0英语作文小学范文10篇【优秀20篇】
春天，又称春季，是一年中的第一个季节，时间范围指立春至立夏期间，所包含节气有立春、雨水、惊蛰、春分、清明、谷雨。是万物复苏的季节。下面是小编带来的对我而言的春天小学优秀满分日记，希望你能够喜欢！
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+ 加入清单According to a recent article on Newsweek concerning children’s’ education,
there is an increasing number of parents worrying their kids to an extreme
extent, depriving them of independence and freedom by keeping them around
parents all the time.
Some people applaud this phenomenon, suggesting that kids’ safety is the
most important. Thus, they’d better not enter the hazardous society without
supervision unless they become adults. From my point of view, some of their
opinion is correct but keeping children away from independence is a completely
erroneous decision. The reasons are as follows:
First and foremost, “locking kids” may hinder their healthy growth, both
mentally and physically. The kids who are locked may have heavy reliance on
their parents, as their comprehensive skills such as communication skills or
cooperative spirit being prevented from developing.
Secondly, what these parents fail to see is the fact that the crime rate
and accidents aren’t on a rapid rise. It is the abuse of mass media that make
crimes and violence more scary. The parents, who love their kids so much, are
completely forced to live under the illusion that our society is full of riots
or threats of accidents. Thus, kids can be allowed to have more freedom such as
walking to school by himself, for instance.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that
kids should be given more freedom by parents’ effort. At the same time, parents
should take many factors into consideration such as the time restriction for
children and the evaluation to kids’ maturity and capability. Only then can they
enjoy a safe and meaningful childhood.
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篇1：小学生英语作文：我的爸爸
全文共 2324 字
+ 加入清单爸爸用他的勤劳给我们创造了美好的生活，下面是写我的爸爸英语作文范文，希望对你有帮助。
我的爸爸英语作文篇一：
My Father My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses. Everyone says he is a kind-hearted man. He often helps his neighbours and some strangers whom he doesnt know at all. He has really done a lot for others. I dont like him to do so because I think it has taken him too much time. When I discourage him, he always says with a smile,The world needs warm hearts. My father loves his family, and loves his work even better. In the company, he is called workaholic He spends most of his time working, and often forgets to have meals or to go to bed.As a result,he doesnt enjoy good health. My father likes reading in his spare time. He told me reading was very interesting. I became interested in reading little by little. I like books, because they help me in many ways. My father has a bad habit he likes smoking very much. I hate it. See, the house is full of smoke. I know its bad for his health as well as mothers and mine. I advise him to give up smoking. Im sure he will follow my advice some day. Such is my father. I am proud of having such a good father.
我的爸爸 我的爸爸个子高高的，戴着一副眼镜。大家都说他是个好心肠的人。他经常帮邻居排忧解难，对于一些他压根不认识的陌生人，他也总是尽力相助。他为别人真是付出了许多许多。我不愿意他这么做，因为这花费了他太多的时间。每当我劝阻他时，爸爸总是笑着说：“世界需要热心肠嘛!” 爸爸热爱家庭，更注重事业，公司里的人都叫他“工作狂”。他把大部分时间都用于工作，为工作他常常废寝忘食。过度的劳累使他的健康状况欠佳。 爸爸闲暇时爱读书。他告诉我，读书很有趣。我渐渐地对读书产生了兴趣。我爱上了书，因为书对我帮助很大。 爸爸有个坏习惯——太爱吸烟。我不喜欢他抽烟。瞧，家里充满了烟味。我知道吸烟有害他的健康，对我和妈妈也有害无益。我建议他戒烟。我相信总有一天他会这么做的。 这就是我的爸爸，我为有这样的好爸爸而自豪。
我的爸爸英语作文篇二：
My father is a teacher.
He teaches very well.
His students like him.
I love my father.
He oftern helps me when I study.
He is very good at playing basketball.
He also plays pingpang well.
I am no match for him in all ball games.
He is not good at writing compositions.
He doesnt help me when I have difficulty in writing.
What a pity!
Thats why I go to other people for help when i write.
