我的朋友作文英语翻译带读音【汇集20篇】

Good morning/afternoon/evening, my name isXXX . It is really a great honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself. I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today.

I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, P. R. China. Withtremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.

In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester,In 1999, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test.

At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year, I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.

Research experience and academic activity

When a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab, I designed a simulationprogram for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewagetreatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.

In retrospect, I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and experience, which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research interests include: Network Scheduling Problem, Heuristic Algorithm research (especially in GA and Neural network), Supply chain network research, Hybrid system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.

译文：

早上好/下午好/晚上好,我的名字isXXX。真的很荣幸有这个机会进行自我介绍的机会。我想回答任何你可能会提高,我希望我能成为一个好今天的表现。

我是一个第三年硕士主修自动化在上海交通大学,中国公关。Withtremendous对工业工程的兴趣,我写这封信是为了申请接受到你的博士研究生项目。

1995年,我进入了南京科技大学(社交)——被广泛认为是中国最好的工程学校之一。在接下来的本科学习,我的学习成绩保持杰出的在整个部门。我每学期获得了头等奖,1999年,我有幸进入了研究生入学考试的放弃。

在我研究生学习期间,我的总平均成绩排名(3.77/4.0)前5%。在第二学期,我成为老师的助理,只给有才华的和成熟的学生。今年,我赢得了宏碁奖学金在我部门唯一的候选人,这是著名的终极荣誉学生赋予我的大学。目前,我准备我的毕业论文和优秀毕业论文的荣誉。

研究经验和学术活动

大二的时候,我加入了AI爱好者协会,开始为我的未来研究缩小我的兴趣。OpenGL的工具Matlab,我设计了一个simulationprogram运输调度系统。由不同的研究小组现在广泛使用的雄厚。我认为,实现污水分析&处理项目为南京sewagetreatment工厂。这是我第一次实践实验室的想法转换为一个商业产品。

回想起来,我发现自己站在一个坚实的基础的理论和经验,已准备好了我拿不到博士学位。我的未来的研究兴趣包括:网络调度问题,启发式算法研究(特别是遗传算法和神经网络),供应链网络研究,混合动力系统性能分析与佩特里网和数据挖掘。

[关于自我介绍英语作文带中文翻译

Dear Li Hua,

I had a birthday party at my home last month .I invited some of my classmates to the party . The party began at 8a.m .on Sunday . All my classmateswere not be late. I was very happy. We ate some western food.Theywere very nice.Some of my classmates brought their own food. They shared their food with us. Because they are very friendly.

We also played games. It was very interesting. All my classmates were very happy. I danced with my best friends. And all my classmates danced very beautifully! They sang a song Happy Birthday to me. And then they gave me a lot of presents. I was very thankful. All of us had a good time on that day!

Do you have free time? I want to visit you next year?

What is a friend? Friends are willing to help when I have difficulty, share in my trouble when I meet, and share with me when I am happy... With these, its a real friend.

One day, we were taking an exam. The basic knowledge in front of I do very quickly, do very well, when I do read the title, a difficult problem in front of me, I think for a long time did not think of the answer, I could not help but quietly looked at the table, as it happened, she also thinking about this problem I think, for a moment, suddenly a good idea, patted her shoulder, whispered: "the first reading of the third questions, you do it?" She nodded to me and said, "did you do the problem, too?" When I dont talk, she pretends to say, "ah, its done at last. Its really cool!" "What?" Do you have to do it? "  "Tell me how to do it!" She saw my eagerness, the expression on her face was very serious, and I knew she must be proud of her. "Tell me soon!" My eyes are burning, but the table is still silent, see its no use shouting, and is of no use, I have no choice but to continue to contemplate.

After a long time, I suddenly found the knack and thought of the answer. I was filled with ecstasy, and I wrote the answer quickly.

At the end of the examination, I told my deskmates answers to several questions. She answered the answer again, and the files were the same for every question. At the same time, the deskmate said to me, "if you want to be confident of yourself, everything will be successful if you have confidence." Yes, I also feel that the result of my meditation is more worth cherishing.

