the "west", "west" with photo is miyoshi students, the teacher I hope we can spread your wings and fly like a bird.

A circle around the school, you should be familiar with my campus is a bit, then please come to my school to watch!

我爱我的校园,这个美丽的校园。

走进校门,教学楼墙上的八个金光闪闪的大字映入眼帘,“和谐、奔放、探究、创新”,这是我们学校的校训。

向右走,脚踩在用一颗颗鹅卵石铺成的石子路上,不知不觉来到了长廊。长廊里,密密麻麻的藤攀上了廊顶,为同学们遮挡太阳。下课了,同学们都喜欢到这里玩。公园里有一片小竹林,春天到了,小竹林里的笋成群的探出头来。

再往右走,便是学校的操场。有小朋友在跳绳、跑步······操场上还有一棵大樟树,春天,大樟树抽出来新芽,夏天大樟树像一把绿色的大伞,为同学们遮阳。冬天,下学了,大樟树上盖满了雪,就像一顶巨大的白帽子。大樟树一年四季都非常迷人,同学们上完体育课时都喜欢去那儿玩耍、嬉戏。大樟树就像一位慈祥的老爷爷,每天迎接我们上学,有目送着我们离开。

校园里,最有特色的要数教学楼里的大厅了,走进大厅,最引人注意的是那挂在厅顶上的“西子鸟”,“西子鸟”上贴的都是三好学生的照片,老师希望我们能像小鸟一样展翅飞翔。

绕了学校一圈,你应该对我的校园有点熟悉了吧,那么就请来我的学校细细观赏吧!

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我的妈妈个子高高的,她喜欢留短发。她有一双又黑又亮的、葡萄似的大眼睛,一张红扑扑的脸蛋,像是一个红苹果。樱红的嘴唇上时不时的露出甜蜜的笑意,漂亮极了。

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Every night, the mother also urged me to help me to do my homework, read books, together with my endorsement. My mother is very strict with my study, never relax. She took my life care only. The examination of second, is the mother of good discipline.

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After school on Friday, my mother and I went for a walk in the park.

公园里的花散发着淡淡的清香,小草从地下钻出来了,柳树摇着绿色的长辫子。但是我发现有人带着小狗在草地上跑着,有的小狗在草地上随地大小便,草地就搞得很脏,小狗的粪便污染了公园的环境

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I think every one of us went to the park to the people should be small animal, do not pollute the environment freely, so that our earth will be more beautiful.

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My name is wang fengyi. i’m a beautiful girl. i have a happy family. there are three people in my family, they are my father, my mother and i.

I’m ten years old this year. i’m a pupil . i’m in liu shi fu xiao promary school, class one, grade three. there are thirty-nine classmates in my class. i’m very excellent, because i always study very hard. i like english, chinese, math and muisc. i’m good at dance, i often show evrywhere on festival and holiday. i’m very humorous, so i’m very happy everyday.

I have a pet, the pet is a yellow rabbit. it is very cute. i sometime plant vegetables in my backyard.

My mother’s surname is xu. she’s thirty-five years old. she is short, but she is very prettyish. she is a designer. she can draw many many beautiful pictures. she always does housework evryday. she likes to watch tv.

My father’s surname is wang. he is fourty years old. he is tall, he is handsome. he is a engineer, his company built shanghai zhengda square in 2001. he is very clever. he likes ponder every day , he likes reading and chess very much.

We often play games together in the evening. we usually go to the park on sunday.

I love my partents very mch, and my partents love me, too. we are very happy family!

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My school is Tailan primary school, Thats a good place,this is a beautiful school.

There are many flowers, many classrooms,many leaves, many offices, a large hall, a playground in our school, in the playground we can run and play.also there is a garden in my school, many flowers and trees in it, we often walk in the garden after lunch.

I like my school very much! Do you like my school?

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Last Sunday, our class held aSpringOutingin the forest park. It was a nice day. The sun was shining brightly and the flowers were swaying in the spring breeze. We took a lot of pictures and had our favorite snacks on the bench. The girls talked about their favorite movie starts and the boys played football on the ground. We had so much fun.

I love spring outing because we don’t need to do the homework.

上个星期天,我们班组织了一次春游活动。那天真是个好天气,阳光明媚,鲜花在春风中摇曳。我们都很开心。我们照了很多的相片,并坐在长凳上吃我们最爱的零食。女孩子们谈论她们最爱的电影明星,男孩子们在草地上踢足球。我们玩得太开心了。

我爱春游,因为这一天我们不用写作业。

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1. There were some fruit trees on the farm.(改为一般疑问句)

Were there any fruit trees on the farm?

2、Can I watch TV now? (肯定回答)

Yes, you can.

3、Does your sister come home now?(否定回答)

No, she doesn’t.

4、It means ‘Danger’. (改为一般疑问句 )

Does it mean ‘Danger’.

5. He asks Ben some questions about public signs. (转为现在进行时)

He is asking Ben some questions about public signs.

6.That sign means Keep off the grass(改为同义句)

That sign means we should keep off the grass.

7. They mean different things.(改为一般疑问句)

Do they mean different things?

8. He sees some public signs in the park.(改为否定句)

He doesn’t see any public signs in the park.

9. It means Danger!(对划线部分提问)

What does it mean?

10. They are watching TV now.(用every Sunday代替now)

They watch TV every Sunday.

11.Today is Saturday. (对画线部分提问)

What day is it today?

12.He always has a lot of questions. (改为一般疑问句)

Does he always have a lot of questions?

13.Can I go in? (改为肯定句)

I can go in.

14.He can see some public signs in the park. (对画线部分提问)

What can he see in the park?

15.There are a lot of signs here. (改为一般疑问句)

Are there a lot of signs here?