我的爸爸英语作文篇三：
My father is thirty-five years old. He is an attractive middle-age. He is an engineer, working in a big factory of my city. His working time is regular, going to office at eight o’clock and coming home at six o’clock. He works hard and becomes an important person in his factory. At weekends, he does not go to work, so that he usually stays at home or take my mother and I go out. In my opinion, my father is a great person. He brings happiness to my family.
篇2：小学英语作文-我的朋友MyFriend
全文共 280 字
+ 加入清单我的朋友
Im Sally .I have a friend.He name is Bess. She is nine.Shes very cute. She has two big oyes and a small nose, We are in the sane school.We are learning and playing togethar. She likes dolphin and purple. I like dolphin and purple,too.
We are good friend.
篇3：关于幽默英语作文小学
全文共 600 字
+ 加入清单I like to see American TV series so much, because not only the plot
attracts me so much, but also I can learn the English spoken language. Recently,
I fall in love with Two Broke Girls, it is so funny and makes me laugh happily.
Besides the humorous plot, I am also inspired by the characters’ spirit. Though
the two girls are poor and work as the waitress in the small restaurant, they
never give up their dreams. They make the plans for their dreams, even they meet
all kinds of difficulties, they are still positive about their future. I learn
things from them, I keep the positive attitude towards life.
篇4：英语生日会小学五年级日记
全文共 293 字
+ 加入清单我们到了那里，我看到许许多多的小朋友在看动画片呢。这是，老师来了，给我们唱起来生日歌，我们非常开心。接着老师让我们做一个游戏。老师说：‘’让一个女生，一个男生上去。2人把双手高高举起，然后剩下的同学 手拉手在一起钻山洞，谁被捉住了就要换人。“游戏开始了，我们就都跑了起来。老师说：”STOP。“我被捉住了，我换人了，我后面的杨飞翼也被捉住了。
下面老师给我们发了一顶小帽子，小洋烛灯，还拿来三层的蛋糕，老师让我们手拉手，许一个心愿。开始吃蛋糕了，我们非常兴奋，坐在我旁边的小朋友吃的满脸都是。笑的我们乐开了嘴。
要是下次还能来参加生日会，那该多好呀！
篇5：幸运的一天小学六年级英语作文
全文共 884 字
+ 加入清单Today is a fine day.And I am very lucky.
In the morning,I’m go fishing in a river with my parents.As time goes by,I am fishing a big fish.I am very happy,but my parents have no one fish.Next,I am fishing a small fish,but I still happy.Because my parents still have no one fish.It’s time to go home,I am fishing ten fishs,but my parents are only fishing a small fish.In the afternoon,I am playing football with my buddies.MingMing has the ball,he is kicking it to me.I am kicking the ball.It’s a beautiful goal. Next, PingPing has the ball,he is kicking to Mike.Now,Mike has the ball,he is kicking it.It’s a goal.Now,we are winning.
Today I am very lucky.And I am so happy.
今天是晴朗的一天。我很幸运。
在早上,我去钓鱼和我的父母在河里。随着时间的流逝,我钓一条大鱼。我很高兴,但我父母没有一条鱼。接下来,我钓鱼的小鱼,但我仍然高兴。因为我的父母还没有一条鱼。是时候回家了,我钓鱼十条鱼,但我的父母只是捕捞小鱼。在下午,我和我的朋友踢足球。明明有球,他是踢我。我踢球。那是一个美丽的目标。接下来,记者拿球,他是迈克踢。现在,迈克拿球,他是踢它。这是一个目标。现在,我们正在赢得。
今天我很幸运。和我很高兴。
篇6：小学暑假计划英语作文
全文共 992 字
+ 加入清单导语：每当暑假一到,我都会很高兴.想到有两个月的时间可以不用上课,那简直就是一年当中最美好的时光了。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!
Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.
First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve myEnglish.
Then, I will see some funny comedies. They can relax myself!
If I have enough time,I will go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.Well stay there for three days. We also will do a lot of things there,for examper，playingvolleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.and so on.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever have been going.
I will try my best to do these tings! I hope I have a good time 。
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我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然，我有许多事情要准备。
首先，我要制定计划关于我的假期。我将要做我的家庭作业每天5个小时，我想读一些著名的英文书籍，来提高我的英语。
然后，我将会看一些有趣的喜剧。他们能使我放松!