Although things have been going on for several days, I can never forget that I think friends should use appropriate methods to help each other, thats true friends.

dear lucy,

i am so glad to receive your letter and happy to know that you have a pleasant holiday. please send my sincere wishes to your parents. i have a happy holiday just like you do. this holiday, i visited to guangzhou with my parents. guangzhou, also known as the flower city, there are many flowers along the both sides of streets. it’s very beautiful. besides, the environment is clean and the climate is comfortable. there are many skyscrapers in guangzhou, especially in the downtown. we visited to many tourist attractions. they are all worth visiting. i hope you can visit there personally one day. you must like it.

best wishes.

sincerely yours,

alva

导语：中国有句古话：“民以食为天。”下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Chinese food is very famous around the world, if you ask a foreign people about his opinion on Chinese food, he will speak highly of it. When we see the movie, Chinese food is praised by the people.

Recently, there is a famous movie called A Bite of China, the movie is popular, it introduces Chinese food from different places. The audience is attracted by the delicious food, they never thought Chinese food would be so various. Now the second part of the movie has been made out, more and more Chinese traditional food has been introduced. After appreciating the movie, I begin to learn more about Chinese food, I want to have taste of them.

I am so proud of our food, when we talk about it to foreign friends, we can feel their favor of our food. The food is part of our culture, they should be inherited.

【参考译文】

中国菜很有名在世界各地,如果你问一个外国人对中国食物,他的意见,他会赞扬的。当我们看电影,中国食品被人们称赞。

最近,有一个著名的电影叫一口中国的电影很受欢迎,它引入了中国食物来自不同的地方。观众是美味的食物所吸引,他们从未想过中国食物会如此不同。现在电影的第二部分了,越来越多的中国传统食品引入了。欣赏这部电影后,我开始了解中国菜,我想要的味道。

我很自豪我们的食物,当我们谈论到外国朋友,我们可以感受到他们的支持我们的食物。食物是我们文化的一部分,他们应该被继承。

This afternoon, we play a game called ‘Family Tree’. This game is very

interesting. I’m very interested in it. Our teacher’s family is very large. She

has many brothers and sisters. But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I

without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are

very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too.

When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.

When I was a child, I can’t undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand

father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no ‘bread house’.

Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think

of this things. I will cry I can’t use words to say I love them.

I love my family!

今天下午，我们玩了一个游戏叫做“家谱”，这个游戏很有趣。我觉得非常有趣。我们老师的家是非常庞大的，她有兄弟组妹。但我是不幸的，我仅有一个妹妹并没有弟弟。但我觉得我有全世界最好的父母。他们对我非常好，我有一个好的的家庭，我的父母也很爱我，当他们买肉，他们会把最好的给我吃。

当我还很小的时候，我不理解他们。我想要吃面包，我的伟大的父亲骑车去Qu Tang.因为在我们乡村这里没有面包房。qu

tang离我们村庄很远，现在我长大了，我明白了他们为我为我想要的事，我感到愧疚，无法用言语表达我爱他们。

我爱我的家人。

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during

the National Day holiday. I am looking forward to your visit and to the

opportunity to catch up. Welcome to my home in Nanjing!

As you know, Nanjing has many places of interest to see, to discover, and

to enjoy. Among its historical sites are stone city wall, the Confucius Temple

with its magnificent night view, and Dr. Sun Yetsens Mausoleum. With all its

universities, Nanjing is a cultural center, offering an abundance of artistic

and musical performances. Its also a city of beautiful gardens and parks, such

as the Xuanwu Lake Park. With all these features, we will have a fun-filled

week, especially that in early-October, there are many sunny and mild days for

outdoor activities. So, I would suggest visiting these places first, and

deciding on the others as our week develops.

Finally, since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in

the evening, I would suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you. Also,

as there will be crowds of people at the stations and on the trains, you need to

be very careful with your belongings!

Best wishes for a pleasant journey!

Yours,

Zhang Ying

My Friend

Everyone needs friendship. No one can sail the ocean of life single handed. We need help from, and also give help to, others. In the modern age, people attach more importance to relations and connections. A man of charisma has many friends. His power lies in his ability to give.

My best friend is my college classmate who is a humorous boy. He is also my deskmate .I did not notice he is a boy who is friendly and easy to get along with until he became my deskmate .OK,I must admit that I judge a book by its cover!

Although he isn’t handsome,he is a good man . I am a bad-tempered girl,but he is very gentleman ,and that is the reason why we never argued with each other .

Now we live in different cities and different universities.But that’s not the problem ,we still keep in touch .Of course ,distance can’t make our friendship weak! We often talk with each other about some interesting stories and our troubles by telephone or QQ. I am very happy to have such a friend like him!!