16.The sign means ‘Be quiet’ ! (改为否定句)

The sign doesn’t mean ‘ Be quiet’.

17.Mr Smith is taking a walk in the park. (对画线部分提问)

What is Mr Smith doing in the park?

18.You should come. (改为否定句)

You shouldn’t come.

19.There is no one nearby. (同义句改写)

There is nobody nearby.

20.There is someone nearby. (改为否定句)

There isn’t anyone nearby.

21.I would like a yo-yo as a New Year’s present. (对画线部分提问)

What would you like as a New Year’s present?

22.It is the second of January. (对画线部分提问)

What is the date?

23.My grandfather’s birthday is on the fifth of November. (对画线部分提问)

When is your grandfather’s birthday?

24.Ben lives in China now. (改为一般疑问句,并作否定回答)

Does Ben live in China now?

25. There were a lot of oranges on the farm.(改为否定句)

There weren’t a lot of oranges on the farm.

26.We are talking about Helen’s birthday party. (改为一般疑问句,并作肯定回

答)

Are you talking about Helen’s birthday party? Yes, we are.

27.My birthday is in August. (对画线部分提问)

When’s your birthday?

28.He would like to come. (改为一般疑问句)

Would he like to come?

29.I’d like to go there. (对画线部分提问)

What would you like to do?

30.My mother’d like to give me a candle. (改为否定句)

My mother would not like to give me a candle.

31.Today Ben is visiting Jim. (对画线部分提问)

What is Ben doing today?

32.I was here a moment ago. (改为否定句)

I wasn’t here a moment ago.

33.He was there. (改为一般疑问句)

Was he there?

34.The bag was on the desk. (改为复数形式)

The bags were on the desk.

35.The boy runs. (用now改写句子)

The boy is running now.

36.They are in the classroom. (对画线部分提问)

Where are they?

37.The films are on the ground. (用a moment ago改写句子)

The films were on the ground a moment ago.

38.He writes a diary everyday. (改为复数形式)

They write some diaries everyday.

39 Kick it to me.( 改为否定句)

Don’t kick it to me.

40. Mr. Green cooked a lot of food. (划线提问)

What did Mr Green do?

41.What date is it today? (同义句改写)

What’s the date today?

42.Would you like to have a VCD? (作肯定回答)

Yes, I’d like to.

43. LinTao’s grandpa showed us his stamp. (改为同义句)

LinTao’s grandpa showed his stamp to us.

44. You can pick them up for me.(一般疑问句)

Can you pick them up for me?

45. Ben and Jim often go home together after school.(一般疑问句)

Do Ben and Jim often go home together after school?

46. Mr. Green cooked a lot of food on Wednesday.(改为一般疑问句)

Did Mr. Green cook a lot of food on Wednesday?

47. We played games and planted flowers.(改为否定句)

We didn’t play games and plant flowers

48、It means ‘No Parking’.(划线部分提问)

What does it mean?

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I am xxx and I am 12 years old. My favorite sports include basketball, swim and football. One of my favorite stars is Liu Xiang because he is the fastest runner in the world and a pride of our country.

I have love fruits like watermelon, grapes, banana, and so forth. When I have time, I like watching TV, playing games on my computer, surfing the web, and reading. I have a lot of friends and we often play football together.

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As a small child, I always want to grow up soon, because when I grow up, I

can know what kind of job I should do. Sometimes I am so confused about my

future. If I dont study well, what will happen to my life. All of these

problems annoy me all the time. It seems that the only way to solve them is to

be independent. My parents tell me that they want me to be happy and enjoy every

stage of my life. They understand the things I worry about, because they have

the same problem when they are children. I will figure out what I want some day

in the process of growing up.

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篇19:感恩父母的小学英语作文

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导语:父母的爱就像大海取之不尽,用之不竭。父母养育的恩情,我们无论如何也难以回报,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Dear dad and mum,youre so selfless that you always keep all good things for me.Youre so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever .

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亲爱的爸爸妈妈,你是如此的无私,你总是把所有好的东西给我。你很勤奋,你要继续工作,整天为了生计。谢谢你给我的生命。谢谢你的爱,请相信我。我会努力的,我想看到你眼中的微笑。我永远爱你。

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篇20:小学英语写作方法和技巧

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要写好英语作文,具体要做到以下几点:

注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持

坚持英语阅读的习惯,不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度,更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维,从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。

(1)平时多读,积累句型:读的越多,语感欲强烈,写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了,另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。

(2)选出一些代表性范文精读:选出不同题材的优秀作文范文,读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文,并做到学以致用。

注重平时的写作训练

英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记,保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练,正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。

五步写出一篇好作文

什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单,同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外,我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。

(1)认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式

时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago,last…过去时;next,in…将来时等

人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如:

Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

(2)找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

(3)成文时表述正确,文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

(4)文章结构清晰,重点句型画龙点睛,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次,考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词:

1.表文章结构顺序:

First of all, Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…

And then, Finally, In the end,At last

2.表并列补充关系的:

What is more, Besides,Moreover,

3.表转折对比关系的:

However, On the contrary, but

On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…, while others…

4.表因果关系的:

Because, As、So, Therefore, As a result

5.表换一种方式表达:

In other words

6.表进行举例说明:

For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实:In fact

8.表达自己观点:

As far as I know, In myopinion

9.表总结:

In short, In a word.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例:

I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.

感叹句举例:

How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!

动名词做主语举例:

Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.

常用状语从句句型:

1)时间:

when, not…until(直到…才…), as soon as(一…就…)

2)目的:

so that + clause; (为了)

3)结果:

so…that…(如此…以至于…), too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件:

if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)

5)比较:

as…as…(与…一样), not so…as…, than

(5)认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:

We livemore and more comfortable.

改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.

改正:much information (不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.

改正:There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)

4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.

改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

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