如果我有足够的时间，我将会去海滩。我将和我父母和堂(表)兄弟姐妹。我们会在那里待三天。我们也将会在这儿做很多事情，例如，打沙滩排球，冲浪，在晚上烧烤，等等。这次旅行将会是我曾经去过的一个极好的地方。
我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我希望我过得开心。
我的暑假计划英语作文
篇7：圣诞的小学生英语作文
全文共 965 字
+ 加入清单Christmas is coming
I like christmas, it is just like our spring festival.
Maybe the spring festival is much more important and interesting than christmas, but i like christmas day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during christmas when it is snowy,
Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine i am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on.Wwhat a beautiful place! so we can also call christmas “snowy lovely day.”
On christmas day, shops are red and green. There are so many christmas cards, christmas hats, christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “merry christmas.” By the way, I think studying can also become much more interesting.christmas is coming, it also means a new year will come.Let’s study harder to welcome the new year!
篇8：小学五年级读书的好处英语作文
全文共 815 字
+ 加入清单its generally considered that reading do a lot of benefit to our students.not only can it make our after-school life more meaningful and corlourful,but it can expand our horizons.as a result,with reading more,we would grow into a better person.
however, in current days,many of us spend most of the leisure time in playing games or surfing the internet,instead of reading. its a pity to find it less and less our students are interesting in reading,or have formed a habit of reading.
so,in order to revive reading,this beneficial activity,wed better take action right now.lets read together,learn together and grow tergether!
大家都普遍认为读书对我们学生有莫大的益处.读书不仅丰富我们的课余时间,而且能拓宽我们的视野.所以,读书能使我们成长成为一个更优秀的人.
然而,在当下,我们中多数人都把大部分空闲时间耗费在玩游戏或者上网上,而不是用来读书.令人遗憾的是,我们越来越少学生对读书感兴趣,或是有读书的习惯.
所以,为了使读书,这种有益的活动重新流行起来,我们最好马上行动起来.让我们一同阅读,一同学习,一同成长!
篇9：小学作文：第一次学英语
全文共 398 字
+ 加入清单下午，还是万里无云，大大太阳当空照。而我心情也一样，因为我要去学英语了。在路上，妈妈千叮咛万嘱咐：“说学英语一定要认真，一点也马虎不得，不然，就学不好读不准。”“哦，知道了。”我似懂非懂，怀着好奇的心情，不知不觉就来到了学英语的地方，在老师的指导下，来到了教室里。
过了一会儿，开始上课了。老师先教我们三个字母，还做了三个形状。接着，老师又教我们蜜蜂、大海、树的单词和音标，还做了手势。同学们跟老师一边读单词，一边做手势很快就学会了。老师见大家都会了，就玩了一个叫小火车的游戏，轮到我了，老师问：“树怎么读?”我张口就念了起来，老师说我念的不错，还表扬了我。不一会儿，游戏结束了。老师又开始绘声绘色地把课讲了起来，大家也聚精会神地听着。大概是第一次接触英语的缘故，时间越长我就越听越糊涂，还忘了好几个单词，回家还把字母、音标、单词全搞乱了。晕!看样子还要继续努力呢!
这真是一堂精彩又糊涂的英语课啊!
篇10：小学六年级英语一封信
全文共 793 字
+ 加入清单Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
篇11：,小学生写我的妈妈英语作文
全文共 1128 字
+ 加入清单My mother is a very harsh and very cheerful mom, how severe? How cheerful, please listen to me slowly Road to.
Once, math test, I only test 68 points. Before I promised the mother, must be admitted to 95 points, but the test into this. I can not let my mother sign. Had to go to the talent factory to find a person to help me sign, signed a good, he even told me to 10 dollars, or to the school. I had to give him 10 dollars.
After the home, my mother asked me: "Nunu, how many points test," I said: "No ... ... did not grant out!" Mother said: "Nu Nu, do not lie mother." I saw, Leaked. Had to say: "6 ... ... 67." Mother one, grabbed the bag, a look at the circle. "Who gave you the sign!" I said, "I spent 10 dollars." My mother heard, sweep the pestle bar will hit me, I cried, my mother soft, sweeping the pestle bar down. Since then, I have never had this too.