However ,not all people have good temper like him,and he is the only one among my friends that I meet.For example,my college roommates are a group of special girls.My administrator of the dormitory is a very goodness girl. She is also my first friend since I

entered university. When I feel lonely ,she always stays with me,which makes me so move.As life is full of strike and conflict, we need friends to support and help as out of difficulties. Our friends give us warnings against danger. True friends share not only joy but, more often than not, they share sorrow. There is a girl who is very enthusiastic to help others in my dormitory ,if you have troubles,she will try her best to help you whenever and wherever .there are also some girls ,they are a little introverted,so you never know how they think ,sometimes, when you say some words which you believe is normal,but they will really care about that,such things make me feel embarrassed. But there are more laughter when we are together in free time.

So it’s very important for everyone to handle with the friendship ,everyone has his own personality ,sometimes quarrel is normal,we should learn to forgive others,which is also a goodness. After all, friendship makes our life happy and harmonious.To many of my friends, I know what to treasure, what to tolerate and what to share, I will never forget my old friends and keep making new friends. The more friends you have, the more happiness you will possess.

我的朋友

朋友对每个人都是不可或缺的，当然，我也是。

我最好的朋友是我的一位高中同学，他是一个很风趣的男生，他曾经是我的同桌，在他成为我的同桌之前我曾经以为他是不好相处的一个人。好吧，我承认我以貌取人了。

虽然他长得不帅，但是他是一个很好的人。我是一个脾气暴躁的女生，但是他非常绅士， 不会针锋相对，这应该是我们从来没有吵过架的原因吧。

所以虽然我们现在在不同的地方上大学，我们也经常联系。距离当然不会使我们的关系变淡了。我们经常在电话或者扣扣上谈谈彼此在生活中发生的事情。

当然并不是所有人都有他那样的好脾气，至少我活了快20年只碰到了一个这样的人。所以，比如我的大学舍友就是一群性格迥异的女孩。

我们的舍长是一位善良的女孩，她是我在大学的第一个朋友。当我被其他人孤立的时候，只有舍长一直陪着我，这让我非常的感动。所以说，当你遇到困难的时候，朋友的帮助非常重要，他们帮助你度过困境，一起更好的走下去。

还有一位女生非常热衷于帮助别人，如果你有什么困难，她肯定是第一个冲上去帮你解决问题。还有其他人，有的性格比较内向，你永远不知道她们在想什么，有时候你不小心说错一句话，做错一件事，她们就生气好久。搞得宿舍的气氛很尴尬。但是更多的时候，我们在一起还是充满了欢声笑语。

所以说学会处理好朋友之间的关系也是非常重要的。每个人有不同的性格，在一起当然会有冲突有分歧，所以，处理好关系也是一种能力。

我希望我和我的朋友们能一直像现在这样，就算相隔很远，也能时常联系。不因时间或空间的改变而疏远。愿我们友谊常在。

I have a good friend.

我有一个好朋友。

She is a cute girl. Her hair is long and straight. Her eyes are big. Her nose is small. She is very thin.

她是一个可爱的女孩。她有一头又长又直的头发。大大的眼睛，小巧的鼻子。她很瘦。

She likes to help others. She is a hard-working student. She is good at English and Chinese.

她喜欢助人为乐。她是个很用功的学生。她的英语和语文都很好。

Her favorite season is summer, because she likes eating ice-creams in hot days.

她最喜欢夏天，因为她喜欢在大热天吃冰激凌。

She has many hobbies. She likes playing the piano, reading books and singing songs.

她有很多爱好。她喜欢弹钢琴，读书，唱歌。

We often play games together. I hope we can be friends forever.

我们经常一起玩游戏。我希望我们永远是好朋友。

Get up early today is very hot, hot feeling uncomfortable. Breakfast mother let me accompany

her to go shopping and I didnt go. Because it is too hot, move feeling on the finger to sweat.

The city library to read a book this afternoon. Because the library have air conditioning

can blow, but also more than books at home too. Conveniently checked total solar eclipse was visible material.

As time goes by,it is the most meaningful day in the year---Spring

festival. Everyone is looking forward to it and the families are busy preparing

for it besides me.

I got up early in the morning ,and then I went to the shop with my parents

to do some shopping. After going back home,I cleaned the house,doing some

housework.Everything is ready,I am waiting for you ---Spring festival.