Mother to do the first hand of good food, and often I and my father to feed the round roll: what boiled fish friends, Sanguo rapeseed, boiled meat friends ... ... more is. Because my mother in the cooking time when humming, I called this cheerful.
I love my mother!
篇12：2024小学生简单英语谚语大全
全文共 1088 字
+ 加入清单1. 眼见为实.
seeing is believing.
2. 人生短暂，学艺无穷。
Art is long, life is short.
3. 三思而后行.
Look before you leap.
4. 有其父，必有其子。
Like father,like son.
5. 再晚也不算迟。
Better late than never.
6. 条条大路通罗马。
All roads lead to Rome.
7. 并非闪光的都是金子。
All that glitters is not gold.
8. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
As you sow,so shall you reap.
9. 物以类聚。
Birds of a feather flock together.
10. 不劳无获。
No pain,no gain.
11. 入乡随俗，
When in Rome,do as the Romans do.
12. 那恰是我所喜欢的。
Its my cup of tea.
13. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
14. 患难见真情。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
15. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
A young idler; an old beggar.
16. 熟能生巧。
Practice makes perfect.
17. 一分耕耘，一分收获。
No sweet without sweat.
18. 时间就是金钱。
Time is money.
19. 欲速则不达。
Haste makes waste.
20. 说起来容易做起来难。
Easier said than done.
21. 人各有所好。
Every man has his taste.
22. 物极必反。
Extremes meet.
23. 活到老学到老。
Live and learn.
24. 事出必有因。
Nothing comes of nothing.
25. 光荣之路常坎坷。
The path to glory is always rugged.
26. 失败是成功之母。
Failure is the mother of success.
27. 江山易改，本性难移。
A leopard can not change his spots.
28. 好心有好报。
Good mind,good find.
29. 得饶人处且饶人。
Forgive others whenever you can.
30. 爱乌及乌。
Love me ,love my dog.
篇13：小学六年级关于童年趣事英语作文
全文共 727 字
+ 加入清单I’d like to tell you something about my childhood. when i was six years old, i was a lovely girl!
我想告诉你一些关于我的童年。当我六岁的时候，我是一个可爱的女孩!
One day, my father saw some fish in the river, so he asked me, “why can fish only live in water?” i thought about it, then i gave him the answer, “because there are some cats on the bank.” my father laughed when he heard that. then he said, “you are smart!” i was happy to hear that.
有一天，我父亲看到河里的一些鱼，于是他问我，“为什么鱼只能生活在水中?“我想了想，然后我给了他答案，“因为岸上有猫。”父亲笑了，当他听说。然后他说，“你很聪明!“我很高兴听到。
Maybe you will say, “it’s a funny answer.” now, i think, it is very interesting. and now i am smart. my parents love me very much. i am so happy to have that childhood.
也许你会说，“这是一个有趣的答案。“现在，我认为，这是非常有趣的。现在我很聪明。我的父母很爱我。我很高兴有这样的童年。
篇14：小学生写人英语作文：我的爸爸
全文共 1482 字
+ 加入清单If someone asks my favorite person, then my father is well deserved. Because with him, happiness is always accompanied me, all the troubles will disappear.
Just get up in the morning, although I have been dressed, but I still stumbled, always want to lie down to bed Dad met with a smile came, pulled me up from the bed, Xiaohe He said: "how, but also when the blanket head of the pumping your lazy tendons just fine." Then on the arm from me Come, I "Puchi" laughed out, while patting his fathers back, while laughing and blaming him: "You are really bad, you really bad." At this time, my father has long hearty smile.
At noon, my father came home after the first sentence will ask: "Tingting back there?" As long as I saw a pair of hands to the back of a back, walked in the stage of Peking opera, with Jingqian smiling to me: "Hungry me, and take the meal to eat with me." So we are in the happy meal.
In the afternoon, when I was carrying a heavy school bag to the house, feel tired and tired. But a push the door and found my father had been waiting for me at the door, and see me back, he took my hand bag, his feet together, a bow, like a Japanese like me to say: "Hard, and my big for you!" Then looked up, silly looked at me. I am amused by his appearance, and my heart has long been gone to the clouds, can not help but suddenly flew into my fathers arms, arms around his neck, whispered in his ear, said: "You are so good, father!
This is my father, he gave me a happy life.
篇15：小学生介绍动物的英语作文
全文共 1918 字
+ 加入清单On Saturday, I went to my grandparents house to play, entered my grandpa said to me: "home to a puppy." I ran quickly excitedly to the kennel.
This little guy is sleeping, I to control his feeling excited, could not help but to touch it by hand, but who knows, the puppy vigilance is so high, my hands touched it hair, it is all of a sudden I woke up to now. It eyes, big carefully look at me, as if to say: "who are you? How do I havent seen you?" I see, oh! Big round eyes, a small nose, cherry small mouth, not fat or thin face, and a pair of big ears and a air shook tail. In the summer it will lick up scattered cooling, is really a handsome boy!
After dinner, I also want to see this little one to eat, then took a piece of meat on the ground, I thought to myself, so delicious it must be very like it. But to his surprise, its just to smell the smell, and go to the side. I think, if it is afraid of being seen just refused to eat. Then, I hid behind the door, secretly observe it. Sure enough, little guys walking slowly in the past, and look at the then eat it with relish. It ate a piece of meat, I then from behind the door to come out and play with it. I threw a ball out of the distance, said to it: "help me to pick up the ball back!" It seemed to understand my words, kicking ran in the past, with his mouth put the ball has been sent to my side, and in this way, we are happy to play up.
My dog is so cute!
星期六，我去爷爷奶奶家玩，一进门爷爷就跟我说：“家里来了一只小狗。”我赶紧兴奋地往狗窝跑去。
这个小家伙正在睡大觉，我控制不住自己激动的心情，忍不住用手摸了它一下，可谁知，小狗的警惕性那么高，我的手刚碰到它的毛，它就一下子被我给惊醒了。它把眼睛睁得大大的，仔细地看着我，仿佛在说：“你是谁呀?我怎么没看见过你呢?”我一看，哟!圆溜溜的大眼睛，小小的鼻子，樱桃形的小嘴，不胖不瘦的脸蛋，还有一对神气的大耳朵和一条摇个不停的尾巴。夏天的时候它会把舌头舔出来散散热，真是一只帅气的小家伙呀!
吃完饭后，我也想去看看这小家伙吃东西的样子，便拿了一块肉放在地上，我心想：这样美味它一定很喜欢吧。但出乎意料的是，它只是去嗅了嗅，又走到了一边。我想，是不是它怕被人看到才不肯吃呢。于是，我就躲在了门背后，偷偷地观察它的动静。果然，小家伙慢慢地走了过去，四面看了一下便津津有味地吃了起来。看它吃完了一块肉，我便从门后走出来和它一起玩了起来。我把一个球扔到了远处，对它说：“帮我去把球捡回来!”它仿佛听懂了我的话，飞快地跑过去用脚踢，用嘴顶把那个球一直送到了我的身边，就这样，我们高兴地玩了起来。
我的小狗实在是太可爱了!
篇16：小学六年级关于友谊的英语作文
全文共 840 字
+ 加入清单Friendship is, lock, lock two people tightly together; Friendship is, candy, let two people taste the taste of happiness, friendship is priceless, and everyone needs it.
Friendship this lock, lock me with another person together, care about each other, help each other.
Friendship, it is like the red sun, lighting up our growth path; It is like sweet dew, thirst for us; It is like the flash, the brightest star, every night, always silently bless us in heaven.
Friendship, high-sounding name! It with our growth, accompanies us to play... Friendship is priceless, how much money can not buy back.
Who cannot leave the friendship, cherish!
友谊，是把锁，把两个人紧紧锁在一起;友谊，是颗糖，让两个人尝到快乐的滋味：友谊，是无价的，每个人都需要它。
友谊这把锁，把我和另外一个人锁在一起，彼此关心，彼此帮助。
友谊，它像火红的太阳，照亮了我们成长的路线;它像甘甜的露水，为我们解渴;它又像最闪最亮的星星，每到黑夜，总在天上默默祝福着我们。
友谊，多么响亮的名字啊!它伴我们成长，伴我们玩耍.....友谊无价，是多少金钱都买不回来的。
谁都离不开友谊，珍惜吧!