参考译文

时光荏苒，又到了一年中最有意义的时刻——共度春节。每个人都盼望着，期待着，家家户户都在忙碌地准备着，当然也少不了我!

一早，我就起床了，接着和爸爸妈妈一起去了趟超市，采购一番。待购物后，我们开心的回了家，回家后，我帮家里打扫了屋子，做了一些力所能及的家务活。一切准备就绪，现在我整期盼着春节的来临!)

John is my good friend.

John is my good friend. He is twelve. He is English. We are in the same (同一个) school. We are not in the same class. His father Mr Black is a cook. He is forty-five. His mother is not a cook. She is a nurse. She is forty-two. John has a sister. Her name is Alice. She is twenty-one. She is a new teacher at our school.

约翰是我的好朋友

参考译文：约翰是我的好朋友。他12岁，我们在同一个学校。我们不在一个班级。他的爸爸布莱克先生是一位厨师。他今年45岁。他的吗吗不是厨师。是一位护士。她今年四十二岁。约翰还有一个姐姐。她的名字叫做丽丝。她今年21岁。她是一个新老师，在我们学校。

3-18岁纯英式素质教育领航者：纯英式资深外教，纯英式国际领先教材，纯英式学习环境！

优尼全能英语：初三英语作文范文-我的朋友my

friend

my friend

每个人都有自己的朋友，请把你最要好或最特殊的朋友介绍给大家。词汇：

1. n. friends, parents, teachers, classmates, family, school, relatives , happiness, sadness, generation gap, feelings, friendship, communication, teamwork

2. v. make friends, understand encourage take good care of,expect, get on well with, play together, smile, trouble, talk with, quarrel with, help each other, discuss, argue, do well in enjoy oneself

3. adj. happy, sad, important, lonely , helpful, necessary

句式

1. i hope we can understand each other.

2. it’s necessary to understand each other.

3. no one can be successful only by himself.

4. there are some sayings, “friendship is sunlight in the dark.” “if there were no friendships in a city, it would become a desert.”

5. although we sometimes quarrel with each other, yet we get on well later.6. we should get on well with everyone around us.

7. the more friends you get, the happier you will be.

8. a friend can not only help you, but also bring you happiness.

9. everybody needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

10. don’t argue, but discuss.

11. people who refuse to consider others have few friends.

12. we need to learn how to take care of other people.

13. “a friend in need is a friend indeed.”

范文

my best friend

i have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. he is my father. my father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. he usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. at weekends he plays chess, cards with me. when i am in trouble. he always help me in time. i prefer my father to any other friend. i think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. i love my father very much.

Dear friend,

I am a thirteen-year-old Chinese girl. My Chinese name is Jian Jie. Jane is

my English name. I can speak Chinese and a little English. I can teach you

Chinese if you like. And you can teach me English. Do you want to be a teacher

student?

My favorite movies are Happy Feet and Cars. Do you like them? Red and

yellow are my favorite colors. What are your favorite colors? I often play

tennis on Saturday and Sunday. It is my favorite sport. What sport do you

like?This is me, a Chinese girl. I want a pen pal in the U.S.A.

Lets be friends!OK?

Jane

My friend, she is my most familiar, become my first friend; When I panic, she enthusiastically help me.

Her name is -- TuYiGong. Cutting head is a mushroom head, she study result is very excellent, approachable, eager to help others, I would have been her help.

That, I just turn to QuDou, a stranger, in school, and my mother standing there, "bell bell bell" the bell rang, and a man walked to come over, she kindly asked: "what grade are you read?" But I was turned his head, contemptuously ignored her. Afterwards just know, originally she also is in the third grade, we are classmates! She unexpectedly still run a long time.

On one occasion, the teacher arranged a composition, I dont know to write, simply putting the didnt write, this time, let me get off the hook, the second time, the teacher lets rewrite, I think they didnt write it doesnt matter, who knows, unexpected things happened, when the teacher corrects the homework, know someone didnt write, stern said: "who didnt write, have a class to write outside the classroom." At this time, I was overwhelmed, rushed out the thesis paper, cant think of the content, in this moment, my good friend brought her a composition, write her at the beginning of the read to me, I have a idea, write it down, but still too late, the bell rang, I had to write outside the classroom, but I still appreciate her.

She is my first friend in the strange, although she transfer now, I still when she is my good friend, she can also in the other, a school to like her outstanding person.

我的朋友，她在我最陌生时，成为我第一个朋友;在我慌张时，她热心地帮助我。

她的名字叫——涂怡红。剪着一头像蘑菇的头，她学习成绩很优异，平易近人，热心帮助他人，我就曾经受到她的帮助。

那次，我刚转到曲斗，人生地不熟，到了学校，和妈妈站在那里，“铃铃铃”铃响了，有一个人走了过来，她亲切地问：“你读几年级?”而我却轻蔑地转过了头，对她不理不睬。后来才知道，原来她也读三年级，我们还是同班同学呢!她竟还是一班之长。

有一次，老师布置了一篇作文，我不懂写，干脆就放着没写，这一次，让我侥幸逃过一劫，第二次，老师让我们重写，我自认为没写没关系，谁知，出乎意料的事情发生了，老师在批改作业时，知道有人没写，就严厉的说：“谁没写，上课就去教室外面写。”这时的我，一时不知所措，急忙拿出作文纸，想不出内容，在这一刹那，我的好朋友拿来了她的作文，把她写的开头念给我，我有了头绪，便写了下去，可是还是来不及了，上课铃响了，我只好到教室外写了，但我依然很感谢她。

她是我在陌生中的第一位朋友，虽然她现在转学了，我依然当她是我的好朋友，她也能在另外、一所学校交到像她这样优秀的人。

My name is Liu Xianyang, a small student of Baiyun, reading class six in grade three.

I have a round face, big eyes, red mouth. I have a pair of big ears, and I hear it very clearly. My hands are long, my feet are big, and I run fast.

I like to blow the gourd, it is a national musical instrument, the sound of blowing out sounds good. I will blow the music of the happy water splashing Festival, the catch swing, the reed Shaw love.

I love to laugh, love sports, like to make friends with others, and everyone comes to make friends with me.

I like riding bicycle

Today,I rode bicycle to travel around the Guilin central.I enjoy the

scenery while riding bicycle.The scenery of Guilin was so beautiful that I

couldnt help to take photos,which finally cause my cellphone lacked of

memory.Riding bicycle is not only helps me to keep fit，it also a good way for me

to travel and enjoy scenery.I like riding bicycle.

参考翻译

我喜欢骑自行车

今天，我骑自行车游玩桂林市区。我一边骑车一边欣赏风景。桂林的风景真的很美丽，让我忍不住拍照，结果导致我手机内存不足。骑车不仅帮助我保持身体健康，对我来说也是可以用于游玩和欣赏风景的好方式。

Dear teachers, students are good:

My name is Xiao Ming, is a confident, cheerful, friendly and active girl, I have widespread interest hobby, piano, reading, playing chess, listening to the story, to host performances and also has a strong interest in, hosted by my kindergarten graduation performance, first prize in a good result.

Mom and Dad, the kindergarten teachers careful cultivation, I have become a qualified primary school students, in the next six years to learn life, can and dear teachers, the students become the best friends! We all together happy to learn, happy to grow!

Thank you!

亲爱的老师，同学们好：

我叫小明，是一个自信，开朗，友好，积极向上的小女孩，我有着广泛的兴趣爱好，弹琴、看书、下棋、听故事，也对主持和表演也有着浓厚的兴趣，由我主持的幼儿园毕业演出，获得了一等奖第一名的好成绩。

在爸爸妈妈，幼儿园老师的精心培育下，我已成为一名合格的小学生，希望在今后六年的学习生活中，能和亲爱的老师，同学们成为最好的朋友！我们大家一起快乐地学习，快乐地成长!

谢谢大家！

There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival

most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because

it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family

gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they

are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit

together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to

have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone

they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we

will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a

time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在我国，一年有很多节日，在这些节日中，我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日，更因为它是新一年的开始，给人们带来新的希望，也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方，人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常，我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，之后家人团座一起，分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一，人们通常会早起，会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里，人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之，春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

Whats friends? Do you have friends? I have many friends, so I always feel

happy. In the morning, some of my friends will go to school with me. We often

talk and laugh on the way to school. Sometimes we will stop to buy some snacks,

school things and other stuff. When I am in school, I always study with friends.

When I have something confusion, I will ask them to help. So do they. We help

each other. After class, we play together, and go to the shop to buy snacks.

They accompany me, so do I. I think this is friends.

假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台

注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show

Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you‘ U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

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从整体上说，书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。

[高考英语作文：给美国朋友的信