篇17：小学英语日记
全文共 475 字
+ 加入清单我爱中国菜 I Love Chinese Food
Chinese food is famous all around the world. A lot of foreigners speak
highly of the delicious food when they come to this big country. For me， I like
spicy food， so hot pot is my favorite. I can eat what I like and put the food in
the spicy soup. The hotness makes me feel so cool. No matter where I go， Chinese
food is always my favorite.
中国菜闻名全世界，有很多外国人来到这个大国以后都会赞扬美味的食物。对我来说，我喜欢辣的食物，所以火锅是我的最爱。我可以把我喜欢吃的食物放进辣汤里就可以吃到自己喜欢的食物
了，辣味让我觉得太酷了。无论我去哪里，中国菜永远是我的最爱。
篇18：小学英语写作方法和技巧
全文共 2290 字
+ 加入清单要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点：
注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持
坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。
(1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。
(2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。
注重平时的写作训练
英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。
五步写出一篇好作文
什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。
(1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等
人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如：
Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English.
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
(2)找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
(3)成文时表述正确，文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
(4)文章结构清晰，重点句型画龙点睛，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次，考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：
First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…
And then， Finally， In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：
What is more， Besides，Moreover，
3.表转折对比关系的：
However， On the contrary， but
On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…， while others…
4.表因果关系的：
Because， As、So， Therefore， As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：
In other words
6.表进行举例说明：
For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：
As far as I know， In myopinion
9.表总结：
In short， In a word.
文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例：
I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.
感叹句举例：
How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!
动名词做主语举例：
Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.
常用状语从句句型：
1)时间：
when， not…until(直到…才…)， as soon as(一…就…)
2)目的：
so that + clause; (为了)
3)结果：
so…that…(如此…以至于…)， too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)条件：
if， unless(除非)， as long as(只要)
5)比较：
as…as…(与…一样)， not so…as…， than
(5)认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：
We livemore and more comfortable.
改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.
改正：much information (不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.
改正：There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)
4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.
改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
篇19：小学六年级英语作文：爸爸的承诺
全文共 414 字
+ 加入清单Next week, my birthday will come and I am so happy about it. My father tells me that he has prepared the gift for me and he wants to give me the surprise. But my father later tells me that he has to go out for business. I am so disappointed, he has promised me before. But my father keep his promise and sends me the gift.
下周,我的生日即将到来,我很高兴。我父亲告诉我,他已经为我准备了礼物,他想给我一个惊喜。但后来我父亲告诉我,他必须出差。我很失望,他之前承诺过我。但是我的父亲信守诺言,把礼物寄给了我。
篇20：小学暑假英语日记带翻译
全文共 7875 字
+ 加入清单第一篇：Today and friends of foreign travel,outside air is very good,people feel very comfortable.We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles.We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought.We happily spent a happy day.今天和朋友一起出外交游,外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服.我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香.享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好.大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天.
第二篇：Today is a boring day, because my dad and mom went to work, home I alone, I play a computer I soon feel dizzy, and then I go to visit my classmate but they are traveling, I can only one on the road, really boring!
今天是一个无聊的一天，因为我爸爸妈妈都出去上班了，家了只有我一个人，我玩了一会儿电脑不一会我就感到头晕，然后我出去拜访我的同学可是他们都去旅游了，我只能一个人在路上闲逛，真是无聊啊!先写到这儿，明天在来写
第三篇：This evening I went for a walk out of the stadium, found near my home, they have many people running, some people are playing basketball, others are playing football. I saw them in the movement to join them, I play very happy.
今天晚上我出门去散步，发现我家旁边的体育场人很多，他们有的人在跑步，有的人在打篮球，还有人在踢足球。我看见他们在运动也加入到他们的队伍里，我玩地很开心。
二、英语日记100字
篇一：the day after yesterday i received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. i was so happy but my father and mother said that i should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” i shouted.
前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。
篇二： july 22, cloudy today i got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. why is the legends? because not seen.but from 7:30 a.m. start raining, i was depressed. ok just online see the news experts say yinyutian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.
7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗
三：多篇暑假英语日记作文带翻译
篇1、Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house. I played with my cousin. Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest. “that’s a good idea.” I said. Then we prepared for the traveling. After lunch, the sky turned dark. After that , it rained heavily. It meant our plan is impossible. What a pity day!
今天我父母带我去了外公家，我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩。突然，我我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩，顺便休息一下。“那是一个好主意”我说到。然后我们为旅行准备着。午饭后，天变得昏暗，接着下起了大雨。那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了，多遗憾的一天哪！
篇2、Tomorrow is New Year’s Day, my family have had a completely cleaning for two days. Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious food for our meal. After supper we watched TV program. How happy we were!
明天是春节，我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除。然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里，妈妈则在烧好吃的东西。晚饭以后，我们一起看电视节目，我们多高兴呀！
篇3、The day after yesterday I received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. I was so happy but my father and mother said that I should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” I shouted.
前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。
篇4、On July 20, sunny Get up early today is very hot, hot feeling uncomfortable. Breakfast mother let me accompany her to go shopping and I didnt go. Because it is too hot, move feeling on the finger to sweat.The city library to read a book this afternoon. Because the library have air conditioning can blow, but also more than books at home too. Conveniently checked total solar eclipse was visible material.
7月20日 晴 今天非常炎热，一大早起床就感觉闷热的难受。吃完早饭妈妈让我陪同她去买菜我也没去。因为实在是太热了，感觉动一下手指头身上都在向外冒汗。下午到市图书馆看了一下午的书。因为图书馆有空调可以吹，而且书也比家里的多太多了。顺便查了一下日全食的资料。
篇5、On July 21, rainy days The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the rain can play. Afternoon after the rain stopped to help my mother to buy food supermarket. Generally bad mood today.
7月21日 雨天 今天天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，可是下了点小雨，很凉爽。天气预报说今天是阴天，本来都和朋友们约好要去打篮球的，可是很遗憾，在下雨没法去玩。下午雨停了之后有去超市帮妈妈买菜。总的来说今天心情不算太坏。
篇6、July 22, cloudy Today I got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. Why is the legends? Because not seen.But from 7:30 a.m. start raining, I was depressed. Ok just online see the news experts say YinYuTian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.
7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗
篇8、Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. Youcan’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although youhave a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more.Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday,but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I amessential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.
今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的东西。无论人们怎样，时间总在流逝。它不会留下来等待某人。你不能使用任何东西去交换时间。时间也是一个公平的东西。虽然你有很多钱，或者你享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我有超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我要，只要我有时间完成的功课。
篇9、I have rested for 10 days. In these days, Ifelt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things todo, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired,sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, itdidn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in alow temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.Atlast, I was ill.
我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有力气。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在有空调的房间里，并在开了低温。所以，当我走了出去，高温不适宜我.在最后，我生病了。
篇10、It was sunny today. I was excited. I got upat a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After Ihad my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When Iarrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him infront of the KFC’s door.I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact withothers frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. Afterwe greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last fortow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!
这是阳光明媚的一天。我很兴奋。我起床时四十五分。我制定了一个九点钟见面的约会。吃完我的早餐后，我去了万家市场。外面很热。当我到达时，我的朋友并没有到。我在肯德基的大门外面等他。我有一年没有看到他们了。并且在一年内，我们没有与对方频繁接触。大约十分钟过去，我的朋友们一个接一个地打来。在我们打招呼后，我们去荔湾体育馆打篮球。这场比赛持续了两个小时。哦！我觉得我今天很开心！
篇11、I live very happily today! In the morning,it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountainis very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremelybeautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TVtogether, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the wholefamily is happy and harmonious!
今天我过得非常开心！在早上，天气非常好！然后，我与家人爬上山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融！
篇12 、The weather of today is very comfortable, thoughthe weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.Theweather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends are planning to play basketball,but unfortunately, in the rain we can not play it. In the afternoon, the rain stopped,I have to help my mother to buy food in the supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.
今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是下了一点点的雨，非常凉爽.天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友计划打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中我们不能打球。在下午，雨停了，我要帮妈妈买菜的超市。大体说今天心情还不错。
篇13、It was the second day of our summerholiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things Ilike. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. ButI didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote anEnglishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am veryhungry.
这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了英语日记作文。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14小时。我认为我很疲惫。这是去吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。